Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2021 09:52 PM · On: The Proposition
What to read (for the 5th time) when we are waiting for a new update of the building bridges (im suffering)
Another masterpiece of yours MY dear
I really think that you should write a book with all of your fics in it kdkdkdkdjdjdjdj
I AM ON WAIT TO BUYING IT ALREADY AHAHAHAHAHSSHHSHSHS
Author's Response: Oh my, someone is still reading these old stories. I'm happy you still enjoy this one! I remember having a lot of fun writing this story.
Making a book out of my fanfiction would be illegal but that is a nice thought neverthless :).
Thank you for the comment!
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2018 08:46 AM · On: Stares
Loved it. Now to the sequel
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 11:31 AM · On: Stares
I like this story just the way it is. You are very talented at writing cute love story. This is the second story that I read from you. Thanks
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. Means so much to know that you this so. If I may make a suggestion, try reading Seven Minutes if hat is your style. When people recommend my stories that is always number one :). Thank you for the lovely comment <3.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 08:06 AM · On: First Time
Poor Justine....is Brian that big an asshole?
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Justin :(. As I said before. Reading the sequel will help you undrstand Brian. I haven't posted the whole thing yet and we're not at this point yet. But we will be soon enough. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 06:46 AM · On: I Have A Question
Is Brian a virgin ?
Author's Response: That would be a very good plot bunny! Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 06:27 AM · On: Bad Day
Brian is using Justin OK I am upset
Author's Response: Aww, sorry to hear you're upset. You definitely need to read the sequel to hear Brian's thoughts. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 06:17 AM · On: Shower With Me
Daphne has got to know what is going on !
Author's Response: Maybe she does. She just might hide it well :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 04:27 AM · On: Bake Sale
Dare I say it again......so cute
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 03:42 AM · On: Jealousy
Poor Justin and the green eyed devil !
Author's Response: yeah, it's a b**** :D. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 02:59 AM · On: Text Messages
This is so cute how Justin "hates" Brian! I do believe Brian is wise to him
Author's Response: Yeah, Justin a little clueless at this point :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 12:39 AM · On: The Proposition
Hot
Author's Response: I'm happy you think so :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: aem_mza (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2017 07:42 PM · On: Stares
Excelente historia! Definitivamente necesita una secuela!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy you liked it. I've started writing the Brian's pov. So more will be coming :). Thanks for the commet.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 03:23 AM · On: Stares
I got to say I love how Brian decided what he wanted and went with it. However, if Justin gets a change to go to Disney I say go for it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the ending. I think Justin is going to Disney and maybe he will pack Brian in the trunk of the car :D, He won't let go now that he really has his man. Thank you for all the comments. I appreciate them.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2017 02:46 AM · On: Deals Off
Well Brian knows and Justin isn't mad at Daphne.
Author's Response: Yeah, Brian finally knows. And Daphne woudln't be mad at him. She knows he's hurting :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 04:19 AM · On: Misery
Shame things aren't going well. At least he has Daphne.
Author's Response: Yeah, things are not good at the moment :(. Daphne's the best, we can always count on her :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2017 02:47 AM · On: First Time
Justin shouldn't lie to Daphne. I think Justin enjoyed it but thought he shouldn't. Maybe I'm wrong.
Author's Response: I'm giving everyone free hands with their interpretations and it's fun to hear my readers thoughts. Just a little hint. There wasn't any emotional connection which might have made Justin think it wasn't good :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 02:29 PM · On: Stares
I loved this story! You write young Brian and Justin so well :)
I would love to read Brian's perspective
Thanks for another great read
xoxo
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you enjoyed my story. And glad to hear that lovely compliment about my writing skills too :). Means so much to know this.
I think I'm going to write Brian's pov but I'm taking my time with it. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 02:35 AM · On: I Have A Question
Is pushing the right thing? Brian is not going to say no.
Author's Response: You'll find out when you read more :). I don't think Brian's going to say no. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 12:23 AM · On: Stares
Once again, had to catch up on about 5 chapters at once! I am so glad that the boys found their way back to each other. I'm still not quite sure why they both thought the first time they had sex was so bad... They both seemed to enjoy it at the time, LOL! I thought there was just some miscommunication afterward... like Brian wondering why Justin left so abruptly. But I do love Daphne here... wish I had a friend like her when I was still in school!
I've always had a soft-spot for Brian & Justin childhood, teenager Fics, so I'm all for a rerun from Brian's point of view!
Author's Response: I think there was no motional connection during first time which was the reason everything went awkward. The actual sex wasn't that bad. And yes there might be some miscommunication. I think I'm going to write Brian's pov and try to get more into this scene :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 08:24 PM · On: Stares
Well done, I liked the end.
Author's Response: I'm glad to know that :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 07:04 PM · On: Stares
Yes! I'm thrilled Brian went after Justin. And of course I would love to read Brian's POV, it could be very interesting. I have a feeling more than a reader could be surprised, LOL!
Thank you for this tale Heidi, I have enjoyed it immensely :)
Author's Response: I'm happy to know that :). I love happy endings!
I think I'm going to write the Brian's pov and yes there will be surprises. I have some of the plot figured out on my head already :).
Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 06:59 PM · On: Stares
Great ending! I would LOVE to see this story from Brian's point of view.... Looking forward to your next fic... no matter what you choose to do next. :)
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked the ending :). I think I'm going to write the Brian's pov but I'm taking my time with it. I do have some of the plot figured out in my head and I think you're going to be somewhat surprised :D. But as always I might write some one shots in between :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 02:31 PM · On: Stares
I love the ending and wouldn't mind if you give us Brian's thoughts on it. ;)
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you liked the ending :).
I think I'm going to write Brian's pov. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 11:55 AM · On: Stares
I really like the story! And yes I would like to know how Brian changed his mind! Is it because of Daphnée ? Thanks again I love happy endings.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my story :). And you know me. I'm a sucker for happy endings I could never really write a story without it.
I think I'm going to write Brian's pov but I'm taking my time with it :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 10:45 AM · On: Stares
Yay Brian eventually got his act together nice story thank you
Author's Response: Yeah, he finally did :). I'm happy you had fun reading this story. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Gibgirl (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 09:32 AM · On: The Proposition
I Loved this story. It would be great to read it from Brian's point of view
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that :). I think I'm going to write the Brian's pov. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 09:30 AM · On: Stares
That seemed to have happened awfully quick. I would LOVE to read this from Brian's pov! Getting his feelings on everything would be great! Great story but I want more...
Author's Response: Yeah it did. I thought what I think was about two months for this enging and for the life of it I couldn't come up with anything else so I went with it.
I think I'm going to write Brian's pov. I already have some plot figured out in my head and I think some of it may be a surprise :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 05:17 AM · On: Stares
Why was Justin so stubborn. I'm glad Brian took the first step. Thank you for sharing this wonderful Highschool story, I loved it. Hopefully you will write more of this!! Can't stop reading.
Author's Response: My interpretation was that Justin was 100% sure that Brian doesn't like him. I'm glad I made Brian take the first step because I don't think Justin would have. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this story :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 04:36 AM · On: Stares
Aww, I want more:)
You really do write the best HS fic around here.
Thanks for sharing the story with us. And if you ever decide to write Brian's POV, I'd delightfully read it.
Author's Response: I do? You just made my heart skip with your second sentence. Thank you. It means so much to know that.
I think I'm going to write Brian's pov but I'll take my time with it Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 03:43 AM · On: Stares
Honestly that was awesome ...a perfect ending....i would read brians pov if u ever write and leave reviews obviously....but for me everything was clear about brians feelings..i really loved it.
I am sure u will come up with interesting views of brian.
I am soo glad that brian did not denied his feelings any longer...maybe a sequel in future where we see his pov and how he gets to ask justin to be his life partner or husband etc that would be cool...i would read anything u write for sure.
Would wait for it..good luck .. thanks again for sharing and for ur love.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like the ending :).
For now I think I'm going to write the Brian's pov since so many hinted me they would read it. About a sequel. Right now I don't have any idea for the plot but if I someday find an inspiration, sure I'll write a sequel :).
Thank you so much for all the comments. They are appreciate so much <3.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 03:08 AM · On: Deals Off
Really enjoying this! I hope you'll update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that :). Last chapter will be up in a moment. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 05:29 PM · On: Deals Off
I love Daphne, she's the best friend a gay boy can have. :)
Author's Response: She definitely is! I'm a woman and sadly not gay but I till want a Daphne of my own :D. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 04:19 PM · On: Deals Off
Going awesome...liked it...i hope daph had pushed them in right direction.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Maybe she has pushed them in the right direction. One more chapter to go and I will post it soon :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 03:50 PM · On: Deals Off
Omg this is breaking my heart! And reminding me too much of my own high school angst. Lol Jesus! When is Brian going to admit he has feelings for Justin too? More hot scenes please!
Author's Response: I warned you at chapter 8 that I was going to break your heart :D. I will post the next chapter in a moment. It will be the last so you'll find out if Brian admits he has feelings for Justin :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 12:30 PM · On: How To Lure Brian Kinney Into Bed
Justin's got it bad. As Mysterious Marilyn once said, he's a bad bet.
Author's Response: Hehe, he's got it really bad :D. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 04:06 AM · On: Misery
Aww...that was heartbreaking...soo sad...but i am sure brian is also fighting with his feelings too...he knew justin is more then just a fuck and now he is denying it..refusing to let justin enter his heart.
Awesome chapter..thanks for continious updates.
Author's Response: Brian probably is figting with his feelings too. It's so sad to see Justin and probably Brian unhappy. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 02:07 AM · On: Misery
Okay enough Brian Kinney, why are you so mean to the sunshine of your life??
But wait, are they seriously not misunderstanding each other reaction right now? I meant, the way Justin just gone after they had sex without nothing to talk about and the way Brian just agreed that Justin should go at the time.. hmm it would be -a big misunderstanding. They are both nervous and did not know if they were doing it right.
Hmmm, I would like to know why Brian treat Justin like that.. but tbh even tho' Brian is being rude I still want them to be tgt. Hehe #shipperthing
Anyway don't be sad Justin! It will be over before you know it, Thanks author for the great story that u have, I so looking forward for the nxt chaps! <3
Author's Response: There might be a misunderstanding both ways. We all want the boys together. We're all happy that way :D. Next chapter will be up in a moment. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 01:45 AM · On: Bad Day
Poor Justin.
Author's Response: Yeah :(. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 01:35 AM · On: Shower With Me
So even if he told the truth Daphne wouldn't believe him? They are going to get caught, I just know it.
Author's Response: Daphne's very aware how Justin didn't like Brian before they agreed on their little deal. She would probably think it's a joke :). You'll have to read more and find out if they do get caught. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 11:01 PM · On: Misery
This story is so addictive! Poor Justin, he is so miserable right now. Also, I have a feeling Brian might be hurt Justin ran away after they had sex. Justin should confront him ASAP! LOL
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Ooh, addictive, no one has ever called my story that :D. I hope you're hooked :D. Justin is really miserable. There's a big possibility that Brian didn't like Justin running away. Next chapter will be up in a moment. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2017 05:05 PM · On: Misery
Playing catch-up as usual. There has been such great progress in this story. I have really enjoyed how its moved along. My heart goes out to Justin here. I am curious to see why Brian is acting as he is, but with him, it's usually never simple. I know he could be very confused at such a tender age of having different thoughts/feelings for Justin than he does the other guys he picks up. Daphne is such a good friend for Justin, but I do hope she isn't crushing on him as well. I doubt anyone could blame her, though. :)
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the rest of the story. *Janet*
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you like the pace of my story. I was worried that it might be going on way too fast. With Brian it is never simple. Especially when I imagined Brian being a little like in the show. He's a complicated man :). And for sure he feels something totally else for Justin than the other guys he's been with.
As for Daphne liking Justin, don't worry, she isn't, they're friends, very close friends and that's it :). But yeah, Justin's a catch. Two more chapters to go. next will be up tomorrow. Well at least in my time. It's 8:45 pm here :).
Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 04:51 PM · On: Misery
Brian is being mean. He could've just told Justin if he doesn't want to see him again and not ignore him totally. I'm glad Justin doesn't go chasing after him, but I think Brian is just scared of the feelings he is having for Justin. Great chapter:)
Author's Response: Maybe he's mean or maybe he's insecure and scared. I love to hear your thoughts :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 04:44 PM · On: Misery
Oh God, teenage angst. Poor Justin...is Daph falling in love with her gay best friend here? Brian needs to talk to Justin..little asshole! lol
Author's Response: Teenage angst is the worst! :D I can honestly say that Daphne isn't falling in love with Justin. Don't worry :). Brian seriously needs to talk to Justin, yes. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 04:27 PM · On: Misery
Hello, Heidi! Perfect title for this chapter. Brian is either scared of his feelings for Justin, or he's just being a jerk. I know he didn't promise Justin a relationship, but to just demand his presence at his beck and call, and then just totally ignore him is beyond selfish. And while I feel so sorry for our tender hearted blond, he needs to perhaps give Brian a little taste of his own medicine, square his shoulders, and get out there himself. I say don't let Brian take advantage of you, Sunshine! So there - ha! Loved the interaction with Daphne, and loving this story. a86; Thank you for posting this on here. Looking forward to the rest of your story. ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim! I love long reviews! Thank you! Those are the only two options that Brian might be going through. You'll kinda find out in the next chapter if you read between lines. You've probably noticed I don't tell anything straightly what Brian is going through. I'm happy you still like my story :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 03:33 PM · On: Misery
Poor Justin i'm very sad for him ! He have Daphné i love her she is a really good friend in those moments ! i hope Brian do the right thing for Justin !
Author's Response: Yes, Justin is lucky to have Daphne. As for what Brian will do, you just have to keep reading :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 04:32 AM · On: First Time
Ohhh...sunshine...they should talk more...justin is feeling soo down.
Really nice chapter...its getting more interesting now.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: I agree. They barely really talk, They should. Maybe someday they will. I'm happy you liked this chapter :) Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 02:24 AM · On: Touches
Bad naughty Brian. Justin's going to get in trouble at this rate.
Author's Response: Hehe, Brian is very good at being naughty. Not even bothering to close the door! :D. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2017 08:13 PM · On: First Time
I'm glad Daphne is a really good friend of Justin. He really needs her at the moment. I don't think Brian thought it was bad. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, Daphne is a very good friend. Happily Justin has her. I agree, Brian didn't think the sex was bad. They just didn't have an emotional connection and that made things awkward. Next chapter will be up in a moment :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2017 08:02 PM · On: First Time
Oh no...you know both of them are feeling this way...it may have been awkward but it wasn't bad...I mean even bad sex is still sex...oh Christ, I sound like a hoe! lol Oh those crazy teenager boys! Cannot wait for the next chapter! The day after...
Author's Response: Yeah, the sex part probably wasn't that bad but they had no emotional connection what so ever and they've never really talked so I would imagine that would be awkward. Maybe crazy fictional teenage boys make up sound like a hoe :D. Next chapter will be up in a moment :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2017 04:59 PM · On: First Time
Awwww! Poor Justin. So glad he finally told Daphne. He needs a friend right now.
I'm not sure how he should proceed with Brian. I guess it all depends on Brian's next move and what Justin really wants and is willing to do about it.
Can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: Yeah, he really needs Daphne right now. Happily Daphne's a good friend. Next chapter will be up in a moment :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2017 02:01 PM · On: Bake Sale
Getting together at a non-school function proved interesting. Icing cakes wouldn't have been nearly as much fun if Brian hadn't showed up.
Author's Response: Icing cupcakes would definitely not be as fun without Brian. Especially as Justin enjoyed seeing him suck at it a litte bit :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2017 02:19 AM · On: I Have A Question
I just found this story and read the entire thing in two days. It's just wonderful! Exactly how I would imagine a teenaged Brian & Justin would behave!
Great job!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story and how I developed our boys. Means so much to know this :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2017 02:07 AM · On: Jealousy
Brian just may have blown it with Justin. Naughty, Brian.
Author's Response: Very naughty :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 06:04 PM · On: I Have A Question
Poor Justin! So flustered and confused. Wants to put Brian in his place for taking him for granted, but can't stay away from the attraction he feels. I kind of wish some other guy would take an interest in him, and give Brian a little bit of his own medicine! I hope he stands up for himself at some point. You can tell that Brian finds him special, but he needs to find a way to let Justin know that.
I'm liking this high school B and J a lot! Thank you for writing this, Heidi! ~Kim
Author's Response: My thoughts exactly :) I'm sad to say that there won't be a third guy but now that you mentioned it, I so wish I had come up with one. Maybe I'll use it in some other story :). I'm glad you like my story. Means so much to know this. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 04:10 PM · On: I Have A Question
Bahaha 'sexy forearms here I come' lmao omg do young gay boys really think like that? I've been a young gay girl but never a dude. Lol This story is hysterical! Looking forward to the fucking....not sure Brian is though, surprisingly
Author's Response: I'm not gay nor a boy so I have no idea if they really think that :D. And to make things even worse, I imagined Justin saying "sexy forearms here I come" the same way Raj says I'll make the popcorn in the last seconds in this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xGKF1uQgwU And for the life of it I can't picture it any other way :D. I'm glad I stopped myself from writing more description to that particular scene. I'm happy you had fun reading this chapter. More comes tomorrow :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 03:47 PM · On: I Have A Question
The dream on the last chapter was very hot!! Here Justin wants things with Brian then he goes for it ! Lovely Justin and lovely chapter
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you approve :D. I'm happy you liked this chapter :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 03:04 PM · On: How To Lure Brian Kinney Into Bed
He won't say no....
Author's Response: No he won't :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 02:48 PM · On: The Proposition
I agree with Nadine. I think Brian IS affected by Justin and trying like hell to figure it all out. My theory is Brian began the kissing pact cause he liked how good it felt for just that brief moment at the party during Spin the Bottle and wanted to explore that. Kissing other boys was more about comparison that just getting off. Cause why does he keep coming back to Justin? What makes Justin so special?
Now if Brian is such a slut as you replied in another review, why the hesitancy of penetration sex? What I vaguely remember about horny teenage boys is that ALL they seemed to want WAS penetration sex.
Author's Response: I agree that Brian must feel something for Justin at this point.
As for Brian being a slut. In this story there's a lot going on in Brian's life we don't see. As we talked before, we can't always know what goes on in other peoples minds and lifes. I imagine Brian being with other guys and having similar rules as he does in the show. I mean the one fuck only policy. Of course Justin is exception as Brian told in this chapter. You can disagree with that if you think some other theory is best for you.
Maybe this is a cultural difference but in my life when I was a teenager not all my friends that were boys wanted penetrative sex. Some were gentleman when it came to any kind of relationships. Maybe Brian thinks Justin is worth much more than just one fuck to see if it's great. The other guys he's with are just that, other guys. Much like in the show :).
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 08:27 AM · On: I Have A Question
I love Justin for going after Brian. And his thoughts are so funny! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Hehe. I'm happy you had fun reading this chapter :) More comes tomorrow. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 07:07 AM · On: I Have A Question
I think Brian is too nonchalant about what's happening between him and Justin. It's either he doesn't really feel anything for Justin or he is already falling in love and trying to pretend that it's just all a deal between them. I'd love to read Brian's POV on this.
Author's Response: I know Brian's thought are not in this story at all but I imagined Brian being a lot like in the show even though though I didn't write it. He feels for Justin but is ready to do a lot so Justin doesn't find out. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 06:35 AM · On: I Have A Question
U go justin...hip hip hurray for the blond..rofl..we all know justin got the biggest balls..i knew he will ask somehow.
Thank u for the lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Hehe, he's pretty brave, isn't he :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 05:18 PM · On: How To Lure Brian Kinney Into Bed
I'm curious why Brian is acting this way.
Author's Response: In this chapter Brian is, to say it bluntly, fucking with him. He noticed Justin was horny and found it funny. A very good opportunity to tease him :D. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 03:03 PM · On: How To Lure Brian Kinney Into Bed
Aww, Justin was falling in love. Cute story, thanks for sharing:)
Author's Response: Yep, he's falling in love :). I'm glad you've enjoyed this so far :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 02:41 PM · On: Bad Day
I feel sorry for Justin. has Brian any idea that its moren for Justin then for him.
Author's Response: I'm letting everyone come up with their own interpretation but in my opinion Brian has no clue. It was a really bad day for Justin, I agree. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 02:37 PM · On: How To Lure Brian Kinney Into Bed
Justin is horny...lols..very good chapter.
Author's Response: He really is :D. Ah teenage years :D. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 01:46 PM · On: Touches
They are getting closer. Brian ripper a drawing out the sketch book. Was this just a drwaing or one of Brian? GReat chapter!!
Author's Response: They are :). I would imagine that the sketch was just some random drawing because it an older sketch book. Brian just happened to like it. I'm happy you liked this chapter :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 11:00 AM · On: The Proposition
I love highschool ff's. Wonderful first chapter!!
Author's Response: High school stories are one of my favorites. It took me over ten years to have the guts to write one myself but I'm happy I did it :). I'm glad you like the beginning :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 04:33 PM · On: Bad Day
Omg...poor sweet justin...i hope things change in future..justin had to follow his heart.that will be good for him.
Bad girl teasing us with a spoiler..i like it.
Thank u for the new chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, Justin has to follow his heart. You have to read more to find out if things change. The next chapter is up :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 03:18 PM · On: Bad Day
Haha ! Brian bad boy and Justin jealous I liiiike it ! Thank you!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you. Usually people are devastated when I write angst. I'm glad you like this :D. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 09:41 AM · On: Touches
Things are heating up nicely! I really love Justin, he is adorable :) looking forward to read what comes next!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you, I'm glad you enjoy my little Justin :). Next chapter already up so you can go read it. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 03:28 AM · On: Shower With Me
Wow! Fooling around in the school shower?! Okay...I change my mind. Brian is addicted to Justin.
Author's Response: It's pretty risky, isn't it? :D You wouldn't do that with anyone, right? Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 02:32 AM · On: Shower With Me
One of these days daphne would find out...then justin will be in soo much trouble...hmm...awesome chapter...that shower scene was very steamy.
Author's Response: Maybe, you have to keep reading and find out :). I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 12:04 AM · On: Touches
OK...Brian is captivated by Justin...what other reason would he have to keep approaching him? :)
Author's Response: Maybe Justin is a pro at all things sexual :D. But yeah, I too bet there's something going on in Brian's head. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2017 03:51 PM · On: Shower With Me
Really , Daphné does't know about Brian and Justin ? Thank you for this other sweet chapter!
Author's Response: Nope, Daphne doesn't suspect anything. Weird huh? :) I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2017 03:33 AM · On: Touches
Brian is such a tease...lols....liked it very much like always.
Thank u sooo much ...cant wait to see what is next.
Author's Response: Brian is a very big tease ;). Next chapter will be up in a minute. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2017 12:27 AM · On: Touches
Such a cute story, Heidi! And both boys, even Brian, are beginning to realize this is more than just a casual fling. I do hope that eventually Brian comes to respect Justin sd more than just a convenient way to release his sexual energy. I think he does, but he just doesn't realize it yet - or wants to admit it.
Really enjoying this story! Looking forward to the rest of it. :) ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you :). I think you're right that Brian too is starting to feel differently towards Justin, but he doesn't really know it yet. More coming in a moment :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 07:28 PM · On: Touches
Oh yeah, things are heating up for the two sixteen year old horny boys. lol Now if it's the weekend, their going to have to 'get together' at some point right?
Author's Response: I don't really know about weekends but this surely isn't the last scene where they spend time together outside school ;). This is the biggest spoiler I'm going to make :D. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 07:18 PM · On: Touches
Just good! Every things are good: Thank you
Author's Response: I'm happy you like it :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 05:44 AM · On: Bake Sale
Well...everything is good...no awkwardness..lovely chapter....everything is good...no awkwardness..lovely chapter...they are getting closer...thanks for the update.d84;
Author's Response: Nope, no awkwardness. Justin isn't really the kind to let his feelings known in this story. I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 11:39 PM · On: Bake Sale
I have my own thories about Brian...
I love that Brian's always initiating the kissing. And I think its more than just wanting to feel good...
Author's Response: I'm really happy someone noticed that Brian is always the one who makes the first move :D. Your interpretation sounds way better than mine. Much happier :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 07:55 PM · On: Bake Sale
Hahaha they are too adorable! Teenage boys...
Author's Response: Yeah, I had to make a fluffy chapter. I absolutely love writing fluff (which you probably know if you've read my Seven series). I'm glad you liked this chapter :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 04:20 PM · On: Bake Sale
I just start reading and it is a lovely story I like Brian and Justin teenagers! Thank you
Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to start reading this and that you like it so far :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 08:42 AM · On: Jealousy
You are in a deep shit trouble Kinney. How dare you mess with your one and only sunshiny?? Lol
I could never thanked u enough for making this fic. I am so looking forward to see what's Brian reaction next..
Is there will be something change in The way Justin's behave towards him after this incident??
Next chap soon pleaseee
Author's Response: He did the unthinkable. *gasp* :D. You leaving me a comment means the world to me and you liking this means even more. So thank you. You will see some changes but not yet in the next chapter which will be up in a minute. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 05:04 AM · On: Jealousy
Omg...first part was sooo sexy...soo sensual ...gosh..loooovvvveedddd it.
Second part ..jeez stupid brian..poor jealous sunshine.
I soo enjoy seeing sunshine jealous.
I cant wait to see there interaction now.
Looking forward for more soon.
Thank u for the lovely chapter.
Author's Response: You'll see a change. Obviously. But not yet in the next chapter. But eventually. Next chapter will be up in a moment :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 04:49 AM · On: Daydreaming
Awesome...going great...love ur writting..thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked this chapter even though it didn't have enough Brian in this. I'll put that information in the back of my head for the future :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 04:42 AM · On: Text Messages
That was soo fun..justin cant resist brian...sooooo gooodd chapter..thanks.
Author's Response: Hehe, no Justin can't really resist Brian :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 04:30 AM · On: The Proposition
This is a amazing plot...i loved it like always.
Really interesting start...i enjoyed it very much.
Thank u soo much for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you :). I'm happy you like the start even if I've warned that this will not be happy stuff like Seven series. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 12:12 AM · On: Jealousy
Uh oh! Poor Justin...So confusing to be pursued like that, made to feel so wanted & desired and then realize your just another conquest.
I know you said you had no plans of telling things from Brian's point of view, but I'm so curious about his motives and rationales and just general take on the situation. What was his first impression of Justin? Why did he come up with this agreement? How did he feel when Justin stumbled in on him in the bedroom with another guy?
But then we don't always know others feelings & intentions are in real life either do we? :)
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Yes, poor Justin. It must be confusing.
Very good questions :). I intentionally didn't really think about Brian's thoughts when I wrote this because I was afraid I would slip something into Justin's thoughts that he couldn't know and then things wouldn't be logical and because as you said, we can't really ever know what others think unless they tell us. I'm giving everyone free hands with their own interpretations about Brian but now that I think about it I personally think Brian might have always noticed Justin or something but not really had feelings for him. About why he came up with the agreement, I think he just is that big of a slut and wants good time :D. He noticed Justin's talent and didn't want to not use the opportunity.
I'm glad you liekd this chapter. Next will be up in a moment. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2017 08:19 PM · On: Jealousy
So much more than kissing going on! lol Even as young teens, their wicked hot together!
Author's Response: I can't imagine Brian being anything else than horny with all those boy hormones :D. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2017 04:51 PM · On: Jealousy
Oh, excellent! Justin is, as I already pointed out, totally fucked up LOL I so love to read his thoughts. Jealous Justin is going to be fun! Thank you for this excellent update and eagerly waiting for the next one :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Justin totally is! Next chapter will be up in a moment. I'm glad you still like the story :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 08:24 PM · On: Daydreaming
This is so cute! Daphne is going to yell at Justin when she finds out they've been making out & he didn't tell her! lol
Author's Response: Maybe she will, maybe she doesn't. Not giving any spoilers here :). I'm happy you like this story. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 06:13 PM · On: Daydreaming
OK! I have a complaint! No Brian and Justin interaction this chapter?! WTH?! Although the Daphne & Justin interaction helps lessen my disappointment. :)
Of course I enjoyed this chapter immensely despite the obvious lack of Brian & Justin interludes. :) So looking forward to the next chapter. Be interesting to see Brian's point of view/feelings about Justin.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't get much Brian and Justin in this chapter. I promise you'll get more in the next chapter and the chapter five is all about them! I have to say this because I don't want you to get your hopes up and them come crashing down but there isn't going to be Brian's pov. We only get inside Justin's head in this story. I'm sorry! I feel like I'm disappointing you in that too. But thank you for the comment. I appreaciate it! Maybe I should make another story with Brian's pov? Actual writers do that so maybe I can give it a shot? Depending of course how readers like this story.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 03:38 PM · On: Daydreaming
Why does school have to be so boring. I didn't like it when I had to go and feel sorry for kids that go now. Now that that's out of the way, Daphne is getting to close to the truth. Brian is a slut, but it seems that keeping Justin busy is changing that.
Author's Response: I agree, why does school have to be so boring? Seems like they develope everything in this world but not education. Why do teacher always have to explain things borinly and students just sit quietly. People should use their imagination.
Brian is a major slut :D, hopefully Justin will keep him off other boys. And no I'm not giving any spoilers here :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 03:32 PM · On: Text Messages
Looks like Brian can't get enough of Justin. I'm pretty sure Daphne is going to catch on.
Author's Response: Haha, Brian is one horny boy in this story :D. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 03:28 PM · On: The Proposition
Hmm, what a proposition. I can't see this not getting HOT!
Author's Response: It is pretty clever from Brian :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 03:18 PM · On: Daydreaming
We so all need a Daphne in our life LOL !
I'm so loving this. Justin is so fucked up, it's hilarious to read about him staring at Brian in class! So well done Heidi. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I agree. We all really do need a Daphne. I wish we could just go to a store and buy an amazing friend.
I'm glad you like this. Next chapter will be up in a few minutes :). Thank you for the sweet comment <3.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2017 05:42 PM · On: Text Messages
Loving this ! Thank you Heidi :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the beginning :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2017 04:45 PM · On: The Proposition
LOL I want more :D
Author's Response: I'm happy to know that :). Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2017 03:35 AM · On: The Proposition
I love fics where Brian pursues Justin...Keep it coming...
Author's Response: Will do, at least for now :). I'm glad you liked the first chapter. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2017 11:37 PM · On: The Proposition
Oh my god! Thank you soooo much
I've never thought I would see the day that my wish for qaf fanfic would be granted.
So far I really enjoyed the 1st chapter and definitely ask for moreee. Scratch that I NEED more. Lol
Thanks Author for this particular fic. Love yaaaa
Regards,
Aribritinxoxo
Author's Response: Never? That is a shame. I often grand peoples wished with stories. I do what I can.
I'm glad to heard you enjoyed the beginning. I already put up chapter 2 so you can go read it :). Thanks for the comment. And love you too :).
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2017 10:30 PM · On: The Proposition
Loved the first chapter. I enjoy seeing them around the same age, in school together is all the better. :) Of course, Brian is already his seductive self. Such fun. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Brian's a little heartbreaker. Especially as a teenager. Second chapter is up already so you can go read it. I'm glad to know you liked the beginning. Thanks for the comment.
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