Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For A Rip in Time
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2013 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Plans for the Future - Epilogue

I enjoyed your story. I am a bit curious though as to why Tosh is alive when she died before Ianto in the series.

Author's Response:

To quote one series, 'It's only time',... to quote another 'it's timey wimey...'.   Anyway, I see what you're saying, but I wanted Tosh in this story, so, she didn't die before Ianto for my purposes.  Thanks for the review and comments!

- Jackie

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Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Rift at Babylon

How did I miss this story??? I love it!

Author's Response:

Dear snow,

Thanks for the review!  Glad you liked it.

- Jackie

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Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2012 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Plans for the Future - Epilogue

Really fun little fic. I personally think all these characters would enjoy a good opportunity to bottom with the right incentive. Plus, it was hot! Thanks for writing. TAG

 

P.S. I STILL miss Ianto.    :(



Author's Response:

Dear Tag,

Thanks for agreeing with my need to show them all as wanting an oppotunity to bottom once and a while.  And, it was hot ... yeah!  I miss Ianto, too.  Sorry, I couldn't resurrect him this time around, but he WAS lovingly mentioned.

Thanks again,

- Jackiestories/963/images/icon1.jpg

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2012 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Rift at Babylon

Oh good, Justin's finally here. I feel better now. TAG



Author's Response:

I'm here to appease.  Let me know if you have any other story requests.  Always good to hear from you, Tag.

- J

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Advice from Captain Jack

*Still gasping, still panting, and moving on towards moaning at this point* TAG

 

P.S. Still missing Justin in this mix. Also hoping there was a little bit of time traveling foreshadowing re Ianto in there? Just hoping. 



Author's Response:

Ianto is mentioned with great affection.  The story will get its infusion of Justin later.  

- J

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2012 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 3 - A Window in Time

Very hot! *pant, pant, gasp* TAG



Author's Response:

Tag,  Grab a cold shower!  Or, just live the moment.  :)

- Jackie

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2012 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Impressive Equipment

Like I said - what's going to happen to poor Justin? Not that these two aren't super, wet-your-panties hot, but you really can't do this to our fave couple can you? LOL! TAG



Author's Response:

Never ...   -J

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Meeting Torchwood

Love Torchwood. And, I definitely think Brian and Captain Jack together would be HOT. But, then what about poor Justin & Ianto? I don't want them left out. Well, I'll read on and hope for the best. TAG



Author's Response:

Dear Tag,

Justin belongs with Brian.  Ianto and Jack are hot.  Thanks for reading!

- Jackie

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Reviewer: neli (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2012 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Plans for the Future - Epilogue

Briane would not bottom or sleep with someone that is not Justin more than once!



Author's Response:

Well, it's twice in one night and I count that as once, but I see your point.

- Jackie

Reviewer: Mokuwahine (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2012 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Plans for the Future - Epilogue

I really enjoyed your story. I'm glad you had Jack tell Brian about Ianto. As for them bottoming, Brian did bottom for Justin and in Miracle Day we see Jack bottom twice.



Author's Response:

I haven't gotten to "Miracle Day" yet.  Now, I look forward to it.  I'm in Series 2, somewhere around the 4th episode.  I DO know about Ianto's passing, though, and wanted to include Jack mentioning that.  Thanks for the review.

- Jackie

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Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Plans for the Future - Epilogue

so good - I love how you made fucking Jack a natural step in the romantic journey - only Brian could pull that off - have Justin become aware of it - and still have it end with them together at the end of the day

and speaking of being with Jack - both of them as bottoms...hot hot hot

Charle



Author's Response:

Charle,

Thank you for your words of appreciation.  Yes, Brian uses different ways to see that Justin is the one for him.  Being with Jack was just part of the journey.  Thank you, also, for liking the 'positional' relationship of Jack and Brian.  It's the way that I had to write it ... much to the chagrin, I'm sure, of some folks.

All my best,  - Jackie

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Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2012 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Plans for the Future - Epilogue

Sorry, i'm not a fan of Torchwood..

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2012 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Plans for the Future - Epilogue

I have no issues with Brian bottoming. I have issues with Brian bottoming for someone he just met. Something he doesn't do regularly, if ever, for Justin, even though they've been together for five years. 

Interesting story/crossover, though. :)



Author's Response:

I appreciate the feedback.  Yeah, I suppose it's not Brian-y as one of my beta readers would say, but something about Jack made him an exception to that rule.  Thanks

- Jackie

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Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Plans for the Future - Epilogue

Great job, my friend!  I'll have to check out Torchwood now. I admit I was a little surprised that Brian kissed the guy after he hadn't done that before with anyone but Justin, but if the guy is as hot as he sounds and he brought the boys together, I think I can overlook that.;)

Thanks for this unique and entertaining story!  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Brian kissed the guy that he nailed in the bathroom in the first episode (married client), so I could see it.  Thanks for the review.  I appreciate the feedback.  

- Jackie

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Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Impressive Equipment

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Meeting Torchwood

Well, I was just mentioning your new story, and here it is!  My favorite line in this chapter: 

Besides, he was hot and I’d enjoy the scenery. 

Ha! So like Brian! I just hope you're going to put B and J back together, eventually, but I'm definitely intrigued either way.  I confess I've heard of Torchwood, but I've never seen it.  I may have to go check it out now!  Moving onto the next chapter.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim,  John Barrowman plays Capt. Jack and he's very handsome.  My cover art doesn't give him justice.  Glad you like the Brian line here.  Why not enjoy the scenery?  Thanks again.

- Jackie

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