Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: chenlina (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 06:45 AM · On: Help Me!

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Reviewer: BrianJustin4Ever (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2016 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 37: Pregnant teenager claims Justin is the father…

I haven't written a QaF story in a while, so I might take it up. I usually write stict BJ stories, but I'm sure I could squeeze BJ into it.



Author's Response: Awesome! I hope you do write it! This could definitely be a B/J story; just imagine how Justin would react to learning he got a girl he's never met pregnant. :) I look forward to reading it if you decide to write it! Deb

Reviewer: BrianJustin4Ever (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2016 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 37: Pregnant teenager claims Justin is the father…

Oh my god. I love this.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you love it! Hopefully someone will grab this up soon. :) Deb

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2016 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 37: Pregnant teenager claims Justin is the father…

OMFG THAT'S THAT'S WOW.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Hopefully someone will snatch it up. :) Deb

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2016 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 34: Deb's past comes back to haunt her...

i love this plot and i would love to tackle it but i want to ask a question and i want to know if i'm correct about something else.    First thing would you be upset if i had michael's father be a person of color.   i think that would be the biggest shock of all if there was a big mix up with the paper and the novotny was a black man.   i mean names mean nothing if u think about it.    Also didn't deb get pregnant at sixteen or eighteen.   are you tell me deb is supposed to be 48 years old when that show starts.  i mean i don't know how old the actres is she could'grayed early so ya.   A black Novotny comes to town with kids of his own maybe a daughter but no wife.   i think maybe he could have feelings for Deb.  like could not remember the things before the war.   they'd be no Carl so maybe Deb would wanna start seeing him.   What do you think?



Author's Response: I have no problem with Michael's biological father being a person of color. The story is yours so it's up to you who Michael's father is if you want to go AU and not have Danny Devore (aka Divina Devore) be Michael's real father. Having memory problems, kids of his own and no wife are great ideas, too. That could stir up a lot of things! :) My initial thought with this plot was: 'What would everyone's reaction be to Charles Michael Novotny returning to Pittsburgh? How would Debbie explain her actions? What would he do when he finds out that a woman he never met claims to be his widow and the mother of his now adult son?' It's canon that Debbie admits to Danny Devore that she chose a young soldier (he was supposedly from Pittsburgh and had no living relatives) who was reported killed in Vietnam to be Michael's father and even went so far as to have her name legally changed to Novotny to keep up the ruse. (Personally, I always thought it was strange that everyone knew how she had struggled as a single mother raising Michael, but no one questioned the fact that she never received the benefits that should have been awarded to her as the widow of a soldier killed in action nor did Michael receive his Social Security benefits.) As to Debbie's age… Michael states in a season 5 episode that Debbie was 17 when she got pregnant with him; she was probably 18 when she gave birth. In season 1, Michael turned 30 around November of 2000 so, yes, that would make Debbie 48 at the beginning of the series. (Sharon Gless was actually 57 at the start of the series.) I hope you decide to write your story and I can't wait to see what you do with this plot! Deb

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2016 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Halloween Mystery

lol are you a buffy fan this could be hilarious lol



Author's Response: OMG!! I did watch 'Buffy' when it first aired. I can't believe that I forgot about that episode! And it was one of my favorites,too! Guess it was rattling around somewhere in my subconscious. LOL! Thanks for the reminder! Deb

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2016 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Can Michael top Ben?

I've been thinking for a while to look outside the box and try writing another pairing aside from B/J...hmmm Will keep you updated if I manage to come up with anything. =)



Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks!! :) Deb

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2016 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 31: Brian's reaction to Lindsay possibly marrying Gui

I think I would like to have a crack at this one.  I hated when Lindsey wanted to marry Gui and I think Brian has the right idea.

Jane



Author's Response: Yay! Thank you, Jane! I'm so glad to hear you want to take a crack at this one and I can't wait to read it! Deb

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 32: Brian meets some of Justin's relatives...

:)



Author's Response: Thanks! :) Deb

Reviewer: BritianLover88 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2016 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 31: Brian's reaction to Lindsay possibly marrying Gui

I completely love this idea. 



Author's Response: Great! And thank you! I'm glad you love it. Hope someone snatches it up. Think you might give it a shot? :) Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2016 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 28: Judge Russo faces the consequences

OMG!! I so want to do this one but it will conflict with what I'm working on now in reference to making 'Regular' Roy irregular, LOL But I'm coming back for it!!!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Yay! I have been trying to come up with something regarding 'Regular Roy' for quite a while now. Then today I was sitting at work and this idea just popped into my head and I have to admit I thought that you would be intrigued! I hope you do come back for it; I would love to see as many takes on this one as possible! Maybe one of these days I will even be able to write something for it. :) Can't wait to see what happens when Regular Roy becomes Irregular Roy!!! *big smile* *Hugs* Deb

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2016 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 28: Judge Russo faces the consequences

this is a fantastic idea... when I get a chance to write again, i'd love to use this... do you publish these ideas to share them?



Author's Response: Yes! I'm glad you like the idea. I definitely post these little bunnies with the hope that other writers will snatch them up and write a story around the bunny/plot or include one or more in a story they are already working on. Anyone can take any (or all *wink*) of the bunnies/plots. I have actually written a couple of my own from the ones I have posted here. Most of these are ideas that will pop into my head but I can't work out a full story, just a couple of scenes. I'm already working on about 4 different fics that I have been working on for years that I really want to finish, so I started posting the bunnies/plots to get them out of my head. What I really enjoy is reading different stories based on the same bunny/plot, so I always hope that more than one writer will take up an idea. I hope you get the chance to write again soon. I would love to see where you take this! Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2016 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 27: Brian spots something familiar

Don't be surprised if you see this little bunny hopping around again. I'm thinking SOWK POST-Stockwell *evil grinning...AGAIN* 



Author's Response: Awesome! I was hoping you might like to tackle this little bunny and get him hopping. Looking forward to it! Deb

Reviewer: yumyumpm (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2016 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 26: Ben/Drew pairing… anyone want it???

Done that.  "It's Written In the Cards."



Author's Response: Saw your comment and was finally able to read your fic late yesterday/early this morning. I really enjoyed it and will post my review after I respond here. It wasn't quite what I was looking for as far as a Ben/Drew pairing. What I'm thinking of is that they are a part of the group and part of the story and not just mentioned as hooking up. Maybe that Ben is never with Michael because Ben is already with Drew. Or maybe Emmett meets them when he is hired to plan their engagement party (instead of Drew/Sierra) and that's how they end up becoming friends with the gang. Or maybe Drew hears about Emmett getting fired from the TV station and decides to come out on air just like in the series but instead of kissing Emmett, he kisses Ben who is waiting off camera with Emmett. I haven't seen that pairing as part of any fics before and I'm still not sure why it popped into my head! :) But I will say again, I loved "It's Written in the Cards" and it is definitely going into my read again and again folder! Thanks again! Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2016 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 24: Melanie re-evaluates the man known as Brian Kinney

Love these plots!



Author's Response: Thanks! Please feel free to take up any plot you want! Deb

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2015 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 22: Three more bunnies/plots...

Deb:  I would like to take the story on Jason Kemp murder.  After writing "The Kidnapping" I would like to give it a try. 

Jane



Author's Response: That would be great, Jane! Thanks for snatching up another bunny! Can't wait! Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 21: A few more bunnies...

Think I might take the Em storyline out of this one too. I know The Michael-interruptus is already being added to SOWK Part 1, so this could definitely be worked in. D-R-A-M-A on ALL  fronts! Thanks Deb!!!



Author's Response: Yay!!! And you're welcome! :) I'm so glad you are using both of those bunnies! They are two of my favorites. The Emmett one is kind of special to me because I've always thought he would be a great dad if given the chance. I've only seen one fic with Em as a father and in that one he was more a sperm donor for Mel. She didn't really let him have much contact with their son. As for Michael-interruptus, a lot of writers have him interrupting B/J a lot, but it's always explained away by Michael saying that B/J are always having sex so it's hard not to interrupt them. I think that's a bit of a cop-out so I thought maybe there's a bit more to him constantly showing up at just the wrong time. Once again, looking forward to more of your stories! Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2015 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 22: Three more bunnies/plots...

LOL! Deb you read MY mind!!! I was thinking about the Hobbs/ Reichert/ Stockwell alliance for the SOWK series with the culmination thereof happening in Part 3. And I think I'll change-or should I say enhance- the issue with JK just a tiny bit. 



Author's Response: Hahaha! As they say... Great minds think alike! I'm betting that you will do a fantastic job! Looking forward to reading it! :) Deb

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2015 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 21: A few more bunnies...

I would like to know if there's any story in which Brian falls in love with Justin (or the other way round), but he (Justin or Brian) is the boyfriend of his friend. 

Thank you very much in advance



Author's Response: I can only suggest that you check out http://getithere.livejournal.com/ and see if there are any stories with plots/bunnies that you are interested in reading by looking through the tags or posting a request describing what you are looking for. Before you post anything at getithere be sure to read the rules. Good luck! Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2015 05:03 AM · On: What might have happened if...

Hey Deb! I struck again...LOL I've incorporated this into the first chapter of "Somewhere Only We Know Part 1," which is up now. I'll definitely use it to build the story around. I also think that I'll be giving Dr. David Cameron a little competition in the form of Professor Ben Bruckner. Hmm *evil grinning and rubbing hands...again* LOL



Author's Response: LOL! I actually saw the new "Part 1" before I saw your review here. Definitely enjoying your fics! Hmmmm... Dr. David Cameron vs. Professor Ben Bruckner... ooohhh... can't wait! Deb PS: Not sure I could decide which one to torture by putting them in a relationship with Mikey! Good old Dr. Dave or Zen Ben! ;)

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2015 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 21: A few more bunnies...

What a wonderful story, Deb. That's what I was looking for to read. Thank you very much



Author's Response: Great! You're very welcome! I'm glad that was one you were looking to read! Deb

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2015 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 21: A few more bunnies...

Thank you very much, Deb. Not quiet what I suggested but I liked it so much, anyway.

Thank you again



Author's Response: You're welcome. Sorry it wasn't quite what you were looking for, but glad you liked it. There was another story suggested. I haven't read this one yet. Hopefully it's closer to what you're looking for. It's called 'I Belong to You' by Sling. http://www.midnightwhispers.ca/viewstory.php?sid=858 Deb

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2015 03:50 AM · On: Help Me!

I saw that #2 was taken (Jack being involved with a man and Brian finding out.) But I really do think it's a great idea. Is it okay to have two stories revolving around it?



Author's Response: It is definitely okay to have two stories based on the same bunny! There is no limit on the number of stories written or the number of authors who want to take up a bunny. I actually could see several different takes on this plot. So I say GO FOR IT! LOL! Can't wait to see what you come up with, Annie-Eliza! Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2015 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 17 Brian sees Ethan with the fanboy in Harrisburg instead of Justin

I added it into Chapter 4 of "Somewhere Only We Know." I hope I did it justice, Deb!



Author's Response: I just read and reviewed it. You did an amazing job! Loved it! You went far beyond doing my little bunny justice!! I can't thank you enough for taking up my bunnies! *HUGS* and *STANDING OVATION* :) Deb

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2015 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 19: Lindsay sees Brian & Gus dining w/another woman

I have an idea for this one ,but it might be awile before I can write it!



Author's Response: Great! Thanks for snatching one of my bunnies! And don't worry about any kind of timeframe; take all the time you need. :) Deb

Reviewer: Astrid (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Justin/JT at Rage Party

I love Justin/JT idea! Brian might be pissed but hopefully there wouldn't be a breakup.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Let's hope it would lead to a lot of make-up sex! Deb

Reviewer: shadowfax044 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Can Michael top Ben?

Oh my god. This one about Michael topping Ben is fantastic!!!! I'm going to see what I can come up with, I'll let you know when I post it!  XD



Author's Response: Great! That's one I've been really hoping someone would pick up. Can't wait to read it! Thank you! Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Justin/JT at Rage Party

I've been thinking of a rewrite for 220 and I think this has a lot of merit! I'll let you know when I come up with something. I think "Somewhere Only We Know" is about to become a series.



Author's Response: Yay! Looking forward to both the rewrite and "Somewhere Only We Know" becoming a series! Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2015 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 17 Brian sees Ethan with the fanboy in Harrisburg instead of Justin

Second installment to "Somewhere Only We Know?" Hmmm...I'm thinking!!! *Evil Grin and Rubbing Hands* LOL



Author's Response: LOL! That would be awesome! *Joining with the Evil Grin and Rubbing Hands* I say "GO FOR IT!!" Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2015 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 8: Punching Michael

Hey Deb, Check out "Somewhere Only We Know!" I just finished it and posted it today, redoing the scene from 301. I hope you like it!!

 

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Ha! I was reading the story when you posted this! Off to finish it up and post my review. Love it so far!!! :) Deb

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2015 04:56 PM · On: Two More Bunnies

Hey Deb,

Started writing on nr. 2. It could take quite some time though. RL is really busy, with a job and the care of my 81 year old mother I don't have much time left, but I'm going to try this.

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response: That's great! And take as much time as you need. There's no rush. RL has to come first (especially moms!) so don't worry. I will patiently wait. :) Thanks for taking one of the bunnies! Deb

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2015 03:25 AM · On: Let's try another one.

I've been thinking about this scenario a lot. Can it be incorporated into one of the fics I'm currently working on?



Author's Response: Absolutely! Incorporate away!! :)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 04:02 AM · On: Let's try another one.

I think I may this one up, Deb. I like the idea of everyone having to solve their own problems the best way they can. It also gives me a million and one places where I can place Brian and Justin to design a new life for themselves. I will definitely think hard about this one. Great Idea!!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you want this one and can't wait to see where you decide to have Brian and Justin stay. There is definitely a million and one places to choose from.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 03:20 AM · On: How about some music?

OMG...I think I just wrote a song!! LOL



Author's Response: Yay! I'm willing to bet you would create a great fic with that bunny! I know you're already writing a lot, but... Go for it! :)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 8: Punching Michael

LOL!! I just posted Chapter 22 a few days ago (Time's Up) where it happened at Brian and Justin's Commitment Dinner. Michael had arranged for a surprise for Brian and Justin (moreso the latter). Brian got to take care of the "surprise" and Justin finally got to hit Michael while he was repeating what he'd told Brian about leaving Justin for dead. And Emmett tried to help Debbie see that Michael meant every word of it.



Author's Response: I just finished reading your update and had to laugh at that scene! It was great! They both (the surprise) and Michael get what's been coming to them for a very long time!

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2014 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Can Michael top Ben?

I love it! This may be the inspiration I've been looking for to do a little writing soon! ...still working 13 hr. days though...



Author's Response: Thank you! That is so sweet! I certainly hope you are inspired, as I would love to read whatever you come up with. And don't worry about any time frame; take all the time you need. :) Deb

Reviewer: nicolle_midnight2013 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2014 08:10 PM · On: What might have happened if...

Hello, Deb! 

 

I liked the idea of Michael being present at the ball. I believe we can work with an alternate ending where the first, Michael attends the dance and becomes convinced that Brian really loves Justin and the other, Michael preclude Brian of entering and Justin could not be saved from the onslaught of hate of Chris Hobbs. 

 

I would like, if possible, to save that rabbit for later, after I finish writing my current WIP and a new story I'm working on. If there is no problem, I ask you to book this little bunny to me. 

 

A big hug! 

Fatima Klayn.




Author's Response: Take your time, Fatima. The bunnies are up for anyone who wants them. I look forward to your fic! :) Deb

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2014 08:10 AM · On: Help Me!

So I was inspired to write a story based on JR's crush on Justin. I don't usually take other's plot bunnies as story ideas have to make sense to me and my ideas of Brian and Justin, but I got an idea of how JR's crush could fit into a version of Brian and Justin, so I gave it a try. It's not done yet, but I've posted the first 4 chapters. It's called someone has a crush. Not that creative a title, but I did give you credit for the main idea. 

Cheers, Laura :) 



Author's Response: I'm so glad you were inspired to write one of my plot bunnies! This is actually one of my favorites, but I could only come up with 1 or 2 scenes which is why I didn't try it myself. It always felt like it should be at least a few chapters long. Can't wait to read the finished version! I'm sure you will do it justice! :) Deb PS: I kinda like the title!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2014 02:58 PM · On: Here's one more

Just to let you know Deb, that I wrote this one and it's under  balrogtweety  called The Kidnapping.  I dedicated it to you because you came up with the plot bunny.  Hope you like it and I hope I did it justice.

Jane



Author's Response: Just read it today and posted my review. You did a great job, Jane! I really enjoyed it. Thanks again for taking up the bunny! Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2014 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: Punching Michael

Better yet.  Let Emmett hear him and punch his lights out.  Now that would be so cool.  Him taking up not only for Justin but Brian as well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2014 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 8: Punching Michael

Yeah.  It's 'Happy 'Fucking' Christmas'.  I couldn't resist.



Author's Response: Ha! I just finished reading that one. Really enjoyed it. But that didn't take place at the munchers' anniversary party. That's what I would love to see. Instead of ranting at Brian, Michael rants at Justin during the party and Justin decks him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2014 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 8: Punching Michael

Done it.  Well not for that particular reason.



Author's Response: Would love to read it. Is it posted on this website?

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2014 06:17 AM · On: How about some music?

Hi Roni,

I'm so far behind in my reading, but I can't wait to see how you depict this.  Soon please.  Pretty please. :)

Hi Deb,

I love how you are sharing your ideas.  Thank you.   I also can't wait for Yvonne's take on Jack's women.  xD

Cheers  



Author's Response: Thanks, Flossee. I can't wait to see what everyone writes who has taken up one of the bunnies. Really looking forward to them. Deb

Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2014 03:13 AM · On: How about some music?

Ooooo, Deb, I want this one. Of course I can't write songs, so I'll have to 'borrow' one, and of course it'll have to be a Brian-like song, soooo.... Bwwahahaha... I think I have just the thing.

Roni



Author's Response: Yay!!! Thanks, Roni! Can't wait to read it!

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2014 01:59 AM · On: How about a Leverage crossover?

Love this idea!



Author's Response: Thanks! I hope someone will take a shot at it.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2014 09:23 PM · On: Help Me!

Just love the one about Brian thinking he is EAP! That could be hilarious. I'll keep that one in the back of my mind for later. Unfortunately, I'm already mired in 3 WIPs right now so I don't dare start another story. I'll let you know when I can find time to take this bunny off your hands, though. Great ideas, all of them. TAG



Author's Response: Thanks, TAG!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2013 12:32 PM · On: Here's one more

Deb: I would like to tackle this story on Jennifer finding out that her son is not dead after all. I think I could do it some justice. I've been a detective fanatic since I was young. I could handle this one. Thanks. Jane

Author's Response: Great! Thanks for taking one of the bunnies! I look forward to reading your fic!

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2013 11:58 PM · On: Help Me!

Hello,

Well I can't narrow down a time frame, not to mention I'll have to re-read my Edgar Allen Poe, but I will be tackling "The Raven". I've actually wanted to do a story with Brian as Satan for a while, and I think I can incorporate those ideas with Poe's works easily. I've only ever written one fantasy before, but I think I will be writing one again soon.

With family, work, school and the rest of life I don't want to state a time to finish and then not follow through, but I will write it when I can. Just wanted to let you know that your ideas have been heard.

Cheers, Laura :)



Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for taking up one of the plot bunnies, Laura. And no time frame needed, just glad some of these are getting picked up. All I ask is that you mention the plot bunny was from me. :) Have fun! Deb

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Here's one more

this plot sounds better than any others you have suggested.

Author's Response: Go for it, Linda!

Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2013 01:22 AM · On: Help Me!

May I take this one please?

'2. Jack's Women
What happens when Brian discovers that Jack's 'other women' weren't exactly women? This could be set before Jack dies or after; either way would be interesting.'

 

And do I just say 'Plot bunny Deb Tanner on Midnight Whispers'?

Much Love ~ Yvonne xx



Author's Response: You most certainly may take it! You may take all of them if you wish. I look forward to reading your fic. And yes, please just mention the plot bunny is mine. Thank you, thank you, thank, you! Deb

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