Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2018 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
Please please update
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2018 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
Just great. Brian just kills me with his remarks LOL
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2018 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 7 Woody's
Just love it, almost peed in my pants laughing
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2018 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
Excellent work..loved it ..thank u.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2018 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
Omg...justin is fabulous.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2018 03:45 PM · On: Detective Sunshine
What the...are they all on drug or something...wow.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2018 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 3
Freaking...hilarious ..lol.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2018 03:33 PM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
Poor poor brian...he is going crazy.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2018 03:25 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Damn...what the hell did you do brian...lol...this is interesting.
P.s - learnt today is ur birthday...happy birthday stay blessed.
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2017 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
well I must thank you for the laughs I've had tonight reading this. Looking forward to however you work all of this out. Still need brain bleach though lol.
Well done!!
:)
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2017 07:07 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Oh good Lord! How did I miss this? I know it's because I hadn't read here for more than a year. Well I'm very happy I found this tonight. I seriously need to get some brain bleach though for the images from this first chapter. Brian and Mikey? UGH *shudders* Looking forward to whatever happens next!!
Well done!
:)
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 07:25 PM · On: Detective Sunshine
I can't deal! Brian is having a bad dream or he's tripping on something he got from Anita. Am I warm? Loving this!😂
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2016 07:06 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
I choose the ugly. Has Mikey lost his comic-loving mind? Did he roofie Brian or is this an AU tale? Hilarious but I like this beginning.
Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2016 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
Sincerely hope you keep this going until the end so funny! Here's to happy writing <raises glass of merlot>.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2016 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
This is a fun story. I'm really enjoying it. Hope there's more to come soon.
Sorry, I can't really think of anything more to say right now, I was recently traumatised by a vicious trolling.
Later
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2016 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
I just loved this!! I'm so happy to see an update to this story!! :D I loved how Justin reacted to Ted's advances, it was hilarious!! XD I feel sorry for Blake, though.... to have to go through all of that.... I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2016 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
First they drop off the car, then they take a call from Lindsay, which was amusing. Then Brian forgot the key at Kinnetik. Could anything else go wrong. Hell yes. Mikey is cuffed to a radiator, lucky him. I would have locked him in the garage. Brian and Justin has to tell Cynthia what's going on. Then Ted shows up, thank heaven for Blake. We do need more.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2016 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
Hi, Kearney! I don't get a lot of chances to read as much as I would like on here due to a change in my work hours. But I want you to know that I am thoroughly enjoying your story! It is witty, original, and just plain hilarious, especially the parts where Justin goes into his 'kamikaze' mode - LOL! So funny! Will hate to see this one end, but I think the story is great! Thanks for posting it on here. :) ~Kim
P.S. And Novinney Manor - what a hoot! Poor, deluded Michael!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2016 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
I love this story it is so amusing having Brian off Centre and Justin going from protective to jealous lol
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 14: My little Runaway
:)
Inspected all chapters for technical issues. All good.
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 2
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 3
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 2
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 3
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 Woody's
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:45 PM · On: Detective Sunshine
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:45 PM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:45 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
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Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2016 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
Ha, my hunch was right, Em did something, but Michael escaping from hospital to sing at Woodys, didn't see that coming. lol And now Mysterious Marilyn - poor Brian
Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2016 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
Hahaha, Mel as *a fucking snowman with a hard-on*, the picture will stay in my mind for ever.
Now I'm really looking forward to when Em caves in and tells all that he knows
Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2016 06:05 PM · On: Detective Sunshine
I have to say, now I'm nearly at the point to just not read any further, because its too surreal and so far beyond my comfort zone, that I can't laugh about these things anymore.
But I'm a very curious person and I like long stories, so I'm still on board, but you really have a fantasy I've nevver seen.
The story is well written and I love your stile.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2016 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
Add soon
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2016 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
I'm loving the story so far!!! XD Very funny indeed. I love how protective Justin is of Brian, and the way he stood up to Debbie at the loft was soooo great!!! XD I'm glad that at least Ben, Blake and Hunter know the truth of the situation finally.... I hope that Brian and Justin will be able to locate the ass that caused everything soon! I really can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I've always wanted Brian to stand up to Deb a bit more, Much as I love her, I think she definitely speaks before she thinks so I love Justin taking her down a peg or two.
Reviewer: MissMerlot (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2016 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
Absolutely hilarious...crying with laughter. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm trying to get this fic finished once and for all but I'm extremely slow. Thanks for taking the time for review
Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2016 07:12 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
OK, just almost choked to death on my bagel so had to stop and review...."Handbags at dawn?!?!" Just awesomely funny. Loving this fic!!!
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2016 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
Caught up with the last 5 chapters. Giggling through all the chapters.
Great fic, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. And so sorry for taking so long to respond.
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
So, I have to admit, the first few chapters I was really put off. I really had visuals of Michael, Ted and Mel seducing Brian. thought of bleaching my brain to get those thoughts out. I had no idea what the hell was going on and it was a bit disturbing! LOL
Obviously it's all clearing itself up now, at least the reasons why. We all knew it was something, but just not sure what.
Definitely getting soem giggles out of this. Not sure who I feel more sorry for. B&J or Deb. LOL. I'm purposly ignoring the whole Mel thing......weeeeeeeeeesh. *shivers*. Ted...friggin hilarious! Poor guy is going to be so embarassed after!! Mel will be disgusted, but Michael....not sure what his reaction will be, considering it's not too far off the mark anyway.
Happy to see updates coming regualrly. Thanks. Well done. So original! funny as hell in such a completely ridiculous way.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Elaine and the lovely compliments.
The 1st couple of chpts were a bit "cringe", particularly if you don't know what's coming. Hopefully those disturbing images have been banished from your brain.
I'll be dealing with Ted in the next chpt. Unfortunately for him, it's gonna get worse before it gets better.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
Damn Marilyn. This is all her...his fault
Author's Response: Haha, don't blame poor Marilyn.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
Hehehe. Michael handcuffed to the radiator. The hypnotism almost wasn't necessary for Mikey to go after Brian.
LOL, the incident which must never be mentioned when Melanie molested Brian. ;)
Can't wait for next Sunday's installment.
Author's Response: You're right. It probably took the guru all of 3 seconds to convince Michael. I think Mel will get rude awakening when all this is sorted. She's gonna flip.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2016 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 3
Grinning over this. Poor Brian! Poor Justin!
See you in a week!
Author's Response: Yeah, I've kinda been torturing B&J. I should really stop, but it's too much fun.
As you say, see you in a week. Ted comes out of hospital. Can't wait
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 2
This is so darned funny. Love the way you poke fun at everyone's foibles; that's very canon-like. Justin masterminding their "escape" plan is priceless. And, poor Carl, being tasked with the straight man's perspective. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing.
I always thought Carl must have a sense of humour-he'd have to, being engaged to Deb-so I decided Brian would tease hin a little. I try to keep things "in character" and canon-ish, but considering the utter absurdity of what's going on, I'm not gonna sweat it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 2
They stole a cop car!!!!? Emmett had better have a talk with Ben and Blake and tell them what really happened, then Ben can go postal on Mikey.
Author's Response: I'd love to see Ben go postal on Michael. Unfortunately, Brian is the focus of his rage. Poor baby
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
I'm not sure how I missed this chapter. You've now explained why Mikey, Ted, and smelly Melly ended up thinking they were in love with Brian. Well thought out too. Now just how do you explain it to Ben, Blake and Hunter. The truth is really unbelievable, but funny.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Ben & Blake will be told what happened in the next chpt. I'm not sure how well they will take the news. Especially Ben
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2016 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 2
please, please be right that the next part will be up tomorrow!
I can just see this whole thing like a movie in my head. It is so funny. Part of what makes it funny for me is the fact that I actually know about a case where a man did hang onto a car like that!
Author's Response: I promise the next part will up tomorrow. The rough draft is complete. Just have to organise it a little. I'll give you a little preview. Emmett fills Deb, Ben and Blake in about Michael and Ted being hypnotised. And Mikey and Ben have a few ... ahem...issues
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2016 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
Seriously....a comedy genius....there...there's a 100 comments. Now make with the next chapter already!!!
Author's Response: Well, thank you so much for bumping up the review numbers. Just for that I posted another chapter. And following you're example, it's a duplicate of the last one :-)
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2016 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
You are a comedy genius.
Author's Response: It's true, I am. Thank you for recognising my genius 😆
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
It took a moment before I remembered this story. Thank you for going back and finishing it. This is hilarious!!! It's been forever since I last read anything this funny! And it is all in character too. A grin keeps popping out. Looking forward to the next chapter. Gotta go read it again.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comments. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I've tried to keep the gang "in character" as much as possible, but maybe exagerate a little.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2016 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
It took a moment before I remembered this story. Thank you for going back and finishing it.
This is hilarious!!! It's been forever since I last read anything this funny! And it is all in character too.
A grin keeps popping out.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Gotta go read it again.
Reviewer: kimi (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2016 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
Outrageously funny....wonder how it will resolve..lookin forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm wondering how it will resolve myself :-)
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2016 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 9 Memories... part 1
ROTFLMAO. Can't stop laughing...Justin, in defense of "his" Brian starting a reenactment of the Stonewall Riots.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it and thanks for commenting. Justin is just a teeny tiny bit possessive in this story. Let's hope he can control his violent tendencies :-)
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2016 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 3
I reread this story to refresh my memory--no hardship, LOL. Love the snarky humor. Can't wait to see how Brian and Justin deal with Miguel's hypnotism of Mikey, Ted, and Mel.
Author's Response: I can see why you'd need a refresher. It's been a while (hangs head in shame) Thanks for the review
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2016 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 3
Omg that is a awesome reason for the lurve lol I look forward to the extent chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you're enjoying it
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2016 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 3
I'm glad you decided to continue with this. Some of us have been waiting patiently waiting. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so mych for sticking with it.
Reviewer: Alnwick (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2016 01:26 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
I am so happy you are back and updating this story. I haven't read the update yet as I need to re read the entire story first so I don't have any feed back just yet - but I wanted to let you know asap that I was very sad when you stopped and I am equally joyed if not more so that you are going to continue. The humor you write is some of the best in the fandom, past and present.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much. I'm actually tearing up. What a lovely thing to say. I couldnt get this last chpt right and it was driving me mental. I knew how the story needed to continue but I couldnt figure out the right way to structure this bloody chpt. I gave up for a while over the holiday period and stopped stressing over it. And when I came back and looked over my notes, it was much easier. Sorry for waffling but you've no clue how much your comment means to me.
Now as Brian would say, I need to quit being so lesbianic :-)
Mind you, if you hate the latest update, I reserve the right to delete this :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2016 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 3
Oh, this is so funny. Learning about Mikey's piercing and Mel's dildos. I want to know what Ted, Michael and Mel asked and what the answers were.
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Ted wants to ask about his future with Blake, Mel wants to know if she should move back to the Pitts and Michael needs advice about going on sabbatical with Ben.
I'm not sure they got any answers-The Guru was too busy hypnotizing them :-)
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2015 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
Emmett turned to Brian and, in a serious manner, asked, “Do you think the Alpha is you or me?” I'm laughing hysterically here...
Leaving them on a cliff-hanger, she ensured that they would wait for her return... Yep, you have me on the edge of my seat, I hope you update this one. I'm totally intrigued, and can't wait for more...
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Sorry to reply so late. Thanks so much for commenting.
Btw, any update on offer still stands and christmas present? Love those stories hint hint :-)
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2015 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
'Six fucking years it took me to get us (i.e., you) to this place in our relationship. So those three bitches better watch the fuck out, because if they try to fuck with me, I will fucking KILL them.' Justin grabbed Brian and sucked the face off him before he released him and stated, 'You are mine.'Six fucking years it took me to get us (i.e., you) to this place in our relationship. So those three bitches better watch the fuck out, because if they try to fuck with me, I will fucking KILL them.' Justin grabbed Brian and sucked the face off him before he released him and stated, 'You are mine.'' I am totally loving this story. Loved what Justin said. More please.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2015 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
Just discovered your story and can't wait for the next chapter. Hilarious!
So well imagined that I can't decide what's funniest, but Mel may take the d**k (uh, I mean prize).
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Thinking up stuff for Mel is my favourite pastime.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2015 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
Okay I'm waiting for more... I can't image how they got into this mess, let alone how they'll get out of it...
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
Oh you are so evil lol
Reviewer: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2015 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
I KNEW Mysterious Marilyn had was somehow involved! She had to be!
Can't wait to hear what else she has to say. I have to say, I'd be qas impatient as Brian waiting for answers.
Having such fun reading this!!
Author's Response: Glad to hear you're enjoying this. Thanks so much for commenting
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
I personaly can't wait to know more ;) this is a great story and very well written, considering himor is one of the most difficukt thing to write, but you do it so well...
Author's Response: What a lovely compliment. Thanks so much
Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
I love this story and I'm glad Marilyn is in here! Hopefully, we'll finally find out about poor Brian's night. Great story!
Thanks so much!
:)
Amy
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
Brilliant! So many sentences I love here :) it would be too long to list them. Loved the buffy reference and the Occam's razor but also all the rest :) You write this humor fic so perfectly
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 09:36 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
Mel in love with Brian... THAT promise to be interesting :) I LOVE this!
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 3
LOL
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 09:22 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Hi Kearney! I just discovered this little story and I adore this! Seriously, this is hilarious 😊 and the scenes you describe...Perfect! So, first Michael, now Ted? Are they all under a spell or something? What the F#*K??? LMFAO!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2015 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens part 2
How wicked of you to leave us with a cliff hanger and no drinks!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
So thrilled to see this updated, Kearney! This has to be one of the funniest stories I've read in quite a while! Love Justin's handling of Brian in this story, and his methods for 'keeping him in line.' I am definitely looking forward to reading the rest of this! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
Lol this was very funny and I am gagging to read the next chapter, I laughed several times
Author's Response: I'll try to get the next chpt up soon but it's wrecking my head. Soon soon.
Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: natters from Paris (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2015 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
Can't wait for the rest of the chapter… and of the whole story. It's hilarious. I keep grinning or laughing like a lunatic. Best crackfic ever!
Natters from Paris
Author's Response: Thanks so much. So glad you're enjoying it and cheers for reviewing
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
I can't think of anything especially to say about this just that I'm enjoying this immensely. You are very funny
I had no idea who Shakira was so I Yu tubed itI had tears of laughter the whole way through. There were parts that reminded me of her being epileptic. And I should know...I'm an epileptic! LOL
Author's Response: Oh my god!! Hope it didnt cause any offence.
I've always thought she looks like someone keeps tasering her during that video :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
Awww shit, now we're getting to the meat of this whole thing...can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hope to have it posted on Thurs but it's breaking my heart trying to get this right.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
Thank God. I knew Mysterious Marilyn was involved somehow. No way could it have happen otherwise. Now just how many days ago did all this take place? I mean Brian woke up, Justin came home, Mikey and Ted ended up in the hospital. Now they are where it all began. That had to have involved more than one day?
Author's Response: Haha, it does seem like a lot to happen in one day. Friday night was when 'something' happened. Sat morning Brian woke up with Michael and flew to NY, (flight takes 45mins)Sat morning, Michael&Ted are hospitalised. Brian arrives in NY at noon. He and Justin have sex, argue,and fly back to the pitts. As they arrive back at the loft, Deb and Mel are awaiting them.They ring Emmett and arrange to meet at Woody's around 10pm.
Does this clear things up?
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2015 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Plot Thickens, Part 1
Ah, HA Mysterious Marilyn now the answers!!!!!??????
Brilliant!
Author's Response: You'll definitely get some answers. Maybe not all, though.
Reviewer: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2015 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 7 Woody's
Ok....so the ridiculousness of this........is utterly fantastic!! Trying so hard to giggle out loud while I'm reading this. (I'm at worksshhh)
Love seeing Justin getting pissed off. Brian all freaked out. I have to say though....imagining Michael in the howpital gown may stay with me and not in a "good, life affirming kind of way" LOL.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Yeah, Michael is not my fav so if I can put him in embarrassing situations, all the better
Reviewer: Alnwick (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2015 03:06 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
What a blast! I am having a great time reading it. Please more!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2015 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 7 Woody's
Funny! But you have to hurry with the next chapter, there are questions to be answered and tempers to quash.
Author's Response: I hurried :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2015 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 7 Woody's
This just keeps getting better!
Author's Response: Merci buckets
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2015 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 7 Woody's
So glad to read this update.
Hope Emm can shed some light on what really happened!
Fantastic, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with it
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2015 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
This is so freakin' hilarious! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
Smelly Melly horny, naked and a twelve-inch plastic stick, Brian will need therapy for a long time.
Love Justin taking account of the situation and trying to put order into this madness. I hope Emmett can help clarify what really happened. Does Mysterious Marilyn is involved in this in any way?
Hugs, Fatima.
Author's Response: Maybe yes, maybe no. No further comment:-)
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
This is very hilarious. Mel loved negotiating sex with Brian by Justin.
Well, now we have an angry blond defending his man and refusing to share he with anyone else. This will be great!
I'm happy to have helped him in this hilarious story.
A big hug, Fatima.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you're keeping with it
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 01:26 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
OMG !!! Have you done that! Smelly Melly in love with Brian! That's the worst thing that Brian would expect to happen in your life. I'm very curious to know where you will take all this? I can not stop laughing.
Hugs, Fatima.
Author's Response: It's pretty bad. When she fully realises what she's done, she's gonna be pissed :-)
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2015 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
I am resuming the reading of its history and I can not stop laughing. His story is crazier than mine. And I still called my story absurd! Nonsense is what you are doing with Brian. Poor, Brian! I tortured and now you're doing isso.LOL!
I hope Emmett is still consistent and Justin can help figure out what's going on.
Hugs, Fatima.
Author's Response: Absurd is right. It's fun to torture Brian every once in awhile.
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2015 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
I was laughing so , I had tears in my eyes. Love forceful Justin. I'll never look at Mel the same way ever again!
Brilliant!
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Poor Mel. I've done a horrible horrible thing to her. She may never recover
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 10:05 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Omg, I made the mistake of reading this when my roommates already went to bed. I'm trying to laugh quietly through this, but am not sure how successful I am. *smothered giggling* Oh god... I'm dying here! My favorite line so far: "Concussion from falling on my ass? Really Theodore, I'd have thought you'd have grasped a rudimentary understanding of anatomy by now." :D :D :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. That line made me laugh too but it's great to hear that it's not just me.
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
Uh huh I smell trouble
Author's Response: Your nose is accurate :-)
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
Yes! I like this side of Justin.
I have a feeling Myserious Marylin has something to do wiht this fuckery.
Author's Response: I will confirm or deny nothing.
Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 01:09 PM · On: Detective Sunshine
What did they drink? Love potion with Brian's essence in it? Mel in love with Brian? In what Universe? :)))
Author's Response: No love potion. All will be revealed.
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
At least Jusitn is trying to make sense of the situation and is not really mad.
Author's Response: Yeah, I like Justin when he is sure of Brian's feelings and sticks with him.
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 12:57 PM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
O_O What's going on? Though...it's hilarious. Poor Brian. Another lost case...
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 12:43 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
*blink* To say I'm shocked...it's an undertstatement.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2015 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
I have literally been incapacitated with tear streaming laughter.
Author's Response: Good, I think. Though incapacitation is usually not a good thing...
Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2015 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
You have me rotfl at Mel's antics and Justin using the fire extinguisher on her! Too funny!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I've always wanted to use a fire extinguisher on someone so I'm living vicariously through Justin
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 11:57 PM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
OMG!!!! Ahhhhhhhhh!!! My eyes! My eyes!!!!!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
Child I almost choked on my lunch reading this! LMFAO I can just imagine the look on Brian’s face when he realized the hard cock trying to make home in his ass was Mel and her vomit colored strap-on.
Author's Response: Haha, poor Brian. He may have PTSD after that.
Reviewer: Alnwick (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 03:06 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Oh My God! Omg, omg - I want to be there when whatever is controlling Melanie's brain ceases it's influence and she realizes she TRIED TO FUCK BRIAN!
OMG, she tried to fuck Lyndsey's Brian! Lyndsey is going to bitch slap her!
Melanie trying to fuck Brian has to be the absolute worst thing an author has ever done to Brian in 15 years of fan fics! It's worse than being held captive in a room for a year, being sent to an alternate dimension where Justin doesn't exist, marooned on a desert island without condoms and Justin being straight all combined! You are an evil genius!
ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, - I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I knew it was bad, but worst thing ever done to Brian? I've read one where he was tortured, beaten, struck with syphilis.... no, you're right. Mel trying to fuck him is worst thing ever :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
Hope Emmett has the answer. This is hysterical. You have a way with words. ROFLOL.
Author's Response: Emmett has no answers. But he can point them in the right direction
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2015 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 6 Sh*t just got real
Wonderful chapter, can't wait to see where you go next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Really appreciate taking the time to review
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 12:59 PM · On: Oh, F$#K!
Yihaa! New update and new bouts of racous laughter. My God, this story is getting better and better. I'm starting to think someone might have fed a lovepotion to Mikey, Ted and Melly. Let's hope Emmet brings a bit of light in Brians "darkness".
Melly's "performance" is this chapter is super well written. Everytime I read this story I see it playing in my head.
Thank you for mentioning me in the intro to this chapter. This has never happened to me before. Glad I could be of service....
Looking sooo forward to the next update.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Your welcome for the mention. You had me laughing about the nearly peeing yourself so I had to use it. More 'depends' related humour will be coming up.
Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: Alnwick (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 04:34 AM · On: Oh, F$#K!
AARGGH! I am racking my brains trying to figure out what could have happened to make all three fall in love with Brian. Mikey and Ted I can figure out but throw Mel in the mix and and my theories get blown out of the water. OK new theory: all four were roofied at Marty's by a disgruntled gym bunny and former trick of Brian's who then brainwashed them. Mikey was easy, just a few words were required while pretending to be Brian. Ted was a little harder but most of the night had to be spent on Mel due to her tough as nails psyche. Due to time constraints he couldn't break her aversion to dick and had to be satisfied with convincing her to give drunken hand jobs and share the job with Justin.
God, I love this story! its all the little details you are throwing in like Justin tossing water on Brian's crotch, not just his face, Mel negotiating sex acts with Justin, Deb threatening harm to Michaels action figures among others. The details are great fun and make for a beefy reading experience.
Author's Response: That's a really good ending. If mine doesn't work out, I'm stealing this :-) thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2015 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
* grins * still loving this.
Author's Response: *grins* thanks marny
Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2015 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
I have to say I wasn't really sure about this after reading the first two chapters, in regards to Brian and Mikey f---ing, but Ted and Mel????? Something is up on Liberty Ave. and that last bar they all were at?????
This really made me laugh!
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you stuck with it.
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
Read the last three chapters in one go. Shouldn't have done that. I laughed so hard I nearly needed a Depend diaper to keep me from wetting myself.
Brian with Mikey, Ted and Smelly Melly....... HILARIOUS. I'm just glad I didn't read this during my luchbreak cause I think I would have a hard time explaining my hysteric giggling to my co-workers.
My dear, you are writing one of the most brilliant humerous fics in al long time.....
Can't wait for the next update.....
Thanks again for an excellent bout of howling laughter.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely comments...
...though I feel urinary incontinence is becoming a bit of a theme here :-)
Might have to try to fit that into the story somewhere.
So glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2015 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
So let me see if I have this right, Mel loves Brian but will only touch his dick if she is drunk, will not give him head, and because she has a strap-on she gets to top? Ha Ha. That is too funny
Author's Response: Yep, that's it in a nutshell. It made me laugh my head off when I thought of it. I figured with her being a lawyer, she'd be pragmatic and upfront about things. Also wanted to torture Brian a little.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2015 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
OMG! You suckered me right into the easy way out then ripped it from my hands!
Hope real life treats you kindly, both as a true wish and as a 'cliffie, she left us on a cliffie' self important thought.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Will do my best to get the nxt chpt up by Fri. Busy busy :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2015 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
So all three think they've slept with Brian? How did he manage that and not remember?
Author's Response: If I told you I'd have to kill you :-)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2015 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 Life is but a dream...
I almost couldn’t read this for the tears of laughter in my eyes...ROTFLMAO!!! Keep it coming my friend, this is so much fun...I'm glad I read past the first chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm hoping to get next chpt up by Friday at the latest. Work is kicking my ass atm.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2015 02:50 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
This is the freakiest and funniest story I've read in awhile!
Author's Response: Thanks. So glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 06:16 PM · On: Detective Sunshine
That is just too funny.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review
Reviewer: Alnwick (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 05:38 PM · On: Oh, Double F$%k!
this is friggin hilarious! Ben going to Tehran to commune with the Amish. I can see Deb being just unworldly enough and ballsy enough to make it work. I love your sense of humor. I always love a funny QAf fic. there is so much to play with from the series and someone who likes writing comedy could have a field day. I hope this fic is really fun for you to write. I am having lots of fun reading it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Alnwick
I must confess that I'm really enjoying thinking of ways to torture Brian and I spend my time either laughing or cringing with disgust.
It's not so fun waiting to see if you guys think it's funny or just insane, so I really apprecoate the feedback.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 11:27 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
Very amusing so far, can't wait to see where this is going :-)
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it. Can't wait to see where it's going either :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 03:40 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
Now that was the icing on the cake. You've got to tell us how this happened. And if it's correctable. Love it.
Author's Response: Don't worry. It'll be fixed... sort of :-)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh boy, I can't wait to find out Emmetts version. It's got to be Emmett who Justin's going to call. It does sound crazy, but like you said Brian doesn't lie. Can Mike be arrested for assault for kicking Ted in the nuts?
Author's Response: Don't know how I missed this review so sorry for late reply.
I don't think I'll have Michael arrested though it is tempting. I think I'll let Debbie punish him which is probably worse
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2015 02:59 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
Omg it's worse than I thought....NOT SMELLY MELLY!!! I must admit this is funny as hell though lol.
Author's Response: Thanks. Love the SMELLY MELLY. Gonna quote you in d next chapter
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2015 01:39 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
I can't wait to see how you pull this all together!
Mel's? Did Brian vomit?
Giggled hard!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
He didn't vomit, but can't say anymore.
And to be honest, I can't wait to see how I pull this all together either :-)
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2015 01:25 AM · On: Detective Sunshine
Omg Mel bahahahahaha this is so funny
Author's Response: Thanks Tasha. Gotta love Mrian. Or would it be Bel?
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