Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2019 02:42 PM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 2).

Why is this called Three days in the life... I don't get that.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2019 05:07 AM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 2).

weird

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 10:41 AM · On: DAY TWO. Part Two.

Fucking Lindsey

Reviewer: bellawu (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 06:45 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part three.

Im glad justin found brian on time. And who would hv thought that todd brother is his doctor

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 05:18 AM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 2).

I know you've already written the sequel but, my vote would have been to start again... They grew up to fast, we need more details, more drama and more porn...

Off to find out if I'm right...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Thank you SO much for the reviews.

I'll think about it. I promise.

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 02:55 AM · On: DAY TWO. Part three.

Just one big happy family... Well that is until Lindsay demands her son back...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 02:30 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part three.

Todd's brother - he, he, he... Oh the stories he could tell...

Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 02:21 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part Two.

I don't think that's why the doctors wanted him to come in...

My guess is that Lindsay didn't toss the condom, she stole it and she is also carrying Justin's baby...

I loving this! Now off to the next chapter...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen...

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2014 01:52 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part One.

You go Justin, save your man...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Josie (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2014 12:08 AM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 2).

Please.... what happens next. Love your story.



Author's Response:

Here it is

http://midnightwhispers.ca/viewstory.php?sid=2966

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2014 09:03 PM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 2).

Yes, I want a sequel!



Author's Response:

Sorry, I saw your reviw only now

You can read it here

http://midnightwhispers.ca/viewstory.php?sid=2966

The story is finished, now the next chapter is being proofread

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:36 PM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 2).

This was delightful. I enjoyed both endings.

Author's Response:

Thank you for ALL your reviews!

I loved them SO much!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:34 PM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 1).

????? You definitely have me on my toes with this fic.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:33 PM · On: DAY THREE. Part three.

”I wonder what will happen first: are we going to become fathers or grandfathers?”

LOL!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:29 PM · On: DAY THREE. Part Two.

"I clearly see that it is Bri Jr, and not Justin."

Whew! Teenagers.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:25 PM · On: DAY THREE. Part One.

"(Why, why didn’t I take the drops?)"

Justin and some guy???

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:18 PM · On: DAY TWO. Part three.

It's true that genetics are not always clear. The child could have been Brian's.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:13 PM · On: DAY TWO. Part Two.

"...looking at Mel with obvious disapproval."

What a shame that Lindsay could throw away a child because it was not Brian's. It was still hers. I would be suspect of her raising Gus.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 04:07 PM · On: DAY TWO. Part One.

Loved it. It was chaotic but fun to read.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 03:53 PM · On: DAY ONE. Part Two.

"I’m HIV positive... “

Whoa!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 03:41 PM · On: DAY ONE. Part One.

I liked the spin on Justin catching Ethan in the act.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2014 03:35 PM · On: Prologue

"I am Brian Kinney, aren’t I?"

I loved this first chapter.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2014 07:09 AM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 2).

Hey Natalya.  Sorry you lost some reviews.  I just wanted to come back and let you know how much I enjoyed this fic.  I know I picked option two.  I look forward to you uploading the continuation.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words!

I will repost all lost stories/chapters

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2014 05:29 PM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 1).

Haha.  I think I voted for option 2, but this one is entertaining.

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2014 05:27 AM · On: EPILOGUE (option # 1).

Oh! One of those! Brian, grab the used condoms now, and hide them well!

I enjoyed your story.

Author's Response:

Hide the condoms?! LOL!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2014 11:50 PM · On: DAY THREE. Part three.

Thank goodness you continued this in another story.  It would have driven me crazy wondering what happened.  Do you have to repost that as well.  I certainly wouldn't mind reading it again.



Author's Response:

I will repost everything, but my computer is a big dump/mess/creative space. It's not so easy to find all the chapters quickly

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2014 04:17 PM · On: DAY THREE. Part Two.

How did Justin get home so fast?  I thought he was in Paris.  It can only mean one thing.  Sunshine's knocked up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2014 04:13 PM · On: DAY THREE. Part One.

Brian's too young to be a grandfather.  That makes Jen a great-grandmother!  It's nice to know that the loft has been enlarged.  They sure needed the space.  I thought Justin was in Paris?



Author's Response:

What?! No!

He was there when his son went to Babylon

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2014 04:04 PM · On: DAY TWO. Part three.

It is so nice to see this from Jennifer's side.  While the baby may look like Justin, his behavior in your other story makes me think he's pure Brian.  Looking forward to learning just who is the father of Baby Boy.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2014 05:15 AM · On: DAY TWO. Part Two.

So Lindsay was just going to give the baby up just because she figured out it wasn't Brian's? At least Melanie was smart enough to figure out who the real father was.

Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2014 04:21 AM · On: DAY TWO. Part Two.

HOLY BATMAN!!!!  Lindsey is in for it from Justin once the paternity test is done.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2014 04:09 AM · On: DAY TWO. Part Two.

Woah!  Well that answers that question.  Brian needs to say yes!  There is no time to lose and we know that Justin would not want his child to be given up for adoption.  What a spectacular chapter!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2014 01:58 PM · On: DAY TWO. Part One.

"Do not throw banana peels and slippers at me. I know this is all nonsense and delirium."  Hi Natalya, there is a section called ‘Chapter end notes' if you want to make comments; I'm just trying to help as it doesn't bother me if they are added to the end of the fic.  I like your banner, did you make it?  I really enjoyed this chapter, I love it when an author starts one scene and then goes back to a previous event.  I don't find it necessary to have everything flow in chronological order as sometimes that makes the fic to predictable.   Why is Melanie sad?  Does she think it is Brian's baby, and it only has blue eyes and blond hair because Lindsay has?  Nice update, thank you.

Cheers

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2014 01:19 PM · On: DAY TWO. Part One.

Slippers and banana peels?

They will be such daddies' girls. Are they named yet?

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2014 08:12 AM · On: DAY TWO. Part One.

My question is when will Justin figure out that he now has three children and Lindsay is the mother?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2014 06:28 AM · On: DAY TWO. Part One.

Hold it!  I just notice your lovely banner has three babies!!!  Who had the third baby?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2014 06:26 AM · On: DAY TWO. Part One.

Wow!  You started  this chapter off with a bang.  The twins are girl and Justy is having trouble coping.  lol.  And Brian has started a new company, eaten right, and had the babies without any trouble.  Yay for Brian!!!!  Great chapter.

Reviewer: Silverfish (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2014 07:35 PM · On: Prologue

This is such a great story. I'm really enjoying this take on the MPreg storyline. Obviously Brian just jumped to conclusions when the hospital told him to ring them back and thought it was HIV, but who would think it could be something as bizarre as being pregnant. He was devastated when he found out he'd nearly harmed his and Justin's babies. I really like this idea. Keep up the good work :-)

Lisa xx



Author's Response:

Lisa, thank you for the compliments.

What you wrote IS a brief summary of what I was thinking when I was writing the chapter.

The story was written in September. I hope that I finish the translation of the next chapter tomorrow or on Wednesday.

Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2014 04:32 PM · On: DAY ONE. Part three.

Like the concept of the story so far. Can't wait to read more. :)

Side note: They do not "wash out" your stomach. That's impossible. When someone overdoses on pills, if they haven't digested yet, the doctors pump the stomach. Kind of like medically induced vomiting, but with a tube that goes through the throat and sucks out the contents of your stomach. Here is a webaddress for you to read more.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gastric_lavage

Hope you update again soon. Happy Writing! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the correction!!!

I know what doctors do, but I just couldn't choose the word to describe the process

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2014 11:30 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part three.

I'm so glad that not only Brian survived but the two little embrios he's carrying.  Now that we know who is pregnant, my mind is at ease.  I really want to know where you intend to go with this and look forward to future chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm going to describe three most memorable days of his life

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2014 09:05 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part three.

Poor Brian, I'm sure it's bad of me to laugh at him! 'Now, not later!' I'll sue.

I am enjoying your story a lot.

Author's Response:

Thank you.

They are Justin's children. They can't leave without a lot of (junk) food ;)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2014 08:23 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part three.

What a sigh of relief...but what about Lindsay?

Author's Response:

And what about her? ;)

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2014 08:05 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part Two.

Pregnant AND positive - shit, poor Brian! TAG



Author's Response:

Maybe he just imagined half of his problems?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2014 07:32 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part Two.

OMG!  Brian's pregnant and positive?  And I'm assuming he thinks Justin is too?  When you put in angst you go all out.  That next chapter better be quick!!!!



Author's Response:

I think he didn't think about it.

He just decided that Justin will be better without him.

The next chapter is being proofread right now.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2014 04:54 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part Two.

What???? Okay more and more reasons keep arising that would prevent Brian from keeping the baby...HIV positve...so this means that Lindsay will be the one to have Justin's child, it's just too ironic that both she and Brian are three months along. Or if I'm wrong and she is carrying Brian's baby, then Lindsay needs to get tested asap.

Author's Response:

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 03:48 PM · On: DAY ONE. Part One.

I hope Brian hasn't hurt junior.   Lindsay's pregnant, yay, I hope its Justin's as that means I finally guessed something correctly.  LOL.  Ethan and the roses, I like that touch.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Yes, you guessed something

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2014 08:30 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part One.

More, please! TAG



Author's Response:

Done!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 08:18 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part One.

I take it Brian is pregnant!!!!  But why would he off himself.  I'd say that the sperm donor for Lindsay is a torn condom.  But is it Brian's or Justin's sperm.  Bwaaahaa.

Love your kinky fantasy!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliments :)

As for "why would he do it"... You may read further and see ;)

Reviewer: susan (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2014 08:13 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part One.

OMG poor brian:( update soon i am verry intrigued.

Author's Response:

Done!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 07:06 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part One.

I certainly hope Brian is not the one who's pregnant because if so, there is zero chance the baby will survive after he's swallowed a bottle of sleeping pills followed by any amount of whiskey. :(

Author's Response:

What can I say? It's AU and my fantasy

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 05:33 AM · On: DAY ONE. Part One.

Hello, Natalya!  I got your name right this time - ha!  Sorry about that, my friend.  Such drama here! OMG, are you trying to tell us that both Brian AND Lindsay are going to wind up pregnant here? What a fun mess THAT would be - LOL!

Favorite line, BTW, was when you described George as a "gerontological mistake" - ha!  Although I did find him sweet and attentive to Emmett. What a way to go, too, in the airplane stall!

Looking forward to finding out all the twists and turns to this!  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

A "gerontological mistake" is what my character thinks, not me.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2014 07:05 PM · On: Prologue

Interesting beginning, Natalya!! Well, I would say it has to be either B or J since you have "mpreg" up as one of the categories, so that lets Lindsay out.;)  Looking forward to reading the rest. *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

LOL! LOL! LOL!

Now I'm not going to say who is pregnant ;)

PS. I'm not Lena :) I'm Natalya 

Oops!  Sorry about that,  Natalya.  Been reading too many stories - ha!   I corrected  it.:-) ~ Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2014 12:16 PM · On: Prologue

OMG, that will be too funny if Lindsay and Brian both end up having Justin's babies.  They would be twins.  Curious how Lindsay would have inserted the cum.  Yuck, LOL.  Please update as soon as you can.

Cheers



Author's Response:

I'll do my best. But I'm not going to say if your guess is right ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2014 09:12 AM · On: Prologue

I see this going three ways.  One- Brian turns up pregnant.  two- Justin turns up pregnant.  three-Lindsay turns up pregnant.  I'm dying to find out which way 'you' went with this story.  A brilliant start.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! But I'm not going to say, if any of your guesses were right. There should be some kind of intrigue, don't you think? ;)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2014 08:27 AM · On: Prologue

More...please :)

Author's Response:

I'll do my best

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2014 07:19 AM · On: Prologue

A fun start. Would like to find out who is pregnant. Please update soon

Author's Response:

I'll ry to translate it as quickly as possible

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2014 07:02 AM · On: Prologue

Interesting premise. Can't wait to read the rest. TAG



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it

You must login (register) to review.

All stories written are copyright of the authors and cannot be moved without the author's permission.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.

All content copyright © 2016 and beyond


Skin designed by Sally Anderson. Brushes by Miss M. Bamboo photography © 2004 ManixTT, All Rights Reserved.