Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 6 CONSEQUENCES, REPERCUSSIONS, AND REVELATIONS
Gone with the wind is my fav movie also. I always thoughtbin some way rhett personality is just like brian and scarlett is justin.
Author's Response: Brian is probably feeling all kinds of emotions at this time. The Stud has defnitely been thrown for a loop but he will work it out. i have to thank you for the reviews. i hoe you don't think i was churlish for taking so long to respond. My computer died and i just borrowed one the other day.
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 KARMA AND KISMET
Ahh the day finally come
Author's Response: i hope you enjoyed this chapter a lot was covered in it. we are almost at the end and once again, thanx for reading.
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 4 SAME STUFF, DIFFERENT DAY
Brian is like justin peraonal hero..
Author's Response: Brian has always been there when JUSIN NEEDED HIM. I appreciate your support.
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 THE LONG WAY HOME
Brian is a good kid with a good heart
Author's Response: I agree 100%. Who knows what would have happened to Justin out there all alone? I hpe you are enjoying the story and will hang in there to the end.
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 2 Out Of The Mouths Of Babes
Dee and jay are so cute and brian so good with them. If only ge knew who jay is
Author's Response: i based Dee and Jay on my siblings so I feel Brian's pain. thanx forthe comment.
Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brothers From Another Mother
Oh im so sad that aidan must let his baby brother go. But aidan seem like a strong boy
Author's Response: awww, Don't be sad, they will see each other again. thank you for the review.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2017 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 9 FAMILY MATTERS
Great ending!
Author's Response: Sorry I missed your review. Thank you for all your comments and I am happy you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2017 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 8 THE BUDDY SYSTEM
That was great!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2017 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 7 HINDSIGHT
That was terrific!
Author's Response: I really appreciate you for commenting. Have a great weekend.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2017 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 6 CONSEQUENCES, REPERCUSSIONS, AND REVELATIONS
That was great!
Author's Response: Thanks for all your positive feedback.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2017 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 5 KARMA AND KISMET
That was terrific!
Author's Response: I really appreciate your interest in the story. Thanks a bunch.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2017 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 4 SAME STUFF, DIFFERENT DAY
That was great!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm thrilled to see that you enjoyed reading.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2017 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 3 THE LONG WAY HOME
That was great!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and your support.
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2017 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 2 Out Of The Mouths Of Babes
That was terrific!
Author's Response: So happy you enjoyed the chapter. I love little kids because they have no filters. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2017 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 Brothers From Another Mother
Great start to this story.
Author's Response: Hi there and thanks for reading. I hope you will enjoy the rest of this tale.
Author's Response: Hi there and thanks for reading. I hope you will enjoy the rest of this tale.
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2017 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 9 FAMILY MATTERS
Lovely story can't wait for the next one 😊
Author's Response: Awwwww, thanks a bunch.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2017 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 9 FAMILY MATTERS
Superb story... i really enjoyed it ...thank u... will surely read a sequel/prequel too..d84;😊
Author's Response: A thousand thanks for your reviews. Working on the prequel/sequel as well as a couple other plot bunnies that have been hopping around in my head. Have a lovely day!
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 HINDSIGHT
Great progress..the cat is out of the bag..😉😉
Author's Response: There you go! Stuff is gonna hit the fan and it won't be pretty. Please stay tuned...
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 6 CONSEQUENCES, REPERCUSSIONS, AND REVELATIONS
Amazing...😊
Author's Response: You have made my day : D !
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 5 KARMA AND KISMET
Oh wow.... u talked about karma and kismat ..i know all about it as i am hindu myself ... i love it...keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Your feedback is greatly appreciated. I'm never knew the difference between the two concepts. It was interesting to learn that karma could be good or bad for the recipient.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 SAME STUFF, DIFFERENT DAY
This is getting better and better...d84;d84;d84;
Author's Response: You are too kind! Thanks for hanging in there.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 THE LONG WAY HOME
Marvelous...😊
Author's Response: So happy you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 2 Out Of The Mouths Of Babes
They are soo cute...de and jay...adorable...and i cant believe brian didnt recognised sunny boy...lovely chapter.... thank u.d84;
Author's Response: Hello there again. We will give Brian a pass for being clueless. Several years have gone by and he was not one to dwell on the past. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 Brothers From Another Mother
Interesting start...i like it....thank u for posting.d84;
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting and I appreciate the review.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 FAMILY MATTERS
Hi, Kim! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, and its unique premise! Now I'm looking forward to you filling in the back story in the sequel (I'm delighted to hear that there will be one!). You really have me intrigued now. :)
Thank you for all the enjoyment your stories have brought me, and for being a writer on here. I will always eagerly look forward to anything that you post. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Good morning, Kim! So happy you enjoyed the story. I appreciate your encouragement and support. Thank you for reading and all the reviews. Have a wonderful day.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2017 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 9 FAMILY MATTERS
Finally someone mentioned Craig's insurance fraud. Should have landed his ass in jail and Brian wouldn't have needed to resort to blackmail. Brian and Jennifer against Justin? The poor kid will never win. Ha! Well Joan knows now about Brian. I hope if she ever comes face to face with Jennifer, Jenn let's her have it.
Looking forward to the sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews you left for this story. I appreciate your input so much. I agree with you, Craig got off easy. He was a real douche. As for Jennifer and Joanie squaring off...I'll see what I can do about that. Thanks again and have a great day!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2017 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 9 FAMILY MATTERS
There is still so much to know. Guess I'll have to find "Every Mother's Son".
Author's Response: I promise to give you more as soon as possible. I had fun writing this story but I am happy to put it away at last so that I can get back to other projects. Thank you for your support and all your comments and reviews.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2017 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 8 THE BUDDY SYSTEM
I seem to be missing a piece of the puzzle. What happened between the time Justin left the loft and the car wreck? Jennifer seems to be in denial.
Author's Response: Thanks for hanging in there. What happened is Justin got into it with his parents and as usual, he ran off all willy-nilly. You'll get the full picture in the final chapter. I appreciate y our interest. Thanks a bunch for reading.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2017 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 HINDSIGHT
I wonder what the story is about Justin being put up for adoption. I'm on Brian's side in this.
Author's Response: Patience, my dear reader...All will be revealed in the very near future. Thanks for reading and leaving your comments.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2017 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 THE BUDDY SYSTEM
“For Justin’s sake, I feel that it is time for us to bury the hatchet.”
“And where do you want to place it, Mrs. Taylor? In my chest, my head, or the middle in my back?”
Ha! Loved those lines, Kim! I continue to eagerly look forward to your updates. :) This is such a unique plot line - to show their contact over the years, and how they interacted. I definitely see the ice breaking here, and I adore a protective Brian. He always acts like this macho, "I-don't-give-a-damn" type of person, but we all know that in reality he is just the opposite.
Thank you again for posting this on here. I am really enjoying it, Kim! ~Kim
Author's Response: Hey Kim! Your reviews really make my day. Brian may have a lot of people fooled into thinking that he's a rough tough top but we know better. He's a fluffy teddy bear when it comes to Justin and other people he cares about. Thanks again for reading and have a great day.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2017 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 8 THE BUDDY SYSTEM
A snarky Brian is my happy place lol
Author's Response: I feel you. Brian decked out in Armani or Prada while handling business is hot. But when Brian is in bad boy mode, I just want to swoon. Thanks a bunch for commenting.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2017 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 8 THE BUDDY SYSTEM
Yeah like he could stay away. Never!
Best friends? More like his guardian angel making sure his life is lived like it should be. Yay for Daphne!
Jennifer knew she was facing a losing battle. Good thing she went against what she thought was best and for once listened. Brian isn't going to make it easy for her, but Justin is their common ground.
Justin's mood swings, Brian can and will handle them.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing the chapter. Jennifer loves her son and will do what is necessary for his well-being. Daphne is Team Justin all the way. As for Brian, he realized from their first night together that Justin is his Kryptonite.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2017 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 7 HINDSIGHT
I'm wondering how Justin got into the system in the first place if Jennifer is his birth mother? It's good to know that you've got more on this.
Author's Response: First of all, I am thrilled you are still continuing to enjoy the story. The answer to your question, is in another story called Every Mother's Son and I am still working on it. But I will share this with you and anyone else who may be wondering the same thing. My story LATER was really supposed to be a sequel but somehow it cut the line and pushed its way to being completed first. As always, thank you for the review.
Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2017 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 HINDSIGHT
I'm still here waiting for another chapter and the ending, of course. I love how Brian stand for his sunshine.
Author's Response: I appreciate your patience and thanks a bunch for the review. Brian knows that Justin is his other half.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2017 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 7 HINDSIGHT
I love how he out WASPed her. Justin was to never know. Let's see Craig talked himself out of this mess. Great great update.
Author's Response: Yayyyyy! I am happy you enjoyed it because I worked hard on this chapter. And I agree with you, Jennifer and Craig have some 'splaining to do. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2017 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 7 HINDSIGHT
Hi, Kim - been really busy lately, but have had a chance to catch up on your story today. I'm still enjoying it very much and I love the idea of how you had the two of them meeting throughout the years. Great concept! I will be looking forward to the rest of your story, and am grateful you chose to post it on MW. :) ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim and I am tickled pink to hear from you because I know how busy you are overseeing things. Thanks for reading and reviewing because your input means a lot to me. Have a great evening.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 6 CONSEQUENCES, REPERCUSSIONS, AND REVELATIONS
The past is finally catching up to the Present. I can't wait to see their reaction is when they realize something's are just meant to be...
Hugs Kathleen
Author's Response: Hi Kathleen...Yes the guys have come full circle and are back to where they started from. I am pleased to hear that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 6 CONSEQUENCES, REPERCUSSIONS, AND REVELATIONS
Ah, what turns around comes around. Looking forward to seeing how you finish this.
Author's Response: As always, I am grateful for the encouragement and your support. Thank you.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2017 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 5 KARMA AND KISMET
Love the pov. We're seeing this from Justin and Daphne's side.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2017 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 CONSEQUENCES, REPERCUSSIONS, AND REVELATIONS
I knew he was smart enough to put two and two together. It all started coming together while he looked at the pictures. It always was meant to be. If it weren't for him there would be no Justin.
Author's Response: You just said a mouthful. Sometimes things happen for a reason. Thanks for reading and taking the time e to review.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2017 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 5 KARMA AND KISMET
And as they say, the rest is history. Deb pegged him. Once he holds Gus his life is going to change. Loved this chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, Debbie always saw through Brian's bluster and never failed to call him out on it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 CONSEQUENCES, REPERCUSSIONS, AND REVELATIONS
Oh my! Brian recognized his Sonny Boy
Great chapter
Author's Response: Yes he did and he is reeling from the shock of it all. Thanks for reading and for the review. I really appreciate you. We will finish up this fic with an epilogue hopefully next week.
Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 6 CONSEQUENCES, REPERCUSSIONS, AND REVELATIONS
Love this story. I'm glad it will be finished but I wish it could be longer. I hope to see more of your stories here.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Linda. I m so pleased to read that you have enjoyed this story. There is a little more before the end so I hope you will stayed tuned.
Reviewer: Admin (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2017 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 5 KARMA AND KISMET
"You are as dependable as my mom’s Maytag." LOL! Loved that line! And soooo not the right thing to say to a girl as a compliment - ha!
This was such a unique story idea, Kim! What a great idea to show them meeting several times before they actually met (again) on Liberty Avenue. And with these two, perhaps you're right. It WAS destined to be.
Thank you for this very entertaining story. And thank you for sharing your works with us on here. ~Kim
P.S. I'm assuming the story is complete? It wasn't listed that way, so I didn't want to change it to that status unless it was. Thanks again for such an entertaining read, Kim!
Author's Response: Hey Kim, so happy you are enjoying the story. Actually there is one other chapter and maybe an epilogue before I put this puppy to bed. Thanks for your support.
Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2017 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 5 KARMA AND KISMET
Oh, my I want to know when Justin tells his full name to Brian or sees Justin's family. Update asap, please
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and the review. There is a little more that we have to cover before I say the end to this story. Thanks for hanging in there.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2017 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 SAME STUFF, DIFFERENT DAY
Don't thing I've read a story with how Brian got his loft and how he met Emmett 'Don't call me Honeycutt'. Lover your version. And to think he met Justin earlier and doesn't remember when he finally meets him again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Emmett is one of my favorites because like Brian, he pulls no punches and tells it like it is.
Reviewer: boo (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2017 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 4 SAME STUFF, DIFFERENT DAY
I like the story so far. I'm wondering why Brian has not thought about Justin. Is that part coming later in the other chapers?
Author's Response: I'm thrilled to hear you like the story and I thank you for reading. You raised a valid point because I've been wondering the very same thing. But eventually he will put two and two together because there is definitely more to come in the next few chapters of this short story.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2017 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 4 SAME STUFF, DIFFERENT DAY
I can picture Em and Brian meeting in just the way you described. And Michael being completely whiney about both the loft and not having all of Brian's time to himself.
Can Brian see into the future where's Justin is concerned? Ha! Should have warned himself.
Good thing they were taking a break.
Loved this update.
Author's Response: I enjoyed your review. I agree with you that Brian should have consulted with a higher power like Mysterious Marilyn. I love stories about her/him.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2017 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 SAME STUFF, DIFFERENT DAY
Another encounter between B&J where Brian rescues Justin. Enjoy the Daphne & Justin interactions and looking forward to more of your fascinating story. Bill
Author's Response: I have enjoyed scenes where Daphne was there to support Justin. I wish she was utilized more on the show. Thank you for the comments.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2017 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 3 THE LONG WAY HOME
Another B&J encounter. Loved Justin's PSAs, he started early with those. Looking forward to more. Great story. Bill
Author's Response: I appreciate your response, Bill. I try to keep B & J as well as any of the other characters IC if possible. There are a few more chapters to go. Thanks again for reading.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2017 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 2 Out Of The Mouths Of Babes
Interesting turn of events with Justin & Daphne creating havoc at the store for Brian to clean up. Enjoying your story. Bill
Author's Response:
Hello there, Bill and thank you for the review. I am please that you are enjoying my little tale.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2017 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 3 THE LONG WAY HOME
Who cares where you pulled it, it works. Nice that Brian got to remeet Justin even though he doesn't know it.
Author's Response: You are too kind and thank you for the review. Enjoy your day...
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2017 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 3 THE LONG WAY HOME
This is just great, Kim. I love how you are incorporating their characteristics into the younger versions of them, from Justin's continuing PSAs, to his budding art talent, and how Brian 'doesn't do love,' but still helps out even strangers, just like he did for his friends when he was older; even to Debbie still being Debbie, no matter what her age - ha!
Love this idea! Thank you! ~Kim
Author's Response: I tried to imagine a more relaxed spontaneous Brian before he learned to barricade himself behind the layers of masks and walls. I see Justin as a precocious kid who was secure in his own skin at a young age. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a bunch.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2017 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 Out Of The Mouths Of Babes
Hi, Kim! Playing catchup as usual. :) What a unique, fresh storyline! I LOVE this idea! And this chapter was hilarious, from Brian's snarkiness to Justin being an 'mini-PSA,' even at Age 5. This is great!! Moving onto the next chapter now. :)
Oh, and would be glad to try a banner for you if you would need or like one. Just let me know. :) Thanks for posting this on here, and for being a writer here on MW. We deeply appreciate that. ~Kim
Author's Response: Hey Kim, I was pleased to see your review and your offer to help out. Thanks for your support.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2017 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2 Out Of The Mouths Of Babes
Loving how they meet up and don't know it. All considered Brian was pretty nice to the rugrats. I see Brian's hooked up with Mikey.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...I appreciate the comments. Yes Brian tries to be the Big Bad but he is really a teddy bear.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2017 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 2 Out Of The Mouths Of Babes
That was sweet - poor Brian - I know how he feels having worked in a similar store and constantly having to clean up after customers. Justin and Daphne are so cute - Brian didn't realize who Justin was - shame he wasn't around when Craig turned up he may have realized. Onto the next meeting....
Author's Response: I pleased to read that you enjoyed the update. Working in the retail industry can try the patience of a saint so I too feel Brian's pain because I have been there and done that. Thanks for the review...Stay tuned for more. Later...
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2017 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brothers From Another Mother
I think it's sweet that little Justin is being cared for by Aiden which is Brian right? Both foster kids. This will be an interesting story. Waiting for More! Happy New Year!
Author's Response: Happy New Year to you! Yes, Aiden is Brian and thanks for the review and there will be an update shortly.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2017 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brothers From Another Mother
A very interesting start - can't wait for more. Not too surprising to have Brian in foster care but Justin - can't wait to find out how that happened. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review. I will update really soon. I appreciate your interest and Happy New Year's!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2016 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 Brothers From Another Mother
This is a great start, but is Baby Taylor really Aidan brother? I mean biologically? Gonna have to wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. But the boys are merely foster brothers. Otherwise, by the time we get to the end of this little fic, you would be calling me a perv! LOL!
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2016 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brothers From Another Mother
I'm hooked, but I don't understand where they were.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I thrilled you like this brief beginning. The boys were living in a foster home. How they got there is another story that will not be covered in this fic. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2016 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brothers From Another Mother
Hi, Kim! What a delight to see a new story from you! A great way to start out the new year. This story idea is so unique. :) I will be looking forward to their future encounters. The title of the story is perfect.
Thank you for posting this new story, and for being an author here on MW. Happy New Year! ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim. As always I treasure your comments and kind words. Have a safe and wonderful new year!
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