Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Marie-France TEJEDOR (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2016 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

J'adore cette histoire! Merci pour ce final C'est comme je l'ai rêvé !

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2015 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Great epilogue to the show's finale. You are right, it is a more fitting and satisfying result for those who wanted Brian andJustin to find their way back to each other



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked my story. I really wanted the show ended that way and that Brian and Justin stay together as it should be.
A big hug, my dear.
Fatima.

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2015 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

I have just finished season five and I wish to God they added this in the end scene, I would have loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

Hello, Yvonne!

I also love to have seen this scene in episode 513. I've seen this episode in October 2010 (the first and only time) and to this day I can not settle for the insensitivity of the authors of the series.

I always feel uncomfortable and very sad to review the image of desolation and loneliness Brian dancing alone on the catwalk in Babylon opening party. I waited until the last second of the episode to see Justin back and to this day I wonder why it did not.

For me it is a setback. It is as if the passage of Justin in everyone's life was insignificant and their lives continue to be the same as if Justin was never existed.

Sometimes I think that attitude and the final created to the series was a kind of revenge of CowLip against dissatisfaction of Randy with the direction the series and his character in last seasons. So, the authors simply isolated Justin of everything and everyone.

Sorry if I rambling, but this is a topic that always ignites me.

Thank you for your comment.

A big hug!

Fatima.


Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2014 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

I just re-read my review or I should say my rant against the ending of QAF. I apologize for the keying errors I made. I left out words, spelled many of them wrong and should remember to read my postings before submitting them.

I also meant to thank you. You have finished all of your stories except maybe the one you're working on. I won't read a story unless it's finished, so many author's leave their work undone. So thank you and if you haven't noticed you are my entertainment of the day.

Now, I'm going to re-read this...

 




Author's Response:

Hello, Jane! 

 

I did not notice the errors because I use a translator of texts (I'm Brazilian and do not speak English) and it worked perfectly to allow me to read and understand your comment. 

 

I always try to finish my stories because I think it's a commitment we made when we post the story so that others can read them. 

 

I feel honored to be your entertainment. I thank you for your interest in my stories. 

 

A big hug! 

Fatima.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 24, 2014 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

If my calculation is correct it is almost 10 since the show ended and I'm still angry at ending of the show. Never has there been a show with a larger following, especially on cable, and that's how they repaid us. We spent 5 years slowing watching Brian trust his feelings, loving Justin and his son. And they end the show with Justin in MY and Gus in Canada and Brian alone. God, I was so made at that. I have watch the multiple time but never Year 5.

I sent a letter to Showtime and those two guys whose names I can't remember telling them if I ever saw their names associated with any type of show I wouldn't watch it. I would never trust them and would do nothing to help them. 

Thanks for your story...and putting them together.

 



Author's Response:

Hello, Jane! 

 

I fully agree with you. Was for hate  and do not conform to today with the final Cowlip that gave the show that I have ventured to write stories about QAF. How many of you watched the show, I felt betrayed and I felt that the authors and producers betrayed Brian and Justin, passing them for five seasons for the end, let them separate. 

I see the end as a cruel and sadistic attitude of those responsible for the series. They were cruel to fans of the series, they were cruel to the characters and they were especially cruel with Brian to separate it from two people who really loved her. 

 

This was the first fic I've written and I'm glad you liked it. 

 

A big hug. 

Fatima.

Reviewer: Episode 513 Extended Scene (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2014 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

This is a delightful way of comforting us. Thank you.

I was so mad at Cowlip when I first saw the ending and then over a period of time I realized that the ending is one of the reasons that so many fans have been driven to write better endings, better stories, happier B&J, less damaged B&J. So they did us a favour although I always suspected that they were jellouse of Gale not falling for them... as if!

Anyway you are doing so well writing in a foriegn language. I'm dyslexic so don't copy my spelling.

Lots of love from Jacky M                                                                        



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jacky!

I was very happy with your comment. I agree with you that if not for the lame end Cowlip, we would not have so many amazing stories of our boys.

Thanks for liking my version. I wrote what I expected to see until the last few seconds that I watched the last episode for the first and last time. I was so angry and so disappointed that I never watched the episode 513 again.

Do not worry about your writing, I use a translator of texts to read and write and understand correctly what you wrote.

A big hug, my dear! Lots of love for you, too.

Fatima.


Reviewer: xxkinnetikxx (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2013 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

I totally enjoyed that.  Wish it did end that way.



Author's Response:

Hello, Kinnetik!

I also love to have seen this ending. Unfortunately, Cowlip messed inal in the show.

A big hug and thank you for your comment.

Fatima.

Reviewer: Kimmah (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2013 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

I love this ending. I hated that Justin was not in the final moments. If they were going to do a time jump to when the club opened, they could have shown us that Justin was still there for major life events, like Brian reopening Babylon. . .and I don't give a crap if Cowlip says that "Only Time" was meant to keep the imagination open to anything. If you jump in time. . .then you show us. You give us hope. Honestly, the whole last two or three eps. . .I can believe Brian would have told Justin he loved him after the bombing. But if you watch the "It's for my Prince" and "I'm taking a chance on love" and most of the dialogue at Britin, Gale can't even keep a straight face.Seriously, I can hardly watch it. At first I thought it was just bad directing, but now I think it's Gale outwardly laughing at the dialogue and he does his best to get through the scene. They ruined the end. They took season 5 and back pedalled. By then, Justin & Brian were in a great place. . .I'm sorry. Anyway, I keep reading fics just to convince myself that they did go on. Thank you for this. 



Author's Response:

 

Hello, Kimmah!

I agree with you. The last episodes of the show contradict everything we've seen over the seasons. The speech Britin to purchase own house ... Everything is completely out of character in relation to Brian. I can see Brian telling Justin that she loves him, asking for the marriage and even try monogamy. But to me, that occur throughout the process and not in two episodes. Everything was hit and confused at the end. The end of the show was a big mistake. I can see Gale and Randy taking the last two episodes not quite believing what they were doing and trying to do better professionally I work. It is disappointing to see what Cowlip done with the show and u disrespect shown to all fans of QAF.

The scene that bothers me most is to see in episode 513 Brian dancing alone on the platform of Babylon. For me it is distressing to see him so alone, while all the others are people who love to her. Apart from taking Brian Justin, Gus led to another country. For me, Cowlip was cruel to Brian. And what aspiring painter goes to NY, being totally unknown, armed only with an article thinking that this is their greatest oprtunidade career, leaving behind the opportunity to indulge your love story with the man she loves from seventeen old? This does not have to believe and accept.

I write fanfictins not resign myself to the end of the show and want to see the boys together living their love. This story is my first fic.

Thank you for reading and your comment.

A big hug!

Fatima         

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2013 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Nice :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. Glad you liked it.

Hugs!

Fatima

Reviewer: mandagrammy (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2013 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Well, all I can say is, I like your version of the re-opening of Babylon... a lot!  I especially love the references to the past, a favorite part of any canon story for me.  I can see your heart put into this wonderful scene.  Bravo, Fatima!  Huge hugs, Grammy



Author's Response:

Oh, Grammy! Thank you!

His words made r03;r03;me very happy!

This was my first fic and receive such wonderful words of one of my favorite authors, touched me very much.

I really want to thank you for that.

Huge Hugs to you, too!

Fatima.    

Reviewer: taurus 1958 (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2013 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Now thats the way it was suppose to end.  Thank you



Author's Response:

Hello, Taurus!

The is my ultimate dream.

Thank for reading and your comment.

A big hus!

Fátima.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2013 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

This is a far better ending than what they did.....closure and the storyline can still continue.



Author's Response:

This is a far better ending than what They did ..... closure and the storyline can still continue.

Thank you!
The dissatisfaction with the end, was what led me to write fics.
I'm very glad you enjoyed.
A hug!
Fatima.

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2013 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Ah....lovely! Brian and Justin together forever! LOL

Love your ending to the series. Well done.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hello, Vin!Thank you!
Your comment makes me very happy!
For me Brian and Justin will be together forever, no matter what has to happen.
I refuse to think differently!
A big hug!

Cheers,

Fátima.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2013 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

"So, do you want to know if I'm coming and going?"

Oh how I wished you could have written for the show. This was PERFECT!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so happy!
I really wish I could the power to modify the end of the show. But unfortunately, this is not the case.
Continue writing our stories and pretending that the episode 513 (I have his trauma) did not happen, OK?
A hug!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2013 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

So like you I so wished this what should've happened in canon - them asking "coming and going?  Or coming and then going?  Or coming and staying?"  it could have been a great full circle! Thank you for great story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I really wanted to close a cycle.

Finish it all began and start a new era where the two would not be afraid of your feelings.

A hug!

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

i ;ove this story



Author's Response:

Thank you!
I appreciate your attention to have read the story and left this comment so sweet!
A hug!

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Very well done! My first fanfic was a re tooled ending as well. I think everyone should have a little vision of what could have....what should have been! Good job!



Author's Response:

Hello, Bryton!
Your comment made r03;r03;me very happy, thank you for this!

This was the first fic I wrote. I wrote it because it did not conform with the final and she became my revenge against Cowlip since managed to write an ending much better than theirs, at least in my opinion :)

I really like your fics Brian and Justin / Fairy Tales. I find it amazing that their idea. Unfortunately I am not able to read them because of my chronic lack of time.
 
Once again I thank your kind comment and forgive me any mistake because I use Google to respond.

A hug

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

I loved this alot, you should have written this for the show. All us fans would have loved it this way ~ Yvonne xx

Ps, Happy Birthday to Gale, I hope he had a day as perfect as he is and a perfect year a head ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Yvonne!
I wish I had the power to change the ending of Cowlip (for me, they were cowardly and insensitive to many people who have followed the show for five years or as others of us for 83 episodes), but unfortunately none of us feared power . Therefore, we write fanfiction, right?

Best wishes to Gale! Without it, we would never have our Brian.
A big hug!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

You were right.  This is the perfect ending for that episode. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!
I am very happy with your comment.
I think it really would be a perfect end worthy of the history we have seen over 83 episodes.
I am very honored that you have given me this distinction.
A hug!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2013 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Oh yes!  I am very pleased.  Cowlip's ending left a bitter taste in my mouth.  This is more like it.



Author's Response:

The final Cowlip left me depressed for a long time.
This fic was my healing therapy.
I'm glad you liked it.
A hug!

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2013 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

That would have been a much better ending!



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you think like me.
Fatima.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Much better than Cowlip's ending

Author's Response:

Thank you!
I would love to have been given such an ending to the show.
A hug!
Fatima

Reviewer: Frayach (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2013 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

I MUCH prefer your ending.  Nice work, sweetie.  I love how you reworked their first conversation.  It had me grinning till the end.

~Fray



Author's Response:

Thank you, Fray!
Your comments are very precious to me.
This is the end of my dreams and I wanted it to be a closed cycle.
I wanted to give a happy ending for Brian.
So it is here.
A hug!
Fatima.

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2013 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Knocked it on the head right there loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you!
Comment stating that you liked is very important to me.
A hug!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2013 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

Yes, this would have been a much easier ending to deal with. Brian really ready to commit to a equal relationship, Justin able to achieve his goal. And most importantly Michael pretty much out of the picture. A regular story book ending.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hello, Lori!
I am pleased your interest in my stories and their amazing reviews!
Surely that's my ultimate dream. This is the first fic I wrote and just started writing fanfiction for failing to conform to the given end to the series.
A big hug!
Fatima

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2013 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

I like this much better than Cowlip's.

Author's Response:

Thank you!
Glad you liked it!
A hug!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2013 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 1 Episode 513.

This is the way I'm sure a lot of us would have had it end. Good job!

Author's Response:

Thank you!
I really wish I had seen an ending like that.
Thank you for your comment.
A hug!

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