Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Goodbye My Lover
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2018 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Catching up on reading - RL is such a pain at the moment... I loved this - both of them meeting in Heaven ready to live out eternity together (and who wouldn't want to be 30 forever???) and then a chance to live out their life on earth and not miss out. Love it



Author's Response:

I hear you on RL. I'm glad you liked it. 30 would be a great age to stay at. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2018 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting...loved it alot.

Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2018 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

I do love this.  Even though Mikey was responsible for Justin's death you manage to make him sympathetic.  That's hard to do.  Glad that Brian has another chance to keep Justin home.



Author's Response:

Poor Mikey. Justin and Brian are so perfect together I had it make it happy at the end. 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2018 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

fascinating story.  Liked the ending.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you. 

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2018 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

So glad I gave this a chance.  I loved the glimpse into the future :-)



Author's Response:

I was worried on the labeling it. I didn't want anyone to get upset after reading the 'death'. But I didn't want to give away a happy ending either. Thank you. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2018 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

His afterlife passed before his eyes. Made him want to live.

Nice.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2018 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Pam - I always love the idea of B and J being soulmates and together forever for eternity; and also how we are given a 'second chance' to set things right.  Thanks for this enjoyable one-shot!  I was okay with them being dead together, but even happier to see that Brian was given a second chance with his love. Glad to see a new story posted from you!  Looking forward hopefully to more. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I like them being soulmates too. It's funny, I wrote the end before I did the beginning. 

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