Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2015 08:44 AM · On: You Send Me
Another wonderful, heartwarming story! You do such a great job of showing the entwined physical, emotional, and spiritual connection between Brian and Justin.
I hope you're still planning a sequel. Any appropriate challenges coming up?
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2014 06:55 PM · On: Only You
Somehow I missed this story when you posted it last summer. I'm so glad I found it now though. As a longtime backpacker/camper I got a big kick out of the incredibly elaborate camping gear the boys thought was necessary. What Prima Donnas! But, at least they got to enjoy the outdoors their way. Thanks for writing. TAG
Reviewer: Angela (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2013 09:56 AM · On: You Send Me
Great story! Can we all have a Brian like this?
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 02:31 AM · On: You Send Me
Hi, Laura - as always, this was simply beautiful. I love the way you write scenes when they are making love. You always do so well with those especially. I'm sorry this story couldn't be included in the challenge, but I truly enjoyed it. I hope to see more stories from you in the not-so-distant future. Thank you for sharing this with us. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 12:28 AM · On: You Send Me
Nice!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2013 12:03 AM · On: You Send Me
Sigh. How happily romantic. You've caught the essence of why everyone loves Brian and Justin perfectly. Love the beginning and the ending not to mention everything in between.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:57 PM · On: When I Fall In Love
Yes, yes, yes. What a wonderful surprise for Justin. Now they don't have to rough it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:47 PM · On: My Prayer
Even a swollen ankle can't keep these guys from enjoying each other. I've been camping a couple of times and it was never like this!
Reviewer: himawari29 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:47 PM · On: You Send Me
this is one of my favourite stories. and I kept coming to this site to see whether you've already updated it or not. Finally, you did!
thank you dear for sharing this beautiful story. you've brought me to the another world, while I was imagining how the camping site would be look like, and now, how the mansion would be look like during summer. I've already known from the start that the camping site was on their own 'Britin' backyard, because Brian seemed like trying hard enough to create a 'story' of the owner to Justin.
btw, why there's no sunshine's symbol to this story?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:40 PM · On: There's a Moon out Tonight
Wow! This was unbelievable and that ending!!! Talk about HOT!
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:40 PM · On: Come Go With Me
Brian thinks of everything, does not it?
The efficiency Kinney is in full swing.
Justin I love thinking about food and Brian offering his ass. It's very funny! Loved it!
Hugs!
Fatima.
Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:35 PM · On: Only You
Hi, dear Laura!
I'm sorry that your story was not qualified for the Challenge. I barely managed to get my second story to be published in time.
I always wanted to camp, but I never did. I believe your story will give me some idea the excitement and satisfaction that camping can bring.
A great start!
Hugs!
Fatima.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:28 PM · On: This Magic Moment
This was such a wonderful morning for them. I was thinking that clothing was going to be optional. But then you put in that last sentence!!! Holy cow, what a cliff hanger.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:11 PM · On: Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me
It's a darn good thing there is no one around. No worries about how much noise they make and the freedom to make it.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 11:08 PM · On: Twilight Time
This is astounding. I certainly wouldn't mind camping like this. I hope Justin brought along his art supplies, there is certainly enough inspiration. My first thought was that this was Britan's backyard, but now I'm not so sure.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:57 PM · On: Come Go With Me
Wow. Now that's what I call camping in style. You've thought of everything.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2013 09:47 PM · On: Only You
Love the way this story started out and continue to enjoy it all the way through. To find that Brian has indeed been camping came as a surprise and I wonder why he never talked Mikey into going. True camping is fun when you are a kid and adults do all the work. Looking forward to the rest.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 02:43 AM · On: There's a Moon out Tonight
A cooking, nuturing, caring Brian who carries Justin around and waits on him hand and foot... damn, loving this!
Looking forward to your updates.
Just getting a chance to catch up with reading, so glad to read this. Very enjoyable!
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 02:40 AM · On: This Magic Moment
They finally had their picnic together, and lots of great sex. They're having my kind of camping trip!
Really enjoying this.
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 02:36 AM · On: Twilight Time
Okay... still reading the last paragraph... again... thanks for that image! I owe ya! LOL.
Really enjoying this and love the elaborate porta-potty. Brian thought of everything!
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 02:33 AM · On: Come Go With Me
Brian is surprising, how thoroughly he's prepared for the trip. The boys camping together - this is sounding very romantic. Love it!
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2013 02:30 AM · On: Only You
The had me after the first 2 sentences, what a hoot. I love reading a story in which the boys are happy together, it's kinda rare! LOL.
Enjoyed the first chapter and moving on to the next.
All the best,
Laura
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2013 06:48 AM · On: There's a Moon out Tonight
I'm really enjoying this fic so far.... :D I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Hope it'll be up soon! Kisses!
Reviewer: merlinkitten (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2013 08:24 PM · On: Only You
Hi Laura! I'm so happy brian and justin finally got to make love under the stars..I was so pissed at the writers for sending justin to LA instead of going on the bike ride
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 11:13 AM · On: There's a Moon out Tonight
I'm SO touched that you posted the story for ME for MY birthday! You're such a love. I should have given you a bigger kiss when I saw you in L.A.. (You can take that any way you want to.) This is a delightful little story so far. I can't wait to read more.
- "Jackie" Diane
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 11:09 AM · On: This Magic Moment
Another hot round with the guys. What will happen next?
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 11:04 AM · On: Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me
Ahhhh, queen of steam. You never disappoint! Loved it.
- Jackie
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Twilight Time
That would be a lovely sight ... and you can take that to mean the bathroom, or the trees, or the naked man... either way.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 10:54 AM · On: Come Go With Me
Armani camping supplies... that'll be next.
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2013 10:51 AM · On: Only You
Interesting start. You have me intrigued.
Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2013 06:51 AM · On: There's a Moon out Tonight
I want to go camping with Brian, he thinks of everything. Britin certainly has alot of ground surrounding it.
What's in the envelope? Can't wait for the next chapters.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 11:20 PM · On: There's a Moon out Tonight
Well, at least we have a toppy! Justin category now, so if you must indulge, it will be there waiting for you.;) I'm loving their little adventure so far. Sweet, romantic, loving, and with a little, protective, "he-man" Brian thrown in. Lovely. And the previous chapter title is one of my favorite songs by Jay and the Americans. (I know, I'm seriously dating myself here - ha!). Looking forward to the rest of this, Laura.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 11:09 PM · On: Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me
You sound like you know what you're talking about with the camping. Am I right? This was so sweet and romantic. Love the idea of them making love literally under the stars. Another great chapter, Laura.;) They can take me camping anytime.;P
P.S. One of my favorite, romantic songs, too! Saw Mel Carter in person a few years ago, and his voice is still clear and strong. Love how you hve used so many of my favorite oldies songs for your chapter titles.:) ~*hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 11:02 PM · On: Twilight Time
Well, what a way to end the chapter! I might have to check into doing some camping myself now - ha! You described the scene perfectly, Laura. Enjoying your story immensely, even if Justin IS a little dense yet (wink, wink)...
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 10:53 PM · On: Come Go With Me
Great start, Laura! Loved all the detail that you put into this, and I like the reversal of roles here. I know when I wrote a story about camping several years ago, Justin was more of the 'sensible,' knowledgeable one, while Brian was the one freaking out. I like this version where Brian is more of the expert.;)
My favorite lines in this chapter:
“Some of us need to eat and enjoy the sights.”
Brian didn’t stop looking.
“Besides my ass.”
Too funny! Looking forward to the rest of this - moving on the next chapters.:) Yee-haw! *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2013 05:08 PM · On: Only You
I'm so excited to see another challenge fic up. I have never been camping for those reasons; dirt, bugs and cooking outdoors, setting up a tent, cold showers and no toilet. However, I can't wait to see how Brian does it. Good luck with the challenge I hope you can finish in time.
Cheers
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