Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 2
Brian takes Justin's hand and guides him over to the sofa. Sitting down, Justin immediately straddles him and smiles again. "Fuck?"
Michael turns to Ben, whispering harshly, "He's seducing Brian."
"A sex-crazed alien...it must be Christmas in Kinney-land," Ted summarizes.
I was laughing much with this part! You just made my day!!!
{{{Hugs}}}
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 8
I just read all eight chapters in one sitting and let me tell you, this has to be one of the most interesting fics I have ever read. I really hope there is more to come.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a wonderful comment, thank you!
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2013 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 8
love the chapters u wrote i laugh so much my rib hurt update soon thanku kim
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 8
What about Penny, Leonard? You have no idea how happy I was to see you included Leonard in your story.
Amazing chapter, thank you.
Author's Response: Yay! Another Big Bang fan!! :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 8
The sex toy conversation is hilarious. Will Brian go to Justin’s planet? I hope he does as he can always visit earth, but either way as long as they are together. Another awesome chapter.
Cheers
Author's Response: Brian and Justin will live happily ever after :)
hugs!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 8
I love that Brian used the line "I'm going with him." and Ted's "Well, he is definitely bringing home one hell of a souviner." So true.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was wondering if anyone would catch that "i'm going with him" line :) And yep, Brian is the best souviner ever IMO ;)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 8
Sex and giggling. Great story. Please update soon. Brian is so in love.
Author's Response: Thank you! The final chapter is half-way completed :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 8
:) Fun chapter
technology
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 8
This is such a delightful story, Julieta! And you have Michael's whininess down pat in this chapter.:) I love how irretrievably Brian has fallen in love with his little alien, and how open and inquisitive Justin is about all the sex toys - ha! One more chapter (?). Although I wouldn't complain if you have more planned. Thank you for sharing this very entertaining story. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you!! I am really enjoying writing this :) The final chapter is almost completed, and then I plan to add an epilogue. Thank you again!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
Lobster's too good to waste! Fun chapter. Will be looking forward to your updates.
Author's Response: LOL Thanks so much for your comments!! :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
Fun time at Debbies. I wonder what Michael will do next.
Author's Response: I've actually been enjoying writing Michael's character in this story LOL :)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 5
You have good story direction.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 4
This is an excellent story and I sure hope you continue it.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 3
Interesting cliffie there
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 2
I have a smile as I read this.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is very good. Your first chapter shows great promise. Reading more.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 7
I was reading this chapter on the bus and started laughing so loud at the chicken scene that the other riders are now giving me dirty looks and a few even moved away. This was hilarious! More please. TAG
Author's Response: **snort!** That is so awesome LOL Sorry about that, but I'm so glad I was able to give you a laugh! :)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 6
Michael really HAS been watching too many bad SciFi flicks! Hah! TAG
Author's Response: so has this writer it seems...LOL!!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 5
Funny chapter. I can just see him yelling 'Take Out' to everything in the kitchen. TAG
Author's Response: LOL :) thanks!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2013 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 2
Yea! Hot, kinky inter-species relations! This could get good! Hehehe. TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2013 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
Fun premise! Can't wait to read more. TAG
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2013 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
LOL @ the ending!
Author's Response: hehehe, thank you!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 7
Lol,I'm really loving this so much,and that last line (a long with a good few others) had me laughing alot ~ Yvonne xx
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really having fun writing this :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
I admit my brain isn’t functioning as well as it should, but I still can’t believe I didn’t get this line the moment I read it. "I don't want to eat something that came from manure. That can't be sanitary." I love the way you have Justin using the literal meaning of words we use every day and that have a number of (slang) meanings. Priceless. Once again the update is Hilarious. Thank you so much for entertaining us with such talent.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, it's funny how we can take things and statements for granted sometimes...I'm so glad you're enjoyign this story! Thank you so much again for the comments! :)
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
Daphne is also an alien!!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 7
Loved Justin trying to heat up the chicken. This story is great. Brian really has to watch what he says.
Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2013 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 7
LOL!!! This is just so smart and funny!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Missy!! :)
Reviewer: bedtimecoffee (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
HAHA! Check please! You gotta love an innocent, sweet, horny Justin. I love this story. I'm so glad you decided to keep writing.
Author's Response: LOL thank you so much for your review! :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2013 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 7
You're going to get drunk." Brian comments.
Eyes widening, Justin stares at him in shock. It takes a moment for Brian to realize why. He laughs, shaking his head. "No one is going to drink you, Justin.
"Can we take some cake home? I want to put some of this chocolate on your cock and suck it off."
"Check, please."
OMG, Julieta, the hilarity continunes! I was delighted to see that you had updated this - it's hysterical! Loved the two parts above especially. "Check, please" - sooo funny!
Keep it coming - I'm loving this! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2013 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 6
This has got to be the best chapter yet!!
Justin was adorable in his misunderstanding of what was going on around him, Michael was hilarious in his indignation, Debbie was clueless, and Brian was enarmored and enjoying himself with the blond alien.
This story makes my day!
Author's Response: I am so glad you like this! I had a lot of fun with this chapter! :)
Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2013 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 6
LOL !!
This plot make me laugh! Thank you :)
It's so sweet how alien Justin deals with earth technology and figure of speech.... while being so super intelligent...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm g;ad you're enjoying this story :) It's been fun to write :)
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2013 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 6
I really love this alot! ~ Yvonne xx
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2013 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
This had me in stitches laughing - Standing up, Justin explains, "You told me that if I get hungry, to call take out. So I said Take Out, but nothing happened. So I thought that maybe you were supposed to take something out and say Take Out to it...but I didn't know what, so I took out everything in your kitchen and told it to take out, but nothing happened." He sighs and shrugs, "Maybe you need to check your voice activation system?"~ Yvonne xx
Author's Response: LOL, I'm so glad that made you laugh! :)
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2013 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
I love this so much,it's very entertaining ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
I loved it! ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
Incredible! ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Lol,im going to love this!! ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
Update soooon pls! Like I said before, this so gooooood :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! I am writing the next chapter now!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
ROFL. I can't get over how childish Mikey is, and I like how everyone else is welling to accept Justin's being in Brian's life. It was cute when Brian pointed out that Justin had managed to order take out and Justin lit up and said "Me!" Made me think of how Gus would have reacted. So many cute little gems, like Debbies nails. Hilarious. Mikey's in trouble, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter!! :)
Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 6
It's fun, reading this story. :) Especially Michael with his comic-laden thoughts. Hilarious. Thanx!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is so charming. Loving the innocent alien Justin and the protective Brian. Looking forward to your next update.
All the best!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am working on the next chapter right now! :)
Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 6
But Brian, I am warning you, if that alien does anything crazy like light up my mom's gnome collection, you are in deep shit!
LOL, I haven't laughed this hard in... god... forever! You are a genius, snow! This story is sooo much fun...
... and Brian finishes his wine. LOL
Roni
Author's Response: Thank you thank you!! You're so sweet!
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 6
this chapter is hilarious!!! i love alien justin, its so funny
Author's Response: Thank you!! Alien Justin is pretty darn cute... ;)
Reviewer: ceci (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
I haven't laughed that hard winna while. Fantastic - you have a great imagination! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so glad that you're enjoying this!! Thank you again!!
Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 6
Reading this atfter midnight and LOL :)
Thanks for the quick update!
Author's Response: LOL So glad you liked it!!!
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is such a cute story! I love it!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
the new banner is even better.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 6
i laught so hard i went red i love it update soon kim
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 6
Cannibal Debbie with penis painted finger nails living in the house of gnomes. LOL Brian not stopping during sex to answer the door and enjoying dinner at Debbie’s. I think Justin really has done something to Brian. Made him happy perhaps. Funny and oh so sweet; thank you.
Cheers
Author's Response: LOL I'm so glad you liked this chapter! Thanks so much for your comments!
hugs,
Snow
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 6
OMG, I have no idea where you're going to take this, but this has to be one of the funniest stories about the boys that I have ever read! I am thoroughly enjoying this one! LOVED the scene at Deb's - everything about it. Loved your portrayal of Michael as the worrywart when everyone else is nonchalant about Justin. Loved Justin's innocent, carefree attitude and his PSAs! Laughed out loud at Michael telling him to "leave Ma's gnomes alone!" I am so glad you thought this up! Thanks for sharing this wonderful tale! *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I am THRILLED that this story is as fun to read as it has been to write :) And thank you again for the awesome banner. I love it!
hugs!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 6
BTW. Love the banner.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 6
This would make the funniest tv show ever. I have to remember not to eat or drink when reading this. The gnome collection, Debbie being a cannibal, OMG, I couldn't stop laughing. And sex too. This is the best story ever.
Author's Response: LOL, omg thank you! That is such an awesome compliment! Wow!
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
This chapter was really funny! Thank you
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
Show me...he says.... And I'm sure Brian will be most happy to comply! ;) :P
Author's Response: Oh yes! Brian has always been a hands-on kind of teacher, don't you think? lol
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 1
WEll I like this whole idea...Been waiting for the right time to read it
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :)
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh my - how this chapter made me laugh! As always Brian and Justin are equally matched - even if one isn't human! Who would have thought!? LOL.
Dinner at Deb's is always an event of some kind or another... but this one was priceless. I think all the guests would have to agree - even Michael!
Thanks for the chapter, hun. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Now... I swear I am getting back to my own projects! :) *Hugss*
Author's Response: LOL, I'm so glad this chapter made you laugh! I ended up posting a banner up. Not 100% sure I like it, but it's better than my previous one of just Justin's black & white image with blue eyes (which he looked really hot in, but I felt I needed more in the banner than just him).
Anywho, thanks again so much for reading and taking the time to comment!!!!
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 5
Wow. This story premise is utter brilliance, hun. I really love it! Last night I was in bed, taking a 'rare' break from writing. Shhh. Don't tell anyone. LOL. I stumbled on this and read all the chapters. This is original, fun, and witty. And... of course, hot! I love Justin's fascination with the word 'fuck'. Somehow it's both cute and endearing.
I hope to read more of this unique 'verse. Well done on such a clever idea! One thing, though... maybe you need a banner or some sort of image to draw attention to it. Some readers might be missing it in between the larger size posts.
Thanks for writing this! *Hugss*
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your comments! That means so much coming from you, thank you! Now, I understand taking a break from all the fics you are writing but...get back to work! LOL
No, seriously, thank you. This is pretty fun to write. I'm glad you like it. I'd like to add a banner, but I'm pretty crappy at it. I've been trying different styles, and nothing works as I can't find a good picture of "Justin" that I want to use.
Thank you again!
Hugs,
Snow
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 5
"That's a fantastic idea."
I like it.
Author's Response: hehehe, thanks! :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 5
“Immediately the cylinder uncurls and Justin returns to his form.”
Nice alien ability. I wonder if Justin is in his true form.
"You've been busy."
Brian should have though it through about leaving him alone on his first day on earth. Again, hilarious.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 4
"That's negative energy, Brian. What happens will happen."
He and zen Ben should get along nicely. SAnd brian could allways use more positive energy in his life.
Author's Response: :)
Totally ;)
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2013 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
"Is this fucking?"
Apparently sex is better on earth with all it’s messiness.
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2013 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 2
"Can't I keep him?"
Hilarious! Justin is an adorable alien with only one thing on his mind and perfect for human Brian. Of course Brian would want to keep him.html />
Author's Response: LOL Thank you!!! I'm so glad you like this. I'm having fun writing it :)
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 5
OMG That was hilarious. He talked to the food. I cracked up just picturing that. Love this story.
PS. Tom Hanks was in Splash, not Michael Keaton.
Author's Response: Oops! Thanks for catching that mistake!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 5
Brian goes to work single and when he arrives home he is married. Priceless. Justin Kinney; wait until Michael hears about that. LOL Calling take out. Hilarious. Justin can go a month without eating; what can I say; a person who thinks outside the box. I have no idea what you do for a living but my guess would be that you are an English Literature professor who has a weird obsession (like the rest of us) with QAF because this is so well written and pure genius. Please keep it coming.
Cheers
Author's Response: Wow, what an incredible compliment! I had once thought about majoring in English, but when I entered the university, my literature teacher pretty much ripped me a new one every time I wrote anything. So I scratched that major and found my love in Sociology of Social Psychology. Afterwards, I decided to pursue my graduate degree in special education. Sometimes I think about returning to school for my doctorate in sociology, but I've never been able to return to English. Sad, I guess. That asshole really traumatized me. LOL I ended up stabbing all all of the textbooks for that class with a dagger before throwing it into the fireplace when the semester had ended....yeah, I had some rage. LOL
Anywho, LOL, thank you so much for the compliment, I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story! :)
Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 5
LOL! Who knew the F word could bring so much joy :) I am definitely enjoying it!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh Lord! Think of all the little things we take for granted and Justin doesn't have the faintest idea what they are. You've got enough material with that to write many long chapters. Kinda wish that it was Michael that made the call. I've never liked him. Keep 'em coming.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comments! Yes, it's funny all the things we take for granted :) Thanks again!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 5
OMG, I am loving this story, Julieta! It is very unique, and Justin as an somewhat innocent alien is too damn adorable! I loved it when he couldn't figure out how to call Brian and how he transformed into a different shape so the Feds couldn't figure out he was there. I love the sweetness of his character and his openness in this story - and how Brian is quickly falling head over heels for him.
So glad you decided to write this one! So funny! Definitely looking forward to the rest of this, and whatever other 'surprises' await our little blond alien. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kim! I've fallen in love with Justin in this story too...he makes it so easy, doesn't he? LOL
Hugs!
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
OMG, I'm dying here. This is so, so, so great and funny...... really.
I want an alien for myself- Justin of course :D
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'd like an alien Justin too :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2013 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
“…his blue eyes sparkle with an unknown light that terrifies Michael before fading…”
"Brian, I know what you are thinking. You can't fuck him, he's an alien!"
LOVE IT! I was so hoping for an alien-Justin and your story fits that bill perfectly so far. You did a nice job with the first contact. Unfortunately, I have to get some sleep. I will continue with the rest tomorrow.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad this hasn't disappointed you. The storyline just came to me while driving...as soon as the song came on, I thought, "What if..." LOL The muse is a funny thing.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2013 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this. Please add a lot more. Funny and sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you, Lorie! I will :)
Reviewer: missy (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2013 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 4
Well this was my lucky night, I can't wait to read more :)
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks, Missy! I'm so glad you like this!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 4
Brian is already worried about Justin leaving; I like that. Justin’s planet sounds wonderful so maybe Brian can go back with him. Please update as soon as you have eaten all your Easter eggs.
Cheers
Author's Response: Yummy chocolates...mmmmm LOL I just added chapter 5, and I'm working on chapter 6. I hope you like it!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 3
Alien sex v Human sex. The winner is ????? Kinney sex of course. Brian even blackout; it must have been good. LOL
Cheers
Author's Response: oh yeah, blacking out from the awesomeness is always a good sign ;)
I'd vote for Kinney sex any day ;)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 2
“Well I'm glad to see we both have the same parts” your mind is incredible; who else would have thought to put those words in Brian’s mouth. ROFLMAO. Again there are so many funny lines here. Thank you for light-hearted entertainment.
Cheers
Author's Response: LOL Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying this :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG you are so talented. You take us from Kai, to angsty hybrids to humorous aliens. I just can’t pick out one line I like more than the rest; this is hilarious. Thank you for multiple chapters as I can’t wait to read on.
Cheers
Author's Response: YOu are so kind, thank you!! Thank you soo much!
Reviewer: bedtimecoffee (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 4
I like this story. I actually enjoy everything you write so I imagine this story will not disappoint. I think you should keep writing and keep us readers marveled by your tales. *smile*
Author's Response: YOu are so sweet, thank you!!
Hugs,
Snow
Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love it, more please!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I just added chapter 5 :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
You have to continue this. I want' to know if the Makvins lose. If Brian goes back with Justin, or does he end up staying here. I'm sure Emmett will be happy to take Justin under his wing and can you just imagine Justin meeting Deb? Love that final line. Just right.
Author's Response: Oooh, I didn't think about Deb meeting Justin...oh, that could be fun to write!! LOL
Thank you so much for your comments!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 3
Okay - a glowing orb surrounding them - freaky. But Brian's world turning black!!!
The next chapter is going to be goooood.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
I love Justin's fascination with the word fuck. It's so cute. Ted's comment about Christmas in Kinney-land. <chuckle> I have a feeling that Brian's going to enjoy initiating Justin into Earth's version of sex.
Author's Response: Fuck really is the best word ever, you can use it for many different purposes LOL Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
LOL. From the moment Brian realizes that Michael's misled him to where he races back to his loft, there have been tidbits of amusing lines. Michael admitting he embellished the truth, Emmetts excuses for Ben bringing a suitcase, Ted's many questions. I still can't beleive that Brian fell for it. If your muse is working for you this way, I say keep it coming. It's totally enjoyable.
Author's Response: hehehe, thank you! I had fun writing the first chapter ;)
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
More please? I can really see Mikey 'queenin out' over this.
Author's Response: Thank you! LOL Yeah, Mikey has his moments...LOL
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
Okay Okay..... you need to finish the story, that's for sure :D
First, when I read about the alien thing, I was a little skeptically but it turned out very funny :D
Author's Response: I was skeptical about even posting it, so I appreciate you taking the time to read it! Thank you! And I'm glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 3
"Oh" :D this is so good.... but what happened to Brian?
Author's Response: Orgasm was so intense that he blacked out. That's what happens when you fuck an alien like Justin LOL ;)
Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm going to quietly whisper... "More?"
Please?
Can't wait to find out who Klutavenish is...
Roni
Author's Response: soon!
hugs,
Snow
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hi, Julieta! I like it - kind of like the glow in "Cocoon" between Tawny Welch and Steve Guttenberg when they kissed, only hotter.;) I laughed out loud when Brian asked if he could 'keep him.' Hope you continue this - I'd like to see how this plays out.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! I'm thrilled to read all the positive reviews as I was really hesitant about posting this. Thanks so much for your comments!
Hugs,
Snow
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
LMAO .... so many hilarious lines here.... :D
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is totally strange, but I'm laughing so far :D
Author's Response: LOL It is bizarre, isn't it?!! LOL But I'm glad it's making you laugh!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
:) Outstanding plot idea.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
I LOVE the universal translator! I want one!
This looks very interesting and I can't wait to see the... um... fireworks. ;o
Roni
Author's Response: LOL Thank you!!!
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