Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Snow Flower
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2019 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 37: Love to be loved

very good story

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2019 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 30: "Brian"

stupid Michael, he could told all that to Brian over the phone

Reviewer: chenlina (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 33: Betrayal

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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2016 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: Morning and shower

Brian needs to tell him the truth and tell him he wants to help him. This is really good

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2016 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 16: Morning and shower

Brian needs to tell him the truth and tell him he wants to help him. This is really good

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 14: Brothers

This made me cry

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 15: The brother vs the fiance

I hope Brian gets Justin out of that house fast

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: The reunion

Oh this was sad, I hope Justin won't be angry with the lies

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 12: The decision

I pray Brian saves Justin

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 11: I promise I'll find him for you

Please save Justin

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: Trash

Oh poor Brian

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 9: Plans

Wow that's really good and I pray Justin gets free

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 8: Emotion

Oh I hope Justin escapes

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 7: The new beggining

Brandon needs to go to jail

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Doom

I hope Justin dumps Brandon

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: The big events

OMG poor Brian and Justin

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 4: Stop ringing that stupid bell!

So sad

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Angel confronted the Asshole

Oh no all that money gone, I hope Justin will meet his brother

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2016 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: I will find him

What a turn of events, I'm hooked on this story already. It's going to be interesting when he meets Brian

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2016 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: I will find him

What a turn of events, I'm hooked on this story already. It's going to be interesting when he meets Brian

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2016 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

Great start, I'm curious to what's next

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2015 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

thank you for the story



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: BJTK (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2015 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

Hey em hai . This is nice . I love it . But somehow the plot is kinda familiar . You know , a korean drama , " That Winter The Wind Blows " . So yeah .



Author's Response:

Hi :) yeah I got the idea and inspiration from that drama. I love it and qaf so the story was born ^_^  this is my first story and my second story also got insprire from another kdrama. My newest story is my own idea and inspire ;) thanks for reading my stories :D

Reviewer: lori (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2014 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 37: Love to be loved

I just finished reading your stories and really liked them.  I hope to read more from you.



Author's Response:

Hi Lori,

Wow, you had read both Snow Flower and It's not my posession? Thanks for your review and I'm happy that you like them and can understand them from my bad English :)

I'm having someone to beta both of them so I'll post again for future readers to enjoy them easier. I'm going to post Friendship and Love when it's fixed too :D

I have many ideas for future stories after Friendship and love. Hope to see you then and I'll find a beta for proper English ^_^

Cheers,

Meoley

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2014 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 37: Love to be loved


     Thank you for the story.  I think you are very creative and a


good story teller.  But – for me, I would prefer that when either


Brian or Justin are being brutalized,  you would be less


descriptive.  Please note that I used the word  “prefer.”  In this


context, I am not telling you, demanding, or anything like that.  I


am explaining my feelings. 


    Yes, I do think you should, if you enjoy it, continue to write. 


And yes again, it would be helpful if you could find someone to


help.  I understand not using a Beta, as I don’t use one either. 


But you need someone to correct using the wrong word or two.


It would help in the reading.


   Thanks again for the story. I did enjoy reading it.  The


ending was terrific.


    DavidR


 



Author's Response:

Hi DavidR. Thanks for finishing the story and sharing your thinking :D

I know I described the details a lot because I don't want to tell the story like a shoping list : Justin got raped by Brandon/Sap, Brian got stabbed by Sap, Justin is upset, Brian/Justin happy ending=> the end +.+ I want to communicate the emotional impact with readers. I put the warning etc. for that :D Anyway, I'm not complaining or anything, just explaining why I wrote that way. :)

Thanks David for supporting and encouraging me to keep writing more stories. Yeah I have heaps of ideas and want to share with you guys. The next story I want to write about the little boy in the last chapter who has the same name with Justin in this story. He'll be another Justin with different story :D

I really have no one that I know to look at the story for me and correct it. If you know someone who can do that or something, could you let me know pls?

I'm very happy you like this story and enjoy it. I like it when I wrote the ending too. ;)

Meoley

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2014 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 37: Love to be loved

I checked your story because I thought the plot was interesting and novel. I noticed that English is not your first language and I think you are really brave. I write in French but not in English, I’m a coward. However I think you need a beta, I hope you will find one who will not change the ideas/sentences, but just the spelling mistakes. I’m not judging, I have trouble too with spelling. Congratulations on writing your story, it’s hard to write in another language.

As for your story, parts of it, remind me of some stories that I unfortunately read in the website: across the pound, which unsettled me. They all had the same modus operandi and characteristics. It was always the same: a weak, pathetic and silly Justin (tortured, raped) and a Brian with half a brain. I don’t have a problem with rape, except when it’s used to create cheap angst. Moreover I hate it when authors don’t deal with the aftermath of such a horrible and traumatizing experience.

I didn’t felt uncomfortable when Brandon raped Justin it was bound to happen, he is obsessed with him. However after that, the gang rape feels like a caricature, put there just because you needed an escalation in horror. It kind of ruined the story for me.

I understand that you like tragedies. I don’t mind tragedies or dark ones, as long as it doesn’t feel too exaggerated.  But I have a question: why rape/gang rape should be such an essential component of a tragedy? Why is it always Justin who ends up tortured and raped (In the one I read and trying to forget).

Anyway, I like the last chapter, it was really sweet. Good luck with your next project.

Ps: I think gang rape should be specify such as. But thank you for warning us all the way, I really appreciate it. Some authors (not in this website) don’t even bother, when they are writing dark stories, because they just want people to read and comment.So thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks Andromeda for reading my story :)

I'm not brave, I have to write on English because no other choice :( Everybody is too busy these day to fix someone story, sigh. You are not a coward, you have ideas and dare to write them down. It's a good thing. Keep doing what you want ;)

I did read some stories in 'Across the pond'. I read rape/toture Justin too . Rape is acceptable for me but the toture stories in there is too extreme. I don't want Justin to have permanent scars or physically abuse by cut/ burn etc. so my stories won't have that since I want to keep Justin's image always beautifull. I myself like weak physically Justin but he has a strong mind and fighting. I admit I didn't write aftermath dealing of the rape in this story because of Justin's condition. I never got rape but as a girl I know it'll be terrible to move on. Justin in this story is blind and has passed so many pain/agonies both physically and mentally so he is kind of having good induration of pian. Like I said in the story (maybe not very clear on chapter 36) that Justin did pass the rape emotional damage himself. I read rape qaf stories and they always have Justin too desperate after that and take long time to heal and Brian has to suffer. I want a different Justin who is strong enough to stand up and move on (he becomes a sucessful artist and have a good life) as life keeps moving. Justin did suicide in chapter 36 after he got gang rape as he was too desperate but Brian's love saved him.:)

The reason I put Sap's gang rape in this story because of the storyline. Brian had unfinished with Sap- Sap raped Justin (Brian's lover) to pay back- Justin suicided - Brian saved him- Brian/Justin are back together- Justin has courage to do surgery- Brian revenged Sap for Justin- Brian got stab- Sap was in jail- Brian/Justin happy ending. It's all sequences for the story :) It's tragedy because of the whole story not only Sap's rape. I don't write events with no reason since I want it to be a dramatic/romantic/tragedy love story.

I hope I answer most of your thinking. But feel free to ask me more if you have any questions. :)

Sure I'll put all the warning before the stories/chapters if nescessary for readers to have choices. :D

Thanks again for sharing your thought with me. Love to see you more in the future.;)

Meoley

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2014 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

Congrats on finishing your first story! Great job! TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks Tagist for finishing this story :) Meo

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 37: Love to be loved

Glad to see them being happily together after all the stuff they have been through. Wonderful story but are you finished with this or you are going to update more chapters??



Author's Response:

Thanks hide and seek for finishing this story. :)

This story is totally end. I won't do sequel for it and let Brian/Justin 's love in this rest in peace with their life in here.

However, I'll write the new story about the little blond boy has the same name like Justin in the last chapter. The boy met Justin at the hill with his mom. His name is also Justin Taylor and I will tell a story about him and his own 'face of God' later :) But it's won't cross over with this story as I won't mention this Brian/Justin in this story again :D

Hope to see you again in that new story. Thanks for your support :)

Love Meoley xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 37: Love to be loved

Haha, I was thinking, why doesn't Justin know Brian's voice and his scent?  Then you made it clear he did. 

Lucky Justin want to go to the lake or the family might have been stuck behind that rock forever. LOL

I love the sculptures they were a nice touch.  Thank you for the entertainment.

Cheers :)



Author's Response: Thanks Flossee for finishing this story :) Brian was playing with Justin on the hill and didn't know he was played back haha i'm glad i made you entertained :D love Meo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 36: Numb

Yay, Brian is the hero once more for saving Justin.  I liked the way you wrote that part where he walked into the water.

Yay also, for Michael following Brian.  I don't usually cheer Michael on, but he deserves it here.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Brian is Justin's hero. He's so in love with his sunshine. :) Justin's suicide part is the most hard emotion part to write.:(

I don't hate Michael in the show although he is whinny sometimes. Maybe I'll do anti Mikey's story later :D

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 35: The nightmare

OMG, poor Justin.  I wish I hadn't read the double part.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

The Sap in the show has the sling so with the character like that I bet he'll do double fuck :(

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 34: He's gone

Yay, for Daphne cheering Justin up, but now she has put him in the hands of Sap.  Why didn't she go with him??? 

Cheers :) 



Author's Response:

She really didn't know Justin will end up falling in Sap's hand. She can't forsee the destiny. :(

Justin acted by his own. He didn't imaging it like that either.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 33: Betrayal

What!  Kip tried to kill Justin.  I don't see how that would endear him to Brandon. 

This is so sad; Justin seems so lost right now and there doesn't seem to be anyone for him to turn to.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Kip is always the dumb guy both in the show and this story. He acts by his emotion. He hates Justin so much that's why.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 32: Burn

Oh Brandon, you are so going to pay for that once Brian finds out. 

I hope Kip releases Justin, but I fear that won't happen. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

The story is getting more intense!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 31: Rage

Well surprise, surprise Jennifer sold some of the estate and did a runner. 

Now where is Justin? 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Jennifer is a coward. sigh

Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 37: Love to be loved

Thank you everyone so much for reading/support my story! :)

The story has ended happy ending yay :D How do you feel? I feel so good! This is my first story and the first time I wrote English story. I'm living in English speaking land but I'm not born English speaking mother language. I have no one to fix English for me. I hope you understand the story ok. I don't want betas because they will change my idea unless you understand your ideas together. My husband did fix chapter one for me and we ended up fighting because I have to sit next to him and nagging about every sentence he wanted to change my idea/emotion/thinking. It's best you do it by yourself if you can. :D

What do you guys think about my style of writing? Do you want me to write more stories? Do you think my writing is ok or I should be a reader better?

let me know your thinking pls. :D

Thanks for everything.! Feel free to ask me any question :)

Thanks mom Zenia and sis Rachel for supporting spirit :D

Love, Meoley

 

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2014 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 36: Numb

    Assuming Brian is seriously hurt but not life threatening.  It


has come a time for them to reverse roles.  That is, Justin to take


care of Brian.  I am looking forward to the scene when Justin first


sees Brian.  Of course I have made a number of assumptions


here.  We shall see.


   Thanks for the story. 


DavidR



Author's Response:

Hi DavidR. Thanks for sharing your thinking. I like your ideas :D

I hope you like the next chapter. :)

I'm so glad you like the story so far. Do you think I should write more stories? I have no experinece. Please check out my review after you read the next chapter.

Thanks. LOve to hear from you.:)

Meoley

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2014 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 36: Numb

I'm glad Brian made Sap pay. The slease deserved that. Clearly, it affected Brian deeply - I hope he'll be all right. And that Justin will believe Brian still wants and loves him.



Author's Response:

Yeah if I'm Brian, I'll get revenge too. Brian always wants and loves Justin. It doesn't matter if he got raped or he's blind. If you really loves someone, you don't care about that. Brian just wants to be with Justin, clingling to Justin forever :D

I'll post the story tomorow :) Thanks for your review and reading :D

Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 34: He's gone

Hi everyone :)

Thanks for reading my story up until now. There is fust a few chapter and it's finish :). However, please STOP reading it if the story makes you upset. :( The story is very dark and it's not for anyone. I don't want to make anyone sad. If you can handel it, feel free to continue :)

About why I write this style of story: I'm a reader. I'm not a professional author and don't want to be one. Writing is my hobby and something I like and for relaxing. I just found out about QAF show last year. I'm a new QAF fan but will be a loyal one. I love QAF so much and I had read so many fanfics. I always want to read tragedy books, watch touching movies which sad enough to make me cry. Sure I watch different style of movies too. I had google QAF fanfic tragedy/rape/dark fics but there are not many. I had read them all. I bet there are many people has the same taste like me out there and I want to write something so readers have the same taste like me can have more choice beside happy fics. :)

The next chapter will content rape scene again and it'll be the last rape scene. This story has 2 rape scenes and 1 sex scene. So if you are not comfortable, please STOP reading the story or just wait until the last chapter to read the ending. I know you want to know the ending since you had followed the story until now. :)

I write story with this style and it chooses readers. I have put the warning in the beginning that it's a very dark fic. :) If you have any question, feel free to ask me. Thanks for your support folks. :D

Love Meoley

 

Meoley - Just a suggestion. It is probably better to place these comments regarding particular plot points in the 'chapter notes' at the beginning of chapters, rather than in a 'review comment,' since not all readers would read the reviews prior to reading a chapter.  Please place your cautionary warnings there so all your readers will be sure to heed them before deciding whether to continue reading a particular chapter.  Thanks.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks Kim for your advice. :) I never know about that. I'll do it the next time :D

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2014 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 33: Betrayal

The story is dramatic and serious but also crazy.
I hope that everything will be nice to settle down, and that Brian would take control of the situation, regardless of how things are now.



Author's Response:

Thanks orhida43 for your review :)

Yeah the story just has a few more chapters and it'll finish. But please read my review before you read chapter 35. Thanks a lot! :D

 

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2014 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 33: Betrayal

          These last few chapters were very sad.  So much has happened to Justin that I believe he just needs time not only for his body to heal, but also his emotions as well.  His brother is dead, he has just been beaten and raped...... etc, etc.

     I expect when he hears all the facts, and we just may have to wait until his operation (I hope Peter tells him about the second lump), that he will see the light.  Yes, he lost a brother, but though he doesn't understand it yet, he gained a lover.

    The next few chapters should be very interesting to see how all this gets resolved.

DavidR

 



Author's Response:

Hi DavidR,

It's so dramatic although it's so beautiful before :( Please read my review after chapter 34 to know why I wrote this style of story :)

The story is near to an end. Just a few more chapters. I'm glad you like this story.

I like your idea about Justin lost his brother but got the love of his life. Yeah it's like 'God closes the front door but he opens the window'.

Thanks a lot for reading and sharing your thought with me! :D

Meoley

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2014 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 33: Betrayal

Hello, there.  Well, I have tried to stick with this story, but this one is way too violent and dark for me. And I still cannot get over Justin and Brian having sex while Justin still thought of him as his brother, even if Brian did know the truth. I do not admire Brian for being unable to control himself in that regard.  And seeing Justin raped in this manner is just too unpleasant for me.

Also, as am admin for the site, I hope you will take this in the spirit in which it is intended, but with English not being your native language, your story would be more effective and easier to read if you enlisted the help of a beta to help you translate it. I admire you for posting it in English, but it would be beneficial to you to find someone who is a native English speaker to help you.  I wish I could do that, but I am way too busy at the moment already editing other stories. 

I wish you luck with your story, but I am going to have to bail. Sorry.  If you write another one in the future that is lighter in nature, I will be sure to check it out.  ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, thanks a lot for sharing your thought with me :)

Yeah I know the story is not for everyone and it chooses it's own reader. In the beginning I had put the warning it's a very dark fic although it's romantic sometime :)

Thanks for your advice and want to help me about to be a beta for this story. I'm living in the English speaking country although I'm not born English speaking nature. I know I write like I speak. :( my husband is too busy to fix the story for me and my friends don't watch QAF and some are kind of homophobic so I just do everything by myself as no one to help me :(

I'm very thank you that you have stood up with this story until now. :) You have very right to stop reading it if it makes you sad:( I want you and everyone to be happy. :D

I don't know if I'll write lighter stories or not because there are many light and happy stories out there. Sometimes it needs some different taste for readers to choose. I'm a reader, always be. There are many times I wanderring to find some tragedy, intense, rape QAF fics but there are not many. So I want to write this style of stories for people who have the same taste like me can choose to read.

But it doesn't mean that I won't write happy light fics. It depends on my mood too :) I want to write different style too if people still want to read my stories.

Thanks for everything Kim and wish you a happy day and enjoy another stories. There are some new stories and I'll read them once I finish this story :) I like icecupcake and confuse_bliss and want to read their new stories too :D

Love Meoley

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2014 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 32: Burn

Doesn't Justin know in his heart that Brain isn't his brother?



Author's Response:

Justin doesn't know. He's 18 and has no experience in life. :(

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2014 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 31: Rage

Great chapter about Brian.
I'm glad Peter know the truth about Jennifer and Brandon.



Author's Response:

Thanks Purple :)

I like Peter. He is a loyal man. He just put his trust in the wrong place :(

Brian is a hero (at least in my heart) :D

Reviewer: NightRose (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 30: "Brian"

PLEASE let Brian get there in time before Brandon does anything more to justin.

I can't wait to see how justin reacts to the truth about brian and his eyes.



Author's Response:

Hi NightRose. I like your pename :)

Thanks for reading my story :D

I can't tell you the story yet so pls keep following B/J journey ;)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 30: "Brian"

Grrr, Brandon you are going to get your comeuppance once Brian finds out what you did.  What a slimball, drugging Justin. 

Yay, Brian doesn't have to pretend any more, still I had hope he would come clean while still risking everything as it would have meant so much more.

Only 10 more chapters.  I will miss this once it's over.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Haha I understand your feeling. When I'm a reader, I feel the same when some shit happen. But now I write this story so I already know what happened :)

Brian wished to tell Justin since he found out he loves him but he was scare of Justin's reaction.:(

Yayy about 10 more chapters and I can relax and read another stories. I can't concentrate when I read another story when I always think about this story, of what to write next.sigh

There are many stories I want to read. I did review stories before I signed with my name Meoley :)

You can always read this again if you miss this Brian and Justin as I always reread the stories I like. :D

love

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 29: Young and beautiful

I read this between my fingers.  Do'h; Brian finally went there without telling Justin the truth.  Although, Justin isn't entirely innocent here as he could have stopped it.

Thanks for the warning.  We don't need warnings for sex scenes, but I think it was justified in this case. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I wrote this with half of my eyes opened ;) Justin sure is not innocent when it comes to sex haha he's a natural. :)

I just put the warning in case but it seems that everyone read it anyway haha

I'm glad you guys like it or curious about it? doesn't matter. Sincerely, I love to read stories that have sex too :p

Hug & Kiss

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 28: My song for you

Oh no, they are going to get naked again.  I have my fingers crossed Brian tells Justin he isn't his brother before anything happens.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry but they are naked again :(

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 30: "Brian"

I hop Brain is on time. And that he's get the chance to tell the truth and not Brandon. And how will Justin react when he hears the truth about his sight. Hopefully you let us know the answer soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks Purple for your comment :)

I hope Brian is on time too. sigh I'll continue writing tomorrow. I already wrote 3 chapters today. So tired.

Enjoy the story and another stories. :D

Meoley

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 28: My song for you

    I finally caught up and now I am  current with the chapters.  I was going to write and ask about Peter, but you beat me to it.  I think, but am not sure if I trust him.  If he knew the truth about  Jen. and Brandon I expect he would protect Justin.  Either way, Brian needs to tell Justin the truth, and soon.  


   As for the sex chapter, write what you want.  You are the author.  If I/we don’t care for it, we can always skip it.


   Thanks for the story.


   DavidR



Author's Response:

Thanks DavidR for you comment :)

Peter didn't know about Jen and Brandon elegal activity yet. Brian intended to tell Justin the truth soon but something happen :(

The story is going to be extreme. Pls endure with me. It's going to end soon.

Thanks again and enjoy the story :)

Meoley

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2014 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 28: My song for you

Loving your story



Author's Response:

Thanks Tash :) I'm glad you enjoy this type of story. It's my first one :D

Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 28: My song for you

Hi everyone :)

Thank you so much for reading and supporting my story!

I never know I'll go this far since I had this idea the very first time. :) The story is near to an end, about 10 more chapters. I can see the chapters that about B/J kissing and touching have more read count than another one. It's unfair because I also spent energy on the story line and other stuffs:( LOL kidding :D

I'm happy you like everything in this love story. However, the next chapter will contain B/J having sex. they have to have sex for the storyline. I'll put the warning so people don't like this can move on to the next chapter and who is interested can read it. :) I can just write: "Oh, Brian and Justin have sex" and move on but there are some people will kill me if I don't describe the details. :p So for people skip the next chapter, please keep in mind they had sex for the story and continue reading. and others please enjoy :)

Thanks a lot!

Meo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 27: The truth

Well that was clever of Brian to take Justin to two appointments.  However, it looks like everything is about to unravel.   I just hope Brian can help Justin before Brandon can expose him.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Yeah. Thanks for the comment. :) The story is near to an end however,it still have a lot of events before that . :D

Hug and kiss :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 26: The power of love

Having read this latest chapter, I have to be honest. I continue to have issues with Brian taking advantage of Justin in this manner. I know you said he can't control himself - and you are certainly within your rights to write it as you wish - but I have a hard time admiring this Brian who cannot place his own needs above Justin's. If he is really developing genuine caring feelings for him - and he seems to have, since he has become pretty protective of him - I would hope he would rise above his physical desires and not confuse Justin in this manner by participating in an activity that would be forbidden if they were really related.

And I'm not sure if Ben is in on Justin supposedly being Brian's brother, but if he is, I do not think he would make the comment about 'young love' as they are ardently kissing at Woody's. So I am assuming that Michael has told him the truth about their 'non-relationship, and he realizes they are not related?

As for Flossee's comment earlier in her review of another chapter, she is correct.  We do not allow incestuous stories to be posted on this site.  The only reason why this plot would be allowed in this story is because Brian KNOWS they are not related, so we can allow it. But if he did NOT know they were not brothers, it would not be permitted to be posted.  Just an FYI.

Your story is very unique; I am never seen this plot before. So I applaud you for that.  I just continue to have this squeamish sort of feeling due to Brian's advances toward whom Justin feels is his brother. I can almost understand why Justin is so pliable and impressionable here, but I do have a hard time excusing Brian, whether he owes the money or not.  I will reserve judgment on his behavior further until I see how the story progresses, but I hope he manages to control his urges before there is no turning back.

As for Jennifer, I wouldn't trust her at all, and if Justin is legal age, I don't see why Brian doesn't just take him to the doctor himself, rather than going back to  the house to speak with her about Justin's condition.  Obviously, she has a lot to lose if she is truthful with him, so why would she be? I would have just taken him to the doctor directly to have him examined. 

These are just my honest reflections on the story. I will be interested in seeing where you go with this one.  ~Kim

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Kim for your comment and ideas :)

I just finished a really long chapter and is so tired. I have to stop though I have ideas for next chapters.:(

I'm very glad that you have feeling/thinking for my story :D I'm so tired now to write any more long here. Anyway, I answer your question about Ben. He doesn't know about B/J relationship since he met them at Mikey they didn't have a clearly greeting. So Ben just thought B/J are couple. and he was happy to see them so hot together that he said "oh young love" as so passionate.

About incest, I don't like incest so I don't /won't write incest stories now or in the future so don't worry. I want B/J to not be brothers/cousin/father/son anything like that. I want them to be Brian and Justin seperately and in love with each other. :)

I'm so sorry I can't say long now as I'm so tired but I'm happy you like my story and applaud it. I never think my story line is that exciting as it is just one day, i have this idea and want to write it down :)

I'll talk to you later longer in the next chapter review.

Love and hug Meo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 26: The power of love

Brian and Justin need to talk to Jennifer, but I don't think she is going to tell them that Justin can have an operation to regain his sight as that would implicate her in the deception she has planned with Brandon.

OMG, Justin is in love.  I know Justin is blind, but he doesn't have any mentally issues so I can see how he would struggle with those feelings.  However, I still don't want either of them to act on their feelings until he knows the truth.  I can't wait for that to happen as there will be angst and then hopefully understanding and love. :D

Cheers :)  



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment :) 

B/J sure will talk with Jennifer and her fate will be clear soon, just a few more chapter and you will have your answers.

About Justin and Brian's love before Justin knows the truth, I can't tell you ahead. This story is angst so it's a good hint ;) and hurt/comfort and very tragedy :(

There are so many happy Qaf fic so I don't write happy puppy love. My style is romantic/tragedy/drama :D but i'm funny so I'll write more style later :) like humor or something didferent.

To explain Justin's thinking: Justin has no mentally problem. However, he is blind and he never goes out the world or has relationship before beside Brandon who he hates. No one loves and cares for him. Jen just feeds him and tricked him. Brandon just wants to claim and control. His father was so busy with work. Peter and Daphne are not family and they have there own life so they can't be with Justin much. So when he met Brian/his brother, Brian cares, loves and protect him. And Brian shows Justin he loves him and continously do sexual activities with him. Justin fell for Brian. Justin has no mother/father to guide him so he falls hard. I really feel sorry for him. :(

I'll write next chapters soon and can't wait for the story to open. But it will become darker soon.

Thanks and love :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 25: Debbie and the Liberty Festival

Oh no, punching Kip probably wasn't a good idea.

Brian really needs to stop kissing Justin; yet the ice-cream kiss must have been just too enticing.  LOL 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Brian is 26. Still young and hot temper. sigh. He used to live on the street and fighting to survive so using his punch is his instinct.

Poor Brian can't stop touching Justin. haha I love the ice cream kiss on the show so.... ^_^

Anyway, the story is developing to the extreme and soon Justin will no the truth.

It'll be tragedy. Be patien and enjoy the story ya :)

Love and kiss muahhh

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 24: Can I love you?

"I care for him." Yeah, it doesn't matter what universe Brian has it bad for Justin. :D

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Yeah Brian always cares for Justin. Poor the guy :D


Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2014 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 23: I need you

Thank goodness Brian saved him.  I know you said there would be rape but I had my fingers crossed that Brian would hear and save Justin.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Yeah I love Brian to be a hero like Rage and with that accident, Brian knows the love toward Justin.

However, there will be rape later for the story line . :(

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2014 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 22: Sickness

I'm a little worried.  You wrote Justin saying "pee pee" which is odd (because he is not 5 years old), but when you wrote the action "Justin finished pee pee and washed his hand" I now wonder who old you might be as an adult would probably write urinating.  It only worries me because you say later there will be "lots of sex and rape".  BTW there are rules on what you can write which have links to this information on the home page.

I'm happy Brian has figured out maybe Justin can have an operation even if he doesn't know at this stage that it may return his sight.   

I'm confused about Jennifer; she seems to be good/bad. 

I hope nobody at the Liberty Diner calls Brian "Kinney".

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Justin said pee pee with his brother because he thought it was normal. I'm 27 btw and my husband say pee pee to me everytime so I think pee pee is more natural than "I'm going to the toilet "or " I have a pee" which is so formal for brothers to say to each other.I'll fix the urinating in my saying but keep Justin one :)

I've read the rules and it said I can't write Aldut having sex with minors and no cincest story. In this story, B/J are aldult and they are not incest in physicaly, just Justin's mind befor he found out brian is not his brother. We are readers, not the characters inside the story so we all know the truth that they are not brothers. The rules are for the readers to be happy, so If we know for sure they are not brothers, we can be happy and enjoy it right? :)But that chapter I'll have the warning so who don't like can pass :) And the rape chapters I'll put warning too though you have to read pass the rape part to know the next part of the story :(Brian not rape Justin so don't worry.

Jennifer has both side good and bad. Everybody has . Nobody perfect.

Thanks for your remind and comments :D If you see anything in the future please let me know ^_^

Kiss and hugs MEO

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2014 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 21: The wish and the sculpture class

I'm so happy I waited to review this chapter.  I didn't think I could possibly be the only person to be a little freaked out by the sexual activity between these two men, especially while Justin believes Brian is his brother.  It's just wrong whether it is two men, two women or one of each, as incest is incest.  I'm still loving the story though, I just hope B/J keep their hands (and other body parts, lol) to themselves. 

I love that Justin is still an artist; just in a different form.  Lindsay as the teacher is a great touch.  Now Jennifer and Brandon need to get their comeuppances.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Haha Thanks for your comment and I'm so sorry to make you freak out :(

I didn't put this story in the incest categories because B/J are not real brothers. However please don't hate my Justin because he is just the teenager exploring the new world and things. :)

And this story will have lots of sex and rape later so repair yourself for the shock feeling >"< I love to let Lindsay guide Justin's art. :)

The story is still developing itself and I'm learning about the characters feeling too so It's fun to wrire the same time ^_^

I'm glad to hear more of your ideas.

LOve and kiss (please don't freak out ) LOl xoxox

Meoley

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2014 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 21: The wish and the sculpture class

Hello, there! I finally had a chance to catch up with your story. This is a very unique idea, having Justin believe this Brian is his brother.  And I love the idea of the 'snow flower,' and how caring Brian is in this story. I do have mixed feelings, however, about his behavior toward Justin. While I understand his attraction to him, I think he should have either avoided sexual activity with him, or been honest about who is he if he couldn't control himself. I think Justin would be relieved to find out who he really is since he, too, is attracted to him. On the other hand, though, I could see him being very angry with Brian for deceiving him.

And both Jennifer, Kip, and Brandon can all cause problems for Brian now, since they have witnessed his 'unbrotherly' behavior toward Justin.  I wonder, too, if Justin would keep calling Brian "Brother" instead of just "Brian?"  Since it is an AU story, though, I suppose that is possible.:)

You have a lot of story points to work through in this plot with all these complications, but I like it! I hope we have many more chapters to come. I think I can see where Justin's blindness is heading, too, which is good for me.;)

Thanks for this intriguing story! I will be eagerly waiting for the rest of it. And thanks again for posting your story here on MW.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kimberly, I'm happy you like my story and Thanks for your lovely comment :D

I'm sorry I made you struggle with feeling about Brian and Justin. To answer all your questions, you have to read until the end of the story :(

But I'll explain some of the knots for you :) First, I let the characters struggle with their own feeling like everyone in life. I know this is a story and my fantasy but I don't want it to be so perfect. I don't want to control or force the characters destiny and let it to be natural and let them develop their feeling and life themselve.I just try to understand their feeling and write their story. ;)

Brian is basicly a good person but he is still an asshole and he becomes a prick because of his past life. He has feeling for Justin he hasn't know or doesn't want to admit and he is attracted to Justin by his own instinct. He lies to Justin and keeps it like that because the threat of his life. His instince makes him have to save himself first. I know some people in real life will chose to be honest but there are a lot still lies too. The real world is black and white and people are different, not everyone the same thinking. You watched Gale Harold in his interview he said he never live a life fucking crazily and not love like Brian Kinney in the show :) Even the actor is a different person than the character he acted. The same with Randy. ^_^

Justin keeps calling Brian 'brother' because it was what he called his brother since he was five and he just remebered to call like that because he doesn't go out of his house, go to school to know the world. You look around and you can see little kid like 5 year olds call their brother 'brother', not the name. They just change everything when they grow up and shame to call 'brother'or 'sister' in society so they start calling names to each other and keep it like that. Justin is smart because he studied at home and his brain is good but his mind and thinking is innocent and he is a teenager. He is exploring something new, something different, something exciting like any teenager with his heart and body so he attractcs to his own brother since 'his brother' keep doing 'strange' things to him.

I love to know my charactes developing too. It's really fun to write this. I learn a lot :) The story is still long. It's not even half yet. So it can't let you know everything already otherwise why you have to read anymore and the story will end right? ^_^

Be patient with me and keep supporting Brian and Justin love and life in this tragedy story. :D

Love and kiss you

Meoley

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2014 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 20: Storm and snow flower

This story is so beautiful and romantic! 

I like the way Brian cares and takes care of Justin. 

It is beautiful to see how you can connect the two even Justin being blind and thinking that Brian is his brother. The love of the two is greater than all the barriers and you demonstrate this very well. 

I love this story and I hope to see Brian becoming a better and better person because of Justin influence in your life. 

A big hug! 

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Woaa Thanks Nicolle! You made me blushed ^_^ Your words are lovely.

I'm a girl who love romantic words :p I love the love between Britin. Love will conquer everything and love is not a crime :)

Thank you very much to support Brian and Justin love in this story!

Kiss you and hug you Muahhhh

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 20: Storm and snow flower

OMG, finally they got caught doing un-brotherly things.  Surely Brian and Justin need to talk about what they were doing.  Justin surely must know it isn't right to do that with a sibling?

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Haha I really feel bad for Brandon to have to see that. It's fun to write about him. :)

Brian is always put his dick on his head so It's natural that he wants to fuck Justin a lot when Justin is so sexy. Though, he just promised Mikey in the last chapter that he won't do that. >"< He is Brian FUCKING Kinney right :D

Justin is a teenager boy not a girl. Man is always horny. Man fuck by dick while wonman have sex by the heart. Justin knows in theory that he can't do that but he is gay and so is 'his brother' , they won't have baby when they have sex. If this story is about a sister and a brother it's different. Although in some family they have incest relationship. :(

But Justin will fight with his mind a lot. I just put myself in their minds to understand about the characters feeling. It's fun because it made me seem like I'm an outsider writing a story from them.

It's really fun to learn and develop the characters feeling ^_^

Thanks for your ideas and review. I love all  your comments. Kiss and hugs muahhh

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 19: Complicated feeling

Yay, Kip isn't going to spill the beans on Brian being Brian Kinne. 

Wow, for supposedly brother they sure get a lot of naked time together. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Brian is a bad guy to take advantage on a litlle boy >"<

Justin is so clod so he just think fuck that, I have to get warm hehe :D

I love to write sex scene "blushed" ^_^

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 17: Terrible secrets

Yay; Justin will be able to see again once Brian finds out what's going on. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I'm not a spoiler I won't tell you hehe :p

Love muahh :D

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 16: Morning and shower

Brian jerked off on Justin while showering; what a terrible un-brother he is. Haha

Cheers :) 



Author's Response:

He is hey. He is thinking by his dick again sigh =.=

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: Storm and snow flower

I love the way Brian is taking care of Justin. Great chapter again. Can't wait for the next one. Thank you!!



Author's Response:

Yayyy I love the caring protection Brian too. High five :D

Thanks for the review and love you like this journey with Britin ^_^

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 20: Storm and snow flower

Nice chapter! Brian and Justin are so hot together hehe. Wish that Justin will be able to regain his vision though, plz continue with the story =)



Author's Response:

Thanks hideandseek. I know they are so hot in the show hey so I wrote them as hot in this story ^_^.

The story is still long. Thanks for travel with Brtin in this adventure :)

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2014 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 17: Terrible secrets

Holy shit! Jennifer and Brandon are truly monsters! How can they let Justin go blind when he has a chance to regain his vision. Omg they seriously deserve a extremly bad ending! And thanks again for the quick update, looking forward for more =)



Author's Response:

Yeah they are partners in crime. Money and power made them more blind than Justin. :(

This story is anti Jennifer, Brandon, Kip, Sap and Jim stockwell.

I really like Jennifer and Brandon in the show by the way . ^_^

Thanks for your review and support. I love you Muah

Reviewer: Lee (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2014 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

So far so good :D



Author's Response:

Thanks Lee :) I'm glad you like it :D

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 15: The brother vs the fiance

I can't help but ask don't T-Rex Dinosaurs have short little arms (limbs).  I can't imagine Brian and Brandon fighting like that; maybe they were butting heads and biting each other. Haha  Okay, I'm just being a little silly now.

Round one to B/J.  Update soon if you can please.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I think they will bite each other's skin out and kicking by the tale haha. I'm reaxing. I have enough for today so I'll rest and continue after about 12 hours :D

I need to think for the next chapter too hehe. Thanks for the review and support Flossee .

See you soon xoxo

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 14: Brothers

Happy Chapter; Justin in Brian's comforting arms, but you have warned us Brandon is in the next one. Boo Hiss

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Yeah happy time ;)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: The reunion

I feel good/bad for Justin.  He can't know his brother is dead if Brian is to help him fight against Brandon and Jennifer.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

You have to wait until the end to find out everything ;) I'm not a spoiler hehehe

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 12: The decision

Oh I like this plot.  Brian will soon be able to help Justin and for some reason I'm really happy Michael knows what he is doing.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Mikey is a really good friend for supporting Brian. I'm not anti Michale in this story. My next story maybe hehe :D

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 11: I promise I'll find him for you

Thank goodness Daphne and Peter still care about Justin, (he isn't completely alone), and Peter was lucky enough to get Brain's new address.  Maybe B/J fortunes are changing.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

It's a coincidence Peter met the man and get the address. Lucky for both Brian and Justin :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Trash

I can see why you would write Brian's story this way and it is a very good reason why Brian is the way he is.  However, one day I hope someone will write a positive fic about fostering as most foster parents are very good at caring for children. 

OMG, I am watching "Game of Thrones", what is it with everyone wanting to cut dicks of?  LOL

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I think most forster parents in real life are good that's why the authors have to write the opposite haha.

Stories are fantasy. Sometime they are not really true, same like movies.

I haven't watched "Game of Thrones" but my friends said it really good. I'll watch when I have free time :)

I wrote about cutting dick because it's the most precious thing of Brian when he has no money or anything else important right? :D

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 9: Plans

Justin is smart enough to know they spiked his drink so why would he call for Jennifer when she was the one that gave him the drink.  I'm glad he was able to get rid of the much stronger Brandon, at least for now.  Brian and Justin need to find each other again soon.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Justin called Jennifer because there is no one esle in the house for him to call. He just call by instinct and hope she is good enough to save him but well, she is just a bitch (in my story. I really love jennifer in the show) :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 8: Emotion

Wow, it's been a year since the Taylor family almost become extinct, and Jennifer and Brandon are in cahoots, that can't be good. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

They are partner in crime haha

Reviewer: hideandseek (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 15: The brother vs the fiance

I love the Brian-Justin-"brother" relationship. It is always nice to see Brian being protective towards Justin.

And I must say you are one of the most hard working author I've ever seen! You always update fast and your chapters still have their length and quality. 

Love your story, looking forward to see how it proceeds =)

 



Author's Response:

Wow thanks for your lovely review *kiss*

I love the brothership too and sure the protective Brian.

I wrote the chapters continuously and posted straight away after I finished one chapter.

Whenever I have emotion and idea I write it immediately so the emotion not pass away. Because if you wait for even one hour, your emotion change and it's not the emotion you feel before anymore.

Anyway I love writing this and I feel like I'm the outsider watching the story too and excited for what will happen next. ^_^

I have the whole idea of the story until the end already but I have to wait for my emotiion for each chapter :)

Thanks and love *hug*

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2014 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 9: Plans

Oooooo, Evil Brandon and Evil Sap together! That's REALLY evil! TAG



Author's Response:

Yeahhh I'm a sadist hehe ::D

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2014 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 11: I promise I'll find him for you

I hope Peter and Daphne are on time saving Justin to marry Brandon. Hopefully Brandon and Jennifer don't discover there help.



Author's Response:

Yeah. Thanks for review :D

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: Emotion

Brian really needs to find a job. Who will help Justin to get out of this terrible situation? Poor Justin. Your story was really fun, eagerly expect the following events.
Orhida

 



Author's Response:

Justin is smart and strong. Through this chapter, we see he can survive by himself so far. Sure he will need help when he can't get out of the house.

Brian needs help too :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 8: Emotion

Interesting story line.  I fear that Brandon is going to continue to give Justin a lot of headache and grief, however, before a certain brunet swoops in to protect him (at least, I hope that is what will happen).  Will be interesting to see where you take this.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks Kim. Sure Brian will come into Justin's life.

They are destine to be soulmate. I can't change that. I don't have that power and I don't want to ^_^

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 7: The new beggining

Justin really needs to hook up with Brian soon.  I look forward to your next installment.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Yayy I hope he will meet his soulmate soon in chapter 9 or 10 :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 6: Doom

Noooooo.  I like Brandon and now he is the baddie. 

No cheers :)



Author's Response:

I really like Brandon in the show too. He is so handsome and how I wish he hooks up with our Justin at least once hehe.

In my story I can make him fall in love with Justin from head to toe. But because our Brian is his destine soulmate so I have to make Brandon a bad jealousy guy right? ;)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 5: The big events

OMG Justin's family is jinxed or were jinxed as now they all seem to be dead.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Yeah they have bad destiny. I feel sorry for them. They are all good people. Craig Taylor in this story is a good father.

I will talk about him more in Justin's memory later ;)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 4: Stop ringing that stupid bell!

Oh, Brian Kinney the asshole has answered the intercom.  At least Brain Taylor is on his way home.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

He is really asshole but he is so tired from the hangover sigh.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Angel confronted the Asshole

Thank goodness for the security guy.  I think Justin was a little harsh as he was only trying to help him.  Still he must have been scared.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Yeah he was scare and he was piss off from hearing the sarcasm tone in the security guy. As If the guy didn't believe he was Brian's brother.

Actually the guy thought Justin talked about Brian Kinney and he thought Justin is another trick.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 2: I will find him

Justin is about to find his brother.  I can't wait.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Yayyy

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2014 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

Hey Breakdarkmountain

Welcome to MW; you will love it here.  We will support you and hopefully you will support the authors of the fics you read.  Reviewing is a great way to get to know the other authors.

This is an interesting and unique fic.  Two Brian's (one good/one bad) how delightful.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Hi Flossee.

I'm glad you like my story and thanks for your support. I just discorved about this web so I'm really new here.

There are so many stories to read here . Happy ^_^ Sure I will support and review any stories I will read.

Hugs :)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2014 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 5: The big events

Ack! What terrible developments! Hope that Justin can survive all of this at once! TAG



Author's Response:

I feel pity for Justin character in this story too :(. But don't worry our Justin is very strong. He will survive all the shit the life throws to him ;)

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Angel confronted the Asshole

Why Brian Kinney and Brian Taylor?
An interesting start.
Thank you!
Orhida



Author's Response:

Hi orhida43,

I'm happy you like my story :)

We have two Brian for the storyline but don't worry there will be only our Brian Kinney later. Just wait until chapter 5 or 6 and you will know why Brian Taylor exits.

Brian Taylor is Justin Taylor lost older brother. He is straight while our Brian Kinney is as gay as the show.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2014 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

Welcome to MW! We always love getting new authors to write more stories for us. Thanks for writing! TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks tagsit for your support ! Kiss and hug muahh

Reviewer: Breakdarkmountain (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2014 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

I'm so glad you like my story so far and support me. Thanks so much to edit it to make it esier to read. Please fix it in the future If you see any mistakes. I'm so happy to be here. I have my second chapter with our little Justin and I'm working on chapter 3 ... Hope you like my storyline and I'm happy to receive your comment.

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2014 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

What an interesting beginning-our Brian a gambler by trade. Just wait til Jus shows up wheeooo!!! Good start. I think you will be happy here at MW. Lots of people to read and review.

Author's Response:

Thanks Linda for your support. I'm glad you like my story and our bad Brian haha. Justin will be in the 2nd chapter. yahooo. I love to see your comment and enjoy the story yayyy

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2014 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Oh Brian, how bad are you?

Welcome to Midnight Whispers! Thank you for posting your first story on here.;)  Very unique beginning.  I think I see a certain little brother about to enter the picture.;)  Will be waiting to see where you take this. Thanks again for becoming a member on here.

I did space out your paragraphs more, by the way, to make them easier to read before I validated this. Please let me or Bob know if we can be of any additional help to you. 

*Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you Kim for your support. I'm so happy you like my story. I read many of your stories and I love them :) I'm glad to be here cause I like QAF so much. I will keep it in heart If I have any difficulty I will seek you out for help. Thanks and Hugs.

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