Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: juliette815 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2019 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

This is really touching... I allmost cried. 😥 You did a great job! Will there ever be an update, please? I would love it!

Reviewer: shadow (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2015 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Finding Brian

Hi! When are you going to update the others chapters?

Reviewer: morderU (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2014 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

This fic has me on the edge as they say.  I hate for the boys to get hurt,  but that does happen sometimes,  and it is for this that the longed for recovery will soon come.  

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2014 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

I like this story o lot.  Will there be more soon?

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2014 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

I really don't know what to say...I just read this in one go and...well, I'm not sure how well I'll handle the rest of this story.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2014 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

Poor Brian and poor Justin.  

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2014 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

I don't think it's possible to be gang-raped, like you suggest Justin was, even if you are unconscious during that, and just get over it without behaving in a way that would raise some suspicios amog people being around you. So I think this part is kind of unbelievable, but otherwise I enjoy your writing. Keep going!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2014 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

I kinda do mind that you changed the background of the stories.  It makes this a total AU and makes it sound like rape happens on a semi regular basis to gay men.  But I'm stll liking the story despite this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2014 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

Looks like they both need to talk to a therapist.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2014 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 10: Relax

I can see why Brian needed his pot.  Surely Justin can too?

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2014 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Bracelet

Very emotional chapter. Brian needs to relax and tell Justin what happened to him. It's easier to deal with trauma when you share it with someone, especially with someone you trust, someone who loves you.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2014 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 10: Relax

Poor Brian.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2014 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Puff Puff Pass

I'm surprized at Deb's restraint.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2014 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 9: Puff Puff Pass

I'm proud of how Deb handled it.  She could have been a whole lot worse.  I'm not sure why Justin is upset.  If I were Brian I'd want to know where Justin was at all times, after what the creep said.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2014 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 8: My poor baby

I can see this happening in just this way.  Smothering Brian won't help.  Talking to a shrink might.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2014 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: My poor baby

yes, justin needs an out, but to leave brian in hid state of mind. i don't know. that jerk knows where he lives. brian's thoughts are going to drive him nuts till justin gets back.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2014 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 7: Don't touch him again.

he needs help. i don't think justin will be enough. even without his wallet, the trick now knows where he lives.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2014 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 7: Don't touch him again.

That twink has some nerve.  But it's true that some rapists don't even see themselves as such.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2014 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 7: Don't touch him again.

Can't get over the nerve of that guy.  They should have called the cops.  They do have fingerprints on the wallet.  But you're right, Brian shouldn't have to live in fear.  Knowing that the creep knows where he lives and threatened to repeat what happened with Justin, maybe it's time to move?

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2014 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Let Me Tell It

I didn't really feel a lot of emotion from this, particularly with Brian's description of how he was raped. Personally, I don't think it is in character for Brian to be abused like this; he is always the man on top. But that does not invalidate the plot entirely. I just feel that some of the dialogue cut corners. I mean, Justin would not reply "Not really" when hearing of such a horrific description, would he? Or maybe it is a matter of opinion. I feel there needs to be more introspection and description also. Justin saying "I love you" isn't going to cure much I don't think. 



Author's Response:

Honestly I think Brian could have realistically gotten raped. With all the people he fucked, and all the drugs he took from people, I'm surprised it didn't actually happen in the show. And Justin's short replies to Brian and the 'I love you's highlight the fact that he has no idea how to help Brian. He's been through the traumatic experience, but it's different for Brian because he's used to being the man on top and someone drugged him and raped him and made him feel small. Just like Brian didn't know how to help Justin when he got bashed, Justin doesn't know how to help Brian. And Of course Brian's reaction to everything is smart remarks, being an asshole, and pushing people away. And sometimes, even in the show, Justin can't deal with that. The emotion of this story is not about picking the chapters apart, it's about looking at the overall picture and seeing how these characters would actually react. This is like a really long paragraph explaining my reasoning for writing some of this dialogoue lol. It's your opinion, but I just felt like I should explain some of it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2014 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 6: Not much has changed

OMG!  The rapist showed up at the door!  What an ending for this chapter which I enjoyed btw.  Hurry with the next chapter.

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2014 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 6: Not much has changed

Oooh, this is good. I love hurt/comfort stories where Brian shows vulnerability. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2014 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 6: Not much has changed

What I can't understand is brain getting rape and beat up by an twink  it make him look so weak . But if this is the twink I hope j beat the shit out of him.



Author's Response:

The twink drugged and raped Brian. Realistically, with all the people Brian fucked and with all the drugs he took from people, it could have happened in the show if they really wanted to go that route. And the whole incident is messing with Brian's head because, like you said, he feels weak. 

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2014 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 6: Not much has changed

justin coming home is good. kinnetic NY, maybe. dark haired twink who harmed brian...bad move on the twink's part unless he was a witness and not the rapist.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2014 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 6: Not much has changed

Oh shit. This could be bad.

Great chapter

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2014 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: The way you treat me

"And that's when the dreams started"   Sounds scarry.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2014 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: The way you treat me

Hi I love the update and I feel really bad for Brian. I'm hopping Justin can help Brian. Please post more soon

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: The way you treat me

I'm assuming all the bruising is gone.  Deb was a little harsh, considering that Brian isn't feeling well.  No compassion at all.  I'm so glad that Brian told Justin he wanted him there!!

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4: Let Me Tell It

Hi I love the story and I feel so bad for Brian. I'm excited to see Brian journey to healing with Justin help. I'm going to hope that Justin and Brian talk about Justin bashing because Justin doesn't understand how much Brian cares about him. I'm hopping Justin doesn't go back to new york.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2014 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 4: Let Me Tell It

Sad about Brian.  But he needs to pull it together.  The "Family" can't be held off for long.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2014 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 4: Let Me Tell It

At least Brian told Justin some of it.  That's got to be a step in the right direction.  Changing the locks sounds like a good idea, just in case.  How will he get through it when the gang come over?

Reviewer: harris87 (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2014 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 3: Coming Home

I don't usually read stories where the boys get hurt.  But this one has me intrigued.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2014 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 3: Coming Home

what the back story on this rape



Author's Response:

It will be revealed soon enough :)

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 3: Coming Home

great story, please write more, I love it the chapters.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2014 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 3: Coming Home

justin knows what he's going through, but still it's different. brian can't help but remember, while justin couldn't.
this is going to be tough on both. of them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Coming Home

It will take a lot of time.  Hope they can get past this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 2: Hospital

The reactions seem very much in character for what has happened.  Will they find Brian's car and who did this?  Who will Michael end up telling?  This trauma will seep over into everything.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2014 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: Finding Brian

Ouch.  This senerio is one that could happen and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 01, 2014 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 2: Hospital

Good start.

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