Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For In Too Deep
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2020 10:19 PM · On: Game. Set. Match.

Wow.... *fans myself*  that's was great. 

Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2020 09:09 PM · On: Escape is Futile.

This is soooo much fun to read.  

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2017 07:13 PM · On: Finally Free.

Loved it!!! Great story!!!

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2017 03:24 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

Great chapter!

Reviewer: cherie (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2014 03:32 PM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

Perhaps because I am reading this on Mother's Day, I am disappointed that Justin hasn't found the time to call his Mom and let her know that he is at least alive. She is ill and worried sick and Justin has had access to a phone for sometime now. Bad son!

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2013 11:48 PM · On: A New Piece Enters the Game.

Loving your story

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2013 07:21 AM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

Lols I'm crying this how good your story is

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2013 07:01 PM · On: Great Pleasure

Loving your story ending was so cute

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 06:56 PM · On: Finally Free.

Hi, Jessie! I’ve read your fantastic story some time ago, and I couldn’t help falling in love with it. I wanted to save all chapters in one file to read it in my e-book, but somehow I got distracted and downloaded only first five or so. So, I didn’t expect much because I wasn’t sure how anyone can write such a short story with an idea like this. But when I started reading, I was immediately caught up with both Brian and Justin’s lives, with their characters and your love to them and to writing - you seem to have put it in every line. I enjoyed every word and feared the ending, so I was beyond happy when I realized I just didn’t save all chapters, only the first ones. I couldn’t stop and spent all night reading – you certainly know how to make story exciting, captivating and absolutely breathtaking – some turns of events just shocked me!          

I love this Brian – he was so icy cold, demanding and even cruel in the beginning, and though all those things stayed with him till the very end, his attitude to Justin was slowly changing, and I find it completely fascinating. I admire his strength, the way he managed to leave the abusive family behind and achieve everything by himself – success, respect, reputation. I think it wasn’t right for him to leave Debbie, Michael, Vic and Emmett in his past along with everything else, but I can understand his reasons. I’m scared to even think what would have become from him in future had he not met brightness and hope in a face of Justin. Only this unusual fiery blond could save him, even though they are so different. Justin’s devotion to those who matter to him, his readiness to sacrifice himself in all senses if it’s needed to protect the one he loves – it’s incredible, and though I believed in happy ending, I couldn’t stop worrying about him. Brian hurt him unintentionally so many times – only a truly loving person can cope with that.

I love Justin’s strength and his ability to make Brian open up. When Brian told him about his family, I was so touched, and Justin’s reaction – that ‘thank you for telling me’ and kiss upon his heart were the best thing I could have hoped for. You wrote their relationship very beautifully, very realistically – despite they fell in love with each other rather quickly, under those circumstances it was completely believable. It seemed to me that years had passed since their journey began. The ‘kidnapping’ part of the story was unexpected, but extremely exciting. It pained me to read about Brian being tortured – I’m glad you didn’t describe it with all details. Justin’s determination to save him was impressive, and even though I cringed every time he was with Nathan, I liked this original character anyway – it was very interesting to read about his madness and obsession tendencies. Surprisingly, I loved when he kissed Justin in front of Brian – can’t help it, I just *love* seeing Brian jealous, despite all circumstances. My opinion of Brian has risen even more when I saw how deeply in love he was with Justin, that he was ready to do everything to protect him just like Justin himself. It was incredible to see that tender side of him – side that was only for Justin. I loved his possessiveness and dominance – it was so unusual and great when he stole Justin right from his home so to make him listen. Those cheques were horrible, but it was so nice and lovely to see how completely Brian has lost his heart to Justin, how he wanted to marry him and how proud he was showing the rings to Ted (BTW, Ted and Emmett are something else in this story, I loved them).

I loved the final. Now I know that you intended to make their relationship open, but honestly, I just can’t imagine it – not with those characters, with this Brian whose world is now focused solely on Justin. I think the ending you chose is the best one.

Thank you for this incredible, impressive and beautiful story – I’m so glad you decided to write and post it, and I’m so happy that I’ve found it. I love it deeply! Oh, and I saw you moved from Russia – does it mean Russian is your first language? It is mine too – it’s so unusual to see you are from there:)

Thank you once again!                        

 

Reviewer: holly (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2013 04:25 AM · On: Swordplay.

This is pretty fast paced. Heh I have MS too. I hate when having to use to my cane, mostly because it is zebra print! Off to read more, only have an hour as work is always cramping my reading style. 

Reviewer: silvermoon8916 (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2013 03:52 AM · On: Finally Free.

A really fantastic story. I really loved the idea and enjoyed the writing. If it's really your first story, I'm glad because it shows that an awesome writer has come to our beloved BJ world so I'm eagerly waiting for more stories from u dear.

M.Sa

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2013 03:21 AM · On: Finally Free.

Great story! I loved it!!!!

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2013 04:09 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

Fantastic start! Looking forward to more. WELCOME! Annie

Reviewer: Sisa (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2013 02:18 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

I love this story. It was so instense! Brian that takes what he wants and strong Justin. Really good work.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it!  Thank you so much for letting me know.  <3

Reviewer: amythesw (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 05:47 AM · On: Finally Free.

I don't read stories until they are completed, so I was really excited when I saw this one was done.  I started it last night and finished it during my lunch break today.  I loved it!!!  I didn't want to stop once I had started.  I really hope you plan on doing more now that you got your feet wet with this one.  Thank you for sharing it with us :)  Amy



Author's Response:

I do the same thing!  (usually...)  And I'm really glad you liked it.  I can't tell you the hours I put into this, or the classes I ignored in order to write this.  We'll see how bad that impacted me when I get my midterms back, but for now it was worth it.  XD  Thank you for letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2013 05:13 AM · On: Finally Free.

I loved it. Wish there was more.

Author's Response:

We'll see.  I'm not throwing any chances at a sequel out the window, but right now I'm focusing on a different project that will, hopefully, leave you just as entertained.  XD  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 05:51 AM · On: Finally Free.

I want to start by saying "Welcome" to MW. I hope you feel at home here.

I wait until stories are finished to read them. I've been caught too many times when authors don't finish their stories.

I also would like to say that this definitely was a ride to read. The things these two boys went through was enough. I loved how Brian's feelings changed for Justin through the story. At least now they won't have to worry about Nathan.

Great fic and congrats on the Blue Ribbon.

Jane

Author's Response:

Oh don't worry, I do the same exact thing.  I hate getting really into a story and then having the author just abandon it.  And I'm glad you recognized Brian's evolving feelings throughout the story, that was something I had to make a conscious effort to do because I always hate it when he makes a grand change at the end (even if I do like the end result).  Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 11:25 AM · On: Finally Free.

It was good! However, I would like to know why Brian moved away from the gang. I never really got why. Also, you should move the section about Nathan and Danny from the end to another part of the story. I would suggest to right after Brian found out about the deal made between Vance and the DA. Otherwise, it feels as if there should be a sequel where as Nathan would reappear and it would affect Brain and Justin. 

Beyond that, it was a great story.



Author's Response:

Well I left it that way with the intention that if I ever did make a sequel his character would still be a part of it; so it was semi-intentional.  As for why Brian moved away from the gang, I didn't go into further for the same reason Nathan was left at the end instead of earlier in the story.  But I'm glad you liked it even if you didn't like those parts!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 04:53 AM · On: Hunger

Loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you're liking it so far!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 04:42 AM · On: Great Pleasure

Justin is such a tease Lol!!



Author's Response:

A hot tease though!  XD  Thank you.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 04:36 AM · On: Brian Bottoms

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope you keep on loving it.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 04:31 AM · On: Twenty Questions

Those two are hilarious!!! Loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

The twenty questions scene was one of my favorites to write in the entire story.  XD  Thank you!

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 04:26 AM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.

Seems I was right to tell Justin to run....



Author's Response:

Yup, he's a crazy one.

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 04:20 AM · On: Fight For The (copy)Right

Oh my! you just described one of my worst date LOL!!! Run Justin!!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, yes, it was based off one of my own dates before I met the man I'm with now.  He wouldn't stop talking about himself!  It was soooo boring... x.x

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 03:30 AM · On: Photo Opp.

....And you left me wanting for more....



Author's Response:

That's a common occurence in this story.  I have constant cliffhangers.  XD  What better way to make sure you come back?

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 03:22 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

I'm curious!!!!



Author's Response:

It'll be worth it, I promise!  :)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 10:55 PM · On: Finally Free.

great story. Loved the ending.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked everything!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 02:21 PM · On: Finally Free.

Congratulations on the blue ribbon. I love the way you ended this fic even if it wasn’t what you originally intended. Brian in the closet that always makes me smile. LOL Thank you for the entertainment I really enjoyed it.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked the ending, and I'm glad I changed it too.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 10:42 AM · On: Finally Free.

Nice ending. The part with Nathan was great.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  That was my favorite part to write out of the whole story.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 09:34 AM · On: Finally Free.

Great job on your first story. Congrats on your blue ribbon, too! Thanks for writing so that we can all continue to live in our little fandom of happy endings (LOL). TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 08:52 AM · On: Finally Free.

Very enjoyable story! Extremely imaginative and creative, and held my attention from beginning to end.  I will be looking forward to more from you.  I could even see a sequel with this one where Nathan pops back in, but whatever you write I'm sure it will be every entertaining.  And with that I think you've earned a blue ribbon.  *Kudos!*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

*hugs*  Thank you!!  I'm so glad you liked it all and thank you so much for the ribbon!  Who knows about a sequel, I'm thinking about it but we'll see.  Not for now, at least.  But gaw, thank you!

Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 08:07 AM · On: Finally Free.

"I’m sure my cock can make you something.”
I swear I read THIS looool.
Thanks for that wonderful story. Sad it had to end .
Hope to read more from you soon!!!!!

Author's Response:

That's funny, because whenever I went to edit it that's what I read too, and I had to make sure again and again that it was cook.  XD  I'm so glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 07:49 AM · On: Finally Free.

*sniff sniff* do I smell a sequel brewing? An epilogue maybe? I definitely hope so because this was one hell of a ride that I would be very happy to stay on.

Nice work my friend, I look forward to your future projects~JP

Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you.  :)  I don't know about a sequel, though I did leave it open ended in case I decided to do one in the future.  Thank you SO much for all of your support!

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 07:32 AM · On: Finally Free.

That was a great ending! Oooh, scary Nathan! Great story :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, I intentionally left it a bit open ended in case I want to do a sequel, but I don't intend to right now.  Though I really liked the iea of a creepy ending.  >.<

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2013 10:09 AM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

Oh no Justin!!!



Author's Response:

Intense?  XD  Thank you!

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2013 06:20 PM · On: Brian Bottoms

Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I really had fun writing it.

Reviewer: Avampiregirl (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2013 06:16 AM · On: Photo Opp.

Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  <3

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 11:46 AM · On: The Most Historic Reunification.

So Brian would lower himself to Vance’s level by committing murder (and even worse by making someone else do his dirty work for him)? I’m surprised Keith agreed. There are only a few things that will make me lose any sympathy I have for a character but murder is one of them so I hope that Brian changes his mind. Other than that unpleasant possibility I’ve been enjoying this story.

Author's Response:

It's only a possibility.  He's just trying to protect Justin and isn't really thinking everything through.  We'll see how it turns out.  Thanks for the review!!  :)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 02:32 AM · On: The Most Historic Reunification.

oh sweet Cupcake - this chapter was absolutely delicious - may be one of myall time favs

Charle



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2013 10:40 PM · On: The Most Historic Reunification.

I know Brian will keep Justin safe,no matter what it takes. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Oh yes he will.  Brian protects what's his.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 09:39 PM · On: The Most Historic Reunification.

Yay! Happy reunion :)

Author's Response:

A VERY happy reunion.  XD  Thank you!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 08:00 PM · On: The Most Historic Reunification.

This was a wonderfully hot chapter, I'm glad Brian finally got the chance to tell Justin the truth about the check and that he loves him.

Taking that hit out on Nathan could prove to be disastrous. With any luck Keith won't have to go through with it.

Sorry your application didn't get accepted even so, that doesn't take away from the fact that you are very talented.....keep up the good work :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your sympathy.  :)  And I'm glad you liked the chapter.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 07:41 PM · On: The Most Historic Reunification.

OMG that was a shock. I like it when an author can do that. Brian took a hit out on Nathan. Wow. I think that’s a great way to get over Peru by killing off a character; but will all go as planned???? Brian said “I love you”; that’s always a bonus which makes this an outstanding chapter. Thanks.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Oh yes, taking out my rage on innocent characters (or not so innocent), but we'll see how it turns out.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2013 10:16 PM · On: Taken Again.

I'm enjoying this story.  The cliffhangers have been great.  Debbie has been a little over the top mean but it could happen.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it.  I guess I do write her a bit on the mean side, but I really wanted everyone to see the division Brian caused between himself and the family. 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2013 09:44 AM · On: Taken Again.

Nathan is definitely a bad egg. I sense that we haven't seen the last of that smelly character yet. Looking forward to your resolution. TAG



Author's Response:

Oh he'll still be around, doing his crazy thing.  I hope I don't let you down.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 08:57 AM · On: Taken Again.

OMG another Jensen; why is this name popular? I love that Brian is taking Justin but Nathan looking on is creepy. I hope Nathan eventually gets a crush on Ethan and they live happily ever after; however nobody is really sure if they do as neither are ever heard from again. Okay now I have just gone into fantasy land so I will just waiting for the next update. I love the fact you answer your reviews even if they aren’t timely at least we know you read them.


Cheers

Author's Response:

You know I think I used it subliminally.  I had just read her update and then started writing this. When I got to the cop Jensen was the first thing that came to mind.  >.<  And you're not the only one to think Nathan and Ethan would make a good couple.  I'm keeping that in mind.

Reviewer: Taire (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 11:50 AM · On: Taken Again.

You left me hanging! Stupid Ethan and Nathan deserve each other.

Author's Response:

OH THEY DO!!!  HA!  That's great.  I can see it now, Ethan going on and on about how wonderful he is and Nathan (being the complete psychopath he is) feeds Ethan's astounding ego.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2013 05:40 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

Another great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know!

Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2013 03:28 AM · On: Taken Again.

Ooh at last Brian has Justin in the same space as him without distractions :) but I reckon Brian still has a long way to go with the trust issue. Oh dear Brian is going to be furious and Justin scared about Nathan

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

You'd be surprised about Justin.  He's pretty tough.  Nathan won't be able to intimidate him much longer; if ever again.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 03:08 AM · On: Taken Again.

So Nathan is a free man, Ethan tried to have Brian arrested, and we still don't know where Brian plans to take Justin (hopefully to an all night wedding chapel).......the excitement is almost too much :)

Please update soon~JP

Please

Author's Response:

Hahaha!  Well are we surprised Ethan is a skeeze?  No change there.

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 09:57 PM · On: The End Game Begins.

ha! Don't underestimate Justin! That was an awesome twist. Now hopefully Keith can help him get those pictures and help save Brian!

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's not just a pretty face.  I'm glad you liked it it!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 06:54 PM · On: The End Game Begins.

good job . Justin faked his way out of that pretty well , but Kip is an idiot.

Author's Response:

Well we already knew that right?  ;)  In the show, whenever Kip opens his mouth I just want to punch him because he sounds like he's going to finish every sentence with 'right brah?'

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 05:07 PM · On: The End Game Begins.

I absolutely love that Justin is blackmailing Kip....he's so gullible. I hope this stall tactic is enough to save Brian.

More soon please JP

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad someone else enjoys my attempt at irony lol.

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 11:25 AM · On: Into the Fire.

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Author's Response:

D'awww, thank you.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2012 10:54 AM · On: Into the Fire.

These guys are definitely NOT trustworthy. Don't do it, Brian! TAG



Author's Response:

Hehehehe but he has to save Justin doesn't he?  :)  Thank you so much.  That was great!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 09:01 AM · On: Into the Fire.

very nice . You are getting good at these cliffhangers.

Author's Response:

Why thank you.  ^.^  It comes from reading so many fics I think.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 07:16 AM · On: Into the Fire.

I love quick updates, thank you. Justin should have been using his tongue for talking not kissing; however, if he had this fic wouldn't be this exciting. I like the fact they both know that they have some sort of a relationship now as some authors jump into that aspect without establishing it. Nicely done. Please hurry back.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you, I also find it irritating where they're pissed at each other and then the next minute are admitting their undying love for the other.  Thank you for the support!

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 05:10 AM · On: Into the Fire.

Ah!!!!

Author's Response:

I take it your excited?  :)

Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2012 02:26 AM · On: Into the Fire.

It must always end when it's the most exciting!! :o))


But please keep going, this story is absolutely GREAT!!!! :o)


Best wishes Diana



Author's Response:

I love cliffies.  They're a guilty pleasure.  And don't worry, I'm in this until the end, I refuse to leave anything undone.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2012 02:20 AM · On: Into the Fire.

Aaggrrr I need an update now !! Sorry * blushes * I'm a bit impatient.

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Naw don't worry, I'm the same way.  ^.^  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2012 09:55 PM · On: Into the Fire.

OK ready for the next chapter, this story is great.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so!  :)

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2012 09:50 PM · On: Into the Fire.

Omg!!!
Update soon.
-britinified

Author's Response:

Daily updates.  :)  Or generally daily updates.  Hehehe

Glad you're so into it!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 06:12 PM · On: Into the Fire.

Once again both of our boys are in a situation where they won't be able to help each other. Ted to the rescue????

Maybe the police will get involved......I can't wait to find out

Update soon please JP

Author's Response:

Yeah but Justin is determined help Brian just as much as Brian helped him. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 04:35 PM · On: Into the Fire.

Why didn't Justin tell Brian that the murderer was the one who tricked him into the boathouse as soon as he could? I would have thought that the fact the guy(s) who have been after them had found them would be a bigger issue? Apart from those wee niggles, another brilliant chapter to an already fabulous story :D



Author's Response:

Well thank you for still being able to enjoy it.  >.<  I guess I just didn't think about that aspect of it, because they thought they were once again safe and Justin had just woken up. 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 12:53 PM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

I have been following this but I am not always able to comment. I love the way both men don’t really seem to have a handle on their own feelings and are struggling with each other’s behavioural traits in response. This cliff hanger is awesome. Hurry Brian, Justin needs help. Congratulations on your 100 reviews as this fic really deserve them.

Cheers

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I always worry I can't portray believable and likeable characters, so I'm glad you like my Brian and Justin.  ^.^

Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2012 11:03 AM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

Omg, nooooooo! I was hoping that was a dream!!
Ah! Jussy!!!
This has me on edge.
Update soon!
-britinified

Author's Response:

No dream, but I could never kill off Brian or Justin.  :)

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 06:00 AM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

OMG, I...I…I'm really truly speechless, this chapter was really something, I can't even describe what I'm feeling right now so I'm gonna shower you with tons of smiley faces

 

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Author's Response:

WOOT!  Those are so awesome.  Thank you so much for all your support!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

nice cliffhanger.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I like building suspense.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2012 04:59 AM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

WHERE IS BRIAN??

Thank you for the double chapter. Loved it!

 



Author's Response:

Hehe, you're welcome.  ^.^  I figured since you all were so dedicated I would give a little bit back.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2012 11:01 PM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

Another great chapter.

Author's Response:

Why thank you!

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2012 10:25 PM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

Eeek!!!!

Author's Response:

Intense right?  :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2012 07:00 PM · On: Out of the Frying Pan...

Justin is truly fucked, no one knows he's locked in the burning boathouse and I really don't see a way for Brian to come to his rescue this time :'(

Brian too is fucked because with Justin out of the way, he can't be warned about the murderer being so close :'(

Please update soon JP

Author's Response:

Well I couldn't actually let him die, could I?  ;)

Reviewer: 087bue (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2012 06:45 AM · On: Game. Set. Match.

loved it..great sex scene.;-)

Author's Response:

Oh yay!  Thank you for letting me know.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2012 04:40 AM · On: A Moments Distraction.

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Author's Response:

I feel the need to bow.  ^.^  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: sarafanjum (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2012 01:45 AM · On: A Moments Distraction.

We like vulnerable Brian as long as it's only in front of Justin. Really love Justin's witty remarks, his lines r totally awesome. I couldn't stop laughing reading some of his comments in this series ^o^

Even if B/J r being naughty ;) on the dock, the bad men will eventually see the house n come to know of their location :(

Super duper writing n thanks for the quick updates :)

~Love & Kisses~



Author's Response:

Oh yes, I feel the same way about that.  Brian can only really open up to one person in my mind.

And thank you!  I'm glad I can make you laugh, I want this to be really enjoyable.  Besides, its kind of pathetic if I laugh at my own work and no one else does...isn't it?

As for the quick updates, it's a pet peeve of mine when authors take forever to update, so I always try to write a lot before hand so I can avoid that.  I'm glad I'm not alone.

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2012 11:33 PM · On: A Moments Distraction.

I hope Teds not up to no good.

Author's Response:

We'll just have to see, won't we?  Thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2012 09:52 PM · On: A Moments Distraction.

Oooh, good chapter! What is Ted up to?

Author's Response:

Who knows...That seems to be the question burning everyone's mind.  And good.  That's what I wanted.  ^.^  Thanks for your review!!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2012 07:38 PM · On: A Moments Distraction.

What an interesting turn of events. Brian Kinney revealing the details of his childhood with Justin was a huge step for him, but what makes Justin so trepidatious about telling Brian about his life in New York?

What is Ted up to? Hopefully he's off to warn our boys about the impending danger.....or maybe he's going to finish the job himself (that would be totally fucked) either way, Brian and Justin are using their time wisely and taking advantage of the calm before the storm by spending every moment they can uh.......being as close as possible ;)

More, more, more JP

Author's Response:

New York will come up more later; towards the end of the story.  And I hope you enjoyed him opening up, I always love seeing Brian show his true colors. >.<

As for Ted...Still a mystery.  ;)

Thank you again for all your support!!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2012 06:55 PM · On: A Moments Distraction.

The talking in bed was great , it added depth and history to the boys . It will make the reader care more for them

Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know.  I really liked writing that part, one of my favorite parts to write actually.  ^.^

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2012 07:29 AM · On: Game. Set. Match.

It seems the power between our boys is over or has it just begun.

Has Justin forgotten about his mother. I thought that he would atleast try to contact her.

wonder how Brian react to Justin connection to his past pals.

 



Author's Response:

Apparently I didn't put it in here yet but Justin does talk about why he doesn't call his Mom.  >.<

And as for Brian's reaction, I haven't actually written that part yet, though it is the next chapter I'm working on, I hope it's realistic for you when it comes!

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2012 04:18 AM · On: Game. Set. Match.

great job! really like this story - and your first foray into writing a sex scene was quite successful! ;)

anxious for more!

Charle



Author's Response:

Woot!  Thank you!  I hope I don't let you down.  >.<

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 10:59 PM · On: Game. Set. Match.

O.K. That was probably the best thing you have ever written. It was perfect and HOT.

Author's Response:

Gah!  Really?!  Thank you.  ^.^  I've never been so nervous to post a chapter before.

Reviewer: sarafanjum (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 08:57 PM · On: Game. Set. Match.

This series is simply gorgeous. Can't wait for the next chapter (and the rim job ^o^) Your writing is really good & the sex scene was great ;)

~Love & Kisses~



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the sex scene.  And I'm pleased that the story is keeping you hooked!  :)

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2012 08:28 PM · On: Game. Set. Match.

Great sex scene and great story.

Author's Response:

Ahhhh, thank you!  I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 07:55 PM · On: Game. Set. Match.

U sure u never wrote one before? Because that was hot!

Author's Response:

Nope, never.  Never wrote for the right fandom for it.  I'm glad I did alright!  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 07:31 PM · On: Game. Set. Match.

Lmfao at Justin's dinner table antics....."I love a hot, juicy piece of meat." "Just putting it in my mouth and feeling all the warm juice slide down my throat....mm." I love it haha!

So the murderer does have an inside source at kinnetic. Maybe Ted is involved in this fiasco after all. I just hope he knows what the hell he's doing.

Update soon please JP

Author's Response:

It may be pathetic to admit but I was making myself laugh by writing the dinner scene.  :)

Who knows what Ted is up to.  >.>  <.<  >.>

Thanks again for your reviews!

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 07:15 PM · On: Game. Set. Match.

That was wonderful, great and very hot.

*****

Author's Response:

That is such a relief!  Thank you!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2012 06:02 PM · On: Game. Set. Match.

I thought that was anamazing sex scene lol



Author's Response:

Oh good.  :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: blacklizard (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 05:07 PM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

that was beautifully written

this story is getting better and better with each chapter

by the way good luck with your exams



Author's Response:

Thank you for the well wishes!  And for the review!  :)  I'm glad I haven't let you down yet.  For some reason I'm still paranoid that I'll out a chapter and people will be like 'this sucked compared to everything else!'  >.< 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2012 06:48 AM · On: Escape is Futile.

Great UST you've got going in this. TAG



Author's Response:

I love UST.  While writing this I was worried it would come across badly, you know, like, pathetic?  Thanks for letting me know you like it!

Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2012 03:27 AM · On: Game Changer.

 Hi!

This is an exciting and great story. Thank you for sharing...

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoy it!

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 01:36 AM · On: Game Changer.

Great chapter! I cant wait for more :) hope u had a nice and romantic evening!!

Author's Response:

Oh I did.  He made it so perfect!  The story had to take a back seat for one night.  :)  Thanks for the review!  I'm caught up now so I'll be back to daily updates.

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 12:24 AM · On: Game Changer.

SmileyCentral.com



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  I love all of your little pictures, they're so cute!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 11:58 PM · On: Game Changer.

Hi, Dear!  Had to go back and re-read some of my favorite parts in this story.  I really adore the sexual tension you're portraying with these two and the bantering.  Very well done!  I can't wait to read the rest of this.:) 

Oh, and a picnic on the beach and Nutcracker tickets?  You are one lucky girl!!  Thanks again for such an entertaining story.  We'll be waiting here to read the rest when you get the time to post/write it.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I'm glad, I hope you like the changes I've made in it.  I like it better with the additions.

And oooohhh yes it was rediculously romantic.

Thank you so much for all your support!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 11:14 PM · On: Game Changer.

I'm glad Justin finally made a decision about sleeping with Brian , and backstory is always good.

Author's Response:

It was all for you.  ^.^  I didn't have it in there before, and added it because of your feedback, so thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 09:06 PM · On: Game Changer.

Did I mentioned that I am enjoying this 'take charge' Justin?

Look out Brian a big ball of sunshine is gonna hit you!



Author's Response:

Oh I liked how you phrased that!  And thank you, I always did like the more assertive Justin.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MaryJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 06:41 PM · On: Game Changer.

Hi! I was reading it on Fanfic.net but it seem to me that there are some part longer here! Anyway wonderful fiction!! Can't wait to read it all.



Author's Response:

Ahhh yes.  That would be because I made adjustments.  Hopefully good adjustments.  Nothing major, but definitely more scenes that will hopefully fill in some gaps and build characters.  Speaking of...I've forgotten to update over there.  I should get around to that.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 05:38 PM · On: Game Changer.

It's good to know Jennifer has at least one person by her side to keep her optimistic about Justin's safe return.

Justin has made a huge decision in playing his little game to bed Brian.....I hope he can handle the consequences of his actions ;)

Update soon please JP

Author's Response:

Oh yes, well we can always rely on Emmett, can't we?  Next to Ben and Justin he's my favorite character.

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2012 04:25 AM · On: Escape is Futile.

Welcome back! Hope your finals went well :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope so too...Unfortunately I won't find out until Friday.  *pout*  The suspense is killing me.

Reviewer: blacklizard (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 11:28 PM · On: Escape is Futile.

ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!! how could you leave it there!!!

is ted in on it somehow???

great chapter as always keep it coming



Author's Response:

Who knoooows...*shrugs*  You won't find out about Ted for some time yet.  Is he good, bad, or does he have something else entirely going on?  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Escape is Futile.

Really enjoying this fic.  Brian carrying Justin makes my heart go pitter-pat.  Glad you'll have more time to write, I'm looking forward to your next update.

All the best!



Author's Response:

That was precisely the reason I wrote it!  I'm a sucker for little carrying scenes.  It might just pop up a few more times in this fic.  :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 05:06 PM · On: Escape is Futile.

I don't like the way the family is making Brian look so terrible in Jennifer's eyes, in her condition they should be reassuring her that Justin will make a safe return.

Meanwhile, Justin is learning pretty quickly that in order for him to make safely back to his family, he's going to have to let Brian take care of him for a while.

Looking forward to the next chapter JP

Author's Response:

You're right, they should be more supportive of her.  At least she has Emmett, I just wanted to make it clear that Michael was NOT obsessed with Brian.  ^.^

 

Thank you!  I think you've reviewed every single chapter and I have to say, your dedication is flattering.  :)  I hope I don't let you down.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2012 05:14 AM · On: Swordplay.

Loved the bedroom kissing scene. I tried to stop reading after that but decided to give up some sleep to finish. This story is too good to put down.

Author's Response:

I have had the delimna many a night when I am sooo tired but I just can't stop reading.  I'm happy to know I've caused that in others.  >.<

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2012 05:06 AM · On: Hunger

This is excellent writing. I love the banter between the two and the plot is very clever.

You have a gem here! This has got to be a Blue Ribbon in the running!

Author's Response:

Gaw!  You don't really think so do you?!  That would be amazing, but I'm so new, I'm not going to get my hopes up.  Thank you!  That was so amazing!!

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2012 04:55 AM · On: Great Pleasure

This was very entertaining. Delightful!

Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you.  ^.^

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2012 03:31 AM · On: Swordplay.

This was great. No, it was actually more than great. This story has everything that I was looking for in a BJ fanfiction from the conflict to the angst to the suppressed desires to portraying the characters very well as if I actually seeing them.

Definitely looking forward to what else might be in store ; ) .SmileyCentral.com

 



Author's Response:

Oooooohhhh...Thank you!  I'm so happy you think that!!  I've read a lot of fanfics for BJ before I got the guts to post this, and tried to avoid all the things I didn't like.  So I'm glad I'm go so far.

Reviewer: sabyyaa (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2012 11:45 PM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

come on justin be the fiesty one. dont fall for the big bad brian's crap. give brian a taste of his own medicine *evil grin* 

 

aww thanx mate . but i hv 2 say finals come 1st . best of luck :) 



Author's Response:

Finals shminals... Its only college, right?  >.<  I didn't study much, but I did manage to do a good job I think.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2012 07:17 AM · On: Swordplay.

4 a first u r doing good im enjoying the  story thanku kim



Author's Response:

I'm so glad.  I have quite a few other stories in the work that I'll put out once I finish this one, now that I know that I can actually do it.  Thank you!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2012 07:02 AM · On: Swordplay.

Great chapter. Waiting for more.

Author's Response:

I'm back to daily updates, you won't have to wait long.  ^.^

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2012 06:00 AM · On: Swordplay.

This is excellent for a first try!!

Liked that Justin is young but strong and independent. He will definately be able to handle the ruthless businessman Brian.

Looking forward to their further interaction.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  That's so sweet.  And yes, he will be able to tame Brian, in time.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2012 05:45 AM · On: Swordplay.

Things are about to get even more interesting for our boys now that the would be murderer is coming after them.

Study hard and update soon JP

Author's Response:

I'm a notorious procrastinator.  I took a break in writing and still somehow managed not to get much studying done.  XD  I still think I did ok though.  Thank you!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2012 03:18 AM · On: Hunger

Well poor Justin is playing with fire baiting Brian, but I am unsure what game Brian is playing though. I cannot see why they need to stay hidden after all Brian is an important man and can make the right people listen. Oh well all will be revealed soon I suspect lol

Author's Response:

Well Brian is powerful and influential, but that is why he's also going his own way.  Maybe hidden isn't the right word, but he's going to a place where he can take control of the situation.  Brian isn't exactly trusting; even of law enforcement, so that's why he wants to handle it on his own.  I hope that helps a little.  Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: sabyyaa (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2012 02:57 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

hey ! phullleeeeez dont make me wait this long :( 

am soooo addicted to this story. n u made me comment allll the way from Asia .:) 

i already hv 10 hrs difference lol.

still amaziiiing story . am lovinnn it ;)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry!  I was just trying to focus on finals for a little bit.  >.<  Updates will come, I promise.  I'm glad you're looking forward to the updates so much!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2012 02:18 PM · On: Hunger

I’m so pleased I was able to catch up on this fic. Justin lying on top of Brian was such a lovely way to torture him. LOL I’m not in any hurry for the killer to make another entrance as Brian and Justin are doing just fine entertaining us. ;) Thank you for the quick updates.


Cheers

Author's Response:

I thought that would a fun way to frustrate him.  :)  And don't worry, the murderer will return, but he won't catch up to them for some time yet.  Our boys will have plenty of alone time.  And you're very welcome!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2012 10:02 AM · On: Hunger

absolutely enjoying it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad!

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2012 09:52 AM · On: Hunger

Don't be naughty like me and avoid studying by writing fanfic. Good luck on your finals. We'll be waiting for the next chapter when you're done. TAG



Author's Response:

Way too late for that.  XD  Thanks for the good wishes, we'll see what happens; I'm a chronic procrastinator.  Thanks for your review; this may sound lame but I am a huge fan of your writing.  I love all of your fics.  >.<

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2012 09:08 AM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.

loving it



Author's Response:

Why thank you!  I'm so glad!  >.<  I hope you still keep loving it!

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2012 08:48 AM · On: Photo Opp.

Interesting little meeting between Brian and Justin. Love how you are developing these characters.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope as they get closer and closer you still feelt he same way.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2012 08:34 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

a great start  - loved the intro. of both characters.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you approve!  :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 10:41 PM · On: Hunger

each chapter is getting better than the one before.

Author's Response:

Why thank you!

Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Hunger

Just started reading this... I really am enjoying it :)

Author's Response:

Oh yay!  Thanks for the review!  I hope you keep on enjoying it!

Reviewer: blacklizard (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

me again i logged on this morning and was blowen away buy your writing

i love the conversations between brian and justin and i would love to know of course wno the killer is!!! any hints? keep up the good stuff



Author's Response:

Awwww, that's so sweet!

Let's see...Hints on the killer...hmmm...nope.  XD  Sorry.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Hunger

So much UST so little time :)

Hmmm.....the bit of information on the radio might be just enough to flush the murderer out to come looking for them.

Can't wait to see what happens next JP

Author's Response:

Thank you for all the feedback you've given!  And yes, I'm a HUGE fan of UST (as if that isn't already clear XD).

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2012 02:50 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys

Every chapter seems to get better. Good job. Marion

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm so thrilled that it didn't get a little boring once they got on the run.  >.<

Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 02:16 AM · On: Great Pleasure

SmileyCentral.com     

 

 

 

 

SmileyCentral.com



Author's Response:

How cute!  Thank you!

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2012 11:46 PM · On: Fight For The (copy)Right

I am really enjoying this story.Very well written. Marion

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 11:37 PM · On: Great Pleasure

honestly this story is just getting better with each chapter! fantastic writing :D i do love your characterisations of both B and J, makes for some excellent banter between them! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad each one is getting better.  I was also worried I wasn't able to characterize them well enough...That's something I'm bad at.  >.<

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