Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2016 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 3

I didn't know you had to do 10,000 word chapters?  At least got home safe and sound.  I would have thought Brian had better fashion scence than Justin.  lol.  It's nice to know that Ted and Emmett cared about Gus.



Author's Response:

yes thank you

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2016 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

Does Gus have a cell phone?  I don't that Brandon will hurt Gus, but to worry Brian is not nice.  Will Brian know the man who obsconded with his son?  More soon?



Author's Response:

there is always that worry part of being your first time with anyone but with a stranger can be terrified and with brian he whave to wait and see if his son ever comes back and chapter 3 will be up before next month 

Reviewer: Oliviatheolive (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2015 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

God! Gus is ridiculously cute and so embarrasing- but in a really adorable innocent sort of way. 

When he ordered that coke---lord! I was embarrassed for him. But he has this dorky thing about him, especially when he he said- "so what's your name tall, dark and handsom?" for some reason that made me think of Jess from the New Girl.  Too cute

Olivia



Author's Response:

lol i'm glad you like it chapter 2 will be up soon

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2015 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Pretty good.  There's going to be more, right?  What happens when Brian realizes that Gus is not there?



Author's Response:

got to wait and see

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