Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Liberty
Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2022 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 27

If there was ever a story that deserved to be finished and posted for all to enjoy, it's this one! So well written, the slow, gentle pull of Brian/Justin getting together is superb, stays very much in character, yet story is so unique. It pulls you in and makes you think, wonder as to how some of the characters lives are tangled with Brian's.  Hope someday Beth will be able to return and share the end of her amazing story.  Candy

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2020 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please come back. Pretty please. This was such a ride. I want more.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 27

Please update

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2018 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 20

I hope that Judson will be happy, he deserves it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2018 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 3

Brian trow all those called friends out, darn free loaders

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2018 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please Brian, do not go back to Justin

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2017 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 27

Hi again! Another interesting chapter. But I don’t understand… why has it always to be Justin who apologizes… They both wrote mails, which due to Michael didn’t arrive, and they both were desperate but none of them tried to reach the other by phone for example.

And again, Erin is mentioned. “Only our Erin could protect Brian from himself” – I’m so curious about her and her relationship to Brian… Then, I’m very curious about the development of Shane. He is still so mistrustful of Justin….

I must say, Jennifer’s behavior annoys me more and more. Questioning his homosexuality? A bounty hunter? How offensive and hurtful! I can’t understand why she thinks so less about Justin. “Nothing could convince her that Justin was good for Brian.“ One get the impression as if she would like it much more if Brian would be her son and not Justin. And then even worse… She is questioning if Justin is worth loving!!?? What kind of mother acts this way? It’s so shabby.

I really love your story and I will miss your updates! But I wish you and your sister all the best!!! Warmest regards! a.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2017 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 27

It's amazing how negatively Jennifer views Justin now.  I'm so thrilled that he is back with Brian. I know they will make it work.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2017 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 27

Brian and Justin have come to an understanding.  Shane on the other hand is moving into Mikey territory.  Jennifer, too, is all about herself and not her kids.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2017 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 27

Another great chapter but I do like Sunshine better than TomCat.  I hope everything goes well with your sister and I look forward to your return.  Best Wishes,  Bill

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 26

Lots of truths exchanged.  Hope they can keep the open communications going.  They always get into trouble when they stop talking and try to figure out what the other person is thinking or wanting.  Bill

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 25

Very sweet that Brian is so happy to have Justin back where he belongs.  Bill

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 24

Nice to see B&J get down to business.  Just a little worried about them doing it raw.  Still enjoying this amazing story.  Bill

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 26

Wow! It’s amazing. Each chapter affects me anew and so much. It was so heartbreaking to see Brian. For a moment not being sure if Justin is reality or if it was just another dream. And first the pain and then the relief he felt  Now one can really imagine and feel how he must have felt this year without Justin.

There is one question I have and I’m so curious. What is it about Erin? “She died that night”? I don’t understand. I thought she would have died earlier, before Brian met Justin. I thought Brian was in love with her, even got a son with her, married??? Maybe I haven’t understand this right? Could you please tell me or do I have to be patient? :-)

Warmest regards! a.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 25

And again, what should I say. Hot and in the end so beautiful when Brian is saying “Home”, thinking about Justin making him care about himself. This is good in view of his cancer. It will hopefully help him fighting it. You are so talented and let them be so beautiful together. Thanks again for sharing this amazing story!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2017 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 24

Finally!!!! There isn’t so much to say about this chapter… Just thanks! It’s hot, also cute, and most of all it’s so fucking beautiful. I really love to see them doing it raw. It’s somehow so beautiful that Justin’s last time was with Brian. But what about Brian? They mentioned his last test? When was it? But he has been with Judson and haven’t they shared tricks? Whatever… THANKS for this beautiful and awesome chapter! Warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2017 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 26

They finally come together marking each as their own.  Needing to know that the other is theirs. 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2017 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 25

They are both lucky to have each other and we are lucky to be reading this awesome story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 25

This is Brian letting Justin know that he owns him, the way he always did.  The thing that Justin had been missing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2016 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 24

I can't believe they finally did it raw!  This is monumental.  But I can't help but wonder about the first chapter when you wrote -

'Justin lifted his shoulders. “I’m not sure I have plans, just yet. I just needed to get away from New York.”

Debbie smiled knowingly. “Away from NY, or away from a guy?”

“A guy, I guess.”'

So Justin hasn't been with anyone since Brian?

As always am enjoying this story.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2016 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 24

"So dangerous. So enticing."  What an apt description of Brian.  And what a hot but tender chapter.  Loved it, as I love all of this story. Thank you.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2016 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 24

Nice!  So hot!  So satisfying.  So Brian and Justin. I'm a happy camper.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2016 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 23

I like B&J having a serious discussion about how they move forward.  I love this story.  Bill

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2016 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hi again! It’s so good that the two are finally alone, having time for each other. It’s necessary. Will we learn more about the content of these mails? I’m amazed how calm they seem to be about it. But okay, what really matters is that they are now together. They can’t change the past. But as I said before it hurts so much to think about them being separated and both wondering what goes on and why there are no answers. F… Michael. I really love the way Brian treats their relationship. It’s just so natural, no doubt that they belong together. And I’m really looking forward to the next chapter… :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2016 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 23

Brian living two lives keeping his friends separate is what makes this story special. To think of the changes that one year made.  Brian even had a separate apartment that the Liberty crew knew nothing about.  A hideout that even Justin knew nothing about.  And it's official.  They are back together.  I'm sure that eventually they tell everyone about the e-mails that were not delivered.  The chaining to the bed part might work.  Kinky.  lol. 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2016 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 23

Great chapte.  Brian gives Justin a gorgeous apartment.  Not too shabby..  They have a hideaway where nobody will bother them.  I so want them to be happy.  

Merry Christmas!

 

 

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2016 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 22

Hi again! First I would like to thank you for always updating so fast. With such an exciting, interesting, awesome and beautiful story, it’s difficult to stop reading. So, thanks!

So, these are Shane’s parents and in some way Brian’s adopted. I’m so fascinated by how you created this second circle of friends of Brian. They all seem to be so kind and the most important thing about it,  they seem to really care about Brian. “Your” Michael is so pathetic, abominable. What has he done? What is it about those mails? It’s about Justin… I’m very curious about the content of those mails. He “isolated” him. This is so cruel and again unimaginable how someone can change, can influence your life. Then I think he has done the same with all the other mails. Daphne also asked why Justin never answered mails or stayed in contact. How cruel! To imagine Justin’s in New York, alone, maybe homesick, missing Brian as hell, not getting a word… Arghhh – I know it’s not life, it’s a (brilliant) story, but there are phones… :-)

Again, thanks for sharing this wonderful story! Warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2016 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 22

I'm assuming the emails are correspondences between Brian and Justin that Michael intercepted.  I'm glad they will now have the opportunity to read them.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2016 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 22

Hi, Beth!  First of all, just wanted to congratulate you on your 100th review here on MW! That's wonderful.  You deserve many more for this amazingly intricate story.  I'm playing catchup with beta work and my own story at the moment, but I eventually will get back around to this complex and fascinating journey you are weaving.

It looks like your posting issues have been resolved, I hope?  I just wanted to express our appreciation again for you posting your story on here. We are very fortunate.  I hope you have a great Christmas.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2016 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 22

I wonder what Gus had to tell his Dad.  You always leave us with questions and wanting more of your story. 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2016 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 21

Mel siding with Brian.  You really know how to shake up these situations.  Always anxious to see what happens next.  Really a wondreful story.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2016 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 22

I have to say how proud I am of Hunter calling the cops on Michael.  Finding out just what Michael has been up to was horrific.  I can't help but wonder what it was Mikey did with all the money he's stolen.  He took from Hunter and Ben and there is the Rage money that rightly should have gone to Justin.  At this rate Michael will be in jail for a long, long time.  The bitch of it is that Debbie will be concerned about the money that Justin didn't get, but not about anyone else.  I wonder why?

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 21

Love how we get everyone's perspective on Brian and Justin. Now who can it be at the door?   I'm thinking it isn't someone who is welcome.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 16

They finally have a much needed talk and are interrupted.  I'm not sure I like thinking about why Ted and Mikey were actually out there.  It has a yuck factor to it.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 21

Hi again! Another relaxed chapter. An unstressed and peaceful atmosphere. And I really love this dancing scene. I always loved to see them dancing together in the show especially this scene after their reunion in season 3 - it's hot and beautiful - or their dancing at the Pride Day (although this was not so much dancing more hugging and kissing, but it was a beautiful and cute scene). Warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 21

Music and dancing.  It seems that Ben and Mel are well out of it.  Now who's at the door?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 20

There has got to be a back story as to why Debbie and Mikey are the way they are.  Debbie probably was a rebel growing up.  She undoubtedly was too young when she had Mikey.  Lying about his parentage and suffocating the kid, she turned her back on her family when they turned their back on Vic.  She took Vic in but at a cost.  She never let him forget it.  The same with Brian, she took him in but he had to protect lil' Mikey.  For some reason Deb thinks Brian doesn't give a shit and can't see beyond that.  I don't see any way of redemption for her until she does.  Ted I cannot find any reason why he turned out the way he did.  Emmett will be sad for his friends, but he knows what they did was not right.  Brian will be happy that he stayed. 

Judson is a wonderful character.  He doesn't see Justin as others see him and he knows when to give up his place.  He's not deserting Brian and will be there to support him - and Justin.  Melanie has done a complete 180 and I'm very pleased.  Lindsay, on the other hand, is snide and like Mikey talks without thinking.  Little JR is so cute wanting to help Brian feel better.  She doesn't seem to care that Mikey and his mother are no longer there.  She loves Brian and I get the feeling Mikey doesn't rate with her. 

As always there is so much to enjoy about this chapter.  Especially Mikey getting what he deserves and Deb being hauled away by Carl, who one has to feel sorry for.  He's seeing a side of Deb he'd never seen before.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 20

Due to the software problem, my review got lost. I try to repeat it…

After Debbie and Michael disappeared, it’s - disregarding of Lindsey’s stupid comment – a very quiet, peaceful and relaxed chapter. I love the way Brian acts with the kids – it’s beautiful And although Brian has to endure so much pain and hurt in the last chapters, he seems – compared to the Brian of the show – somehow matured and contented, relaxed. I think it’s due to his relation to Judson, a few real true friends as Shane and Jim and yeah, Justin’s back by his side, comforting him. I really like that it’s getting more and more official that there are back together again!

A few words to Judson: He’s so wise and altruistic. I love how you created him somehow as the reverse to Michael regarding love and true friendship.

I think my first review to this chapter was longer but I haven’t kept it and it’s not so easy to regain my thoughts and feelings after reading it the first time. Warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2016 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 19

Happy to see Ted & Mikey get what they deserve.  Debbie is so clueless.  She better watch out for Jennifer.  This is such a really greast story.  So happy that you posted it here!!  Bill

Reviewer: Feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2016 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 19

More soon, please! Can't put; just loving so.

 

Note: Feet526, please stop adding spaces to your review comments. ~Admin

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2016 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 19

This was painful as it is were we learn the full extent of Michael theivery and how badly Brian has been hurt by it.  That this was going on from the time Brian championed his friendship with the little sneak was conscionable.  That Michael doesn't think of it as the crime it is means he's mentally unstable.  That his mother defends him shows she never really cared for Brian.  It was wonderful to see cops showing up and both Ted and Michael getting what they deserve.  Melanie stepped up and refused to represent either of them.  Michael finally let everyone know what it was he said all those years ago when Brian repeated his actions.  Go Brian! 

PS - there seems to be something wacky with the coding in this chapter that makes it harder to read.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2016 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hi again. More betrayals, more lies. I’m so sorry for Brian and for what he has to endure.

I agree with Justin – I’m also so curious about Erin :-) In the USA you wear your wedding ring on the left side, doesn’t you? So, Brian hasn’t just a son with Erin but was also married? Or was it more a symbolic thing? Can’t believe this! So, he wasn’t always gay? It sounds as if he was deep in love with Erin. What happened? I’m soooo curious!

It’s so pathetic how Debbie still finds some cheap excuses for Michael’s behavior at first. And I haven’t got a word for it, it’s more than pathetic how Michael behaves. I have to repeat myself, he needs professional help! Urgently! The stories Shane are telling. It’s so painful. And then this sad top, to wish Justin would have died. What a crazy and dangerous insane!

The beautiful thing in this chapter is the way Justin’s able to comfort Brian, to stand up for him and the way they act together, comforting each other. In my opinion Shane only has a point to one side of the story – it’s not only Brian who is completely open to Justin. Justin also shows his deep feelings for Brian in such a totally open and honest way. I really like how they are both able to calm each other in such important situations. The deep bond they share is so obvious and beautiful.

Such an emotional chapter. Unbelievable. Love your story more and more. Thanks for sharing! a.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2016 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 19

What a horrible mouth Michael has.  Let's hope Deb finally sees her son for what he is.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2016 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 18

Hi again! This is such an enormous betrayal. I haven’t got more words for it. It’s terrible. But I think it fits. When I first saw this robbery scene in the show I couldn’t believe that it was Justin’s fault. So, I really like your way of telling the story. It’s unbelievable and so crazy how Michael creates his own world and his meaning of friendship. “I only wanted you to ditch the boy wonder” – so painful. It’s brilliant how you combine the show with your story. I love it! Thanks and warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2016 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

this story is WOW - more please

great writing

thank you for writing and sharing



Author's Response: Thank you chandrika! Much appreciated - next chapter is up! Enjoy! :-)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2016 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 18

Ted is a huge loser and Michael is a huge idiot.  Very clever to make Mikey the thief trying to get rid of Justin.  Hope Brian does call the police on Michael.  Debbie needs a wake up call!!!  Bill



Author's Response: Thank you, glad to hear you like Mikey being the thief! :-) Ted - I always felt there was a bit more to his change in attitude toward Brian, something we never got to see. We really needed one more season *sigh* I don't think Debbie knows what a wake-up call is LOL

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2016 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 18

Geez!  Michael is horrible!  If Deb defends him now, she needs her head examined.  Glad Brian is involving the police.



Author's Response: Deb always has her son's back. Which is nice if you happen to be the son... not so nice for the rest of the universe! :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2016 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 18

Michael's view on life is warped.  Maybe he can get off on a mental problem afterall stealing is a crime.  It's nice to know that Vic and Ben would have been too decent to be let in on his secret, but his mom wasn't.  To think he'd been stealing from Brian as far back as High School and Brian never knew.  I can totally believe that Mikey was behind the robbery, it's just something he'd do.  I can't get over how Mikey thinks he should get away with what he's done.  Didn't he find out about Danny Devore?  So many lives ruined.  Blake and Ben's for sure.  Ted seems to think Brian will let bygones be bygones.  He might be redeemable, but I doubt it.  At least now Deb is aware that Michael hasn't been paying support for Jenny Rebecca.  Looks like Emmett is clearly on side Brian.  I always liked Emmett. 



Author's Response: Yes, I'm very fond of Emmett, too! I always wished they had given him more to do, but he usually ended up with the sillier storylines, unfortunately! I think Michael took a page (several pages) out of Debbie's book - if it's good for me, it can't be wrong. I think it would kill me if any of my friends were like that.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2016 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 17

Hi again! Wow, after this somehow quiet and peaceful chapter there comes so much dramatic and hurt with so many stupid insults and painful discoveries. Debbie and Michael are so out of their minds. First the slapping of JT – but you know, it doesn’t surprises me that it’s normal for Debbie – she’s doing it again and again in the show, doesn’t she? Then Michael – I’ve told you before, the Michael in the show confuses me, regard him with mixed feelings, but your Michael… no words for it, no mixed feelings, I think he needs professional help. Imagine someone is doing this to one. To be so powerful, that he can change one’s life and through these changes destroy important things in someone’s life, take away important or beloved people from one. Terrible, horrible. I’m so sorry for Brian. A betrayal of such an extent over such a long time. Unimaginable!

Again, very well written. Brilliant. How you think about so little but important details like Brian who is asking Gus to leave with his sister. What I really love is the way Justin, Judson and Shane start to bond because of their honest love for Brian, it’s great to see how the communicate just through little gestures or looks. And I also love the way Brian and Justin act together, also through gestures, looks or touches… They are there for each other, comfort each other, stand up for each other – belonging together without a doubt.

And again, I’m curious about Erin and this boy. It seems as if Brian’s really got an elder son. But how? I’m so curious. Thanks! Warmest regards, a.



Author's Response: Hi you! Love hearing from you! :-) Yes, that's right - Debbie does slap folks on the show, that's why I thought she and Michael wouldn't think twice about slapping JR! Mikey - definitely an ambiguous character on screen. He had his moments (as did Ted) but often I just felt like slapping him, or telling him to grow up (or grow a pair - like when he won't come out at work). It's often the worms that change your life - the upright person will face you, a worm will go behind your back and do a lot of damage without you ever seeing it. Very glad you enjoy the way I weave the tale... I wanted Brian and Justin to become closer again, but gradually and gently. And I wanted to show that Brian takes care of the kids! :-) Next chapter is up, you'll find out a bit more so I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: magita1234 (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2016 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 17

MUST TELL YOU HOW MUCH I ENJOY YOUR WRITING ..I DONT READ STORYS THAT ARE NOT FINISH BECAUSE BY THE TIME I FINISH ..AND HAVE TO WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER I HAVE FORGOTEN WHAT I HAVE READ FROM THE STORY ..YOU ARE NOT LIKE THAT I DONT HAVE TO WAIT UNTILN I FORGET WHAT I HAVE READ.. YOUR STORY IS REALLY WONDERFULL IT KEEPS ONE ON THE EDGE ..WAITING FOR WHATS NEXT ..YOUR A REALLY GOOD WRITER ...THANK YOU 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2016 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 17

Michael is unbelievable!  What a scumbag!  And Ted isn't much better.  

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2016 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 17

Your Ted, Debbie & Michael are really awful, awful people.  I hope they get what they deserve.  Still fascinates me how you take characters we think we know and twist them into something else without really dramatically changing them just tweaking their behavior.  This is a really fascinating story.  I am always so happy to see an update.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2016 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 17

This is were things get really good at least for me.  The moment Michael slapped his little girls hand I knew it was over for him.    And Debs taking up for her son was dispicable.  Love Emmetts comment about the fuck-you pump.  Gus knew exactly what he was doing when he told on Mikey.  Good job, Gus!  I'd dearly love to know what the offer that Brian made to Ben was.  Glad to see Ken and Dave not letting Michael or Deb lay the blame on Brian.  We find out just how delusional Mikey is when he claims Brian belongs to him.  Like the way Teddy let slip about Mikey going through Brians mail and his pockets.  The worst kind of invasion of privacy.  The moment that Deb admitted that she'd gone through Brian's pockets when he was younger Carl should have backed away from her.  She certainly is not the person that people thought her to be.   Letters from Erin!  Those must be important and Mikey screwed it up.  The next couple of chapters are going to be doozzies.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2016 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 15

We get how Shane views Brian.  Judson, probably due to his Indian heritage, sees how Brian is with Judson and is not about to mess with it.  I love Judson.  He's trying to get Shane to see reality and not turn into a Mikey.  Judson also seems to know a great deal about Brian, more than Justin ever knew.  You know I think Shane and Judson would be good together.  Melanie appears to be more involved with her children at the moment.  Jennifer doesn't know exactly what went on between Justin and Brian, her judgement is based on what others have said.  Carl is one smart cookie.  The thing I don't understand is knowing how Brian was treated by his father she can say that Jack was a nice man.  Unless she was getting some from him. I assume they were talking about the cancer arc?  I also get the feeling that Tucker went to the same school as Brian, Shane and Mikey.  Everytime I read this story I see something new in each chapter.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2016 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 15

Poor Gus, he is having to grow up too fast. Must be hard for Brian to see his son unhappy after the horrible home life he had. Shane is an interesting addition to this story. Still love how you are weaving the plot of this story, Keeps me guessing and always anxious for more.  Bill

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2016 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

Hi again! I’m so curious… Again, Erin… What role did she play in Brian’s life? I always thought Brian was “straight gay”… “Before or after Erin….” What? Again, I think I have to be patient.

I would love to see this scene, them sleeping in the library. Everything you write about them, touching each other, hugging each other, smiling or just looking at each other is so damned beautiful!

I have to repeat myself… I really like Judson. Thinking first about Brian and his happiness and intending to support them, helping Justin and Brian. He is very altruistically. Would like to see him happy with Shane!

I wondered sometimes what happened to Jennifer. When did she start to refuse Justin and to trash him? Okay, you know, that I already got a few glimpses, but nevertheless, she’s his mother. When he came back she could have asked him what happened.

Great moment when Justin notices what Brian needs (while talking to Debbie) and just acts! It’s so good to see them together again and I really like their slow approach. Thanks and warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 14

While it would be very interesting to have a showing like Justin wants I can see where Brian would be in trouble if they did it.  We see Erin through Brian's eyes, yet another piece in the puzzle of this story.  The boy I'm assuming is Vic?  When do we get the backstory on those two?  This chapter makes us see how thoughtless we sometimes can be.  Justin's inability to sit still while being told certain things is something that most people do.  It's not that he's running away so much as needing to get away to process.  The trouble comes when two people have different interpitations about the same thing.  I understand what Brian is saying, unfortunately I'm not sure Justin does.  Justin still has a lot of growing up to do.  The contest of drawing Debbie proved that Brian sees behind the mask and Justin looks for the best in people.  This is an intense chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 13

It's interesting to learn how often Brian was in touch with Gus during the last year.  It's  also nice that Justin is honest with Gus.  Gus is more adult than most of the adults.  Justin and Gus' discussion was interesting.  Justin doesn't seem to see the damage that would result if Brian showed his work.  Though I do see Gus point in that people would see what they looked like and what they could look like.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 12

Love how Justin always has time for Gus.  Unlike some others who will be nameless.  Justin explains things in a way that Gus will understand.  I wish more people were like that.  Deb, in this story, tries to make you think she cares.  But it's only in her interest, not the person she's conning.  This is the chapter where Mel starts changing for the better.  The part about Mikey and Doc Dave always stuck in my claw.  Deb did demand and Brian delivered.  Is it his fault that what she got wasn't what she thought she wanted?  I'm suprised that she actually thought Brian should have gone to Oregon and fix things.  Love how Emmett interceeds, he's always been a favorite of mine and I really would hate it if he sided with Deb, Mikey and Ted.  Love how Justin told Deb off.  I'm glad that Brian cares about what Gus hears and how he feels. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 9

The shopping expeditions are some of my favorite chapters.  It's Brian, along with the three kids, Justin, Gus and JR without any family interference.  Brian is so caring of all three.  It also hints at the problems the little ones have been facing in the year they've been gone.  Clothing too small and little food to eat.  Something very wrong there.  I fell in love with them all over again.  Little JR is so excited and it's a shame that she feels like a little stepchild when Brian will do anything for her, inspite of what her mom says.  Love the resturants that they go to and wonder when Gus visited them, because it was only a year that Justin was away yet so much has happened to Liberty Ave.  Justin has also made a head start with making sure that Brian eats and drinks more.  The clothes shopping was out of this world.  JR being so excited.  Both kids got a lot of clothing, more than enough shoes for every day of the week. I would dearly love to see the motif of Rage that Justin drew.  I can't imagine what it could be that Brian found objectional.  Justin, rightly so in my opinion, feels guilty accepting so much from Brian.  Brian, on the other hand, seems to take great joy in being able to provide for the three.  It's a shame Gus and JR are so insecure.  As always a joy to read over and over.

Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hi. I must say when i started reading this story, in the firsts chapters i thought hmm.. i don't know if this is for me... You see Justin is one of my fav, characters. And see how  you play with his persona in here is painteful, not pretty.  (Hoping that's was not how you saw Justin in QAF) And, Brian, in so much pain is hard. How, somme of them are so, meanful with him grrr...😠   

Anyway, as I went deep in to your history i feelt that you put Justin in a better place, sort to speak. I don't know where you're going from here, but i'm curious to find out. I must to admt that you shake me with this one.😉

Like very much the way you put Gust in a line that unites them, and makes them interact. Sweet and very interesting.

Thank you for writing. 😊    

Reviewer: Feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2016 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 14

Wonderful story...more soon please

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2016 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow~~~ about time the boys told her off! You have doneo one heck of a job with this chapter and the whole story, for that matter!!!

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2016 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hi again! Wow, I’d to read this a few times because it’s so intensive! First thing, Brian is showing his drawings to Justin – what a proof of trust! I really wonder about this boy – does Brian have an elder son? I already knew a little about Erin, so it would make sense. I guess I have to be patient…

Then the conversation. It’s not easy just to say a few words about it. It’s amazing how you guide us from one point to another – and it all make sense. I agree with most of the things Brian is explaining and with his argumentation. The drawing of himself, Rage, the rules – it seems as if Justin hadn’t thought about these things a lot or hadn’t talked to Brian about it. But again. So hadn’t Brian. It’s good to see that they finally start to talk to each other. But after reading this I wondered even more what made Brian stay with Justin in the past. “I thought you were unwilling, not unable.” ? But why was this successful, independent man who could have had everything and anyone so fascinated of this innocent, dependent boy, who lived with his parents and hasn’t ever worked in his life? His tenacity? Was he fascinated with the way Justin behaved (as here I am, I take what I want)? Because he represented something opposite to Brian?

Whatever, what captivated me the most was the realization that this man who says he doesn’t believe in love, loves so deeply with all his heart, without expectations (just a few hopes), no matter how painful it was/is or how often the person he loves hurt him, not trying to change Justin, but accepting him and his mistakes, just helping him to grow up, seeing things, giving him everything that was possible to give. Again, I love your story and the way you let them behave. THANKS! a.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2016 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 14

Hi, Beth!  Not sure what I can say that I haven't before, but this is such an amazingly complex story. And I am always a sucker for stories with Gus in it, and your Gus in this story is one smart cookie!  I always thought even on the show that he brought out feelings in Brian that no one else could; a way for him to 'drop his mask,' and show his tenderer side, with a pinch of playfulness mixed in.  Loved watching him interact with his child, and disproving any possible notion that he could ever be the same type of horrid father that Jack was.  It's a miracle he turned out the way he did, given his childhood.

So much to love about this story.  Thank you again for agreeing to post this on here. We are very fortunate that you did.   ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2016 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 14

I, too, am curious what Brian's sketches of Justin would look like.  I hope we get to find out eventually.



Author's Response: Justin will find out, but that'll take a while! :-)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2016 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 14

Another interesting chapter.  So B&J never really understood each other.  Do you have to understand someone to love them?  Probably not.  You have such a interesting perspective on their realtionship.  Always anxious to read more.  Bill



Author's Response: Thank you! No, I believe that you don't "need" to understand a person to love them. But you do need to understand at least a little bit because otherwise living with somebody can become hell. Every now and then, things need to be said and not just felt. If you want to actually share your life with somebody, love is not enough. Sad, but there it is.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2016 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hi again! I really like to see Brian, Justin and Gus together. Beautiful and cute. And I love how you remind us readers of some scenes of the show. This picnic at the library is great. I think this moment in season 2 when Brian refused Justin’s idea about the picnic at the loft, laughing about it, was one of the very painful moments for Justin and I suffered with him. It made me so sad. But again, it matched the show.

The three have a real good conversation in this chapter. Again, I would have loved to see this kind of conversations in the show, but it would have led to other results. One of the reasons why I love your story and “your Brian”! He has matured, is more open and more talkative. It’s due to Gus I think and it’s so cute when Gus is telling Justin how get answers out of Brian. Can’t wait to read more! Thanks again and warmest regards, a.



Author's Response: Hello again! Love to hear from you! Yes, I agree - that picnic scene was painful I needed to do something about it - it stuck in my mind for so long that writing this scene was actually a sort of catharsis. I think Brian needed a bit of a push to become more open and maybe even more considerate. Kids have a way of calling you on your BS... :-) Next chapter up later today, if all goes well!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2016 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 13

I just wanted to say that this is one brilliant story.  I love everything.  Best of all: you know your grammar, and punctuation.  Also, you use the correct tense.  I'm *so* fed up with authors who can't be bothered to get a beta.  Some stories have good ideas, but are impossible to read because the author mixes up their tempi, or doesn't know how to spell.  But those are just the tools you use to create this amazing tale.  Very important, but you need a little bit more as an author.  May I just say, you've got plenty more!

 

I adore Brian in this, he still has some "asshole" moments, but overall, he definitely has grown up.  Justin - torn between maturity and a little too much self-confidence, so well written!  I love the way you portray our boys!

 

I also love your set of original characters, Judson most of all.  But also Shane, who seems to struggle with the things he knows about Brian.  Gus!  What an amazing kid!  Funnily enough, he reminds me of my best friend's little boy, who's a precocious (but cute) little chap.  JR - too sweet for words.

 

The QaF characters - Debbie, seen in an unkind light for a change.  Jen, the same.  Michael and Ted, total idiots (hated them on the show, so totally buy into your characterisation).  Lindsay - now, is she pro Brian or anti?  Wavering a bit?  Mel, I hope to see some development there.  Emmett, one of my fave characters, hope you have a scene or two for him as well!

 

You handle them all so well, so believably.  But best of all, your own characters.  Every single one has something unique, whether it's the Englishman who wanted to be French (funny, that!), or the "hairdresser from hell" with his assistant with the purple hair.  Cynthia had her moment in the spotlight, and you've even given Hunter a profession.  Vic - clearly not Debbie's brother, so I'm hoping to see more of him.

 

Your tale has everything once could wish for, it's atmospheric, it's believable, with good, strong characterisation.  Can't wait to read more!  This reads like some professional novel, so well crafted.  Thank you so much for typing it all up for us to read!

 



Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much. *blushes* Hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2016 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 12

Hi again. First, yeah, it’s Germany. How did you know that? Does my English sound so Germany-like? :-)

Then again. I told you before why I don’t like to see Brian too deeply involved with somebody else, but I think in your story it doesn’t hurt so much because (through his thoughts) it’s very clear from the beginning that Brian still loves Justin deeply and no matter what and it’s also good to read that he was totally honest with Judson about Justin from the start.

This chapter: I think this conversations are very well written and with regards of contents so exhausting – reminds me of movies where family members meet again after haven’t seen each other for a long time, speaking about old stuff, reproaching each other. Debbie and Michael are just living in their own world without opening up for anything else is annoying. Yesterday I’ve seen this scene again in which Michael told Brian under tears that he and Justin knows about his illness. Grr, I always get so angry about the way he explains the situation so that it seems as if it was all Justin’s fault or idea.

Back to your chapter: And again, there are this little wonderful moments, in which B. and J. give each other comfort and stand up for each other – automatically, naturally. Great! And I still have this feeling that there is a breaking point in their behavior since Justin’s been given the flowers to Brian. They seem to be much more or just certain of each other!

Thanks again for an amazing chapter! Warmest regards! a.



Author's Response: Your English is very, very good - it's just that the syntax sometimes sounds German. Yes, I felt that was important - Judson is somebody Brian loves and trusts, but what he feels for Justin is deeper than even that. it had to be obvious from the beginning, otherwise the rest of the story would be out of synch. Those conversations are exhausting (they're exhausting to write, too!), but they need to happen. So much between them was left unsaid, or only hinted at. That's a brilliant observation - indeed, Mikey and Debbie have created a world for themselves, and they insist that people fit into the slots they set up for them. Anybody who doesn't fit gets whined at by Mikey or grumbled at by Debbie. That scene where Michael tells Brian he knows about the cancer - what will I do without you. Aargh. It's all about him, he doesn't even see that Brian is maybe scared for himself and doesn't have the energy to reassure Michael. That was not a good moment in their friendship!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2016 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 13

I adore this story.  I want to keep reading.  Every chapter gets better and better.i can't believe how awful Debbie and company treat Brian.  So glad he has Justin along with his strong support system.  Gus is so precocious!  Since you've finished this mega length story, would you consider posting multiple new chapters daily?  I can't wait to read more!

 

 

 



Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear you enjoy my story! As for posting more than one chapter... I would, but RL keeps interfering. ;-) Sorry, but I think we're stuck with a chapter a day...

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2016 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 13

Brian as an artist is yet another interesting curve in your story.  You twist the characters in fascinating ways.  Can't wait to thear what the conversations with Mel & Lindsay are all about.  Always happy to see an update!!!  Thanks,  Bill



Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to comment, Bill! Looking at the loft, I always thought there had to be more to Brian than just ad-man... :-)

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2016 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

:) LOVE

 



Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2016 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm a sucker for Brian/Justin and always glad to find new stories. And as your friend pointed out to you, this fandom is as fresh as in the beginning, because the theme won't get old in our hearts.

Thanks for your efforts to type it in the computer so we'll be able to read it.



Author's Response: I was ten when I first discovered fandom - Star Trek. ST seems to endure, but I have seen many other fandoms come and go. It never occured to me that other people still love the show as much as I do until I met Giotto. Without her, this story would still collect dust in my bottom drawer! Anyway - very glad you enjoy my story! :-)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2016 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 12

OMG Debbie and Michael need to take a big dose of reality, they are both living in a dream world that is pretty much a nightmare!! I find Judson really interesting. He seems so willing to let Brian go but also seems to really care about him. I guess he is really selfless? Really love Gus in this story. He is very mature and really loves his Daddy and wants to stick up for him. I really doubt Debbie ever really scared Brian. I am always so happy to see an update to this wonderful story!!! Bill

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2016 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 9

Hi again! It’s beautiful to see Brian with the kids (and with Justin). Funny, I thought this would be a chapter maybe a little bit more light-hearted, but then again… I’m very curious about the sketch, What is it that changes the mood so completely? And then at the elevator: I don’t know, I get the impression, that Brian – although he don’t want to have many / any expectations – expected Justin again to understand without explaining or even talking about. But he talked with his friends (Shane, Judson, especially Jim – and in the show often with Michael or Lindsay) about his relationship with Justin or for example about very personal things like their rules and he had told them even his opinion about it, but it seems as if he had never talked much with Justin much about those things. Shouldn’t the important conversations been between them? And before I forget: Gus is great, is so cute! I just can repeat myself. Great story, it let me think about so many things, about what is right or wrong (although I know that there isn’t not only black and white), how to behave in a relationship, what to expect from others and what not…. When I’ll see the show the next time, I think I’ll see it maybe a little bit through other eyes. And again I’m so curious about what is coming. Warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2016 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hi again! Thanks for your long answer to my last review. It was very interesting and “brain-stimulating” :-) The more I think about it the more I have to agree with what you wrote. Brian was able to live this kind of relationship, almost never questioning what Justin’s doing (I remember this scene after Daphne’s party when Brian simply said “You’ve kissed him” not asking why although he seems to be irritated, maybe also a bit amused that he broke his own rule), letting him made his own mistakes, but standing by his side (Pink Posse and other situations) – it was his “call where he wanted to be” – To understand that this didn’t mean that Brian didn’t care but wanted to let him choose was something Justin wasn’t able to accept / or understand. And I agree, I think he was too young, too little experience with life, at this point when they met he didn’t know much about relationships at all and I think at his age he wasn’t able to understand this kind of relationship which Brian offered. And anyway I think there are less people who are really able to live such relationship no matter what age. Myself can’t – I think. :-)

A question: What do you think, why didn’t Brian tell Justin about his cancer? Was he afraid that Justin would react with some kind of pity or was he really afraid Justin could leave because he “would be no longer perfect”?

Okay, this chapter. Again very well written. I like the way you let the conversations happen. The one between Judson and Brian shows again how much Brian still loves Justin. Makes me happy! I know that it’ll be a long way but maybe they can do it right this time. There are so many issues to clear, but that’s one of the aspects which makes your story so brilliant, exciting and interesting. And as I mentioned before I love this conversation between Jim and Justin. It’s nice to see that someone really seems to care not only about Brian but also about Justin. Jim seems to realize that they shouldn’t protect Brian from Justin but help them fix things. It seems as if Brian had told him very much about his past with Justin and Jim also seems to think that they belong togehter in some way and that Justin hasn’t hurt Brian on purpose but because of his youth, his insecurity and his unexperience. And Justin’s very honest, confessing some of his mistakes. What makes me a little bit sad is that this kind of conversation should have been actual between Brain and Justin. I’m looking forward to the next chapters! Amazing story! Warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2016 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 9

So it is not going to be an easy road for B&J.  So many clues to trouble in Canada, shoes that don't fit and being forgotten at the mall.  Nice to have a chapter without Debbie & Michael being buttheads.  Really curious about the shetch for Gus's Tshirt.  Not sure how I feel about Justin accepting all those clothes from Brian??  Looking forward to the next update!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response: I needed a rest from writing Debbie and Michael ;-) Remember that sketch, it will turn up again later! (Much later, LOL) As for the clothes... well, Brian acquired a third kid. Seriously, Brian doesn't overthink this, he's always taken care of Justin. And Justin... he's only too glad to look half-decent again. Other people... won't keep their mouths shut.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2016 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 8

It seems that Judson knew in advance that if Justin ever came back Brian would take him back in a heartbeat.  But with Justin there to back him up with dealing with the Liberty crew it won't be as bad.  It's definate.  The cancer is back.  Love the talk with Jim especially the introspective on Michael.  You nailed it.  Like how you go through their difficult times and question it.  This is one of my favorite chapters because of the shopping trip.  It's so enjoyable to watch Brian with Gus and JR.  They start with food and I'm beginning to see a pattern here.  Your shopping chapters are some of my favorites because we learn more about the kids and how much Brian cares.



Author's Response: I can't see Brian entering a relationship with somebody and not tell them how he feels about Justin. That would be highly unfair. So, yes, Judson is aware of the situation, and has accepted it. Thanks for saying that I nailed the Michael/Brian relationship, and the Brian/Justin one! :-) I loved writing the shopping trip - Brian and Justin without interference from others, and a chance for Brian to spend time with the kids. Part two of the shopping trip is up! :-)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2016 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 7

I hope I don’t get on your nerves with my long reviews  :-) but for me it proves how brilliant your story is because I can’t stop to think about so many things. I started to rethink some scenes and I’m getting more and more to the point where I must admit that Justin often acts very premature, but okay, I think it’s maybe his age and then the fact that he so far doesn’t had to think about such things.

And then you know I think it’s not easy to deal with that kind of relationship Brian had offered, full of freedom for both, but nevertheless with true love, trust and honesty (although also Brian wasn’t always honest with Justin). I don’t know if you would agree, when I was younger I read a lot of and about Sartre and Simon de Beauvoir and the way they tried to live. It was similar in some ways but sometimes I got the impression that especially S. de Beauvoir wasn’t as happy as it seemed. I think you have to be very self-confident, self-trusting and honest and even than I don’t believe that this kind of relationships happens often. And even then I think there has to be always some kind of compromises. And it doesn’t has to be that much. Seeing the tv show there were moments when I thought.. please Brian, just say something, explain why you are acting this way – for example when he couldn’t get to Vermont… Or another example, I thought, yeah, Brian, just one rose would do it, please buy at least one! I think it wouldn’t have taken so much… but okay, that was the tv show and not real life :-)

What I like about this chapter? Everything. As I said this one (and also the next one - conversation with Jim) was the reason for me to start thinking about all this things. I love this pool scene and the way Brian wanted to protect Justin. There is so much love under the surface. I have no words for Michael and Debbie. They are just violating and didn’t seem to notice. And yeah, I really love this conversation between Brian and Justin. It’s a start and even if Brian said he didn’t like to talk, sometimes I think it’s necessary. And good to see another side of Shane! Thanks again for your great ideas! Awesome. Warmest regards! a.



Author's Response: No, your long reviews don't get on my nerves! I'm a writer - reviews are bread and butter to me! :-) I can't even express how much I appreciate people taking the time to tell me what they like (or don't like) about my story. Every single review is a chance to improve my writing, and I'm very grateful when people not only read, but also tell me how they feel about the story. I agree - a relationship like that of Satre and S de Beauvoir takes honesty, a lot of love for yourself and for your partner. Most of all though, I think it requires a certain relaxed atitude toward society and its values. Brian was definitely at a point where such a relationship could've worked for him: successful at work, stud of Liberty Avenue... and he wasn't exactly shy. But how was Justin to cope with that? He had nothing but his youth and talent, and that doesn't exactly give you the kind of confidence you need to face down not just society in general, but your family and friends in particular. Especially when said friends are just waiting for the relationship to fail. Vermont: I believe Brian was testing Justin's trust in him. He desperately wanted Justin to trust him enough not to ask questions, not to doubt his word. Had Justin been as old as Brian, that might have worked. Brian usually failed to take into account that Justin - compared to him - was just an insecure kid. That rose: I think that would've been too little, too late. Brian doesn't buy the rose (or the whole lot) because he instinctively realizes that the time for that kind of gesture is already gone. I hope Shane will grow on you! -- Again, thank you for the in-depth fabulous review!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2016 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow! This chapter started somehow harmless and gets more and more intensive. I’m curious to see how Shane will behave in your story. My first impression of him isn’t a good one. I know, he only wants to protect Brian, but he acts as if he knows everything about the relationship of Brian and Justin, convict Justin, but he just got to know one side of the story, didn’t he?

So, Brian’s ill again? Is it a recurrent cancer? Poor Brian! By the way, the scene in which Brian told Justin about his vacation to Ibiza is one good example in the tv show where Justin behaved very loving and grown-up. To tell him he should go and do whatever he has to do and that he loves him no matter what, although I think he was hurt deeply at that moment.

And then Justin breaks down. A very intensive scene. So many self-reproaches. And yeah, I agree to most of them. This moment when he left Babylon with Ethan, you described it so well, there was so much hurt in Brian’s eyes but still a smile in his face. But you know, the moment before, when Justin saw Brian fucking Rage, there was just as much hurt in Justin’s eyes, but okay, no smile in his face. Maybe that’s the difference…

And I really love this moment between them at the end of the chapter. How Brian still stands by his side and tells Shane to leave. There is still this strong connection between them, no matter what or and nothing else matters. :-)

Thanks for your wonderful story! Warmest regards, and also for you a happy Thanksgiving, also I must admit, where I come from we don't celebrate this. a.



Author's Response: I like to start easy and then come up with the heavy stuff ;-) Shane - he'll come around. He's a bit blind where Brian is concerned, but he'll leanr. Eventually ;-) Ibiza - yes! I thought Justin's reaction was just what Brian needed at that moment. One of his better moments! Justin leaving with Ethan - that wasn't fair because he actually went against his own rules about having sex with another partner more than once. Brian fucking Rage - not a cheat, because Justin knew what to expect. Another moment when they were not on the same page... I think picking Rage to fuck was Brian telling Justin something. Thanks for commenting, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2016 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 8

So the cancer is back, that is a bummer.  Great talk between Justin & Jim and a really interesting take on B&J's relationship that actually really makes sense.  I  love this story!!!  Brian is such a good Dad to both Gus & JR looking out for them and showing how important Gus is to him. Bill



Author's Response: Thank you, bill! Very glad to hear you liked the talk between Jim and Justin, and even better that my take on the relationship makes sense! You have no idea how much it means to me to hear that!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2016 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

Justin is right in knowing he has to figure out who he is before he can figure out Brian.  Michael and Ted are being assholes. Shane and Judson made a mistake in trying to take down Justin in the pool.   Tucker has it right in saying two many people are meddling in Brian's affairs.  Michael's talk of a new storyline for Rage was dispicable.  Even Ben called him on it.  Michael's so dense he doesn't get it.  Justin is seeing things more clearly.  Justin realizes he was only thinking of himself back when they were working on Rage.  Debbie went overboard when she slapped Ted.  Gus wanted to know why she did it and Brian wasn't one to lie.  Even Michael was a dick about the whole thing.  Debbie has gone too far in labeling Brian an asshole especially in front of the children.  Justin admitted that he was the one who hurt Brian not the other way around.  Love the talk Brian and Justin had.  How would things been different if Justin had asked Brian to go to NY with him.  Hindsight is 20/20.  Brian can't help himself, he loves Justin.  Poor Justin has a pain in his head.  I love your next chapter where Brian takes the kids shopping.  He even gives Justin an apartment and a place to get himself together.  Justin talk with Shane is interesting.  While they will never be friends they both want the same thing - what's right for Brian. 



Author's Response: Reading your summary I wonder how I managed to pack all that into one chapter! ;-) Seriously, though - the first chapters are the foundation of the story, so I'm really happy for an attentive reader like you! Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2016 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 7

Debbie is horrible and she is the only one who can't see it.  Still can't fugure out what's wrong with Brian, is it just heartbreak?  You really keep us guessing.  Glad that Jennifer started looking out for justin.  Can't wait for more!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response: Guessing is good ;-) Next chapter later today, so keep your eyes peeled! Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

It's like Brian had two lives.  The one he shared with the Liberty folks and another with people who really care.  We meet Shane who went to high school with them, but Michael never noticed.  Obviously he only had eyes for Brian and no one else exited.  If he didn't see it, Brian didn't do it.  You hint that Brian isn't doing well physically, but the most of the Liberty crowd hasn't noticed. 

Love the bits about the commercial.  It makes you wonder why Brian did one that didn't involve Kinnetik.  I get the feeling that Shane and Judson work for Kinnetik?  Ted, of course, puts his foot in it.  The ungrateful shit.  Gus seems to know more than the adults.  How often has he seen Brian while in Canada? 

Justin is finally seeing Brian and not the product of the Liberty contingent.  He finds his quiet spot and draws from memory.  Then Shane shows up.  Shane's not happy with Justin, but loves one of the pics Justin drew. Justin was young and the young don't care.  They have trouble seeing tomorrow.  But he's changed and hopefully for the better.

Brian reads Justin well.  Gus is not happy with Deb and who can blame him.  When Justin left the first time Shane was there to pick up the pieces and that help him put up the front that the Liberty crowd saw is my guess.  Judson, on the other hand, knows what Justin means to Brian and that Justin really does care. 

We learn that Jack wasn't the only one to hurt Brian and that Shane pushed her down a flight of stairs. Such a lot of little tidbits that lets us see Brian and Justin clearly.

 

 



Author's Response: I adore your comments! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. It's fantastic to see that you pick up on all the little hints I drop throughout, and that you are so invested in my characters. I'm having so much fun sharing the story with you!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hi, Beth! What a pleasure to get to revisit this story. :)  So much depth and emotion in this chapter.  You write Brian's inner thoughts, as well as Justin's, so well.  Such a captivating story!  Thanks again for posting this on here. What a treat!  ~Kim



Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kim! I'm so glad that you enjoy reading it all again! And I'm REALLY happy I did post it here! :-)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 6

What a story!!!  The B&J saga from such an amazingly different perspective.  I never know what is coming next.  Now we have to wonder what is going on with Brian.  I am thinking anorexia.  I look forward to every update which I know about immediately since I made this one of my favorite stories.  Bill



Author's Response: Thanks Bill - it's so great to hear that you like the story this much! Hope you enjoy the next chapter - I just posted chapter seven :-)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2016 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hi again! Interesting conversations… sad, funny, sarcastic, ambiguous… There is so much more under the surface. Again, very well written. One question: the place.. it isn’t Britin, is it??? What I’m very curious about is to get to know what happened to Justin this last year. It seems as if only Brian was in pain and hurt so much but I can’t believe this. Warmest regards, a.



Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! Comments like yours show me the story "works" for the reader, and that is such a thrill! Oh, and yes - the place is Britin. The story starts out with Justin looking at Brian, but pretty soon, we will find out how Justin spent his time away from home.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 3

An amazing chapter. There are so many ups and downs. At least for those readers like me who want to see them together again. Must be so offending and painful for Justin to see Brian and Judson together and how the behave. And then on the other hand there are Brian’s inner thoughts “My Justin – Looks like shit and is still so beautiful”. “He wants me back. I want him back”. Great! Very good written. And at the end of this chapter I feel so sorry for Brian. For some people friendship has sadly not the same meaning as for others. Warmest regards, a.



Author's Response: I think most people interested in QaF are invested in the relationship Brian and Justin share. I think it's healthy for Justin to see that Brian may want him, but he doesn't need him - he can build a life for himself without Justin. If Justin wants Brian, he really needs to pull up his socks! I'm especially glad you enjoy their "inner voices" because those are difficult to write. What does Brian sound like in the privacy of his own head? If you like it, I got it right.. Really happy you enjoy my story! :-D

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

 

 

Hi again! Thanks for answering my former questions! Nice chapter! I really like the eavesdropping scene. Funny to imagine not only Justin is doing it but also Debbie and Carl. I also suffer with Justin. Not because it seems not to be as easy to get Brian back as he maybe has thought but because of the way Brian’s acting. Must be hurtful to hear him say “boyfriend” and “I love you” so easily while he has waited years to hear Brian say these words. And I don’t know what you would say? I think without Justin Brian maybe wouldn’t be so open to someone? Warmest regards, a.

 

 



Author's Response: Answering questions my readers have is the least I can do! I had fun writing that eavesdropping scene, especially as I wanted to show that Carl wasn't happy doing that - he doesn't mind at work, but he's obviously also trying to keep his private life and work apart. I agree, Brian learned a lot in his relationship with Justin. That's one of the reasons why I was so disappointed with the last episodes - Brian goes on this incredible journey, and still ends up alone. Not fair! :-) Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ok, let me get this straight. Gus is six and knows whether his moms are having sex or not? Really?
Ted should have been fired right then and there. What's he have against Brian now? If he isn't happy with his job as a lowly accountant, leave. I don't blame Blake for being disappointed.
Same thing with Mel. Not happy about being at the party, she could've found somewhere else to be.
Brian has taken up modeling? Steve was cute. Brian owns The Three Ring Circus I assume.
Brian freaks internally wanting Justin back. Jen knows Justin wants Brian back. She isn't a happy camper about it.
Poor Judson doesn't see it coming.

Author's Response: Yes, you got that right. Gus knows. Kids can be perceptive. I agree, if Ted isn't happy in his job, he should leave. Only, where would he go? Mel - she has reason to be testy, you just wait and see! ;-) Glad you liked Steve! Brian's modeling - not entirely by choice... Judson - he's been around the block. :-) And that's all I'm going to say for now... :-D Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ok. First, Gus knows whether his moms are or aren't having sex? At six years old? Really?
If Mel isn't happy to be there, why not be somewhere else?
What's up with Ted and that ad? That's not like him unless he's out to get Brian. Wondering about that. If the ad doesn't begin until next week then they can stop it. Don't blame Blake for being disappointed with Ted. Brian should have fired him then and there.

Poor Judson. Doesn't see it coming.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

I really like Ben in this chapter, the voice of reason.  He is telling Justin what he needs to hear.  Michael and Debbie need to take a long walk on a short pier.  Who talks crap about a father in front of his son.  I was never a big Debbie fan, she has her good points but is blind in a lot of things.  Still enjoying your story.  Lots going on under the surface.  I am thinking money troubles for Mel & Linds.  Bill



Author's Response: Thanks, Bill! I'm glad you like Ben, he's one of my favorites! :-) Michael and Debbie... I agree, if you have something to say, don't say it in front of the kids. Glad you're still enjoying the read!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

Everybody is pairing into groups.  I think Ted should have been fired on the spot, but Brian isn't ready to push.  Then we jump to Melanie who doesn't have the sense to knock before barging in.  Gus is way too smart, he asks questions and is honest to boot.  He certainly didn't get that trait from Mel or Lindsay.  Justin has only been away for a year yet major changes in chemistry have occurred during that time.  Changes to Britin as well.  The patio area and play area for the kids.  Debbie, Micheal and Ted have all gotten worse in their assessment of Brian.  Blake, Ben, Carl and Emmett are seeing things differently.  What is with Deb, she was so understanding about Vic and Michael and now she's trying to get Gus to play straight?  And that remark about being married to Michael's dad so not true and Brian knows it.  You did a great job of using Mikey to get on everyone's nerves.  Him and his mother are so uncouth.  Why is Michael under the mistaken impression that he's an orphan?  Does he just want everyone to feel sorry for him?  Poor Gus having to put up with not only Michael but Debbie too.  The descriptions of the painting are to die for.  Gus and Brian are much closer than they were when Justin left.  I'm not sure why I feel the need to disect your chapters, but they're so good I want you to now what it is I found interesting about it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

JR's dad is there, yet she calls Brian Dada.  That is telling.  It's obvious that the kids come first to Brian.  Justin's observations appear to be spoton.  That JR is something else with her getting someone to suck her sucker for her.  Haha.  This is were Melanie comes off as a bitch, I'm glad that changes.  I hadn't notice how Debbie took such devious delight in pointing out Justin.  Then Mikey and his gleeful remarks.  Yuck.  It had to hurt with Justin's mother said he was back for bad.  But it's obvious to us the reader that Brian still cares.  Mel's tongue is really sharp, but Emmett is there to call her on it.  What's with Ted, he's almost as bad as Mikey.  We meet Jim.  Gus knows him and I was never quite sure what his place was with Brian.    Along with Ken and Dave.  The part with the courier was delicious.  He kind of reminds me of Justin when he and Brian first met.  It's also good to know that Brian wants Justin as much as Justin wants Brian.  Of course, that means Judson might lose.  Ted and that fourth ad, now that was beyond bad.  Even Blake is not happy about what Ted did.  Deb seems to think it's alright to steal and then show the world what you found.  Please!



Author's Response: Thank you for your comments! I love that you give me such in-depth feedback! It enables me to understand what the reader sees, and how the story works for you. Great stuff, and much appreciated!

Reviewer: Marie-France TEJEDOR (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2016 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 3

J'aime bien le début de cette histoire, mais c'est bizarre de voir Brian en amour avec un autre que Justin ! Même si Judson a l'air d'être un mec bien



Author's Response: Merci beaucoup! Je suis heureux que vous ayez aimé le début de mon histoire. Et oui, il a été bizarre d'écrire sur Brian dans une relation avec quelqu'un qui n'est pas Justin. Je sentais que Brian avait besoin de quelques amis qui ne sont pas méchants avec lui. Donc oui, Judson est un type décent. Je m'excuse pour mon français, je n'ai pas beaucoup de possibilités de parler la langue.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: November 20, 2016 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hmmm..
I'm not too sure about how I feel. This chapter makes the reader believe that Justin left on his own at the end of the series when in reality Brian pushed him until it was a mutual agreement.
I'm not sure if I'll continue reading, but thanks for posting.
-b

Author's Response: I agree, the decision to call off the wedding was mutual in the end. But I'm not giving away the plot in the first couple of chapters :-)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hi, Beth!  As you probably already know, so many things I continue to like in this story. The complexity, the maturing of Brian in a way that is still IC but much like I would see him in the future. The way he loves and takes care of both his son and JR.  The jealousy so obvious in Justin, and the innermost thoughts of Brian's turmoil at seeing him for the first time again. Even the surprising reaction of Jennifer's dislike of her own son (at least for now - I know this is a long story, so hopefully that will change eventually). Her strong support of Brian.  Very intriguing.

Mel and Ted. Ugh.  Mel is being her normal, snarky self, while Ted has reverted back to his porn ways, instead of concentrating on what is most important - recalling what Brian has done for him in the past when he practically pulled him out of the gutter. 

So many aspects to this story that I love!  But the richness and scope of the story is what draws me in.  And while I admit to not particularly caring for Brian being with someone else, I can still see how his previous relationship with Justin would have been the motivation for him even being ABLE to be in another serious relationship. 

Interesting, too, to hear Justin's thoughts while observing Judson and Brian, for only HE would really know the depth of feelings and intensity there through his own experience.

Once more, I can't thank you enough for posting this on here.  Such an intriguing, wide-ranging story! So glad you didn't 'leave it on the shelf,' but your friend persuaded you to post it!  Looking forward to reading the next part.  And welcome again to our 'family.' ~Kim



Author's Response: Hi Kim! Thanks again for the welcome to the family! :-) Thank you so much for your comments - I do love it when a reader picks up on the little things, as you have done. Jen - she'll grow up some, with a little help from her friends. ;-) Actually, I'm hoping that the growth of all characters will become apparent in the course of the story. And yes, it IS a long story. Right now, I think I'll have 100+ chapters once it's all typed up. I'm very glad I didn't leave it on the shelf, because it's wonderful to see how people get their teeth into my story. Just posted chapter four ;-)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ted betraying Brian is quite a shock.  Wonder why he would do that.  If I was Brian I would not invite some of these people to my house.  I love your take on these relationships it is really original and keeps me guessing and wondering.  Really enjoying this story.  I was happy to see chapter 3 posted, can't wait to read more.  Bill



Author's Response: Thank you Bill! I wouldn't want these people around, either. Wouldn't even want to work with them! Then again, Ted has a history of being a jerk toward Brian, and Brian hired him anyway. So, while they all seem to think Brian is a monster, he often shows in little ways that he is not. It's so much fun when somebody tells me I keep them guessing! Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 2

Do may I say how ugly certain members of the gang were to Judson? Even Justin  was taken aback by the disrespect. And what's up with Jennifer who has always been on Team Justin? Lovin' this...



Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sooooo happy to see you made it here! I've been reading your fantabulous fic elsewhere and "im thrilled you have post here. I have no problem starting from the beginning and going slow this time around. Welcome...



Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome, and very glad to hear you're willing to start reading from the beginning again! That's a big compliment, thank you!

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2016 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 2

Sounds like Kinnetik needs a new art director. Justin looking for a job? Don't think Judson would be happy with that.

The gang tolerates Judson? Why is that. Brian seems more at ease around him. He said he loves him. It came so easily.

What's up with Daphne and Justin? Was she upset Brian pushed him to NY too?

Author's Response: Glad to see you're so intrigued! Hope you'll keep reading!

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2016 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Is it just me or does Judson seem very much like Justin in coloring but no one notices it.
Awkward doesn't begin to cover the feelings that may be bought up id Justin does decide to show up.

Author's Response: Yes, you're right! I thought it unlikely that Brian would suddenly go for "tall, dark and mysterious" ... :-) And yes, Justin showing up put the cat among the pigeons! :-)

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2016 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well, I'm back again...(I'm the one that sent mail BEFORE reading to tell you that there are many of us that still love QAF stories!)...Finished the  story and just LOVED it.  You have the characters down pat and hope you continue with the rest ASAP.  I will be watching for it.  Thank you so much! Look forward to other stories...but the rest of this one first.



Author's Response: Definitely, this one first! Now that I started typing and proof-reading, I want to finish it. I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed the read! I'm hoping to post quickly, I know what it's like when you have to wait for the next chapter... :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 2

How well I remember this chapter.  You start it with a list of the characters that will be around.  But the timing seemed a little off.  Justin, Carl and Debbie are next to their car when Judson calls Kinntik to find Brian, who's just fired his art director.   With an ad that is due that day!  Cynthia has been worried about her mother and not on top of things.  But he manages to put together a kickass campaign.  That should have taken hours.  I'm so jealous at the computer skills that Brian possesses.  We also meet Vic who isn't Debbie's Vic.  The part abut the paychecks not being in is worrying.  Justin is learning a lot and not any of it good.  Justin was able to identify the HOT guy in an ad Michael and Emmett were drooling over.  But just how did they get the ad?  Have got to say how much I enjoy each time Gus and JR are mentioned in this tale.  Can't wait for Brian to show up and the fireworks to start.



Author's Response: I'm basing Brian's "quick fire fixes" on what we have seen on the show - for one thing, the "Pool Boy" campaign, which he came up with at the speed of light, and his "advertising" Michael on that dating site, where he also took the photos (and edited them). I'm also assuming that not all his time on the computer is spent cruising porn sites. ;-) How did Emmett get the ad - well, Judson tells Steve that they are running print ads. I'm glad you like the kids! Thank you so much for reading again!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Reading this yet again is a treat.  I'm learning more this time then I did the first and second times.  So Justin went to NY and when he no longer heard from Brian he found himself another Ethan?  He thought he'd come back and take up where he left off?  Little does he know that someone evil has put a spammer into the work.  He also comes across a little vain and egotistical, but that's not who he is.  Jennifer is pissed that Justin didn't come to her marriage and rightly so.   But there's something more that she's unaware of and acting the way she is to her son makes her not too different from Craig.  We get to see Hunter who brings Justin up-to-date on the happening but just happens to leave out that Brian is with Judson.  The diner has a new owner and I'd guess that from what Judson said about Brian's many jobs that he's the one with that has done the diner proud.  I also notice that Melanie is being given the role of bad girl, but I know that changes.  You keep us on our toes.



Author's Response: Hi, nice to see you here! :-D That's part of the fun in writing: to take the reader on a journey! If all goes well, they might encounter a few things they didn't expect along the way... It's such a thrill to hear that you're willing to read my story a third time! Wow! Thank you!

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 2

Really liked that little look into Brian’s business life and everyone at the house listening in on the phone was great! And as Judson said, entertaining,LOL.  Ohhhh, I detect a bit of a green eyed monster coming out in Justin. Wow, first Debbie’s rude introduction, then Lindsay pushes Judson out of the way to get to Justin. There is certainly some hostility there directed at the poor guy. This was a great chapter and eagerly waiting for the next : ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response: Thank you so much, Janet! Very happy you're enjoying this! :-D

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow, Justin thinks Brian would just be sitting around waiting for him. That seems pretty arrogant.  I am wondering why no one likes Judson.  Debbie certainly made her feelings clear!  Really happy to see chapter 2 and looking forward to more!!  Bill



Author's Response: Third chapter is up! Enjoy your Sunday! :-)

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 19, 2016 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 2

First of all, welcome to Midnight Whispers. You have joined such a great group of readers and writers. 

I must confess that I have read most of this story elsewhere, but I read through it quickly. Time became an issue so I fell behind. This gives me the excuse to once again discover this unique world you created. I love the characterizations, and the emotions are just displayed in an amazing way. 

I am excited for those readers that find this story for the first time. They are in for such a treat. Thanks for writing this... and I will certainly be following along - again. 

*Janet*



Author's Response: Thanks for the comment, and for the nice welcome! Very glad that publishing here on MW gives you a chance to catch up on my story!

Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2016 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

I enjoyed reading this but I have a question.  How long has Justin been in New York?  Just from the what I've read, it must have been a significant amount of time, especially if Brian is in a relationship with someone else.  It might be an idea to give an indication of how much time has elapsed.

Also, it sounds like the property where Briand/Judson live is Britin, maybe not.

Keep posting and I'll keep reading.



Author's Response: Ah, I love an impatient reader ;-) Time will be mentioned in later chapters, the location will be mentioned in later chapters... all will be revealed. Bit by tiny bit because I love a bit of suspense ;-) Hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2016 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

BEFORE I even read your story, and I will review again when finished, PLEASE know there are  many readers left who ONLY read QAF stories, especially about B/J. Many of original writers have disappeared, so, for now, you are a breath of spring! 

The process of the security code is very frustrating~ I have not completed reviews many times, because of it! Just an FYI!!!

Be back!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I really do hope you like the story now! (Doesn't help being a breath of spring if folks don't like your story... ;-) )

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2016 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi! Don't be angry at me but I just have to ask. Is this your own Justin or do you see him like you describe him. i mean - don't get me wrong - he acts very selfish in your story and I just don't consider him like that, but this is your story. And another question. I know maybe it's a little restricted of me but I am too much in Brian and Justin together. This is no story in which they get their hapy end? Nevertheless, best regards, a.



Author's Response: I don't ever get angry with legitimate questions ;-) I see Justin as quite mature for his age - but sometimes, his youth shines through. He's a bit selfish in the beginning of the story, but that's the way he acted after Ethan - waltz back into Brian's life and get what you want. It worked before, he has no reason (yet) to believe that it won't work again. In a lot of long-term relationships, pattterns tend to repeat. Brian and Justin are actually a prime example from what we got to see on screen. Having said that, without giving away too much of my plot - this story is about Brian and Justin and their journey. And I love happy endings. ;-)

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2016 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi there : ) I’m so glad you decided to post this story here. I’ve been hearing a lot about it so I know you’ve got an amazing story going on here :  )

Now for the review:  Jen is really, REALLY not happy with Justin, but then again, he didn’t go to her wedding, which would probably tick me off too, Ha! Justin seems pretty sure of himself where Brian is concerned but something tells me everything isn’t going to be as hunky-dory as he thinks it is. I like Judson (Judson/Justin???? – LOL, I see a resemblance there). He knows Brian, and he knows the family, and to top that off, he seems to be good for Brian, which in turn isn’t going to be good for Justin.

I enjoyed this first chapter very much and am looking forward to the next one. If you would like a banner for this, just let me know, I’ll be more than happy to make one : ) I’ve been told you have my email (which is perfectly fine, BTW). Last but certainly not least, welcome to the site, we’re very happy to have you with us. : ) *hugs* Janet



Author's Response: Hi Janet, thank you so much for your kind words! I'm very pleased with my decision to come here, you're a friendly bunch! :-) Justin seems to think nothing much has changed since his little tryst with Ethan... he could be wrong :-) As for the banner - yes please! Will be getting in touch via email later, thanks so much for offering!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2016 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

A really fascinating start to this story.  It is such an original take on Justin and Brian's relationship.  I can't wait to read more.  Great story!  Bill



Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be posting the next chapter later today, and I sincerely hope you'll continue to enjoy reading!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2016 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Beth!  As you already know, I am more than thrilled to see you begin to post your story on MW!  it is such a rich, complex story that you have woven that I'm sure everyone will be intrigued by it. Thank you for becoming a member on here, and sharing your talent with us! Readers are in for a real treat! If you need anything at all from us, please do not hesitate to ask. A warm welcome to you! ~Kim



Author's Response: Hiya Kim! Thank you so much for the lovely warm welcome! Much appreciated!

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