Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forbidden fruit
Reviewer: Bo61 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Last chapter

Thanks for the wonderful story, I enjoyed it. I hope to hear more about them in the future. Greetings xo



Author's Response:

I'm happy you loved my story. I don't know if there will be a sequel to this one but I'm going to write more stories about our boys. So feel free to check them if you want :-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2018 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Last chapter

I really liked reading this story. In this story, love and forgiveness dominated. Congratulations, it was a nice job. I liked it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Juditka, I'm really happy you loved it. It was the two main themes, you're right.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Last chapter

I’m so sad this story is over I really enjoyed it. I’m so happy that they are that in love it makes me smile so much. They have a baby as well and I think Dean will need brothers and sisters as you don’t want him to be an only child right 😜. I love how Brian asked Craig those questions it was brilliant. 

 

You did an amazing job and can’t wait for future stories. Please write more of this one m.

 

xx



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Of course, they had to be in love and together at the end, they're endgame no matter what happen to them. I think they're planning to have more babies lol. Brian and Craig had to be back together as partners. 

I don't know if I'm going to write more about this story, but who knows? You know better than anyone that my mind is always working and ideas are always coming lol.

You also know that I'm working hard on my next story which I hope will be up pretty soon.

Thanks for your reviews and your support.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Last chapter

That was such a BEAUTIFUL end to such a Excellent story...i loved it...thank u for the lovely story...i enjoyed it alot...good luck for ur future work...i will eagerly wait for it...lots of wishes and love xoxo..😊a86;



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your kind words about my story, I'm happy you liked it. 

I'm working hard on my new story, which will be pretty different from what I wrote so far. I hope it'll worth the wait.

Thanks for the wishes, your reviews and your support.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Last chapter

Thank you for a wonderful story with a perfect ending.  I love happy endings for our boys so you made my day.  I will miss them, but knowing they are together is enough for me.  Can't wait to see where your fantastic imagination takes us next. 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you loved the story and the ending. I"m also a big fan of happy endings, no matter what our boys are going, they're endgames. 

I hope you won't miss them too much as my new story will come pretty soon, I hope.

My imagination is working hard right now and I hope you'll like what I planned next.

Thanks for your reviews and your support.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Last chapter

Voilà un beau Happy ending! C'est agréable de les voir pères et heureux! j'attends ton autre histoire avec impatience ! Merci et à bientôt alors !

Author's Response:

J'aimes les Happy ending alors c'était une évidence lol. C'est toujours agréable et mignon de voir nos amoureux pouponner et craquer devant leur bébé. 

Ma prochaine histoire devrait arriver très vite, en tout cas, je l'espère.

Merci pour tes commentaires et ton soutien. A bientôt.

Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2018 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

How many more chapters of this are there

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 43

Very good...finally they can start their love life without any guilt or without hiding from anyone...they deserve happy times maybe for a while i guess...u must have planned more obstacles for them..lol..great work...keep it up.



Author's Response:

They're finally have the right to live their love without hiding and live the life they always wanted. They deserve to be happy and they will be. I think they had enough obstacles, don't you think? Lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 43

Please let them stay happy.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

They will be happy, don't worry :-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 43

This was so beautiful and just what I needed to read this this morning. I’m so glad that Brian stayed the night with Justin st his parents house. I love now the way Craig is reacting to to them. It’s beautiful to see. I hope Brian and Justin  find Britin and move in and have a family with kids and pets. 

 

Thank you for writing this it was brilliant xx



Author's Response:

I know that you needed something happy and light today so I'm glad, it makes you feel good. He stayed the night and was apparently pretty noisy lol. Craig recognised his mistake and finally see them happy. Let's see what will happen next for our couple.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 43

Oh dommage ça sent la fin, à moins que tu nous prépare une entourloupe !! J'aime les savoir heureux prêts à vivre ensemble avec la bénédiction de Craig qui reconnait son erreur! Merci pour la mise à jour.

Author's Response:

La fin approhe oui, et non je n'ai pas prévu d'entourloupe lol. Je penses que nos amoureux méritent d'être heureux maintenant. 

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 41

Awww..lovely update...that was some progress ...thank u for noce update...lets c how they mend both their hearts now.



Author's Response:

There's some progress. They're slowly becoming in touch again so let's what will happen next.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 41

Brian was very strong and very good god gojng all that way to bring Justin home. The reunion was perfect. I do think that Craig needs to do more to get back in Brians good graces. All Brian did was fall in love. I still love Conor and I’m glad the way the relationship ended it wasn’t bad and maybe they can be good friends so we can still see him. ( Its your own fault lol you made me love him) 

 

I can’t wait to see how the relationship goes between Justin and Brian, hope all will be ok because Justin really hurt him. 

 

Excellent work x



Author's Response:

Brian was very strong indeed because facing the one who broke your heart is never easy. Craig has a lot to be forgiven for., that's right. As you said, our boys did nothing wrong except falling in love. I know you loved Conor but we won't see him again, I'm sorry. 

You'll see in the next chapters how things will turn for our lovers.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 41

That's a great start to getting them back together.  Well written.  Bye, bye Conor!



Author's Response:

Maybe it's the beginning of a new chapter for them indeed. Conor is gone now and for good.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 41

Justin a beaucoup à se faire pardonner c'est sûr mais ils vont y arriver peut-être avec l'aide de Craig cette fois LOL On respire un peu avec ce chapitre ! Merci.

Author's Response:

Justin a beaucoup à se faire pardonner en effet mais ils ont tous les 2 encore des sentiments l'un pour l'autre donc le temps fera peut être son oeuvre. Craig? ça reste à voir lol. Oui les choses seront plus légères maintenant lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 40

Damn ...so emotional..well that was a awesome update...great going.

Thanks..😊



Author's Response:

An emotional reunion for sure. Justin is so lost and whatever Brian might say, he's still in love with this young boy.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Qaffanficlover (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 40

lmao the only reason I dislike Conor is because of the actor who played Conor on QAF I know stupid reason to hate your character btw awesome chapter  



Author's Response:

Oh yeah you're right, I totally forgot about him lol. I just wanted an Irish name for this character. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 40

Hi, Audrey!  Well, I'm glad Brian went to NYC to retrieve Justin.  I wonder if Justin really IS/WAS in love with this Tom person.  He didn't sound too sure of that. And Brian, I think, is beginning to realize that he still loves Justin.

Something tells me that Conor is about to be disappointed. ;)  Thanks for the update!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! I'm glad he did too lol. Our sweet Justin was really losing himself there. I think he thought he was in love with him but you're right, it doesn't seem so clear even for him. Brian never stopped loving Justin but seeing him so lost, maybe opened his eyes even more on his true feelings.

For Conor, there's a chance lol.

Thanks for your review Kim :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 40

Brian is so good for going there to help Justin, I hope it works as it looks like he is really spirilling out of control with no end in sight. Tom seems like a really bad guy I wanna smash his face in lol. Conor oh I like him keep him but find him s different boyfriend lol.

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Brian is really a good person to agree to go and see the one who broke his heart in the hope to make him realise he's doing wrong. Justin is seriously losing grip in this new world and without someone out of this world to help him, it would have been really bad for him. Tom is the kind of man you want to smash, you're right lol. 

I know you love Conor lol but I'm sure to keep him lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 40

Hou la la je pars une semaine et s'il s'en passe des choses! Mon dieu pauvre Justin ce n'est pas facile pour lui mais c'est bien qu'il se sente perdu ou moins il réalise ce su'il fait et Brian va l'aider à s'en sortir avec Craig et Jennifer. Leur amour va les aider à faire revenir le bon Justin ! C'est presque dommage pour Connor il a l'air sympa ! Hey j'ai dit presque, peut-être que tu as autre chose en tête!!!

Author's Response:

Il ne faut pas nous abandonner une semaine, vois ce que les garçons sont capables de faire en ton absence lol. Ce n'est pas facile pour lui c'est sûr, la vie New Yorkaise ne lui va pas si bien que ça. Il réalise grâce à Brian qu'il a été trop loin et qu'il est perdu effectivement. Brian et ses parents vont l'aider à remonter la pente.

C'est surprenant que tout le monde semble apprécier plutôt Conor lol. 

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: pratham (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2018 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 40

Hi I'm very big fan of ur writing & I love this story of urs but right now I'm not sure to read some chapters with b/j not together can u plz end there separation now plz coz I I started liking corner which I don't want to do....best of luck & hope you continue to write many stories in future 

      Lots of loved84;d84;



Author's Response:

Well, first of all thanks for the very nice words about my writing. Brian and Justin are apart for some chapters that's right but they kind of reconnect now so that's a start. I wasn't expected my readers to like Conor to be honest lol.

I plan to write other stories. I'm currently working on a new story at the moment. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 40

Great chapter, but now the plot thickens - Justin? Conor?  Well we hope that Justin wins in the end !!!! 



Author's Response:

That's the next important question, who Brian will chose between the two men? But don't remember that I said I was a happy ending fan? lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Qaffanficlover (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 39

poor Justin I'm still on his side I know he did a shitty thing, Justin, still young lmao and still dislike Conor. cant wait when this is complete awesome loving all chapters



Author's Response:

He did a shitty thing but he's young as you said. Not saying that it excuwses everything but I still feel bad for him, especially with what he's going through now. Conor wasn't supposed to be liked by the readers so that's fine lol. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 39

Superb chapter...now poor justin is feeling guilty and heart broken huh ...i think he needs to snap out of it...only Brian can do that ...who is very happy i guess now with his new BF ...lets see what had u cooked up for us.thank u for the update .



Author's Response:

It's maybe the guilt that made Justin act like this or simply the world he's living in now. The fashion world can have many bad sides. He really need to be helped and Brian may be the only one to do it. Brian seems to be more and more happy with his new boyfriend but at the same time, he still has feelings for Justin so let's see what will happen. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2018 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 39

Oh Justin what are you doing, you are going to ruin your life acting like that. Oh no now you made me like Conor lol I will feel bad for him when And If Brian gets back with Justin but first please find someone really nice for him.   Lol you make me fall in love with your nice characters lol

 

excellent  work xx



Author's Response:

Justin is totally ruining his life and his career acting like he does. You like Conor? You made me laugh lol. He wasn't supposed to be loved but I guess he's not really a bad guy so I can get it lol. Next time, if I need to bring someone keeping our lovers, I'll try to make him less nice lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2018 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 39

Great chapter.  We know Conor doesn't stand a chance or does he?  Still love happy endings so I am hoping.



Author's Response:

Against Justin, it will be hard for Conor to stand a chance but who knows? lol. I love happy endings too so keep on hoping :-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: britintaykin (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2018 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 38

Is this story complete.

Author's Response:

Yes, It's completely written and beta readed. It'll be updated regularly.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 38

I'm glad Brian sought his family out for comfort. I wouldn't blame him for contacting Conor.  But I suspect that Justin will realize the big mistake he made, only to come back home to ask Brian for forgiveness and find out that Brian has moved on.  I suspect, however, that it will be temporary. Something tells me that these two won't be able to stay apart for long.  ;)

Thanks for the update, Audrey! I'm enjoying all the twists and turns in this story. ~Kim



Author's Response:

I wouldn't blame it myself regarding what Justin did to him. As Claire said to him, he has to move on like Justin did. Actually, something will bring them to meet again and maybe Justin will realise the mistake he did by cheating on Brian. But will Brian be able to forgive him? Let's see....

Yes, there's a lot of twists and turns in this story lol.

Thanks for your review Kim :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 38

I a so angry with Justin for breaking Brian’s heart thee was no excuse for cheating on him. I hope Brian can heal his heart and be happy. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

You can be angry at Justin. What he did to Brian wasn't good at all. There's no excuse you're right. Brian will heal his heart with time but will Justin always be away? We'll see.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 38

Oh and the plot thickens.  What is good for Justin is good for Brian,also.  Then Justin will see what he gave up.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

The plot thickens slightly. Yes we can see that this way. After all, Brian is single so why not accepting to have a date with someone. As you said, it could be a way to open Justin's eyes. 

Thanks for your reviews :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 38

Good chapter...now that i think about it maybe something happened there maybe justin had another reason for breakup like someone threatening orrrr ...hmmm...so many possiblilities running in my mind..oh well...lets see what is in YOUR mind...lol.

Clair is good sister...i like that.

Thank u for the lovely update.



Author's Response:

Thanks Navneet. Actually no, there's no other reason for Justin to break up despite meeting someone else. Well, we'll learn something about his life in New York in the next chapter but it's not something that really played a role in their break up. There's a lot in my mind, you have no ideas lol.

Yes it changes to see Claire being nice. It's so rare lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2018 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 36

Sweet chapter...great going...loved the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Not sure you'll keep loving the going soon but we'll see lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2018 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 36

Welcome back.  Hope you are all settled now.  Great chapter.  I just knew they couldn't break up.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm happy to finally be back. Not yet but at least my computer is so I can upadate :-)

They couldn't but...Will it last once in New York? That's the big question.

Thanks for your review :-)

 

 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2018 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 36

Merci à Jennifer! C'est bien que finalement Brian ait pensé qu'ils pouvaient se voir à New York. Une nouvelle ère peut commencer pour consolider leur amour et décider quoi faire quand Justin reviendra. Merci pour ce chapitre avec un peu d'espoir!

Author's Response:

Jennifer est toujours incroyable quoi qu'il arrive. Brian ne pouvait pas se résoudre à tourner la page avec Justin aussi vite et juste parce que Craig ne veut pas les voir en couple. L'espoir sera malheureusement de courte durée, j'en ai peur lol. La distance ne sera pas évidente à gérer.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2018 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 36

That was so beautiful and moving. I’m so glad that Brian said what did and to see they will have a future really touched me. I can’t wait to see his visits to New York.

 

Fantastic work xx



Author's Response:

Thank you Vicki. It was a moving goodbye for our lovers. Brian couldn't imagine to lose Justin just like that because Craig isn't agree for them to date. They know they love each other and let's hope the distance won't break them apart but I can't be sure of it lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2018 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 35

What a cliff we're on, hanging on till you can update! Craig is still a jerk, while I can kind of understand how he feels about their relationship still doesn't excuse what he did to Brian! I'm starting to really dislike New York!! 



Author's Response:

A big cliff indeed. Craig overreacted but his reacton was expected and quite understandable. New York is indeed not the favorit cuty from the QAF fans lol.

I'll be able to update in a couple of days so stay tuned.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2018 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 35

Omg...soo sad...it is going to be damn hard to read about their break up ...great going.



Author's Response:

So sad indeed. Well you see in the next chapter what's going to happen. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2018 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 35

C'était à la fois triste et émouvant ! Voyons comment ils font gérer ! Et tu nous laisses 2 semaines dans cette situation LOL Bon déménagement A bientôt !

Author's Response:

Un chapitre émouvant pour nos 2 amoureux c est sûr. Ils vont devoir gérer ce dernier rendez vous. La coupure Internet n était pas prévue, je devais poster un autre chapitre avant de partir. En tout cas merci et j espère pouvoir poster le prochain chapitre le plus vite possible.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2018 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 35

Somehow I think Brian is for a surprise.  I don't believe you will let it end that way.  Good cliffhanger.



Author's Response:

Something will happen at the park for sure. There's still some chapters before the ending but more troubles ahead for the boys but don't worry, I love happy endings no matter they can go through.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2018 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 35

Oh our poor boys my heart is breaking so badly for them. They can’t be apart they can’t breakup please. Maybe Brian can go with him to New York and keep their love strong and together. 

 

Very emotional and fantastic chapter x



Author's Response:

Yes it's hard time for them. Craig made what they were threatenned happening. They will see each other again before Justin's leaving so we'll see what will happen. 

Brian won't follow Justin in New York unfortunately.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2018 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 34

Omg poor Brain and Justin I can’t believe that Craig’ did that. My heart is aching for them and I pray Brian can get back to get Justin and maybe go wit him to New York for the few months take time off from work so they can be together. I think maybe Jennifer can help heal things. 

 

Powerful and amazing chapter x



Author's Response:

Craig did it. He really reacted badly but it was I think, quite expected. More difficult times are coming for our lover, Craig's reaction is just the beginning. Jennifer will be supportive of them.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 34

Wow c'était brutal ! j'espère que Jennifer va pouvoir calmer Craig pour qu'il soit heureux pour son fils. La relation longue distance part mal!! Merci pour le chapitre ça bouge!

Author's Response:

Oui mais ça devait l'être depuis le temps que Craig est dans l'ignorance. Jennifer va être un atout pour nos amoureux car beaucoup de choses difficiles les attendent. C'est sûr que la relation à distance démarre mal.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 34

Jesus...the bomb has been dropped..shit...he went Ballistics ...cant wait to read how it turns out now when justin is leaving. Damn giving a new meaning to go with a bang..lol.its a good thing u love happy endings as much i do...this was awesome.

Thank u for the blasted update lollllll



Author's Response:

The bomb Craig has been finally dropped and made a lot of noise lol. Justin's leaving will be hard for our two lovers, many hard times are ahead for them. But as you said, no matter what, I love happy endings just like you.

Thanks for your review on my blasted update lol.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2018 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 34

Well we knew this moment was going to happen.  Great way to get it to the readers.  Can't wait to see where you go from here.  Just knew that Craig wouldn't be the good guy. 



Author's Response:

It was about time for this moment to happen Thanks, I'm happy I brought it well as it was the moment the readers were expected the most. 

From here, there will be some hard times ahead for our boys. Craig isn't the good guy now but maybe it may evolved, we'll see

Thanks for your reviews :-)

Reviewer: Qaffanficlover (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2018 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 34

WOW 



Author's Response:

Yes I know lol

Thanks anyway :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 33

That broke my heart, I can feel Brian’s pain at the thought of Justin so far away and Justins fear that he may slip back into his old life. I wish Brian could go with him that way they could live together for the six months. I hope neither of them cheat on each other and their love will stay strong and connected. 

 Excellent work x



Author's Response:

It's a hard decision for them both. Brian is afraid to lose Justin and Justin is afraid to rekindle with his older life style. They will have to face some hard moments because of the distance but first, Craig's reaction is coming...

About their love staying strong and connected, you'll see but whatever happens I love happy endings :-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 33

Wow...this would be their first test of love...would they survive this seperation or not..damn...that waould be hard to read but i hope not for long..lol.

Great chapter...thank u very much.

 



Author's Response:

It will be for sure. It will be the first time where they'll be separate by time and distance. To know if they would survive, you have to keep reading. One thing, remember that no matter what, I love happy endings ;-)

Thanks your for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2018 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 33

Good chapter.  Can't wait to see how they handle the distance.  What is it with Justin & New York??????????? Great story !!!!



Author's Response:

The distance won't be easy to handle and their love will be out to the test. It won't be easy. I don't know, it seems our blond is attracted to this town lol.

Thanks for your review, I'm happy you love it :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2018 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 33

je pense qu'il y aura beaucoup à dire sur cette relation longue distance! j'espère que leur amour est vraiment fort, j'ai hâte de la suite et de la réaction de Craig! Quelque chose va se passer à la fête ? Merci pour ce chapitre

Author's Response:

Cette relation à distance va être compliquée pour nos amoureux. Leur amour va être mis à rude épreuve. La réaction de Craig arrive...peut être pendant la fête? lol

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 32

That was so great, I’m so over the moon for Brian that was a bit achievement for him and to share it with Justin was so wonderful. Their love is special and now I’m afraid of the contact for NY. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Brian is a very talented lawyer and it was great to see him having some recognition. Justin's presence was even better. Their love is very beautiful and will be put at risk with Justin going to New York.

Thanks for the review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 32

Oh no, shades of QAF and Justin going off to NY.  Great shift in the plot.  Love it.



Author's Response:

Yes I know, it has some shades of QAF with Justin going also to New York. I chose this city because it's not so far from Pittsburgh but thinking about it, it does sound like the show now lol.

Thank your for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2018 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 32

Well...that was quite a cliff hanger.

I like where this is going...very good chapter.

Thank a ton.



Author's Response:

It was indeed. I needed to spice things up between our lovers lol.

Thank, I'm happy you do and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2018 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 32

Et bien félicitations à Brian et Justin ils sont tous les 2 réussis dans leur carrière respective ! Alors une relation longue distance à suivre après le choc de cette révélation ! Merci pour le chapitre.

Author's Response:

Ils sont tous les 2 en plein essor dans leur carrière mais une relation à distance se profile. De plus, la réaction de Craig approche également....

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 31

Damn...u scared them both Mr.Taylor...lols.

That was very nice of craig...i wonder how will he react about the other secret.



Author's Response:

Yes he scared everyone lol.

He was very nice to be supportive of his son and wish the best for him. His reaction for the other secret, it's another question lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 31

WE are getting closer to Craig finding out.  MAYBE, he won't freak out nearly as much since he is a little mellower!!  Ha Ha !!!!!  Good chapter. 



Author's Response:

We are indeed getting closer to Criag finding out about our boys. His reaction will be important for the future of our lovers but will it be in a good or bad way? Keep reading to find out.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 31

I could feel at how nervous Justin was as to why his parents wanted to talk to him but I was glad when they did and it was to support his model career choice. I laughed when Jennifer pinched Craig that was just so funny. Brian is so wonderful with Justin you get to see his tender side come out and he can show it to Justin. I pray when Craig finds out that things won’t blow up. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Justin was indeed very nervous but in the end, everything was fine and he has now the permission to start his modeling career.  Brian is very caring and loving. Justin means really a lot to him and his love for him is big. 

Well, we'll see what happens when Craig will find out.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 31

Ah ah même moi j'ai eu peur ! Bon Justin va pouvoir un peu s'émanciper ce sera plus facile de voir Brian peut-être ? Après le secret le plus important est à dire Merci pour le chapitre!

Author's Response:

Si tu as eu peur, c'est que j'ai bien travaillé lol. Justin va s'émanciper c'est sûr mais est ce que ce sera une bonne chose? A voir. Il reste le plus lourd secret qui se rapproche lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 30

Bon ben reste plus que Craig alors! C'est bien de penser qu'ils ont le soutien de toute leur famille. J'aime bien aussi les histoires où Joan évolue. Merci pour le chapitre, j'attends la suite avec impatience.

Author's Response:

Craig est le dernier et sa réaction sera la plus importante. Oui, tout le monde réalise qu'ils ne font rien de mal à part être très amoureux au final. Oui, j'aimes bien l'écrire un peu différemment de temps en temps lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 30

Damn...that was a good surprise ...only craig is left...lets see how will he react..thanks for the superb update.



Author's Response:

Joanie can be full of surprise lol. Craig is the only one to be out of the circle lol. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 30

Nice to have a different Joanie.  Age shouldn't matter.  My husband was 17 years older than me and in alot of ways, I was the adult most of the time.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes, somtimes I like to write her differently. Age is nothing but a number, the most important is the love people are sharing. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2018 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 30

Awe I loved that, I know his mother was shocked to learn he was in love with a younger guy but to see her smile for her son being happy make me smile. So I thank you for that. Xxx

 

excellent work as always x



Author's Response:

Yeah she was shocked because Justin is really young but what can you do against love? Seeing that your son is happy is the best thing for a mother.

Thank you for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 29

Omg if Justin had walked in a few moments earlier he would of had his heart broken. I think he will find out and be hurt by Brian’s lies. I do hope that that won’t drive them apart because they make a great couple. A jealous Justin is one Brian needs to watch out for lol. 

 

Brilliant work as always xx



Author's Response:

Yes, he would had his heart broken for sure. I don't think he will find out, there's ne big reasons for it. They do make a great couple and Brian needs a jealous Justin by his side to put him on right way again lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 29

C'est pas vrai mais qu'est ce qu'il cheche Brian ? Qu'il veuille tromper Craig ok mais pas devant Justin! heureusement que Justin lui pardonne mais je ne pense pas que Brian doive jouer à ça ! il perd tous ses repères face à Craig Justin est plus mature que lui! Merci pour ce chapitre

Author's Response:

Brian est un peu confus dans cette relation. Je suis d'accord, à force de chercher à tromper Craig, il va commettre des erreurs qui risquent d'être dangereuses. Craig le déstabilise énormément. Justin est plus mature que lui en quelque sorte et c'est ce que je voulais montrer. Le plus jeune peut s'avérer le plus réfléchi au final.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 29

Damn...brian is attracting trouble everytime..lols..this will not be good when he will need craigs support..lols..he will definetly not be getting brownie points in future.

Thanks for the chapter.



Author's Response:

Brian is indeed a troublemaker lol. About Craig's support, I don't think he will need some lol. No he won't for sure.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 29

Don't like Conor, but then again I don't like anyone who tries to come between our guys.  At least Brian took a stand.  Can't wait until the bombshell hits Craig. Good chapter



Author's Response:

Not sure that a lot of readers will love Conor lol. Brian realised he was doing something wrong and pushed him away in the end. Justin is the only man in his life. It wil come, the bombshell will come, don't worry.

Thanks for your your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2018 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 28

Oh that made me so sad for Justin, getting jealous of Conor. I hope Brian doesn’t do anything with him as Justin is his boyfriend and cheating would really hurt him.   I cannot wait for more of this story. 



Author's Response:

Justin is really jealous of this new Irish guy. Well, Conor is really tempting lol. We'll see in the next chapter lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

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Reviewer: Qaffanficlover (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 28

Brian pissing me off LMAO I'm feeling for Justin sitting through that



Author's Response:

I know, I understand lol. Justin had to see his man being seduced without any discretion so it's not easy.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 28

 

Ah, the green eyed monster arrives.  Brian is just too good looking for it not to appear.  Great chapter.  Poor Justin!!!  Hopefully, he will win in the end.



Author's Response:

It's a great nickmane lol. The green eyed monster lol. Brian is very good looking, sexy and smart so it's pretty normal that every gay men are trying their luck lol. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 28

Ah ah Craig qui joue les marrieurs, Justin jaloux Brian qui ne gère pas très bien j'adore ce méli mélo c'étatit assez drôle en fait ! Enfin juste un peu ! Merci pour ce chapitre.

Author's Response:

Craig veut placer Brian, ça on l'a compris depuis longtemps lo.l Oui un petit mélodrame mais rien de bien méchant. C'est une situation un peu comique, on peut dire ça lol

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2018 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 27

I love this story. Yay! Keep updating it.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much and I will, don't worry

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2018 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 27

J'aime Claire,! Je ne sais pas si c'est un bon conseil mais bon pourquoi pas ?Est-ce qu'il va se passer quelque chose à l'école ? Merci pour ce chapitre

Author's Response:

J'ai voulu changer Claire un petit peu lol. Ce n'est peut être pas le meilleur mais bizarrement ses arguments se tiennent lol. Hmmm supens lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2018 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 27

That was fabulous chapter...justin is counting the days that was soo cute.

Thank u for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you Navneet. Yes, I'll be counting the days too if I were him lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2018 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 27

I could feel Brian’s nerves waiting for that phone to ring and to hear what Justin had to say on the matter he texted him about. It’s such a hard situation for them. Maybe Brian can sit with Jennifer and talk about how they can tell Craig when the time is right. 

I do hope this professor isn’t going to cause problems when Brian goes to talk with him at Justin’s school. 

This is is such a brilliant story. 



Author's Response:

We can only imagine how nervous Brian could be waiting for Justin's phonecall. It's a hard situation for them but now that Jennifer is aware of them dating, it will be slightly easier for them. 

Well, I wouldn't bet on the professor too much lol. Maybe, maybe not lol.

Thank you very much Vicki :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2018 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 26

Ha Jennifer n'est pas si en colère, elle respecte Brian c'est un soulagement ! Voyons Craig!! Merci pour ce chapitre ça bouge!

Author's Response:

Elle l'a été au départ car elle était sous le choc mais elle connaît et respecte Brian. De plus, elle voit son fils heureux. Craig, ça sera autre chose lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2018 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 26

I seriously loved this chapter. I was worried when Jennifer found eBay she found but the heartfelt chat she had with Justin was perfect. I think that she will be the in key in helping them for when Craig finds out because I don’t think he will take it well. They will need her support. 

 

 Brilliant work 💖



Author's Response:

Thank you Vicki. Jennifer is a mother, she's worried but the happiness of her son come first. I liked Jennifer in the show so I wanted her to be supportive of Justin. Maybe, she will later indeed. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2018 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 26

That was good i guess...his mom will help him in future againest craig.. awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Well, it's a first good step. He's relieved that his mother took it well and she'll have his back if needed.

Thank for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2018 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 26

OH, this is getting good.  I like Jennifer so hopefully she will be there for Justin.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

It seems things will be easier if at least Justin's mom knows about them. Jennifer will be there for him and Brian. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2017 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 25

Ah ah la tempête arrive ! Craig ne va pas être commode! Ils vont tellement se manquer. Peut-être que Brian devrait quand même tater le terrain avec Craig! Merci pour ce chapitre, passes de bonnes fêtes de fin d'année!

Author's Response:

Disons que ce chapitre donne une idée de qui peut être Craig et c'est pas forcément bon signe. Ils vont se manquer c'est sûr. 

Merci pour ton commentaire et bonnes fêtes de fin d'année à toi aussi :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2017 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 25

I love them like this all sweet and being open with each other enough to show that sid of themselves. I hope they can live with each other soon. 

 

Oh oh I knew lying was going to cause Justin problems and I was right. He acted like a child so he got punished like one. I do think if Craig tells Brian at work what happened Brian can talk to Craig into letting him off without giving away about their relationship. Plus if Justin then decides he wants to move out he can pretend to rent a room from Brian to pretend to show his dad he is a grownup. He is a grownup and his dad can’t see this yet but maybe this could help him prove it. I just hope when his dads finds out about them he won’t get to angry and see how in love they are and how good they are for each other. 

 

Brilliant chapter xxx



Author's Response:

I love to write them alone and happy, cherishing their love. They have a close bound and are very open with each other.

He acted like a child but at the same time, his father is afraid for him to be back into his old lifestyle. He's probably overprotectuve about Justin but he's a father lol. Lying isn't a good thing especially being out without your parents to really know where you are. Justin is a grownup but as you said his father don't see it yet. Craig's won't find out soon so we'll see.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2017 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 25

This doesn’t look good. I really hoped that Craig didn’t had a problem with their relation. Hopefully that they find a solution.



Author's Response:

It doesn't look good you're right. They'll be away from each other for a month and it gace them a slight clue of how harsh Craig can be, without even knowing they're dating.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2017 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 25

The chapter was really superb...what is brian going to do now..the plot is getting more intense...thank u for the update.



Author's Response:

Oh thank you. Well, they won't be able to do a lot of things, being separated. But it will make them think about their future but some good things can come out of this month apart. The plot is getting more intense from now.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2017 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 25

And, the plot thickens.  Good chapter.  Happy Holidays to you.



Author's Response:

Yes a new twist. I have to bring some twists and events for the plot to move on a little. 

Thanks for your review.

Thank you and Happy Holidays to you too :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2017 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 24

OMG that was amazing, I loved the Photoshoot and how Sam was with them and the smile on Justin’s face shone out of the page. You can tell the bond is getting stronger and stronger everyday. I am getting nervous to see what Craig’s reaction is going to be. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Sam was great with both of them and Justin really killed his first photoshoot. He has everything to become a great model. Their love is getting stronger everyday, you're right. Craig's reaction will be up in the next chapter but not about the shooting...

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2017 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 24

Encore un chapitre sexy ! J'espère qu'être modèle va fonctionner pour Justin ! J'attends la réaction des parents LOL

Author's Response:

Oui un petit chapitre sexy par-ci par là ne fait pas de mal lol. Pour savoir si Justin va avoir du succès en tant que modèle, il va falloir attendre un peu. 

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2017 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 24

Excellent ...loved it...naughty justin is soo lovable...thank u .



Author's Response:

I love naughty Justin too. I love when he tries to be more in charge and express what he wants. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2017 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh Justin lying to your parents is a VERY BAD thing , you are going to be in major hot water with them. I did love them together it was great to see them being romantic with each other and Justin cooking for him was wonderful x

 

Brilliant work as always x



Author's Response:

It's a very bad thing in a way lol. He's going to be in major hot water if they found he lied about his model project and...Brian lol. That's right, it's risky lol. It's great to see them being able to be together and take advantage of each other the most they can. Their love can blossom thanks to those moments alone. Justin had a great idea and it tasted good in the end, so all the better.

Thank you very much and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2017 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

This might prove difficult, but I have a feeling those two will do more than talk eventually.  Umm, isn't talking about an important case discouraged?



Author's Response:

It will be difficult but I can tell you that they'll do more than talk lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oooooo! I can see already that this is going to be a good one. A confident sexy Justin and an enamored Brian makes for a good time 😁 



Author's Response:

I hope it's going to be a good one lol. Justin will be pretty confident and sexy in this story and Brian will be more reserved but being older, he knows exactly what he loves and what he expect from a relationship.

Thank for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beau début et très original ! Je suis sure que le fruit va être savoureux !

Author's Response:

Une idée assez originale effectivement mais qui peut marcher lol. Evidemment, le fruit sera forcément savoureux lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Brilliant start to this story. It's very different to see Brian and Craig as friends and I think the chemistry between Justin and Brian was perfect and sparks of lust is in the air. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Vicki. Yes, I came with this weird idea lol and I wanted to give it a try. The chemistry is already there and and they're already very attracted to each other.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Big changes.  Lawyer, journalist, friends with Craig!  Want to see more.



Author's Response:

Yes this stroy will be very different from the show, that's what alternate universe are for. It allows the writers to write totally new and refreshing stories and let their creativity expresses itself more.

I hope you'll love it anyway and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hmm...already an attraction there. Interesting beginning, Audrey! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Already an attraction between the two men. Attraction at first sight. 

Thank you Kim, I hope this story will have its faithful readers like the others.

Thanks for your review and your great banner :-)

Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2017 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

I already love this story, can't wait to read more! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I hope you'll love the following chapters.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2017 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Forgot to mention...loved the banner..pefect for the story.



Author's Response:

The great banner was made by the great Kim (Predec2). She totally captured what I wanted for it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2017 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Excellent plot...loved how brian is starstruck...and justin is not..for once..lols..very interesting start.. AU stories are my favorite..something new and refreshing to read everytime..thank u very much for posting..loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you miss. It's always frightenning to post a new story, so I'm happy you like the start of this one. Justin will be pretty mature, knowing exactly what he wants while Brian will be more reserved. 

I love AU stories too. It allows the writers to explore many things without sticking to the show. 

Thanks for supporting this new story too :-)

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