Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 07:04 PM · On: The Birthday

Yes.....Shane finally told Slatter about the baby and he didn't run away like I thought he would, he fucking asked her to marry him. (Slatter just redeemed himself in my eyes) on top of everything, Brian brought nana in to surprise Justin.

I can't wait for the celebration~JP

Author's Response:

Slatter grew on me as I was writing him.   It's complex.  And Brian bringin Nana, well that is totallin in character for me. Brian was not going to let Justin go on lying to the one person, other than his mother, that he respects and loves.  and Brian knew Nana would felt the same about Justin.  It was a good thing Brian did! But then again, he'd do anything for his Sunshine.  :-)

 

Thanks for commmenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 07:03 PM · On: I Celebrate You

What a wonderful wedd.....ummm celebration. Daphne was brilliant, the vows were beautiful, and now maybe Lindsay can move on and just be happy and thankful that Mel loves her.

Author's Response:

I laughed when I saw you wrote 'wedd..ummm celebration'   And you'll see why in the next chapter!

Thanks for commenting! So glad you're enjoying this story.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 06:55 PM · On: The Birthday

Yes.....Shane finally told Slatter about the baby and he didn't run away like I thought he would, he fucking asked her to marry him. (Slatter just redeemed himself in my eyes) on top of everything, Brian brought nana in to surprise Justin.

I can't wait for the celebration~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 06:42 PM · On: The Hospital

Somebody give Brian some slack! Of course Brian will be mean to Adam, the lawyer is threatening to ruthlessly take away Gus from him and ruin his person. I think, Rena is being a hypocrite, not judging the lawyer.  I am not saying kicking Adam's ass, but can't she at least give him the WASP treatment? Because if for Adam it is not personal, it is extremely personal to her brother. At some point they should have a united front and stand for each other. At least Shane, however much it's hurting her, understands this.



Author's Response:

Brian feels much the same way.  He wonders why his sister isn't taking his side more.  But maybe Rena has more faith in Adam...  He's good for Shane, she see's that. Now Brian will have to see it. Well, we can hope!  lol

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 05:44 PM · On: The Battle Begins

I dont care if Mel and Adam is putting the pressure on Lindsay, but she should have the balls to say when something is too much. The stipulation t stop Brian from ever seeing her son should have been a wake-up call. She owes Brian big time for giving them a son. No wonder Brian gets wary of opening himself when friends as close as Lindsay discard their relationship without remorse.



Author's Response:

Lindsay's a sap. I always believed so.  Her 'sweetness' always sickened me. But Brian loves her, so I have to be kind.  :-)   

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 05:40 PM · On: The Battle Begins

I loove Shane. Adam just might not deserve her and all the other dysfunctional family she's with. Poor him.



Author's Response:

I think they are perfect for each other!  In a dysfunctional way of course lol

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 05:24 PM · On: Revelations

Where is Shane?!!!



Author's Response:

hmmmm.....  she'll be back!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 05:13 PM · On: Walking on Broken Glass

It's almost sacrilegeous reading heterosexual sex in a qaf story. :D But I'm so happy for Shane.

Frankly, if I were Jennifer, I would have kidnapped Justin to keep him away from Brian. Brian has mountains of baggages, way more than his clothes in his closet. Now I believe Adam that Justin is their knight in shining armor. The demons of Brian and Rena seem unsurmountable.



Author's Response:

writing hetero sex isn't as much fun as it use to be lol.  And yes, Justin is a knight in shinning armor in many ways.   Both Rena and Brian need him.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 04:42 PM · On: Mr. Goodbars

If I were the partner of your Brian, I'd have a heart attack everytime he goes out!

James is getting to be so cool. He's like an older Jason Bourne with his fast hands. 



Author's Response:

lol Brian is not easy, that's for sure!  I loved writing James. One of my favorite characters.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 04:17 PM · On: Lies and Other Misdemeanors

Oh gooood! I was hoping Shane will find someone. :)

It's so sad with what's happening among Lyndsay, Mel and Brian. It is getting ugly and the Gus is caught in between. In a way it's the girls' fault, if they did not want the father to have anything to do with their child, they should have gotten a donor from the sperm bank. If they don't trust Brian, why did they even ask for such a personal favor? 



Author's Response:

Yes, this is getting ugly.  The girls are being mean, but Mel is desparate. So glad you're enjoying this story! Thank you for all the lovely comments!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 02:20 PM · On: Ethan

That was hilarious! 'You did not hear me!'.  My very first boyfriend used to have this dark moods all of a sudden. I' d ask him for the reason and he'd gripe, 'If you love me, you'll know why.' hahaha! Brian sounded so much like him, but we were 19 then!   Aaahhh love, since we have the capacity to turn our lovers into mush, we turn into their personal cape crusaders complete with super powers. :D



Author's Response:

lol Typical Brian.   Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 11:02 AM · On: Phase One

Hahaha! It's Relationship 101 for Brian, Brian Kinney Advance Course for Justin, and the Twilight Zone for the spectators!  No wonder Justin eats a lot, it's to avoid ulcer.



Author's Response:

I never thought of that! But you're right, that is probably why Justin eats so much!  lol

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 07:38 AM · On: Cha..cha..changes

I would have laughed hard too. And I am so proud of Justin, even though he is hurting, he stood his ground. And he deserves to stay in their loft, with the emotional battering he gets from Brian, he gets to stay where he gets knocked down. Knocked down but ready for another round the next time.



Author's Response:

I love a strong Justin, don't you?

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 07:08 AM · On: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

They make one phone call, then they become dead men... That's way cooool!



Author's Response:

And oddly enough, I am currently writing the 4th in this series, and that precise line has come up in Jame's memory!  Full Circle 

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 06:29 AM · On: The Morning After

Awww... Thank you Gina for following up the two hot previous chapter with such a sweet dessert of a chapter. :)



Author's Response:

:-)  I really did like this chapter.  Glad you did too.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 10:14 PM · On: Last Call

Such melodrama is normal in a day in a life with Brian Kinney. And Justin has been around this since he was 17 years old.  No wonder he talks like he's 39 and not 19. Now add Rena, Justin will soon be 19 turning 50.  If he doesnt slow down he might need viagra soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all you comments!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 07:29 PM · On: Reconnecting

Michael and Ben, the reverse of Brian and Justin. Theirs is the stable, non-drama and not-worth-a-tv-show relationship. In real life, I'd pick to be like them. That's why I'm not much a Brian-obsessed Mikey, it undervalues Ben-and-Mikey partnership. And I love Ben! ;)



Author's Response:

Agree!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 01:07 PM · On: The Plan

I like where this is going ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks again!  lol 

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 12:45 PM · On: The Diner

I like stories where Michael and Lyndsay are real friends of Brian and Justin. Sometimes there are overloads of anti-Michael fics. They're fine but it's a relief to see normal nice Michael with his loving husband Ben.



Author's Response:

Not a big anti-michael fan.  I too like the relationships between all.

Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 12:39 PM · On: The Plan

I like where this is going ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 11:18 AM · On: Better Than a Blow Job

"He wanted Justin to know that he was still a very sensual, and sexy, man that could enjoy sex with other men."

I guess that answers the monogamy question.

Author's Response:

It does, but it also shows how much Brian cared about Justin healing, as a whole human being.  Yes, Justin was ok having sex with Brian after the bashing, Brian was safe, but what about other men? Brian wanted to make sure Justin was ok having sex again, period.  We all know Brian's philosphy on sex! Every gay man's right.  

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 11:15 AM · On: Pain Management

I didn't care for Justin letting Shane goal him into something. I thought Justin had more sense than that.

Author's Response:

Justin is not without flaws. He has his pain too, and he was trying to see what Brian gains from his pain management technique. Well, he found out, so he now has a better understanding.  No one really goads Justin into doing anything he doesn't want to. On some level, he wanted to.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 11:07 AM · On: Friends and Family

That was hot! Wait a minute. I have to go over more of this. Is Brian monogamous?

Author's Response:

lol Seems he's trying to be, at least.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 11:02 AM · On: Some Things Never Change

This whole thing was like a pissing contest.

Justin is the Knight in Shining Armor?

Author's Response:

Yip.  In a sense.  :-)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 10:50 AM · On: New York

"He liked her spirit. He had a feeling she could hold her own against Brian."

I liked the introduction of Shane. Brian didn't just get Rena back but a whole new family. The problem was that the whole family was broken and abused at some point. That probably makes the bond tighter.

Author's Response:

True. The one thing I liked about QAF was the non conventional, troubled, broken, plain old fucked up family relationships. I just built on that!  lol

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 10:44 AM · On: Open Wounds

"It meant that Justin had his work cut out for him."

Justin focusing on Brian calling him his boyfriend was unexpected and beautiful. He focused on what was most important.

I never realized that the title referred to Brian's meeting of Justin.

Author's Response:

Before there was you, there was you, was my interpertation of thier destined relationship. I believe they were fated to be with each other. In my sequels, I delve more into that and how they are soulmates, and always have been.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 10:30 AM · On: Coming Home

For someone who bottles up his feelings, Brian has more emotional events in his life than I do, both here in BTWYTWY and QAF.  That's what happens when heat is kept simmering underneath for long, like lava in volcanoes. Look at Emmett, he has as much need to look for his own personal love but his life is not as explosive. And Brian calls Honeycut the Queen. 

Love this chapter by the way. It could be written as a script and read out loud. Such emotions and passion that can ring out from the actors.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was fun writing.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 10:02 AM · On: Not So Jaded

The bantering and queening out starting with Emmett and Justin then on to Oscars are marvelous. Sure, it's harsh but so sharp and witty. That was a fun read.

You had me at 'Hey'. Can't stop yourself from using this famous line, can't you? ;)



Author's Response:

Hey, it's a great line.  :-)   Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 08:32 AM · On: Aunty Viv

I say, Justin is the youngest in age in that room but he surely is the oldest in what really matters. 



Author's Response:

I always thought Justin an 'old soul'.  

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 07:55 AM · On: Saving Rena

Justin with a MILF, that cracked me up. :D.

I think it's a better decision not to tell everything to Brian. However macho Brian wants to believe he is, he does have the tendency to have an emotional overload when it gets too intense.  That's why Justin balances him so much



Author's Response:

Brian over emotional? lol  Yes, though he doesn't like to admit it, he is the king of queen outs!  I agree, Justin balances him.

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 07:27 AM · On: Grief In My Soul

This is classic Justin. Lovely!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Better Than a Blow Job

Brian is definitely the lucky one. This blonde is his and hus sister's knight.



Author's Response:

Yip.  :-)

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 06:43 AM · On: Pain Management

And the game of see-saw continues. Immature Brian has not left the playground.



Author's Response:

There was always a little boy inside of Brian, and that boy was often petulant.  :-)

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 06:26 AM · On: Friends and Family

Oh wow! The ruthless businessman just emerged. The lines you gave Brian shows how perceptive he is and dangerously cutting. That's one side I think Justin doesn't see, however much Justin hurt his lover. Because this Brian just cut Shane to the core and put her in place. Probably deserved but quite hard specially after Shane offered her conciliatory move... I like this sneak peek in Brian's personality. It shows us why his Kinnetics is a success and why the man behind the company is on top.

Then he turns into a teddy bear for his Justin. Awwww... And let's not forget the momentous "I love you too." awwwwwwwwwwwww....



Author's Response:

That's how I see Brian.  He can be cold and ruthless, but Justin is his achilless heel. 

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 05:59 AM · On: Some Things Never Change

The reunion tops any movie scene... Justin must feel extatic being refered to by Brian as his boyfriend; wonder though how the 1500 SAT feels being refered to being owned by Brian? 

I hope either of the two doesnt fuck Shane, specially Brian. She may be androgenous, but the Stud of Liberty Avenue can't fuck a biological girl! It's gross! Hahaha!! Also, I cant forget your Shane of Broken Open and I can't see her in bed with her boss. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm so happy you liked the reunion scene. Writing those kinds of emotions are tricky.

I like the character Shane, that's why I wrote her into B.O. too.  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 12:09 AM · On: Open Wounds

After the painful memories, I would have also reacted like Justin, "You just called yourself my boyfriend!" Life goes on and wounds heal if given a chance. Sunshine is indeed Brian's best balm. I wonder how he can help Rena? 



Author's Response:

That's the one truth in life - it goes on.  And I agree, Sunshine is the best medicine.  :-)

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 09:35 PM · On: Where You Go I Follow

Oh they're back! They're back! I'm so happy you didn't take a lot of chapters to get them back together. Thank you! Hahaha!



Author's Response:

lol you didn't think I'd keep them away too long, did you?  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 09:15 PM · On: Best Laid Plans

Justin knows Brian, can read him like a book. To reach Brian's emotion, it's elementary to tap the one thing that Bran is open to feel, sexual feelings. If for some men the stomach is the way to their heart, Liberty Avenue's Stud is hopefully through his loins.



Author's Response:

The best way into a man's heart is through his stomache, so they say, but 'they' don't know Brian Kinney!  The best way to his heart, is through is dick!  lol  Justin knows him so well!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 09:08 PM · On: Best Laid Plans

Ok, tell me where I can find a psychiatrist like this? I think everyone will need some self-analysis if we can have this kind of treatment!... 

Sorry, cant stop myself. I realize that the scene is touching, HOT, and a milestone for this couple. But I just cant help it!!  I'll see if I can do something like this with my husband if I want him to divulge where his wallet is. Hmmm.



Author's Response:

oh oh!   Looks like your husband is in trouble!  lol   I find a man will do anything you want, provided you hold the 'family jewels' in your hands.  :-)

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 08:58 PM · On: The Loft

Wo-oh angry fucks are always hot! But usually dont solve the problem. Haven't read the next chapter yet, but Brian has a tendency to destroy the moment. Hope it wont be the same case this time around.



Author's Response:

I like angry fucks too!  lol  And you're right, Brian does have this habit of pulling with one hand, and pushing with the other.  How Justin puts up with him, is beyond me!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 08:46 PM · On: Truth Be Told

Very intriguing past. 



Author's Response:

Glad you find it so!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 08:32 PM · On: Justin

I have been trying to start reading this, somehow I have to get used to Rena et.al. Dont know why I cant get pass them. Probably too because I am not so keen on reading about the time when Justin left Brian for Ethan... Buttttt! Since you are the one writing this, I know it will be good. I just have to go over the hump. ;) Hopefully, this will be it.

Thoughts: Rena is obviously the female counter-part of Brian... Kind of disappointed with the qaf Justin that he left Brian and lived with Ethan. Coz if he is hurting with Brian's callousness, he could have lived with Daphne or his Mom. Made me wonder if Justin is the type who can't live w/o a man. But he's young and immature (and Brian even more immature!) and still have to learn from his mistakes. That's why I like AUs that made Justin leave and decide to go a different path... Your Justin is growing-up though, realizing what went wrong and admitting it. Hope he leaves Ethan to stand on his own?

But I am rambling and need to get to the next chapter! :D



Author's Response:

This story is about Justin, and Brian's growth.  For me, they were meant to be together from the get go. Soul mates. This story portrays their journey to 'finding' each other, and becoming one.

I hope you enjoy it!  And thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2013 02:01 AM · On: Unexpected Developments

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

:-)  Thanks!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 12:48 AM · On: New Beginnings

Have I told you lately what a bad influence you are lol. I should be writing but I am so damn addicted to this story that I can't stop reading it ;)

Brian and Justin are having a baby together, if that isn't enough to burst Lindsay's bubble I don't know what is. I'm so glad Shane decided to keep the baby and give herself a chance at being a mother.

Can't wait for the next installment~JP

Author's Response:

I know I"m a bad influence!  lol  I know how you feel though, I never get time to read anymore because I"m always so behind on my writing. Work takes up all my time.  I'm home today and hoping to get started on another installment of Always You.

Thanks for reading, and commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2013 12:23 AM · On: Unexpected Developments

Holy shit, Brian is going to plan a wedding just to throw Lindsay off the Kinney cliff....this ought to be interesting lol.

Shane's pregnancy is confirmed but will Slatter be happy about the situation? Last but not least, good old Mac * wink wink* is pulling Hobbs right into his trap.....excuse me while I go read the next chapter to find out what happens next

Author's Response:

:-)   I'm glad you're enjoying this!  Lots more coming up!  Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 07, 2013 12:08 AM · On: Arrangements Made

The way you analyse each character feelings, turmoils, pains is just brilliant!!! great job!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So glad you're enjoying this story.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 06, 2013 07:23 PM · On: Before There Was You, There Was You

Loved those family moments!!! Great Job!! Margot+aunt Viv+Brian= hilarious....



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 08:42 AM · On: Arrangements Made

Oh my little fancy face is going to be a mommy (it's so obvious) Mel sure dropped a bombshell on Brian didn't she? Now let's see how he handles it.

Can't wait for more~JP

Author's Response:

Lots going on!  More tomorrow night. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 08:18 AM · On: Before There Was You, There Was You

So the munchers made it after all. Well that's alright with me and I just love how nana refers to gay men as 'serious men' lol

Can I tell you again how good this is getting ;) JP

Author's Response:

Yes you can!  :-)  So glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:05 AM · On: Memories

"Some day he's going to save you, Rena..."

I thought the story was going to be more supernatural after this chapter, LOL.

Author's Response:

lol what's funny, is in the sequels, it DOES take on a supernatural theme!   

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:02 AM · On: What are Friends for?

This was pretty angsty. Brian sold himself on the street to pay fo Morphine for Andy. That makes Brian look like a saint.

Author's Response:

He's not exactly a saint, but as we know, when he loves someone, he'd do anything for them.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 10:53 AM · On: Where You Go I Follow

"If I weren't so reckless you wouldn't have met me two years ago..."

That is so true, but taking strange men home is in itself reckless; especially when you're high or drunk.

I didn't fell sorry for Ethan. Justin cheated on Brian with him. Payback. But ialso have to say if Brian wasn'r such an asshole there would not have been an Ethan.

Author's Response:

So true.  But they were each guilty of being assholes at one point.  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 06:10 PM · On: Thanks be Giving

I'm in love with this story!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 06:00 PM · On: Things to Consider

Adam and Shane are hilarious!!!! Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

I do love those characters!  They were great fun to write!   Thanks!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 11:29 AM · On: Best Laid Plans

OMG! I don't remember this chapter. This was hot as hell!

That was some torture. I guess Justin got Brian to talk the only way they ever communicate.

Favorite chapter so far!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 11:24 AM · On: The Loft

"I'm surprised you noticed. When was that? Between trick numbers four and five?"

That argument was HAWT! there was no doubt about how it was going to end.

Author's Response:

Oh yeah... after a hot fight, always hot sex!  :-)  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 09:30 AM · On: Thanks be Giving

I like the little trap they are setting for Hobbs. I just hope no one gets hurt in the process.

I can't wait to see how it all plays out~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'll post two more chapters tomorrow

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 09:00 AM · On: Things to Consider

Damn this is so good.....just what are James and Brian up to? And what were Shane and Slatter thinking?

Author's Response:

The plot thickens!  lol  Shane and Slatter apparently weren't thinking  opps.  :-)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 11:16 PM · On: Truth Be Told

I love Rena's nickname for Brian.

Michael said "Poor Justin" ?

Author's Response:

Yes, shocking isn't it? lol  In my AU, Michael isn't such a prick.  Because of the background story I created he's more sympathetic.  

Thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 11:04 PM · On: Justin

"Most guys his age were immature and homophobic pricks."

I never thought of that.

I don't remember this chapter or that Justin was with Ethan.

Author's Response:

I often reread my stories and forgot I wrote them!  lol   But I find it's true of most young boys.  Very homophobic. Maybe not so much today, but definately when I was growing up.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 07:20 AM · On: Finding Solutions

Grrrrrr....What did James whisper to Brian????? Please update soon!!!Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

updating two more chapters tonight!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 07:16 AM · On: Damned if I Do

WOW!!! Great chapter...



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 05:13 AM · On: Rena

It seemed obvious that Rena and Brian were so similar.

Author's Response:

Yip.  :-)  Two sides of a different coin

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 05:04 AM · On: The Letter

This second chapter was already filled with a great deal of angst. Brian and Gena both suffered as children and then the separation. This also bonded Michael to Brian. I was feeling for Justin at this point. And I was thinking he would have been better off with the fiddler.

Author's Response:

There was pleanty of angst in this chapter.  But I think the 'Justin' chapter was the one that emotionally grabbed me.  Justin was just so despondant in that chapter.

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 04:55 AM · On: Past Secrets

I may have reviewed before but I don't mind repeating myself.:)

You did a nice build up of mystery in this first chapter. Brian with a sister is not something I would ever phantom. I was very surprised that Michael was able to keep it a secret.

Author's Response:

Thank you no sleep!  I'm glad you're enjoying it the second time around.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 07:53 AM · On: Finding Solutions

Damn Rena is having seizures again.....this is not good. She is letting the guilt she feels about what she asked james to do consume her, and avoiding James and Brian is not helping matters

I wonder what James has in mind concerning Chris Hobbs.....I can't wait to find out.

Author's Response:

James is ex-cia special ops, he's got a trick or two up his sleeve.  :-)  Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2013 07:45 AM · On: Damned if I Do

Brian didn't take the news that Hobbs planned to bash Justin all along very well. I understand how he feels though, the fact that Hobbs was a free man and didn't get to finish the job leaves Justin vulnerable in his eyes.

But whoa.....Rena wants James to kill Hobbs. I'm just glad James got a chance to talk to Brian about it first.

Author's Response:

Rena knows that Brian will go after Hobbs and she can't risk losing another brother.  she took a risk.   

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2013 10:53 PM · On: Save the Last Dance for Me

Brian and Adam are priceles!!!! You did an amazing job with this story!!! I am impressed!!!! Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks again! So glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2013 10:39 PM · On: Little Battles

Emmett is hilarious!!! Brian is such a queen!!! Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2013 06:56 PM · On: Save the Last Dance for Me

Justin finally remembered their dance......beautiful :) why do I have a feeling that Justin also remembered something else, something that's going to send Brian over the edge.

Can't wait for the next installment~JP

Author's Response:

You might be right about that feeling you're having...   Posting two more chapters tonight! Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2013 08:47 AM · On: Little Battles

A full blown Brian Kinney queen out....I love it.
I sure hope that through hypnosis Rena is able to help Justin work through some of his issues.

As Swiss Beats would say.....on to the next ;)

Author's Response:

I too love a full blown Kinney queen out!  So much fun!  Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 07:57 AM · On: The True Intervention

I absolutely loved the visit from Andy. He was able to get Brian to put his life in prospective somewhat. But I have a feeling that his little conversation with Justin won't go so smoothly.

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

I will, thanks.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this story!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2013 07:15 AM · On: The True Intervention

So we can forget about the exorcism for Brian!!! Thanks to Andy!!!! 

Poor Brian, that's a miracle he is actually pretty sane and a loving person after all the things he went through. But Andy is right, he is a lucky man and he shouldn't spoiled the gifts he received.

Great chapter, really emotional!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2013 05:31 AM · On: The Intervention

Wow!!! lots of information I need to absorb

Emmett and Brian? Figures. Brian has slept with pratically all gay pittsburgh!!!! Michael is such a coward (lol). That's probably why I never liked him as a character. What kind of best friend doesn't call you on your s***?

I love Rena, she is so straightforward. Joan's behaviour makes more sense. The way she speaks about Justin is hilarious "That boy is brazen and rude". Great chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it.  I find Joan sympathetic. At least in my AU  :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 01:38 AM · On: The Intervention

Well.....that didn't go the way Sunshine planned, but are we surprised? Joan's reaction to Brian being gay makes sense now ( I'm not excusing her actions mind you) knowing her brother got bashed for being gay coupled with Jack's violent streak was enough for her to fear for his life.

WHAT THE FUCK WAS JUSTIN THINKING!!!! Going to Mr. Goodbars was not going to help him to get Brian to face his demons.

Off to read the next chapter ;)

Author's Response:

I always tried to find 'reasons' for certain characters behavior, and I thought that Joan had to have had some bad history to be the cold, unfeeling mother she was.

Glad you find it believable!  Thanks.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 05:50 AM · On: Prelude to An Intervention

Uh oh.......everybody better buckle their seatbelts it's going to be a very bumpy ride

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

lol  Love that line from Betty Davis!  All about Eve was one of my favorite movies!

Trouble coming!  The intervention tomorrow!  Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 05:39 AM · On: The Park

I'm glad Rena, Justin and Gus could provide Brian with a temporary distraction before all hell breaks loose.

Author's Response:

Oh yes, and all Hell will break loose!  

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2013 05:29 AM · On: Prelude to An Intervention

Loved it...waiting  for the intervention....Something Brian's so called friends should have done even before Justin.



Author's Response:

Yes, I agree.  Let's hope it doesn't backfire in Justin's face!

Thanks for reading, and commenting!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2013 05:27 AM · On: The Park

That was one of the most touching chapter!!!! Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 07:59 PM · On: The Hospital

LOVED IT. Great chapter!!! Adam and Shane are just great together!!!! And Emmett I couldn't stop laughing when he came in....



Author's Response:

I love Emmett when he is in full Emmett mode! And I loved writing him and James together. Such opposites, but they so fit, don't you think?

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 07:46 PM · On: All Business is Personal

Where were you when those silly writers were writing Brian and Justin??????????? Great chapter!!! Never a dull moment in your story!!!!

 



Author's Response:

lol Thanks!  I always wished those writers would have put more 'meat' into the story lines.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this story!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 09:14 AM · On: The Hospital

Hmmmm......I understand Shane wanting be released from the hospital asap, but I still think they should've at least given it 24hrs. Even though he got her discharged I'm still not fond of Slatter. There is just something about him that rubs me the wrong way and I feel like Shane is going to get hurt in the end.

Can't wait for more~JP

Author's Response:

Shane has been dealing  with her 'addiction' for a very long time. Rena is her physician, and got her to stop.  Staying in the hospital would have just made Shane worse.  They would have pumped her with drugs and that was the last thing she needed. She needed to be with family.  Slatter is a funny character, I hope you'll warm up to him later.  :-)

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 08:12 AM · On: All Business is Personal

You weren't kidding when you said things were going to get interesting. First Slatter shows up at the loft to confront Brian about Shane only to find out she's in the hospital. I have a feeling our little androgynous vamp is reverting back to her own version of pain management.

Author's Response:

Yip.  Things do get heated.   More to come! Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:14 AM · On: The Battle Begins

It's getting ugly!!!! Thanks to the munchers, never liked them!!!!! Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

lol The munchers are a buzz kill, aren't they?  Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:10 AM · On: Revelations

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:09 AM · On: Walking on Broken Glass

Great chapter!!!!

"As if that's an option! You know it isn't. You can throw me out, move to another country even kill yourself Brian, and nothing will keep us apart. We'll always find a way back to one other. It's our destiny. We have no control over it. What we do have control over is whether we choose to live as if it is a curse or a blessing. Right now, it's our curse."WOW!!!

 



Author's Response:

I loved writing that for Justin to say. I think it encompasses their relationship.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:06 AM · On: Mr. Goodbars

oh Brian!!!! If I was Justin, I would kill him, bring him back to life and kill, and do that again and again and again.....



Author's Response:

Justin is going to deal with Brian in his own way, and I don't think Brian is going to like it!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:04 AM · On: Lies and Other Misdemeanors

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:04 AM · On: The Lawyer

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:03 AM · On: The Punishment

I want to be punished too!!!!! Loved it!!!! And I love Etta James....



Author's Response:

lol  Who wouldn't want to be punished by BK?   LOVE Etta James!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:02 AM · On: Ethan

That was unexpected!!!! Great chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 05:58 AM · On: Phase One

I love Rena. Rena laughed. "Yeah, well whatever gets them to put the razor blade down." LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!

Wow I love how you used all the details from canon about their relationship and write something which makes perfect sense, something more powerful than canon. Great Job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!   I didn't like a lot of Cannon storylines, so I just made my own up!  Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 05:49 AM · On: Cha..cha..changes

Wow!!! that was intense!!! Justin threw him out!!!

My favourite quote: "Ungrateful little fucking twat! I knew I should have left him standing under that fucking lamppost! Manipulative, arrogant, smug, UNFAITHFUL…"



Author's Response:

Couldn't you just see Brian saying that?  lol   

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 02:26 AM · On: The Battle Begins

I have many favorite moments in this story - this chapter is one of them. Soooo enjoying my re-rereading :)

Author's Response:

I liked this chapter too.  :-)  So glad you're enjoying it the second time around.  and thank you for posting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 09:45 AM · On: The Battle Begins

I said once and I'll say it again, Mel is a spiteful bitch and Lindsay needs to grow a set and stand up to Mel for once. Kudos to Debbie for manipulating the situation so that Brian can spend time with Gus.

It doesn't look good for Slatter now that Shane knows what side of the fence he's on......I just hope Shane doesn't do anything drastic.

Please update soon~JP

Author's Response:

Things are about to get interesting.   Stay tuned!  Glad you're enjoying this story, thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 08:53 AM · On: Revelations

Justin is playing with fire mixing st Joan into what sounds like an intervention in the making.

I can't believe Adam Slatter is Mel and Lindsay's lawyer.....how is Shane going to handle this one

Author's Response:

Not well, as you'll see in the next chapter. Shane's going to be devastated.   And yes, an intervention is in the works.  Brian and an intervention...hmmm... how do you think that's going to go?  :-)

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 10:16 AM · On: Walking on Broken Glass

Just what does our little Sunshine have up his sleeve for Brian? Can I dream a little and hope for an impromptu wedding.....no. maybe it's rehab, either way I can't wait to find out.

Author's Response:

Maybe.... One thing for sure, Justin is scared for Brian. He really feels like he's going to lose him if he don't do something. Question is, what?

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 09:48 AM · On: Mr. Goodbars

That fucking cunt Mel always finds a way to fuck Brian every chance she gets. In this case Lindsay isn't any better. She needs to get a backbone for fucks sake and think for herself. Brian is a good father and should not be punished for wanting to be more involved in his sons life.

Now that I've vented, I'm off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I agree with you about the girls!  Hope you like how this pans out!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 09:55 AM · On: Lies and Other Misdemeanors

Shane really dodged a bullet with this one. Seems our cunning lawyer wouldn't have cared about what Shane's gender was, but the real aftermath is still to come.

Author's Response:

Yep. You got that right.  Slatter was falling for her big time, as he was conflicted by his own sexuality thinking Shane was a boy!  Now, reality will sink in for both.  

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 09:28 AM · On: The Lawyer

Oh shit is Shane in trouble. What are the chances that Adam Slatter would be the lawyer recommended to help Brian get his parental rights back.

I'm loving this :) JP

Author's Response:

Thanks! Things get more interesting with Mr. Slatter.   :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 06:22 AM · On: The Punishment

You promised a chapter devoted to some hot, sexy d/s play and you did not disappoint ;) now that the fiddler is finally out of the picture, Brian and Justin can move forward with their relationship.

I have a feeling Rena is going to discover some pretty painful and interesting things about Justin's life while he's under hypnosis....I'm looking forward to it

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks Jazzepoet!  glad you like the d/s chapter.  :-)   Next two chapters coming up tomorrow!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 10:55 AM · On: Phase One

What a series of deliciously unexpected turn of events. First Brian wants to fight to get his parental rights back, then Rena and John get together, Justin kicks Brian out which leads Brian to call to meet with Ethan......whew!!!!

I can't wait to see how it all turns out~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks!   Two more chapters coming up today!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 09:19 AM · On: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Blue Monday

Shane is such a great character!!! Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

I like shane too. She's cool. She has her own storyline coming up!  Hope you enjoy it

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 09:10 AM · On: The Morning After

.....And thank you for writing this story....



Author's Response:

Awww.. you're welcome!  Thank you for reading and commenting

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 09:08 AM · On: Babylon

"Yeah, well he had the nerve to ask Kinney to take him home. Fucking Kinney queened out on him. Told him NO one goes home with him. Jerry hasn't been in Babylon since, and won't come back until Kinney cools down." LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!

Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 08:39 AM · On: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

You make me fall more in love with this story with every chapter. Rena has taken the first step toward healing and letting go of some of the ghosts that haunt her.

Now I can't wait to hear Shane's story, it should be very interesting.

More soon please~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks, so glad you're enjoying this story. It is epic.  Lots of storylines throughout. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 06:32 AM · On: Blue Monday

Holy shit!!! I'm starting to like Shane more and more. She has overcome so much and now she has a chance to truly change her life.

Emilian is still alive but why is Rena still afraid he'll come for her? She is no longer a child able to be controlled.

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

I liked writing Shane. There is a whole storyline on her coming up. I hope you enjoy it.  Rena is still afraid because of what he did to her.  When you are tramatized as a child, that child never really gets over it.  She doens't feel like an adult when it comes to Emilian .She fells like that abused child.

So glad you're enjoying the story!  Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2013 06:40 PM · On: The Morning After

This just keeps getting better and better.

More soon please~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2013 08:20 PM · On: I'm Your Man

Loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2013 08:12 PM · On: Last Call

Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 11:29 AM · On: I'm Your Man

Kudos to Justin for getting John to realize that he couldn't run from his problems or find the solution to them at the bottom of a bottle. Brian also needs to heed Justin's advice before his drinking causes some real problems between them.

I loved the d/s play between them. It's always hot when Justin gives Brian complete control.....and vice versa.

Update soon please~ JP

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the d/s play.  there is a whole chapter devoted to it coming up down the road.  :-)

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 08:51 AM · On: Last Call

very interesting chapter.

Off to read the next one ;)

Author's Response:

glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2013 09:27 PM · On: Chilly Winds of Fate

Loved it!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2013 09:23 PM · On: Reconnecting

Loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

:-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2013 11:15 AM · On: Chilly Winds of Fate

I can understand why Justin would be a little upset about Brian showing up late and drunk, but to have such little faith in him after he's clearly shown him that he is ready for a commitment on some level....not a wise decision.

Do Rena and John have some kind of past? Or does he feel like his wife has just walked back into his life?

I can't wait to find out~JP

Author's Response:

Justin was always impulsive...  All this is new to both of them, it's almost 'too' good to be true.  Brian always expects something to go wrong, (doen't trust his good luck) and Justin has a lot of history with Brian falling back on old bad habits.   

John has not felt anything for anyone since his wife died... Rena struck something in him he thought dead for a long time.

Thank you for commenting!  I'll be posting more on Saturday.

 

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2013 06:14 AM · On: The Diner

Loved it!!! Love surprises, as long as they are not "hustlers"!!!!



Author's Response:

lol!  I'm right there with you!  Thanks for commenting, and I promise - no hustlers!  lol

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2013 06:11 AM · On: Coming Home

Wow this chapter was so touching and moving. I think at some point I had tears in my eyes (I will deny it, if someone asks of course).

Brian was "so cute" with his plan to have Justin move with him. Well done, there was such an intimacy between them that I felt like an intruder!!!! Just Beautiful. It's my favourite chapter so far (ok I may say that a lot during this story).



Author's Response:

Awww Thank you!  This chapter was touching,  but not my favorite. There is one chapter (down the road a bit) that's really touching.  

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!  I'm posting two more chapters tonight because I won't be home tomorrow.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2013 02:33 AM · On: The Diner

Brian has a big surprise for Justin......I wonder what it could be?

Hurry with another update the suspense is killing me ;) JP

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying this story!  I'll try to get two more chapters up tonight since I'll be gone all day tomorrow.

Thanks for commenting

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2013 01:40 AM · On: Coming Home

Oh my......my cheeks are still red after reading this chapter. It was good that for once they actually discussed their issues with words before they let their bodies do the talking.

I can't wait to see how Rena reacts to her new family.

Please update soon~JP

Author's Response:

Just posted another chapter! Thank for commenting!

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:44 AM · On: Not So Jaded

may I have more...... please

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it!  Two more chapters tomorrow!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 09:25 PM · On: Not So Jaded

Loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

:-)  Thank you!  More to come.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 09:21 PM · On: Aunty Viv

"Am I allowed to speak to "it"?" loool! GREAT CHAPTER!



Author's Response:

lol  I like a fiesty Justin!  Thanks

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 12:33 PM · On: Not So Jaded

Wow Viv believes that Rena gave up on love because of Brian and now until she decides to tell him the truth, Brian is going to carry some guilt for a while.

"I guess you can say he had me at hey" what a wonderful line :)

Update soon please~ JP

Author's Response:

Thanks, you know I stole that line from Jerry McGuire.  at the end she tells him, "You had me at Hello". I always thought it so romantic! 

Will be posting two more chapters later today. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 01:22 PM · On: Friends and Family

I love this story so much !!! Got up at 5 AM to get some reading before work :) This is gonna be a good day :)

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoyng it!   5 am?   Oh my!  lol  Thanks for commenting. Posting two more chapters tonight

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 02:27 AM · On: Saving Rena

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 02:21 AM · On: Saving Rena

Holy shit....a visit from aunt Viv, that coupled with the fact that Rena didn't tell Brian the whole truth,I have a feeling that the shit's about to hit the fan.

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

Lots of twists and turns coming up! So glad you're enjoying it! 

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