Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2019 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 11

Love it

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2017 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 11

 With Hobbs and Joan dead alot of demons have been to rest. of course there are more! I'm so loking foward to the next story- Brian and Justin have had their ups and downs but as long as their together they will make it.This story was wonderful, thank you for sharing

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2017 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 10

Hobbs is dead, I'm glad, but even in death he had got to Justin, Justin watching the final scene in horror-more pictures stuck in his head. Carl was there ,he knew the boys would need someone.More rages for Justin, but he could put the fear aside.Brian took a client called bubble butt underwear (clever) I loved the way Justin surprised Brian and instead of models the lift and separates bikini underwear being worn by Justin! Next crisis old Joanie has died.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2017 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 8

 They are finally married in the way they wanted no fuss, no opinons, just perfect. Now telling the family. Won't that be fun-debbie and Jen  both mad they weren't included and mikey pissed he wasn't  told, and heaven help us when Lindsay finds out.and Gus will be thrilled, he loves his daddy and adores Justin

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2017 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 7

  Lindsay is a real pill and hard to swallow. I don't blame Justin for not wanting the family at the wedding, they so often make it about them instead of keeping their mouths shut. Debbie, mikey , Lindsay all think they know best.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2017 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 6

 Well as usual mikkey went ape shit and the way he acted about Rage I find it hard to believe he was going to tell Justin. From your last paragraph I think Canada will be full of trama ,even if it's non of their business either.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2017 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 5

 I'm surprised Jen didn't tell Debbie or someone from the family.Michael will probably need to change his captain astro underwear.I think most of them will be happy the two are together.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2017 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

 Brian's right, it's time to do something they're both dieing a little each time the other has to leave. Either Brian opens a NYC kinnetic or Jstin comes home, nothing less will work.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2017 05:23 AM · On: CHAPTER 3

  Never a dull minute. I was glad if Brian had to become ill it was in Pa., knowing if Justin was a witness he would have a melt down--seeing it and being powerless to help his man.With them being in Pa. he had Ted and Cynthia, not to mention Jen, Debbie and Carl to be with Justin when it all happened. 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2017 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 2

 How terrible to be an artist and have a hand that is causing so much pain, he won't get far with mikey--mikey is to self serving to care about anyone, but I'm sure Brian can keep a leash on the stupid man. I'm sure Debbie will add her two cents worth.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2017 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Honestly, when does what Brian and Justin want matters. I hope they find them. mikey only cares about tradition when it means he gets his way.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2016 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 11

This story has been on my TBR list for some time. I really enjoyed it and for a first story you did a stellar job. Our boys ended up with a HEA and put several demons to rest. I must start the sequel asap.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2016 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 11

I simply loved this story!  Thanks so much for sharing.  Can't wait to read the sequel.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 8

Monogamy, raw sex, and a wedding!!!!  Loving their life.  Hope everyone else has a positive reaction.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 7

Yeah they are getting married...finally!!!!  I'm glad they aren't doing a big wedding.  I think they are all highly over-rated.  I would like them to at least have Gus there though.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 6

I know it's hard for them to say goodbye to the loft, but I'm glad they are going to be starting their lives together some place new.  The family always is in their business and I think it's good for them to be on their own for awhile. 

 

Can't wait for Gus' first visit to New York.  I'm sure Justin has something special planned for his new room.

 

Mel and Lindsay better be on their best behavior.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 4

Okay, that better mean one of them is moving.  No breaking up!!!

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 09:56 PM · On: CHAPTER 3

Oh, my goodness!  Did he have a heart attack? 

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 2

I hate them having to say good bye to each other.  Breaks my heart everytime too.

 

Mel and Lindsey need to get a life.  Why on earth would they be mad that Gus would want to call Justin "Papa?"  He has been a constant in his entire life.  They are just so selfish.

 

Off to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2016 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loving the start of this...although Michael and Jennifer are taking things a bit overboard.  Glad Ben has been a good confidant for Brian. 

Hot! Hot! Hot!  Love their love scenes.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2016 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 11

I really liked this story, great follow on from the end of the series. Can't wait to start the sequel:-)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2015 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 11

Finally got a chance to read this. Great first effort. Thanks for writing. TAG

Reviewer: sharon (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2015 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 11

loved it cant wait for the sequel to b finished......



Author's Response:

I'm delighted you enjoyed this story!  The sequel is posting now on this website.

I truly appreciate your supportive comment and thank you for reading!!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2015 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 11

That was wonderful, I loved it! So glad there's a sequel...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm thrilled you liked this story!  I greatly appreciate your encouragment and feedback! 

Hugs, Aislin

Reviewer: JANE (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2015 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

I just started this story and after 50 words I am completely hooked.  To be honest I did read the ending - I've been upset a number of times where the series ending with one of them dying (w/o a warning) or broke them up (again, w/o a warning) that I now read the endings frist and I loved your ending.

Have you started the sequel yet?

 



Author's Response:

I'm delighted you liked the story!  I promise that neither Brian nor Justin will die or break-up in my stories, rest assured :) 

Yes, I will be posting the sequel soon.  I intended to post it much sooner, so I apologize for the wait.

Thank you for reading and for commenting!!  Greatly appreciated!

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2015 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

great story

thank you for sharing

a sequel would be great



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback!!  I'm glad you enjoyed the story!  The sequel will be posted soon :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2015 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 10

Playing catch up here...on to the next chapter;)

Author's Response:

Did you get caught up yet?  :)   I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the story!!

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2015 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hate to see this fic end. Fabulously written and so thorouly enjoyed!

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your encouragement, JoAnn!  I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story!  There is a sequel to this story which should be posted soon :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2015 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 11

Fwo der ful fic and I really look forward to Gus's POV

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Now we'll see what life has in store for the Kinney family.  Sequel will be posted very soon.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2015 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 11

Glad to see there will be a Sequel, there can never be enough Brian and Justin in the world.

Author's Response:

I agree...there's never too much Brian and Justin togetherness!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2015 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 11

I really enjoyed this! Can't wait for more stories Frm you :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the encouragement!!  I'm so happy you've enjoyed the story :)

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2015 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 11

I bloody love this story I can't wait for the sequel Fingers crossed lindz and mel is in a tailspin 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

Keep fingers crossed...the wish may come true.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2015 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

You've managed to put an end to Joanie.  I wonder if she left any debts for poor Claire?  Love the conversation with Mel and Linz.  I enjoyed this story and plan to reread it.  Looking forward to your sequel.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the story and are looking forward to the sequel!  It will be appearing soon.

Putting an end to Joanie and Chris Hobbs was something I'd really wanted to do, LOL!

Thanks for reading and your feedback!!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2015 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 11

oh-  I was not expecting an end-  but you did a fabulous job of tying up loose ends-  can't see why Linds and Mel thought Gus should be at the funeral-  he never even knew her and if Brian had his choice, he wouldn't have gone either.  can't wait for the sequel



Author's Response:

When I wrote this story originally, it was MUCH longer, and done as one story.  I'd never posted on this forum before, so I wasn't sure how long I should make it and what I should or shouldn't include.  That was why I divided it up into two stories.  The sequel to this, which picks up as Gus turns 16-years-old, will be double this size in terms of chapters...maybe more :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2015 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 10

WHOA!!! I did see that coming!!!!
Talk about man down lol, Hobbs got exactly what was coming to him. :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the chapter!  Thanks for your feedback :)

Yep, Hobbs finally got his comeuppance!

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2015 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

I'm just wondering how many more chapters there are? When you had started posting it you responded to a reviewer that it might be around ten chapters. As someone who like to wait until  a story is complete to read it, I'm just curious as to when I can anticipate reading it.



Author's Response:

The next chapter will be the final of this story.  There will also be a sequel to this story.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2015 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 10

I could almost see the photo shoot!

A guess more than a few of us won't miss Hobbes in the least.

I wonder what Brian's reaction will be to Joan's death?

Author's Response:

I think the boys had fun on that photo shoot!

Everyone will have their own reaction to Joan's death.  It'll be interesting :)

Reviewer: lucyMJ (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 10

entreteining 

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2015 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

Your words describing their love and emotions are just beautiful... Of course I'm all about the love...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

I'm delighted you liked the romantic descriptives in this chapter!  Although Brian and Justin fuck A LOT, at the core of it, there is always love!

Hugs, my friend,

Aislin

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2015 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 8

Beautiful and romantic! Together forever.

Now the families response.

Thanks for sharinng! JoAnn



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting, JoAnn!  Greatly appreciated!  Yep, the boys together, forever!

I will be posting the next chapter this weekend and we'll see how the family takes the news :)

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Aislin

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2015 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

Brilliant update! So glad Brian put Linz in her place also let Mikey know just what it ment to Justin i regards to his diminished use of hishand and having to let Rage go. Now on to marriage.

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

I think that Brian and Justin's friends, on occasion, try to insert themselves a little bit too much into our boy's decision-making process, especially when it deals with major changes.  I think it's probably because it messes with their comfort-zone, LOL!

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2015 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 8

excellent chapter-  the descriptions were wonderful-  felt like I was there- well as much as I could be-  felt the emotions of Brian and Justin as they experienced the utmost in closeness.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the descriptive dialog!  Thank you for reading, and your encouraging feedback, both very appreciated!

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2015 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 8

Beautiful chapter!

And a cliffie to bring us back.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this chapter!  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 8

I'm not even going to say it lol This was a very sweet and emotional chapter. Although I would have thought they would tell the family well before a month went by...but I guess I could see why they would wait ;)

Author's Response:

LOL!  I know, I know...  ;)  I'm delighted you liked the chapter!  I think that with Brian and Justin's personalities, neither were in a hurry to tell their family right away.  I couldn't picutre them running home to pick up the phone and call everyone to make the announcement.  But now that they are visiting Pittsburgh to share the news in person, we'll have to see how it turns out.  :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 8

I guess they didn't see the need to wait for their wedding night once they got their test results.  I do think they could have told Cynthia about the wedding, I doubt she would have talked.  She probably knew once they took three weeks for a honeymoon though.  How long do you think everyone will take to notice the rings at Debbie's?



Author's Response:

I don't think it will take very long at all for the family to notice their wedding rings :)

Although I didn't mention Cynthia any further in this chapter, I'm certain that Brian told her about him and Justin getting married as soon as he returned to work.  I agree with you that she would be one person who would have never talked if she had known before hand.  However, the reason why I wrote that section the way that I did, was because Brian and Justin's characters wanted their vows to be all about the two of them, they wanted that moment in time to be theirs alone.

Thanks for reading and your feedback!

 

 

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2015 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

Loved all the sex in this chapter hated the cliffhanger ending



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter!  I'll get the next chapter posted soon :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 8

Aw so ridiculously romantic xx

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm happy you enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2015 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 8

Awwww you tease lol I loved this chapter it was so romantic and beautiful 



Author's Response:

LOL!  Happy you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2015 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh wow what a fabulous chapter it had Lindsay getting a smack down and Brian and Justin getting a private hideaway and now eloping xxx

Author's Response:

Thank You!  I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter!!  :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2015 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 7

I don't know how to say it without being too blunt or harsh but your Brian is so OOC that he is barely recognizable as the Brian from the show so you “should” really add “Alternative Universe” for the whole story. And your Justin isn’t so much better tbh. I just pick out two examples for Brian.

Actually, since you moved to New York.  After you left Pittsburgh, I tried, several times, but it didn’t…  I couldn’t seem to do it.  The times I tried, whenever I’d look at a potential trick, all I saw was your face. ”

It’s impossible that canon Brian will be monogamous after 513, IF he ever will be monogamous than many years after the series finale. And if he would be monogamous than certainly not for above mentioned reason, for Brian love and monogamy are not connected.

I don’t intend to somewhere down the road look back on my life and regret not marrying you.

Canon Brian would never regret not getting married, Canon Brian would regret getting married.



Author's Response:

Brian's character in the show grew and matured, in many ways, probably more than any of the others, ESPECIALLY during the 5th season.  To be more specific, following the Babylon bombing.  Already, he'd almost lost Justin when he was bashed, but when he realized how close Justin had come to losing his life in the bombing, it was truly a wake-up-call for Brian. 

As Brian himself told Justin, regarding his new outlook on marriage in episode 511, Brian's own words from the show, "As strongly as I was opposed to the idea, now that I'm behind it, I'm as fervently and passionately committed."  He followed that statement by then saying, "To prove to the person that I love, how much I love him.  That I would give him anything, I would do anything, I would be anything, to make him happy." 

Brian openly declared his love for Justin; asked him to marry him; put the loft on the market to sell; bought Justin the huge Manor house; bought wedding rings; turned down the opportunity to fuck a trick at his and Justin's bachelor party.  ALL of these things, no one thought Brian would EVER do, BUT HE DID!

I know there are some who still view Brian with blindeers on, and still see him as he used to be, instead of recognizing, and giving credit to, the fact that he did change, he did grow, he did evolve.  Brian Kinney did eventually find the balance in his life.  He didn't lose who he was, and in his characteristics and behaviors he showed to the outside world, he was still, "Brian-Fucking-Kinney", but in private with Justin, he exposed his heart and maturity.  Sure, it took a long time, but that aspect was clearly defined in the last few episodes of the series.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2015 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7

What an interesting chapter.  Brian finally goes up against Lindsay and wins!  Then you jump 3 years and they get a place in Ibiza.  Terrific.  Now they're getting married just the two of them.  Perfect.  Sadly we have to wait to find out when they end up doing it.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2015 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

This has been a very nice story, I am sorry I have not commented earlier, but sometimes RL sucks, and not in a good way.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting!  I understand, RL can seriously bite at times. 

I am glad to hear you've been reading and enjoying the story!!  Next chapter will be posted soon.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2015 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 7

....you did it again lol...now I'm going to have to suffer until the next update. I am a little saddened that they actually sold rage, I was kind of hoping they wouldn't go through with it.

Author's Response:

LOL!  I'll update soon...don't want th prolong the suffering!

Sorry about Rage.  Truly not my intention to sadden you about that subject.  It had more to do with what was happening to Justin in regards to his hand, more than anything, and what he was or was not capable of maintaining.

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2015 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

No!!!!! lol I didn't want it to end awesome chapter can't wait 



Author's Response:

Sorry about ending it where I did...  I tried to find a place where it wouldn't be a dramatic cliffhanger  :)

Thanks for reading and commenting, so glad you liked this chapter!!

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2015 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

Really enjoying these chapters and look forward with anticipation to each new posting.



Author's Response:

I truly appreciate your encouragement, thank you so much!!!  :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2015 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter.  Mikey still managed to mess things around.  Wonder how the meeting with the publisher went?  Now we need to hear the responses from Lindsay and Mel!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! 

I can only hope that Mikey will come to a new level of realization and be a bit more grown-up and accepting.

Update will be very soon!

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2015 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 6

i loved this chapter with Brian and a very happy Justin but I have to admit I hate cliffhangers can you make it a really short wait till the next chapter like um Sunday



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting!  Won't have to wait for long for the next chapter, I'm posting it today!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2015 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

AAAARRRRGGGHHHH!!! Next chapter QUICK! Lol

Author's Response:

LOL! Oops...I did a cliffhanger again ;)  Next chapter is posting today!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2015 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

Still enjoying your story! I, too, was wondering if this chapter was the end, since it seemed to omit what happened in Toronto...at least until I read the other comment. I am marking this story as 'incomplete' until all your chapters are posted, since as the reader mentioned, some do not want to read stories until they are completely posted on the site. Once you have posted all the chapters, then I would mark this as complete.  Hope that makes sense. Looking forward to the rest of your story.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks for your help, Kim!  I was unclear on that particular process. 

I'm happy you're enjoying the story!!  The next chapter will be posted today :)

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2015 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh ok, but on this site when an author tags their story as complete, it means they have completed posting it, not completed writing it. You can post that fact in your notes...

Reviewer: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2015 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

I read this because it was tagged as completed, but when I got to the end I realized it was a cliffhanger...not completed at all... :(



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and your feedback! The story is complete, however, I am posting the individual chapters one at a time.  The next chapter will be posted very soon!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2015 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

Ah Sh%t! All Hell is about to break loose lol
Glad Brian realized he needed to be with Justin.
Looking forward to next update!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  Yep, meeting with the family should be interesting.  Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: Nickknack (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2015 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

 Very enjoyable, looking forward to more chapters being posted



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting!  Glad you are enjoying it!  Next chapter to follow soon.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh now they have to tell the family about their new situation...honey the grits are about to hit the fan! Lol

Author's Response:

Hahaha!!  Isn't that the truth!!

Will be posting next chapter soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 5

I'm surprised that it took them so long to make this move and once they did how fast everything came together.  The chapter were they break the news to the rest of the family should be awesome!



Author's Response:

Brian and Justin lived by their own 'rules'.  Sometimes it didn't turn out so well.  But now, finally, they made it!  Now we'll wait to see how everyone else responds.  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2015 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love this chapter I can't wait for the gang reactions



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The gang's reactions (hopefully) will be interesting.  More soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2015 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 4

I can relate to the high blood presure problem.  The cure is for Justin to move back to Pitts.  What was Mikey thinking!  How can he not see the artist he hired is a very very pale imatation.  This should affect sales!  Wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

With as good of an artist Justin is, Brian instantly knew that Justin would be upset with the finished product the art student produced.  Mikey was so focused on getting another issue published, it was an aspect he didn't consider.  We'll have to see where it leads them, and if there is a conclusion to the problem.

I agree...the best cure for Brian, is Justin.  Hope he realizes that, soon!

Next chapter will be posted soon!  Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2015 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

Thank goodness Brian is going to be alright. But again you leave us with a nasty cliffhanger lol...we may have to start punishing you for this ;)

Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, that was kinda a naughty thing to do :)  I'll be posting the next chapter within the next couple of days, so I'll try not to leave such a cliffhanger next time...maybe!

Thanks for reading and for your feedback!!

Reviewer: hpdc (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2015 05:24 AM · On: CHAPTER 3

AHHHHH BRIAN BETTER NOT DIE !!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Without giving out too much on the 'spoilers', be assured, Brian doesn't die :)

Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2015 05:16 PM · On: CHAPTER 3

OMG! you can't leave it there! What's wrong with Brian?! Update Soon!



Author's Response:

I won't keep the suspence for long; update on the next chapter will be very soon!  Thanks for reading and commenting!!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2015 05:11 PM · On: CHAPTER 3

Oh nooooooo....you can't leave us like this! Please, please, please update very soon.

Author's Response:

Promise...the next chapter will be posted very soon!  I won't leave the dear readers in suspence for long!

Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2015 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

Jennifer and Michael are a strange team but they both had to hear what Brian and Justin had to say.

I like how you portray Ben he seems like a much better friend than Michael.

Mel was out of order Justin's as much of a father to Gus as Brian is.

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

You're right, Michael and Jennifer did make a different type of 'team', one we never saw in the show, and as you said, they did need to hear the words from Brian & Justin.  This is the only time in the story, though, that they meet together for something like that.

Thanks, too, for your comment about Ben.  On the show, Brian once told Ben he called him, "Zen-Ben", so I tried to keep with that premise.

Mel, whenever she dealt with Brian, was usually argumentative with him, so the story follows along with that, to some degree.  Since Justin and Brian are now much more prevelant in little Gus' life, their son looks at Justin as another father.  That dynamic will progress with the story as well.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!  Greatly appreciated!!

More to come, very soon!

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2015 05:03 PM · On: CHAPTER 3

OH! NO! Please next chapter soon



Author's Response:

Absolutely!  The next chapter will be posted soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2015 05:02 PM · On: CHAPTER 3

OMG.  You just gave us a satifactory solution to the Mikey situation, then you leave us with Brian being rushed to the hospital.  What will the doctor tell Justin?



Author's Response:

Some amount of drama does always seem to follow the boys (Brian and Justin) around.  No sooner is one problem solved, and then another arises :)   I'll post the next chapter soon!  Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2015 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm glad that even thought Justin went to New York that he and Brian are still together, I'm not a fan of stories where they break up after justin left.



Author's Response:

I agree!  Even when Justin was leaving for New York, he and Brian were still professing their love towards one another.  His leaving wasn't a 'means-to-an-end', regarding their relationship, in my opinion.  It was simply another stepping-stone, a different direction they needed to face, together, in keeping things alive and well.

Reviewer: Hamsterfan (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2015 04:13 PM · On: CHAPTER 3

Aaaah, what a mean cliffhanger. I hope you will post the next chapter soon.



Author's Response:

My apologies...  It was kinda an interesting spot for the cliffhanger, but I promise to update very soon!!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2015 03:56 PM · On: CHAPTER 3

Oh no por Brian and Justin

Reviewer: Vida (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2015 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

It would be nice if there were some deeper conflict rather than a familial dispute over a get together dinner, which is all that has happened since Chapter 1. I also felt the sex scene here was flat, and lacking in true emotion. Perhaps considering how to truly hook the reader using unconventional scenes rather than commonplace, mundane arguments might bring more interest. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback, I truly appreciate your input.  Regarding the sex scenes, the following chapters are much more descriptive in that area!!  There are more in-depth and heavier conflicts/angst coming up as well in the story, but for the first two chapters, I wanted to "set-the-scene", as it were, at introducing where all the characters currently were in this stage of life.  I hope you continue to read and comment!  More to come, very soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2015 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

Really enjoyable chapter.  So much happening.  Love how you portray Ben, Jennifer, Gus, Melanie and Lindsey.  But I think that Justin should move back to the Pitts.  Hurry with that next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Yes, there's a lot going on with the characters, and there's a lot more to come!  The next chapter will be posted soon.

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2015 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm so loving this story can't wait for next chapter



Author's Response:

Happy to know you're liking the story!  Thankis for reading!!  The next chapter will post soon.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2015 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 2

Enjoying your story.  Interesting take on Ben.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So glad to hear you're enjoying it!!  The next chapter will post soon. 

Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2015 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 2

Delightful way to end my day!!! Thanks so much~~~

Author's Response:

You're very welcome!!

Reviewer: Tammy (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2015 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

What's WIP mean



Author's Response:

It means 'Work In Progress'.  This particular story is already complete, and I'll add the upcoming chapters regularly.  Hope you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2015 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 2

this is a really nice story - I just love the easy rapport between them, while at the same time not changing who they are at their core - I've always been a sucker for stories that depict this wonderful relationship that is so different between the two of them than what they show the rest of the world - true Brian "Fucking Kinney" to the public and even the family - true "I know what I want and I'll do what I have to do to have it" Justin - but then when its just the two of them, the affection and love and just a plain ol' couple in loved

really great read - thanks for sharing it...

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Charle!  I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!  I adore that aspect too, of their relationship, as you mentioned.  It's nice to know when readers detect certain qualities in the behaviors of the characters!  Upcoming chapters will be posted soon :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2015 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

Omg this is soooo good, I can't believe I almost missed it. I can't wait to see where you plan to take this.

Btw...welcome to Whispers :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!!  I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!  Thanks for the Whispers welcome, too! :)

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2015 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

An interesting and absorbing look at their post 513 life.

I am glad to know this is not a WIP, as I can't wait to see how it all goes!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Since it's not a WIP, I'm trying to add the chapters fairly close together.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story :)

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very promising start!


Jennifer doing something, anything with Michael - what a strange concept. I don't believe I read something like this in the fandom so far.


I like your Brian, developing a friendship with Ben could be good for him.

Michael - well, he's Michael, true IC :)


If this is not a WIP, would you please tell me how many chapters are still there?
I'm just not good in waiting, but I definitely will be reading this when is completed.



Author's Response:

I admit, there are a few 'quirks' in the story, ones that we might not anticipate.  This is the only time in the story where Jennifer and Michael 'team up', but it followed with the story line of each of them wanting Brian and Justin in Pittsburgh for the holiday.

Regarding how many chapters there are in this story, I can't give you an exact number, due to the format I used when I originally wrote it.  But I will estimate about 10 chapters.

Thanks for reading and for your comments!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2015 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

maybe you should put a anti-michael....it seem this way.I don't like fan fic when michael is so needy and brian little pet.Yes he has a problem with justin for long time but after the best reunion in 3 season i don't know why a lot are against michael.He sent justin to Brian during cancer arc!!!and during 5 season he seem all but wishing to keep brian by himself.I probably gonna stot reading but for those who are anti michael i think they will like this fan fiction.It is good for a start and brian and justin together forever lover gonna love this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your feedback!  Life is often full of changes and bumps in the road, and each person reacts differently, and not always in the way we expect them to.  I do hope you continue reading this story to see how each character develops.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is going to be good.  I love how Ben gets it and trys to reason with Mikey and Jennifer.  I'm a little disappointed with Emmett, at least Ted knows which side to be on.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I'm delighted you like the story!   I like Ben, too.  In my opinion, regarding the show, he seemed to be one who would think things through, and was perceptive to the people around him.  I tried to continue with that,  keeping him and the others as canon as possible. 

The next chapter will be posted soon.  Thank you for reading and for your feedback!!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2015 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yay! Another new author and a new story too! Welcome to MW! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind welcome!  Hope you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Kearney - you did it! So great to see you posting this on MW! Welcome to the site. I'm sure readers will really enjoy your story.;  If there's anything else I or Bob can do, please don't hesitate to ask.  Looking forward to the rest of your first story on here, and hopefully more to come. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim.  Yep, finally posted my story, LOL!  Thank you for all your help!  I'm sure I'll have plenty more questions along the way :) 

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