Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2018 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

darn Linsey

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 24, 2016 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Lorie, I loved your story and wished it had been longer. On the show I always hated how Lindsay and Mel, and especially Deb talked down to Justn as if he was Gus's age. I felt we saw Brian fuck many but he only made love to Justin. I don't think Lindz or mikey would reconize the difference. Brian could always be himself not some club boy or stud of Liberty Ave. Debbie talked down to Brian too, and he always helped when the family needed something. Great story thanks for sharing

Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2016 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wowsers!  Excellent *fans self*



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the story.

Thanks for reviewing.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2015 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, I so wish this wasn't a one-off. I love these gap fillers that expand the B/J relationship and as a bonus, irritate and annoy some of their so called friends:-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I love to expand on their relationship. Glad you enjoyed the story.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2015 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hot and dangerous.

Hot for the PWP and toppy!Justin. I love stories where Justin tops Brian.

Dangerous. I don't expect Lindsay to keep her mouth shut. Mikey will propably blow another fuse hearing this snippet of information.

I so understand Lindsay's dilemma. I am bisexual myself and in a relationship with a man for some time but still I do crave a woman from time to time. I alway felt deeply for Lindsey during that particular story arc.

All in all a wonderfull story. Looking forward to your next one.

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

Soirsa,

Glad you enjoyed the story. Lindsay's problem is that she wants Brian for herself and so does Michael. I think that is why neither one of them sees Brian and Justin as a 'real' couple.

Lindsay, like Brian said, likes a stiff prick once in a while and can't admit that to herself. I do agree that wanting both can be a hard thing, but there are ways to compromise. 

Lindsay may spill the beans. We will have to see if that happens.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

~Lorie~

PS.  I only have one story where Justin doesn't top Brian. I love that he does.

Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2015 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Applause to all involved in the creation of this little sexcapade... especially Lorie!!! Great job :D



Author's Response:

Thanks Nancy. Glad you enjoyed this story.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2015 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was such an unexpected WOW......just delicious!!! Thanks so much.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed the story. 

~Lorie~

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2015 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Intriguing gap filler!

I like the way Brian doesn't judge Lindsay, who I think really does love Melanie. But, I don't think she's ready for monogamy, married or not. (Mel probably isn't either.) Personally, I think Lindsay's bisexual. And, there's an element of her psyche that still wants the white picket fence with Brain, which would earn her parents' approval.

Thankfully, Brian's not about to indulge Lindsay in her fantasy. I think, though, that it's dangerous to impart the information that he likes to bottom. I don't see Lindsay keeping her mouth shut; she'll tell Mel. Or, maybe, she'll "leak" the information when talking to Michael. Both Linds and Michael keep that push-pull going: telling Brian he needs to grow up and then wanting him to remain in party-boy stud mode when he does. I can just imagine Michael's hissy fit.

I love Toppy Justin! The give and take between Justin and Brian is perfect (and hot!). Brian's a sensualist, so he'd want to (regularly) experience all forms of pleasure. :)

This story is complete, but I could easily see a sequel dealing with the repercussions of Lindsay not keeping her mouth shut...



Author's Response:

I agree that Lindsay is bisexual. I think that even if she had Brian, who she clearly wants, she would still want to experience her lesbian side also. I hadn't thought of doing a sequel to this story, but will think about your suggestion. I hadn't thought of that angle. Thnaks for your review.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2015 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'd like to bring a different perspective. I like Lindsay, and the conversation she and Brian had during 4/11 (albeit unhelpful) was a sign of the deep friendship between them. It would have been nice to see that side to her, as well. Otherwise, I felt she was simply used as a plot vehicle, instead of given her dues as a character and important person in Brian's life, faults and all. 



Author's Response:

My opinion of Lindsay is that she wants Brian either for herself or to stay alone. She does not want to accept Brian and Justin as a 'real' couple. Neither does Michael. This is the way I write my stories. Thank you for reviewing.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2015 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful PWP! That was an interesting introduction. Will there be a sequel based on it?

Author's Response:

Thank You. I don't have any plans for a sequel right now. Interesting thought though.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2015 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Um, that was hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2015 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hot hot hot :) I love me some toppy!justin, and clearly so does Brian LOL! Great gap filler, and I loved the conversation with Linds, how can she not see how perfect they are together?



Author's Response:

Lindsay only sees the Brian that she wants to see and doesn't like that he is growing and changing for Justin who he clearly loves.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2015 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lorie thank you for such a hot and wonderful insight into the convo between Lindsay and Brian. Sometimes I wonder if Lindsay was really living in a world of suspended belief when it came to Brian...and furthermore she should have caught the implication right off. Love Toppy Justin even if Lindsay doesn’t.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the idea JP. It was fun to write. I think that Lindsay and Michael both had blinders on when it came to Brian. They only saw the parts of the man that they wanted to see. Justin saw the whole man, I think that is why Brian fell in love with him. <3

~Lorie~

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2015 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Is Lindsay so oblivious to the fact that Brian is avgay male and only another man can give him what she can't? What dream world is she living in? I think that's what bugs her most. Brian doesn't need or want her for sex.
I liked this a lot.

Author's Response:

Lindsay just can't stand that Brian has someone other than her and Michael. And that this person knows him better and has captured his heart, something neither one of them were able to do. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2015 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

After this how could Justin even think about going to New York?



Author's Response:

That's what I always questioned. Lindsay should have minded her own business. I think that she felt if she couldn't have him then neither could anyone else.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2015 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh Lorie - this is just so good - love the mental picture this one conjures up - and you know that I have a particular weakness for 'Justin's Brian' versus the one the rest of the world sees...but now Lindsay has that picture, too - no wonder she needed Justin gone...this just messes with her brain

the toy box choice was a delightfully unexpected addition to this scene

this will definitely be a favorite of mine...one of the first to go in my own collection...

thanks for this!

Charle



Author's Response:

Charle, 

Thank you. I too love 'Justin’s Brian'. Together they are, in my opinion, what every couple tries to be. The toy box idea just popped into my head when I started writing this. Glad you enjoyed it.

~Lorie~

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2015 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

LAWD HAM TURKEY!!! You continue to amaze and surprise me, Lorie! I think you captured the conversation with Brian and Lindsey (and how it could have gone if Brian revealed that to her) perfectly. I always marveled at the double standards the 'family' had for Brian. As far as Justin as a Top...GO BLOND BOY!! GO!! I always love the undercover Dominant in Justin. He's just as much of a predator as Brian and that makes them a brilliant match.

Great Job capturing it all, Lorie!

*HUGS*

~Chelle 



Author's Response:

Thanks Chelle, I always thought that Justin looked like a strong top anytime he was shown topping, so I think he would have been the same with Brian.  I think the family only saw what they wanted to see when it came to not only Brian alone, but his relationship with Justin as well.

And as usual, your editing always makes my stories better. <3

~Lorie~

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2015 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sometimes you DO just need a dick . . . LOL! Great job! TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks Tag. For everything. <3

~Lorie~

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