Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Breath Stopping
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2015 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

HOTCAKES! This was so different to anything I had ever read before, I love how Justin was in control here, and Brian allowed it and loved it.

Reviewer: Brynneth (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful, Fray.  Even sex scenes are works of art when you write them.  You can smell, feel, and almost taste it.  Love your stories!



Author's Response:

I'm glad!  Thank you so much, my dear.  It's always really nice to know that I've written a sex scene well.  It's hard to make them feel fresh and original given how many there are out there!

Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2015 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

WOW seems so inadequate somehow. 



Author's Response:

**hugs**  "Wow" is *never* inadequate :)

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2015 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Okay…I'm a little dense. I mean…you know my attention span issues. I just noticed this was done in all Drabbles. This is absolutely BRILLIANT.

I've read this three times already and plan on reading it again. Fray…this is a gorgeous story. To try to put into words how it made me feel would not do it justice. The love and trust involved just makes me cry. OMG…Brian crying afterwards, and Justin taking care of him is just so beautiful.

*also on AO3

Author's Response:

Drabbles are fun.  Did you know that "Actions Speak Louder then Words" is also in drabble format?  It's much different from this one, which is nice.  The genre may have strict rules, but content can be varied quite a bit.

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2015 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my. That is rather intense. And thanks again my friend for giving me yet another reason to never ever try breath play. Way too much for me. But this story it's well it's all kinds of HOT!

Well done!!

:)



Author's Response:

Tell me about it!  Even if I trusted someone not to *intentionally* hurt me, I'd be worried that it might happen by accident.  It's definitely not something I want to try in real life, but it's sexy as hell to imagine!

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2015 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!



Author's Response:

I love "wow"!  :D

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2015 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's almost like you were there.



Author's Response:

God, I *wish*!

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