Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Power Of Attorney
Reviewer: mindgameplay (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2021 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

So sweet!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2020 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked this story!!  And the fact that Brian and Justin were married?   That was a surprise, but a good surprise.   Jennifer, I think, even surprised herself with her feelings for Brian.   I think she's been rooting for them for a while now.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2019 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

great

Reviewer: imherenow (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2019 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

this is beautifully written. i love reading stories of Brian being caring towards Justin without fear of how the outside world/people views him. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2016 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh I loved this such love between the boys

Reviewer: Shell Scott (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2016 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

fab

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2015 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a lovely AU that could almost be canon.

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2015 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

This so beautiful...there are no words. It's nice that Justin is willing to try being just friends wiht Ethan. Despite everything, Ethan is an all right guy. :)

And husbands? Wow. I thoughts somehting along those lines when I read about the necklace, but wow. Beautiful.

Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2015 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

I very much enjoyed your story. Unlike some your readers, I didn't feel bad about Ethan, he knew before it enticed Justin that the love between Brian and Justin was real, I think he just wanted to steal him away to embarress Brian or he wouldn't cheated on Justin. He made promises and never kept them in this story he never bothered to know about Justin's meds or allergies or poa's just really self centered. Debbie always drives me crazy she has to know everything about everyone somethings are private and very special. I'll be on the look out for your stories.thanks

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2015 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was terrific! I loved how Justin and Brian were married and had matching necklaces instead of wedding bands.

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2015 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

thank you for sharing this story

i like the idea

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2015 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

love it - that 'depth of love' is waht we are all looking for - don't you think?

Charle

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2015 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

:-) 

TAG

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2015 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful story I loved the different POVs

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2015 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Now why could they have used this in the series?  Loved it.

Reviewer: sweetc (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2015 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really cute.Maybe to short to be complete...i really like one thing maybe too fast ( switch in Ethan behavior) but for once ethan it is not evil...lots of fan fic are really really mean with ethan :ok he cheats and ok he is poor and is not upfront ( in qaf) but come one he is not the worst!!!and yes brian may be the first the last the meant to be to justin ...but in real life and in all type of tv show we need another true love at least to compare....to do really real the main couple!!!Ethan in qaf was...a pale shadow.I would love to read more  about all kind of issues you create ( marriage for example :)) it would be really really interesting...think about maybe?

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2015 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this little story.  Do not listen to the negative comments of the others.  This was lovely.

 

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

THank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

nice story :) thanks

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh that was just lovely. I read stories like this and I wish they were canon. Would have loved this to have happened during the Ian storyline. Also wish you had included Deb fnding out how wrng she really is lol. Thanks for this it brought me a smile I really needed today.

Well done!

:)



Author's Response:

I really glad you enjoyed it and it made you smile.

Reviewer: Henri (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story and portrayal of the characters. I like your writing style and look forward to reading more of your stories 

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

It's Kinney, not Kenny...

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was great, I was completely surprised by the outcome of this story. What a clever move having our boys married at the time Justin was with Ethan...and the explanation for the relationship was brilliant!

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have to say that all my sympathy was with Ethan in this story. Justin had no right to play with Ethan’s emotions and life seeing that he (Justin) was 1. married and 2. knew from the beginning that there was no future with Ethan. And Ethan was way more forgiving to Justin than I would be if someone treated me like that. If someone treated me as badly as Justin treated Ethan here my reaction would be devastation, hurt and anger. Actually Ethan comes off a lot better than Justin does in that whole mess. And the line about the doctor looking at Ethan with disdain for no reason just came off as gratuitous character bashing

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

This story didn't really explain how Brian and Justin came to be married, and the revelation was anticlimactic seeing as the title is "Power of Attorney", and the narrative builds upon this fact, only revealing their marriage later on. I struggle with the concept that as a married couple Brian would allow Justin to go off with Ethan- quite apart from the fact that this seems a stretch from Brian's true character. He doesn't sound like Brian if he has a husband at Season Three time. 

I also had an issue with your portrayal of Ethan; he alternates too wildly between rudeness and sympathy with Justin before slowly accepting that he is better off with Brian. This doesn't make sense; at times, you tap into his sympathy, but then he flares up at Brian, and sometimes doesn't even seen integral to the story. I have an issue with Ethan being shown as the "bad guy", when his only fault was cheating on Justin. That said, you do kind of redeem his character by having them part on amicable terms, even though, as I said, the whole story is very shaky. 

Another issue is the constant switching between points of view. The best writing usually focuses on one point of view and makes more sense to the reader. I was getting Brian's thoughts, Ethan's thoughts, Jennifer's thoughts all at the same time without any differentiation between who was speaking. This made it very confusing to follow, and diluted the impact of the story. Choose the most relevant point of view and stick to that, or separate each change in some way. I would have thought the best POV would be Brian Kinney throughout.

It would also be helpful to improve description and this is where choosing one POV comes in handy, because it makes you focus on that character's feelings in a meningful way. 

The plot is not the problem, but certain elements of the story are holding it back. 

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

great story

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this.  I'm glad that Ethan wasn't going to be a dick about Justin and Brian being married.  I still hate Ethan though.  Good to know that Justin tried something and it didn't feel right.  Their love will always rule.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting premise, and well done.

Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great story.  Hope you will write anyone soon.

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved the story. But why do you call Brian "Kenny"?!



Author's Response:

Misspelled it *blush*

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved this. Brian always loved him and would do anything to make him happy.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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