Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Oblivion - Reboot
Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2015 01:49 AM · On: Who?

I really like this story. Fast but with a good unfolding of events.

I'm looking forward to reading the next

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 11:57 PM · On: Who?

I don't know if it matters but in the series Carl's last name was Harvoth.  So it pretty much looks like Ethan is the culprit.  How did he get in?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 05:19 PM · On: Left Turn

Now that was a twist I didn't see coming.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 03:49 PM · On: Everything Is Not All Right

Now that they know what the problem is, how do they correct it?



Author's Response:

Ah, the usual way how our boys correct things :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 03:15 PM · On: The Climax

Sunshine is still working his miracles.  Now Mikey has someone else to brud over.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2015 12:54 PM · On: Left Turn

Is that Ethan?



Author's Response:

You have to wait and see :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 05:50 AM · On: The Run

I do hope that everyone has gone home for the day.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 05:27 AM · On: Doubts

Hmmm, already Justin is lying.  To Lindsay, to Daphne, to himself.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 04:52 AM · On: Blame it on Thai food

The question is - will Justin work for Brian or not?  Does Justin get his Thia food?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2015 12:25 AM · On: What I see

Surprise!  Bet he doesn't tell Lindsey about last night.  How does it play out when they meet?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2015 10:21 PM · On: Family affair

It was nice that Lindsay tried to comfort Mel by saying that it wasn't her fault that she didn't know Gus was allergic to peanuts.  Brian was not, though he did change his tune later.  So Justin might be interning at Kinnetik? Will that be possible now that he's slept with Brian?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2015 10:06 PM · On: Where you belong

So Brian wasn't Justin's first encounter?  I like how Emmett and Ted backed Brian up when Mikey decided that Justin was jail bait.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2015 09:53 PM · On: Prologue

A new twist on the series.  Can't wait to see your changes.



Author's Response:

Thank a lot!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2015 09:10 AM · On: Everything Is Not All Right

YAY!! you are BACK!!!! :)

Author's Response:

I am :) Thanks for the cheer! 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:48 AM · On: The Run

Those two can't stay away from each other.

I'm still loving the banter between the two and their interactions are hot.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:35 AM · On: Doubts

“What is this? Driving Miss Daisy?”

I loved the banter. This was another good chapter.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:28 AM · On: Blame it on Thai food

“Next time you want to make a booty call, you do it with less drama."

Perfect!

Ethan is getting a little scary here.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:24 AM · On: What I see

"Because, if he did, it’s a light stalking and I don’t tolerate that shit.”

HA!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:20 AM · On: Family affair

“So what are you gonna do about it?”

You go Justin.

I like the fact that you made Justin a little older and more self assured.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:18 AM · On: Where you belong

“Prove to me you can cum in time.”

The babylon bar scene with the bartender's discussion was amusing. Justin's split decision to see Brian was perfect.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:13 AM · On: Prologue

I could have sworn I reviewed this story. I remember being impressed with it from the very beginnng. The premise was very original. I love the blidfold thing.

Author's Response:

Hope you are still there, to give this second version a look. I have struggled with it and decided to change things a bit. Hopefully for the better :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2013 11:55 PM · On: The Climax

Michael, whose jealousy will make Brian choose Justin? Ethan, whose ego won't allow Justin with anyone but him? Or some other maniac who doesn't want Brian and Justin together and happy?
Great update.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 10:31 PM · On: The Climax

I've got to get some sleep, but I ran across your story while getting ready for my day. I was instantly pulled in and could not stop listening to it. It is an amazing read! I had to forgo sleep a little longer to let you know how much I am enjoying this story.

I'm looking forward to an update.

Author's Response:

Your nick is definitely perfect for your :)

Thank you so much for your kind words, it really means a lot.

Raine

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 10:30 AM · On: The Climax

Pretty scary. Now was it a mad Ethan or a sad Mikey?

Author's Response:

I my mind it could never be Michael, they are friends, they love each other. This was an act of hatred.

Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 09:27 AM · On: The Climax

I can’t wait to find out who destroyed Brian’s furniture. I love what Brian must have asked Justin when he called him. “No, I’m ok” was Justin’s reply. I love how you wrote that as Brian is showing his feelings in just that one question. I’m looking forward to an update.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your words!

xoxo,

Raine

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 06:11 AM · On: The Climax

Hmm....seems to be the work of a jealous Ethan; but is it?  That might be too obvious an answer.  Maybe Michael?  Maybe someone else we haven't thought of?  In any case, I'll be looking forward to the rest!  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

So happy you see it can be someone else than Ethan :) It doesn't mean it's not him, but I wanted to be just a little bit misterious at the end :)

xoxo,

Raine

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 05:56 AM · On: The Climax

Oh, things are going to get crazy now. I think I'm going to hate this Ethan even more than ever before. Lets hope Brian has some protection he can hire to get rid of this problem.
Lori

Author's Response:

Yes, crazy is the watch word :) Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2013 05:44 AM · On: The Climax

Did Ian do this? Bad boy. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 03:52 AM · On: The Climax

Wow Ethan really is fucked up. To ruin Brian's loft just because Justin only wanted to be his friend.....the kid needs some professional help.

Can't wait for more~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2013 03:49 AM · On: The Climax

Thank you for updating!!! I hope Justin will realise soon how not innocent Ethan is. Great chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

"troubled" is the word that comes to my mind when I think of Ethan. We watching the show I always pictured him as a catalyst for trouble. You know, not evil himself, but he managed to induce the trouble.

thanks for you review :)

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 03:49 AM · On: The Climax

More more more more.
Thank you for this chapter

Author's Response:

:) Glad you like it. more coming soon...

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 04:18 AM · On: The Run

Really like this justin and am enjoying the story very much.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 09:24 AM · On: The Run

I’m so pleased you didn’t take this where so many authors would have done. I love Justin’s realisation that even though he felt something for Brian those feelings may not be returned and thanks to Daphne’s guidance Justin once again has Brian following after him. Cool Justin is back. Yay. Excellent chapter. Please hurry back.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you for your support :) Next chapter coming really soon :)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2013 07:16 AM · On: The Run

When I started reading I thought of the typical B/J scenerio, however, this is rather refreshing.

Always love a strong mature Justin.

Loving it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 05:20 AM · On: The Run

I sure like this Justin, he's strong enough to really get what he wants but he makes Brian really give in. I wonder who is the top in this relationship! I'm willing to bet Brian is willing to roll over anytime Justin says so. I hope they can eventually resolve all these power struggles and find a nice middle ground and work on a real relationship.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2013 11:45 PM · On: The Run

OMG, such a great story, I'm loving where you're taking this....love love love a strong assertive Justin and a slightly confused, trying to resist but so fucked Brian :)

Can't wait for the next update :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am really enjoying writing this story, even more when I see people like it :)

xoxo

Raine

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 11:27 PM · On: The Run

More, more, more :)

Now that Brian and Justin are starting to be truthful with each other about their feelings, it's just going to get better as long as Ethan stays out of the way.

Update soon please~ JP

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Yes, the next chapter will be dedicated to Ethan and his dealing with Justin+Brian

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2013 11:07 PM · On: The Run

Thank you for updating!! Pure genius!!! please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Haha :) you enthusiasm always makes me smile :)

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 10:44 PM · On: The Run

Great chapter. Loved it. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading it :)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 10:41 PM · On: The Run

yay - this playful Justin who is constantly keeping Brian on his toes and off balance is a hoot - love it!

Charle



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so! :)

xoxo, Raine

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 03:02 PM · On: Doubts

I almost missed this fic completely as I go straight to the QAF category. Maybe you could add the QAF category please. I love the thought of Brian and Justin being equals and I’m thoroughly enjoys this.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Oh, thanks for pointing it out! I've added the category :)

Raine

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2013 03:35 PM · On: Doubts

Great chapter, I liked it a lot.
Thank you.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2013 05:50 AM · On: Doubts

Hi, Raine, finally had a chance to get caught up with your story.  I love the banter between the boys and Justin's strong personality in this version!  Looking forward to the rest.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2013 05:16 AM · On: Doubts

I have a feeling Brian is going to have to be the one to really make a dedicated move to get anywhere with Justin. Justin is not going to sniff after him trying to start something. When or IF they really start a relationship it's going to be more equal and lasting.
Lori

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2013 12:58 AM · On: Doubts

Justin is so cute that handles himself so perfectly smart. And Brian is so damn hot as always. Love it.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you love that combination between our boys. I like writing them like that.

Raine

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2013 11:32 PM · On: Doubts

Very cute chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2013 08:45 PM · On: Doubts

I like where this is going, I can't wait until they get to the loft ;)

Update soon please~JP

Author's Response:

:) Hope I can measure up to your expectations

Raine

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2013 08:07 PM · On: Doubts

Thank you for updating. Loved it!!! Your story is a delight! Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

:) I am so glad you like it. I had a fast pace these couple of days and I'm soon starting to work again, but I'm always thinking about the story and the next step.

xoxo, Raine

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2013 04:07 AM · On: Blame it on Thai food

That sure was interesting, I like this strong Justin. I am getting worried about icky Ethan. I think he will cause problems, serious nasty things. Lets hope Justin is wise enough to see thru all the lies Brian is trying to kid himself with. Love this Story!
Lori

Author's Response:

Icky Ethan (btw that's a great nickname for him) will definitely be causing some trouble. Playing games comes easy to him and when he's hurt he thinks everyone else sholud feel hurt as well. But let's see how will Brian feel about all that :)

As always, thanks for your review

Love,

Raine

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2013 08:49 PM · On: What I see

Whoo Hoo!  Love this story.:)



Author's Response:

:))

Thank you!

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 08:55 AM · On: Blame it on Thai food

Great chapter.   Loving this story

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2013 08:11 PM · On: Blame it on Thai food

Thank you for updating.

“I asked the nice lady at the store would it be inappropriate to give this to a child, considering the size of his member (the trunk). She looked so stupidly shocked I had to get it.” LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

Great chapter!!! I am in love with your Justin. And in your story you managed to do the impossible: make the munchers not so useless and boring!!!!! Please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 07:57 PM · On: Blame it on Thai food

Haha I like when Brian makes a fool of himself.
Great chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 06:08 PM · On: Blame it on Thai food

Someone jealous......I'm so glad it's not Brian. I will say that Brian behaved quite dramatically just to ask for a fuck. With each encounter he is finding it harder and harder to deny his feelings ( much as in Canon)

Please update soon~ JP

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2013 06:15 AM · On: What I see

great chapter, thank you.



Author's Response:

:)

Thank you!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2013 03:26 AM · On: What I see

How nice to see Brian getting hooked so quick, even if he is trying to deny it. If the "girls" get their noses in his business who know what might happen. I will be hoping Ethan doesn't survive this story, you must know how I long for a horrible gruesome death for that slime ball when ever he shows up. Very nice chapter, I'm always so happy to see on update.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thank you! I always believed he was hooked from the second he met Justin. But because he is such a complex character, that evidence was hidden deep down inside him :)

 

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2013 11:59 PM · On: What I see

Thank you for updating!!!! Loved it!!! I kept smiling through it like an idiot people in the bus probably think that I am instable!!! LOL!!!! Dying with anticipation here!!! please update soon.



Author's Response:

I laughed all the way through your review :))

Thanks for your support

Raine

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 09:47 PM · On: What I see

Oh we need another chapter quick! (Yes, I'm an impatient little fucker lol) I love it when Brian tries to deny his feelings for Justin.

Ethan on the other hand, can go take a flying fucking leap off the nearest bridge....without a parachute or a net to save his ass.

Update soon please~ JP

Author's Response:

:)

Raine

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2013 10:17 AM · On: Family affair

Wow! this is quite the trip you are taking us on. Loving it:)



Author's Response:

:) Thanks, it's nice having you on board.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2013 03:39 AM · On: Family affair

What a refreshing vision of canon, and an unpredictable Justin for Brian: Loved it. Some of the lines made me laugh hard!!! Great job and thank you for it!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Really, it means a lost. I can't help writing those lines just because it's so much fun! :) And they fit perfectly with our favourite characters.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2013 03:36 AM · On: Where you belong

Great chapter!!! LOVED it!!!



Author's Response:

;) Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2013 03:34 AM · On: Prologue

This look yummy! I wanted the story to be completed before reading it but I couldn't resist the summary!!!!

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2013 03:17 AM · On: Family affair

Sound's REEEAALLLYYY good so far!!!

I SO like a witty Justin!! :)


Keep going.
Diana



Author's Response:

I like a witty Justin too :)

 

xoxo,

Raine

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 01:12 AM · On: Family affair

Really great chapter. I enjoy your style, and I like the canon elements: Justin nervousness and innocence, the interruption in order to rush to the hospital for Gus.

They fucked behing the building and in the loft? way to go Justin

Can't wait for the next chapter, thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank a lot :) Yes, I always try to incorporate canon elements just because they were so good! But why not give it a little lift? :) Justin's character deserves it

 

Raine

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 12:28 AM · On: Family affair

I sure like this. You have a wonderful way with describing things. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Lori :) You gave me a big compliment. Hope I can measure up :)

Raine

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 11:57 PM · On: Family affair

"That's a given. But the question was- where should I put it?" Omg I love that line lol. The real question is where did Justin go? Or did even leave at all hmmmmm.......

Looking forward to the next chapter~JP

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 11:55 PM · On: Family affair

"That's a given. But the question was- where should I put it?" Omg I love that line lol. The real question is where did Justin go? Or did even leave at all hmmmmm.......

Looking forward to the next chapter~JP

Author's Response:

Thanks :) Yes, I'm having real fun with this story :)

 

Raine

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 05:58 AM · On: Where you belong

Great chapter. I love humor in fic.

I was a bit afraid when Justin threw the paper. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :) I do enjoy writing this one :)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 01:05 AM · On: Where you belong

oh - I am very excited to see where this leads - I love a fresh take on the familiar story...and an experienced Justin with the wit to keep Brian off his guard  - and the confidence to stand his ground...wlel that is just too yummy for words!

loving life,

Charle



Author's Response:

Loving your review :)

Thanks, I feel fresh with the beginning of the new year so I hope I can deliver with this story.

 

Love,

Raine

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 12:58 AM · On: Prologue

Mooooore! NOW! ;)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2013 10:37 PM · On: Where you belong

Great start.

Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 10:34 PM · On: Where you belong

Please tell me Justin memorized Brian's address before he threw the paper away. I can't wait to see what happens when he enters the lions den.

More soon please JP

Author's Response:

:) don't worry, Justin has a good memory.

Thanks for your review.

Raine

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2013 06:03 PM · On: Prologue

im  interested so  far and wellcome back   thanku  kim



Author's Response:

It's good to be back, Kim :)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 10:54 AM · On: Prologue

Haha I love the Whitesnake reference....or is it DMX either way I still love it! ;) What an interesting start to this story. I wonder how our little fiddler will react to Justin's attraction to Brian.

Looking forward to more JP

Author's Response:

Whitesnake, baby, all the way :) I am really glad you like it. Our little fiddler plays somewhat different part in Justin's life, but he plans to cause some trouble :)

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 06:38 AM · On: Prologue

Yep, this has all the right stuff going on to make a terrific story. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thanks for your confidence :) I hold my fingers crossed :)

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2013 06:34 AM · On: Prologue

Wow! going to see where this one goes.  Going to be hawt!!:)  More soooooon?



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) I'm just wrapping up the first chapter.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 03:21 AM · On: Prologue

:)

Thank you for publishing here on Whispers.



Author's Response:

Thanks for being there for us!

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 02:23 AM · On: Prologue

«Schmidt zone» lool.
I really liked this prologue. Looking forward to reading more. Justin with a lot of friends, that's great for once.
Thank you Raine.

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

I hope I can deliver what I have in my head. Thank you again for reading my story.

 

Raine

Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 01:54 AM · On: Prologue

Love the beginning and a Anti-Ethan story is always good ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot :) Yeah, I just can't see Ethan any other way. For me, he's a character meant for the dark side :)

xoxo

Raine

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2013 01:25 AM · On: Prologue

Interesting beginning! Nice twist on the original meeting.:)  Took me a moment to figure out the bandage reference before I realized that you were meaning a blindfold (I think?).  Looking forward to the rest of your story.:)

I would enjoy working on a banner for you, too, if you would like me to.  Just send me an email and let me know what you want.  *Hugs* ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hahaha, oh, God, I am so bad. Blindfold... I was looking for that word :)))

Thanks, Kim :)And about hundred thanks for the offer! I'll be working on the first chapter tonight, so I could have I clear image of the banner. I'll write you soon.

xoxo

Raine

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