Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2019 08:21 PM · On: Epilogue
I have read this twice now and loved it both times!!! I love all of the 80's movie references.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2019 09:58 PM · On: Epilogue
Love it
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2019 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
darn Lindsey, never liked that bitch
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2015 12:19 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved this story and this OOC Brian who was finally willing to accept himself and Justin. The canon moments slotted in so well and made this AU seem like the real thing. Sorry to see it end - personally I am not averse to a saga type story when it is as well written as this:-D
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 07:38 AM · On: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this AU story. I think you were spot on with how the age difference affected Brian in particular. Thanks for providing so much reading pleasure.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review this story. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 18
A distinct improvement: no throwing Justin off Kinney cliffs. Instead, they're communicating.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 17
Hooray! Brian is confident enough to claim Justin as his boyfriend. :)
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 16
With a little help, Brian has removed his head from his rear. ;) No going into overprotective, I know what's best for Justin mode, I hope.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 14
The amicable split wiht Lindsay is really touching, particularly since both parents put Gus first. I really like your comparison of Kinnetic and Justin, that both give Brian hope. I think you're correct. And, the AU win against St. James is fantastic!
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 11
Yes to toppy Justin! In QAF, we know Justin topped at least once, and it must have happened post 5-13 when the boys got their act together. After all, Brian taught Justin to be a top, and he tops very well indeed.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 10
Interesting AU that isn't canon but still plausible. I like the way Justin and Brian are teaching each other about gay sex.
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2015 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 4
I just discovered your stories and am really enjoying this one. I can definitely picture Emmett as a mentor to Justin; he's my favorite character after Justin and Brian.
Reviewer: misseshermionemalfoy (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 10
This was a great chapter. I feel like inexperienced Brian isn't done enough. I loved seeing him so volunerable.
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 05:58 AM · On: Epilogue
thank you for this xxx
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 16
loving this so much x
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 14
I LOVE LINDS
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 12
My heart, why does Brian have to be such a silly boy?
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 11
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 10
I don't think yo uwere OOC here with Brian, especially because of the situation
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 8
I want to hug him - then do bad things to him lol
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
He told her, bless him. But he was high. I hope he remembers x
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 6
YES! LET'S FIGHT THIS SHIT!
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 5
Uh ooooooh
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
I adore Emmett being his mentor, if anyone can help ease him in to being gay, it's him lol
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 3
Ooooh, I wonder if Brian even knows himself or if he's in complete denial.
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH I like this!
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, I don't like them fighting, I hope it solves on good terms
Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2014 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
uh huh. I smell trouble. Love this twist in the plot.
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: May 24, 2014 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
i like your story
thank you for sharing
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2014 03:42 AM · On: Epilogue
I liked the premise of this fic, and was only slightly distracted by the writing being so influenced by other authors work. I have always liked a seemingly straight Brian and I loved that Justin was the one to have confidence in his sexuality. I absolutely loved that Gus found the ring and innocently gave it to Justin. I have started reading "Playing with Fire" and I look forward to catching up with more of your work.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2014 09:54 PM · On: Epilogue
Loved this amazing story. You are a fantastic writer. I was captivated the entire story. Write me another great story, please.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2014 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
Talk about awkward. lol.
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2014 05:28 PM · On: Epilogue
I think every bit of role reversal showed in this story was supremely interesting. It's not often we get to see Brian portrayed as insecure and less-confidant. It was very adorable at times, and very sad at others, but never annoying or ooc because his life circumstances in this AU-so different from the show-could very plausibly have shaped him into just such a person. I loved watching how you made Brian's relationship with Lindsay progress even as their marriage declined, how he reamined a wonderful father to Gus throughout, and how Brian grew into the person he should have been all along with Justin's help. The little tie-ins with cannon were savored, but I loved the unique directions the story line took as well. I loved that you had Justin choose Columbia after all, but when he came back and the proposal happened, well that was just so romantic! The inscription on the ring was perfectly sweet without being corny at all. And lastly, your idea to use the cultural references to highlight the age difference, when you obviously couldn't use Brian's superior maturity to do it because it didn't really exist that much, was a great tactic. Excellent story, I enjoyed reading it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the continued support. It means alot to get this kind of validation/feedback.
Reviewer: driada (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2014 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved this story very much. Thank you for sharing it with us, poor schmucks who enjoy reading, have many ideas for stories, but can't write if their lives depended on it. You brightened my day with every new chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, always happy to entertain plot bunnies if you want to share your ideas. I would love to collaborate. You can message me here or on twitter Erin_424.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2014 06:34 AM · On: Epilogue
Always love the happy/sappy endings. Congrats on finishing another story! Thanks for writing. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2014 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 16
I love this chapter! The dialog reversal, the role reversal... all twisted canon based! You are good! <G>
Roni
Author's Response: Thanks so much
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2014 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 18
Sorry that it's over
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2014 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 17
Aw! Justin will be so touched that Brian referred to him as his boyfriend. The passionate sex they had in that hotel room was amazing! Brian has finally come into his own element, and I think Justin more than likes it, hehe. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2014 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 17
"Justin is, well um, Justin is my boyfriend"
Teeheeeheee. That's a big admission for Brian! Way to go! TAG
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2014 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hello Erin. I was only able to read to chapter 8 while on vacation and I had no way of reviewing so now I have I would like you to know I am enjoying this fic. I hope Brian and Lindsay talk before either of them cheats on the other, as technically that's what they would be doing. I love that you have Justin open to his sexuality and Brian is the one struggling to come to terms with his.
Cheers
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2014 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 17
Interesting and different take. My personal opinion is that Brian wouldn't be monogamous be he straight or gay. But I have no problem with this interpretation.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2014 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 16
Brian's finally getting brave! I like it. TAG
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2014 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 16
I just can not figure out how to write a story by Brian / Michael, and there are plenty. Where did the idea, when the series Brian considers his only friend, and it is quite clear that he loves Justin.
I love stories where B and M are good friends, and those anti Michael, but just can not bear to Brian in love with Michael.
I do not want anyone angry with my opinion. We're not here to be angry than to enjoy and have fun. I am a faithful reader for nearly four years, and write just do not know, as it can be seen from the attached.
I really liked your story, really good writing and delight them
read.
I think you should write the way you want.
Thank you very much!
Orhida
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: May 16, 2014 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oh yes, this is great! I thought Brian will never get "his head out of his ass"....!
Author's Response: Thanks...Good thing he was so hot cause he can be exhausting can't he?
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2014 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 15
Brian stood dumbstruck at the doorway of Debbie's house gripping a pan of green bean casserole--that beginning image was funny to me before I even knew what was coming next! I guess I was expecting hilarity.
The interaction between Brian and Justin in this was great. So fun to see Justin using his tempting wiles to lure Brian back. The dynamic in the grop with Brian and Justin, and Lindsay and Melanie all there was very interesting to see. And again, it's great to see how you weave small things from cannon into the new plot you've created. Can't wait to see what happens now that Jennifer has shown up.
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2014 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 15
Hmmm, I didn't feel like it was anti-Michael. A little possesive on Michael's part, sure, but no more so than in the show. Also, I feel like he brought up a legitimate concern. Of course, I don't like it (personally, i don't like fics where the boys share - I prefer them monogamous myself, but that's just me), but it's still legitimate.
I don't know where you're going to go next, which I guess is the sign of a good story. :)
However, and again this is my own preferance speaking so you do things your way (I'm not trying to be a hater), I feel like if they make tricking a thing in their relationship, then they won't have anything in the long run. Do you know what I mean? Their relationship is still so fragile as it is, since they're both trying to discover who they really are, and it doesn't seem like either of them really WANT to. Justin only did it cause he wanted Brian to commit, and Brian was pissed when Justin did it...So, I don't know, it just doesn't seem like it'd fit the characters you've created.
But that's just my opinion.
Anyways, I really am liking your story and I am anxious to read more. And I'm sure I don't NEED to say this, but I'm going to anyways because your note at the end got me thinking.
I recently wrote a fic where I felt like I was constantly having to defend myself to the people who didn't like it, as if I was forcing them to read it. So, if people don't like the way you portray Michael, don't waste your time defending yourself. I wish I hadn't. It's their choice to read it or not and this is your fic, so write it the way you want.
So...After that LONG rant... Keep up the good work!
<3
Author's Response: It really wasn't anti-Michael his character is just anti-brian/justin which tends to spur anti-Michael sentiment in the fandom. This is why I started my comment saying "Still not intending to be...." I actually like the character of Michael in the series although I do like him less than others and understand the part of the fandom that dislikes him.
I am glad you are enjoying it and I totally agree with most of your statements. I do write for me but sometimes comments give me good ideas or new things to consider so I don't mind the occasional negative comment or push back on how I am portraying the characters. I usually do a rough outline of an entire story before I even begin so I don't get distracted. This story hasn't strayed from the original plan dispite any influences or suggestions I have gotten.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: bonef (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2014 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 15
So, the author plans to be anti Mikey just because some of the fans say so. Guess this is where I gey off. Don't need to read stories where the author haters are allowed to influence things. And I DO blame the author.
Author's Response: So the comment was more of a joke for some of my twitter friends who are very anti-Mikey. You are certainly welcome to stop reading but I wouldn't get too worried about this story getting truly anti-Michael, chapter 15 is about as anti-Mikey as it's going to get.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2014 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 15
What a complicated story premise. Not only is Justin struggling to 'come of age' but in essence, Brian is too. I like your portrayal of a strong, almost agressive Justin - it's refreshing. Now, if you could just give Brian a little more of his usual self-confidence, I think they might figure out how to be happy. Thanks for writing this entertaining story. TAG
Author's Response: Stay tuned, Brian will start to gain some confidence with his new job.
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2014 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 14
Hit by Michael, I would do the same.
Orhida
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2014 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm loving your story I really didn't like that rough sex I actually started to tear up but who cares this is the best I've read
Reviewer: aurelie (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2014 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 14
what i really find a little bit ooc is that i seems that the love and intimity seems to be for lindsay and there is just the sex foer Justin.In canon , Brian even proposed marriage to justin , it is obvious that his love for lindsay is never that powerfully as you described in your story.Brian loved justin both sexually and emotionally , he just showed it in his love acts. I still there is manipulative Lindsay in your story , who is trying to mend her way in the divorce settlement.On the other hand i like your writtings , i think it is subtle and extremely haunting
Author's Response: Thanks Aurelie for your compliment to my writing. It's truly appreciated. Since this story is AU and has a straight Brian, everyone is OOC to suit the plot to some degree. Brian-Lindsay relationship is stronger in my story than in the series intentionally to reflect a man and woman who have been married for several years and raising a child together. Brian-Justin relationship is less developed than the series intentionally as I was attempting to base reactions purely on the AU I created with influences from S1 where there was less love and more just physical attraction/lust primarily on Brian's side. I hope you enjoy the upcoming developments where you will start to appreciate the love between our boys. Again, thanks for your passionate response and comments.
Reviewer: aurelie (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2014 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
But still, i just think that Lindsay had never been an angel in QAF , she knew what she was doing from the beginning , she has some dark sides in her and she proved it by having sex with sam.For me , she is a manipulator , sometimes i just prefer mikey in the whole story. She is bisexual and bipolar and she still had something for Brian. For me ,she knew what she was doing what she was doing when she sent Justin to New York , she wanted the power to decide about Brian life that is why she completly screwed up his chances of being happy with Justin. Nothing will make me like lindsay , I am allergic to her . But meanwhile congratulation your story is different from the other and initiate interest, please update as soon as possible
Reviewer: Aurelie (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2014 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
But still, i just think that Lindsay had never been an angel in QAF , she knew what she was doing from the beginning , she has some dark sides in her and she proved it by having sex with sam.For me , she is a manipulator , sometimes i just prefer mikey in the whole story. She is bisexual and bipolar and she still had something for Brian. For me ,she knew what she was doing what she was doing when she sent Justin to New York , she wanted the power to decide about Brian life that is why she completly screwed up his chances of being happy with Justin. Nothing will make me like lindsay , I am allergic to her . But meanwhile congratulation your story is different from the other and initiate interest, please update as soon as possible
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2014 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 14
Loving this story. But things seem to be hgoing a bit too well. Is another shoe going to drop?
Reviewer: aurelie (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2014 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
lindsay wll never be justin .I am anti-lindsay believer and i think that at the end of QAF, the authors made us discover the real Lindsay , i mean the jealous one , i will even say the linsay bipolar one. That is why i found it a little OOC because perhabs i am an anti-Lindsay purist.But on the whole, your story is absolutely brillant, thanks so much for writting such a great story . The rough sex scene was just pure beauty.Please, please continue to give us such delicious writtings
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. While I realize that many in the fandom share your view of Lindsay as motivated by jeolousy particularly in the final episodes where she interfered before the wedding, I honestly think she was motivated by her knowledge of Brian. IMO she felt Justin could suceed in NY and she knew Brian would never be happy if he found out Justin had given that up to stay with him.
That being said, in the context of this story, Lindsay is deeply in love with Brian but also realizes that he's becoming a shadow of the man she first new. It's not written expressly but I considered that Lindsay is aware of Brian's father's disdain for his "family man" life and Joan's cold, uncaring response. She let's him go because she doesn't want Gus to suffer as Brian did as a child with miserable parents. This is what I am using to drive Lindsay's reactions in the story.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2014 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 14
"...the one he associated with hope. It was the same feeling he got when he was with Justin." And I hope, he saw daylight with this thought. But I'm afraid it's more complicated. ;) Please, hurry, so we can read the drama at Thanksgiving at Debbies.
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2014 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 14
This is an amazing opportunity for a new start for Brian. I hope he doesn't waste it, and doesn't wreck poor Justin with much more of this "I don't believe in love" routine. I love how honestly and kindly, yet sadly, Brian and Lindsay talked about their break up. I can't wait to see what happens the first time EVERYBODY is corralled together into one space by Debbie, lol.
Author's Response: Thanks for your many thoughtful comments. I am so glad you are enjoying it. Thanksgiving chapter in progress....stay tuned.
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2014 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow! That was some chapter! So much happened. I loved the topJustin scene. The way he talked Brian through it and was so caring and attentive was really sweet but also sexy. And then at the end when Brian was all nervously asking if Justin "liked that way better?" was so funny and adorable, since he obviosly would NOT be happy doing that regularly. Brian's distancing himself later was quite typical, especially I'd think for a man in his position who'd just come out and was being faced with the reprecussions of attaching himself to a seventeen year old boy. So I get where Brian is coming from. I was so excited to read how you mirrored the plot development in the show with the King of Babylon contest and the events after. Very smooth. A highly intriguing chapter. And of course I can't wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response:
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2014 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 11
Justin's expectations are understandable, but then so is Brian's hesitance to commit in such a way. I think you're writing this so perfectly :) I have a feleing Brian's not going to love this switch in positions, if they do go through with it. He seems really hesitant.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2014 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 12
Loving your story
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2014 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
What's Michael doing at Babylon? Shouldn't he and the doc be packing for Portland?
Good job mixing canon with this AU formerly straight Brian at Babylon.
Author's Response: David does all the packing remember....lol.
Reviewer: Silverfish (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2014 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Brilliant story - loving it!! Now we just have to get Brian to understand that Justin IS the ONE for him FOREVER!! He just doesn't know it yet!!
Lisa xx
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2014 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 10
I think you did a great job with VirginBrian. You made a good point in showing how Brian was confident enough sexually in hetero acts, but when it came to the gay sex acts that he'd never done before, he was nervous. It seemed very honest, and I wasn't left gaping at Brian's OOC becasue in this story it fit. It didn't seem OOC at all.
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2014 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
yes, you did very well. unexperienced Brian - i just enjoyed it.
please go on like this. thanks!
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2014 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 8
That's really low that Brian got passed over for the promotion. I could feel his sickening disappointment there. Maybe this latest turn of events will push him into the arms of Justing finally? Though I can't imagine how crazyily he's going to be topping Justin with that leg...
I also suspect that we'll find out a lesbian affair is going on as well ;)
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2014 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 8
oh my.. this is even getting better (or worse?). what will briab do after this betrayal? finally quitt or some kind of self-destructive routine? decesions are around the corner...please give me the next chapter soon ;)
Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2014 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Like it so far, look forward to reading more!
Reviewer: julia005 (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2014 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
At first I didn´t get intriged by the titel of story "Face of god", but as sonn as I began reading I couldn´t stop. This is suspence, this is a woderful twist out of the known material of the show. Great work. Please go on, I´ll enjoy every bit. Thanks!
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2014 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 5
For a mortified teenager, Justin was very brave to come on to Brian like he did! And it looks like Brian has jumped from the frying pan into the fire here, now with Lindsay making the decision that Justin would be better off living with them. Now Brian will really um... suffer ;)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2014 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 5
Lindsay is so clueless!
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2014 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 5
Aww poor brian
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well that was s trong reaction from Craig, to say the least. I can't imagine how hurtful that would be for justin to hear, especially since he definately didn't seem to anticipate his father reacting that badly.
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
Well I can see that Brian and Lindsay's marriage is quite a neutral one, not very picturesque when it comes down to it. I am glad to see that you try to show that despite the lack of passion, that these two do care for each other at least.
Author's Response: Thanks. This story is not going to be anti-Lindsay. I am definetly trying to preserve the canon relationship the two had and portray what I feel would be Brian's true sense of obligation to her would he have gotten her pregnant in a more traditional way ( given his own family background)
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hey this is well-written and I like where it's going so far. Can't wait to read more and thanks for posting!
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