Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2018 11:15 AM · On: Chapter Five ~ Stuck in a Moment of Sexual Ecstasy…
Love it
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2014 11:16 PM · On: Chapter Five ~ Stuck in a Moment of Sexual Ecstasy…
That was a juicy piece of afternoon delight!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to entertain you, we all need a little porn in the afternoon... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 03:41 PM · On: Chapter Five ~ Stuck in a Moment of Sexual Ecstasy…
I just read the whole thing in one go, and I have to say this is steamy good...not to mention that I'm in love with the 'Stuck in' series in general ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it... Steamy Good, I do like to write a good love scene... he, he, he... I really liked writing the "Stuck In's" I'll have to get back there and write more... This fic obviously was written several years ago... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 01:01 PM · On: Chapter One ~ Stuck in a Moment of Insanity…
On the whole, this was very beautiful, even though there were a number of issues I picked up on out of interest. I notice that you always TELL the reader how Justin is feeling, for example here: "I'm sad, lonely, depressed and full of regrets." It would be more interesting if yu SHOWED this: you already did this to some extent describing the huge crowds, which I thought was excellent. If you had left it like that, it would have been a more powerful illustration. Otherwise, there are some beautiful lines in here, and I really like you using the first person present tense as well. I especially liked: "So here I wait. I'm always waiting. Waiting for my life to start".
There seems to be an unnatural break in between Justin listening to the message and then reaching the loft? He starts off in the city then somehow reaches forward and pulls back the loft door?
On the idea of Justin returning- personally, I really liked the ending to the QAF series; it was realistic and showed the depth of Brian's love for Justin. That said, this version does make some sense to me, even though I think Brian would never put his needs above Justin's. Nice chapter overall.
Author's Response: Interesting take on my writing, as I've said before I always, always write in an alternative universe. "On the whole, this was very beautiful, even though there were a number of issues I picked up on out of interest." In my writing my muse takes me in all kinds of different directions and I rarely stay in cannon... Everyone has their own personal feeling about the show, and how it evolved. I'm glad you enjoyed some parts of the fic, and I'm always fascinated by others interpretations of my writing... Later ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 04:26 AM · On: Chapter Five ~ Stuck in a Moment of Sexual Ecstasy…
This is wonderful. I hope they get Ted something nice for his giving them a gift that they love to use.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes Ted, found the perfect present and they obviously put it to good use... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 03:59 AM · On: Chapter Four ~ Stuck on an Island…
Loving this. It's so romantic.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Hon, this was written during my ridiculously romantic phase... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 03:50 AM · On: Chapter Three ~ Stuck in the Eye of the Storm…
How very strange. A tsunami heading their way and running into Joan and her new husband. I like it!
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought I'd give Joan and heart in this one, showing that she suffered Jack's abuse as well as Brian... So glad you're enjoying it... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 03:50 AM · On: Chapter Five ~ Stuck in a Moment of Sexual Ecstasy…
So good. So hot. I cried at the inscription that Brian put in Justin's ring. Beautiful story.
Author's Response: Thanks Hon, You know that's what my beta told me as well, she also cried when reading it through... I loved the inscription too, it seems so right and heartfelt... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 03:23 AM · On: Chapter One ~ Stuck in a Moment of Insanity…
Just read this in one sitting and I LOVED IT!!! This was what should have happened with Justin missing his flight. I loved that Justin put Lindsey and Michael in their place. Great fic, again, Kathleen.
Thanks Jane.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm smiling my big Sunshine smile... I really think Justin and Brian got played the way the show ended, I thought I'd set things right... Justin finally found his backbone, and stopped letting Lindsay and Michael push him around... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 03:15 AM · On: Chapter Two ~ Stuck in a Moment of Pride...
It's off to Hawaii they go. Michael is such a - I can't even say what he's such a. Lindsay of course is just as bad. It's a good thing everyone else was happy for them. The only one we didn't hear from was Mel.
Author's Response: A quick getaway, and a romantic wedding and honeymoon is just what they need. While their gone Michael and Lindsay and sit at home and contemplate on how to fix their relationship with Brian and Justin... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 02:55 AM · On: Chapter One ~ Stuck in a Moment of Insanity…
I love stories that show us what might have been and this one looks to be terrific.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it. I truly hated the way the show ended... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2014 11:28 PM · On: Chapter Two ~ Stuck in a Moment of Pride...
Excellent story so far loved the strike one strike two part!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it... You're reading faster than I can post it... There will be five chapters total... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
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