Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Well happy late or early birthday. However you want to look at it. I just found this story while searching for stories to read as I await updates on current stories and I absolutely loved it. Such a terrific way that you took Randy's words and made them into an amazing story. Love all of the contrasts between Justin & Randy and Brian & Randy's boyfriend. Just perfect.
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2015 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
I really liked this story, great use of characters and look forward to reading your other works. Happy to add you to my favorites :-)
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear! I feel very honored to be among their favorites. I would very much like to thank you for your kindness. Much and thank you!
Fatima.
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2015 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
What a cute fun story! Cheered me up enough to go to bed tired but amused. Hugs! - Anne
Author's Response: Thank you, dear Anne! I'm very happy to have been able to make you happy with my story. Thank you for your wonderful review.
Hugs, Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2014 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
I loved this. Like the way you set QAF in San Francisco. Would love to read more about the Taylor Electronics angle. Putting both Justin and Randy in the same story and making it logical is very impressive. Have you thought to do a story with Brian and Gale?
Author's Response: Oh, my dear friend, you are always so kind!
I'm so glad you liked my story.
Initially, the angle Electronic Taylor would not enter the story, but I thought it was one of the things that was missing in Gardens, I wanted to give a closure to the relationship between Justin and his father. And how this story relates to my universe Gardens, I worked that angle to this story. Perhaps I can develop this further later, but right now it's something I do not believe that I will do.
I needed to put Randy plausibly in history, therefore transfer QAF from Pittsburgh to San Francisco and did some minor modifications.
I am stained with the "logical and impressive" how to put Randy and Justin together in history. You made me very happy!
Gale and Brian together in the same story? Wow! This is a wonderful rabbit! I had not thought of that. Perhaps may be a possibility over time. Who knows?
Thank you again my friend for their great support and encouragement.
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2014 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Interesting storyline. Not quite real people and not quite just another B & J story.
Happy Birthday!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm happy to consider interesting story. I wanted to play with this unlikely encounter between reality and fiction and see where the story would go.
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your comment!
Thank you for the good wishes for my birthday.
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy birthday!!! Good job my friend.
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear Tamara!
Sorry to have been slow to respond, but the week on the job was very stressful.
I was very happy for your kind comment and the good wishes for my birthday.
Thank you very much for always commenting my stories and encourage my writing.
You are a very special person to all authors of MW. Thank you!
A big hug, my friend!
Fátima
Reviewer: Fran K (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2014 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy Birthday, my dear friend!
It's so sweet of you to treat us with such a fun story on your special day, thanks a lot!
Fran K
Author's Response:
Thank you, my dear friend!
I wanted to celebrate my birthday doing one of the things I like to do: write. I also wanted to pay tribute to Randy and the coincidence between us.
I loved that you found the story entertaining. I also had so much fun writing this story.
Sorry to have been slow to respond, but the week on the job was very stressful.
A big hug, my friend!
Fátima.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy birthday to you.
Lovely story.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thank you for the votes for my birthday, Marny!
I am very happy to know that you liked my story.
A big hug, my dear.
Fátima
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy Birthday to both you and Randy.
Great story. Brian being sweet and caring is always very sexy.
Author's Response: you, Lorie!
Thank you for the votes for my birthday.
I also hope that Randy is having a very happy day surrounded by people who love him and who has many years of happiness, health, peace and success ahead.
I love when Brian is loving and protective to Justin being the partner that we all know he can be for the one he really loves.
Thank you for your comment, dear!
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy Birthday! I hope you're enjoying a wonderful one. :) Thank you for sharing this clever, fun fic. I enjoyed it. *Smiles & Hugs* -Mandi
Author's Response: Thank you, Mandi, for the votes for my birthday.
I'm glad you liked my story and how I wrote. It's always good to hear from a talented author like you. Thank you for letting me know.
I'm having a happy day and I hope Randy is also enjoying a wonderful day surrounded by people who love him.
Smiles and hugs to you too!
Fátima
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2014 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
first, happy birthday. sweet story. you did a great job. i really wanted to know brian's thought upon first seeing randy in person.
Author's Response: Thank you for the votes for my birthday.
I think Brian only has eyes for Justin, so even Randy being physically equal to Justin, he did not represent any danger to Sunshine.
I really enjoyed writing this unlikely encounter and I am glad to hear that you liked.
Thank you for your comment.
A big hug!
Fátima
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy birthday Fatima! * plenty of hugs to you * and thank you for this little gift :)
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend Alois!
I really enjoyed writing this encounter.
Thank you for the wishes for my birthday.
A big hug, my friend!
Fátima.
Reviewer: Soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2014 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
First:
Happy birthday and many years to follow this year. And of course Happy Birthday to Randy as well.
Second:
Nice, really really nice story.
Sweet, witty, romantic.
Can't state enough: really really nice....
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response: Thank you!
I want for Randy also has many years of happiness, health and success for long.
I'm very glad you liked my story. I liked to imagine how it would meet Randy and Justin and I loved writing this story.
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2014 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Cute :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: Diane (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2014 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy Birthday xx
loved the story xx
Author's Response: Thanks for the wishes for my birthday!
Thank you for letting me know you liked my story.
A big hug!
Fátima.
Reviewer: Julie (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2014 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Clever story, well done and Happy Birthday!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm very glad you liked my story.
Thank you for the wishes for my birthday.
A big hug!
Fátima
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2014 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy to you and Randy love this story
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm also wishing many happy returns to Randy!
I'm glad you liked my story.
A big hug!
Fátima
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Lost Twin
Happy birthday. Loved the story - a fun twist on reality. Of course a lovely, fun Justin is going to end up liking a generous, kind Randy.
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear!
Actually, I believe that these two would end up liking each other.
Thanks for the wishes for my birthday.
A big hug!
Fátima
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