Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2019 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
good one
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2013 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
I thought I recognized this banner as it's the one you used for "Was It a Dream Or ...". Immediately seeing it I knew this was your fic even without seeing your name. We purchased a Dreamcatcher while visiting the US and it still hangs in our house today. I love the idea behind your fic, it's very unique. So often we see the same thing written over and over again. I really enjoyed this and I love the originality of it. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thanks Flossee for the wonderful comment. I was playing a game called Dreamcatchers: The Sandman Chronicles when this story popped into my head. It took a while to write but I think it turned out great. Thanks again.
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2013 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is an interesting nice story. I enjoyed reading it. Very much so. Thank you. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely comment. I enjoyed writing it. Now on the other one I started.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2013 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very intriguing story you have shared with us! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks Jane for the comment. I loved writing it. Just to let you know we share the same name.
Jane
Reviewer: Debv3 (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2013 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story!! Just a quick note...in this paragraph you say Hobbs wants to rid the world of homophobes--- I think you mean homosexuals- a homophobe is what Hobbs is.... If I recall English is not your first language? Over all great story! I love Gremlin Gus.
"It was at the same time that a school mate of Justin’s had it out for him since he came out of the closet. It was the first time that Brian dropped Justin off at school. Brian had parked his jeep outside the loft and when he went to get into it, the word, ‘faggot’ was spray painted on the passenger side. Everyone at Justin’s school saw this and knew that Justin was a queer. Chris Hobbs was ready to perform his civic duty in getting rid of the homophobes in this country even if he did it one person at a time."
Author's Response: Thanks Deb for pointing out that mistake. I don't know what I was typing at the time when I did that. Thanks for the lovely comment. I thought Gus would make a great gremlin.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2013 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
An interesting tale in which you managed to weave many of the characters.
Author's Response: Would you believe this was written from a game called Dreamcatchers? Then I thought of when Justin was in a coma and it seemed to write itself. This was definitely an adventure in the making. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2013 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow - an 18k one shot? That's impressive. I can't wait to start reading. I'm a sucker for long stories! ;)
TAG
Author's Response: Thanks Tag. I hate putting stories into chapters if I can help it. I hoped it would work and it did. Happy reading.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2013 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
My two favorite men and my favorite painting in the same story. Doesn't get much better. Thank you.
A few minor mistakes (Justin should be on his right side, not his left in the last part) and a couple of spelling errors, but I love the story.
Author's Response: Thanks Lorie for pointing those mistakes out. I loved writing this one. Thanks again.
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