I have really enjoyed this spin off.  After reading, I felt better about the interaction between Brian and Evan.  Brian was wrong for giving in and breaking his promise to Justin but as he admitted he was weak and had unresolved feelings for the man who broke his heart.  Justin was entitled to his feelings of betrayal but  a little voice in my head was whispering...Justin, pot, you have a lot of nerve trying to call that kettle Brian... black.  Hello, the  Fiddler Fiasco....I 'm just saying. Evan tried to make amends so I guess I'll give him a teeny tiny pass. As always Daphne gets props for being a great day have to both Justin and Brian. Loved the story.

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Hi, i'm sorry if it upset you but i have to comment about your story, that doesn't mean that you have to change something about it but as a committed reader of Britin fanfic i have the right to share my fellings.

I'm really confused about Brian and Evan relationship, you said it's just friendship but sorry i'm not convinced. If only Brian could explain why he let Evan fuck him 3 times (in this case it's not just sex) but he can't even explain it to Lindsay (what the hell); and prove that he doesn't love him BUT he is so confused himself that you can see that he has deep fellings (love) for Evan. Moreover you built a deep relatonship between Brain and Evan that there is no place for  BRITIN relationship. Like i said before they don't make sens anymore that even when Brian say he love Justin it's not believable, you just want to laught at him. In this story you really manage to destroy the bond between Brian and Justin that, even me a big Britin shipper don't want them together anymore. The problems are not the cheating or the flowers, ect it's the whole dynamic Brian-Evan-Justin.

And i always was so impress with Brian and Justin as individuals and as a couple, they fitted so perfectly together but here I'm just disgusted with them. I really hope they can fix everything still but I just don't see how it can be possible.

Again, it's not against your writing skills, that doesn't mean I expect for you to change something about your story.

As Britin fans and committed reader, everyone has the right to share his opinion, that the point of this plateform.

 

Sorry but I don't understand his actions. i'm more than convinced now that Brian and Justin have nothing to do together anymore. For me they don't have futur together. Maybe Justin can find someone else that will give him what Brian couldn't. And Brian can fuck himself with Evan. Or maybe Brian can find his happy ending with Evan, it seems that he was badly in love with him (he compares his relationship with Evan to his relationship with Justin) and still is, so they can built something together as business and life partner. All i can see for Justin and Brian from now is friendship and only because I don't want to be mean to Brian and still fancy him a little bit.

But you're good writer maybe you will prove me wrong later.

Again it's not against your writing skills, it's just this story got me in bad ways. And i don't see BRITIN anymore, so heartbreaking.

I still don't trust him or like him.

i concur with both comments below

So Brian and Evan didn't fuck for two days or forty hours like Evan wanted. It was only for a few hours and only a total of three times in those few hours because Brian told him that they had no agreement?

Why didn't Brian tell Justin that it was two days if it wasnt?

So Brian wasn't having sex when Justin heard him on the phone?

Where was Brian self control when he was going to try and top Evan. That was his idea?

 When Brian said " No, we don't. I guess three times is enough. You should leave. The damage is already done," Brian muttered, taking a drag from his cigarette." Was he meaning that he wanted to do damage and that three times is enough for the damage to happen?

When Brian said yes to Evan he was angry but very lucid and sain. He knew what he was doing and could of stopped it. He wasn't under mind control. He's a grown man not a horns teen.

Brian is so afraid of Justin finding out and telling Evan not to tell him knowing all along her should not do it. And talking about him many times but still freely wanting to do it makes him such a hippocrit. 

Calling Justin his toy is very direspectful to Justin.

"Evan rarely regretted his actions, but he wished he wouldn't have pursued Brian so hard, he wished he wouldn't have that influence over Brian that made him fall under his spell." This statement what is Evan talking about what spell was that? Brian could of said no anytime. He wasn't hypnotized, just because hes the dominate 

What it boiled down to is Brian wanted it or he could of stopped it. And I don't like Evan still hanging around even if he isn't going to try to do anything. It's disrespectful to Justin and Brian isintelligent enough to know that. Why can't Evan hang around somewhere else and not Brian. I hope Justin has sex with the fiddler at least once so Brian can feel pain and wonder if he has feelings for him!

I hope you can respond to my comments and questions.  I know you weren't able to a answer your reviews from state of mind but I hope you can here.

I've like yours stories a lot but I have to say that with this story you distroy the bond between brian and Justin. For me, it's impossible for them to get back together even if I know that they will eventually I dont's see how it'll work for them.

But don't take it personnally your stories are greak and you're a good writer. It's only about my perception of Brian and the fact that he never breaks a promise, it'a was the only think that prove that Justin meant more to him than all his tricks now it's feels that it'a Evan his true love and Justin was just a subsitute.

Anyway good luck