Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2021 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 35

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2020 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 23

I do notlike that Jen is so bossy to Brian.  Spending his money when she feels like it and tellhim what to do.  Brian shouldtell her to back off and Justin too

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2019 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 35

Please updat

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2019 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 10

Love your stories.  you spent time teeling the story 95% of the time and only5 % at sex.  I love that.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Happy to know you are enjoying the stories!!!  Bill

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2019 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

the hell with Mel, stop paying for their shit and take Gus from them

Author's Response:

Gus does love his Moms.  I think B&J are concerned about disrupting Gus's life and worry he may resent being seperated from L&M.  Glad you are still reading and enjoying this long saga.  Bill

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2018 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 35

Hi, I just finished reading both Sickness & Health and HOlidays.  I so enjoyed both stories.  I hope Taylor-Kinneyhs do Disney will be out soon.  You are such a good writer and your stories are always so good.  Thank you for writing them for us to enjoy.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!!!  I am working on the enxy installment.  Some changes in RL don't leave me with as much time for writing as I'd like.  Hope to have something posted soon.  Bill

Reviewer: tjazz (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2018 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 35

Sorry for totally forgetting to comment. As you already know, I just absolutely love this verse you've created. I hope you choose to continue it with a "next" chapter. Not only am I looking forward to Brian in Disney, but I'm more looking forward to the arrival of the twins. 

Thanks for giving us readers such wonderful stories to immerse ourselves in.

-Tiffany

Author's Response:

Hi Tffany, thanks for taking time to post a review.  Sorry I haven't answered sooner.  I am working on next installment but haven't had as much time as I would like to write it.  Hope to post it soon.  Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 35

This was perfect, I love it so much how the kids love Grandmon Jen and how she treats them with such love. It’s what kids and grown up kids as well.

 

mel is stupid she calls herself clever....yeah right. Gus is doing a great thing helping other kids and she says what she said and about paying lol she is a twit. 

 

This story just got better and better cannot wait to see what’s next in the sequels. 

 

Incredible wirk xx

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2018 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 33

John and Peter are truly blessed to have Brian and Justin look after them Ron is truly a horrible man and deserves no part in their lives.

Michael is so delusional about Brian and what he thinks Justin did it’s dangerous. I fear he may try something that may end up putting someone in danger. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2018 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 31

I love how the guys are with the boys they truly care and love them and their happiness which is such a powerful thing. 

 

Mel needs a good slap down not a real slap but a hard reality one. She will only lose out big time if she keeps going how she is.

 

so sorry took so long to get back reading this. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2017 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 35

Are you going to follow thru on this series or have you quit writing...which would be so sad...I love this series

 

Author's Response:

I am working on the first chapter of the Disney Trip.  I love this series as well, after Disney we will meet the twins.  Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying this long saga.  Bill

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2017 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

I so enjoyed reading Sickness and in Health and Holiday Happenings.  You are a wonderful writer and I really look foward to the Disney story.  Thank you for your stories.  

Author's Response:

Thanks Lori for your really nice comments!!!  I am happy to know you enjoyed my stories.  I am working on the first chapter of the Disney trip.  Thanks for taking time to review, I love hearing from the readers!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2017 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 35

What happened with Brian’s ‘talk’ with Melanie????

Author's Response:

I didn't feel like adding a downer to the last chapter.  I'm sure Justin has a talk with Mel and she realizes she was wring but won't stop her in the future.  Thanks for the review!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2017 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 35

Sad to see the end - always love catching up in this universe. Kevin is such a sweetheart. I like that Clarie is getting her act together. Most definitely looking forward to Brian at Disney...LOL And I can just imagine the FUN twins are going to bring. Looking forward to the next saga.

Author's Response:

Still have ideas so the saga will continue.  I am always so happy when someone mentions Kevin.  I think he is the favorite of all the original characters I have added.  I am anxious to get to the twins' srrival.  Thanks for all your support for my stories.  I do really love to get reviews!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2017 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 35

Bill:

  Great ending to the second story in your tale.  I loved the weekend and could envision all the fun things the kids did.  So happy you plan sequels.  Would hate to envision a world without this universe

Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed the latest update to this long saga.  I hate to think about an end to your Fatherhood universe.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 35

What a lovely update.  I had a grandmother like grandma Jen.  Now that I am a grandma/ Nana I have so much fun with my granddaughter.  As grandparents it is so much easier than when I was raising my kids.  Love this time of life.  Can't wait for the Disney trip.  We have everyone in the family saving all their change for a Disney trip.  My granddaughter thinks it is so much fun watching the jar fill up.  

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the nice comments.  I love the idea of everyone saving their change in the jar and your granddaughter watching the money build up.  That will be a memory she carries through her whole life.  You sound like a fun grandmom!!!  Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Sallyo (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 35

But what happened with Mel?

Author's Response:

Sorry I was in a good mood and didn't want to think about Mel and her issues.  I'm sure there will be another occasion when she screws up and is confronted by Justin or Brian.  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 35

My dear Sweet Baboo, Santa just gave me my Christmas wish--your chapter. I will never understand when Gus does a good thing in helping others, his mothers act like it's a crime. The bit about the tution was just dumb --Brian and Jus foot the bill for everything when it comes to  Gus. Kevin is such a sweetheart and they didn't want the inter-action between them, Brian has grown so much, loving Jus and Gus just opened up his flood gates. Can't wait for the new story. Hope you have a beautiful Christmas with only wonderful things for the coming year. Your Sally forever  

Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, no chapter feels complete to me until I read your review.  Mel & Linds have a unique view of life which seems to not have much basis in reality.  Hopefully Mel's counseling will help her see life as it really is.  If she doesn't straighten up Mother Taylor may have to beat the shit out of her.  I think Brian never knew unconditional love until Gus & Justin appeared in his life, no coincidence it was on the same day.  It was Kismet!!!  I hope you have wonderful holidays and we all have a stupendous 2018!!!   As always, your Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 35

A bittersweet time. Another ending. *sob*. On a high note, I can now put it onto my kindle and re-read it in it's entirety. (again)

Grandma Jen time is always a joy to read about. It's amazing how far so many of these characters have come. Brian from his troubled past to being the amazing man he is here. Jen coming from a protective mom to someone who loves and accepts Brian completely. The cousins who have wonderful loves ahead of them now. 

Mel & Linds seems to have changed very little and apparently the same with Michael. The jury is still out for any hope with those 3. Hopefully we see more of them in future writings. I was kind of expecting a Wasp like smack down of teh girls a la Justin. Perhaps we'll see one at a later date.

The Disney story should be most amusing. Will be intersting to see how Brian is at the magical kingdom. lol. Hopefully he enjoys it as much as the kids will. (Justin is included in the kids there as we all know Justin will be a big kid at Disney. ;) lol )

Loved this!!!!  Congrats on the success of another unbeleivably wonderful part to the series. Definitely one of my all time favorites.

Cheers

Elaine

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I always feel special when I get a review on a non-Monday.  You are always so supportive and I truly appreciate you.  Glad you approve of the way the charactes in the story have developed.  As you point out some have had no positive development at all.  I think you are correct there will be lots of "kids" for Brian to deal with at Disney.  I think as long as his Sunshine & his Sonny Boy are happy he will be happy as well.  I am happy to know you are still enjoying this long saga of mine.  Thanks you so much for the review, you know I LOVE to get them!!!!!!!!    Cheers back to you,  Bill

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 35

Wow I have had a busy morning reading! 😀

Love grandma time with the boys and with them blowing the rents off was priceless😆

Just wanted to say Thank you for taking the time for this wonderful update you always make me smile with this story

💕😘

 

~Teresa~

 

 

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2017 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 34

Happy Turkey Day, My Sweet Baboo to you and your family.

Author's Response:

Thank you Darling Sally.  I had a really great T Day!!!  Love you, your Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2017 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 34

Hi Sweet Baboo,  Been rereading again, and hope Kevin will written in.Like Grandmom Jen is always saying Kevin is just full of love. Brian and Justin, and the rest of the house hold especially Gus has given Kevin a wonderful extended famly who loves and teaches him many things to like Brian teaching him how to kick a scoccer ball, or Gus helping him with his reading and for all the kindness and love they have shown him, Kevin has given back so much love.I missed reading about the child he makes the lessons they have taught him so important and special. Love you, your Sally

Author's Response:

Kevin is in the next chapter for sure.  I am trying my best to get the chapter done.  It will finish Holiday Happening but the sage will go on.  First we will do Disney for Spring break and then time for the twins!!!!!  Always love hearing from you my Darling Sally.  As always, you sweet Baboo

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2017 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 34

“Molly and I love Justin and we love Brian and they love us.” 

    That just about says it all for this chapter.  I guess there will

be no more lunches between Craig and Justin.  At least not

without Brian and Jennifer attending.  Well – we can forget that.

    I find it strange that after all this time Craig is still holding on to

the thinking that Brian corrupted Justin.  Jennifer explained that

to him how false that is.  I’m sure not for the first time.  She also

stated all the things that Brian has done for Justin.  Craig already

knows them.  Maybe, just maybe, that is the issue for Craig. 

Jennifer could have nailed the Craig coffin by added that these

were things Justin’s father should have done, but didn’t.  Could it

be that is reason Craig hates Brian and continues to hold on to

that hate.  Guilt!  Well I think so.

     Terrific chapter.  One joy in reading this story is the

relationship between the characters. 

    Thanks for the chapter and for the wonderful story.

DavidR

 

 

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, as you know I always look forward to your comments.  Seems like you are pretty happy with this chapter.  I think Craig just wants someone to blame so he deosn't have to admit he is the one who fucked up his own life.  Always happy to know you are still reading and enjoying this long story.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2017 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 28

Ugh. Brian hiring Micky is going to trigger his delusions being "number one" in Brian's life again, even ahead of Justin and his three sons. I can see him pulling the "best friend" card at work and Brian is going to spend his workdays fixing Micky's messes. Please say he will end up getting his ass fired.

Perhaps hitting bottom (homless) would have scared him into getting a job. He had experience at the Big Q. Now that he's rescued once again, there's no reason for him to change and grow up; he'll be the same entitled jerk as always. Sigh. I love your fic, but it's very frustrating to read when it comes to Mikey.

Also, Mel is being out of character from the previous fic. In the first installment, she was reasonable and even respected Brian. Sorry, but it just seems like you changed her because now that Lindsay got help, you need a new villian.

It's your fic and I'm not telling you to change though. I always look forward to seeing a new chapter pop up.

 

Author's Response:

I think this job at Kinnetic could be a turning pont for Mikey.  Having Cynthia as a boss could be an eye opener for him.  Of course it could turn out that Cynthia fires him day one!!!  I did sort of pass of Mikey's Big Q experience but he didn't leave there under the best circumstances so there would be no going back there  and, of course, authors like to play fast & loose with facts that don't suit ther stories.  Melanie is frustrated that she made poor decisions and beause of those decisions she has lost full control of her life.  None of us like to admit we f-ed up.  I suspect she will realize she is using Brian as a villain to feel better about herself.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story and I really appreciate hearing the views of my readers - sometimes the readers influence the way the story flows but not always.  Thank you so much for your review and please always let me know when you think I am heading in the wrong direction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2017 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 28

I check every day to see if you have added a new chapter. This one was so full of good stuff. Justin is awesome when passed off. Brian must be nuts to hire Michael. This will end badly .

Author's Response:

Sorry I made you wait so long for this chapter.  I love writing pittbull Justin.  Brian is a softie when people he cares about are in trouble and tears are his Kryptonite.  I believe Cynthia is more than a match for Mikey.  Thanks for taking time to review because i am very shallow and LOVE, LOVE, LOVE to get reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2017 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 27

 I know you've been helping our friend with the broken wrist and I'm glad she has support to lean on. But I know you and how you like being in your garden--so pay attention : my sweet babboo, get out of the garden now! You are causing me to go thru withdrawal it's not a pretty sight. You left with a cliff hanger! besides I miss you, love your Sally 

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I can't use Kim as an excuse.  I have just been distracted.  The good news is I sold my house so I no longer have a garden to putter in.  The bad news is that doesn't mean I have spent that extra time writing.  The very good news is that the new chapter will be posted later tonight or tomorrow.  I am sorry for the delay, I hope this doesn't mean I am no longer your Baboo???????????????????????????  

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2017 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 27

My Sweet Baboo, Sorry I'm late reviewing, but I had problems with my laptop.Instead of showing secuirty numbers there was just a little x there. I finally was able to contact Bob and he emailed me a solution. I appreciate his kindness.Now for Ron Townsend, please hurry and write the chapter that gets rid of him and his idiot cousin! After reading about them all I want is a hot shower.No doubt his moron cousin found out how wealthy Brian is and being a con artist decided after ten years he loved his sons-baloney I was surprised and pleased that Joan would not support or pay for Ron's lawyer.It must of been hard to make that call to Brian and eating crow. She told him the truth about Ron and she knew the boys were doing well in school and loved their uncles and for him to stop Ron and even wished them all a happy new year, must have been hard on the old girl, but she did the right thing. Love You, Sally

Author's Response:

My darling Sally, I knew we were having an issue with anonymous reviews.  I think it had to do with our increased security.  We were having an issue with SPAM reviews.  Some people have too much time on their hands!   I believe you are a member of the web site.  If you signed in you wouldn't have to do the security numbers, if you forgot your password, you can request a reset. 

Really happy to see your review, I always look forward to hearing from you.  Ron is pretty despicable!  He wanted his sons for what they could do to help him, not what he could do FOR them.  Even Joan could see Ron was a worse choice as guardian.  She is happy that Alice & Charlie are "good Christians".  Not exactly a resounding endorsement of B&J but a huge concession on Joan's part.  I have traveling on the east coast and visiting friends but hope to have next chapter done soon.  As always Love from your sweet Baboo.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2017 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 27

      Ron just seems to see things differently.  He really thought

that just because he is their father they would go with him.  You

know, if Claire didn’t do what she did and continue to treat the

boys as badly that she did, I wonder if they would see things

differently. What if Brian and Justin didn’t take over.  Ron doesn’t

seem to be cruel or abusing.  As I said, he is just different.

    This situation brings to mind what happened many chapters

ago.  John was playing soccer and there  in the stands was Justin,

Brain and the family there to watch him play. It was written beautifully, as maybe for the first time, he was not alone.  He was

part of a family, if not biologically but affectionately.

   To use the expression,  these people ‘were there for him’. How

much was that worth to John.  Everything!  So of course John

wants no part of Ron.  John has people around who care for him,

who love him.  He has it all

   DavidR

Author's Response:

I agree that Ron has a unique way of looking at things.  John & Peter did not lick out with their parents.  I think they appreciate B&J all the more because of their bad expieriences with Claire.  I think they realize a father who abandons them for 10 years is not a winnner.  Ron looks at how the boys could help him, nothing about how he could make up to them for all the years he was gone.  John & Peter have been embraced by the entire household and family - B&J, Grandmom Jen, Alice & Charlie as well as friends.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter!!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2017 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 27

I was pretty shocked that Joan stood up for Brian and Justin like she did. I was imagineing them joining forces to make life hell for the boys. thankfully she had that time at the house to see how happy the boys are. she may not agree with their "way of life" as she puts it, but she's learning to put that part aside and see the hear of the matter. What is really best for the boys. 

Not sure what ron had in mind to do, especially if teh police hadn't shown up. Good thing Peter called and they came immediately. I wouldn't put it passed him to try and take the boys. His intentions with them are horrendous! He basically wants them for slave labour! Well...let's hope he doesn't try anything that will hurt the boys. Brian and Justin are going to keep a close eye on them now I'm sure. I don't trust Ron as far as I can throw him. He and his cousin I'm sure will stop at nothing. their concerns has nothing to do with being in teh same house as "fags" as they put it. It's that he want control of the boys. I'm curious as to what Annabell will find out with the investigator.

Deb of course takes control of joe. Has him placed in her house dispite his arguments. A bit of give and take there obviously. Poor guy...Astro man wallpaper adn sheets etc. LOL. I'd fight that too.

Happy Monday! thank you for this update! Was so happy to see it.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Author's Response:

Well now I am sure it is Monday!!!   Hi Elaine, I think even Joan could see how dismal a guardian Rn would make for John & Peter.  She didn't exactly give a unqualified endorsement to B&J just they were better than Ron.  Ron is clueless enough to think his sons would be happy to see him after ten years.  He supposed they would be happy to go with him.  Ron and his cousin are lucky they didn't really anger Alice.  I'm sure there was hot sauce in her car.  I don't think Anabel or her investigator will find anything good about Ron and his life in Alaska.  He is a super loser!  Deb & Joe could be interesting.  We'll have to see what his Uncle thinks about that arrangement.  Carl still has to be consulted as well.  Deb has kept Joe a secret from her resident policeman since Joe was a runaway.

Thanks for the review, I always enjoy your comments!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 27

Joan being on Brian's side is a complete surprise, to me and to the boys.  It's about time she did the right thing.  Debbie taking Joe in is no surprise either.  I hope Joe will be happy there.

Dee Dee

Author's Response:

He Dee Dee, not sure Joan is so much on Brian's side as she is opposed to Ron Townsend.  She knows that being with Ron would not be good for John & Peter.  We have to see how Joe likes living with Debbie and what his uncle thnks about that arrangement.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review, I do love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 27

It's a surprise have Joan on the boys side but at least she has her grandson's best interest at heart. (There's hope for her yet - maybe!!!!) The boys and all the family are strong, they will weather this disturbance as well. I am curious what Ron is up to - 10 years is a long time to ignore his sons and then come and get them just because they are living with 2 gays. Got to be more going on. Looking forward to more as always.

Author's Response:

Joan found someone she thought was worse than B&J for her grandsons.  Happy you enjoyed this chapter.  Ron thinks his sons may be useful to him, he is not a nice person.  Thanks for all your support, I am always happy to see your reviews!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2017 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 26

      Today I have been able to catch up on the last two chapters. 

The interaction between B & J, and the Nephews and Gus was fun

to read.  There is this affection and joy between the five of them

that that is so wonderfully written.  I don’t think there is a happier

boy than Gus.  Hanging out with his older male cousins, who treat

him with affection and respect, makes him so very happy.  Add

Brian and Justin, and Gus has it all.

    So what happened?.  Towsend happened.  After all this time, I

don’t know why he shows up.  I wonder what he wants.  I have no

idea, though the only thing I could guess is money. We will see.

    Thanks for the last two chapter and of course, thanks for the

story.

DavidR

 

Author's Response:

I am happy and relieved to hear from you.  I thought maybe you had abandoned the story after the long wait for an update.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter, all really positive comments this time.  I am very flattered.  I agree that Gus is a happy little guy spending his time in Washington Township.  Ron is kind of a mystery man but more about that whole situation in the new chapter I just posted.  Thanks, as always, for your review.  I always enjoy your comments!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 26

Hi, Bill!  Finally had a chance to sit down and write a review.  As always, such an engaging, wonderfully detailed chapter.  Favorite things in this one were the romantic, sexy moments with B & J, and Justin with Gus.  I love him calling him Papa, BTW!

That last part was a big, angsty surprise! But now I can't wait to see how it pans out. Surely a judge wouldn't hand these boys back, but he IS their biological father, which can be hard to beat. 

Looking forward to your next chapter, my friend!  Thank you for this story, and for all the help you give us.  XOXO  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, thanks for the review. Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter. Ron is their financially strapped biologic father. Not sure he can afford much of a lawyer but we'll have to wait and see what happens.  I love being pat of the MW community!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2017 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 26

Hi My Sweet Baboo! I've missed you-lots. Well good old Ron shows up, too bad he's such a loser.He doesn't ask about the boys, just that they BELONG to him. Hopefully he doesn't have the money for a lawyer. The boys are doing so good and love their family I think he's probably more intrested in Brian and Justin's bank balance than in John or Peter, so much for the scum of the earth. About Joe, he didn't exactly strike oil in the dad department either. Maybe Debbie will step in and find another lost boy--the boy needs love and caring and as crazy as she is Joe trusts her and he needs family to love him. This was a chapter worth waiting for. Love you, Sally

Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, sorry to have been away from you for so long! Ron has had contact with John & Peter for 10 years. I don't think they will be anxious to see him. He traveled across the country by bus, I don't think Ron has much moiney to spend on a lawyer.  I suspect you may be xorrect abouy bank balances! Porr Joe, his is kind of alone in the world.  Just the type to appeal to Debbie, we'll have to see what happens there.  Happy to know you enjoyed the chapter after waiting for so long!!!  Always makes me smile to see your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I remain your sweet & loving Baboo. 

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2017 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 26

nice twist at the end, but Brian is not giving up John and Peter-  he has legal custody so hopefully there won't be any issues.  I was kind of hoping that maybe Debbie would step up and offer to have Joe live with her.  Still enjoying the story and thank you for writing and sharing your universe.

Author's Response:

Thanks,glad you enjoyed Ron's appearence.  I don't think Ron has uch of a chance of getting custody but who knows what mischief he can create.  Happy to kow you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2017 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 26

Can't believe I missed this update.  It's really good, what with a couple of trees falling down.  lol.  I'm glad that Justin was able to get Lindsay to see reason about the murals.  So Joe has an uncle, but Deb isn't too happy that the guy isn't willing to drop everything and be there for Joe.  Then you have John and Peter's sperm donor show up demanding that his sons go to Alaska to be with him.  What is it in there for him?  Talking to a lawyer is going to be pricey.

Author's Response:

Don't worry my friend, I just posted this last night.  Always happy to hear from Midnight Whispers' number one reviewer.  I had trees fall in my yard in the middle of the night so that came from real life.  What do we think Deb is going to do about this mildly concerned uncle, stay tuned.  Ron is kind of an evil sperm donor who is going up against the master sperm sharer, Brian.  I don't think it will be a fair fight.  Ron needs to avoid anything that is pricey.  He needs to have the bus fare to get back to Alaska.  Thank, as always for your review.  I never feel a chapter is complete until I read your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2017 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 26

Happy Hump Day! Celebrating the mid week slump with an update! YAY! Happy dance. Really glad that RL seems to be easing up for you a bit. Unselfishly so that you can finally sit and breathe, relx and not stress out with day to day shit. I mean it's always there, but if it's eased a bit for you, that's always a good thing. Selfishly......more updates!!!!!!!!! LOL! ;) I swear, with this story as well as a few others, it's a bit of an addiction! Mind you, it's one that I'm really NOT willing to get help for. :)

John and Justin's  interactions while making a meal was nice to see. John is definitely showing his comfort level with B&J but being so open with them. Talking to Justin about his "girlfriend" issues, and Justin just listening just proves how far John has come. How trusting he is, and how Justin understands the need to just listen.

Also love that John and Peter allow gus to help, and even encourage it. It lets Gus feel like he's a big boy, helping his cousins, it will inevitably give him a sense of responsibility that he can use more and more as he gets older. Brian and Justin may be very generous, but they don't let any of those 3 get away with behaving like spoiled brats. They expect them to be giving and encourage a generous heart. They're teaching them that nothing should just be given, but earned. The fact that all 3 boys seem to enjoy most of their responsibilites, shows that they will grow up to be fantastic young men and not take things for granted.

Oh poor gus getting so scared in the middle of teh night like that. He knows that he's secure and safe with his dads. Have to admit, would've scared the crap out of me as well! Thankfully not too much damage done.

Hopefully Zelda doesn'tdiscourage the friendship between Gus and Dylan. she seemed ok with Lindsey adn Mel's relationship, but seemed awkward with regards to Justin and Brian's. Perhaps it's just initial not understanding it idea of it, adn will realized there's nothing to worry about. Many people think that 2 women are OK, but 2 men are a threat or deviants or soemthing. 

Interesting background re: joe. Probably all stuff he's unaware of. I get that his uncle isn't prepared to be a father figure to Joe, that he wants to keep his normal routine with his career. It would be a huge change, and something that many wouldn't be willling to do either. At least he was makign an attept to find Joe, to let him know about what's going on, that he has money and doesn't have to live on the streets. That he's OK with being an uncle, but that's about it. At least he doesn't seem to be trying to pilfer Joe's money. curious to see what's going to happen with Joe now. Boarding school or will B&J find themselves with an addition to their household? Or perhasp Deb will. she's certainly taken a shine to him.

Seeing a spark of the old Lindsey attitude. Not sure if it's a bad thing though. It's just a matter of finding the balance between being docile and being as wel...psychotic as she was. She's seeing the strides she's making with everyone, particularly Brian. I guess it's a matter of time before we see if it's permanant. Hopefully she doesn't revert back. 

Now...as for this Ron Townsend guy. He hsa no idea what he's in for as far as a legal battle is concerned. He's moaning about having no money, how he's barely making ends meet, but wants the boys. I guess he's thinking that B&J will provide for them? Pfffffft. How did he find out about them living with them though? Has Claire been in touch? Joan? Is it just the fear of the boys "becoming gay" that has him coming to get them or is there a different motivation?

Again, thrilled for the update, but now I really want to know what's going to happen now! lol. Sorry for the novel length review. In a chatty mood I guess. That's what you get for staying away for so long! lol

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 

Author's Response:

Elaine, my friend, you get the award for the longest review.  I know you really paid attention to this chapter!!  Glad you liked the John & Justin cooking interlude.  You got just what I was trying to portray, thank you.  I actually got woken up a couple years ago by trees falling into my yard.  I didn't have any Daddy or Papa to run to.  The top of the trees touched the house but h=no damage was done.  I think Zelda just didn't think about the situation and was embarressed. Hmmmm Joe living with Deb & Carl????????????  I think it is good that Lindsay is getting back to normal.  She has Justin to keep her in line.  Ron has no money, Brian & Justin have lots of money, might be 100% paternal concern that has Ron revisitng the steel city.  Thank you for all your support I think I enjoyed your review as much as you enjoyed this update.  You know I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Cheers,  Bill

Reviewer: AnonymousNW1 (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2017 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 26

Great chapter! I actually cheered aloud when Justin stood his ground for the kids' wants against Lindsay. I guess she has now learned that Sunshine can become a Storm Cloud real quick when he wants to.

As for that punkass Ron Townsend (I swear what is it with the damn Rons in this fic... first Peterson and his foolery and now enter Fool von Fool Townsend)... I can understand what had made him so attractive to Joan and Claire. After all, like recognizes like and sadly that statement definitely extends to bigotry. I wonder if Joan is the 'cousin' that wrote to him. It sounds just like something her backbiting ass would do. I find it strange that although he claims to not have much money that he would want to take on two growing teens while he already has a wife and two other mouths to feed. Hmmm something is definitely rotten in the milk, especially with the timing of it all. Is it that he expects Brian to support him and his growing family since I'm fairly certain he did it for Claire in a roundabout way when she was with the Ass from Alaska? He knows that Brian wouldn't see his nephews starve no matter his feelings about their mother and offspring. Yeah... something is just not adding up about his motives and I don't buy that 'I don't want you turning them into faggots' excuse either. Whereas those may be his definitive opinions, there has to be more to it than that. Well I look forward to reading about his ass being kicked back to Moose Fuck in the coming chapters!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS 

Author's Response:

Hi NW, Lindsay can't help being selfish. I agree with Justin the kids should have what they want. He worked with them to be sure the murals met their wishes.

It is kind of funny that Ron T showed up all of the sudden.  There is a song that says "money makes the world go around".  I wonder if money make Ron Towsend go around the country. He may have bitten off more than he knows with both Brian & Justin working against him.  At the very least Ron owes a shitload of back child support.  He doesn't seem to be especially bright.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Hugs back to you,  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2017 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 26

Wow!!!! A new chapter and it's a really good one. Where to start first I guess at the house with the boys. John and Justin cooking and talking was sweet and allows Justin to find out what is going on with John without really trying to pull it out of him which no teenager likes. John and Peter including Gus both in games and meal setup makes him feel like a big boy.

Lindsay will never learn Justin is not the pushover everyone except Brian knows he isn't. Murals can change or be painted over Justin knows this Lindsay is learning. 

Who is going to take in Joe although boarding school might be fine as long as his Uncle visits and calls and emails. If he is just going to stick him school and walk away then there must be a better solution. 

Ron Townsend I think you might be safer if you hope back on that bus now because the wrath of Brian and Justin will be too much for you to ever handle. Or he and Joan can form a club oh wait that's where your going ooooooooh now I get it. Joan was just biding her time waiting for John and Peter's daddy to show up. Sneaky you have had his hiding for a while and then you took a 2 month break just to spring this on us.

As a bonus for being patient (hiding head. never patient here) can we get another chapter or 2 this month because you know I need to see how fast Ron runs to Joan. 

Author's Response:

Sorry to make you wait so long for an update but happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  John & Peter are very good to Gus who loves spending time with his "big boy" cousins.  Justin had no problem letting Lindsay know who was in charge of the murals.  He is determined to give Gus & JR what they want.  Joe's Uncle doesn't seem to have a lot of interest in spending time with his nephew.  He wants to do his "duty" but doesn't want to give up his career.  We'll have to see how things work out for Joe.  On the surface it doesn't seem like Joan & Ron have much in common except they both want to "rescue" John & Peter from the preverted clutches of Brian & Justin.  Who knows what those two will get up to.

My "2 month break" involved bad cold, new job, selling my house and moving.  I wasn't on a tropical island sipping fruity cocktails.  Now that RL has settled down I expect to update more frequently.  Thanks for being so loyal about reviewing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2017 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 25

I started reading this a week ago, but never get the chance to finish the chapter.  Laying under the covers myself, thinking about your story. I had to scroll way back to find it. But I'm happy ... What a lovely chapter. Thanks.

 

* hugs and goodnight * 

Marian

Author's Response:

Hi Marian, so happy to know you enjoyed the last chapter.  I am working on the next installment but RL is keeping me very busy right now.  Hugs back to you!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2017 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 25

Sweet Baboo, your being naughty, I would never desert you, you stories bring me so much pleasure.I was reading the''Whisper are as loud as a Shout'' I noticed you were also reading and reviewing, I kind of got hung up reading about mikey being a dumb ass and of course Linz lost of reality. It took me forever to read and respond, your chapters move so quickly and it's easy to keep up with new added characters like Joe, I really enjoy how Gus told his daddies to give him less presents at Christmas and to help Joe as he didn't have a home or much to eat or anyone to care about him. Gus has so much insight and so sweet. I thought Joe's thank you note to Gus showed. what kind of person Joe really is. As much as I liked MissMerlot's story all the foreign language slowed the story down I'm used to you being really articulate and paceing your story along .Your Sally is going nowhere.

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I was just concerned when I didn't hear from you as soon as you usually review.  I have been kind of busy and haven't been able to keep up with reading Miss Merlot's story.  I do look forward to your comments and appreciate all your support for this long saga of mine.   Gus is a sweet little boy.  I think he gets his care for other people from his Daddy,  Thanks as always my Darling Sally for you kind review!!!! 

I remain your sweet Baboo.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2017 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 25

Hi my Sweet Baboo, chapter was wonderful. I would have loved to have seen Brian doing snow angels,it's like the trains for the first time, because of Justin and Gus he gets to be a little boy , things we didn't get a chance to do when he was little. I'm glad Gus can talk with his papa about a bully and how his parents told him that Gus's cousins were going to an orphanage. I can see how upset  and worried Gus would be.As for the Petersons are as delusonal as mikey and Linz. Can't wait for the twins! Your Loving Sally

Author's Response:

Darling Sally, so happy to hear from you.  I was a little worried you had abandoned the story when I didn't see your review.  Happy to know you have not deserted me.  I think you are correct, Brian enjoys being a little boy with Gus.  Most of the time it is more adult activities he enjoys with Justin.  Gus feels secure enjoy with his Daddy & Papa to share any concerns he has which is a great thing.  The Petersons are loathsome and should try very hard to avoid running into Jennifer in the future.  Glad you are still enjoying this saga.  Always happy to heard from you!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2017 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 25

so glad to see an update on this story.  I imagine you've had a few outages in your time; the description of preparedness are quite good.  Loved that everyone slept togheter on the main floor.

Author's Response:

Glade you are still wnjoying this saga.  It is wind storm here in the Pacific Northwest that causes our power outages.  The worst was 4 days long, the fun was over by the third day.  Thanks for the review, I love to get them!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2017 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 25

This was excellent! I loved reading about the preparations for the snow storm and all that happened related to the storm. Justin's preparations were in keeping with his PSA persona. Glad to see that Jennifer was in top form in her take down of Nancy and Ron. And, the apple didn't fall far from the tree. Molly dispatched Ron quite handily. I'm very interested to see what happens with Joe and I'm glad that he decided to trust Debbie and that Brian has the investigation going. It was nice of Joe to write a note to Gus. Enjoyed Gus all through this story. He is adorable. And, of course, all the B&J moments. Thanks and looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response:

You are correct Justin, AKA Mr PSA, had everything organized for the loss of electricity.  It turned out to be a fun adventure for everyone instead of a problem.  Jennifer takes no prisoners when she she is dealing with people who cause problems.  I love her!!!  Molly is learning from the best.  Joe seems like a nice kid who has had some bad luck.  Debbie is going to be looking out for his best interests.  Glad you are enjoying this saga.  Thank you so much for the review, I LOVE reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 25

It was nice that Gus felt he could ask his dads anything.  And they always answered honestly.  It looks like Jen's talk with Maria and Earl are going to cost the Petersons.  It was nice of Joe to write a thank you to Gus.  Better is his trusting Deb.  Hopefully Brian's detective will be able to help Joe.  Lights out turned into fun for the Kinney Clan.  Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Hello my friend, I never really feel like an update is complete until I read your comments.  You have been such a great support for this story from the beginning and I appreciate it.  Gus loves his Daddy & Papa and feels safe in confiding in them.  Joe picked a good person to trust, Debbie will look out for him. Always happy to know you are still enjoying this saga.  Thanks, as always, for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2017 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 25

Heartwarming chapter, this felt so good! Even without electricity, the family stick together and they have their backs. And Tino has stepped forward - I feel so sorry for his desperation. He just needs a surrogate family!

While January 20th was a nightmare-came-true-day, this might be a chapter  a lot of Americans need: Unity, solidarity, fairness and love. Sorry for relating to political issues, we germans are all just devastated.

It´s nice to connect with decent people across the ocean! Thank you so much
!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hello Julia, so nice to hear from you; it has been a while.  If the current election results made you post these comments, at least something good came out of it.  We don't want to be too political here but I will just say I live on the west coast and this is NOT a pro Trump area.  I feel your devastation.  Hopefully there are enough decent people in Congress to keep too much bad from happening.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter and I feel things will be OK with this country and the world.  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2017 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 24

Hi, Bill!  Playing catch up as usual, but you know I never miss an update to your story!  This was a lovely Christmas, and, as always, I love the details in your story. It really helps me imagine it in my mind's eye. :) 

I was really hungry by the time I got done reading this, too - ha!  Michael's attitude continues to be one of an impetulant child; sometimes I think he's younger than his own daughter!  Sheesh.

As always, I'll be looking forward to your next part, and where you take this. Thanks for the update!  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, thanks for taking time to review.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Mikey can always be counted on to do the wrong thing.  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2017 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 24

Happy New Year! My Sweet Baboo: I've missed your writing, but know you were busy like all of us. Hope you had a nice Christmas. This chaper was wonderful from the trains to the party I doubt Brian ever had a train and was as giddy as Gus about the wonderful set-up. I was also happy Claire had remembered the boys with a present and a nice letter. Everyone seemed to enjoy themselfs except the "doom and gloom" boy. mikey is jealous of even a child-he needs a few less invites until he can act like a grown up in a company setting. Kevin was adorable and Brian and Justin made everyone feel welcome to their home.Ted and Blake and Viola fit in so well, and Mark finds out how a family works. I don't think Brian even paid that much attention to the dumb ass(mikey) he had the family and friends and co workers in their home and gave his son a wonderful time, now we wait for the babies to appear and of course everyone is excited, except mikey who justs sees less time with Brian and  as always that's Justin's fault. You did good and as always worth waiting for. Your Lucy

Author's Response:

Lucy????  How incestuous of you.  Is this something different for the new Year!  I prefer you as my Darling Sally!!!!  RL has been busy for me, even without the holidays, but I am sorry to make you wait for this chapter.  I agree that I think Brian enjoyed the trains as much as his Sonny Boy.  Gus's delight just added to Brian enjoyment of the trains.  Poor Mikey is stuck in his teens with a Brian crush he can't seem to shake.  The best we can say is we can rely on him to act badly.  Everyone enjoyed the party, especially Gus with his assistant train engineers.  Brian has had plenty of practice at ignoring Mikey's actions.  I remain Sally's sweet Baboo

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2017 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update on everyone's lives! I know you'll always come through with an update when RL permits. :)

It's so very heartwarming to see the strong family ties for the Christmas holiday, both in the immediate Taylor-Kinney family and the extended family (into which I'm pretty much lumping everyone).

I wouldn't mind playing with that train set myself - under Gus' supervision, of course.

That Christmas feast sounds scrumptious. I'd be digesting until the new year!

I guess Michael's good for comic relief, with the way he follows Brian around. Some people never get a clue. LOL

~Karynn

Author's Response:

Hi Karyann, Happy you enjoyed the latest chapter, sorry it took so long to post the update but RL can be a distraction.  I don't think anyone has a chnace to get near the trains unless Gus is at his mothers' house.  I like to think of Mikey as unchanging, someone we can always depend on to do the wrong thing.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Cesku (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2017 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 24

Hi! Thanks for the update. I really like your stories. I'm always happy when I see an update from you. And I apologize for not writing a review. It just take so long to write in english, and to think about how to write so it looks and sounds sensible. And I now that there is no good explanation not to write back. But I hope you'll continue to write because I really love to read your stories. Just wanted to write and tell you that I read the updates every time, altough I don't write back.
Greeting from Cesku

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking time to leave a review, I love to get them!!!  Not sure what your native language is but feel free to leave reviews in that langauge.  I bet microsoft or goggle can translate it for me.  I am gald to know you are enjoying the story.  I'll keep writing as long as the readers let me know they are reading & enjoying.  Bill

Reviewer: Acadian Proud (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2017 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 24

Michael does not want to grow up.  He needs "DEEP" therapy... Somethink needs to happen to make Michael get agree to therapy...

Author's Response:

I thik Debbie doesn't want him to grow up.  I don't hold out a lot of hope for him to change but who knows???  Thanks for the review, I love to hear from the readers!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 24

So glad you posted!  I really missed this story.  Love reading about Brian and Justin and how they've become the central figures of the "family."  

Author's Response:

Sorry for the long delay between updates.  It is my New Year's resolution to do better.  Really glad to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 24

This is the perfect end of the holiday season...an update to Holiday Happenings.  I hope the season brought you much joy and love. I also hope that the coming year does the same. All the best to you in 2017!! 

The party kind of reminded me of those that I grew up with. Sounds a bit ponpous I know, but between my parents and my Godmother, (we alternated every year) it was all pretty similar, except without the driver service. Now that would've been a brilliant idea back then. :)

Showing the true Christmas spirit here with the idea for Claire to embroider and make some $$. Would be nice if this is the initial olive branch and that in time, some of the major woulds could begin to heal. Not sure they ever will completely, but even a bit would be nice. I hope she's sincere in her motives and understands the need for time. That was a really touching part. Even Brian was slightly open.

Despite the incredible generosity of everyone and the abundant haul everyone brought in, it's obvious that none of the kids come across as spoiled. They are all incredibly grateful and appreciative. While they were thrilled with all their gifts, it seemed they were just as thrilled, if not more so by the sense of family and togetherness that was abundant throughout.

Lovely catch up with Ted, Blake et al. Nina's reaction to Christmas was so sweet and genuine. I could imagine that it would be quite overwhelming. So happy that she and viola have this opportunity now.

Michael is still an ass. I mean really...suck it up buttercup. Glad nobody succumbed to his little tantrums. And why wouldn't he take the available transit? Was he hoping for an overnight invite or something? Just silly. He's just a petulant little boy really. shame that he seems to feel there's a need to compete for JR's or even Brian's affections. Following him around like a little puppy. Like I said, he's just a silly boy.

What a wonderful chapter and so well worth the wait!! I felt heart warmed and smiled reading it all.

thank you for this! I have to admit, I've been waiting for the notice I received of the update, but I figured that it would be after the holidays. It's a lovely gift from you to all of us. A thrill to receive.

Cheers and once again, all the best to you in the New Year. I hope 2017 brings you all that you hope for.

Elaine

 

Author's Response:

I had to double check with my new Echo to make sure of the day of the week.  It really is Wednesday!  Hope you had a wonderful 2017!!  My parents also had some large parties over the years but none invovled caterers.  My mother and her sisters usually made the food.  Hopefully Claire will take Jennifer's offer to help her make some money and do something worthwhile.  Claire finally seems to be taking some responsibility for her actions which is more than we can say for good old Joanie.  I envision John & Peter occasionally pinching themselves to be sure their aren't dreaming.  They have had huge positive changes in their life.

I love Ted & Blake and their delight with Nina.  Viola knew what she was doing to pick them to take care of her granddaughter.  They take care of her as well.  Mikey is very dependable, he is always an idiot.  I'm sure he can't understand why JR and Brian love Justin.  All Mikey sees is a twink who took his best friend and is trying to steal his daughter's affection.

I apologize for the long wait and am thrilled you think it was worth the wait.  I hope we all have a great year, it will be an interesting one with some of the changes in the USA.  Thanks, as always, for your support.  You know I love to read reviews!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 24

Wow, what a wonderful Christmas.  Looks like Claire might just have come upon a carreer that will make her feel worthwhile.  Everything went well, except for Michael who kept following Brian around.  You write some of the best and rewarding chapters.

Author's Response:

Hope you had a wonderful Christmas as well!!  I guess it is about time that something positive happened to Claire.  Hopefully she accepts the opportuntiy Jennifer is offering her.  My friend, you wrote some of the best and rewarding reviews and I appreciate you a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2017 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 24

YAY! Thanks for Update:)

Happy New Year

Author's Response:

Glad you are happy to see this long delayed update, thanks fro hanging in there!!  Happy New Year to you.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lanie (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2016 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 23

I love this story!  Will it be finished?

Author's Response:

It will be finished, sorry it took so long to post this update and to answer your review!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2016 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 23

 Sweet Baboo! I forgot about Craig, the gifts that he sent were well chosen but is there a hiden agenda. The boys were surprised but I'm worried about Justin getting his hopes up only to played again. I hope their holiday party with the family coming to Britin goes well surely mikey can keep his mouth shut for a few hours.

Author's Response:

A double review!!!  Thanks Sally!!  Brian is going to be very cautious about Craig and do his best to make sure Justin is not hurt.  Justin has good memories of Craig but all Brian's interactions with Craig were bad.  I think if Craig hurts Justin Brian and Jennifer may band together to kill or hurt him badly.  I wouldn't count on Mikey being either silent or sensible!!  Thanks Darling Sally for all your support.  I am thankful for you!!!!  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2016 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 23

That was an interesting way to start a chapter.  Thelma

summarized Brian and Justin’s kindness very well.  Too bad, Joan

doesn’t see that.  She can’t see past B&J’s lifestyle to see what

wonderful people they are.

    I was happy to see Justin hug Tucker and say nice things to him. 

Tucker has been a real good guy, and a nice addition to the

family.  Looks like Justin finally realizes that.  I was happy to read

about it.

   I simply don’t know where Craig fits in.  To me he doesn’t and I

would rather he just go away.  I understand that Justin

remembers some of the good in Craig.  But Brian (and me) don’t.

  I would have liked to see something about Claire. 

  In this Chapter, I am glad JR was not there.  This is Gus’s family. 

And oh yes, the train set will give Brian and Gus much wonderful

Daddy and Sonny Boy time.

  That was a terrific chapter.  Lots and lots of good holiday spirit.

DavidR

Author's Response:

Joan is determined to never accept Brian's lifestyle.  It doesn't matter what anyone says to her.  When she is alone there is no one to disappoint her.  I think Justin knows that Tucker is good for his mother but he has a hard time accepting it.  You are correct about Brian he wants nothing to do with Craig and is concerned about Craig hurting Justin again.  We'll have to wait and see who is correct, you & Brian or Justin.  I actually meant to have something about Claire in the last chapter and forgot - bad author!  We'll hear about her in the next chapter.  I think you are right about the trains!!!  Thanks for the review, you know I always look forward to your comments.!!!  Bill

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 23

Haooy Monday my friend! Sorry to hear your friend has been unwell. Hopefully she's well on her way to recovery now.

As for joan...she really is her own worst enemy. I doubt she'll evr gt her head on straight about Brian and his family no matter who says what to her. She's too set in her ways. Shame really, but she brought it all upon herself.

What a beautiful Christmas at Britin! the gifts we lovely for all of them, but the atmosphere, the togetherness was magical! Peter and John most assuredly had their best Christmas ever. I know they've never experienced anything like that before. 

Criag's gifts were a surprise. Is he making legitimate overtures towards our boys? I'm so distrusting of him that I'm always looking for any kind of deviousness, but I'm not seeing anything accept a real attempt. Perhaps there's hope yet. Thankfully he's not as stuck in his ways as Joan.

Had to chuckle over Jenny and her attitude. Justin's interaction with her and his little jab at Mel was well placed. quite funny really.

Gus's heart is amazing for such a little boy. So giving and such generosity. Thinking of Joe like he did. Making sure that B&J could take back some of his gifts the way he did. He could definitely teach a few lessons to some of the adults around them.

will be interested to see how the next days dinner goes with all the family at Britin.

A really really lovely and heartwarming chapter. 

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

Monday, Monday so good to me

Monday morning it was all I hoped it would be

Hello my Monday friend, thanks for the good thoughts, my sick friend is doing much better.  I believe Joan prefers to be alone, no one else measures up to her standards.  Brian is going to be very hard to convince that Craig is sincere.  Justin was correct when he said he has god memories of Craig and Brian has nothing but bad memeories of Craig.  Justin is pretty open about his diapproval of Mel's parenting.  Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  I always look forward to reading your comments, thanks for never disappointing me!!!!  Cheers back to you.  Bill

PS not sure if you are a fan of the Mamas & the Papas

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2016 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 23

What a wonderful Christmas!  Even Craig got into the spirit.  Unfortunately, Joan continued with her annoying attitude.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!!  Happy to know you are still enjoying the story.  I don't think anyone missed Joan and she was happy with her own company.  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 23

Ugh, Joan is her own worst enemy. I'm so glad Brian and Justin have plenty of loving family members to offset that narrow-minded woman.

Love how both Justin and Brian surprised each other with their gifts. Those two men may have to find a time when they can 'christen' Justin's new SUV, lol.

I'm with Brian about trusting Craig; it's difficult to believe he's sincere.

So fun the way Brian and Gus play with the train set. One is never too old for that kind of fun. 😊

Bill, I hope your friend is doing much better. Friends and family always come first! No question that I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter - but only when RL permits.

Karynn

 

Author's Response:

I think Joan feels that she is her own best friend.  No one else is up to her standards.  B&J know how to please each other and I agree that SUV will need to be "christened".  I think Brian is going to be watching to be sure Craig has no opportunity to hurt Justin again.  Between Brian & Jennifer Craig should be very afraid if he is trying to scam them.  My friend is doing much better but still has a way to go before she is able to come home.  Thanks for the good thoughts!!!  Bill

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 21

What a tremendous feel-good chapter! <3

I love how Debbie, Justin, and Brian work together to rescue another 'lost boy'. Joe may be starting to realize that the diner is a safe place and that his options aren't as limited as he thought.

LMAO! over Justin calling Brian cute and Brian's reaction. At least he didn't queen out - kept his best interests in mind. LOL And Brian and John's lack of enthusiasm over watching the Nutcracker every ear - hilarious. :D

I'm hoping to catch up on your story today. RL has been pretty rotten, but stories like this help me cope. :)

Karynn

Author's Response:

Looks like you are doing some catch up on your reading.  Joe is lucky to have fallen in with so many big hearted people.  Gus was the catalyst that got the ball rolling.  Joe is fortunate that some of those big hearted people also have big wallets!  Brian Kinney really doesn't want anyone to think of him as CUTE.  He will setrle for nothing less than HOT.  I understand rough RL, hope you can escape for a while!!!  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2016 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 23

I just found this story again and read everything over again.  It took three days, lol.  I'm glad you are still updating it, at whatever pace you want.  I can't wait to meet the babies and learn if they will be little blonde and blue eyed angels.  

Are you actually going to write Brian in Disney World?  I don't think I have EVER read that before!  No matter how 'domesticated' he has become, a pack of over excited kids in an over packed theme park is bound to test his ability to keep his calm and pg 13 vocab under control.  LOL. A LOT of time outs and quite one on one time will be needed with only his Sunshine to keep him balanced.  

I've never explored the park from a rich person's perspective and unlimited access to all amenities.  I wonder if you can have provate guides to take the kids around the park?

Anyway, I'm just glad you are still writing and look forward to where your muse takes us.  :)

Author's Response:

I am always amazed and flattered when a reader tells me they have re-read the entire saga.  I am so fortunate to have such loyal readers & reviewers, that is what keeps the story going.  Several people have asked for a Brian in Disney Story.  That was not my plan but I think it might be fun to have a quick story about that trip.  Brian will be torn between wanting to avoid everything Disney and wanting to see Gus experience the Magic Kingdom for the first time.  Thank you for your very kind comments and fort aking time to post a review.  I do love hearing from the readers!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2016 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 23

Hi, Bill! First of all, I hope your friend is doing better now.  That is the most important priority by far, and I for one will wait patiently until which time you are able to update. :) 

Now for this chapter. Some observations.  I almost pity Joan; no, I guess I do, although she has brought a lot of what she has wrought upon herself.  She will die, I believe, a lonely and bitter woman. The holidays should hopefully be a time of forgiveness and understanding, which are two words that will probably never escape her lips.  Thank God Brian has emerged from his childhood a scarred man, but one who has triumphed and overcome his parents' treatment of him.  He has become a loving partner and father, and someone to admire.

A little surprised by Craig's gesture, but hopefully it is sincere, and perhaps one day even he will change, unlike Joan.  BTW, I always wrack my brain to think of whether or not Justin called his father "Craig" later in the show, but I can't for the life of me remember. Did he?

JR is becoming more and more not only like her mother, but her father as well, sadly.  I hope she can learn from Gus as a role model, and change her ways, or I fear what she will be as a teenager!  Maybe one day you will write about them as older kids. (hint, hint).

As always, I love the detail in your chapters.  From the preparations for Christmas dinner, to the surprise gift for Justin, to the love clearly shown between the family members. 

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter! Always enjoy reading your updates.  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, my friend is in rehab and is doing better.  Thanks for asking.  I think Joan would be unhappy to think anyone pities her.  No one meets her standards of behavior so she is happy to have no one around.  Brian has been able to overcome a lot from his early life.  His life is different from anything he expected but I believe he is blissfully happy.

I think Craig realizes all he has lost because of his homophobia.  He really lost his entire family because of his attitude.  Now they are all happy together and he is alone.  Justin may be ready to give him another chance but Brian will be much more suspicious of Craig's motives.  I can't remember for sure but I think Justin called him Craig in the show.  I thought about watching some chapter "On Demand" but actually I don't remember Justin talking about his father much at all, after he left home.  Even Jennifer played a pretty minor role in the show.  She has a much bigger role in my story.

JR has an unfortunate gene pool to draw from.  I like to think Gus is like Brian would have been if he had loving parents.  I think JR is kind of lucky Mama showed up.  I think Uncle Jus was getting ready to really let JR have it for her behavior.  Instead he let Mel know that he still wasn't a fan of her parenting.

Thanks for the nice comments.  I learned a lot from reading so many stories from my favorite author.  I think you can guess who that is.  Always enjoy reading reviews so thanks for being so loyal about poting them!!!!!!  Bill