Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For A Precious Secret
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 11:06 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

good one

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2019 04:44 PM · On: Blood

Loved this ... what a pair of bitch’s Michael and Lindsey were, really hope you come back and maybe do a sequel.......

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2018 07:59 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Love it, hope there will be an update

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 10:11 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Such a preety name..fabulous story...go for the sequel later...i should mention the banner too..it is absolutly gorgeous..loved it.thank you for the superb story.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 08:45 AM · On: Causes Of Stress

What a loser mikey is . ..linds is a bitch..finaly everyone can also see that.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 08:29 AM · On: Dinner at Deb's

What now...??? is the baby ready to come out.?

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 08:23 AM · On: Telling

Omg..i cried..fuck..what a dramatic chapter.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 08:13 AM · On: Working It Out

I love you threeeee...wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 06:20 AM · On: Just Done

Damn..justin is pissed..hurt and in pain..brian needs to do lots of groveling for his baby to forgive him.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 05:40 AM · On: Brian's Reaction

Omg...that was terrible...heartbreaking chapter.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 05:32 AM · On: A Secret...Revealed

So romantic..wow.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 05:05 AM · On: A Burn at the GLC

Aww...that made me a emotional wreck..so sad.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 04:59 AM · On: Proof Positive

Finally...congrats justin.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 04:55 AM · On: No???

Excellent story

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 04:39 AM · On: Found Out

Grow a pair kinney ...ask him..dammit.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 04:35 AM · On: Campaigns

Superb going..like it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 04:01 AM · On: Suspicions

Wow...intense.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 03:58 AM · On: Fired

Fucking HOT

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 03:52 AM · On: Reunification

Awesome start..excited to read the rest.

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2017 08:09 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Such a good story , wish there was more

 

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2017 12:56 PM · On: Opening The Line

You know you're breaking my heart here... I know Brian has fucked up big time, but he's also trying so hard to prove to Justin how much he loves him...

Hugs Kathleen 💟

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2015 12:46 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Wonderful story, very emotional and heartbreaking at times. I hope to find a sequel to this story as I'm nowhere near ready to say goodbye to this B&J universe.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2015 03:34 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

What an amazing and emotional story, I don't want this to be the end so I'm going to look for a sequel with fingers firmly crossed.

Reviewer: khanspunk (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2014 09:10 AM · On: A Secret...Revealed

the bolded sentences make it extremely dificult to read

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2014 10:50 AM · On: Reunification

I very much enjoyed the story.  But, the ending left me feeling like I'd just read a WIP (and I NEVER read WIPs).  Is it possible I missed a chapter after Brian and Jennifer head off to see Justin?

As I said, it was a very good story,but I'm a little confused .. .

Reviewer: chenee1988 (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2013 11:38 AM · On: Causes Of Stress

oh my this story is amazing! the writing is great and the scenes are priceless and totally qaf worthy. is it just me who enjoys jen just slappin bitches left and right(lmao) it's always the quite,lady-like ones

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 06:50 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Im so happy with the ending and I loved the whole story alot!!! ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 06:43 AM · On: Blood

Oh oh!!!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 06:33 AM · On: Causes Of Stress

A great chapter!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 06:11 AM · On: Telling

Great end,wayda go Justin!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 05:50 AM · On: Working It Out

Awww,I love how Brian said I love you too at the end,I really love that he did that ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 05:32 AM · On: Overcome With Emotion

Oh oh,not good!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 05:21 AM · On: I Want To try

Oh my god,thats so beautiful!!! I heard a little gasp of air and I looked at Brian, only to find his eyes glued to the monitor and moist with unshed tears. I grab his hand at that second and waited until I had his attention before speaking the words we both needed to hear.

“I want to try too.” ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Opening The Line

Well that a start ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 05:07 AM · On: Words

That message at the end brought a lump to my throat,so beautiful ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 04:58 AM · On: Just Done

I hope Brian can fix this!!!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 04:50 AM · On: What's Wrong?

Great update!!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 04:42 AM · On: Brian's Reaction

Oh dear!!!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 04:28 AM · On: A Secret...Revealed

Yaaay!!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 04:15 AM · On: Fired...Again

Awesome!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 04:06 AM · On: A Burn at the GLC

Awww,I love that last word Brian said to sunshine "Stay" ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:57 AM · On: Proof Positive

:)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:51 AM · On: No???

:)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:44 AM · On: Found Out

whoops!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:41 AM · On: Campaigns

I always laugh at

Debbies: “Sweetheart, let me tell you a story. Once upon a God forsaken time there was a beautiful princess. And she worked her ass off until the day she popped her kid and she went back to work three days later.”

And Brians reply: “That Diana was an inspiration.” 

 

Its just hilarious!!! ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:36 AM · On: The Talk Continued

:)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:33 AM · On: The Talk

:)

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:29 AM · On: Suspicions

Holy crap!!! '

I think Justin might be…pregnant' Im off to read more asap ~ vonnie xx

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:23 AM · On: Fired

Awesome!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 03:14 AM · On: Reunification

Im going to love your story alot,I can tell ~ Vonnie xx

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 09:38 PM · On: Opening The Line

“Sometimes your nearness takes my breath away and all the things I want to say can find no voice. Then in silence, I can only hope, my eyes will speak my heart.”

Beautiful quote and excellent story!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 11:18 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Powerful and awesome story and what a "wow" ending.  Bonus - loved that Lindsay and Michael got slapped by Jennifer - fabulous!  I hope you will think about writing a sequel, this story begs for one.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Reviewer: KinnetiKart23 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Words

I had to leave a review on this chapter because it spoke to me...I'm one of the people out there that are similar to BK in the love department. Vulnerabilty shows weakness part...anywho, this chapter is pretty much spot on.

Wonderful job! ***** stars :)

Reviewer: crazykitty (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

I love it, wonderful story, great banner

GOOD JOB!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

That is what I call damn good writing. I'm so glad I found this amazing story.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Blood

Cliffie to danger. I take back my joking about this being a crack fic. This is too well written, and packed with honest real life preg situations. I find this a fine read indeed. I'm glad I found it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Causes Of Stress

Zen Ben almost became Samurai Ben and I was expecting him to dump Michael.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Dinner at Deb's

Can we have a flogging party with a male and female object of punishment?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Telling

Whew! That was so wicked and very well delivered.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Working It Out

It may be a short chapter but it was a damn good one.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Overcome With Emotion

Did someone forget a helmet?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:33 AM · On: I Want To try

Glad that is over with.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Opening The Line

Glad they are talking.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Words

Now we have to see how Justin takes the text.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Just Done

Got to love that girl.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:52 AM · On: What's Wrong?

Interesting; pre-partum is a new one on me.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Brian's Reaction

Intense; how do we go from here?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:32 AM · On: A Secret...Revealed

Now this will really get interesting.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Fired...Again

Glad you made bold font of the canon; made for easy fast reading of things I already know. I wonder how long before Justin finally tells him.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:58 AM · On: A Burn at the GLC

Maybe Brian will surprise us in this novel.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Proof Positive

This is getting deep.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:43 AM · On: No???

Looking forward to all changes in canon now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Found Out

A lot of canon and then Brian gets a clue.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Campaigns

The plot thickens...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:53 AM · On: The Talk Continued

Wondering how this will unfold. What will Brian say and do?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:44 AM · On: The Talk

The cool thing about a MPREG story is the author can explore the subject with our favorite characters/lovers. If you forget the genderbender the plot has the emotional draw.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Suspicions

A girl would be the first to wonder that.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Fired

Your mixture of canon and orginial is novel.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Reunification

Usually MPREG is too cracky for even for a !bad!crack!whore!writer like myself :)

(Just read Embraced to see how strong smoking my hard white rocks were)

I confess; the beautiful banner has totally sucked me in!

Now I load my glass dick, and settle down to your crackilous MPEG tale.

Please realize this is a compliment; MPEG is often considered to be mild FF crack.

I already know how good you write; especially love scenes.

 

Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Okay I so blame you I couldn’t go to sleep and now I’ve been up all night....
I just started to read this story like 6 hours ago and loved it.
It's Amazing. Really un-fucking believable....

Reviewer: Grey (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 03:04 PM · On: I Want To try

Heheh as much as i like that Justin and Brian are together and happy again... i had hoped for a wee bit more of angst where J wouldn give in so fast to Brian but it's B finally showing his tender side... so *sighs* undestandaby J wud melt so fast huh. =)

Reviewer: Grey (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:22 AM · On: The Talk

Awww oblivious!Justin is getting his bubbe burst! *chuckles evily*

Damn brian. You wrote him exactly like canon Brian and goah makes me want to smack him but totally love it since that's so IC.

Reviewer: Grey (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Reunification

Oh my gosh. I am so loving this story!! With the actual lines from the show slited in b/w the story makes it all seem so belivably cannon. <3

'because I don’t want to assume anything anymore.' GAH! that stabbed through my heart. I LOVE LOVE the angst. Poor Justin. *pats* But that's Brian right.Ever cautious and keeping ppl at arms length.

HAHAH. Boys, cant take care of themselves. :P Man, cant wait to see how this unfolds. GReat work! =D

Reviewer: Thess (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2008 03:26 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Is there a sequel on this!??? Love the story and write more. Thanks

Author's Response:

There is a sequel, I started posting it this last week. I hope you enjoy that one as much. Thanks for the review.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2008 05:17 AM · On: Reunification

Sequel, sequel where's the sequel?! LOL! I LOVED this story!!! Can't wait to start reading the next series!! Great job =)

Author's Response:

Hey sorry I didn't see this review, I don't get notifications for them for some reason. The sequel has a plot, a summary, and a title just need to have my graphics girl make a banner and have a little time to start writing it.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Soka (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2008 05:28 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

uhh.... that's it? That's how it ends?I've been reading this story from the begining, and it's one of my favourites. To be honest I'm alittle disappointed with the ending. I mean it wouldn't be so bad if there was going to be a sequal.... unless that's your plan... well I have my fingers crossed!



Author's Response:

Yes like it said in the author's note there will be a sequel showcasing the next part of their lives, their lives as fathers. I'm so glad you liked it though.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2008 04:33 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Great ending. Looking forward for the sequel. *g*

Author's Response:

Thanks foor the review, I'm hoping to get started on the sequel soon.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2008 07:15 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

any sequel in mind????? love it but hanging........ thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, yes there will be a sequel.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2008 04:44 AM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

<SMILING W TEARS> hmmm, so sequel??? please.... will Brian have subsequent children???

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, I'm sorry I made you cry, you should have seen the first draft of this chapter, now that was a tear jerker, but after a few death threats from my friends who read it before it gets posted I changed it lol. There will be a sequel, as for Brian having children, can you see Brian preggers??? hehe

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2008 10:30 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

emotional roller coaster. what they sit and think about. f**k craig the asshole. if i were jennifer i wouldn't even have wasted my time to call him.

so, so far justin is okay but who does the baby look like?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you liked it. Yes Craig is pond scum but Jennifer couldn't believe not loving your children. There will be a sequel to this.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: dmc (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 09:03 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

Such a bittersweet ending to a great fic.  Please say you are writing more?  Would love to see how Brian and Justin handle the so called "friends".

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I agree it is bittersweet. There will be a sequel as I ended this as that chapter in theies ended.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2008 09:00 PM · On: Life or/and Death Final Chapter

I really enjoyed reading this story... will there be an update??? I hope so :-)) rose

Author's Response:

This is the final chapter of this story, but there will be a sequel. Thanks for the review and the interest.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: angelbun86 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2008 12:51 AM · On: Reunification

i love the story so far, i re-read it so many times and i cant wait till you update again!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: BluCallie (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2008 10:08 PM · On: Blood

What a great fic!!! Pleaswupdate soon!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Big J (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2008 11:04 AM · On: Blood

loved the story. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: maritess (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2008 01:48 PM · On: Working It Out

when are you going to update???? please update soon!!! thanks

Author's Response: Truethfully I'm having a bit of trouble writing the last chapter, it's not flowing well but I'm working on it and hope to have it done soon. Sorry for the wait and thanks for the interest. Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Lionstar16 (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2008 09:04 PM · On: Blood

I'm a fan of male pregnancy fanfiction and yours is one of the best I have read so far. It has the same level of drama as the TV show and each chapter ends in a really cliffhanger. I finished reading your last chapter and thought 'Oh God, are Justin and the baby going to be okay?'

Well done and hope to read your next chapter soon! 



Author's Response:

I'm a really big fan of Men-preg myself so you have no idea what a compliment that is. I guess I'm a drama queen lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2008 07:28 AM · On: Reunification

Love the story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it, thanks for the review. Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Gage (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2008 01:58 AM · On: Blood

You just love this suspense thing dontcha? LoL yah killing me here. We have more progress and than here comes the shocker. oh the suspense!

Author's Response: I know I"m evil, don't hurt me. Hehe. Thanks for reading and reviewing I'm glad you're enjoying it. Later, Jessica

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2008 12:39 AM · On: Blood

I hope Justin and the baby are okay. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2008 04:05 PM · On: Blood

i was so enjoying this chapter, then boom. blood! let's hope it's baby time. please. happy, healthy baby time.

Author's Response: I know I'm evil. Thanks for the review. Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Ally (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2008 11:07 AM · On: Reunification

the muse has gone crazy, lol, hope everything will be ok, update for cultivating love coming soon hopefully

Author's Response: She has deff lost her mind lol Thanks for the review I'm glad you like it. On CL I have 5000 words so it more like where to end the chapter and then sending it to the beta, so hopefully you'll have it soon. Later, Jessica

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