Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2015 01:42 AM · On: Tied Down

All your WIPs (and completed stories) are interesting. I'd like more of this story too and am hoping for an update.

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2015 11:05 PM · On: At School

LOL. A high-protein breakfast at St. James.

Reviewer: Frances (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2015 05:57 PM · On: Tied Down

These stories are so hot.  I hope you do more someday.

Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2015 02:48 PM · On: Tied Down

That was GREAT! 😜

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2015 01:24 PM · On: A Bit of Bondage

The sex sounded hot, but you wrote it like a list. I felt a lack of flow between Brian's actions. Some parts read better than others, like describing Justin waking up. Also, was this meant to be written in the past or present tense, because the narrative kept switching between the two, which was very distracting. You might want to edit this again for clarification and to tidy up other grammatical mistakes. In terms of characterization, I felt Justin was fairly accurate, but Brian varied. The part where he left Justin tied up was plausible, as was him being careful with Justin with regards to the handcuffs, but saying "My sweet Justin''... ? Would Brian really say something like that? Wouldn't he say something more along the lines of ''Sunshine''?

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2015 10:44 PM · On: Tied Down

That was a nice prequel to the previous chapters. Can't wait to read about their reunion post-Ethan

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2015 10:15 PM · On: Push Your Limit

Hot!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 02:12 PM · On: Come To Me

*speechless*

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 04:41 AM · On: Come To Me

I love this one. The sense you get of a backstory as you read was really nice, and the awkward tension of the situation--due to the fact that Justin and Brian are broken up, yet he's come back to have this need met--was fantastic. I thought the line at the very beginning was the perfect way to start this off. I liked the way you portrayed Brian, and I like when Jusitn was like: "I asked Brian once, hoping he knew, but his only response was that I just did and he understood having such a need. (I still don’t know what his need is.)" Great addition to this series!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and caught the feelings in the situation. As far as Brian's need, A Little Shoking

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Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2014 03:38 AM · On: Come To Me

All I can say is, I know EXACTLY how Justin feels and the reason he only trusts Brian to take care of him in such a manner...even if he is technically with Ethan.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2014 04:27 AM · On: The Virgin

That was fun. I thought it might be Justin playing the virgin - so glad it was. Games keep things interesting and couples interested - especially between these two.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2014 08:59 PM · On: The Virgin

I have to admit, you had me going for a minute there. I didn't want to be presumptuous and get ahead of the plot...I'm really glad I didn't ;)

Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2014 08:59 PM · On: The Virgin

What a nice hot surprise!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2014 01:20 AM · On: Whipping Needed

Hot. Great chapter. Now for a shower.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2014 12:11 AM · On: Whipping Needed

Bravo my friend *claps furiously* you have given a beautiful description of what being in subspace (also known as flying) feels like. From a personal standpoint I can fully relate to Justin's response to his erotic flogging ;)

Author's Response:

THank you. I wasn't sure I was expressing it well enough, it's something hard to put into words as you know.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2014 03:52 PM · On: At School

Amazing how Daphne quickly jumped to the right reason.  lol.

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2014 05:45 AM · On: Push Your Limit

Wow, I really liked this one. So kinky! That was quite a unique set up for someone being dominated to be the one who was fucking somebody, but Brian with the whip circling the bed and surveying the action was definately the one in control there! I could nearly feel Justin's pain from that denial and the ring-Yikes! Hope to see more from you in this series. Each oneshot is a little smutty joy to read. It's so fun tosee into these imaginary scenarios that the boys get up to in their bedroom. And as a side, I wonder what Justin may have meant when he said Brian should push his own limits first. Hmmm... what did he mean? What are Brian's limits?

BTW: like the new title for the series.

Reviewer: Soirsagrey (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2014 09:37 PM · On: Push Your Limit

Thought I read a little story before going to bed....

All awake now...

God this was f*cking hot!!!

Need a shower now!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2014 04:58 AM · On: A Little Shocking

Turn about is fair play.  Nice that Brian trusts Justin that much.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2014 04:34 AM · On: A Bit of Bondage

Who knew that Justin was so into bondage and loving it. 

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