Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2019 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 15

did read it again and love it

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2019 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 15

I just finished reading this. I had thought about doing that a long time ago, and never got around to it. I love your story-telling ability. This was so good. I am going to go onto the sequel, whether that is tonight, is uncertain. I needed a break from writing tonight, so started this, and couldn't quit.

At first, I thought Michael was supplying the girls with drugs, but then thought it had to be something else, if they were both holding down jobs. What I can't understand, why he is not in jail. They had video of him supplying a drug to Justin... I would think a video of Brian's... beside him publicly admitting it... they could have gotten from Babylon. Let's not even start on the extortion charge, which carries at least a year in jail... more depending on the monetary amount.

But, it's sounds like Mysterious Marilyn (MM) is in their corner.

Awesome story,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2019 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 15

Loved it, darn Debbie and Michael

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2018 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 15

I came to re read "Justin to the Rescue" ( as I often do when in need of strong, confident Justin ;-) ) and found another great story!

I love, love, love Emmett! Anti-Michael was a big bonus of course :lol

Thank you!

I'm off to read the sequel :)

Reviewer: aem_mza (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2017 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 15

Muy buena historia! Espero la continuación!

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2017 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 15

Ah I loved this..... loved em's point of view he was so over looked in the show I think, I wonder if those dreams are the start of a m/preg story!!!! I live in hope lol well done lovely story.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2017 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 15

Amazing work guys...keep it up...keep writing ...keep sharing...i glad i get to enjoy such an great fic...thank u very much.



Author's Response:

And thank you for all your nice comments.  It's much appreciated.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 14

Mikey has just lost it...he is gone crazy and deb had gone blind..seriously ...lols...wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

If you like anti-Michael this is true. Me I love anti-Michael.  LOL.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 13

I am loving it...😊



Author's Response:

Thank you!  That makes me happy

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 12

Mel and linds have lots of explaining to do...what happened to sweet gus...i guess mikey is not that stupid ...he had everything and everyone in his control..too bad his plan is going downhill now.



Author's Response:

Michael is smarter then we think, but he has a misguided sense of right and wrong.  Now pretty much everyone knows better.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 11

Omg...wow...justin is acting soo strange..that mikey tried to seperate our lovers...he is such a menupulator..back stabber.

I cant stop myself from continuing the story ...soo i came here.

Thank u.



Author's Response:

Hahaha.  I'm grateful that you wanted to see how it ends, though maybe things don't.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2017 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

Emmette is a sweetheart. 



Author's Response:

I agree.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 15

Hi,

   I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. 

Yes, a collector like Michael may not have money (cash) but he

certainly has assets, when sold, can bring in lots and lots of

money.

   What I liked a lot is that Brian has friends, good friends.  That is

Ted and Em.  He sure needed that.  We know that Justin has

Daphne. I also thought that MM or the Mystery was a terrific

touch.  That was very clever.

   Thank you for the terrific story.  Again, it certainly enjoyed

reading it.

DavidR



Author's Response:

Thank you, DavidR, a review from you is to be treasured!

Reviewer: Suse (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2017 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 15

Good content to your story. Loved it being from Emmett's perspective. As othe s have said a sequel could be fun.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm considering it.

Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2017 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 15

I enjoyed the story. Will their another part to it.

 

 

lah



Author's Response:

Once Emmett starts talking to me again I think there will be.

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2017 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 15

Phyllis I hope by the dream that you have both the boys dreaming that maybe we wil be having another great story to be told.

I kind of like the diff POV's I could see Emmentt telling the story like he was right there w/us

 

 

~Teresa~



Author's Response:

You are so sweet, Emmett did indeed tell this story.  

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 15

Yes, what does it mean? Like Emmett, I want to know, too.

I think, sequel is inevitable for this story:)

Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Who knows.  There are so many options, would Justin be the one or Brian.  Or neither.  We'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 15

Hi, Phyllis!  So glad you reposted this one.  A lot going on in all the Liberty gang's lives; some good, some not so good.  I was sorry to hear that Justin's blindness couldn't be reversed (partial blindness), and I sure wish Michael had been prosecuted for what he had done.  Perhaps being a pariah now, however, is punishment enough, and I'm glad that Justin was able to continue to find ways to express his artistic talent and creativity.

As for the two women, good riddance, I say.  I'm sure B and J have been - and will continue to be - much better parents than Mel and Linds or Michael ever were, and I applaud Gus for being so protective of his younger sibling. 

And that last paragraph!  Are we going to see a new story coming? ;)

Thanks again for posting this on MW, and for being our #1 reviewer of all time!  I'm sure I speak for all the admins when I tell you how thankful we are for your ongoing support.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Well we couldn't have a perfect ending.  Life rarely is perfact, but Justin is making it work and even doing things he would never have thought he could do and making money from it.  I'm sorry that Mel and Lindsay got the short end of the stick, but they were always at odds with each other and Brian.  Reviewing is excellant practice for writing and something I enjoy doing.  We do have so many writers lately that keeping up is sometimes difficult.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love the story from Emmett. I want a sequel for Brian and Justin's dreams at the end. I enjoyed this story Thank you!

Author's Response:

And thank you!  I'll see what I can do about the sequel.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 15

Wow that chapter covered a whole lot of time and events. Loved it all worked out thank you

Author's Response:

At least you got closure.  Thanks to my betas it did indeed worked out.

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooh, Emmett's POV, I liked it.

Off to read the next one:)

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 15

There needs to be a sequel.

Brian and Justin have a child together? One or both girls show up to haunt them? Michael winds up in jail?  Daphne and Justin's Rage book becomes a best seller and made into a movie?  Ben and Hunter come back to visit along with Ben's new husband? And of course the guys found a new place to eat and hangout.



Author's Response:

Love all those ideas and just might incorporate them into a sequel.  

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 15

I really enjoyed Emmet jumbled thoughts - its so like him. Even so everything was tied up nicely. Congratulations from MM and baby dreams - sounds like an unexpected baby dropping into their lives - definitely want to read about that...hint...hint...



Author's Response:

It's funny but Emmett kept talking to me as I wrote.  Thank goodness for the two beta's that were nice enought to help me.  I'd been reading so many mpreg stories lately that I think that bled into this one.  lol.  

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 15

I love the story from Em's point of view. He wrapped up a lot of loose ends nicely. I'm intrigued by Brian and Justin's dreams at the end. I enjoyed this story very much and would love to see a sequel. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Emmett started this story and it was only fair that he ended it.  You're the second one asking for a sequel so I'll see what I can do.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 15

Sorry to see the story end but loved this last chapter which wrapped up alot of the loose ends.  Would be great to see a sequel appear one of these days.  Bill



Author's Response:

Well now that you mention it, I have an idea for a sequel.  "To Have and To Hold" wink wink.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 14

Poor Ben, I guess his eyes are open now and what a shit his husband is.  Bran needs to find a gypsy and get the curse removed!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 15

wasn't expecting it to end so soon- nice ending-  thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Sorry, but it could have gone on forever if I hadn't ended it.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2017 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 13

Do you think Mikey & Deb will ever get a clue?  Poor Justin, Mikey could be in serious trouble with Brian if it turns out he is reposible for Justin's vision loss.  There is a lot of stuff going on in your story, lots of questions but I guess we have to wait for some answers.  Bill



Author's Response:

You could tell Mikey and Deb straight out what they are doing wrong and they won't believe you.  I know there is a lot going on here, but when I started this story I knew where I was going then halfway through it veried off course.  Hopefully all questions will be answered, but don't count on it.  LOL.  

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2017 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 14

Omg I could have read this story all day.

Can't wait to find out where all the money Brian sent to the girls went. Did Michael have it put in a private account for only he could use? Wouldn't put it past him. Where were the girls when the kids were taken? 

When Michael finds out that Brian and Justin know all, how is he going to back pedal his way out? 

Also if he and Justin are still working on Rage, what happened to Justin's part of the money?  Good old Mikey keep that too?

So looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

You will soon have the answers to most of your questions.  Michael will have more troubles from other quarters than Brian and Justin.  Without Justin to draw Rage, I think the comic is Kaput, Michael screwed himself over on that one.  But the new Rage will outdo the comic and Mikey gets nothing.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2017 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 14

Well, I'd say Mikey's in a heap of trouble - ha!  He HAS been quite busy, hasn't he?  So deluded.

I am loving this take-charge Emmett, BTW!  And I always love a hurt/comfort fic, along with some romance, so you have all the makings of an amazing story. So glad you continued this. I enjoyed it the first time around, and even more now. Thank you for posting.  I'm always looking forward to each instalment.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

There are some great changes in the final chapter thanks to my betas.  I love a take-charge Emmett too.  

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 14

well the truth is starting to come out-  again- someone, anyone, needs to kick Mickey to the curb-  glad that Brian and Justin have Emmett and Ted on their side-  



Author's Response:

Ted and Emmett aren't the only ones on Brian's side as you will find out.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 14

Open your eyes, Ben!  You are married to a fool.



Author's Response:

Which makes Ben a fool, but he does wise up in the end.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

I think if Justin & Daphne run into Michael...they'll kill him. lol Poor Brian, all he wanted to do was get the kids & get home but...oy vey! What is Ben going to do? 



Author's Response:

You will find out all in the Final Chapter.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 14

Poor Brian he did not need a broken leg in addition to the cares with the girls; I'm happy for Justin, he sees! Michael seems to have done terrible things.I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Yes a broken leg is not good, but unfortunately Justin's vision comes and goes.  Michael has indeed done terrible things.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 14

Wow poor Brian a broken leg that is going to make things even harder

Author's Response:

True, but he won't let something like that get him down.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 12

The plot thickens. What did they do with all the money?  Hope Gus trusts Emmett.  Bill



Author's Response:

Now that was the question and you'll find out later.  Gus doesn't trust easily but facts don't lie, unlike his moms and Uncle Mikey.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow, Justin seems to be in lots of trouble.  Mikey's "friendship" strikes again!!!  With friends like him who needs enemies.  Bill

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 10

Deb & Mikey need help, they are clueless & useless.  Love Emmett in your story!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2017 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 14

Brian is relly having the worst time of it. At least Ted is there taking care of things.  And Emmett is taking care of everything in the Pitts. Two excellent friends to have. Seems like Ben is finally waking up to the real Michael and as for Michael and Deb - may the chips fall where they deserve to fall. Soooo looking forward to that.



Author's Response:

Yes, but the title does give us hope that with Ted and Emmett's help things will get better.  The chips will eventually fall and I hope you enjoy how they did.

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 13

I'm so sad that Justin has lost his eyesight! I really hope that it is indeed an allergic reaction and they find a cure. As for Michael, sigh, what can I say? They need to prove he drugged both Brian and Justin, prosecute him and put him behind bars and throw away the key. Seriously, he does not deserve to walk free among decent people. And Ben, good grief! What is wrong with him that he can't see what his husband is doing?Thank you for the update and looking forward to the next.



Author's Response:

Wouldn't it be nice if they could do all that and more to Michael.  I think in the end Ben finally saw his husband for what he was.  Hope you like the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 13

Michael has GOT to prosecuted by the law! This is NOT legal...holy shit! Please say that Justin's eyes can be fixed?



Author's Response:

I'm not a lawyer, but guilty people get off all the time.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 13

I sure hope it is just an allergy.  I want Justin to get his sight back and I want Mickey to pay!



Author's Response:

So do I.  But he might not for better or worse .

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 13

Omg I do hope they do find out if Justin being drugged is the cause of his blindness

Author's Response:

You'll have to wait to see.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 13

I want to slap Deb and kick Michael in the balls - anything that causes a great deal of pain. It's a sick mind when a person thinks it's okay to drug and allow a person to be raped and then think he was justified. Now to sort out Gus. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Wow.  That's an idea!  Gus for better or worse is stuck with Brian, Justin, Ted and Emmett now.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 13

so glad that Gus is going to be back with Brian-  it will be a hard raod since the girls have brainwashed him into thinking he didn't care-  as for Micheal-  ugh-  he shoud jsut be left in the cold without a blanket and far from civilization-  let him freeze/ starve- m whatever-  all he htinks about is himself-  not anyone - the world does not revolve around Michael but he sure thinks it does



Author's Response:

Gus is smart - give him facts and he'll come through with the right conclusion.  You have Michael pegged that's for sure.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2017 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 13

Hi, Phyllis! I am loving all the twists and turns to this story! I'm so happy you decided to expand it. I hope they can figure out what's wrong with Justin, and resolve his blindness issue, and that Brian and Gus can work things out.

Loving the take charge Em. As for Michael...grrrr. I hope Ben wises up about him.

Thanks for posting this story! I look forward to each update.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Twists and turns are what this story is about.  But like in life nothing ever gets resolved to everyone's satisfaction.  Brian loves his son and has a spot in his heart for his sister.  

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 12

So many questions going through my mind here.  Who kept B and J separated?  (although I have a strong suspicion).  And the two women are unbelievable.  Jenny seems like some orphan waif, while Gus has turned into a brat, thanks to his moms.

I'm so relieved that Brian has such a good friend in Emmett.  He's the perfect person to help right so many wrongs that are occurring. 

I'm hopeful that B and J will work out their health problems, but I'm glad they can weather them together. 

Really enjoying this story, Phyllis! Thank you for posting on here.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Having cancer can take a lot out of you and you see what's important.  Like Justin and the kids.  Having Emmett to help is bonus.

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 12

OMG what is going on with the girls? What have they done with the money? And Michael, I guess I'm not surprised that he's responsible for this mess although I think Mel has a hand in this some of this. Emmett is a wonderful friend. I'm sad that Brian is sick again and Justin is losing his sight. Nice job, looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Without Brian's money to keep them in the style they were accustomed I guess things went down hill.  

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

Emmett is a really good friend I love Emmett ! What happen to the girls ? Is Michael doing something wrong ?

Author's Response:

The girls just disappeared. Might have tried to get away from Mikey.  lol.  

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

Knowing Michael is responsible for all this just infuriates me! Those poor kids!



Author's Response:

They've had it tough.  If only Brian had known!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 12

everything is falling apart, but hopefully Brian's friends have finally started realizing he is not the person they thought ( or that Michael portrayed)-  lets hope they all really around and kick mikey to the curb and find their way to happiness



Author's Response:

Mikey's BF status is starting to corrode.  Teddy and Emmett are friends worth having.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2017 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 12

Wow interesting turn of events what the hell are the girls doing with all the money? Omg Brian will go nuts when he finds out

Author's Response:

Sadly it will take an investigation to find out where the money went.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 11

It's sad to see Justin so broken but at least they have found each other again and Brian needs Justin as much as Justin needs Brian. Michael has a lot to answer for. Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Yes it is sad.  Justin missed Brian so much.  But Justin has never been meek so who knows what will happen.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2017 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 11

eek-  you evil woman-  leaving us poor readers on such a clif hanger-  nice that Brian found Justin-  now he realizes that Mikey ( slime ball that he is) has kept Justin away-  kept them apart-  Not a Mikey lover ever-  post soon-  



Author's Response:

Thank you.  A higher honor I've never had.  (bg)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh dear Justin has really been struggling and dam Mikey has been very busy meddling in his best'friends life

Author's Response:

Hint!  Mikey has been doing more than that!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 11

It was upsetting to read how far Justin has deteriorated in NYC.  So happy Brian is there to help him.  Mike's is responsible for all of the deceit?



Author's Response:

Have you been checking my hard drive?  We'll learn soon enough why Justin is in such bad shape.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 11

Omg I am soooooo pissed! I know Michael is behind it all but could he possibly be giving Justin some sort of medication that is making him ill too? Of course ANYTHING is possible with Michael at the helm. Jesus! Brian is going to go ballistic! More more...please we need more! Fabulous work! 



Author's Response:

It would be nice if Brian was in shape to go ballistic.  But you'll find out more in later chapters.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm sad poor Justin , he was very alone in NY ! I hope Brian can do something for him and He can faced Michael for what he did and fix all with Justin ! Thank you for the update I like this story

Author's Response:

I thank you for the wonderful review.  We hope Brian can indeed to something for his Sunshine.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 10

my heart hurts for Brian-  still loving Emmett and Ted and Cynthia-  wish Michael and mom would just be thrown in jail or otherwise permanently disposed of where no one could find the bodies



Author's Response:

They get theirs in the end.  My heart hurt for Brian too.  If he hadn't spent so much on making the firehouse his home, I think he'd try to find another place to live.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love your betas-  sometimes we all need a little help in turning a story -  love that the bouncer is straight and everyone is protective of Brian



Author's Response:

Yes, finding such wonderful betas has been a godsent.  They help with my tenses and have given so much wonderful suggestions.   Making this story so much better!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

excellent story-  has me on the edge of my chair-  glad I waited until you had several chapters written-  can't stop now



Author's Response:

Thank you.  And the drama doesn't stop here.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 10

Of course Ted & Emmett should read Deb & Michael the riot act! And MAKE Michael tell them how he knew how to get in touch with Justin. Did Justin give Brian his personal info, I don't remember...



Author's Response:

Sadly thanks to Michael Justin was misinformed about a lot of things.

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 10

At the housewarming Debbie was acting like Shrek and mikey gave a excellent imitation of what uncouth stood for. Debbie is always like a big Bull in a china shop and what can I say..mikey is an ass. If I were Brian I would bar them from his work and have a restraining order  from his house. My God he even sent Deb and outfit and she couldn't behave for a few hours, knowing it wasn't a family gathering, it was clients and important professional people in his business world. The thing is if he was fucking Justin it was her or mikey's business. If Ted and Em and Brian stayed away from the diner and Woody's and Babylon may those two fucktards would get a clue, although I would love for Em to go off on them and tell how they acted was inappropriate. 



Author's Response:

I had fun writing those parts.  In my head Emmett gave Deb a copy of the Security tape but I couldn't decide if she learned anything from it.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oh I am so wanting to hear how the boys are managing and if Justin does know everything

Author's Response:

I'm hoping that my beta's can help make sense of those chapters.  lol.  

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2017 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 10

Still enjoying the re-read...



Author's Response:

Thank you.  

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great how Brian thanked Em with the new clothes, that is the Brian way - do something don't say something.  Have to wonder where Justin has been and what role Mikey played in that??!??  Leave it to Deb & Mikey to be cleless & classless enough to ruin the party.  Sorry it took me so long to read & review this chapter.  Bill



Author's Response:

That's okay.  I'm just glad you did.  Yes what did Mikey do?  And how will Brian manage to live in a house where the wonderful feeling he had have been ruined.  Thanks, Bill, hearing from you means a lot.

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 9

In the qaf series after season one I found I really disliked Linz and mikey. Mikey was simple his character was to child like and he was as dumb as a stick also the actor who played him Hal Sparks I firmly dislike, Linz was suposed to be a dear friend to Brian and was constantly pitting Mel and Brian against each other so she could have both people hating each other and still have both. By season two I saw to me Debbie being hateful to Brian, she was classless, bossy, crude, and intrusive . Demanding people to do what she expected of them, she tried to run everyones life. She was loud and only saw her way of doing things, but what I hated the most was hitting Brian she often said these were love taps but she knew how his father had hit him since he was a tottler she should have known better .



Author's Response:

Exactly.  That's the way I saw it too.  

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 8

It's just like Debbie to intrude and boss everyone and mikey being in the way and doing nothing



Author's Response:

I was hoping people would see it that way!

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

Deb is getting to be as stupid as her son, and neither of them have Brian's interest at heart, Jenn still cares about Brian and he trusts her.



Author's Response:

Yes! Isn't that nice?

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

 I loved the way Ted and  worked together at Woody's to get mikey off of Brian's back and finding a way out of Brian being dragged to Babylon. I feel sad for Ben he deserves a better person who loves just him not that moron mikey 



Author's Response:

Yes.  I agree.  One day Ben will wise up... maybe.

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 5

It would take Em, Ted, and Cynthia to keep mikey at bay, but at least his true friends cared enough to protect him.



Author's Response:

And try as they might Mikey keeps coming back.  Thank you for all the neat reviews.

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 4

Mikey has to have only one brain cell left and it's on life support! How could anyone treat someone like that, Brian has cancer again, his son is in a different country, the love of his life is in New York and if Mikey is his best friend God help him.



Author's Response:

Yes!  It is hard to understand isn't it.

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 3

Em is good at taking care of people he cares about, he often took are of Justin and he was close to Ted he's the ideal best friend



Author's Response:

And that's why I decided to make him closer to Brian.

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 2

It seems mikey drugged Brian but why his so called best friend if he went home he would have died in the fire, mikey is one sick son of a bitch



Author's Response:

Unfortunately Mikey doesn't think his actions through.

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2017 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

Mikey wants to remain fourteen, but he still acts like a two year old which his mother is fine with for some odd reason.



Author's Response:

Sadly true.  Even though Ben for some reason doesn't see it.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2017 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 9

Michael & Deb are just too much! They have no social couth at all...if I were Brian, it would be so long assholes! 



Author's Response:

And yet he can't seem to ever do that.  

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

Brian is very lucky he has Emmett and Ted these days

Author's Response:

They've become the friends that Mikey thinks he is.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

Nice that Deb showed up to help clean.  Nice that Brian has a project to occupy him.  Bill



Author's Response:

It was nice, but then she got to bossing people around.  LOL.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 7

Seems like a perfect new home for Brian.  Bill



Author's Response:

I'm hoping so.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

Some best Friend????  Em sure is keeping an eye on Mikey and Ted is helping out.  Enjoying the story a lot.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Yep, it looks like Mikey is 'best friend' in name only.  Sadly.  Glad you're enjoying this.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 8

All the guys coming to help cleanup shows how much Brian is respected.  Pity Debbie spoiled that and I can't imagine Michael being very good at doing any real work. Love Emmett's relationship with Brian.



Author's Response:

Thank you for this.  That's exactly what I was trying to show.  Love ya.  

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great that Brian realizes who his real friends are, the ones who are interested in actually helping him.  Bill



Author's Response:

Yeppers.  Times have been tough and things could get worse!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

Mikey is a fool, but we knew that.  Brian kind fo saved himself from the charges with his up to date security cameras.  Bill



Author's Response:

No thanks to Mikey.  I'm on a Mikey's bad streak, but I'm hoping to make it humorous.  After all just how bad can he get?

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 3

Em is being a great friend to Brian, even giving him the clothes off his back - sort of.  Interesting take on the story with canon characters acting slightly differently than we expect.  Bill



Author's Response:

I couldn't help it.  I wanted Em to be a better friend than I felt Mikey was.  Thanks, Bill!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

Mikey never considers his actions.  Thankfully Ted & Em took care of Brian, who know what might have happened without them.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hey, Bill!  Ted and Em are going to have Brian's back.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2017 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

It's a mystery all right!!! Still glad to see MM (Mysterious Maryilyn) having a hand in the boys life.  Michael is still an idiot and Deb needs to get a clue - of course neither of them probably will...



Author's Response:

You could be right.  or not... lol.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2017 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

Deb & Michael are such idiots! They don't think, they feel like their way is best...so self-absorbed! UGH! Yes Emmett! He's the best! Take control and do what's right honey!



Author's Response:

I love Emmett!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2017 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 6

Love the way Brian is sitting back and watching but he needs to get proactive before his 'best frieeeeeeeed kills him

Author's Response:

He's got too much on his mind to do anything about Mikey and Deb, so he's letting Emmett and Ted blockade them.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2017 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

Brian is starting to evaluate his friends and their loyalty

Author's Response:

How true.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2017 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 4

Still enjoying the re-read....And looking forward to Michael getting what he deserves.



Author's Response:

Wait till you read the next chapters.  Major rewrites that I hope you'll enjoy.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2017 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

Thank God for the security cameras!  Michael...Grrr....Ben is too good for him.  I would dump him for someone better!  And I think Emmett should find another place to eat, since Michael apparently doesn't have to work for a living!  I'd like to slap Michael myself!

All caught up now with my reading on this one! I'll be eagerly looking forward to the rest, especially Justin's appearance.  I only hope that Brian tells him everything that is going on.

Thanks for this very entertaining story, Phyllis!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank God for Emmett.  Don't worry Ben will finally wise up, but I don't want to spoil it.  If Emmett found some place new to eat that would cut into my story ideas!  Thank you for the lovely reviews.  

 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2017 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ha!  Loved that last line about the underwear!  Brian and Emmett "batchin'" it together - love it.  And nice touch, having Emmett with an Armani suit.  Of course, I wouldn't have expected it to be subdued, but Brian seemed to make it work. :) 

I'm really enjoying the camaraderie between the two in this story.  Onto the next chapter!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I couldn't help it.  Does saying the devil made me do it help?

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2017 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hi, Phyllis! Love how Emmett and Ted both take care of Brian in this chapter.  And as clingy as Michael is, surely he wouldn't have wanted Brian to perish in the fire?  He has some serious mental issues here!  Glad I get to reread this intriguing story! Thanks for posting the revised chapters so quickly. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

No, but you have to admit he doesn't really think with his head.  He actually thought Brian gave him the slip.  He got back at Brian though.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love the line, 'Brian unclothed was more than Emmett could handle' lol



Author's Response:

Well, Emmett is only human.  : )

 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2017 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

Glad to see that this is back up.  Looking forward to re-reading. 



Author's Response:

It will probably read better than last time.  I never realized how my tenses got so mixed up.  Lol.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2017 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Happy to see this story's return.  Mikey clueless, some things never change.  Nice to hear from Emmett, who was flamboyant but always sensible.  Looking forward to more.  Bill



Author's Response:

Happy I am to see your review.  Bill, hearing from you makes my day.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Glad to see you returned so quickly hun! Great job! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So far this is going good and I see changes coming.  But it will be a surprise.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nice to see you are back from the story!

Author's Response:

Just when you think a story is done, you find it isn't.  : )

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interstesting start...wow...looking forward to more..thank ufor posting..b25;



Author's Response:

Thank you.  That was so nice of you to say.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Glad to see this reposted so quickly, Phyllis! A lot of readers were anxious to read it. :)  I do love seeing this from Emmett's POV, and have always loved his character. TBH, I'm not sure exactly what the changes were, but it seems like you might have elaborated more on Brian's reveal about his cancer returning, as well as more about how his business was deteriorating, and 'fleshed out' some other details a little more.  But however you changed it, I'm sure I'm going to enjoy it again the second time around! Thanks for posting the first chapter again so soon.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I won't be able to post as quickly this time.  One of the reason's I pulled it was because people felt that it was lacking.  It appears it still is. <sigh>

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