Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2018 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 30- Man up

Awesome story. I loved where you took it, and the Brian/Justin story a new perspective. Awesome job keep writing! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading

xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2017 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 3- Welcome to Camp Peatree

I wonder what Justin and Daphne did to get back at Brian.  So far they are getting along, let's hope it stays that way, after all we do want them to become close.



Author's Response:

Teenage Justin and Daphne as just as big of brats as teenage Brian ;)

It isn't a Britin story without them getting along eventually 

xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2017 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 2- The cabin

Very interesting start to their meeting.  Let's hope they are too old for pranks?  They'll be too busy watching after a bunch of mischievous imps.



Author's Response:

Some people never really grow up, so who knows ;)

Thanks for leaving a review!

xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2017 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 1- First day of camp

Something strange is going on.  I can see why Justin would dispise Brian if he behaved  badly over that summer.  Now will they be able to let bygones be bygones?



Author's Response:

Some kids are jerks and some kids don't take shit from nobody

Thanks so much for reading!!

xoxo

Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2017 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 30- Man up

It was so much fun reading about the love and friendship build between Brian and Justin. And to get the insight of their first meeting through the flashbacks. They were destinied to be together.

Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story!

And Happy Birthday! :-)



Author's Response:

Friendship is important <3 They belong together in any setting

Thanks so much for reading and leaving me a nice comment :)

 xoxo

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2017 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 30- Man up

Great story!! I loved the flashbacks.



Author's Response:

That's lovely! 

Thanks for reading

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2017 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 30- Man up

Great final chapter. I love happy endings. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. 

20 years! Happy birthday a little early. Now you too have to start adulting. Welcome to the dark side, we have cookies. Or well... we have QAF and Brian and Justin here, so it ain't so bad :D.



Author's Response:

Many of us are suckers for a happy ending

Hey, what's a grown up? ;)

Thanks so much for reading my story and sharing your thoughts with me

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2017 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 30- Man up

Omg...wow...that was soo emotional and hilarious as well...gosh...i live on romance...this was soo Ridiculously romantic story ... i loooovvveee it very much...amazing story...u r such a awesome writer...i am sure u will get motivation soon..happy birthday in advance..lots of love and hugs to u ...and congratulations on such a brilliant story's finish ..not an ending but beginning of something.



Author's Response:

Ridiculous and romantic are my favourite R words ;)

Thanks so much for all your kind and encouraging words during this story

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2017 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 29- Farewell Peatree

Omfg..that was heartwarming..only one chapter left..such an excellent story..thank u for all ur hard work..stay happy. Much love and blessing to u too.

Author's Response:

Heartwarming and awkward. I love torturing characters ;)

thank you for reading and for leaving a lovely comment 

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2017 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 29- Farewell Peatree

To quote Raj Koothrappali "ahh, the premature I love you". This is not the end of the road for our boys. THey're going to meet again. Great chapter. Can't believe there's only one chapter left.

 

 



Author's Response:

Raj is an expert in fucking up relationships ;)

They will meet sooner than you might think

thank you so much for reading and reviewing

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2017 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 27-Taking it higher

Hot and steamy! I love shower scenes. Always have and always will. Great chapter again.



Author's Response:

Hotter than any shower I've ever taken...I mean what ;)

Thanks so much for reading!! 

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2017 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 27-Taking it higher

Omg...super hot chapter ...only three chap left...thats sad..i will miss them..ur work..everything...loved it.

Thank u for the update.



Author's Response:

It's gettin hot in here! (So hot!) So take off all your clothes! (I am getting so hot, I'm gonna take my clothes off!)

Ahem....Anyway, thank you as always for reading and leaving a lovely comment :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2017 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 26- Late night double feature picture show

Finally have some time to read. Great chapter as always :). Keep 'em coming.



Author's Response:

Glad you are liking it :)

Much love

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 26- Late night double feature picture show

Ok...i forgot..jealous brian is super hot...and cute...how much i love thinking about him getting all Possessive...and justin being cheeky about it..lols.



Author's Response:

Jealous boyfriends are boring, but jealous Brian is hotter than Nevada on the 4th of July

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 26- Late night double feature picture show

Ohhh that line is sooo true...could not agree more.

"Who needed romance when you could have chocolate?"

All i need is chocolate...love chocolate.



Author's Response:

Relationships are never guaranteed, but chocolate is forever.

A message for the kids ;)

Thanks for reading 

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2017 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 26- Late night double feature picture show

Omg...that was super cute moments..justin sitting there alone pouting and sulking image is too damn adorable..brian helping justin was sooo sweeetttt...loved this chapter. 

Thank u for the suppppeeerrrbbbb update.



Author's Response:

The world ain't as bright when Sunshine isn't smiling

thanks so much for the read and your kind words

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2017 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 25- Hot Wheels

Ooh, jealous Brian. I like it. Good chapter. Will we see a glimpse of our boys after the camp is over? I'd like to read about that.



Author's Response:

Brian doesn't do jealousy, but jealousy does him ;)

Spoiler! We will get a little glimpse after camp is over

Thanks for reading

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2017 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 25- Hot Wheels

  1. Omg...that was amazing chapter...i like where this is going...soo excited for next update...only 5 chapters left..wow..thanks for letting us know ur little secret...also thanks for the fun chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking around :)

I am glad you're still enjoying it. My secret is safe with you, right? ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2017 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 24- Soarin', Flyin'

Aww...amazing...they are bonding emotionally..great.

I have never been to camping..we did not have those kinds of activities at my time....even if they had i would never go..as i am anti-social..crowd makes me nervous and i was way much Awkward around new people in my teens.



Author's Response:

Emotionally bonding in a way I never could :')

Camping is both crappy and great! 

I totally get the awkwardness and nervousness!

Thanks for reading and for sharing

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 24- Soarin', Flyin'

Brian knows how to take care of his Sunshine :). Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

Don't tell anyone he likes playing nurse ;)

Thanks for your response

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2017 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 23- A date through history

I knew that at some point the kids would do something. I was not expecting this but it was a very nice surprise. A very good chapter.



Author's Response:

Those kids are clever. You might say...too clever. Or not. They're really just nice kids

Anyhow, thanks for reading

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2017 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 23- A date through history

Omg....that was freaking excellent chapter...i love ur story...thanks for the romantic update...lols...great job.. keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. It's honestly people like you that inspire me to keep writing 

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 22- Team Camp

Aww, hand holding. I'm so a fan. I liked this chapter.



Author's Response:

Hand holding...dick holding...what's next? Heart holding? ;)

Thanks for your review

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2017 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 22- Team Camp

Soo exciting and fun chapter...they sure dont know what they are feeling?? Men..they are soo stupid sometimes...lols.

Another awesome update...love it.

Thanks.



Author's Response:

All men are stupid all the time. Expect when they're being cute...okay, even when they're being cute ;)

Thanks so much for reading and giving me your thoughts

xoxo

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2017 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 21- Super Tug 'o War

Ahh...the tug of war.  A rite of passage at camp, I'm sure.  I am always intrigued by which activities you come up with.  Very clever ideas. :)

Loved the ending where the two men were at the lakefront.  Sooo romantic a setting!  I'm still going to be interested in seeing if their dynamics change once camp is over, and once they are back in the 'real world,' outside their idyllic bubble of their present environment.

Very enjoyable story, Cait!  Thank you for posting this, and for being one of our writers here on MW. We are blessed to have your talent.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

It isn't hard, considering I've been on a million and one camps ;)

It isn't a summer romance without a late night trip to the lake, am I right?

Thank you so much for reading and for your supportive words

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 21- Super Tug 'o War

Ooh, fucking turning to love making. I liked it.



Author's Response:

Well, you know how it is...Summer lovin, had me a blast ;)

Glad you are enjoying it

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 18- Whose line is it anyway

I loved the flirty talk at the end. So good.



Author's Response:

Dirty mind, dirty mouth. Not sure if I'm referring to the boys or to myself...

Thanks for reading 

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 16- Dance Party

They finally caught a break. Seems like Brian is more smitten with Justin than Justin is with Brian. Looking forward to read the next chapter and see how are they going to hide their relationship from the rangers. 



Author's Response:

Finally some release! Cue the harps and trumpets, someone's just gone to bliss ;) 

Brian can be a great big girl sometimes and he doesn't even know it.

Kids are intuitive...

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 15- Interrupted Longing

Brian seems really impatient. He got comfortable around Justin really fast. 



Author's Response:

Nothing can stop America's hornets gay man when he sets his mind to something...or his dick ;) 

Justin wants him just as badly, but he isn't as obvious about it

Thanks for all the reviews

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 14- Unification

Boy that was fast. From first kiss straight to blowjobs. Seems like they've been witholding a lot of sexual energy they didn't know about and it all just burst out in one second. 



Author's Response:

From silly teenage boys to filthy, horny men. There's no time to lose! 

Brian hasn't had sex in like 2 weeks and that's just askin' for trouble ;)

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 13- Hajime

I liked this chapter. I just have one question. When is Justin going to man up and tiptoe to Brian's bed or vice versa? 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. All in good time....

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 12- 1st aid heroes

Aww Brian fixing Justin's fake injuries. So cute.



Author's Response:

Cute with just a touch of awkwardness because I like to make people suffer >:D

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 9- Getting along

The first real conversation. I like it. And I have to say aww, young little Justin crushing on Brian. I'm so fangirl squeeing.



Author's Response:

If you asked young Justin about it he would huff and tell you you're out of your mind. But he is a silly 15 year old and we know better ;) 

Fangirls rule the world

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 6- Pranksters

I think the rangers are seeing something between Brian and Justin that Brian and Justin themselves don't know yet. They might not feel anything for each other yet but there is something there. 



Author's Response:

Kids are intuitive and smarter than most adults give them credit for ;) 

Brian and Justin are silly boys 

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 5- Getting to know you

I was really surprised to see Brian sharing that easily things about his life. Like that he doesn't get along with his family. This Brian is surely more open than what we saw in the show. 



Author's Response:

It's easier that way and I'm lazy ;)

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, I love reading them

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 3- Welcome to Camp Peatree

Brian is a hoot! Liked this chapter. 



Author's Response:

It wouldn't be Brian without his sense of humour;)

Thanks for reading

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 2- The cabin

I like young Daphne. She's fun. 

Seems like there are a lot of secrets to be discovered. Can't wait to find out. 



Author's Response:

Daphne is always fun! So are secrets...

xoxo

Reviewer: Teinisydan (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2017 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 1- First day of camp

I don't usually read WIPs but once in year I've been known to break my rules. I've been eyeing this story for some time now and finally found time to read. I like the start. Seems like we're going to see some silly hate and teasing in the first chapters. I like it. Great start. Off to next chapter ->



Author's Response:

I know the feeling. Thanks for giving it a go! Hope you enjoy :)

xoxo

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 21- Super Tug 'o War

I have been so caught up reading not stopping to drop you notes since I started bing reading this.

I enjoy how you aways seem to leave the chapter ending wanting to see what happens next so hitting the next button was a reflex. LOL

Can't wait to see if the boys will stay together or move on from their summer romance.

Thank you for taking the time to write this story for all of us.  :)

 

~Teresa~



Author's Response:

That's how I trick people into reading the whole thing ;)

Thank you so much for reading. I'm truly happy that you like it. Thanks for letting me know

xoxo

Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 21- Super Tug 'o War

I loved their playful banter in the mud and of course the hot scene in the water. ;)

Young love <3



Author's Response:

Keeping it clean in the mud and getting dirty in the shower ;)

Thanks for your support

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2017 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 21- Super Tug 'o War

Very enjoyable and romantic chapter...i really liked it....super hero names and powers were really impressive..thank u for the update...i wish u can get more appreciation via reviews u deserve them...doing an awesome job...thank you for the lovely story.



Author's Response:

I write romance and smut so I can live vicariously through these characters...don't tell anyone I said that... ;)

I am so glad you're still enjoying it.

Thanks so much for reading

xoxo

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2017 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 20- Clowning around

Well, the boys are definitely enjoying themselves. :)  I like how Justin and Dusty played matchmakers.  I'm not sure how much longer the kids will be at camp, but I wonder how or if B and J's relationship will change once camp is over, and they are back in the 'real' world.  Looking forward to finding out!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Camp isn't over just yet, but summer doesn't last forever ;)

Thanks for reading!!

xoxo

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 20- Clowning around

U guys are in looooovvvveee...idiots in love...sigh..lols


I soo enjoyed thia chapter too...thank u for update.


P.S ..... I loved ur direct approach in the Note..rofl.



Author's Response:

They most certainly are in love and they most certainly are idiots!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing; I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

P.S. You gotta be direct to get what you want...or to not get what you don't want. I don't make the rules, I just keep 'em. And sometimes break 'em when I'm bored ;)

xoxo

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