Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Seven Minutes
Reviewer: Nanna Nat (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2020 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

It is always good to read something out of canon that feels like it could be in canon. I believe it. Great writing!



Author's Response:

Great to see a new reader for my stories! I'm happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for the comment :).

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2018 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 16

Loved it, now to next one

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 16

Wow that was so amazing and I’m over the moon that Dean has accepted them together. Brian really needed that family’s love so I’m very happy he got it. Justin and him were meant to be together their love is so amazing. 

 

Please dont end this here I need more and more and more by infinity xxx



Author's Response:

Aww, I'm so glad you ejoyed this story. 

Don't worry. It ain't over yet! There are two sequels. Seven Moments and Seven Days. Go have fun :).

Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 15

I’m sad that Brian wasn’t allowed to go with them I can’t nla Justin for being upset. I thought they were going to get caught at Brians house when they were together. They really are randy aren’t they lol . I’m loving they are so free and active together. I hope they stay together forever. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Haha, they can't get enough of wach other now that they've had the first bite :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 14

I’m loving that Dean is maybe getting more comfortable with them together. I do hope he fully is soon. I do love how natural they are it’s so refreshing. 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

He's slowly coming around :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 13

That was hot and beautiful, Justin’s first time was just as it should be. I’m so glad Brian is treatthin so well and that Justin is treating him well back. I hope Dean accepts them soon because he is going to miss his best friend and brother if he doesn’t. 

 

Loving this so much x



Author's Response:

They so deserve an amazing first time :). I'm glad you like this so much. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 12

I wish Dean would come around, I have a feeling maybe he fancied Brian maybe and that’s why he is upset?. My heart is really in this story so beautiful x



Author's Response:

Yeah, Dean is being unnecessarily mean. It seems a lot of my readers thought the same thing but don't worry that's not the case. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh man happy tears on hearing that from Justin I have a boyfriend. Sooo freaking cute. Jennifer is really up there in my opinion she rocks and I love how she is supporting them.  I knew Dean would act bad when he found out, I really hope that Jennifer can calm him down. 

 

Please write more stories where they are together from school and end up married with babies show every process of it. 



Author's Response:

Aww, *hugs*. 

If I ever do get an idea and inspiration, I will write another story. You should definitely read the sequels even though they are not as fluffy as this story and they do have some angst. But don't worry, still plenty fluffy! I also wrote Spin The Bottle + a sequel. Those are high school stories as well. Far from this story, but if you like HS stories maybe you should give those a try? 

Thanks for the comment :).

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

I loved Jennifer’s reaction, and the love between these guys is getting stronger. I hope when Dean finds out they don’t break up or fight if they do I might cry. 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

I loved Jennifer’s reaction, and the love between these guys is getting stronger. I hope when Dean finds out they don’t break up or fight if they do I might cry. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Jennifer is a supermom :). I'm not giving away any spoilers but if you do shed a tear, I will be here with tissues <3. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 9

They just keep getting cutier and cutier don’t they. You are so melting my heart right now. Please write more stories like this xxx

 

incredible work x



Author's Response:

Aww, I'm so happy to hear that. I try to write more. Fluffy stories are the reason of my life :D. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 8

Lol loved this, it was like kids playing kiss chase and getting all giddy. They are so cute together I love stories in which they show them like this. I do think Jennifer will be cross about the detention though. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Hehe, they are lite to little preschoolers :D. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oooooh I love it. I love Brian sneaking into Justin’s room and cuddling with him and kissing and the hickeys. So much cuteness and laughter. I get the feeling that they will be caught soon though. 

 

I hope all will be ok with them. Love it x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oooooh I love it. I love Brian sneaking into Justin’s room and cuddling with him and kissing and the hickeys. So much cuteness and laughter. I get the feeling that they will be caught soon though. 

 

I hope all will be ok with them. Love it x



Author's Response:

Hehe, something I wished had happened in the show :). Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 6

Lol Daphne is funny and I’m glad she did that because they do like each other and they gotta atmit it. It’s like the guy who pulls the girls pigtails. It’s so Sweet and fun to see them okay each other like that. I hope they officially get together. 

 

Love it x



Author's Response:

Haha, exactly! Never thought of it like that :D. As you know, you must read more to find out if they get officially together :). Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 5

They were so cute messing about like that, I was hoping it would kick start something now. Justin really hurt Brian with his words, he better say sorry poor Brian. 

 

Excellent work x



Author's Response:

Yeah Justin did :(. He's a scared and unexperienced little boy. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 4

You are really making me smile watching them together and seeing them grow together. Their bond is getting stronger. I thinks Brian needs it so much as he is starved from affection at home. A good family and partner is what he needs someone to love him. 

 

Beautiful work x



Author's Response:

Yeah, Brian's homelife isn't glamorous and a boy needs his dose of affection. Happily he has the Taylor's. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Brian sure is going after his prey with gusto isn’t he. I think that Justin is already in his trap. Loving it.



Author's Response:

Yes, he is determined to make Justin his! Just the way it should be :). Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 2

Lol Daphne is wicked isn’t she playing that game with hem getting them into positions loved it as it made me laugh. I love how Brian is In this his sense of humor is so brilliant. Supertastic lol my new fav word I think. Can’t wait to see what happens at his birthday party now. 

 

Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Hehe, we gotta love Daph :). And I'm happy you're enjoying my AU Brian. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

I’m loving the start of this story. I love seeing them as teenagers and going to school together. I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope it was Brian and Justin in the seven minutes in heaven together.



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that. You know the only way to find out is to read more :). Thank you for the comment

Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2018 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Reading this for the second time... Love it! 



Author's Response:

Aww, glad to hear you coming back to this one :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 16

Fun story to read. Make me happy. Thanks so much



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you <3. And thank you for all the lovely comments :). 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 14

I feel sorry for dean. For so long brian is his best friend and now he is lovey dovey with his brother. I hope dean will find someone to love soon



Author's Response:

Yep, must be weird when your best friend is over so much but spends time more in little brother's room. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 13

Its nice to have an older brother who looking out for justin



Author's Response:

Yeah, not a lot of people write that kind of characters. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

They are so sweet together. My cheeks is hurt from smiling too much reading this before dean finding out



Author's Response:

Hehe, my favorite kind of comment when someone says they're smiling so hard that their cheeks hurt. My work is done here :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 10

Jennifer is the best mom ever!!!!



Author's Response:

Jennifer rocks. She really is the best. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 7

Naughty boys.... dean will kill brian if he find out



Author's Response:

Naughty boys are the best ;). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

Lol daphne .... reading this make me miss my teen life



Author's Response:

Well you had good teenage yers then :D. Nothing would want me to wish them back. Unless they're like Brian and Justin's :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh no!!!!



Author's Response:

Yep :(. Trouble in paradise. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Brian is crazy in loveeee



Author's Response:

That he is! Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Dean is protective big brother. What will happen if he came home late. 



Author's Response:

Yep, Dean is a protective one. Maybe a little too protective. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

Its kind of nice to read story where brian is the one who have crush on justin. Is dean gay?



Author's Response:

I thought it would be a nice change. Mostly it is Justin running after Brian but I like to turn tables once in a while :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Teen brian is cute



Author's Response:

I always thought teen Brian did have this very adorable side. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this story so much. Came across it after a recommendation on the MW Facebook group. I love how you capture Brian's unique blend of vulnerability, goofiness and sensuality... You can clearly see how he could develop into the adult Brian, albeit this one is more in touch with his feelings. The other thing I loved about it was how unquestioningly their friends and family (apart from Dean) accepted their burgeoning love... It's not even an issue that they're gay. I found that so refreshing. I can see myself coming back to this one again. In the meantime I'm going straight on to the sequels now :) 



Author's Response:

Aww, such kind words. I'm pudding here! My goal with this story was to come up with something nice and feelgood stuff. No hate, not a lot of angst, no real life issues such as gay hate because real people in this world spread it around way too much and I have no idea why. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this story and I hope you will like the sequels too :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2017 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 16

That was great!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the comments. I'm so happy you enjoyed reading my story :).

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2017 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2017 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 14

That was amazing!

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 13

That was terrific

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 12

Very cool

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

That was terrific

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 10

That was great

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 9

That was great

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2017 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 8

that was great



Author's Response:

You put a big smile on my face when I saw your comment :). A good way to wake up! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed my story. Thank you so much for all the comments.

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2017 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 7

that was great

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2017 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

That was great

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2017 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 5

That was great

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2017 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

That was great

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2017 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 3

That was great

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2017 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

That was great.

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2017 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was great!

Reviewer: April_Danielle (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2017 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow just wow😍😍I love it so much,..I don't know how you did it but it was really great..While reading this,I'm imagining teenage Brian,Justin not so much bcoz he was still a teenager when the show started but Brian?You're unbelievably brilliant writer who can write and portray a different personality far from what we used to..I love how you make B such a romantic boy and so open about his feelings and do something about it...They're so sweet and adorable and for a change they are teenagers in love and without a care around them,mostly without people who tried to break them or curse them for being who they are..Dean at first maybe a little disagree but he was just trying to protect his brother but all in all he loves them and Jen as usual the loving and supporting parent you could ask for. And we shouldn't forget the best hag Daph....💝💝💝💝

 I guess i was babbling enough,i was enjoying this so much and love it even more..Thank you so much for sharing and writing such a beautiful story..You were always great at writing and this one is no different excellent as usual..Thank you again and looking forward to start the sequel..😘😘



Author's Response:

I love babbling :). I'm so touched by your lovely words. They mean so much to me. I'm really happy you enjoyed my story and I hope you'll enjoy the sequel too. Thank you so much for the comment 💛


Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2017 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 16

What I loved especially about the story is that Justin started out being a lot more shy than in the series (what makes sense, though, since he was even younger in your story) and during the story he slowly turns into the Justin we know from the series. And even if Brian was so open and showed his affection, I didn't think one single moment that he was written out of character- Considering the different surroundings and that he was just a bit older than Justin, I think his behaviour was totally natural and you still captured his unique Brian-character.

This story is really something special and way too cute- thank you! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words. They mean so much to me. I'm happy you enjoyed reading this. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Alois (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2016 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 16

Thank you for this refreshing story Heidi! I enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to more stories from you :)



Author's Response:

You're welcome. Thank you for reading this and leaving comments. They do mean so much to me. I'm also happy you enjoyed this story. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2016 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

I think what I really like about this story is the innocence of your characters. They are so cute together. Watching porn LOL but also being so comfortable around one another. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I never actually thought about them being innocent when I wrote this but you are totally right. Glad to learn new things about my own story :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Rebecca (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2016 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this story, are you going to write a sequel? I would love to read more about their future together. The way you write their relationship is so addictive you just want to read more and find out what cute things they are going to do next.



Author's Response:

I'm not answering question's about the sequel yet *clears throat*. I'm really happy you enjoyed this. I was amining for something utterly adorable and seems like I succeeded in it. Thank you so much for your comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2016 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 11

I think Jennifer can be elected mother of the year. I really enjoy this open Brian who had a crush on Justin,for what... six years? The boys are finally getting closer. Great job on making them slowly but surely falling in love with each other :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, Brian's been making mooneyes for Justin for quite some time :D. Jennifer is a kick ass mother! Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

They have it so bad. Again, beautiful way to make them fall in love. I really love everything about this story. I'm all caught up now, and will savor the rest of this story pretty quickly I think. Perfect way to enjoy my Sunday. Thank you again for your wonderful work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It means so much to know you enjoy this sory :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 7

I love the way you make things progress between them. And Brian's reaction to the hichey was hilarious! 



Author's Response:

Haha, Brian Kinney ooc or not, does not want visible hickeys :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 6

You have to adore Daphne here lol. I love Justin being miserable and stubborn at the same time. Again, another wonderful chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. Justin misses Brian and makes him all miserable and stubborn :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love angst lol but right here, I know the level of angst will be perfect just to spice things up a little. It's fun to read about Justin being so uncomfortable with intimate connection. I understand why Brian was angry and Justin can be so stubborn. But they have its so bad already lol. Loving this :)



Author's Response:

Yeah. things got a little scary for Justin. I'm happy you're enjoying this. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 4

Again, so many things I love. Daphne is a hit. It's fun witnessing Justin fighting so hard against Brian. And Brian being so perseverant is great. Really, really great ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm happy many readers seem to like Daphne in this story :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love love love the dynamic between Brian and Justin. So refreshing to read a story like yours :)



Author's Response:

Happy you like this. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 2

Loved the game and Brian biting Justin's ass lol also, I laughed so hard on the supertastic quote from drunk Brian. He is quite adorable. Supertastic chapter!



Author's Response:

Haha thank you! I think we all would be tempted if Justin's bubble butt was right in front of us :D. Happy you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Finally, RL allows me some time to read your story! I've always had a soft spot for teenage B/J stories and I'm so loving yours. Love the friendship between Daphne and Justin here and the fact that you've created an OC as Justin's brother and Brian's BF is a wonderful idea! Thank you for sharing this one :)



Author's Response:

I'm happy you're liking the idea for this story. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2016 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 16

I need to read this!!!! I didn't get the time, but I promise you I will :) Looking forward to it!



Author's Response:

Hehe, take your time :). I'm waiting for the last chapter of Entwined like a kid for christmas :D. I might take an early start though and start reading it already. Thanks for the comment. 

Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2016 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love love love this story!!! An open and affectionate Brian. Do you have more like this? 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you love this! Thank you so much. People have said that in my story 'When Life Gives You Lemons' has affectionate and open Brian. It's really old story so the quality of it might not be the same as in this story but maybe you could check it out? Thank you so much for the comment!

Reviewer: Marie-France TEJEDOR (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2016 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 16

Très jolie histoire! Simple et rafraichissante Merci beaucoup Ca fait plaisir de lire des histoires comme çà de temps en temps sans angoisse ni violence que de l'amour 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Means so much to know you liked this. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2016 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 16

Thanks for the lovely story!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 16

Great story!

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 16

Thank for for this wonderful story. 



Author's Response:

You're welcome. I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 16

Hello, Heidi!  What a cute story this was! Sometimes, I need to read one without a lot of drama, and this one fit the bill perfectly.  Loved all the interaction between Daphne and B & J, and the bantering between all of them.  So adorable! 

I'm glad that Dean came around.  For a while, I was wondering if it was jealousy, but I guess he really WAS just concerned about his 'baby brother.'  :)

Thank you so much for posting this very enjoyable story on here.  And thank you for posting some more of your stories on the site. I hope we see more of them in the future. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi there Kim! Thank you so much! It means a lot to hear what you said. I'm happy you enjoyed this. I will definitely write more in the future. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: NEUZA (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2016 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 16

Realmente adorei a historia, adorei que os meninos se conheceram tão cedo e continuaram juntos!!Obrigada por esse presene!!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you hon! I'm really glad you liked this. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: cuivresdesaxe (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was a very refreshing story, I liked that there was no big drama, just the 2 of them happy together. A very pleasant read, I'm looking forward to more fics from you.



Author's Response:

Yeah, usually ever happy fic has some kind of drama and I really wanted to write something feel good and easy reading. I'm happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 16

This is a very lovely. I loved all characters and how you describe them. I rarely read this kind of genre on B/J fanfic.

Ah I forgot. If u ever want to write another story, will u please add some jealous Justin on it? *begging on my knees* (Sorry, because I really love Justin stake a claim on His sexy tiger)

That's all for now. Thanks once again for the beautiful fiction.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed my story.

If I come up with a plot, sure I'll write some jealous Justin. It might take a while and it will probably be a one shot because this story took the juices out of my wrists and I won't able to write longer texts for a while. 

Thank you for the lovely comment. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2016 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 16

Omg... my face hurts ... i am similing through whole chapter... and there are some happy tears too... i loved this story sooo much now its over...but it will be in my heart forever and on this site too.. so whenever i am having a bad day i can come here and read it again... u r sooo special i cant tell u in words.. i love u sweetie ...thank u for ur precious efforts and time.lots of hugs for u... ok..i am stoping now or else i will cry...laterrr😘😘😘😘😚😍



Author's Response:

Happy tears are good ones! I'm so happy you likes this. You definitely are the number one fan of this story. Thank you for that. Your comments always made my day! Love you too and loads of hugs! Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2016 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 16

Finish, already! Oh, no... i could read this for more and more time. So easy to be in it, so delicious. So melting heart. This is the way i see, felt this story. 😍 You could go more far.. i would love see Justin explore more Brian's "body". And Brian going in to his job, Justin in to his school art, maybe Dean with Daphne.. etc...  

Thank you.😉

And thank you for updated every day. 😊

 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much for the kind words :). Of course now that you mentioned it, I would like to write more but this story really took juices out of my wrists so I can't write anything longer for a while now. But who knows what I'll do in the future? Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2016 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 15

Hot! Love love love your story!!!

Author's Response:

And I'm happy you love it. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2016 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 15

Awww ...that was ssoooooo awesome.... i loved it again...

I cant believe its going to end soon... 😣😣😣 i am going to miss ur daily lovely updates... going to miss this cute bj love... u r amazing ..thanks ..... love and hugs to u...😍😍😚😚😚... later.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's sad :(. All good things must come to an end. But you can always read this again :). I'm so glad you like my story. Thank you for your comment. Hugs!

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2016 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 15

One more left??
Hoping it's a glimpse into the future.
Thanks for writing & Posting.
You are appreciated!
-b

Author's Response:

Yep, one more. I said in the story notes that there would be 16 chapters but it's easy to miss those :). Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2016 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 14

Love!!!!!! You need to just write teen B/J!

Author's Response:

Haha thank you :D. I will definitely write some more about the boys as teenagers if I come up with a good plot and inspiration. I'm happy you like my story. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2016 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 14

I don't know what Dean's problem is. He knows Brian liked Justin. Obviously the feeling is mutual, so why is he so bent out of shape. Justin could do a lot worse like....an Ethan character or even a Cody-like character. Dean is seriously tripping.
Loved this.
Thanks for posting.
Xx
-b

Author's Response:

Yeah, Cody or Ethan like people would be bad. Dean is just an overprotective brother who hasn't gotten his way so he throws a temper tantrum. I'm happy you like it! Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2016 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am addicted to this storyyyy sooooo muchhhh loooovvvveeee uuuu for the amazinnnggggg story.... i am soooo waiting for more... thank u for update.... lots of hugs to u...later .😘😘😘



Author's Response:

And I love you for your amazing comments! They always make my day and put a big smile on my face. Hugs or more like squeezes back! Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Gingabread (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2016 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 13

I am legitimately addicted to this story. I swear I check like four times a day to see if you've updated. 



Author's Response:

Haha, its a good thing for me that you're addicted but maybe not for you :D. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2016 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 12

I like how Jennifer respect the relation of Brian and Justin. And how she is acting to Dean.



Author's Response:

Jen is a very good mother :). I'm happy you like it. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2016 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 13

Wooooah. I though for sure that Dean would knock on the door to talk to them... interrupting, of course. Haha
I hope he finally sees that Brian is in it for the long haul. Great job! Can't wait for more.
Xx
-b

Author's Response:

It would be so bad. I can so see Dean getting traumas and a hissy fit :D. I'm happy you like this. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2016 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow the love they have each other so beautiful. i love how playful they are too

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks hon! I'm happy you like this. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2016 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

Love love love I cannot wait for an update

Author's Response:

More coming soon! I'm glad you're liking this story. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2016 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 13

Omg omg omg omg.... they finallllyyyyy did it... thanksoo much for the perfect chapter... dean is coming around ....  another awesm chapter... totally loved it...😍😍😍😍



Author's Response:

Yeah, Dean will eventually calm down. I'm so happy you loved it! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Ally (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2016 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

Another great chapter. Thanks for the update. My guess would be Brian giving Justin a blowjob. It really is too soon for both of them, I think, but I can totally wait until the next chapter to find out. Can't wait! :-)



Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint you then :(. But I'm glad you otherwise like this chapter. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Delicious (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2016 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 12

ik it's early for them (or Justin really)and it's not really a guess but Brian eating out Justin's ass.




Author's Response:

Not exactly but close enough.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2016 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 12

Fantastic like always... thank u for the lovely chapter.later...😘😘😘



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm happy you still enjoy this. Thank you for the comment. Later!

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2016 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

I just want to say. this is the first cutest fanfic I've read your doing an awesome job can't wait for the next chapter😀

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you hon! It means so much. I'm happy you like my story. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2016 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

Woah!

I'm wondering if Dean has such a problem with the relationship because he secretly likes Brian. Maybe Dwan isn't so.... straight.

Lol

Thanks for updating!

-b



Author's Response:

Haha, you will find out in chapter 13. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2016 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 11

Now I want to know Dean's reaction. I love the love the moment to say "I love you" by Justin, so protective of Brian 



Author's Response:

I'm happy to know you liked this. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2016 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 10

Made my day.... brightens my day... i loved their talk soo cute and very much in love with ur story...thank u ...later



Author's Response:

I'm so happy this chapter made your day! Thank you for the comment. Later. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2016 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

Ohhh myyyy that was an intense chapter... they almost made me cry.... i loved it soooo muchhh.... thank u...later😍😘😘😘😙



Author's Response:

Aww * gives tissue just in case* you're so sweet. Thank you so much for your comment. 

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2016 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 10

This was great!! I'm glad Jennifer didn't freak. Then again, I expected her to be cool with it. I love how Brian practically lives there. I can see Brian having to move in due to problems at home and drama starting between himself and Dean. Brian gets the basement as a room and things heat up. Omg why am I torturing myself!! Haha
Can't wait for 11!
Xx
-b

Author's Response:

Then again, why would Brian stay at the basement when Justin has a warm spot in his bed right next to him with Brian's name on it :D. But we can torture ourselves by imagining different scenarios :). I never wrote it into the story that Brian is actually staying with Justin because of the problems at his home and that is the reason Justin isn't willing to go over at Brian's when his parents are home. I'll post the next chapter tomorrow. It's gonna be another extra long chapter with loads of fluff ;). I'm happy you like this. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: jacki (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2016 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 9

Did they have sex or just make out naked?

By the way, love the story!



Author's Response:

No the didn't have sex. You'll know when they will have sex. I wrote pretty... Graphic scenes :D.

I'm happy you like this. Thank you for the question and the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2016 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 9

Omg they are incorrible....and u r amaaazinnnngggg....keep it up hugs to u...later dear.



Author's Response:

Hehe, I'm so glad to hear you love this :). Thanks for the comment and hugs to you too!

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2016 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 8

I'm still loving your story!!! I love how it's moving along. Great work!

Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2016 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 8

Awesome chapter as always.... i love this soooooo much.... thank u for the update... a bigggg hug from me to u dear.....Later..😍😍



Author's Response:

Aww thank you *Hugs back*. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2016 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hey good morninggg... no need to say sorry ... just do ur work and update when u feel like it.... i am soooo in love with is story... thank u... for hard work and awesome imagination...ok now i have to read this agian ...soo later...😘😘😘



Author's Response:

Morning... well not anymore :D. Alrighty, next chater coming up! 

Reviewer: Gingabread (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2016 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 7

I am so in love with this story!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2016 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 7

Thank u for the update i was sooooo missing this i have checked almost 4 times to see if there is any update and at 5th attempt i am jumping on my bed.... supeerrrrrrrr chapter like always.... loveeeeedddddd itttt.....u are awesomestttt....love u and goodnight as its night time here in India and i am going to sleep with a biiigggggg smile on my face after reading this....superbbbb work.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, I had a meeting three hours away. I tried to update on my phone on my way but couldn't so I posted this chapter when I got home. Tomorrow's chapter should be posted on time :).  I'm so happy you're liking this. Thank you for the comment and sleep tight!

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2016 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yay!
This was great!
Thanks for posting

Author's Response:

I'm happy you like this :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 6

Finally, the dam breaks just a bit!  Brian is just too cute in this story!  The discussion about hickeys was funny.  And I love Daphne's snarkiness in this story, and how she knows Justin so well.

Loving this fic! Thank you. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hehe thank you. I always imagined Daphne as a little snarky and was happy that I got to write her like this in the story. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: chaval (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

Ils sont trop mignons.



Author's Response:

Sorry I don't speak your language so I can't answer you in your language but dictionary is my best friend :). I'm happy you like my story. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 6

Adorable chapter thank u for updating.... keep it up ....i loved the make up seen simple but a lovely way to get them to start talking again. I lovvvvveeeee itttt and looovvvve u toooo...😍😍😍😙😘😙😘



Author's Response:

Aww I love you too. I'm happy you like this. Thank you for the comment it means so much ♥.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 5

Brian is such a flirt!  And poor Justin is torn between backing away, and being extremely attracted to him.  Brian's promise to Dean to stay away from his brother didn't quite work, did it?  LOL! 

I love Brian's persistence.  He is so cute in this story!  Will be looking forward to the next part. Thank you; really enjoying this one!  ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

Haha, you know Brian had no intentions to stay away from Justin :D. And yeah, Justin is confused. I'm so happy you like my story. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 5

Aaaaaaaw! I need more! This is so good. Justin is going to miss Brian more than he realizes.

Author's Response:

I'm going to post the next chapter in a few so I'm going to say yes, he's going to miss Brian. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: aribritinxoxo (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

Tbh I feel sorry for Brian when Justin act like this however I would too if the other way around. I can not understand why Justin wont admit it if he likes Brian?

What should we do to make him see that? lol

love love your fics. 



Author's Response:

This is Justin's first experience with love and he's confused and doesn't know what do or feel. I hope the next chapter will give you some kind of answers :). Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2016 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

Poor Brian. I feel sorry for him.



Author's Response:

Me too :(. It hurt to write this but at one point we're going to learn that this is a very important moment for Justin. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 5

Superrrrr fantasttticcc.... i loved this chapter toooo.... now its getting more interesting..waiting for more.. thank u soooo much.... love u.



Author's Response:

You're welcome :). I'm happy you're enjoying this. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

Adorável



Author's Response:

I'm sorry I don't speak your language so I won't be able to answer you with your own language but dictionary is my best friend :). I'm happy you like this. Thanks for your comment.

Reviewer: nkaur (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am laughing here and they are soooo adorable... this is a Superrrr fic i am lovingggg it sooo much... u r justttt awesome... these two reminds me of some manga/anime i used to watch and  loved those show as i love these too they are just sooooo muccchhhh lovable.

I love u for writting this...hugs and kisses to u. Thank u sooo much.



Author's Response:

*Hugs back* thank you so much. Your comments mean so much to me. I'm happy you love this. Thanks for your comment.

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2016 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loving this story.
Can't wait for more.
-b

Author's Response:

I'm happy you like this. More coming soon. Thanks for your comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is just too cute!  Poor Justin.  Trying to get away; well, sort of. But Brian keeps showing up like a bad penny! But he's a cute bad boy. I confess when he walked over to them at the theater I expected to hear him say, "Is this seat taken?"  I was hearing that in my mind, and thinking how funny that would be, considering no one else was in the theater.  It just seemed like a thing Brian would have said. :)

 

Loving this!  And I'm enjoying the slower build up to what I at least hope will happen at one point. But I'm more than content to go along for the ride until you get there. And I'm loving the snarky Daphne!  Really glad you posted this on here! Thank you.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

You're right, that would have been so Brian :D. Such a pity I didn't come up with it when I wrote this. I'm happy you love this. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

Brian is so sweet.  And Justin still doesn't admit that he likes Brian the same way. Love it!!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're loving this story. Thank you so much for your comment.

Reviewer: nkaur (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2016 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loveeee ittt soooo mucccchhh



Author's Response:

Aww *huge smile* thank you! I'm so glad you love this. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG! I'm in love with this story!!! I love teen Brian & Justin so much. There are not enough stories written about them. I can't wait until Justin pulls his head out of his butt and accepts Brian's attention! Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

I agree. There should definitely be more stories where the boys are teenagers! I'm so happy you're enjoying this one. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sorry for not log in my own account however I cant help it , I really want to see the next chapter.

Will you have a jealous Justin for some reason? Is he in denial about his feeling towards Brian? Can we have another chapter soon?? xp

Always Love your fics.

Author's Response:

Justin won't be jealous in this story, he's just so clueless he doesn't see that Brian likes him. I'll post the next chapter as soon as I read it through and check the spelling and grammar. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 3

I am so glad that you decided t continue this, b/c I am thoroughly enjoying it!  Brian in predator mode, and that scene with him and Justin in his bathrobe was hot!  Yowsa!

Dean has horrible timing, though - ha!  I'm glad Justin finally figured out who the person in the closet was.  Love his and Daphne's relationship in this story.

And I am assuming the last sentence of Justin's was his trying to deny the obvious, because he soooo is enamored with him. 

I am loving this snarky, playful Brian in this story. Thank you for posting this one here.  :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Before I posted this I wasn't sure if people would be interested in something like this but happily it turned out they are! So of course I'll post the rest of it :). 

Yes, Justin is denying the obvious. He's a little clueless like that. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.

Reviewer: cuivresdesaxe (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

It's so nice to have Brian chasing after Justin! I'm really enjoying your fic 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying this. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

Dean's got Brian's number.  But will it help?



Author's Response:

I never wrote this into the story but while I woked on this, in my mind I thought that Brian and Justin already had each other's phone number since they've known each other for years :). Good point though! Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: TheGirlNoOneKnows5 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm interested to see where this goes. It is fun to read Brian chasing after Justin!

xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm happy you're enjoying this. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great idea of Daphne to play Twister.  And the way she keeps Justin in the dark about the kiss. Her role is perfect, I hope she can play a lot of games before Justin understand what's going on. Love the teasing. I can't wait......Hopefully the next chapter follow soon.



Author's Response:

Heh Daph can be a little evil :). I promise to post the next chapter soon. Thanks for the comment. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really like this. When does Justin understand what Brian feels? This chapter makes me curious.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you like this. You just have to read more when I update and find out ;). Thanks for the comment. 

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