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Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2013 06:22 AM · On: How Soon is Now?

Was waiting to have a good sit down to read this well and glad I did. Great chapter as always, glad you explained a bit about the Finding Nemo thing that was really stating to puzzle me. Also cool to let Molly into the storyline a bit. Always thought she should have been more than an Offscreen Charac. on the show.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! And I'm glad I could clarify the Finding Nemo connection.

Yes, Molly was tragically neglected later in the show - it could have been another interesting aspect of Justin's life to explore. But - I'll gladly take up that mantle, at least a little bit!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2013 05:14 AM · On: How Soon is Now?

I love the phone conversation of Brian and Justin, esp the part where Brian tease Justin and the exchanging of missing you. Another great chapter my dear, can't wait for more. {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

lol! I'm glad you liked that part :)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2013 08:17 PM · On: How Soon is Now?

Ahhh - a new long chapter! Don't get me wrong, I love those long chapters, and I love to be immersed in this verse. And I also love the slow pace of your writing, so Brian's development is really believable. And I suppose it's still to early for Justin to show up, even though I would like to ...

Looking forward to your next part. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the looooooooong chapters. :) sometimes I wonder if they deter people but...the story demands to be told this way! :)

I'm so happy you said what you did about Brian's development. That is my biggest concern here, that I get his growth right. I'm happy it's working for you! thank you so much!

I really appreciate your comments. :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2013 07:00 PM · On: How Soon is Now?

It's good to see that Sam's parting words have started to make Brian take a good look at how he handles his personal relationships. With Gus showing signs of having abandonment issues, his bit of introspection couldn't have come at a better time ;)

Now I'm anxious for the next installment :)

Author's Response:

Brian can be slow on the uptake! He can change and grow...it just takes him a looooong time, :)

Thank you for continuing to read and comment, I really appreciate it! 

(oh, and next chapter hopefully in a few days!)

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: July 02, 2013 01:18 AM · On: How Soon is Now?

I feel so sorry for Gus, and Brian is experiencing the stress that most single parents do. I hope Justin's career takes off.



Author's Response:

Thank you for continuing to read and comment! I appreciate it!

Yes, poor Gus is having a rough time of it :(

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