Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! YOU!!! been naughty!! LOL. Give us more. Please.

I'm sorry you never finished this. I would have loved to see their journey back. See Brian with his baby girl etc.

vas a seguir con la historia? ojala la sigas por que esta buenisima :) 

Please continue and keep Michael out of Brian life even if Debbie begs him.  I really

enjoyed your story.

i'ts  ray  ru goingto end the story or it will b a wip  get someone to help u there is a lot u can do  brian see cayla  gus meets her  ray meets brian  make a stabe at it   kim

Update!!! Pleeeeease update you cannot leave me like this!!!! I want to see them together!!! I love your fic!!!

c est tout, a quand le reste de l'histoire intéressante.

Please tell me that is his cousin or something ?? Poor Brian. Please continue. I love this story. 

I hope it's just a friend lol but anyways love this chapter 

That must be the cousin... I remember he's a hottie, too. I hope you'll have your muse kicking up again because you actually have a good story here.

good luck & god bless.

Please continue! Don't leave us hanging!

Love it! Please write more

I enjoyed catching up with your fic.  I must admit when I first started reading this, and as I was catching up, it reminded me of Edom's famous fic called "The Letter".  Is that what inspired your story?  I know Edom made sure Brian received the letter personally which allowed Brian to be in the baby's life before it was born.  Yet, the wording "Hey, Sunshine, you look beautiful." when the door is opened suggests she was your inspiration.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter, although once Brian explains I'm sure Justin can't hold it against him because he isn't a clairvoyant. 

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

It wasn't inspired by anything other then the series :S i've read alot of fanfiction though so it's possible that's something stuck. I'm gonna have to read that before continuing cos i don't want to potentially knick someones ideas. Thanks for letting me know! x

love it all so far ,i had been waiting for more chaapters , now hurry up and lets get more done !!!!

Come on come on !! The wait is killing me. ... Where's the next chapter?? *bites her nails off*

I don't wanna be rude just a quick correction :/ the name micheal when shortened is Mikey. Mickey with a 'c' is mickey mouse.

Author's Response:

Haha thanks, il correct x

 

Just love the new banner! Kudos! TAG

Yes!!!...but I know there is still the storm before the calm to come. Good job my friend ;)

And now Justin slaps him across the face...lol. What will his reaction be? He was saving all that stuff for Brian, but what hoops to ill Brian have to jump through to get in Justin's good graces? Looking forwardto more. Update soon please.

Finally they reunite!!! Lets hope Justin wont give too much grief to Brian, I mean Brian was an asshole when he didnt listen to Justin's explanation but he was also a victim of fxxking michael. 

Donna, I just resized your banner to about 500 pixels high. Rectangular-sized banners are preferred and work better, since they take up less room, but I will keep the shape it is.  Just an FYI. As for the number of reviews, that will always go up and down, depending upon reader interest and just RL.  But 75 reviews for 10 chapters is quite good.;)  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Hi Kim, yer i realised as soon as i went to check it and i've reshaped it. I wasnt referring to the number of reviews: under the view your stats it says more people have read chapter nine then eight which i don't get lol! maybe it's some people rereading - still odd! x

Great story. Good setup and well written. looking forward to read more

Brian CAN blame Michael for what's happened here. By reading the letter then holding onto it for two years was extremely selfish and shameful. What Michael did was essentially take Brian's choice away, and this is unforgivable.

Yay. Brian knows now. Is he gonna do the right thing? Yay for oo, michael is out of the picture. I hope thongs start looking up for our boys. Brian needs to get his act together and find justin and cayla. They could make a great family.

Donna, you will need to convert the image in PTT to a graphic and then upload it to your images or to a photo hosting site. PM me if you need help. ~Kim, admin

Hi. As for your question - I'll copy the text from the MW rules: click on "Account Info". The next page will say "Manage Images" so click that. There you can "Upload New Images" into your image file. Once your image is loaded, go to the correct tinyMCE editor box such as for your story panel and click on the tiny green tree symbol. That's the image option. There you'll see "Image list". Click on the far right side down arrow and a new pop up window appears listing all your loaded images. Select your image and insert it to your text box. Then either left margin or center it. Don't forget to end this procedure by hitting "Add Story" at the bottom of the editor options.

Thanks for the chapter. It was very good, so emotional - I can imagine how hurt Brian is right now, how much he regrets sending Justin away... but sorry to tell it, he probably deserves it. Though it's sad he'd lost two precious years :( What's now, I wonder?

Great story!  I can't wait for more. 

Now we are getting somewhere .. yay... If I tell you I might hate u , would u upload another chapter for me -_- ?

 

P.S I wanna know who Cayla looks like can you please define her looks too .. I know it's silly but I like to have a good image about ppl when I'm reading stories *blushing*

O whoa, Michael finally is pulling his head out from his ass! I still hate him though, even if he manages to fix the mess he created. He really is a jerk for doing shit like that to Justin and Brian. And I cant wait to read more, update soon please?!! =) 

I do want Brian to find out about Cayla, but time is moving on and he hasn't a clue.  What are your plans?  Does Brian find out?  Please.

Author's Response:

A new chapter will be up within the next hour or two that will answer your question :) x

I'm glad you uploaded another chapter as earlier o was gonna complain for the delay + a small chapter. Though another chapter would make my night :p ... I guess it's just my greed taking over *blushing* can't wait for Brian Justin to meet. 

 

And I would love a lotta angst. Although Brian not knowing about Justin condition wasn't his fault completely but he dis act like an ass***e when Justin tried telling him. So I hope Justin brings Brian to his feet -_- and don't forgive him so easily 

Author's Response:

trust me there will be no easy forgiveness. Brian is really gonna have to work for it :) x

I'm happy Justin's life is going well for him, but as I mentioned back in chapter two I really hate to see Brian miss out on his child's life and now it looks like that is happening. :(  I hope they reconnect sooner rather than later.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:

unfortunatley these two are as subborn as each other so it's gonna take some time :( hopefully they'll get their heads stuck on properley sooner rather then later. I'll be uploading another chapter within the next hour or two so hopefully you'll have your answer then! x

Hey Donna :)

I'm really happy I have been able to catch up with your fic again.  I'm pleased Brian isn't taking the news well and after his binge drinking I hope he gets a clue and ponders where his letter is.    

"I don't know I'll decide when I see them" OMG, I thought Justin had twins.  LOL

Ray just gets more and more adorable every time you write about him.  It's a pity he is straight, but at least Daphne might get to hook up with him.  :D 

Cheers :)

So unfair I know brian can be a prick but he has to know about the baby

hi r u going to update soon please it's a great story need help ask  kim

Argh!!!  Can you give Michael a VERY, VERY ITCHY rash that he can't get rid of on his gentials PLEASE??  (so I have a vindictive streak in me)

Author's Response:

Haha I'll see what I can arrange x

 i think what mikey did was bad will brian know about jn   kim

Author's Response:

He will...............eventually x

Why oh why did Justin even other to trust Michael with his letter.  He should have known better.  Personally I think Brian would man up if he knew.

Okay wait...so not only is Brian going to be cheated out of the chance to know he's going to be a father, but AGAIN Michael is being allowed to hold all the cards so to speak? And Justin throwing his phone away doesn't give Brian a way to contact him if he ever finds out about it...this is too fucked up for words.

Fucking Michael that's all I got to say Lol I'm going to wait until you finish your story 

Hi Donna

I am absolutely enjoying your fic.  I hope Justin doesn't go the letter route.  I look forward to seeing the unique way you have for Justin and Brian to reconnect; I know that's racing ahead so for now I need a little patience.  LOL  I'm loving Ray (although I may have mentioned that before, lol).  Daphne selling sex toys; priceless.

Cheers :)

Yay! Have Justin move in with Ray so Brian will be jealous =) And Im seriously wondering whether Michael has anything to do with the burglary.

I'm loving Ray.  He takes it all in and takes Justin and Daphne in.  What a guy.  Looking forward to seeing how New York works out.  The problem will be telling Brian he's gonna be a father.  What will he do?  Hopefully he'll want to know his kid.

Hi, Donna! Just an FYI - I went in and spaced out your paragraphs to make them easier to read for your readers. Also, you had mentioned at one point about possibly wishing to have a beta. I have composed a list of betas in a recent announcement if you would like to contact one of them to see if they would be available.  Here is the link with the information:

 

http://midnightwhispers.ca/viewstory.php?sid=3048&chapter=2

 

I'm enjoying your story. I'll be interested in seeing what happens regarding Justin and Daphne's new move, and when Brian finds out about the baby.;)

 

Thank you for posting on MW!  And a Happy Belated Birthday, too.;)  ~Kim

Author's Response:

Cheers i appreciate it, can you give it 10 mintues or so next time though? cos i always write it on my ipad when i'm on the go and for some reason when i upload it off my ipad even though i load it with spaces it scrunches it all up so i always go straight back in and space it out and spell check it on my computer.

 

Glad your enjoying the story! :) I won't give any spoilers but lets just say i'm pretty sure people are gonna be anger with what happens in the next chapter :P hehe Donna x

 

Sorry - just thought I was being helpful as an admin, since some writers are not aware of it. Did not realize that you go in and edit it afterward;  I will not touch it next time.    ~Kim

 

happy belated birthday i have 2 granddaugthers on 20.21 r story is realing good update soon   kim

Oh, an anti-Michael; well I'm all for it.  Although, if you are keeping Michael in the fic you might want to add that to your categories list.   However, off to New York might mean we don't have to hear of him again. Fingers crossed.  LOL  How mean of them all to just stand there and try to avoid eye contact.  I thought Emmett might have spoken up.  Well their loss; Justin is off to live with Ray, who we don't really know yet, but I already love the man.  Yep, I decided that from the first impression we have had of him. LOL  I love the speed at which this is moving.  Hurry back if RL allows please.

Cheers :)

I can't believe it was that easy for Mikey to convince Brian that Justin was to blame for everything...even more shocking was that the family didn't speak up on his behalf.

Next chapter soon please :(

Oh no.  How cruel of Mikey to talk Brian into tossing Justin aside.  Please tell me you have plans to pay Mikey back for his nastiness!!!!  So looking forward to where you take this story.

Mpregs are one of my guilty pleasures so I love reading them no matter how implausible. You have not only provided a Mpreg but also an interesting story line. I'm enjoying this so far. :)

So .... If I say I love it ... In a non-conventional way ... Would u upload faster and feed me ANGST -_- ?

Author's Response:

Normally YES but it was my birthday yesterday so I'm still recovering. I've got a 5 day weekend next weekend so I'm hoping to get 3-4 chapters out then :)

Oh my, Justin isn't going to get to tell Brian he is pregnant and he will have to go it alone.  I love Ray, and his attitude, as it's different to what everybody else writes.  I hope Daphne tells Brian before too long as I would hate to see Brian miss out on helping to raise his own child.  However, Brian can't even get a clue when he cleans the couch if that was stolen too.  D'oh.

"please point out any mistakes so I can correct" we have a list of beta's now Donna, so even though your mistakes are minimal it is always a good idea to have a beta.

I'm enjoying this fic and as you can see my mind is already racing ahead. LOL  Please hurry back.

Cheers :)

Oh I can feel the drama already! I can't wait to see what happens next.  Update soon. And welcome to MW!  <3

*covers eyes and ducks* I can't watch what's about to happen next, and I surely wouldn't want to be in the line of fire if I were Daphne...she just might get hit by flying shrapnel. ;)

Nice start

off to a good start.

Wow a refreshingly new premise! I absoloutely love mpreg so am definitely waiting impatiently for the next chapter!! :D

I love the way Brian does romance as long as you don't point it out.  The only thing I could spot if some of your I's were lowercase and Sunshine was the same, but depending on what you wrote this with that could be normal.

Author's Response:

Cheers, I wrote it on my iPad notes so it doesn't really correct anything that's why I want people to point out errors. I"m gonna correct it at the weekend - Thanks for reviewing! 

Ps I do think Brian is a secret romantic, he just doesn't know it hehe 

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