Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2019 04:42 PM · On: Epilogue
love it
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2018 12:58 AM · On: St. Joan
Good chapter. LIke the twist at the end.
Small typo:
"... with his costumers more than satisfied with the result..." Should be ".... with his customers more than satisfied with the result..."
"...skin pale a if she had seen a ghost." should be "... skin pale as if she had seen a ghost."
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2018 10:11 AM · On: Sour Tears and Kind Words
Your story was finished in principle no? What makes you add chapters? It's a very beautiful story and I'll read everything you add. Their life in New York maybe?
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 08:04 PM · On: Why always me?
OK I just caught up. Wow enjoying how you are making sure that everything is going in ALL the boys favor😆
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 04:24 PM · On: Shocking news- Part Two
Oh wow, didn't see that coming. This story is just getting better.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 12:11 AM · On: Shocking news- Part One
Oh this is getting so good. Thanks for the great writing.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 04:12 AM · On: St. Joan
Very good. Glad Brian stood up to Joan. And, it is nice to have a story where Lindsay is not totally nuts.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 11:01 PM · On: The Storm- Part Three
Good chapter throwing in he TV show bit. Ha Ha.
Reviewer: nena (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2018 01:28 PM · On: Why always me?
Thank you for this update but..... honey with this ending you really have to post asap!!!!!
Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2017 11:51 AM · On: Why always me?
Now that you finished What If....by the way- loooooved it! Will you update this story.....please, need to see where you take us. Thanks, Erin
Reviewer: Tequila Sunrise (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2017 02:01 AM · On: Why always me?
I love this story. But what a way to end that chapter. Please update really really soon. We need are Brian and Justin fix.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 02:56 PM · On: Mamma Mia!
Justin doesn't know but things are heading just the way they should.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 02:56 PM · On: Bang, bang, bang
Having Mel on Brian's side is so strange. But Good. Maybe this time around things will be better.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 03:03 AM · On: Bang, bang, bang
Go Mel...I absolutely loved what Mel had to say. Poor Lindsay - NOT... Hopefully Lindsay will get the help she needs to straighten out her belief of entitlement. At least Brian and Mel are on the right track. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2017 01:35 AM · On: Bang, bang, bang
WOW !!Go MEL like how you had Mel really listen and take action to what Brian had to say to her. Love this story
Thanks for the update :)
~Teresa~
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 01:10 AM · On: One step closer to you and I
I am really enjoying this story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment.
Author's Response: I'm in middle of my finals and writing another B&J story, I think I'm doing quite well with my speed. Anyways, I'll try my best. Thanks for the support!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 12:29 AM · On: One step closer to you and I
Love how this story is going and can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 12:27 AM · On: One step closer to you and I
I am really enjoying this story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2017 02:59 PM · On: My Sunshine
Oh Ted, what is wrong with you? Blinded by false love. Hurry and get Blake here.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2017 02:58 PM · On: A very long due conversations
He's trying so hard to change the past.
Seems like Mel is taking his advice, hope it works.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2017 02:36 PM · On: One step closer to my happiness
Hope things don't get screwed for meeting Justin earlier than he should. It should be fun to see Brian behaving himself when all he wants is Justin un his arms.
Justin will win Hunter over.
Here's what I don't understand. When Michael and Ben found Hunter, he was 15 -16. If Brian when back to 1999 then Hunter would be 10 or 11. How old do you have him in this story that he needs daycare?
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2017 08:02 AM · On: Hunter is back
Great news for both Hunter and Brian. I'm also glad that Em is there. Brian will need someone he can trust.
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2017 05:14 AM · On: My Sunshine
I like your introduction of Justin. Having him start a connection with Hunter before even meeting Brian is great!
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2017 02:30 AM · On: My Sunshine
Great update. Things are slowly getting on the right track - I do hope you write the confrontation Mel has with Linsday - Lindsay is not going to like that at all but she deserves it - you don't lie to your partner, especially about money owed. Hopefully when Ted starts working with Brian he'll realize all the things Emmett said. And Justin - so sweet and compassionate. Looking forward to more
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2017 01:01 AM · On: My Sunshine
Loving this story. Especially how Brian introduces Mel to Hunter giving her a new view of him. Ted got a much needed talking to from Emmett which didn't help yet. Justin met Hunter! Not bad for a chapter.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2017 06:28 AM · On: A very long due conversations
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Justin turns up to work. I definitely can't wait to see Michael in jail. And Brian did well with Mel. It gives her something to think about and put everything into perspective which can only help their relationship. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2017 07:26 PM · On: Hunter is back
Another typo:
"They still will demand you to take him to a physiologist once every week.. Should be "
They still will demand you to take him to a psychologist once every week..."
A physiologist is a healthcare professional who is trained to work with patients with chronic diseases where exercise training has been shown to be of therapeutic benefit
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2017 06:47 PM · On: Explanations
FYI: Rereading the story and found a typo:
"You were supposed to buy him a state.... " should be "
You were supposed to buy him estate...."
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2017 06:15 PM · On: A very long due conversations
The character of Mel could be very perceptive. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update. Perhaps Justin will 'meet' Brian in the next chapter???
Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2017 07:20 PM · On: One step closer to my happiness
Fun to read - I'm looking foreward for more : -) Thank you for sharing!
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2017 04:18 PM · On: One step closer to my happiness
Nice twist - Brian will get to meet Justin early and in a different circumstance - which come to think of - could cause some problems as Brian would be his boss - I'm curious to see how that works out.... Debbie and Michael - shaking my head here - they seriously need to get over themselves. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2017 02:48 PM · On: One step closer to my happiness
I love the interaction you have been Brian and Vic. It was always written as a special relationship. I also like how you are introducing Justin. Since Babylon is gone, there would have been no reason to stand under that lamppost...
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2017 03:21 PM · On: Hunter is back
I love that you have Emmett knowing the 'truth'.
Quick question: when you wrote about James/Hunter needed to see a "physiologist" did you mean a psychologist? A physiologist studies the mechanisms that work to keep the human body alive and functioning.
Author's Response: Sorry, I didn't even notice the mistake. Thank you, I'll correct it later.
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2017 03:03 PM · On: Explanations
Just discovered your story and really enjoying it.
FYI: small typo: "You were supposed to buy him a state.." should be "
You were supposed to buy him an estate...."
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2017 06:43 AM · On: Hunter is back
My heart goes out for Hunter but now he's in a safe place. Definitely good to see Emmett knows what's going on - Brian is going to need a strong ally. Like what Emmett had to say about the gang especially Debbie and Michael - as they say 'hindsight is 20/20) Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2017 06:11 AM · On: For starting over
Brian has a plan and purpose and it all sounds good. It's going to shock everyone - mostly Michael and I'm definitely looking forward to reading the conversation Brian has with Mel. I always liked Mel but thought that Lindsay caused a lot of problems. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2017 01:39 AM · On: For starting over
Will there be more?
Author's Response: Of course!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2017 09:51 PM · On: For starting over
Knowing how things could turn out if he's not careful, I think Brian is going to have a hard time dealing with Michael. This is going to be very interesting.
Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2017 11:34 AM · On: For starting over
Now Brian can get Michael out of his life before it's too late, or get him professional help before it's too late. Either way, Brian can deal with him this time with eyes wide open.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2017 05:33 AM · On: For starting over
Michael is a bigger ass than I gave him credit for if he thought Brian would just jump at the chance to be with him. He never did before Justin came into his life, why would he do so afterwards?
As for buying another loft is a great idea. The Britin estate can wait five years.
Keeping Hunter out of Michael's clutches is good too.
That Marty saw Brian as becoming a great ad-man says a lot about the faith Marty had for him.
How could Debbie blame for the shit Michael pulled on Hunter and Ben? The psych ward is too good for him.
Loving this story. Let's hope things go smoothly with Lindsay and Mel about Gus.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2017 05:21 AM · On: For starting over
No!No!No! I refused to believe the kid is Brian's!!!! Say it ain't so!!!!Please let me get this bad taste out of my mouth or I'm gna have to cute out my tongue!!!!! Pleaseeeeeeee , I dnt wannnaaaaaa*****crying whining voice saying that****
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2017 12:35 AM · On: Explanations
I'm in love with this already. Really want daily updates.
What the fuck did Michael do that caused Justin to die? Whatever it was, Brian won't forget. Michael's up shit's creek now.
Second chance, maybe he can buy out Ryder before Vance gets the chance to. Would be nice.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 06:50 AM · On: Explanations
Yes now I know for sure, I'm hooked. Thanks.
* hugs *
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 05:39 AM · On: Explanations
Finally catching up. This is great - who doesn't love a do-over, reset story type story???? I know I love them. A lot of unanswered questions I'm looking forward to having answered - and definitely looking forward to Brian dealing with Michael. Can't wait....
Reviewer: Dark_Oreo27 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 03:10 AM · On: Explanations
Omg I am loving this already and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 02:50 AM · On: Explanations
Love this type of story. Especially when you have Mysterious Marilyn in the mix. So many questions which I'm hoping future chapters have answers for.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 02:49 AM · On: Why always me?
I don't understand. I could have thought I left a review on this. It's looking to be good and I can't wait for future chapters.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2017 02:12 AM · On: Explanations
This sounds very interesting. but also very confussing, I am looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't make it take to long/
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 01:50 AM · On: Explanations
what an intense chapter! Looks like Brian is getting a second chance. I love me some Mysterious Marilyn.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2017 10:25 PM · On: Why always me?
Poor Brian. Want the next chapter asap, think I'm hooked.
* hugs *
Reviewer: Justme (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2017 08:03 AM · On: Why always me?
I'm hooked. Great start.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2017 12:33 AM · On: Why always me?
Hmm...very interesting beginning! I'm intrigued. Sounds kind of "It's A Wonderful Life-ish." I wonder if it will wind up being a dream, or if he will go back in time, etc.
I want to know more! And find out where Brian goes next. Looking forward to reading the rest of this. ~Kim
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2017 12:31 AM · On: Why always me?
Wow! What a cliffie here.
:)
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