Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2020 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 5
This was such a great story, and defininitely a take on Family Man. I loved it!!!!
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2018 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 5
good one
Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2016 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
I loved it!!!! Great job!!!!
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2015 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 5
Omg that was good
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2014 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 5
I see significant growth in your writing skills. Add to that a great imagination and we have a featured story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2014 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 5
Very nice take on the story.
Thank you for posting.
Author's Response: I'm glad to Know that you liked it. Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2014 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 5
"Listen to your heart like you had the courage to do a few minutes ago with Justin, and tell me if you are happy.”
Oh how I love this fic. You took a momentous moment from the show and did a wonderous job of making a plausable AU. Taking it further with the Family Man universe was perfect. I never even liked the movie until I read your version. Now, the movie is a favorite.
I loved the fact that it was questioned if Brian would truly have been happier without his friends and Justin. And so fell in love with Brian's formiable daughter and that joyous Jimmy that I wanted to read more with them in the story . I could see Brian missing that little family.
The final meeting of Brian and Justin and Brian's plea was brilliant. I loved it more than the movie. As i said before, I'm immensely grateful that you posted it here.
Thank you so much for providing this story,
Sandra:)
Author's Response: Well, when I first watched the movie, it didn't impress me either. But then, I re-watched it much later, and oh my God, there totally was a Brian/Justin story in it. So, I had to write it. Thank you for your lovely comments. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2014 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
That was one hell of an ending my friend :) I'm glad it wasn't too late for them to find each other again...good job!
Author's Response: Fortunately, Brian did the right thing, and went after his happiness: Justin. Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2014 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love this! A happy ending.
Author's Response: Brian and Justin deserve to be happy. Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2014 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
thank you for sharing this christmas fairy tale.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 30, 2014 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very fun little story. Thanks for writing. TAG
Reviewer: lili59 (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2014 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hello,
 I think your fic and very well written, it follows that good, and I hate to know what happens next.
Your appearance is regular and I hope you will go to the end.
To pleasure. lili59
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2014 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh, that was SO mean! To take him away before BB. ;) Can't wait for more! Happy Xmas!
Author's Response: Everything that happens in this story has a purpose, you Know? Mayby it's time for Brian to go back to his own reality. Thank you for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2014 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 4
WHAAAAAATTTT!!!! I'm confused right now...WTF? Why are they suddenly pulled apart like this?
Author's Response: Don't worry. You'll find out very soon. Thanks for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2014 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 4
"Nooo! Not now!.....
Don't stop now!! I'm really liking this story, a great holiday treat :)
Author's Response: Than you very much. More soon. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: Judith R (Anonymous) · Date: December 24, 2014 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great fic!
Author's Response: Thank you. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2014 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 4
Just when he gets it he's back in New York? What do you plan next?
Author's Response: You'll find out very soon. Thanks for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2014 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 3
I really like this premise - the original Brian peeking into his life after Justin's influence has changed him. Great idea! More please! TAG
Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2014 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
I´m ansious, please post more soon!
Reviewer: conejo de la luna (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2014 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
beautiful, continuous please
Author's Response: Thank you. Moore soon, I promise. Hugs
Yoli
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2014 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 3
Is the Brian in this reality not as successful as regular Brian? To have only 3 suits and none are Armani, leads me to wonder. Why does the Brian that he's replace work so hard? Is there a Cynthia to help? Need more chapters!
Author's Response: All your questions will be answered. Is not that Brian's hard work in this universe has gone to waste. There are reasons for their financial situation. Thank you for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2014 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 2
It's a little strange. Where is the Brian that belongs in this universe? What is the lesson that Brian must learn?
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2014 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
I've just caught up with this story and I must say that I am just as confused as Brian is
Author's Response: Hah ha. I hope that your confision ends very soon, as Brian's will do. Thank you for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2014 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is fun to read. :) Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2014 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
Love this. Family Man is a muched loved Christmas movie for me and your take on it so far is terrific! I can't wait to see what all you come up with. Seeing the interactions between Brian adn everyone. And Heather "helping" him is spot on.
Can't wait for a new update already! :)
Author's Response: Well. It is really a free take on the movie. I hope it keeps being interesting for you. Thanks for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: Katja (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2014 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 2
So happy to see this kind of story! I always felt we don't have enough of AU 121, so I treasure each one. I really hope Justin will remain strong and cold for some time. Brian wanted to leave - okay, but I think it was bery important to stay in touch and maybe become a little more open in his feelings. I can't wait to see where you will take us with this!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2014 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
What an interesting AU. Like nothing I've ever read.
Author's Response: Thank you. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2014 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
Very interesting premise. It has great potential! More, please. TAG
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2014 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start! More please. TAG
Author's Response: Very soon. Thank you for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: sabyya (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm intrigued..... Provided Justin won't fall head over heels just by looking at Brian !! And have no self-respect at all !!
Author's Response: He, he. Don't worry. Things won't be that simple. Brian is going to have to do some serious work. Thank you for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2014 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a great beginning. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
So far, this day has not been what Brian expected, can't wait to see what happens Christmas day.
Author's Response: Poor Brian can't even imagine what is going to happen. Thank you for commenting. Hugs.
Yoli
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
I've been living up to my name recently and even now I am in a rush, but I just had to let you know how ecstatic I am that you are posting a translation of your wonderful fic. I fell in love with it with my limited knowledge of the little Spanish I remember but was only to happy to Google and Bing what was necessary and it looks like I was on target so far. Still, this makes it so much easier. I hate to think I could have missed out of some spectacular fics due to a language barrier. This one was so worth the minor work to read it as I have done several times, and I keep it on my e-reader in case the mood strikes again. I can't thank you enough for this.
Sandra:)
Author's Response: You are welcome. I'm really happy to Know that, and only hope the translation makes this story even more enjoyable for you. Hugs.
Yoli.
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