Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Ghost of a Chance
Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2016 04:08 PM · On: Soulmates

I think I like the sequel even better, and I really liked the original :)

I'm a Mysterious Marilyn fan!



Author's Response:

Hi, Kathy! I loved Mysterious Marilyn's snarkiness.  :)  Thought she would be a perfect medium for this story.  So glad you liked it!  Thanks so much for reading, and for the comments,my friend.  Have fun at Cabaret!!  ~Kim

Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2014 07:08 PM · On: Soulmates

This tale was wonderful. He sure was one  heck of a house guest lol. Emmett hoping they give Godiva hello from him made me warm and fuzzy. I love little details like that you always put in your fics. Brian confirming he's his soulmate made me even warmer and fuzzier. :) 

Also, I tried to email you yesterday but I'm not sure if it went through. I'm convinced yahoo hates me. Anywho, thanks for this tale. ~hugs~



Author's Response:

Hi, Mandi! Thank you again for reading this one, and for your comments on this and on "A Haunting We Will Go."  I am so honored that you have chosne to read them, my friend.:)  I loved Mysterious Marilyn's character on the show, especially in Ep 110.;) 

BTW, unless there's a major gap between transmission & receipt, I didn't get your email.   But I am SO happy to see you back on here. I have thought about you often, and wondered how you were, so I do hope you are doing well.  I can't wait to see what you come up with for new stories! I do hope there will be some coming up. No one writes the beautiful way that you do, and I have so missed that.  Thanks again for reading, and for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2013 01:56 AM · On: Soulmates

I absolutely LOVED the ending!!!! T_T It was very romantic! For a moment there, I thought that Nathaniel was going to possess somebody on the table or something.... :S But I'm glad that everything worked out in the end! Fantastic story, Kim! ^-^ I'll be reading you soon in your other stories! Kisses!



Author's Response:

Hi, Fátima!  I am always so happy to see your comments.;) Thank you for reading, and for the feedback, my friend.  I'm happy that you enjoyed the story, and particularly the romantic ending.;) Brian is just hard to resist, isn't he?  LOL!  I do hope you get a chance to read my other updates as well.  I should be posting the next part of "The Father, The Son, and The Blond" sometime later today, too. Thanks again.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2013 08:38 AM · On: Soulmates

Brian was a riot. And I know it was not so spooky to you, but I lost count on how many times I tried to read this story and was interrupted for one reason or another, strange. Anywho, I enjoyed and loved the comical aspects of it. You outdid yourself with Brian's snarky remarks.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment; that means so much to me.  I'm glad you hung in there with it.  I had fun trying to come up with the right comments for Brian; I'm happy that you liked them.  Thank you for all the support, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 09:37 AM · On: Soulmates

Very supernatural and enjoyable. Just spooky enough, I'm not into harsh scares anymore. Great pic of the gravestone.



Author's Response:

Hi, Jon!  I was in the mood for something humorous for a change.  I'm dying to go back to a funny, light one.  I'm hoping to wrap up maybe a couple of stories soon, so maybe that will help free up some of my time. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment, my friend; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 06:06 AM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

oh wow! That so you're hot to them dead or alive  line had me laughing hysterically ...that was so funny...great chapter



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that line!  Yep, that's Brian - stud to all, heart beating or not - ha!  So happy that you're enjoying it, Jon. Thank you for reading and especially for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2013 05:16 AM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

A highly engaging story and I love the pictures and little details like the  octagon room and the description of the old woman Phyllis. Great story so far!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Well, it's pretty near impossible to get to your level of vivid imagination, but I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the comments, Jon.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 11:45 PM · On: Soulmates

Great chapter and story! I've enjoyed reading it and was so happy to see this update. :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari! Thank you for reading and for all the comments! So happy that you enjoyed it.  Thank you for the support. *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2013 09:37 PM · On: Soulmates

I am so happy that i read your not- so- spooky tale, it was so much fun, so many lol moments i especially adored the antics of mysterious marylin and emmet....but the part i loved the most were the touching moments between our boys..and them admitting to each other that they re soulmates in this life and beyond.....a very satiflsfying read indeed...
Thanks for sharing,
Hugs, Kimi



Author's Response:

Hi, Kimi!  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; I appreciate that.;)  I'm glad that you gave this one a shot, and didn't let the partial spookiness scare you away.;) And I'm delighted that you enjoyed the romantic ending.;)  Thank you again for the feedback.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 11:43 AM · On: Soulmates

Completed; N is now a Y.  How sad.  I love your fun Brian, he has such a quick wit.  I love the hilarity and romantic; thank you.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for all the comments, Flossee!  It was greatly appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 09:42 AM · On: Soulmates

    Thanks so much, it was a wonderful story.  It flowed


beautifully from chapter 1 until the end.  Some/many of the


lines were hilarious.  Yes, I don’t want to repeat it, but he does


look like “dead man walking.”


    Thanks again, it really was a terrific Halloween story, good


enough for a story for any time.


    DavidR


 



Author's Response:

Hi, David!  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that, and I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.  I will have to take your word for the 'Dead Man Walking' references.':)  I am aware of the show, but I don't even have cable, so I have never seen the show to tell you the truth.  Thanks again!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 09:26 AM · On: When the Rubber Hits the Road...Or the Case of the Missing Condoms

I loved this so much. I love supernatural stories and this was perfect for a Britin story. I love reading your stories. Thanks for the spook.

Jane

Author's Response:

Hi, Jane! Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments; I really appreciate that!  I was in the mood for a Halloween tale, but thought humorous was the way to go.;)  I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you for letting me know, and for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 08:54 AM · On: Soulmates

A wonderful story, Kim!

You could dispense the right amount of fright and humaor and a large portion of romance.

I'm smiling so far by Brian admit that Justin is his soulmate. It was so amazing that I can not find the correct way to describe how I felt happy to read this.

A big hug, my dear friend.

Fatima.

 



Author's Response:

Oi, Dear! Obrigado por ler esta história e por seus comentários encantadores. Eu sempre posso contar com seu apoio. Fico feliz que você tenha gostado do último capítulo. Todos (mortos e vivos!) Estava feliz até o final.;) Obrigado pelo feedback, Fátima. Espero que tenha tido um aniversário maravilhoso! * Abraços * ~ Kim

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2013 08:47 AM · On: Soulmates

Nice chapter, just the right mix of giggles, shivers, Hawt, and nelly queen tears because Brian admitted they are soul mates!

I looked it up and Kiki was Greg Campbell. I think they both have the same kind of long and craggy face.

Thank you for posting.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for your comments; craggy is a very accurate description of the face, too! Certainly fits.  Thanks again for taking the time to review. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 08:15 AM · On: Soulmates

What a wonderfully touching conclusion :) I love a tenderhearted Brian and Asa and The good Captain's reunion was absolutely romantic (in an otherworldly kind of way)

Thank you for sharing this with us Kim ;)

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Thank YOU for reading and for always being so supportive; that means a lot to me.  I'm happy that you enjoyed it. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 06:58 AM · On: Soulmates

Ew, ew, ew - jumping up and down with joy - a sceance!!!  Always wanted to attend one.  Not surprised that Emmett wanted to know about Natalie.  It seemed like Brian was the only one Nathaniel would listen to.  And I love the tomb stone.  It was the perfect ending to this not so scary, but definately spooky, story.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for the comments and for reading.  I think Emmett and Justin would have found a seance quite intriguing, while big, bad, Brian would do his best not to appear affected (even though we know better!).  Glad you liked the tombstone - took me a while to get that just right.  I think the inscription was fitting considering Nathaniel's love of the water (and his long-lost love). Thanks again for taking the time to review; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 06:29 AM · On: Soulmates

really enjoyed this little bit of whimsy - and loved Brian coming to grips with Justin being his soulmate - so sweet - yet still done Brian's way

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle! Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  I think Justin will remember that little speech for a long time to come.;)  Thanks so much for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2013 05:42 AM · On: "Mine"

this chapter gave me chills............spooky.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for commenting. I hope you'll hang in there - it will be much more on the humorous than the spooky side, promise!  In either case, thank you for taking the time to review; I appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 04:46 AM · On: Soulmates

I have been reading this, honest! But real life conspired against me and didn't allow me time to review.

Anyway, I loved this (as per usual) and the inclusion of Emmett.



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki!  That's okay, I'm just glad you enjoyed it and left a comment. Thank you for reading! *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2013 04:12 AM · On: Soulmates

wonderful ending to the story-every one happy and united, put to rest and at ease. All of us are good. I have decided not to become a mom. I guess I am too settled in my weird little life to have to be responsible for a child as all my patients are my family for a time. I think I would fail miserably. BB said no but I think I am getting long in the tooth to start . Lee is good. He healthy finally. I have told him I am going to wrap him in armor and his Hummer so he will be safe. The boy has nine lives-thank God. I see Gale is making a lot of Indie movies. If you watch Glee this week my other fav Adam is on. I haven't caught up with Randy's schedule lately-what is he up tp as I know you keep up to date with him. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  Thank you for reading this one and for the comments, my friend.  I am glad to hear how well Lee is doing now.  I can understand your decision.  That is a huge responsibility, but you are so compassionate and caring I think you would be a great mom.;)  In a way, it's kind of like me and wanting to have another dog.  I LOVE dogs, and I miss having one terribly. But they also tie you down and are expensive. So for now I will just dog sit - ha!  I'm sure the hospital is very lucky to have you with the type of person you are, though, whether you become a mom or not.;)

As for Randy, he's been on the quiet side since Harbor. He was in a performance with QWAN in NYC on Labor Day, and went to a small, private fan convention in London in mid-October.  Just celebrated his birthday yesterday!  I hope he does another play before Bilbao at the end of March.  I'm going to that!  It's in Spain, and I'll be gone during my spring break.  He's supposed to be there with Gale, Peter, and Scott. Should be a lot of fun (if he doesn't wind up with a commitment; I'm keeping my fingers crossed).  But I do hope he'll do another play before March.  I would definitely try to go to that if he does.

And I DID see where Adam is going to be on  Glee Thursday; will definitely watch that ep! Thanks again for all the support, lindc. Tell Lee My Heart's Desire is up next; I'm working on Fin's acceptance speech right now.;)  Tell him and Brian that I said hello and send my love to them (and to you).  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 04:04 AM · On: Soulmates

Spooky seance and nice description of it.  If that's what 'we' have to do to get Brian that he admits Justin is his soulmate, then, so be it!  Nice job.

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, my friend.  Thank you for reading and for the comments; glad you enjoyed the seance and Brian's admission.;)  Thanks for the support! Now back to my 'regularly scheduled programming' - "My Heart's Desire" is up next.;) *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 02:23 AM · On: Soulmates

Hi Kim, This chapter was too funny, I can’t tell you how many times I cracked up. Loved the banter between MM and Brian, Brian was his usual snarky self but MM was up to the challenge, so to speak – HA ; ) I remember that episode of I love Lucy, one of my favorites in fact.  

A spooktacular ending to a fun story (LOL, couldn’t resist throwing at least one more pun in there ; ) ) Hugs ~ Janet   



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  Yeah, I confess to being an "I Love Lucy" fanatic, and I can see that man's face clearly as I'm writing this. Took me a few seconds to remember the dog's name, though.;)  I'm so glad you enjoyed this; thanks for reading and for your comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2013 02:01 AM · On: When the Rubber Hits the Road...Or the Case of the Missing Condoms

Didn't the last story talk about Brian and Justin being monogamous? Why are they worried about doing it raw?



Author's Response:

Well, I checked and I may be wrong, but I didn't see a specific mention about that.  I don't think I specifically mentioned whether or not Brian had a condom when they had sex.  I'm sorry if that detracted from your enjoyment of this story. 

Reviewer: Julie (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2013 01:57 AM · On: Soulmates

Great story, Kim!  



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comments and for reading, Julie!  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2013 01:38 AM · On: Soulmates

Such a fun story! I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Deb.;) Always good to hear from you.  Thank you for reading and for the comments; I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2013 01:14 AM · On: Soulmates

Fantastic ending! Loved the humor too :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Julieta!  I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and for your comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2013 03:11 PM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

Oh I love MM. Remember I had his character in my very first and only one completed Fic. Hahaha! Oh how I wish I can add more fics, but it seems my work made me mentally out of words or maybe I just need a muse :)

Update the soonest sweetie, I love to see what MM can do with B/J naughty ghost. {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy! Well, I'm happy to report that I have finished the story and should be able to get the last part posted sometime later today.  I, too, love Mysterious Marilyn's snarkiness. That will continue in the next/last chapter. Thanks again for reading and for all the comments, my friend!  It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2013 02:59 PM · On: How Boo You Do?

I was laughing much on the part wherein the ghost is trying to give Brian a rim job. OMG....really?!? I can only see the reaction of Brian; for sure that will be an hilarious experience he will ever encounter in his whole sex life! This chapter is really funny sweet Kim! Thanks for making my days lovely with your stories. {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend. Poor Brian - he's just a sex magnet - ha!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this.  Thanks for all the support. *Hugs* back.  ~Kim

Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2013 12:27 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

Lo ving  this fic, esp how you combine the creepy with the right mix of fun, in the tradition of haloween......MM seems very capable im glad they roped her into it...Brian is right though Marylin Manson does look scarier :)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading and especially taking the time to comment; I greatly appreciate that.  And it's great that you feel this has the right mix of spookiness and humor.;)  I'm trying not to make it too dark, so hopefully I'm succeeding.  I am working on the conclusion right now; I will try to have it posted tomorrow. Thank you again for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2013 12:10 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

Ok, a ghostly  rimjob has a really nice ring to it no ??? This was hysterical and Justin gettig jealous of the ghost was so adorable.....enjoyed the chapter alot



Author's Response:

Hello, my friend! Thank you for reading my story and for the comments.;) Well, if Brian had 'indulged himself,' it would have been a new experience at least - ha!  And poor Justin - had to fight someone he can't see.  He can be feisty, though; I like that in him!  So glad you're enjoying this.  I'm working on the conclusion now; probably won't have it up until maybe tomorrow.  Thank you again for the comments and for reading; it is greatly appreciated.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 08:59 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

I love Marilyn ... "I don't write this, I just say the lines" or something like that.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

I do, too!  I love the snarkiness.  And I can still see Daphne's expression on her face when she tells Brian that Justin stole his credit card before she can tell him herself - ha!  Thanks for reading and for the comments!  More hopefully tonight.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 08:53 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

Hot and sexy.  A ghostly rim job, eh?  OK.  That'd be really creepy, all right.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - well, it could be kinky, I guess, if, as Brian said, he wasn't scared half out of his mind (of course, he wouldn't divulge that to Justin.);)  Thanks for reading and for the comments!  Still trying to find the name of the gym, BTW.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 05:26 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

Hi Kim, Oh this is gettting interesting, not that it wasn't before ; ) I wonder what Mysterious Marilyn will have to say about the good Captain. Looking forward to the next update : ) Hugs ~ Janet



Author's Response:

Thanks, Janet!  I'm not sure how 'serious' this encounter will be; the way it's going, I don't think this is going to go quite the way everyone hopes - ha!  More drastic measures may need to be taken.;)  Thanks so much for reading and for the comments.  Happy Halloween!:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 03:46 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

I'm absolutely LOVING this fic!! ^-^ I kept trying to be quiet and stifle the laughter that was threatening to come out... I'm at work right now..... :) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!! Please, let it be soon! Happy Halloween, Kim! Kisses!



Author's Response:

Hi, Fátima! Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend!  I have been wanting to do a humorous story for a while, and this inspiration hit me so I decided to write about it. It's turn out a LOT longer than I had anticipated, though, and I know I have to get back to my other stories. I don't think it will be too long, though, but I also think things won't go as smoothly as Mysterious Marilyn seems to think they will.  What would be the fun in that?  LOL!  Thanks again for the feedback, Fátima; it is most appreciated.  Not sure if I'll have an update later tonight, but if not it should be sometime tomorrow.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2013 12:18 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

Oh this is goood.  I like how you drew Em in and then had him suggest Mysterious Marilyn.  It all fits perfectly.  I always wondered what MM did when she was not at Woody's.  Now how is she going to work her magic on the haunted house?



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  I remember Emmett in that one scene where he told everyone not to sew his mouth shut when he died because he wanted to talk to Natalie Wood.  I think putting him with Mysterious Marilyn could be dangerous - LOL! So glad that you're enjoying this! Thank you for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2013 10:47 PM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

hahaha! i am really enjoying this!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Julieta! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2013 07:05 PM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

M&M to the rescue. I always thought she, he was a great character on the show. This will be interesting to see her wrestle with the intruder. You go M&M.

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc!  I loved her character on the show, too.  Not sure if it's a good idea to mix her up with Emmett, though - ha!  I see all sorts of possibilities with that pairing.;)  I'm going to try and get another part up today; if not, should be up sometime tomorrow. Thank you for all the support! Tell everyone I said hi.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 04:00 PM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

I can't wait for the hilarity as they exorcise some lily white ghost butt.  Yay, MM's arrived.  I love M&M's and now you mentioned them I want some.  LOL  Why don't we have a holiday where you get free candy.  LOL Happy Halloween.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee! Thanks for continiuing to read and review; I really appreciate that.  And if they had a 'free candy' holiday, I would weigh two tons - ha!  So we'd better not petition the government for one of those - I have no willpower.:)  I'm trying furiously to get this story wrapped up - I never thought it would go on this long - ha!  But I hope to have the next part up today - have most of that one written. Thanks again for the comments!  Happy Halloween to you, too.;)  ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 09:28 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

I love the friendship of Justin and Emmett. Emi Lou, after Brian and Justin is my favorite character of the show.

She was eager for input Mysterious Marilyn in history. I'm very curious to know what you have in store for the next chapters.

I am now with a question: Mysterious Marilyn is not a drag queen? I was sure it was.

Well, waiting for their continued entertaining ghost story.

A big hug, sweetie!

Fatima.

 



Author's Response:

Olá, meu amigo - Eu também gosto de escrever sobre Emmett e amizade de Justin. Eu gostaria que eles tivessem exercido essa mais sobre o show.;) E sim, eu tinha que verificar, mas o homem desempenhou o papel de Mysterious Marilyn, por isso ela foi, de fato, no arrasto. Eu apenas pensei que seria mais fácil de mantê-la como ela, no entanto.;) Eu estou contente que você está gostando da história, Fátima! Obrigado pela leitura e pelos comentários. * Abraços * Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 09:00 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

Well Kim, I'm sure that garlic works with vampires. With ghosts for me is new.

Brian received a job as a ghost ring should be something he ever imagined. It was very fun to read, keep laughing until now.

I think Justin should start researching ways to evict your unwelcome competitor. He could burn verbena throughout Britin to expel the spirit of Captain and holy water can also help.

Now never use a Ouija board it can be very dangerous if you do not know what you're doing.

There is a method that according to the "experts" is effective in evicting unwanted spirits called "Lesser Ritual of the Pentagram". My advice as a witch on duty, is closed for now.

Now, if everything fails, it is better to conform and Justin try a menage a trois with the ghost, that has nothing sweet and innocent Casper.

A big hug, darling!

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Oi, Fátima! Bem, eu não tenho certeza de que Justin é agradável para um ménage à trois. Acho que ele quer Brian só para ele :) Teremos que ver se Mysterious Marilyn é bem sucedida ou não;) Muito obrigado pela leitura e pelos comentários, meu amigo;!. *. Hugs * ~ Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 08:13 AM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

Very good chapter, Kim!

Justin jealous ghost was very good. Poor Justin, Brian have beside you is really very difficult. Now the competition reached the supernatural world.

I love the movie "Ghostbusters" undoubtedly is a very entertaining movie and reminds me of my childhood and adolescence. The music never leaves my head.

Hugs, dear!

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Olá, meu amigo! Estou feliz que você está gostando dessa história. E sim, eu adoraria fazer Justin ciúmes;) Eu fui para o You Tube hoje cedo para jogar o tema Ghostbusters -.. Música muito cativante;) "Um homem invisível - dormir na minha cama" - ha! Que se encaixa.;)

Obrigado pela leitura e pelos comentários, meu amigo. * Abraços * ~ Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 08:02 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

M and M has entered the building...or story! :)  Now things will get rocking!  M and M is one of my favorite secondary characters in the QAF series.  

I'm really enjoying this story.  You have a great writing style.



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari! Thank you so much; what a lovely thing to say. I really appreciate that.;) 

I loved her character, too; loved the snarkiness - I can still see Daphne's perplexed look when she tells Brian that Justin stole his credit card - after Marilyn says the same thing - LOL! . The antics are going to continue in the next chapter - can anyone say 'seance?' (hint, hint). Will it do any good, though?  And what a group to be having one - ha!  Thank you for reading and for the comments; that is so motivating to me.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2013 07:47 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

Mysterious Marilyn is an odd character in QAF, which is usually grittily plain and sexual.


Although, I always thought she was a drag queen. Now I have to see if Wikipedia lists her character to see who portrayed her.

Another good chapter of mixed shivers and giggles. Thank you for posting.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the comments!  BTW, you are correct; I googled it, and a man by the name of Kent Staines was supposed to have played her.  If you look at his photo, it's hard to even imagine him being the actor, but that's what it says.  Wasn't it the same person who played Kiki in the diner?  I think it was the same person, but I'm not sure.  So I guess the 'she' really is a he as you said.;)  I'll have to ask everyone to suspend their prior knowledge for this, then.;)

Very glad you're enjoying this. Thanks again for all the feedback.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 05:17 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

Your MM is perfect. This was my favorite chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sandra!  I tried to make her as close as possible to the wisecracker she was on the show. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thought I succeeded! Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 05:03 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

You had me going there for a while. I thought Justin was going to be possessed by the ghost.

Ha! I loved the ghostly rim job.

I had to read this when there was still daylight. I'm loving this story, but I usually avoid ghost stories.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Well, I promise it won't be scary - I'm definitely going for the fun factor here.;)  I just posted the next chapter; Marilyn and Em are finally on the scene.;)  Hope you continue to enjoy it.  Thank you for reading and for the comments!  I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2013 04:40 AM · On: Is There an Astrologist in the House??

Ahh...gotta love Mysterious Marylin haha! I wonder exactly what she has up her queenly sleeve, and if it's going to be enough to get rid of Captain hotpants :)

Author's Response:

Captain Hotpants - love it!  LOL!  Well, I fear this next part will be more of a comedy of errors, rather than a honest-to-goodness exorcism.  But I guess that's the fun in it.;) Thanks so much for reading and for all the comments, Tamara; I really do appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2013 11:13 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

ROFLMAO  A rim job from a ghost.  That's just hilarious.  I don't know how you wrote that Kim as I would have been laughing so hard that typing would have been impossible.  I wish Brian had just gone with it.  LOL

Cheers



Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee!  Yeah, Brian might have been tempted if he hadn't been scared half out of his mind.;)  Poor man - attracts them all, doesn't he?  LOL!  Wonder how cold that guy's tongue had to be.;)  Glad you are still enjoying the story.;)  I will have the next part coming up later today - Justin's about to get some, uh, reinforcements; this should get interesting now.;)  Thanks for reading and for all the comments; it is much appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2013 10:59 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

Hi Kim, Loved the chapter title, that was cute.I Can’t wait to find out how Justin “educates” Brian’s ghostly suitor and what the ghost will try next. He’s definitely not Casper, that’s for sure ; ) Great chapter : ) Hugs ~ Janet

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - glad you liked the title; I've been having to wrack my brain over story titles - ha!  Justin's about to get some reinforcements coming up; not sure if they will help or hinder, though.;)  Thanks so much for reading and for the comments, my friend; I will get another chapter up later today.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2013 09:44 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

Mirrors, garlic?  I thought those were for vampires.  What's that ghost thinking, trying to give Brian a rim job!!!  What will Justin do while Brian's in his meeting?   A little more research?



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Well, Justin WILL be pursuing another way to get rid of their unwelcome guest, but I'm not sure how much help it will be - LOL!  We're about to find out, though.;)  As for the garlic and mirrors, I thought so, too, but from the 'research' I've been doing they're supposed to work for ghosts, too; something tells me it won't quite be that easy with this ghost, though.;)

 

I will get another part posted later today.  Thank you so much for continuing to read and comment; that means so much to me.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2013 08:30 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

I never knew there so many superstitions on how to fight ghosts.

This is interesting, love how Justin blackmails Brian.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments!  Well, things aren't quite going the way that Justin had hoped; he's about to call in some backup - and oh, what a group this is going to be - LOL! Will post another part of this tomorrow. So glad you're enjoying it. Thanks again for the feedback.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2013 06:50 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

Love this!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Julieta!  So happy you're enjoying it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2013 06:17 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

Hehehehehehe!  An almost threesome with a ghost! Justin was not amused or very happy with the ghostly goings on.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari! Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.  Yeah,  I think our little blond's getting fed up with this amorous spook - ha!  He's about to call in reinforcements, but will it help or not?  Snicker....I'll get another part posted tomorrow.  Thank you again for all the support; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2013 06:12 AM · On: How Boo You Do?

Naughty, naughty Captain...just couldn't keep his hands off huh ;) Oh but I wonder what Justin has in mind to prove to the ghostly one that Brian and his Asa are not one and the same

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Looks like none of them can keep their hands (or tongue) off our stud - ha!  Wonder if histongue was cold?;)  I think Justin's in over his head and will have to call in 'reinforcements.'  Uh, oh.  Not sure that is such a good idea - ha! Thanks for reading and for the comments!  I will get this updated tomorrow.  Looks like my Halloween deadline might be hard to meet now, but I will get this done very soon. 

Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2013 10:32 PM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

This is really interesting, cant wait to read more about how they will solve the paranormal problem at britin..great story...hope youll update soon :)



Author's Response:

Hi, there! Thank you for reading and for the comments; I greatly appreciate that, and I'm delighted that you are enjoying it.;)  I should get this updated later this evening; I do hope you continue to find it iinteresting.  I always thought Britin would make a good haunted house.;)  Thanks again. *hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 05:58 PM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

I am not much into ghost thing, but it doesn't mean I am not enjoying reading one. when I saw this as a sequel, I went back and search the first story u made. Then I remember I was able to read that one long back and wonder if that one will have a sequel due to the ending part where Brian seeing a ghost. Well indeed it has one now. Thanks for this sweetie. I enjoyed Justin's possessiveness after knowing that the ghost is after Brian. Can't wait for more. {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Thank you, Cindy, for having faith in me and reading this story!  I'm glad that you're enjoying it.  Our little ghost is quite enamored with who he thinks is his long-lost love.  He'll be making another appearance in the next chapter.  I should have that posted later today. Thanks again for reading and for the comments, my friend; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs back*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2013 03:35 PM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

This story is quite unique-good for halloween. Piggly-Wiggly-so funny. I had a great grandfather named Asa. It is such a small world. Now, where are we going-I am in for the ride. Lee also likes this one. I guess it reminds him of something he read a few years ago? lol

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc! Thanks as always for reading and for the comments, my friend.  I thought the Piggly Wiggly was very appropriate here, if only to tick Brian off with the name - ha!  Brian's admirer is about to make another appearance coming up.  Will have the next part up later today. Thanks again - tell everyone I said hello and send my love to them.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 01:58 PM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

"Great...You're hot to them whether they're dead OR alive."  Yep I think that sums up Brian nicely.  LOL  Ghostbusters,  you know what images that conjures up don't you?  Right, Dan Aykroyd and his gang.  LOL  I admit I had to look up Piggly Wiggly.  What a fun name for a supermarket.  LOL Please update this fun fic soon.

Cheers 



Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee!  I know - I told another reader I'm going to have to go rent "Ghostbusters" now. I shouldn't admit it, but I had a 45 of that song somewhere; very catchy!  So glad you're enjoying this one; will have another chapter up later today. Thank you for reading and for the comments; it is greatly appreciated.  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 12:13 PM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

I don't know. A moving company still sounds better to me. The ghost could have the house and Brian, LOL.

Author's Response:

Ha!  Now you wouldn't want the boys to give up their little love nest, would you?:)  Poor Justin would be left out - although there IS still the idea of a threesome.;)  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sandra; it is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 12:02 PM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

This is the reason my light is still on in my bedroom. There wasn't even a ghost in this chapter but I still felt a chill just reading about the history of the place. And the body is buried on the estate... Justin should've been calling a moving company by the time Brian got there.

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 09:49 AM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

Brian will always think he's hot, even to the dead ghostly apparition. Will anything ever change that?  Gosh, I hope not.  

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I hope not, either; that is part of Brian's charm to me.;)  Thanks for reading and for the comments!  Will have another part up later today.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 09:24 AM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

Hi Kim, Ha, the Ghostbusters theme song keeps playing over and over in my head, I wonder why? ; )

I had to laugh at Justins "Piggly Wiggly" comment, we used to have one here. Great chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next : ) Huggs ~ Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - yeah, me, too - I'll have to go rent that movie now.;) Love Dan Akryoyd!  I'm glad you figured out what the Piggly Wiggly was.  I couldn't resist putting that name into the story just to aggravate Brian.;) Thanks for reading and for the comments!  I will have another chapter up later today.;)  *Hug*~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 07:13 AM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

I like Phyllis, she knows her stuff.  The Piggly Wiggly?  More salt?  They do need the Ghost Busters or in this case Mysterious Marilyn might just fill the bill.  More please.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I'm glad you like Phyllis.;)  I assume you've heard of the Piggly Wiggly?  I couldn't help using that one for Brian; it was too good to pass up.;)  I thnk Marilyn's coming up soon.;)

 

I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow; thank you for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 07:12 AM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

Great chapter!  I would imagine our Liberty Ave. clairvoyant will be showing up soon in this story. :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari! You've been great about reading and reviewing; thank you for that.;) And yes, I think Marilyn is coming up very shortly, along with Emmett;)  First, though, our amorous ghost is about to try and get close up and personal with his long-lost love, uh, Brian....ha!  I will post the next chapter tomorrow. Thank you again for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2013 06:41 AM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

*snort* piggly wiggly made me laugh as I could only imagine Brian's reaction lol

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  I had to laugh, too; my relatives are from Kentucky, and they had a Piggly Wiggly store in their hometown. A lot of readers probably think I'm making that up, but it's real, all right!  The captain's about to try and get a little more 'up close and personal' with his 'love' in the next chapter.  I'll get that posted tomorrow. Thanks for reading and for the comments, Juliet; I really appreciate it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2013 05:52 AM · On: Ghoul of My Dreams

Oooohhhh....curiouser and curiouser, The boys definitely have thier work cut out for them here lol. Maybe that little trip to the piggly wiggly will be more beneficial than they think.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Well, Brian would probably like to get his little blond alone somewhere in the produce department with the zucchinis (snicker), but I don't think Justin's in the mood for that right now.;)  Thanks  for reading - will have a longer part up tomorrow.  We'll see how long they stay at the house after what happens next!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 06:54 PM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

I thought I would have to read this with one hand partially covering my face while I peeked through my finger, but it wasn't too scary.  LOL  I love what you have done with the photos.  Brian looking like Asa Wilcox; that's intriguing.  Thanks for the quick update.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee! Glad I didn't scare you too badly. The story should be basically funny with just a touch of angst involved, so I do hope you continue to enjoy it.  Glad you liked the photos, too; that took me a while to manipulate all that, but I do enjoy it.  Thanks for reading and for the feedback!  I should have another chapter up later today.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 09:07 AM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

OOooohhh.  The spooky history begins to reveal itself.   Nice shot from "Defiance", by the way.  Snicker.  Keep the story coming.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Ha!  You're not supposed to figure that out.;)  I thought it fit for Asa, so that was very kind of Gale to perform in that show - ha!  Glad you're enjoying it!  I'll have another chapter up in a little while. Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 09:00 AM · On: "Mine"

Funny exchanges between the boys and believable as their words.  Great stuff.

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend; I'm so happy that you like it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 08:54 AM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

Hm... I wonder what the ghost wants?  ;)



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thanks for reading and for the comments.  Poor Brian - he's a stud to young and old, dead and alive - LOL!  There should be another chapter up later this evening - thank you for the feedback! So glad you're enjoying it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 08:32 AM · On: "Mine"

Can't wait to see what Justin discovers! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Shari!  I will have more information about Brian's amorous suitor in the next chapter.  I do hope you continue to enjoy it. Thank you for the support; it is much appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 08:32 AM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

Poor Justin, besides having to fend off the living away from Brian, now need to do the same with the dead.

This is so scary and so much fun that I read three chapters at once and then I wrote the comments. I could not help but stop reading. Now I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Hugs, dear!

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Vocês estão todos presos agora! Prometo não torná-lo muito assustador. Ambos os meninos vão começar a formular um plano no próximo capítulo. Eu deveria ter postado isso amanhã. Obrigado mais uma vez por todos os comentários, meu amigo. * Abraços * ~ Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 08:25 AM · On: "Mine"

As I said in yesterday's email is very Britin see as a haunted house and only you could make it fun.

Poor Justin was so frightened in "A Haunting We Will Go" and will now find that their fears were not unfounded.

Never enjoyed myself so much and I was scared at the same time. This is such a great delicacy in love with someone like me horror stories.

His story is fascinating, Kim!

Hugs!

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Prometo não assustá-lo muito mal, que será mais bem-humorado do que o mal;) Pobre Brian - todos eles amam, viva ou morta - ha.! Muito obrigado pela leitura e para deixar feedback, Fátima. Eu realmente aprecio isso. Vou postar Ch. 4 amanhã.;) * Abraços * ~ Kim

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 08:11 AM · On: When the Rubber Hits the Road...Or the Case of the Missing Condoms

An incredible story, Kim! As frightening and at the same time in ensuring great fun.

And we still have the mystery of condoms ...

Another great story that you share with us.

Hugs, dear!

Fatima.



Author's Response:

Oi, meu amigo! Não tenha medo - este será mais um fantasma amigável ou pernicioso do que um mal. Ele é obcecado por Brian por um motivo, que começará a ser revelada no terceiro capítulo. Obrigado pela leitura e pelos comentários! * Abraços * ~ Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: October 28, 2013 05:02 AM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

How spooky!



Author's Response:

Hi, Juliet! Well, 'tis the season (oh, never mind - wrong holiday - ha!).  Hope you're enjoying this one.  I'll have more of an explanation about what's going on in the next chapter; I should be able to post that one tomorrow.  Thanks for reading and for the comment!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 04:25 AM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

Oh this is getting so good I can hardly stand it :) Now the whole MINE! warning on the bathroom mirror makes sense....I'll be a good little girl though and try to be patient enough to see if I'm right ;)

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Thank you for reading, Sweetie.;p) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.  Poor Brian - wanted whether they're dead or alive - ha!  I suspect you are correct here.;)  I'll have another chapter up tomorrow. Thanks again for all the support you give me; it is much appreciated.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2013 12:17 AM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

Well now we know the who, and why he's haunting the house.  He senses that his lover is back and will undoubtedly try to get into Brian's pants.  How will they manage to appease the ghost?



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie - well, I'm not so sure if it will be appeasement or a little 'manhandling,' only not in the way the good, old Captain wants - ha!  The plot is about to thicken, and probably not to Brian's liking.;) Thank you for reading and for your comments!  I will get another part up tomorrow.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 11:50 PM · On: The Captain and the Woodsman

Hi Kim. This keeps getting better and better ; ) Justin’s comment of “apparently he’s on a salt free diet because it didn’t faze the fucker” cracked me up. Didn’t impress my keyboard though, I spit coffee all over it, haha.

So, now we know who the ghost is, but how will Justin and Brian convince him that Brian isn’t Asa?  Waiting with ‘high spirits’ and ‘restless’ anticipation for the next chapter (I know, I know, ease up on the coffee…… Ha) Hugs ~ Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - I'm so glad you liked that line, because that was my personal favorite, too.;)  Well, the answer to how they will get rid of him is coming up.  I'm not so sure, though, that who they enlist is going to help or hinder them - LOL! And please feel free to 'pun' away - I love it!:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and for your comments, my friend. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: himawari29 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 11:05 PM · On: "Mine"

"Signing off now, Brian."

hahaha... I love it.

as if they're on skyping, instead of phone calling..

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sue!  Thank you for reading and for the comments; I"m delighted that you're enjoying this one. The plot is about to thicken; I just added the third chapter which explains why our spook has such a fixation on poor Brian.;)  Thanks again for the feedback; I hope you continue to enjoy the story. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2013 12:44 PM · On: When the Rubber Hits the Road...Or the Case of the Missing Condoms

Spooky! Does the ghost just steal condoms? Let's hope he doesn't get more serious! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag - he's going to an amorous and persistent ghost, but more in line with a lovesick, mischevious one.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks for reading and for the comments!  ~Kim

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 06:04 AM · On: "Mine"

"Why not? And while you're at it, pick up a copy of Ghost..."

LMAO! You've outdone yourself with this one. I was a little spooked during the mirror message and when Justin realized it was a ghost in the house with him while he was alone, but you balanced it out with hilarity; otherwise, I wouldn't be able to read this at night. I'm a big chicken when it comes to ghost stories.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra! Thank you for the comments, my friend.  I'm glad that you are enjoying this. And don't worry; it will definitely be more funny than scary. I mean, Emmett and Mysterious Marilyn involved with the 'extermination?'  Need I say more?  LOL!  Thanks for the support; I really appreciate that. I will post the next chapter tomorrow, which will give more insight into the history of the house's occupants and just why our ghost is so enamored with Brian.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Frayach (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2013 05:45 AM · On: "Mine"

I always suspected Britin was haunted!  I'm looking forward to the rest.  The first story was fun too.  Thank you for the mush-appreciated distraction from unpacking :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Fray! I think Britin seems perfect for being haunted, too.;) There's actually more to tell about its background, which will come to light in the next chapter.  So you are still unpacking? I know what a tedious chore that can be!  Thank you for reading and for the comments; I appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2013 03:56 AM · On: "Mine"

I AM REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY AS I LOVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH HORROR STORIES AND HALLOWEEN. I MUST SAY MISSING AND APPEARING CONDOMS IS REALLY QUITE DIFFERENT. HA! MORE CHAPTERS FROM A HAUNTING IS A PERFECT IDEA. THIS STORY BANGS. ALL HERE ARE DOING WELL. NONIE MOVED TO EUROPE TO BE WITH HER FAMILY. SHE IS BETTER BUT NOT 100% YET.LINDC WILL BE GOING TO TOKYO FOR CHRISTMAS AS SHE HAS TWO WEEKS OFF THEN. THIS PLACE HAS CHANGED OVER THE PAST YEAR-PEOPLE COMING AND GOING CONSTANTLY-DON'T REALLY GET TO KNOW ANY OF THEM WELL.WE ARE JUST AN OASIS ON THEIR JOURNEY ELSEWHERE. HAVE TO GET TO LAUNDRY WHICH I HATE. DID I TELL YOU I "HATE,HATE,HATE" DOING LAUNDRY HA! LUV 2 U.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I'm always so happy to hear from you and to know about what's going on; it makes me feel like part of your little family, and I'm very honored by that.  Lindc had told me she thought Nonie would be leaving - I hope she keeps in touch with all of you and you will let me know how she is doing.  I hope she will be happier back with her family; I can certainly understand that.  Sounds like Lindc will have a great time at Christmas.  I have two weeks off, too, but it will be strange as my parents will be 'snow-birding' in Florida for the first time during the holidays.  It would cost me over $600 to fly down there - yikes! So I am not sure what I will do at this point.  It will be odd not to be with them at Christmas for the first time, though. 

I just got through doing laundry, so I feel your pain.;)  I live out more in the country, so I actually hang my laundry out to dry - I love the smell after it's air dried, especially the sheets.;)  Hope you enjoy the rest of this, Lee!  Keep in touch. Sending my love and a hug back to you, too.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2013 03:53 AM · On: When the Rubber Hits the Road...Or the Case of the Missing Condoms

Great start to this sequel!  Moving on to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, Shari! Thank you for reading and for your comments, my friend. Glad that you like it so far.  I'll post another part to this tomorrow and then regularly thereafter until it's finished - it will be a fairly short one (at least for me - ha!). Thanks again for your support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 09:46 PM · On: "Mine"

I knew those condoms would make a reappearance.  I was so worried when Justin didn't believe Brian.  At least they're on the same page now.  Excited to find out what they learn at the Historical Society.  Hurry with your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you again for the comments, my friend.  You will definitely learn more in the next chapter; I'll have it posted by tomorrow.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 09:40 PM · On: "Mine"

Hi Kim, Poor Justin, I’m afraid he’s in for more spooky happenings once this ghost really decides to make his presence known. Hmmm, I wonder what became of the condoms that mysteriously disappeared from their wrappers.

LOL, can’t wait for the next “spooktaculair” chapter ; ) but in the meantime, off to find my Ghostbusters movie. Like I said last night, great start to a great story : ) Hugs ~ Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - well, I think this admirer of Brian's isn't too keen on B and J succeeding in the sex department; I will be explaining more about why in the next chapter when Justin goes to visit the Historical Society.  Thank you for reading and for the comments, as well as the morale boost last night.  So good to have you back online!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 09:36 PM · On: When the Rubber Hits the Road...Or the Case of the Missing Condoms

I don't understand people who have no time to leave comments.  As I said this story looks to have good elements.  It's a bit spooky and will have Mysterious Marilyn and in addition it looks as if Emmett plays a part.  Bravo!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend  - you are very kind; thank you for the support.  It does get a little discouraging at times when you see so many reading and very few comments, and makes the doubt seep in as a result.  I try to be very good about leaving feedback myself, because I know how important it is to me.  So a big thank you for reading and for doing that (again!).  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 08:26 PM · On: "Mine"

I read this Holloween fic with trepidation as DavidR's fic has scarred me for life.  I should have known yours would be a lighter read.  I couldn't even review his as I'm staying well away.  I admit I'm a big coward.  LOL  I too enjoy banter between the guys and I particularly like the line about The Phantom Menace.  LOL  Your Brian has such a quick wit.

Cheers



Author's Response:

Hi, Flossee - thank you for reading and for the comments.;)  And you're right - for a change (for me!) not much angst in this one, but a tinge of jealousy, though, coming up. Thank you again for taking the time to review; it is much appreciated. ~Kim

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2013 07:30 PM · On: "Mine"

Oh this is delicious! I love a good mystery!



Author's Response:

Hi, Julieta - thank you for the comments and for reading, my friend.  Will post another chapter tomorrow that will explain more about our possessive and amorous ghost.;)  Thanks again for the support!. Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2013 07:27 PM · On: "Mine"

Interesting, I don't think I have had the 'giggles' and 'shivers' at the same time before and from the same story.

Was that super Emmett in the background of your banner?

Thanks for posting it again, yesterday was busy, and I didn't even see the first post.

Have a good weekend.

Author's Response:

Hello, CFC.;)  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment; I appreciate that very much. And yes, that IS Emmett.  I love his character!  He will be popping up soon to offer his assistance in getting rid of Brian's pesky ghost.;)  I will post another chapter tomorrow.  Hope you have a good weekend, too.;)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 06:42 PM · On: "Mine"

how fun! loving this!

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Charle.  It is greatly appreciated.  I will post another chapter tomorrow that explains more about Brian's 'admirer.'  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 06:39 PM · On: "Mine"

Omg Kim :D this is hilarious...each wanting to blame the other when neither is to blame for the spooky goings on. Hmmm...is it possible that the fiddler is laying in wait and trying to get back at Justin? Or could it be Mikey trying to make Brian remember who he really is (as he is so apt to do)? The possibilities are endless lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara - once more I am grateful for your comments.:)  While it would be fun to throw Ethan into the mix (isn't it always? LOL!), no, it's going to be a new, more ethereal suitor for Brian's attention.  I will be explaining a lot more about Brian's admirer in the next chapter.  Thank you again for the feedback.  It's always very nice to know that someone is enjoying my stories. *Big Hug*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2013 06:12 PM · On: When the Rubber Hits the Road...Or the Case of the Missing Condoms

Hey Kim :) no apologies needed ish happens lol...although I did think that being up at zero darkthirty nursing my ever misbehaving allergies was causing me to hallucinate ;) I'm soooo glad that's not the case and will be anxiously looking forward to the next chapter my friend.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara - I just posted the second chapter to partially make up for removing it last night (and your comment).  Thank you for taking the time to "re-comment."  To be totally honest, it wasn't a glitch.  I got into a funk and impetuously deleted it when I got 100 reads and only two comments out of it, because I thought perhaps it wasn't interesting enough.  Kind of discouraging to me (I know, pitifiul, aren't I?). But I decided to repost it, since I have it almost finished.  I do hope readers will enjoy it; it will be posted quickly because I know I need to return to my other, regular stories. I appreciate your support so much. You're very kind.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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