Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2018 02:29 AM · On: Part Three.
Wow! That story was super creepy and I loved it. Mysterious Marilyn is one of my favorite minor characters.
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2016 01:02 AM · On: Part One.
Great tale! I love holiday stories but Halloween is my favorite. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2015 03:43 PM · On: Part Three.
Thanks for the entertaining Halloween fic, with Mysterious Marilyn helping Brian save Justin. Interesting turn of events that Justin Brian uses a bat to save Justin.
Author's Response: Well thanks for letting me know you liked it! I added the bat during the final edit - I hope it turned out well but i didn't have time to second guess myself. It was Halloween night and I had Halloween things to do! Haha.
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2015 02:10 PM · On: Part Three.
Great spooky fun!
It's good to have a local drag psychic available for haunting and possession problems. Marilyn should advertise on Craig's List, LOL!
I like the transition in Brian's mind from using Justin's name to referring to himas "It." And Justin should have realized that as stubborn as Brian is, it would take a lot of convincing to get him to believe. And using a baseball bat to shatter the mirror... interesting.
Author's Response: Hahaha you're right - she'd make a killing!
And I'm glad you liked the transition. I worried a bit in that part of people getting confused, so I wanted to make the distinction very clear.
As for the bat, I didn't have it in my original story, but when I was going through it one last time I thought it needed one little extra 'umph' and I thought the bat would add a bit of sentimentality to the situation.
Thanks!!
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2015 12:56 PM · On: Part Three.
I loved this Halloween story!!
Well done! I've always loved Mysterious Marilyn and was happy to see her involved. Again, job well done!
Author's Response: I'm so glad!! I love hearing that.
And well, you can't have a spooky, supernatural story without the town's resident psychic can you? ;)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2015 08:41 AM · On: Part Three.
Spooooky!!!!! Great Halloween story. Brian was a bit slow on the uptake but he got there in the end. I like that the baseball ball saved Justin this time.
Author's Response: I added the baseball part during my final edit. I thought it would be a sentimental touch - I'm glad it didn't go unnoticed! Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2015 05:56 AM · On: Part Three.
Yay! Justin's back and Mysterious Marilyn helped. Happy Halloween to you too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Koalared (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2015 05:03 AM · On: Part Three.
excellent Halloween story!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! That's so sweet!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2015 04:42 AM · On: Part Three.
Omg...okay this ending chapter was fabulous lol thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Awesome!!! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2015 04:13 AM · On: Part Two.
I think I'm confused, LOL!
I thought that I had figured it out, that maybe ghost Brian was in the house, but that he maybe didn't know he was a ghost. The things he is experiencing like the TV and the keys and the files are a result of live Justin living in the house... but now I'm not so sure.
But I don know it's a great Fic for the night before Halloween!
Author's Response: Well good, I was hoping people wouldn't know what was going on until the end. That would have been a good idea though...I'm kind of upset I didn't use it haha. Hopefully you like the ending though. ;)
Thanks!!
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2015 12:24 AM · On: Part Two.
Cool and spooky at the same time! The ghost is inhabiting Justin's body, and Justin's trying to reach out to Brian for help. Can't wait for the final installment tomorrow.
I forgot to mark this story as a favorite. Now, that's scary. ;) Fortunately, I check the most recent stories on MW and was able to enjoy this chapter.
Author's Response: Awesome! I'm glad you think so! And you added this to your favorites? Awww....thanks!!! I hope you like the final installment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2015 05:26 PM · On: Part Two.
So where is the real Justin? Maybe they need a phsycic. Is Mysterous Marilyn available?
Author's Response: Who knows. ;) And she might be. Hopefully Brian can track her down. Thanks!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2015 03:17 PM · On: Part Two.
This is a very good story, but now it's a bit hard to follow. Maybe things will become more clear in the next chapter;)
Author's Response: Well it was kind of my goal to make you wonder what was going on, but I hope by the end you won't be confused! Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2015 12:33 PM · On: Part Two.
This is SO great!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
Author's Response: Oh wow! Thanks!! I hope you like how it ends.
Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2015 05:31 AM · On: Part One.
I think it is time for Mysterious Marilyn. Love the story.
Author's Response: I think you might be right. ;) Thanks!!
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2015 06:12 PM · On: Part One.
This was so downright creepy -- so I loved it!!
You have me concerned, though. I'll wait to see what you do to our boys.
:-)
Author's Response: Awesome! I was hoping it would give people chills. Thanks!
Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2015 11:38 AM · On: Part One.
Scary! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Good! I was going for scary haha. Thanks!
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2015 04:27 AM · On: Part One.
I always loved a good ghost story... and adding Brian & Justin to the mix, makes it pretty much perfect! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Well perfect already? Hope I don't let you down! Thanks!
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2015 02:13 AM · On: Part One.
What fun to have a spooky Halloween story to enjoy along with "Come What May". Justin should have listened to his instincts...just like a scary movie during which one shouts at the screen, "Don't do that!" Will Justin rescue himself or will Brian's help be needed? I'm obviously hoping neither Justin nor Brian will be permanently gone.
Author's Response: I've been on a writing kick at work. :) And I had inspiration so I figured why not. And isn't that always the worst part about these kinds of things? They never listen to reason. *sigh* lol Thank you!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2015 12:11 AM · On: Part One.
So now we know that Justin was the one to go...I wonder how Brian is going to take his sudden loss.
Author's Response: Was he though? *shrugs* You'll just have to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2015 08:39 AM · On: Part One.
Wow, i had chills down my spine, toto!
Amazing beginning. I just fear the warning "Major Character Death"......
I sure hope it's not one of the boys.......
Author's Response: Awesome! I worried that it wasn't spooky enough, or too cliche or anything. And as for the warning, this is a supernatural fic - keep that in mind. Hopefully at the end you won't be disappointed Thank you!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 06:04 AM · On: Part One.
A Holloween Tale? Fantastic. You really had me scared. Thank goodness it was Michael. Now you leave us with a cliff hanger? Hurry and put out the next chapter.
Author's Response: Lol well I'm glad I got you scared! The next chapter will be up in a few days, with the final one being up on Halloween (of course haha) I hope you enjoy it! Thank you!
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