Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Daylight
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2016 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

Short but sweet. Justin is right, Daphne deserves to know the man Brian is inside. I don't think he would mind...He loves her too. Good job!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you!! This story will always have a special place in my heart as it's my first. Of course Justin will share this with Daphne she does deserve to know especially having been their biggest cheerleader for so long. Thanks so much for reading and your lovely review you made me and the Muse very happy!! :)

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2015 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. I can't believe this is your first story, really.  To me, being able to capture somebody's attention and give them that happy glow with so few words is a gift.

And that's what you have done here...it feels like Justin.  It sounds like him.  I can feel his pain and his joy and his hope for the future.  You did all that in very few words.

Well done!!!  I would love to read more.



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you so much for your amazingly kind words and the huge compliment. I love Brian I mean really doesn't? But I just seem to understand Justin more and that was why writing this from his POV was easy for me. I have a feeling any future story will be in his voice. I simply can't write in Brian's I've tried and it doesn't flow AT ALL. Thank you again this comment has made my day!! :)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2015 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

I can just imagine how hard it is for Justin to leave. He knows in his heart that Brian does love him. When the time is right they'll finally be ready to make a commitment to one another...

Great job, I love it!

Keep Writing Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thank you Kathleen! I had hoped you would read my little story. I plan to keep writing. And so far it seems my Muse wants me to write in Justin's POV. Probably because I just adore him lol :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2015 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

So sad and beautiful and it made me feel as if I was there

Author's Response:

Oh wow thank you. Such an amazing compliment. This will truly feed my Muse :)

Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2015 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Nicely done. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will :)

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2015 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Welcome to Whispers :)
Nice story! Kind of sad but giving hope. You should definitely write more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I don't think I could ever write a story with these two that doesn't have at least some hope. I'm a hopeless romantic at heart and I believe Brian and Justin got their happy ending!! I'm going to keep writing now that I have started and the comments have been lovely :)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2015 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well done. You are much braver than I am. I have trouble writing reviews....LOL

I hated the way the show ended (who doesn't) It was so sad. Well, Justin is on his way to NY - now we need your take on what happens next. I look forward to your next story - or continuation of this one.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I didn't feel very brave yesterday when I posted this but I am so happy I did it finally! I can honestly tell you if you have the courage to write it then have the courage to post it. This has been a very happy day for me. I am going to really think about writing what happens next. I think I like writing from Justin's POV. I'll try not to keep you waiting too long :)

Reviewer: Frayach (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2015 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Congratulations on your first fic and lovely comments.  Here's to many more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Fray! I'm hoping to keep going I've had several story ideas in my head for a long time now. Just waiting to see where my Muse goes next! :)

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2015 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

So sad but so true. Very nice!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I just had to get this out of my head yesterday. I'm glad you liked it!! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2015 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very nicely done.  Now just write how you wish their future to turn out!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words. I'll have to think about writing my own version of the future. Thanks for the suggestion!! :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2015 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi there! And congratulations on your first story. Beautifully written :) Thank you for sharing this with us



Author's Response:

Hi!! Thank you so much for the kind words. I'll keep going with the writing now that the first one is done I'm hoping it will get easier :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2015 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Susan! I'm thrilled to see a story from you! This is beautifully written. I hope you will post some more stories.  Thanks for posting this.  😊



Author's Response:

Hi Kim!! Thank you so much for your kind words. Thanks too for being my very first reviewer it means a lot to me. I'm planning to keep going this was written as a spur of the moment thing this morning. So happy that you liked it :)

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