Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2023 01:31 PM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

Beautiful story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and especially for taking the time to leave comments. I am so happy that you enjoyed it. :) ~Kim

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2023 05:57 AM · On: First Encounter

Love this chapter. Curious what will happened.

Reviewer: Placedo (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2022 08:31 PM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

Hi ! Thank you for another great story ! I didn't want it to be over just yet. 

Dorothée 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I consider it a high compliment when someone wants a story to continue, so I am very honored. Thank you for reading and especially for taking the time to comment, Dorothée.  FYI, we have a FB Group page if you are not a member and wish to join us. We would love to have you.  Here is the link:  https://www.facebook.com/groups/536911006491495/.  Thanks again for your kind words. ~Kim

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2021 07:40 PM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

love it

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2019 07:12 AM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

Love it, thank you

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2018 02:21 AM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

This was a great story and I loved the happy ending!!

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2017 04:03 AM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

Hello, again, my friend.  I enjoyed this story.  I love how protective Vic and everyone was of Justin.  It was very sweet.  And what a great plan to tell if Brian was sincere or not.  You could tell while you were reading, how much Brian was caring about Justin.  They had to end up together.

I've read a number of m/m romances now.  Probably a hundred fanfictions and over 150 professional stories that I've downloaded to my Kindle.  I find that I understand the characters best when it's written in first person, either all as one or alternating.  Your style is one I'd used a couple of years ago that alternates from one POV to the other within a chapter.  They way you do it - it works well.  When I read some, though, I don't know who I'm supposed to be thinking as.  The 'head hopping' gets to me.  I just started a story tonight that has serious problems in this area and I have to consider if I even want to finish it.  

I'm tempted to go back and rewrite my old stories so that I do one POV per chapter.  I believe, at least for me, that's the best way to give a reader insight.

Lovely storytelling, as always, my friend.  I'm sure I'll enjoy the next one, too.  I hope to see you soon!

Hugs,

Jackie "Bootsy" 

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Author's Response:

Hey, Bootsy!  LOL!  You realize that name will stick forever now, right? :)  We'll have to go see that together some time. :) Thank you for all the thoughtful comments.  I really should try to write in 1st person more often; I do like writing in that perspective, but it seems like I normally do 3rd person for some reason.  I'm glad you thought the way I wrote it worked, though.  And I know exactly what you mean about starting to read a story sometimes, and not knowing exactly who is talking.  It is very confusing, and time-consuming to figure it out, so I usually give up. :/

Still hoping to see you in May!  Thanks again for the support, my friend. You know it is always appreciated.  Had so much fun seeing you last June!  Will be looking forward to our next meeting.  Hugs  ~Kim

Reviewer: feet526@ comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 01:09 AM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

Loved this story! Although, I love your work; all your stories. I even printed this one to keep in my archives.  Thanks so much for sharing these beautiful words, to your addicted B/J fans.



Author's Response:

I'm very honored that you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment; I greatly appreciate that, as well as your kind words. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2017 03:37 PM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

Thanks for giving us another great take on the Brian and Justin love story. You have such a nack for telling an au but keeping them real. Loved the Warhol nickname!

 

PS - Was sorry to read of your brothers passing. Please accept my condolences.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for commenting, Suse!  I really appreciate the support, and I'm glad you liked the nickname, and the story. ;)  And thank you for your offer of condolences. That was very thoughtful of you, and much appreciated as well.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 02:51 AM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

This final chapter was a perfect ending to a very enjoyable story. Great job, Kim.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Kim! I am very grateful for your support.  And I'm eagerly waiting for your stories as well.  Thanks for being one of our writers on MW!  ~Kim

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2017 03:31 PM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

I just wanted to tell you that this is one of my favorite stories. You managed to take a "Prince Charming" story and make it so lovely, that I couldn't stop reading.

I love that Brian found the "glass slipper" twice. It was very romantic. What could have been trite, was really enjoyable. I also love the HEA ending. Thank you for writing such a lovely story. *Hugs*

Author's Response:

Hello, my special friend! It is always a joy to hear from you.  I'm very flattered that you liked this story, and that you chose to read mine. Thank you. :)  I, too, liked the touch of Justin's sketchbook being the focal point of them meeting twice.  And it's true; it is very hard sometimes to keep Brian romantic and still IC.  He's probably a bit TOO romantic for some in this story, but I like to think he evolved at some point to where this could have been possible. :)

Thank you very much for not only reading and reviewing, but for your support and friendship.  Can't wait until we have the pleasure of meeting again one day, and I'm sure we will.  XOXO  ~Kim

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2017 07:47 PM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

That was wonderful love a sweet Brian.....



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sharon! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. :)  Thank you for reading, and especially for the feedback and support. I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2017 10:33 AM · On: Two Hearts...One Life

OMG that was perfect, I am crying happy tears here. You seriouly captured my heart with this story. I cannot wait to see what you write next. Fantastic job as always xxx



Author's Response:

Hi, my dear friend! Thank you for reading this story, and especially for all the comments!  That means the world to me. :)  And I am honored to be a part of your own journey as a writer, and am so happy for all the reviews your stories have received!  I will be looking forward to your new stories. Thank you for always being so supportive of me, and of MW.  Both are deeply appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2017 09:49 AM · On: Surprise Reunion

OMG that was amazing, oh I could feel the happiness and passion. So perfect x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2017 09:34 AM · On: Found...and Lost

Faith is really pulling them together huh, they should so be in the same city, the same bed every night. They are meant to be and I hope they are soon. 

 

So beautiful x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2017 09:19 AM · On: Replay

Justin there is an art school where Brisn lives, go there not furthe away in Chicago plzzzz. And oh not again his sketch book, I wanna cry for him. Please get them together again soon. X

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 10:50 PM · On: The Many Petals of a Rose

They both have fallen so hard for each other haven't they. I could feel the emotions do strong. I hope they meet again soon and that all will be ok. We need our boys happy xx

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 09:54 PM · On: Bittersweet

So much emotions here, it made me smile and cry. Please don't let them be apart long. 

 

Pssst Justin there is an art school where Brian lives lol 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 04:06 PM · On: The First Time

This just gets better and better, knock me down with a feather then fan me with it. This was steaming hot and so beautiful 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 02:30 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Sigh, that was amazing. I felt like I was crouching with Daphine and Emmett. Cannot wait for more, I can feel hot passion coming. 

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 02:09 PM · On: One Red Rose

Phone sex is hot, but YOUR phone sex is Muy Caliente! I'm about to read the next chapter and can't wait until they see one another. :D

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 02:06 PM · On: First Encounter

B/J's email banter is brilliant!

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 02:05 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Great first chapter!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 01:27 PM · On: Discovery

That was So the right thing to do and I loved how you did. Gosh I can't stop reading even with my bad eye.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 01:09 PM · On: The Plan

I love how protective Justin's friends are towards him. I think I would be the same. cannot wait until they meet in person. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2017 12:27 PM · On: One Red Rose

Oh man, this was hot, sexy, sweet and emotional and sexy and hot , did I say hot you hot. I so can it wait for the next chapter and I hope they talk face to face soon. 

 

Seriouly sly incredible work. 

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 02:44 PM · On: Bittersweet

You have me hook, line and sinker with this story... and of course, you got me to break my no WIP rule, I love this story!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kathy!  I'm so delighted that you're enjoying this story! Thank you for choosing to have faith that I will finish it, and for leaving me feedback.  I WILL get it complete, and very soon. Thank you for the support, my friend. It is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2016 12:05 PM · On: Bittersweet

Wonderful chapter. Now to get them back together!! We will see what your muse comes up with--more soon.lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend - I'm always very happy to see your comments. :)  I hope everything is well with you.  You know I won't keep them apart forever, cause I'm a big softie.  Thank you for reading, lindc, and for the feedback. It means a lot to me. ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 08:51 AM · On: Bittersweet

Oh dear poor Brian and Justin trying to navigate geography so they can be together

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Yes, so close together, relatively speaking. But not close enough, especially now that they have actually met.  But something tells me they will find a way that's better than Skyping. ;)  Thanks for reading, and for your feedback, Chris. I'm very grateful for your support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 06:08 AM · On: Bittersweet

"Parting is such sweet sorrow." I hope the guys are reunited sooner rather than later. Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Hello, Kim!  Yes, they both knew it was coming, but it is still difficult to part.  But Justin is a very determined young man, so I think they'll be able to find a solution. ;)  Thanks so much for reading, Kim, and for your feedback. I truly appreciate that. BTW, I hope we see a new story from you soon; really enjoyed the last one!  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2016 03:52 AM · On: Bittersweet

The sadness of their parting.  Sigh.  But Justin is not giving up so I won't either.



Author's Response:

Hi, Phyllis!  BTW, it's so nice to have a first name now. :)  Yes, they are in a difficult place right now. But you know me. I won't be able to leave them this unhappy for long, and yes, Justin is a determined young man.;)  Thanks as always for being so supportive, and leaving a comment.  The next part should be up very shortly.  ~Kim

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2016 08:31 PM · On: The First Time

What a lovely amazing chapter.  Brian realizes what he had in Justin.  So glad her realizes it.  Hot first time sex. 

Dee Dee

You and your family have been in my thoughts and prayers.



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend. For the kind words, and for your feedback.  We're taking it one day at a time.

I'm working on the last part right now, so hopefully it own't be too long :)  Thanks so much, Dee Dee!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 01:15 PM · On: The First Time

This was FABULOUS!!!! 

The first time was just as it should have been... hot, but tender and Brian was good and shared his REAL thoughts.

 

I like how the "test" was exposed as well.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kathy!  I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter!  I'm always nervous whenever I have to describe their first time together when Justin is inexperienced, so I'm glad that you thought I did it justice. :)  There will be at least one more chapter to go. Thanks again for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment; I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 10:32 AM · On: The First Time

Loved this chapter! Justin is so sweet and Brian is so protective, it's a delight to see them in such a good place right now. I'm also glad we will have more to read in this wonderful universe!

Thinking of you :) XOXO



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thank you as always for being so supportive. I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter.  And thank you for thinking of me.  It's been a very difficult month. Don't know if it will be one or two more chapters, but probably just the one (however, you know me, so who knows?;))  Thanks again for reading, and for the comments.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2016 03:02 AM · On: The First Time

I didn't see any glaring errors and as always you took us on a great ride.  Really like this AU you have created with familiar people in unfamiliar roles.  There were similarities in B&J first night together on the show and in this story but lots of differences as well  Glad you didn't amke Craig too likable.  Great chapter!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I'm glad there wasn't anything too glaring in this chapter. It's funny how I can read over a chapter three times, and still not catch some typos! :) I'm happy that you are enjoying this story, Bill and as always, I'm grateful for your support. Thank you for the comments.  ~Kim

Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2016 03:30 PM · On: The First Time

Hi.  I liked that Justin so soon trusted Brian enough to divulge who was his father instead of letting that secret linger.  I was also impressed with Brian's appropriate response to Craig Taylor's success and how he left it at that. Brian after all is financially well off and takes pride in that.  He would never be a gold diigger.  Finally Brian's gentle approach with Justin's first time and Justin's reactions of awe were perfect. Thank you for writing this during such a trying time. It wasn't expected that you should write anything at all but I am grateful that you did. I hope you are taking good care of yourself. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  I am glad that you have been enjoying this story. When I write, it does help to divert my attention from stressful times, and it has definitely been a very difficult month for my family and me. 

Thank you for reading this chapter, and especially for your feedback. I appreciate that very much.  ~Kim

Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2016 05:05 AM · On: The First Time

My sympathies to you and your family.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Nicole.  I appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2016 12:21 AM · On: The First Time

Such a tender coupling between the two.  Seems like love at first sight, or should I say love  at their first sexual encounter.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lorma!  Yes, these 'first times' are always a little difficult for me to write, but I am glad that you liked it. ;)  Thank you for reading this story, and especially for commenting.  I should have the next (last?) part up soon.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2016 12:12 AM · On: The First Time

Great update! Lovely first night for the boys!



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I should have the next (last?) part up soon. I want to show them down the road somewhat, and what becomes of their relationship. Thank you for reading, and especially for the feedback, Trish!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2016 10:28 PM · On: The First Time

With sincere sympathy to you and your family on the loss of your brother.

May he rest in peace.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Therese.  I really appreciate that. Everyone's words of sympathy have been a real comfort, along with my writing. Thank you for taking the time to send me your message. ~Kim

Reviewer: Rachael (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2016 10:13 PM · On: The First Time

<3 Kim. This story is fantastic. I love the way Brian has begun vulnerable in this story. Happy we got an update. :) I've also been reading the My Heart's Desire story too. It's really a good read! 



Author's Response:

Hi, Rachael! I'm thrilled with your comments.  Thank you for reading, and for the feedback; it really is so motivating to me as an author.  And I'm delighted that you are also enjoying "My Heart's Desire."  A lot of ups and downs in that story, but I love Fin and Tony's characters especially.

Thank you for all the support! I will have the next (last?) chapter up very shortly.  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2016 04:01 PM · On: The First Time

Hi Kim :  ) I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, Brian’s caring and tenderness toward Justin was so sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter :  ) *Hugs* Janet   



Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend.  You know that's how I tend to see him in a lot of my stories.  I'm glad that you liked this chapter.  The next one should be up fairly soon. Thank you for reading, and for the support.  And for so many other things.  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2016 03:36 PM · On: The First Time

Well done on a tender, yet hot 'first time' for Justin. Despite his own desires, Brian displayed such care for Justin here. I enjoyed this chapter from start to finish, and as many others have stated, I will be sorry to see this one end. Also, I simply loved Brian's quirky remark to the shocked old ladies. That was so Brian, and such fun. 

Also, my condolences once again on your tragic loss. There are truly no words that help in a time such as this. If I had them, I would certainly share them. 

Thanks for writing.

Janet



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Janet. I appreciate that very much, along with your words of condolence.  I know you, too, have suffered loss fairly recently, and I send my thoughts to you as well.  I'm glad you liked the 'going down' remark - ha!

 

Probably one more chapter to go.  Thank you again for the support; I really appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2016 12:50 PM · On: The First Time

Wow what a sweet and very hot chapter! I hope the boys really do keep protecfing the special relationship they have.

Reviewer: Glo (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2016 12:16 PM · On: The First Time

This was incredible! And well worth the wait.

Please let me express my deepest condolences on the loss of your brother. Losing some one so close to us changes you...I'm so sorry...

Looking forward to the next chapter, will it really be the last one?



Author's Response:

Hi, Glo!  I'm so happy that you have been enjoying this story!  Thank you for reading, and especially for commenting. :) 

And thank you for your expression of sympathy.  We're taking it one day at a time, but writing does help me to forget, at least for a little while.  I'm not positive the next chapter will be the last one, but I would say it is likely. 

 

I have a lot of other story ideas I want to explore, however, so as long as someone enjoys my stories, I would love to keep writing them. :)  Thank you again for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2016 12:15 PM · On: The First Time

Nicely done! The guys are going to give themselves a night to remember. But where will they  go from here, I wonder?  Your story has been so enjoyable and I wish it did't have to end soon soon...



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kim!  I am enjoying your story as well. :)  I always find it hard to write their 'first time,' but hopefully I did it justice here. :)  I'm so happy that you like this story!  Not sure if there will be one or two chapters coming up, but I have a ton of other story ideas floating around in my head.  Thank you for reading, but especially for commenting.  I am greatly appreciative.  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2016 11:48 AM · On: The First Time

Wonderful chapter. Anxious to see where you take them from here. Your family is continually in my thoughts. lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, lindc.  It's hard to believe it's been a month now.  We're taking it one day at a time, but I appreciate your kindness. :) 

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Not much plot in here, but necessary in the context of the plot, and I'll be moving the story forward in the next part. 

Thank you always for reading, and for all the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2016 04:08 AM · On: The First Time

Amazing! Brian and Justin's first time was so beautiful. A tender and caring Brian is irresistible to me. I love this fic and am anxious to read the final chapter but also sad that it's coming to an end😑.



Author's Response:

Hi, Laura! Thank you for continuing to read, and especially for taking the time to comment.  I'm glad you liked the way Brian was written here. I know he's probably more 'softer' than he normally would be, but even on the show he seemed a lot gentler for Justin's first time than he typically would have been, so hopefully he is not TOO much OOC here.

I will have the next chapter up soon, which will include a peek at what they might be like down the road after this. Thanks again for your support! It is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2016 03:36 AM · On: The First Time

This is an amazing chapter.  You gave us a look at what a first time feels like and that Brian can care for someone for more than just sex.  Looking forward to your final chapter with the hope that maybe there will be a sequel.



Author's Response:

Thank you my friend!  Not much plot progression in this one, but a necessary interlude nonetheless.  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.;)  The last/epilogue chapter will address a little more of their budding relationship, and what occurs down the road, so I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Thank you as always for the support, not only with your comments, but also for being one of our writers on here. You're going to love the features you will soon have!  And I'm sure the NCIS fans will find you here as well. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2016 09:00 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

OMG!!! Have you seen the interview on out of the box with Gale. He is so handsome, clean shaven and well spoken. I haven't seen him talk so much. Nice interview and how Randy is his dear friend. I just loved it. Hope you and family are well and coping. lol

Author's Response:

hi, lindc!  Sorry for the long delay in responding.  Yes, I am aware of the interview, and was able to download it, and read a little of the transcript.  I haven't had a chance to actually listen to most of it yet, but I will.  He did seem a lot more open than I have ever heard before. I'm glad I saved it, too, because apparently it was taken down afterward (?).  Thank you for your kind words. We're taking it one day at a time.  ~Kim

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 04:27 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

The meeting was so beautiful and perfect!  It's so nice to see they're able to switch from only speaking on the phone to doing it in person.  It didn't seem like there was any awkwardness at all.  This is so great.  :)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story, Kristine!  And I'm thrilled you liked their first face-to-face meeting. They're about to get even better acquainted in the next part (wink, wink).  I won't say the last one, b/c I keep saying that, and it doesn't happen - ha!  We'll have to see. I'm very close to finishing the next part. There may be an epilogue afterward.  But the next part should be up very soon. Thank you for your patience in the meantime, and most of all, thank you for all the comments, and the feedback. I truly appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 04:21 PM · On: Discovery

Awwww Brian!!!  He did the right thing.  I'm so proud of him right now!



Author's Response:

Well, I'm sure everyone expected Brian - with his notion of 'beauty' - to turn heel and scamper away at the first sign of Vic. But that is really the whole point of the story - could he look inside the man and appreciate the beauty there, or only what was on the outside?  I'm glad he passed the 'test, too.:)  Thanks for the feedback!  ~Kim

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 04:13 PM · On: The Plan

Ooooo...Evil indeed!  Still, it's nice to see Justin has such caring friends.  :)



Author's Response:

I always loved Emmett and Daphne's characters on the show.  I wish they had shown more interaction with Emmett and Justin as friends.  I loved that one ep where B and J walked over to Emmett, who was nursing his drink at Woody's, and they were guessing who the new 'drug counselor' was  - LOL!  Thanks again for leaving all the comments, Kristine. I really appreciate that ~Kim

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 04:08 PM · On: One Red Rose

Oooo they're going to meet in person!  How cute!

I'm really loving this.  Every chapter is better than the last.  :)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying this one, Kristine! I consider that high praise, coming from the author of one my most favorite recent stories (Rear Window). :)  Thanks for all the lovely comments. ~Kim

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 04:01 PM · On: First Encounter

Did I say Justin was humble?  You corrected me of that notion very quickly.  ;)  At least Brian has enough of an ego to keep up haha

I found this exchange rather adorable even with all their posturing.  Also, you made it very readable.  A lot of time in fics people have tried similar exchanges but it just runs on and on and gets to the point where I don't know who is talking to who and don't care much either.  That was not the case here.  Even without the breaks inbetween emails each one was distinct in it's tone and personality.

Another lovely chapter!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hey, Kristine!  LOL!  Well, I think Justin was a iittle put off by a certain man's arrogance, but as you mentioned, Brian is more than a match for him in the snark department. :) 

Yeah, after a while, the "To" and "From's" in the emails started to bug me, but I'm glad I managed to keep it fairly clear who was speaking to whom. :)  Thanks again for taking the time to leave feedback.  ~Kim

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2016 03:36 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Sorry it took me so long to get to reading this Kim!

This beginning was so amazing. - unsurprisingly.  You have an amazing way with words.

You made me feel sorry for Justin even though he has so much.  He still seems humble and down to earth, which makes his lonliness so painful.  Hopefully Brian will help fix that. ;)

And though Brian's spot in this introduction was brief, it went a long way in showing his personality.  That rotten little thief couldn't appreciate Justin's skill where Brian recognized it immediately.  I hope he gets to tell the artist himself soon.

Well done!  On to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kristine! I'm delighted to see you reading this one, and honored that you chose to read it. :)  Thank you for the compliments!  That makes me very happy to hear. :)  I'm glad you liked the beginning.  Thanks for reading this one, and especially for commenting!  ~Kim

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 03:55 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Hi,

   I certainly anticipated this chapter and it sure was worth the

wait.  It started off so well with Daphne and Emmett wondering if

Brian had any brothers.  I had a good laugh with that line. 

  When they met is was so true to form as Brian thought about

how great it would be to get to see and enjoy Justin’s body. 

Another good laugh. 

   Our advantage was that we know how they looked, we are told

what they say, and more, we know what they were thinking. 

What more can I as?

   Thanks again, that was fun reading.

DavidR

      On a more personal note, I am so sorry for your loss.  I wish you the best. Enough said.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, David! Always delighted to see your feedback. Thank you for indicating your favorite parts; that is always very helpful to me as a writer. :)  I could just see Emmett and Daphne playing detective as they peeked through the palm fronds - ha!  It was interesting, too, to write from B and J's viewpoints, since neither one had ever seen each other, and didn't know what to expect.

I'm working on the next part right now, so it should be up soon. I'm not sure if it will be the last part or not; I will have to see how wordy I get.;)  Thanks again for reading, and epsecially for taking the time to comment; I deeply appreciate that. 

And thank you for your sympathy; I'm still trying to come to terms with what happened, but everyone's support has been a real comfort to me.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2016 03:48 AM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Another great chapter. I loved their finally getting to meet eachother and the small amount of awkwardNess , and shyness from them both that turns into feeling more comfortable with eachother. Brian knowing that he is a virgin and planning to make it special and actually wanting to shows Brian’s feelings for Justin. Now for the hot fun hopefully in the next Chapter! What would be great is if maybe Brian opens an office in NY, as partners with Justin in Kinnetik and then moves in with Justin. Or Justin isn't tied down to NY so maybe he can move to the Pittsburgh and live with Brian and work with him. Don't mind me,  Just thinking out loud about their future as if they were real lol. Awaiting for more, a lot more.



Author's Response:

Hi, Cassie! I'm so sorry I overlooked your review comments!  It was an oversight.  I am usually very good about responding quickly to feedback, so I do apologize. 

I am happy that you are enjoying this story, and I hope you are still with me.  I guess you figured out Ch. 7 was what you were looking for (wink, wink).  In the next (last?) part, I'll be exploring what their world might be like down the road in the near future. Thank you again for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment.  I appreciate that so much.  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 03:14 AM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Hi Kim : ) I finally got caught up with this. Daph and Emmett spying on Brian and Justin was kind of funny. Somehow it doesn't surprise me that they did that. Looking forward to the next part of this :  ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

I am not getting review notifications, Janet, so I'm sorry I missed this one. Glad that you are still enjoying it. Thank you for the support, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 03:13 AM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Awww - so sweet..... They both got a lovely surprise and it's good that they had gotten to know each other online prior to dinner. Good call on Justin's part to go to the hotel - I can just imagine Emmett and Daphne lingering outside his bedroom....LOL Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Monica, I don't know how I missed your review! I'm so sorry for that.  I'm usually very prompt about responding, but with my brother and all, it's been a very difficult month.  And yes, I imagine both Daphne and Emmett will be grilling Justin on his evening with the handsome, sexy stranger.  That part will be discussed in the next chapter.

Thank you for reading, and for all the support you give me.  I truly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2016 02:45 AM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Glad that their first meeting went so well.  Hope their first night together meets all their expectations.  Justin was smart to choose Brian's hotel.  I could imagine Daphne & Emmett listening outside his bedroom door.  Glad to see an update and hope you are doing well.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill!  Yeah, I'm sure Daphne & Emmett wouldn't have been able to resist, and that would have just made Justin even more nervous than he's already bound to be. It's easy to participate over the phone in relative anonymity; quite another thing to be face-to-face with this other man.

Thank you as always for your support, and for reading, my friend.  I'm doing okay. Still trying to come to terms with it being real.  It still doesn't seem that way, but I know it is. 

I will have the next part of this story up soon.  Thanks again, Bill. ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2016 01:02 AM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

What a lovely first date for our boys! I'll have to look for them the next time I'm at Grand Central, LOL! 



Author's Response:

Hi, Trish!  I love that building.  So beautiful.  I've always loved the art deco style, and we have a building in my hometown that was thankfully preserved in that style. Used to be an old railroad terminal, and is now a museum. I'm so thankful that they didn't tear it down!

I'm glad you enjoyed their first face-to-face encounter. The next one will, ahem...be even MORE closer (wink, wink). Thanks for reading, and for your comments, my friend. Hope we can meet up again one day.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 01:46 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

I'm loving this so much!! You're doing such a  great job at describing their first encounter, I can see it happening in my head :) Looking forward to the next part! (notice how I'm not saying the last part, ha!) * Hugs *

Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2016 04:40 AM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Welcome back:)  "Breathtaking like when you first see the majesty of a mountain peak, or the vivid colors in a rainbow after the rain." I love your imagery to describe the extent of Justin's beauty. It can also be used to describe the happiness felt at seeing another chapter was posted!  Thank you.  I also love how Brian and Justin smoothly transitioned into relating to each other in person.  Finally that they also were very happy with the other's physical appearance.  But was that ever really in question for us?  Of course not!  Well done!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thank you for the welcome back, and the very kind words.  :)  I always love to hear specific details about what part of a chapter readers enjoyed, so thank you for doing that.

I'm working on the next part now, and this is my only story at present (so many more ideas in my head, though!), so it shouldn't be too long before it's posted. Thank you for all the support and encouragement.  I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Therese (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2016 11:06 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Hi, sincere apologies fornot writing enough reviews, yet again another wonderful story, am an ardent fan of all your b/j fiction amd also re-read all of your stories.  looking forward to next chapter and wishing you the very best of everything you wish for yourself, take care.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Therese!  Thank you your kind words, and for letting me know how much you enjoy my stories. That is very motivating to me, and a real comfort during what is a difficult time. Writing about these two characters really does help to divert me from RL.  I'm very gratefu for your support, and for your feedback, and  I hope you continue to enjoy my stories. I have a lot of ideas in my head that I hope to eventually write about.  I should have the next part up very soon.  Thanks again, Therese.  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 09:14 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Good job Kim considerjng your awful personal time. I look forward to the next chapter when you have time

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris! Thank you for your kind words.  I hope you are having a wonderful trip in the US!  Wish we could have met, but it looks like you're having a grand time.;)  Thank you for taking the time to read this part, and as always for your support and encouragement.  ~Kim

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2016 08:24 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Well our boys are very attracted to each other.  What a surprise.  Good choice to go to Brian's hotel room.  If they had gone to Justin there would have been biig ears and eyes on them the whole time. 

Dee Dee

Sorry for your loss.  So glad you had this story to help your mind off of things.



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend - yes, writing does help me to at least temporarily forget what happened.  Thank you for your words of sympathy. 

I am happy that you enjoyed this chapter, Dee Dee!  And yes, I don't think going to the penthouse would have been 'productive' - ha!  Thank you as always for your ongoing support, Dee Dee.  I am very grateful for that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 07:16 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Oh this was written so well with their thoughts and reactions to one another. I loved the anticipation and Daphne and Emmett's reaction to Brian as well.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lorma!  Thank you for your kind words; I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.  I'm sure that Daphne and Emmett will be disappointed they won't get to see them together that night, but I'm sure they will be thoroughly interrogating their friend afterward.;)  Thank you for reading, and for the comments!  I greatly appreciate that  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2016 05:03 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

This was so worth waiting for. So compatable these two. Next chapter will be a sexy one. Hope your life is getting a little easier. I know how you feel as I went through the same horrible time a few years ago. Prayers are still with you and your family during this sad time. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc!  I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter.  And yes, I think it's inevitable, I think. :)  I'm so sorry for your loss; I had no idea you had experienced the same thing.  It was a shock for sure; but he had been troubled for a long time, and unfortunately this is the way he decided to end both his mental and physical pain. Thank you for your words of sympathy, and for the prayers. They ARE a comfort.  ~Kim

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 03:41 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

I love how comfortable Brian seems in even his thoughts about Justin.  they may both be nervous, but they also seem to relax each other and fall into the ease they have on the phone.

 

I cannot wait to read about their first time!!!!  

 

I know life gets busy, but write fast please!!!!! lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Kathy! Thanks for trusting that I will finish this one soon, and breaking your "no WIP" rule. :)  I'm very happy that you have been enjoying this story. I should be able to have the next part posted soon.  Writing their 'first time' is always kind of tricky for me, but I hope I will do it justice.  Thank you for reading, and for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 03:32 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Brave! They finally meet and it was everything I thought it would be. Loved it. I am sorry for the loss of your loved one. You have my sympathy.



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  Yes, they finally meet face-to-face.  I'm glad the chapter lived up to your expectations, and that you enjoyed it. :)  The next part should be up soon.  And thank you for your words of sympathy; they do help, and I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2016 03:23 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

Thank you for writing another great story. I'm really enjoying it, especially this last chapter. 

Sorry about the loss of your brother.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Jo!  Yes, I always like it, too, when the two men finally meet and can interact. Thank you for reading, and especially for commenting.  And thank you for the condolences. It was a shock, and we will miss him. 

I should have the next part up soon. Thank you again for the encouragement.  ~Kim

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 02:12 PM · On: Discovery

OMG, they are finally gonna meet!!!!  Obviously looks and attraction will NOT be a problem!

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 02:11 PM · On: The Plan

I am enjoying this so much... I really hope Em, Daph and Vic don't concoct too elaborate a plan that it gets in the way of our boys... just gets them on board with it! :) 

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 01:24 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

This is a beautiful chapter, Kim!
Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for readng, and for taking the time to comment, my friend.  I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter.  The next part will be up soon.  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 01:02 PM · On: Getting to Know You...Getting to Know All About You

What a fantasic meeting.  Now I'm hungry.  Unfortunately it's for food.  lol.  I'm with Daphne and Emmett, I want to find out what happens next.



Author's Response:

Hi, Phyllis!  Yeah, food deprivation is not a problem with me, either (unfortunately).  I think the boys will prefer not to have an 'audience,' although Brian might find that kinky. ;)  Thank you for reading, and for the comments, my friend. I appreciate that so much.  ~Kim


Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2016 10:17 AM · On: Discovery

Love it. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Hi, Donna!  Thank you for reading this story, and for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate you taking the time to do that.  :)  I am working on the next part, and should have it up shortly (I will no longer say "last," because I keep saying that, and then it doesn't happen - ha!) Thanks again for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Lisajean (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2016 12:12 PM · On: Discovery

Hi Kim,

 

I am so sorry to hear about your loss.  I will keep you in my prayers as well as my thoughts while you are going through this difficult time.   I loss my brother a while back and I know how hard it can be.

 

Great chapter!

 

Lisa

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Lisa!  Thank you for your words of support. I would like to offer my condolences to you as well.  It was a heart-wrenching day today with the funera, and I think you often feel your siblings are invincible when they are fairly young, but this shows me how fleeting life can be. My brother was in a lot of both physical and mental pain, so I hope he is at peace now.

 

As for the story, I am happy that you are enjoying it. I'm working on the next part now, and should have it up very soon. Thank you again for the words of sympathy, and for the comments. Both are deeply appreciated. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: cuivresdesaxe (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2016 07:28 AM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Hi Kim,

I'm terribly sorry to read about the brutal death in your family, those are hard times.

Thank you for taking time in this hard moment to give us a new chapter of your great story.

Bea



Author's Response:

Hi, Bea - thank you for your kind words of sympathy.   I debated whether or not to even mention it, but thought I should explain why I did not write all of what I had intended to before.  I am working on the next part now - it helps me to keep my mind off other things - so I should hopefully have it up very soon.  Thank you again for your expression of support.  I really appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2016 02:30 PM · On: Discovery

A Marilyn Manson lookalike was great!And the whole chapter, of course.


I'm so sorry for your brother. My condolences.
Life can be so fucking hard sometimes.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  I can't say it was totally unexpected - my brother had been depressed for some time - but it doesn't make the pain any less.  I am happy that you are continuing to enjoy the story, arakiss, and I am working on the next part now. It helps me to keep my mind off other things.  I'm hoping to have it up soon.

Thank you for all the support. It is deeply appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2016 04:11 AM · On: Discovery

Hi Kim, really enjoying thsi story.  Loved Daphne and Emmet trying to pick out "Dean" from the crowd.  Glas that Brian didn't run away when "JT" didn't meet his expectations.  I knew Vic would have some security keeping an eye on Justin.  Looking forward to Brian & Justin finally meeting face to face.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill!  I'm always happy to know you are reading one of my stories, my friend. I'll have the next/last part up very soon.  Thank you as always for being so supportive.  ~Kim

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2016 03:31 AM · On: Discovery

Sure hope next chapter comes SOON!  Great story line, loving this story...as all of your work!. Thanks so much for all of your efforts; greatly appreciated!



Author's Response:

Hi, there - don't worry; I'm working on the next part right now, so it shouldn't be long.  I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! Thanks for letting me know.  I appreciate YOU reading and especially commenting.  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2016 02:36 AM · On: Discovery

I was just reading the reviews after I posted mine and read about the death of your brother. I'm so sorry for your loss. My heart goes out to you and your family.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Monica.  I am very appreciative of the support. That really does help.  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2016 02:24 AM · On: Discovery

Goth indeed - I had to laugh about that one. Great chapter. I glad that Brian overcame his 1st instinct about looks and considered JT's personality to be more important - now onto the meeting ......Vic is probably quite right about the coming night.....LOL....can't wait.

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica - yes, I could just imagine Justin with that sort of suitor. :)  I hopefully will have the rest of the chapter up very shortly.  It helps me to keep my mind off other things right now. Thank you as always for reading, and for the support.  It means a lot to me. ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorma (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2016 12:29 AM · On: Discovery

Oh you sly one!  You are still keeping us in suspense!  Can't wait for the big reveal!



Author's Response:

Hi, Lorma!  Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment.  I did intend to include their meeting in this part, but I had an unexpected death in my family yesterday, so I decided to post what I had written so far so there wasn't a large gap in between updates.

Their meeting will definitely take place in the next (last) part. Thank you again for the feedback, Lorma. I really appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: Glo (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 05:59 PM · On: The Plan

Hold on, Brian did say he lived in a different state but once he sent his sketchbook back, the post mark would say what state it came from, if not the city itself. Then Justin could have googled Advertising firms and looked up his photo. I don't think he was using all his 1500 SAT score brains that day. lol

Love this story! Can't wait for their meeting!



Author's Response:

Hi, Glo!  Well, I hope you'll give me a little leeway on that. :)  Perhaps Brian used a different return address, or used some other means to disguise his city, etc.  At any rate I'm very glad that you are still enjoying this story.  The meeting will be coming up very soon. Thank you for reading, and for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 05:04 PM · On: Discovery

I see from the reviews that condolences are in order and wish to express my sympathy to you and your family.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate that, and am grateful for your sympathy.  ~Kim

Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 03:25 PM · On: Discovery

You're a master at the waiting game!



Author's Response:

Hi, there!  Well, I did mean to have the meeting in this chapter, but with the death of my brother yesterday morning, I decided to go ahead and post what I had already written.  I will get the next part up as soon as I can. Thank you for reading and for the comments.  I appreciate that ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2016 01:31 PM · On: Discovery

Loved this chapter Kim. Patiently waiting for them to meet :)

* A big hug to you *



Author's Response:

I got your message, dear friend, and I really appreciate your words of comfort.  I will respond once I have more time.  Tomorrow is the visitation in the evening, and the funeral on Friday, so the next couple of days will be extremely hard. But having friends like you offering your sympathy and support really do help. Thank you.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2016 12:44 PM · On: Discovery

For a moment I thought Brian was going to be a shallow jerk. Thanks for making me eat my own words. I think Brian passed the test😊



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim! Well, hopefully Brian was IC here.  I thought he would definitely experience the 'fight or flight' syndrome, but would ultimately do the right thing.  I'm sorry I couldn't get as far as I wanted to.  I lost a brother yesterday to suicide, so the next two days are going to be extremely difficult for my family.  I appreciate your support, and I'll get the next part up as soon as I can.  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2016 03:46 AM · On: Discovery

Sorry to hear about your loss. At least Brian seems to have Vic's approval. How will Brian act when he actually meets JT?

Author's Response:

Hi, Phyllis. Thank you for your expression of sympathy.

Readers will finally see the meeting in the next chapter. I'm sorry I was unable to post it yesterday, but already had this part written, and wanted to get what I had posted.  It will be coming up as soon as I can get it finished. Thank you again for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 03:31 AM · On: Discovery

I thought that it was really nice to see Brian not running away from  average looking Vic. Not being a superficial jerk and give it a chance, so now his reward will be Justin.

I am so sorry for your loss and will keep you and your family in my prayers.



Author's Response:

Hi, Cassie!  I thought about how to approach it, and decided that Brian would initially decide to run away, but then make the 'right' choice to at least respect who he thought was JT and at least spend time with him.  Now he will get his reward coming up. 

 

Thank you for your condolences, also.  The next two days will be extremely hard for my family, and I appreciate your prayers.  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 02:16 AM · On: Discovery

Sorry for the loss in your family. My prayers are with you. First things first. Family comes before anything. lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, lindc.  I'm not going to sugarcoat it.  My brother saw suicide as the only way out of his pain.  I wish he had found a different way, and we could have done more to help him.  Our own pain runs deep right now, and the next two days (visitation and funeral) will be extremely difficult to say the least. Thank you for your sympathy. I will get the last part up as soon as I can.  ~Kim

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 02:07 AM · On: Discovery

So sad to read your inconvenience. I'm so sorry. I will wait as long as it is necessary to read what I'm sure it's going to be a magical encounter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your condolences, and for your patience.  I lost a dear brother yesterday, and the next two days will be the most difficult.  I will get the last part up just as soon as I can.  ~Kim

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2016 02:01 AM · On: Discovery

I'm so sorry for your loss. My condolences.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Laura. I appreciate that.  Visitation tomorrow and funeral Friday, so it will be a couple of very difficult weeks.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2016 01:49 AM · On: Discovery

I had been so busy with the first week of school, that I realized I missed the previous chapter posting... so tonight I got two for the price of one! Can't wait for the "JT/Dean" encounter!

So sorry to hear about your loss... my condolences.



Author's Response:

Hi, Trish!  Thank you reading, and for the comments. I will get the last part up just as soon as I can. And thank you for your condolences. This is going to be a difficult week.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2016 02:10 AM · On: The Plan

I suspicious about the "plan" hope Justin's helpful friends don't screw up the meeting too badly.  I am really enjoying this story, can't wait to read the next installment.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill! I hope to have the last part up very soon. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.  Thank you for your support, my friend. ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2016 01:24 AM · On: One Red Rose

So will the reality live up to the fantasy????  Great build up to the meeting.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Bill.  I appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2016 03:14 AM · On: First Encounter

Glad that Gus still exists in this story.  Loved the email exchange of messages.  Looking forward to a meeting between B&J.  Very interesting to have canon characters with slightly different rolls.  Wondering if Debbie is going to show up??  Bill



Author's Response:

Hey, Bill!  No, no Debbie in this one. I intend to keep this one short (for a change!).  I see either one, or depending upon how long I make it, two chapters here. I'm almost ready to post the next part, so it looks like it will need to be split up (no surprise there, right?).  Thanks again for your support. And as always, I'll be looking forward to your own updates. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2016 02:53 AM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Finally getting around to reading this story. Interesting beginning.  Craig Taylor being kind of nice is a real stretch!  Looking forward to what comes next.  Bill 



Author's Response:

Hi, Bill! Good to see you reading this one.:)  Yes, this is definitely not the Craig we know and don't love - ha! But in this case, it was crucial to the story.  I hope you enjoy the rest of it! Thanks for reading, and for your comments, my friend. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: cuivresdesaxe (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2016 05:11 AM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Hi Kim,

I really like that the boys attraction is not physical here (well not yet anyway), it's very original.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bea!  I'm glad that you're enjoying it. :)  I'm working on the next (last?) part now. Should be up soon.  Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment!  And enjoying your story very much, BTW!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2016 08:16 AM · On: The Plan

Yes, I think that extending the story is a wonderful idea and we would be thrilled if you did it. And doesn't Brian have a grand hotel suite that would be suitable for all repeatable activities? Lol

Doing that epilogue with them getting to know eachother better also sounds great. Yes please.



Author's Response:

Hi, Cassie! Well, it goes without saying that Brian would have some very comfortable accommodations (wink, wink).  I'll see what I can do.  After all, virtual sex (and without a picture, too), would be nothing compared to the real thing with these two!  Thanks again for reading, and for your support.  The next (last?) part will be posted very soon.  ~Kim

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2016 01:43 AM · On: The Plan

   I just knew it.  A rose and a simple plan was not going to happen in this story.  I had come up with all kinds of scenarios that could go wrong or make a simple plan, complex.  I like your approach. Who can screw up things worse than ‘well meaning’ friends and family.  That is just perfect.

  Thanks again for the story.

  DavidR

  Wait. Oh no, Emmett is helping Justin dress for the meeting.  OMG!

 



Author's Response:

Hi, David!  LOL - yes, Emmett could really scare Brian off in a hurry with his typical outfits!  But I'm hoping he'll show a little restraint this time, since Justin is nervous enough as it is.  

I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story!  Will try my best to get the rest up by the end of this weekend; if not, will be very soon. Thanks for reading this story, and especially for commenting. I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Rachael (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 06:38 AM · On: The Plan

Love it so far! Wish more was posted. You stopped at a cliffhanger! :P



Author's Response:

Hi, Rachael!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Don't worry; you won't have to wait long.;)  Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 04:08 AM · On: The Plan

You evil, evil, evil, author.  Lol How could you do that to us. To make it up to us I hope we don't have to wait past the Weekend? I hope that Brian doesn't cringe if he meets Vic or Emmett before Justin. And I hope that Justin isn't going to wear orange pants and a hot pink cut off . Lol Please hurry with next chapter. Now you wouldn't end this story with them not christening their union in person  would You? Lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Cassie!  Thanks for continuing to read and review this story!  I really appreciate that.  Hmmm....well, I had initially ending this story in a more 'sedate' manner, but perhaps with some persuading, I could extend it somewhat.  After all, there are hotels within walking distance of that station.;) 

As for Emmett, I think Justin will make sure he shows at least some restraint in his dressing plans (hopefully!) - LOL!

I'll do my best to have the next part up before the weekend's out.  There could be an epilogue to come where they get to know each other better (wink, wink).  Thanks again for the support!  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2016 04:05 AM · On: The Plan

Oh oh - what have they got in mind.....I can only just imagine possible mayhem.....LOL Can't wait.

Author's Response:

Hmmm....well, they will all be there, whether actively involved or not. ;)  I hope you like the idea that they came up with.  I'm sure you're wondering how Justin was persuaded to go along with their 'plan.' 

I'll have the next part up very soon.  Thanks so much for continuing to read and review, Monica!  ~Kim

Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 02:05 AM · On: The Plan

Just dangling that carrot, aren't ya? The anticipation is way up there. I'm sure the wait for their meeting will be well worth it.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Yes, I know...bad, bad author!!  I hope you enjoy the way I am setting up their meeting. I think you've already figured out it won't be your typical encounter.;)

 

I'll have the next part up very soon. Thank you for reading this story, and especially for commenting!  It is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2016 01:57 AM · On: The Plan

Wow, girl, a cliffy-why am I not surprised?Loved Em's remarks--so funny, I love him. Please put up the meet soon!!! lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  Playing a little catch up on responding to my reviews.  But I want to thank you for continuing to read and review.  And I'm glad you liked Emmett's remarks; that was how I envisioned him reacting.;)  And don't worry; the all-important meeting will be in the next part, and it will be up shortly.  Thanks again for all the support!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 08:34 PM · On: The Plan

I think it's great that Justin felt the need to let his friends know what has been going on in his life. Maybe his subconscious is telling him to be cautious and he has decided to listen. What in the world do Vic, Emmett, and Daphne have in store for Dean/Brian? Please reveal soon...



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  Brian's going to do a little soul-searching himself before the 'test.' But you'll find out very soon what it will be. :)  Thanks so much for reading, and for the comments, Kim!  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 08:16 PM · On: The Plan

I'm more worried about how Emmett is going to dress him. Looking forward to the meeting.

Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, not sure Emmett's the right person. But let's see what he comes up with. :)  Next part will be up very soon. Thank you as always for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2016 07:55 PM · On: The Plan

Yes, very evil!  Now I am on pins and needles wanting to know the plan.  I am glad the story is continuing though. 

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend (hiding under desk now...).  I know; I hadn't intended on making it longer, but felt it needed a little more detail before the meeting to set up 'the test' coming up.  I'm glad you're enjoying it! The next part will be up very soon. Thanks for all your support as usual.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 06:54 PM · On: The Plan

LOL Oh, yes, you're evil ;D How can you leave us like that?

All catched up and ready for the next chapter (what? You can tell? I'm shocked!)

Loving this :)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Yes, I know...bad place to stop!  But I felt I needed to provide more details before they meet...if they meet (how's that for a teaser?).  Now it will be Brian's turn to do a little soul-searching coming up. :)  Thanks for reading, and for the support! I hope you enjoy the rest of it. I'll have the next (last?) part up very soon. ~Kim

Reviewer: Lorma (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2016 02:59 PM · On: The Plan

Waaaaah!  I was so hoping for their meeting!  But this was a good chapter.  After all, it makes sense that he would eventually confide in someone before taking such a big step.  Hope we get the next chapter soon!  No pressure hehe.



Author's Response:

Hi, Lisa!  I know...I really thought it would be in this part, but I decided to flesh it out just a bit more before that happens. But don't worry; they will definitely have the chance to meet in the next part. :)  It won't be long.  Thanks for reading, and for the feedback!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Lisajean (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 02:27 PM · On: The Plan

Hi Kim,

 

This is thrilling! I cannot wait to find out what they have planned! I love all the dialogue you have in this story :)  

 

 I was laughing thinking of the three of them-Daphne, Emmett and Vic investigating the mysterious man lol

 

Also I think it is Great that you are fleshing out this story.  As I have mentioned before I am more than okay with this story being longer.  Cannot wait for more! 

 

Lisa



Author's Response:

Hi, Lisa!  I'm delighted you're continuing to enjoy this story, and I'm happy you liked the dialogue.  Can you imagine Emmett in a three-way Skype with them? LOL!  As for Brian, he's going to do a little soul-searching of his own coming up. But you WILL see exactly what "The Test" is in the next part.  I hope you continue to enjoy this story! Thank you for readng and especially for all the support! I really appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2016 01:23 PM · On: The Plan

Yes, you are so evil!


I'm kind of disappointed of Justin - he's being hesitant, indecisive.

And his friends don't help much.

That's why I never ask my friends for advise when it comes to the matters of the heart :lol


I can't imagine what the test is gonna be, but I'll surely be waiting for Brians' pay back - can't have Justins' mistrust go unpunished now, can we :)



Author's Response:

Hi, my dear!  Please don't me too hard on Justin.  With his wealth and lonely life, I think he needs an objective opinion about his would-be suitor, and whether he's crazy to seek out a relationship with him.  This 'test' will definitely gauge Brian's sincerity, but I'll keep it a secret for the time being. :)  Thank you for reading this chapter, and for the comments!  I'll have the next part up very soon.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2016 07:43 PM · On: One Red Rose

I love the way how Brian and Justin begin their relationship.

I can't wait to read the next chapter

kisses



Author's Response:

Thank you, Susana!  You're always so wonderful about commenting. And it's so great to know the voice and face behind the name. BTW, I have yours and Bibis' gift right where I can see it everyday, and it makes me smile.  I hope one day we can meet up again.  :)  Thank you for always being so supportive of my stories.  I should have the next part up in the next day or so.  Besos!  ~Kim

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2016 09:19 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Gone for a long holiday weekend.  Just read the last 2 chapters.  I love the way they were back and forth by email.   Both of them so Cocky.  Then all the hot phone sex. Can't wait to see if Justin will introduce himself after he sees Brian.  Don't make us wait too long.  LOL!

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  I hope you had a great time!  I'm happy you're liking this story so far.  They will have an interesting encounter coming up, but the way they meet is going to be unique. ;)  (I know; big tease!).  I'll have the next (last?) part up very soon. Thank you as always for reading, and for commenting, Dee Dee.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 07:29 PM · On: One Red Rose

That was very very hot!! Great story, knowing each other without seeing each other.

I want that last part up tomorrow * grins * little impatient, sorry.

* hugs *

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Marian!  I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.  It's going to be an interesting encounter, that's for sure.  And if you're impatient, I'll take that as a big compliment. :)

Thanks for reading, and for the comments! I really appreciate that.~KIm

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 06:45 PM · On: One Red Rose

Oh!  Now I'm chomping at the bit!  I can't wait to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, Lorma! I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story! Thank you for reading, and for the feedback.  And I'm happy that you are anticipating the next chapter. They WILL both arrive at their meeting destination.  But what happens from there I can't say (I know, I'm mean). :) 

Thank you again for reading, and for the support!  It is most appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 06:23 PM · On: One Red Rose

That was super hot.  I like the chemistry and the longing they both have to want to see the other but also the fear of disappointment.

 

loving it :) 

Just one more part?



Author's Response:

Hi, Kathy! So glad that you're enjoying the story!  Glad your liked their 'phone conversation.'  Not sure if I can fit the rest of it in one go or not; there could be a short epilogue of sorts.  I'll have to see how it goes.

Thanks for reading, and for the comments! I really appreciate that. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 04:44 PM · On: One Red Rose

Hi Kim, this chapter was awesome. I love how Brian and Justin got to know each other and fall for each other sight unseen. Their chemistry is palpable. I can't wait for their actual meeting in person. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the feedback, Laura! I am enjoying writing this one. :)  Emmett, Vic, and Daphne are about to make a reappearance in the next part before the two meet, and one of them will be playing a crucial part in their meeting coming up (I know, I'm a big tease!). 

I will have the next (last?) part up soon. Thanks again for the support.  ~Kim

 

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 04:37 PM · On: One Red Rose

   This is a wonderful chapter.  I think it is so clever to have a big buildup for their first  meeting.  I so look forward to the reaction of each.  I am expecting a very emotional moment.  Now the problem.  What can go wrong? Nothing, right?  Well just suppose the flower vendor got sick and didn’t show.  Or how about after Brian buys the rose, a man saw him with the one rose, thought it was a great idea buys one to bring home.  And then a woman comes in and also buys one.  Now standing in the Concourse are three people with a rose.  I think maybe I have read too many MW stories.  Of course you can’t use any of these ideas as it would be a copy right infringement or something like that.  I think?

   Please take that as a compliment to your writing that I worry about fictional characters and that I continue to think about the story long after I read the last sentence.  Thanks for the terrific story.

   DavidR

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, David! It's always a pleasure to hear from you.  Thank you for not only deciding to read this one, but also for leaving your thoughtful comments.  I love all those ideas, BTW! That would be very funny.  And what a dilemma it would bring!  I kind of wish I had thought of one of those now.  But I think the encounter I have in mind for their first time will be just as interesting, and it is the real reason for the story title.;)

I'll have the next part up soon. Thank you again for reading, and for the feedback!  Maybe you should write another story. :)  I would love to see your creativity put to work again!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 02:46 PM · On: One Red Rose

I can't wait to read about Justin's reaction when he sees Brian on the concourse. Something tells me things may be a bit rocky. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  I'm loving all these theories about their meeting.  :)  Everyone will find out in the next chapter.  And there is a good reason why it is called "The Test."  I'll have that part up very soon. Thank you very much for reading,and for your comments! 

P.S.  I have saved your banner in PowerPoint, so I do have it transformed into a vertical format. So don't worry; if you want to post your banner vertically in the future, I'll have it ready for you to use. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 02:27 PM · On: One Red Rose

I'm hating to see this coming to an end. You've given us a picture of what they think, know and have learned of each other. Will Brian recognize Justin first is my question?

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Well...that is a good question.  And the key to this entire story IMO.  I'll consider it a compliment that you don't want the story to end, too. :)

Thank you never seems enough compared with how much you support this site with your comments, but please know that it is greatly appreciated.  I'll have the next/part of the story up soon.  ~Kim

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 02:26 PM · On: One Red Rose

Well, this was masterfully done - you managed to make them know each other so well and even fall for each other maybe? without actually meeting face to face :)

Don't tell me Brians' major client is Justins' company :lol


Can't wait for them to meet!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I'm so glad you liked this chapter!  And yes, this is certainly a new situation for someone like Brian, who is such a tactile person and so focused on image.  There is a reason for the title of this story. You will soon find out why. (I know, I'm a tease).  Thank you for reading, and for your support of my stories. I appreciate that so much. I'll have the next part up very soon.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2016 01:43 PM · On: One Red Rose

That was a great chapter. I love this story. You know me already.....can't wait long....



Author's Response:

Thanks, Mariana!  You're all caught up now.;)  The next (and last) part should be up very soon.  No long waiting like normal. :)  Thanks for the coments, and for reading.  It is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2016 01:19 PM · On: One Red Rose

I knew this would be up today. Are you off work today, it being a holiday? I am and having a lazy day laying in the sun having a toddy. I am wondering if this meet will take place as scheduled and if the client Brian is meeting has something to do with Justin. Just me wondering as I know how your mind works at times. Have a good day and put the next chapter up as soon as your busy schedule allows. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc!  Yes, thankfully I have the day off. There never seems to be enough time to do what I want to do, though.  But at least I can work on part of the story today, in between other matters needing my attention.  I'm glad you're getting some much-deserved time off, too.

As for the meet and greet, I'm finding all the theories very interesting! I hope I manage to surprise all of you before I'm done. :)  Thanks as always for reading, and for your comments.  Have another drink on me - ha!  ~Kim

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