I really really really enjoyed this! This looks like it is going to be a wonderful story and have plenty of drama, angst, and surprises! Ohhh ouch, Brian with a guy in their bed at Britin.. Brian definitely always finds a way to push Justin away and hurt BOTH of them in the process.. 

Oh my, Justin bringing a guy back home to live with... can't wait to find out about this Luke guy... I'm loving the angst in this story so far and hope it continues! I'm sure a jealous Brian will appear in this story as well, which I always love. I'm off to read the next chapter. Really great start to your story! 

M.

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Thanks, Megan, for your lovely comment!
It made r03;r03;me very happy. You have liked was very important to me. I hope you join me on this journey.
I also love Brian jealous, but their jealousy this fic will be the least of your problems.
Although deeply love Brian, I have to agree with Debbie, often he is a big jerk and do things for other people's feelings destroying everyone, including him along the way.
Well Luke ... He will not have a great interest in history. Indeed, in the heart of Justin, he is much more just a friend.
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A big hug!
Fatima.

Big mistake them two together this was. Why didn't the angry mob show up twenty minutes earlier. Brian could very well have had Justin come to Kinnetik.
Is there really a threat out there?

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Hello, Sophie!

I can not imagine Brian and Justin apart, so I gathered them still at the beginning of the story, but many things still need to be discussed.

How to go Kinnetik and lose the opportunity to have Justin alone in his loft, is certainly something that Brian never would consider.

The only really angry is Michael. But Michael is always Michael and more distorted they are he has his reasons.

The threat exists and the next chapter will clear. Please continue following the story and continue giving his opinion, which is very valuable for me.

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I guess it's safe to say there are still some deep feelings on both sides. I'm glad that Justin doesn't think he's in love with Luke. Justin sure recovered from his panic attack with such personalized care. Brian always can be depended on to help a friend in need. Will Brian be able to tell Justin how he feels about him? I think Justin has grown up some and won't be willing to follow Brian just for some hot sex. He is going to need the whole package.
I wonder what sort of shocking news Jennifer has to give the boys. Good thing she arrived with the full team of busy bodies. I think that is what was needed to get them both dressed and out of bed.
Lori

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Hello, Lori!

To the great chagrin of Brian he will have to wait a bit to bring Justin back to his bed

But much as I love Brian and I can not resist the charm Kinney, surely it will happen sooner or later.

The feelings of Brian and Justin for each other will always be there, which weighs Sorrow is both sought and Brian hastily built them.

In Brazil, we say that only if you value what is lost. this is how Brian feels that time.

Justin has matured, but not stopped loving Brian. Brian Just to strive to regain his Sunshine.

Thank you for following the story and leave your wonderful comments.

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Fatima.

I'm so glad you translated this, as it's really good. And if you hadn't said English isn't your first language, I wouldn't have noticed. I've read worse written stories by authors whose first language is English.

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Wow that was an exciting start I am very interested to see where this goes

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Well I guess we know Michael hasn't changed. It makes perfect sense that Hobbs would be the one responsible for all the harm. I am amazed he managed to remain free this long. I'm sure now that Debbie knows she can get the police to catch him and make him pay. Justin seems very unwilling to deal with Brian, lets hope it just because he still loves him so much. I think Brian is going to have to work very hard to make him understand the crazy thoughts that went into flaunting another man in their bed at Britin. I guess Love can make you do insane things.
Lori

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Hello, Lori!

Thank you for following my stories.

I think Michael needs to really grow. To me he was always the most immature character of the entire series. Ben brought some benefits to the maturing of Michael and I have faith that the teacher can put a little bit right on the head of Michael.

As for Chris, I always thought he was capable of doing something. After all, who takes a baseball bat to a graduation party with no intention behind it.

Please accompany the story. In it I try to close several questions that have always bothered me and were not resolved in five seasons.


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hey great start!  very canon  and now that the back story is over with maybe we can meet this Luke fella huh?

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Thank you!
I like to use the cannon and do not usually venture into Alternate Universe.
Luke had a certain significance in the life of Justin during NY. Everything will be explained!
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Oh Brian always putting Justin first. When are you going to learn that the pain you cause the both of you hurts twist and bad for twice as long.
Looking forward to more.

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I do not think Brian one day learn to control their compulsion to do everything for others, even if it hurt him deeply.
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Looking forward to more. Excellent. 

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Good beginning--will be waiting to see how this plays out.

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