Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: sage (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2016 10:00 AM · On: At First Sight

So out of character for Brian. First off having Brian saying stuff like WOWZER and  GOLLY GE was a little to insane for me. Never would he talk like that or bounce up and down in his seat because he was excited, he is not Gus.. This Brian is laughable. Your writing is fine its just what was done to the characters.

The idea of Brian with Ted if that was where you were going is not appealing at all.

Also you made it seem that Brian loves stamps more then he ever loved Justin. And that he could describe his feelings for Justin as MEH even several months later is ridiculous because he would never just feel like that after some months. He would never be able to move on from Justin that easy as they were in a deep love that was stronger when he left for NY.

This Dorky, Odd Brian is not for me. Not looking for a second chapter. Sorry.

 

 

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2015 01:16 AM · On: At First Sight

Who is this Brian you've written? I can see him becoming friends with Ted, but this Brian is foppish. 

Is the love of is life going to be Ted, Justin, or postage stamps? If Brian is going to continue so so so out of character I don't know if I'll be able to continue reading. Sorry.

Reviewer: The Lantern keeps Shining (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2015 10:54 AM · On: At First Sight

Erm......which planet have I stepped off on to? Brian wakes up as Emmet and goes with Ted to a stamp collectors convention,,,,and enjoys it! Head now floating off into space.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2015 04:52 AM · On: At First Sight

LMAO I wasn't sure what I was going to be reading here, but that was so weird and hilarious that I couldn't stop. Brian and Ted's friendship was adorable.

Will he continue collecting stamps now that he's won? Or will the excitement wear off?

And was that THE Drew Barrymore????

Reviewer: Tania (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2015 10:40 PM · On: At First Sight

This Brian doesn't seem normal it's just weird looking forward for the next chapter

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2015 08:59 PM · On: At First Sight

Totally unique.  Who would have thought Brian could get so excited about stamps.  Love seeing how well Ted and Brian get along.  Just what is it that Justin is supposed to do about it?

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2015 01:02 PM · On: At First Sight

Hi, Deluxe - I added a disclaimer to your story; please remember that all new stories must include one as part of our story submission guidelines.  I noticed your story includes a 'major character death,' so I probably will decline reading this one, since I'm a big sap for B and J being together. :)  Also, depending upon where you go with this one and how long the relationship lasts, you may want to consider placing a 'Justin/Other' category to your story if it fits here for those readers who may be uncomfortable with that scenario.

 

Thank you for continuing to post on here, and I wish you the best of luck with this one! ~Kim

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