Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2017 04:43 PM · On: And the long awaited chapter you've all been waiting for!!!

Please do not keep use waiting too long for the update. 

When I discovered the story, I binged the first in the series and streight through to the next.  You have made the character very believable.  I especially loved the scenes with the drunk/high Justin.

This new story line is wonderful. I can't wait to see where you take us next.

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2017 02:42 PM · On: I blame Justin for turning me into this happy Sap. Freaken Sunshine.

I love the story but I have one small suggestion to make reading a little easier.

Place a line with symbols (example: ...... **** ^^^^^^^^^ ) to denote a leap of time or place. 

Example:  one sentence I read:

"Well if mom didn't then no one was. Because we know crabby pants over here doesn't like birthdays." Molly mocked Brian. Justin laughed at as Brian glared at her."

The next sentence is:

"What are you doing?" Brian asked as Justin brought some blankets into their room."

It take a few seconds for the reader to figure out where we are. I

 

Reviewer: tataniastorm (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2017 09:15 AM · On: And the long awaited chapter you've all been waiting for!!!

Ok I waited as long as I can to start this I usuallywaittill it is close to done but as there havebeen updates I went ahead andread these 11chapters. And I loved them . Now I have tourtued myself as I have towait forupdatesthis is why I like to wait for abit. why do I do this to myself. Gahhhh. Thank you forsharing your hard work with us. Till later please take care.

Reviewer: patou235vie (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 05:11 PM · On: And the long awaited chapter you've all been waiting for!!!

Merci pour la suite, j'étais contente puisque j'attendais avec impatience de voir ce qui allait arriver, et bien c'est magnifique.
Il faut que Brian fasse de son mieux, pour aider Justin et appelle son ami Alex psy, qui l'a aidé après son agression de plus Craig Taylor est un bâtard, un vrai connard et homophobe, et plus un criminel j'espère qu'il a bon avocat.Parce que la famille de sa femme ne va pas le pardonner pour son acte.Teresa et Sawyer doit être présent pour les deux, et oublier leurs querelles amoureuse et soit des parents présent.
J'attends la suite avec impatience.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2017 12:20 PM · On: Just a Honeymoon is for Amateurs. I Don't Do Anything That Simple

Hi Sammy I hope all is well I am eagerly waiting your next chapters, no pressure lol Chris

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2017 11:23 PM · On: Just a Honeymoon is for Amateurs. I Don't Do Anything That Simple

I read Can I Come Back Home To You?  over on Fanfiction when I saw you brought it here I had to read it again.  Then the sequel, This is wonderful.  I am so in love with this story.  I hate that they came after Justin for attacking Craig.  I hope we find out soon where you are going to take the boys.  They have been through so much.  It is time for them to stop getting hurt and having issues with Craig.  Thanks for sharing your talent.

Dee Dee

Reviewer: Barbara Cummins (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2017 01:45 AM · On: And the long awaited chapter you've all been waiting for!!!

Wow this is heartbreaking, how will Justin survive all his guilt.  I can't wait to see what Brian will do to help Justin heal from all the trauma.  Very good story.  Thank you for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2017 02:42 AM · On: And the long awaited chapter you've all been waiting for!!!

OMG! Thank you for FINALLY giving me a reason to jump up and down !!!!!!!! OMG!!!! lol, now I want the next chapter !!!lol

but seriously, WTF!! Craig pressing charges!!!!I hope he gets what's coming to him in Prison Big Time!!!!!
I think Justin just needs to talk to a shrink about all this, he's never really dealt with all that hurt and pain from his past, I can't imagine coping and dealing with a Parent that hates u so much they want to see u dead! That's some bat crazy shit!!! He's needs to realize it's not him it's all on his crazy father and yes he is Crazy!!!!im soooooo glad Brian is there for him.

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