Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Fall
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2019 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

This story is sooooo good. Pleasease consider giving us more. I'm begging...

Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2018 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm so sad that the story does not resume. <br />I really liked reading "The Bet". <br />This story: The Fall, also attracted my interest.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2016 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 4

OK, you have my attention - excellent start to this sequel but now I am desperate for another update. Please don't leave us hanging for too much longer, I really want Aiden to get what is coming to him and I hope it is very vengeful:)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2015 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

More soon please! Ish is getting deep.

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2015 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

I meant to add to my review that although it's so kind of you to offer free books to people, I want to buy my own and review it.  Why?  Because your hard work SHOULD be compensated.  I work and I expect to get paid and why shouldn't you?  

I always feel lucky that so many talented writers give us these amazing stories...take time from their own lives to create and write and entertain us...for free.  And previously, before I got a clue, I didn't even leave a review because I thought nobody would care.

I review now every time I can, which is most always, and I will happily purchase your book because based on what you have written, why wouldn't I?  It's money well spent in my opinion.  

Reviewer: femmegirl49 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2015 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh this is just so good!!!  Every single part of it, especially the part about the phone call that was mostly "breathless pants and pleas to God"....you have them spot on!!!

It's not just a hot story (which I love) but it's also a great story as well and I am looking forward to more!!!

Reviewer: Aliada (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh, I'm so glad you updated it! I liked 'The Bet' a lot, and I was looking forward to continue reading this wonderful sequel. I like your style. The plot itself has a great potential, and you managed to embody it perfectly. Your descriptions are very good. I just can see this Brian - loving, caring, touchingly insecure. His longing for Justin and inevitable jealousy are definitely those things I'll never get enough of :) It was kind of funny when he forbade himself to think of Justin in order to concentrate on work.

And I liked Brian's interaction with Ted. Obviously, they have warmed up to each other by now. Their conversation about Aiden was so in-canon - I enjoyed it immensely!

I didn't quite expect that Justin's arrival would be something like that - and neither did Brian, I guess. Anyway, it was intense - I liked every word!

Thank you! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Peggy (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2015 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 4

'he would never take Justin' 

and the hairs on the back of my neck just stood up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 4

Aiden is certainly causing trouble.  If it weren't for him Brian would have been at the airport to pick Justin up. Maybe Justin could help?  I know that you won't let Aiden win on this!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2015 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 3

YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THIS NOW. LIKE NOW, DON'T MAKE ME COME FIND YOU < kidding, but seriously, omg this is amazing. It's HOT, but also has an amazing story to go with it. You can't go wrong. I need to know what is going to happen to Kinnetik and to Brian... and to Brian and Justin and AHHHH!!! I just need you to come back to us lol x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2015 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

DIRTY BOYS = happy me <3 I love this story so much, please continue it xxx

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2015 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

I LOVED reading this from Brian's POV :)

Reviewer: Terri (Anonymous) · Date: March 05, 2015 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

I started this despite seeing you hadn't posted in awhile and now I just need MORE please!!!

I have read almost everything you have here and it's really well done.  You have a true gift and I would like to respectfully request you finish this one.  I know that RL gets in the way all too often but it doesn't hurt to ask, does it?  OK, beg.  I'll beg.  It's that good!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words.  I do plan to get back to this soon and will finish it.  I've been hard on my original works.  My first novel was accepted for publication and will be published in the August timeframe.  

Reviewer: vinie65 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2015 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

I wish you could finishthis story!!! I would love to see our boy kick aidan ass :-)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

I hope Justin gets back soon... Brian so needs him, to calm him down and clear his head...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 3

Shit this looks bad. Could Aiden have actually killed his father?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2014 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

As much as he misses Justin, what is he going to do about Aiden?  I'm going to have to reread The Bet.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2014 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 2

I'm so glad to see you started a sequel... I'm bouncing and clapping in my seat... The only problem is that I need more...

Still loving this story..

Later Hon ~ Kathleen

*Hugs*

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2014 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome chapter lol I'm still pissed at justin 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

So our boys are into BDSM.  Kinky!  Yeah, just what is Aiden up to and will it hurt Brian and Justin's relationship?

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2014 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

Not a clue as to what Aiden is up to, but let's hope that Brian can stop whatever's about to happen.

Reviewer: Lindz (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2014 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

*sigh*  I love a good sequel!  Can't wait to see what happens!

-Lindz 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2014 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great to see a continuation of The Bet. Can't wait to read it. TAG

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2014 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Okay...so I was totally not expecting this...but in a good way ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2014 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

This looks like it will be really interesting.  And you said it isn't complete.  When can we expect another chapter.  I loved it.

 



Author's Response:

Should be at least 1 a week.  Thanks for the first review.

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