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Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2013 08:22 AM · On: Laid

Very sweet ending to this chapter. I like how you show Brian's vulnerability while maintaining the gruff exterior. TAG 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I like to let Brian's vulnerability peek through his gruff exterior from time to time. :)

Reviewer: valell50 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 02:19 PM · On: Laid

Thank goodness Justin used "please". If only Justin makes a stand for staying regardless of Brian's need to be so stubborn and alone.
Enjoying this! Val

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the comment! I'm happy to hear you are enjoying the tale :)

 

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2013 12:14 AM · On: Laid

Finally that stubborn, dysfunctional man is allowing himself to feel all the love he needs; please don't let him push away again the only man he can possibly love... ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Brian is never one to do things easy...

Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it so much!

~M

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2013 12:38 PM · On: Laid

I loved your answer to my last review. “Oh Brian. He's being such a dork and a dumbass. Believe me it's rough for me, too”. LOL Sometimes we forget how hard it is for the author to write just enough angst, as we (the reader) can’t wait for the good stuff. I agree with Brian, Justin does need to leave for now. I can’t wait to see where you are taking this and how long you will keep them apart, but I have faith in you, as it is a B/J fic. Great update; enjoy your Easter Break.

Cheers

Author's Response:

haha!! Yes, the author is not always in control of the characters! 

Thank you so much for reading and commenting/reviewing! I greatly appreciate knowing you are enjoying the tale, and I certainly hope I do not disappoint!

Also - My heart will forever be B/J. :)

~M

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2013 09:04 PM · On: Laid

Can't Brian see Justin really doesn't want to go back?
Why is he putting them both through all the pain of separation? I'm sure if he'd ask Lindsay now if Justin should go back she'd probably tell him no and to enjoy his time with him because you'd never know when it could end.

Author's Response:

Oh I'm certain Brian knows Justin wants to stay - but he'd never let him give up his big opportunity. :)

Thank you for reading and commenting! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 09:38 AM · On: Laid

You've manage to word the feeling that I hoped Brian would have and almost get him to reveal them.  Isn't there some sort of compromise, other than sending Justin back to New York, that they can make?  That dream has to mean something.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment! Sometimes it can be hard to write Brian "true" and also give him valid emotions/etc. :D

...we'll see what happens next!

Thank you for reading and commenting! 

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2013 08:51 AM · On: Laid

excellent- at least they talked and the sex- so hot.- lucky Justin having condoms



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and continuing to comment! I appreciate it!

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