Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Visitor
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2021 10:31 PM · On: Human: Part One

Omg what a powerful chapter the part where you described how much energy Blake was using to stay calm and comforting by the sweat was amazing.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2021 12:53 PM · On: Human: Part One

Oh I have just read al, the chapters and found it such a page turner. Blake was a character I did not pay much attention to in the series so you have opened a whole AU thank you.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2021 12:53 PM · On: Human: Part One

Oh I have just read al, the chapters and found it such a page turner. Blake was a character I did not pay much attention to in the series so you have opened a whole AU thank you.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2021 12:53 PM · On: Human: Part One

Oh I have just read al, the chapters and found it such a page turner. Blake was a character I did not pay much attention to in the series so you have opened a whole AU thank you.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2021 05:14 PM · On: Human: Part One

Hopefully Blake will be able to get through to his mom.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2021 11:46 AM · On: Human: Part One

So HAPPY to see an update.  I love this story and thought about it just the other day.  You do a great job on portraying Ted & Blake.  Bill

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2020 04:06 AM · On: Midnight

Ted treading in unfamiliar territory did very well.

Blake showed more of himself and letting Ted know about some of his childhood was huge. HUGE.

Visiting Blake's mom, next step in the relationship. They're gpoing to be fine. The hard  part is now over.

Uncle Roy, he's a putz.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2020 01:59 AM · On: Midnight

I like that Ted and Blake got to talk and Blake opened up about his life but I feel really bad for Grace & Blake.  Great story, you have me hooked.  Would love to see a little happiness. Was really happy to see an updatefor one of my favorite stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2020 12:56 AM · On: Midnight

This was a talk well worth having.  Looking forward to seeing how Blake's mom reacts.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2020 02:43 AM · On: An Open Book: Part Four

Powerful chapter.

Just a little crack, an opening in the cacoon Blake had himself in was all it needed for his two Teddies to bring him him out of the darkness.

Gracie hugging Ted, Blake talking about his past, his pain...bigs steps for both brother and sister.

Ted Schimdt, not a miracle worker, but them all close enough.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks so mcuh, Sherry!  I love the way you describe Blake's "cacoon".   It was a challenging chapter to write, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. 

Hopefully everyone will continue to take those big steps forward.  Thanks again for reading and commenting!  Take care! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2020 12:27 PM · On: An Open Book: Part Four

Another great chapter.  So glad that Gracie got them to talk to each other.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Bill!  I'm glad Gracie was able to bring them together, too.  It felt good to write a conversation between them.  Thanks again for continuing to read and leave comments :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2020 04:02 AM · On: An Open Book: Part Four

This was so good.  Sweet too.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  :)   So happy you liked it!

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2020 12:37 PM · On: An Open Book: Part Three

I always try to wait for a few chapters to be posted before I start reading stories, preferring completed stories, mainly because I am quite simply impatient. Poor Ted, he really needs to believe in himself, and know that his love and compassion for Blake and Grace can be expressed without him fearing he will say or do the wrong thing. He is a kind and gentle soul in this, as are they, and they need each other to get through this. This has been well worth the wait and I look forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, Nicky!  I completely understanding wanting to wait for a few chapters to be posted before you start reading, and I'm so glad you felt these most recent chapters were worth the wait.  The next chapter is 99% complete and I hope to post it soon.

Ted really does need to believe in himself - he has a huge heart, as Michael tells us in the pilot of the show, and I'm sure he can use it to help both Blake and Grace.

Thank you again for your comments and for diving into reading this story :) 

 

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2020 02:52 PM · On: An Open Book: Part Three

Sometimes it takes an outsider to show you the way. Smart little girl indeed sending Ted in to him. Enough beatimng up himself. With Ted and Gracie things will begin to settle back to some form of normalcy.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Sherry!  I couldn't agree more - Gracie is definitely showing them the way.  Thank you for continuing to read this story.  It's always lovely to see new reviews from you :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2020 03:37 PM · On: An Open Book: Part Three

LOVE Gracie!  She's had a hard life but it seem to have given her wisdom.  This is such a great story, I look forward to your updates.  Glad you are updating again!!!!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much for your enthusiasm, Bill!!  It made me smile and it does wonders for my motivation.  I'm so glad you love Gracie and that you are still enjoying this story.  Hope to have another update for you soon! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2020 01:17 PM · On: An Open Book: Part Three

Now to tell Ted the truth about how he's feeling.  And for Ted to do the same.



Author's Response:

I agree ;)  Thank you for reading, as always!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 04:43 PM · On: An Open Book: Part Two

Doesn't he know that Ted will forgive him anything?



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for all your lovely reviews!  You read and reviewed chapters you had reviewed years ago - not that I'm complaining because I always enjoy reading your feedback!  I’m so glad you still have some interest in this story even after all this time.  You’re right about Ted being able to forgive Blake for just about anything.  More chapters coming soon.  Thank you again for taking the time to re-read and re-review 😊

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 04:27 PM · On: An Open Book: Part One

Oh, dear.  How will Blake take them going through the photos?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 04:16 PM · On: Where Kindness Ends

No one deserves to be alone.  It would have been nice if Blake had said he was afraid.  Brian won't be happy when he finds out they didn't fuck.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 04:13 PM · On: Date Night

Brian is such a good guy.  At least he tells it like it is which is what Blake should try.  He'd feel better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 04:05 PM · On: The Kinney Connection

Love Brian's conversation with Blake.  It's one of a kind.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:59 PM · On: Away From Him

I think that Ted would be willing to keep Gracie permanently.  He'd make a good dad or big brother.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:40 PM · On: Words of Wisdom

Amazing how Gracie managed to practice what Teddy preached.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:31 PM · On: Down to Earth

Fun moments like this were hard to come by in the home Gracie grew up in I'm sure.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:23 PM · On: Floating

A flour fight?  Who gets to clean up?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:17 PM · On: Heart and Mind

Ted is learning.  Was he an only child? I thought there was a mention of his sister.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:08 PM · On: Daddy's Girl

I learned a new four letter word that starts with F.  Fine.  Grace will be better once she meets the family.  Maybe she could tell Mikey off?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:08 PM · On: Daddy's Girl

I learned a new four letter word that starts with F.  Fine.  Grace will be better once she meets the family.  Maybe she could tell Mikey off?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:03 PM · On: A Little Bit of Grace

It's nice that Gracie will be with Blake.  This will be good for both her and Blake.  I hope she gets to meet Emmett.  Emmett would understand.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 01:55 PM · On: A House is not a Home

How will Gracie react?  What does she remember?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 01:38 PM · On: A Lesson Learned

Teddy is one of my favorite characters because he has empathy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 01:34 PM · On: Leaving Home

This is so sad.  But it's also so real.  I fear for Gracie.  What happened to Adam?

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 02:28 AM · On: An Open Book: Part Two

I remember this.

If Ted had stayed, pushed a bit, Blake would have gotten to the peace he so desperately needs. 

His anger woiuld have been his catharsis. He needs it, Ted needs it for him. Gracie needs it.

Hope to see this back soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, Sherry!  It's lovely to hear from you again and it's wonderful to know that you remember this story, despite my extremely sporadic updates.

I've completed a total of three new chapters, so you will see this story back soon.  I agree with you that Blake, Ted, and Gracie are in need of some catharsis!

Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment :)  Take care!

 

 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 01:19 AM · On: An Open Book: Part Two

Great to see an update even if it sad again.  I think there is a lot of truth here about how people are afraid to be honest with themselves and other in their life. Still delighted to see the continuation of your story and greedy for more.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi Bill!  It's so great to see a review from you after all this time.  I hope you are doing well! 

I'm delighted that you still have some interest in this story.  Apologies for the sadness, yet again.  I've written three new chapters and there is a bit more levity, or at least openness to come.

Thank you for continuing to read and leave comments, Bill.  It's always hugely appreciated :)

Reviewer: chenlina (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 06:43 AM · On: The Storm

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Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2016 11:42 AM · On: An Open Book: Part One

Still loving this do much!!! I don't know what to say that wi haven't already said about your writing. I love Ted and Grace's complicity. And your characterization is as awesome as ever! I only have one complain...I want more!!! lol Thank you as always for your magnificent job on this :)



Author's Response:

Ah, Alois – your comments make me so happy!  I’m so glad you still love this story, even after all this time.  You’re such a talented writing and it means the world to me that you would read, let alone enjoy anything I write :)

I’m so thrilled that you like the Ted and Gracie characterization.  I hope to give you more of this story very soon :)

 

Thank you again, my friend!  *hugs*

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2016 11:29 AM · On: Where Kindness Ends

It's painful to see Blake enjoying the possibility that Ted has enough of his lies, to the point where he would give up on him. You write so well about his low confidence and pain. So, so well done as always. Wonderful job



Author's Response:

You really must stop saying such sweet things, Alois.  I feel like my thank yous aren’t nearly enough. 

I must admit, I didn’t have very much fun writing this chapter, but I’m glad you liked it despite the pain.

 

Thank you for your lovely comments, as always, my friend :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2016 11:21 AM · On: Date Night

Finally! I have some time to catch up, and I must say I remember now why I loved your story so much :) your wrting style is as exquisite as ever. Blake's turmoil is si beautifully described. Off to read the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much for your kind words, dearest Alois :)  I’m so grateful you were able to find some time to catch up. 

As always, your comments have turned me into a smiling ball of happiness.  I’m so happy you still enjoy my writing style :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2016 07:59 AM · On: Ma and Pa

I liked Ted character on the show. He was quirky and Blake was gentle and pleasant. They complemented each other. I am enjoying the story alot.



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!

Thank you so much for your review!   I’m so glad you're enjoying this story :)  I absolutely agree with you – Ted and Blake complement each other very well.

 

I hope you will continue to enjoy future chapters of the story.  Thank you again for your lovely comments :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2016 03:26 AM · On: An Open Book: Part One

It's time Blake and Ted talked and Blake learned how much Ted really cares.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, YumYum - Ted and Blake will talk soon :)  Thank you for reading and reviewing!.  I always look forward to your comments :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2016 03:25 AM · On: An Open Book: Part One

Was so happy to get my email notification that you had posted an update!!!  Anther sad chapter but fascinating to read to and get a view into Blake's early life.  Seems like a one time happy family that got broken and made unhappy.  Hope that Ted & Blake are able to talk to each other soon.  I continue to LOVE your story!!!!!  Thanks for this latest chapter and I can't wait for more!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

Yay!!!  Thank you so much, Bill :)  I’m so happy that you were so happy to receive an update!

Sorry for giving you yet another sad chapter.  I'd like to think that no family, no matter how dysfunctional is without their moments of happiness.  And don’t worry – Ted and Blake will sit down together soon :)

 

As always, I truly appreciate your speedy, enthusiastic, and wonderful reviews.  Thank you again, Bill! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2016 01:35 PM · On: Where Kindness Ends

Noooo!  Blake does not deserve to be alone.  What will happen next?



Author's Response:

Sorry, YumYum!  Fear not - Blake won't be alone for too long :)

Reviewer: steff (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2016 09:09 AM · On: Where Kindness Ends

Found this a few weeks ago and thought it was abondened. Loved it nevertheless! What a nice surprise that you are back :-),

I espacially like the kind and caring relationship Ted and Blake are having, although right now they are having troubles with Blake not beeing able to open up to his partner. Thankfully he seems to recognise that playing "I'm fine" is not something that will make Ted happy. Don't let them suffer long, will you? Let them fight together!

Like the Ted/sister interaction, Ted going out of his comfort-zone to help the girl hadle their shared shyness around people and the girl taking his advise. Sweet :-)

And I liked the Blake/Brian part to. Glad that Brian cared enough to help the partner of a friend.

So, thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Hi Steff!

Thank you so much for this lovely review! :)  I’m sorry to have made you think this fic was abandoned, though I don’t blame you for thinking so.  I just wish I could retire from work and school and spend my days writing.  *sigh*  If only… 

I’m so happy you’re enjoying the Ted/Blake relationship thus far.  They’re definitely a couple of kind and caring men.  And don’t worry – I won’t let them suffer too long!

The Ted/sister interaction is becoming one of my favourite aspects of this story, which I never really expected.  “Sweet” is the perfect word to describe them.

I had great fun writing that Brian/Blake interaction.  I always wanted these two to interact on the show in some way, so I just had to write something between them.

 

Thank you again for your kind words and for reading this story.   I'm so happy you found it and I’m truly grateful for your wonderful feedback :) *hugs*

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2016 01:19 AM · On: Where Kindness Ends

WOW!!  I thought the last chapter was sad, this one went to new depths of despair.  I hope the next one has a little hope in it.  It was sad but wonderful.  I really love your story!!!!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Bill!  Sorry for all the sadness, but I'm glad you still love the story :)

The next chapter won't be quite so dark  It is turning out to be quite long though, so I may have to split it into two parts.

Thank you once again for your continued enthusiasm and support :)

Reviewer: hoffe1 (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2016 06:26 PM · On: Date Night

Nice to see this story back.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you very much!  I'm so happy to hear you feel that way :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2016 03:32 AM · On: Date Night

I knew Brian would take care of the bill.  I feel sorry for Blake, he didn't have a father like the kid sitting at the next table.  If only he'd told Ted that he wanted Ted with him, but felt that Gracie needed him more. 



Author's Response:

How lovely to see you back, YumYum!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)

Good call on Brian taking care of the bill ;)  I feel sorry for Blake too.  Actually when I read your words: "Gracie needed him more", it made me wish I had added an extra paragraph to this chapter.  Oh, well.  There will be more to come shortly.

Thank you again for leaving me a review.  I always love to hear from you :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 11:14 PM · On: Date Night

Yeah!!!!! An update!!! So happy Sarah to see this :) I will read it very very soon but I just wanted to tell how happy I am that you're back :)



Author's Response:

Oh, dearest Alois!  You sure know how to make a girl smile :)  Minutes after posting an update, I see this lovely message from you.  Thank you so much!  You've brightened my day.

I'm so happy to be back (especially because it means I get to interact with wonderful people like you).  I hope you're doing well and that life is treating you kindly :)

*hugs you tightly* 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2016 11:08 PM · On: Date Night

I was really, really, really happy to see an update.  I love your story!!!!  Poor Bake if only he could be honest with Ted.  Ted would be such a support for all that Blake is going through.  Great chapter though I feel really bad for Blake and for Ted that Blake feels he can't be honest with him. Hope to see another chapter soon.  Thanks for posting this chapter!!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Bill!!!  How wonderful to hear from you! :)  You must be the quickest reader and reviewer on the planet :P

I'm really really really overjoyed to hear that you still love my story (even after all this time).  I'm working away on another chapter at the moment and hope to have it posted for you soon.  

Ted and Blake are going through a tough time (and it may get a little tougher), but there will be light (and maybe a little honesty too).

Thank YOU so much for your continued support.  I truly, truly appreciate it :)

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2016 08:22 AM · On: The Kinney Connection

Very intrigued by this Blake and Ted story, and I'm looking forward to finding out more about their lives both now and prior to their relationship. Loved the Brian and Blake interaction, I can picture this scene so easily. So glad I saw the recommendation of  "PA Boi"  to check out this story and really hope you update again soon:-)



Author's Response:

Hi Nicky!  

My gosh, I feel so terrible for taking this long to respond to you, but please know that your kind words are very much appreciated.  I'm very flattered that you like this little story (and that PA Boi recommended it).  I had so much fun writing the scene between Brian and Blake as I always wanted these two characters to interact on the show.

I've been consumed by real life craziness lately, but I'm working on the next few chapters of this story, and I hope to have one published some time this weekend. 

Thank you so mcuh for leaving this review.  Kind words like yours brighten my day and really do wonders to moviate me to keep tackling this story :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2015 05:44 PM · On: The Kinney Connection

Sorry it took me so long to read this.  Somehow I missed it being posted.  I love your story.

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2015 12:00 PM · On: The Kinney Connection

Sorry I couldn't read your wonderful chapter sooner! RL has been crazy for the past month, and not in a good way, but everything is okay now. This is brilliant!!! I love the conversation between Blake and Brian so much. You are incridebily talented to describe emotions. Never doubt your talent Sarah😊😊



Author's Response:

Aw,  Alois - no worries at all!  I hope real life wasn't too crazy or intense, but I'm glad everything is okay now :)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this.  I'm so happy that you liked the conversation between Blake and Brian   Your kind words never fail to make my day :)  

Thank you again :)  I hope real life treats you well from now on.  *hugs*

 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2015 08:26 PM · On: The Kinney Connection

Loved, loved, loved this chapter.  Great interactions between Blake and Brian.  It was really well done.  I was happy to see the update and the chapter wasn't long enough!  I can't get enough of your story.  I really enjoy this look at the life of Ted and Blake.  Look forward to more soon.  Thanks for this story,  Bill



Author's Response:

Yay!  Thank you so much, Bill :)  I'm delighted that you liked the Blake and Brian interaction and that you felt it was well done.  I always wished these two had a scene together on the show, so I just had to write a bit of interaction between them.  

I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story.  Sorry this chapter wasn't a little longer :P

Thank you again for your continued support :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2015 05:20 AM · On: The Kinney Connection

This was such a nice look at Blake and Brian interaction.  As you made clear Brian isn't all bad.  And he got along with Blake.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your lovely comments, YumYum!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the interaction between these two.  Brian definitely isn't all bad :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2015 02:25 PM · On: Away From Him

Yeah!!! A new chapter :) Love this one, as always...😊



Author's Response:

Yeah !!! A new review from Alois! :) 

Thank you, my friend.  I'm thrilled to hear you enjoyed it.  I hope you've had a bit more time to relax in the recent days :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2015 06:21 PM · On: Away From Him

How nice to see that Ted managed, reluctantly, to get Blake's mind off his dad. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're glad that Ted was able to intervene :)  Thank you, as always for your comments, YumYum! 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2015 08:36 PM · On: Away From Him

Nice little chapter,  I am counting on you not to make this too angsty, don't want to see any break ups!  Still loving your ted/Blake realtionship.  Bill



Author's Response:

Break-ups - never!  Angst - probably. :P  But don't worry, if I hurt characters, I always do my best to repair them :)

Thank you, Bill!  You're always so quick to review my chapeters.  It is greatly appreciated, as always :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2015 10:45 AM · On: Words of Wisdom

That was lovely, Sarah. I love the way you write Ted. It feels real, you know? And you reviewing my stories is definitely NOT the reason why I read yours. I'm just in love with your writing style ;) Take care 😊

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Alois :)  It's always such a joy to read your comments.  I'm so glad/relieved to hear that you're so fond of my characterization of Ted.  It helps give me a bit of confidence for future chapters :P

As always, you have been far too kind to me.  Thank you again for your lovely and encouraging words, my friend :)  *hugs from Canada*

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2015 09:10 AM · On: Words of Wisdom

Good to get an update.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you for letting me know  :)  

There will be more to come! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2015 12:34 AM · On: Words of Wisdom

I'm sure that if Ted started naming and describing the rest of the family he'd have a great deal to say.  He might have to reword his description of Brian though.

Lovely chapter, you actually feel the awkwardness.



Author's Response:

Hi YumYum,

Your comments have me thinking that it would interesting to hear Ted's take on his entire family of friends.  *ponders*

Haha! I'm glad you could feel the awkwardness.  I have a lot of personal experience with the subject :P

Thank you for continuing to take the time to read and review this story.  I always look forward to your delightful comments :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2015 11:34 PM · On: Words of Wisdom

Very happy to see a new chapter.  I love your story, can't wait for more.  I really like your take on Ted - very sweet and very awkward.  Your story inspired me to add a Ted & Blake thread to my story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi Bill :)

I'm so happy you're happy to see a new chapter.  It's lovely to hear that you like my take on Ted - if there's one character I identify with, it's him.  

My story inspired you to add a Ted and Blake thread to your story?  My jaw nearly fell on the floor when I read that.  I won't lie to you, I may have done an awkward little happy dance in my chair. 

I will definitely have to catch up on my reading of your story, which I planned to do anyway, but now you have enticed me even further with the prospect of reading your take on my favourite couple from the show :P

Thank you, as always, for your kind words, Bill :)  They are very much appreciated.

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2014 02:18 PM · On: Down to Earth

Hi Sarah!

Loved this chapter, as always. I really love the way you write them , in the small moments of life. And I adore the kiss in the end. But arggh, what is going to happen now? Can't wait to find out. Thank you :)



Author's Response:

Hi Alois!

I'm glad these little domestic, small moments aren't boring you.  The story will start moving forward again soon - I promise :P  I know I made it sound like there will be a ton of sadness in the next chapter, but it won't be too dark.

Thank you again for your kind words, my friend :)  *big hugs!*  Best of luck with your next chapter of "Consequences" :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2014 04:26 PM · On: Down to Earth

How sweet Ted was to allow them to do his hair.  Blake needs to hurry up or he's going to be late for work.  Love how the three interact.



Author's Response:

Aw, yes - it was very sweet of Ted to allow them to tackle his hair.  I'm sure he scowled quite a bit while it was happening, but deep down, I bet he had fun :P  

As for Blake getting to work - I hope I haven't lost track of the days of the week, but I'm pretty sure this breakfast/hair styling is happening on a Sunday morning.  So, no work for Blake yet :)

I'm glad you're enjoying the interactions between these three.  Thank you so much for your lovely comments :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2014 12:11 PM · On: Down to Earth

I love that the trio are having a little fun and yet the chapter ending seems fitting.  I liked the theme of the chapter; the lighter side of life and the slide back to reality.   

This may be written as Ted and Blake's POV's, and Ted may not know Gracie very well, but the insight you have afforded him, through the interaction between the siblings has benefited us, the reader, with a wonderful realistic portrayal of Gracie. 

I hope life doesn't become too overwhelming for you.  I look forward to the update whenever RL allows.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Hi Flossee,

Phew!  I was worried the ending was too much, given the lighter nature of what came before it.  I'm still not sure I like that final line as it probably alludes to things getting darker a lot quicker than they actual will :P

Thank you so much for your comments about Gracie.  I toyed with the idea of having a "Gracie POV" for a while, but decided against it.  So I'm delighted to hear that you feel she's still being portrayed realistically.

As for my RL - not to worry - it's just Grad School.   We’re nearing the end of the term and the due dates for papers and assignments are piling on.  It seems all I do is write nowadays : P  

By the way, I hope you have a lovely vacation.  I seem to remember you were going away somewhere in November.  If that’s still the case – have a wonderful time! 

Thank you once again for your kind and encouraging words :)

 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2014 05:58 AM · On: Down to Earth

Great chapter but a worrying ending.  I hope not too much angst is coming.  I continue t love your story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, Bill :)  Not to worry about the ending - there will be angst ahead, but it'll be...gradual.  I'm hoping to keep lightness in there alongside the darkness.

I'm glad you still like the story.  Thank you, as always, for your kind words :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2014 04:41 AM · On: Floating

I would love to see Gracie live with Ted and Blake permanently, but it always worries me when there is a living parent that this happens; unless of course the child is being abused/neglected.  So if the mother isn't abusing/neglected Gracie it is going to be heart wrenching when she has to return home. 

I am very interested to know if you are going to have Gracie interact with other members of the family.  Mainly, how she would handle herself around other children.  I assume she is extremely shy.   I look forward to seeing if she remains part of their daily lives.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Hi Flossee,

I agree that Gracie would be a wonderful addition to the Ted and Blake household.  As for the whole issue of custody - I hope to sort that out at some point, but I won't reveal how exactly :P  For now, I'm still focused on the death of Blake's father.

When you mention Gracie interacting with "other members of the family"?  Do you mean other members of her own family, or members of Ted and Blake's family of friends?  It would definitely be interesting to see her around other children.  She'll have to start back at school soon (It's August in the story, and September is just around the corner).

Thank you for your feedback.  You've given me some food for thought :)

Reviewer: Jaz (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2014 03:55 AM · On: Floating

YEAH!! Another update of my favorite story. I love how Ted ditched his inner neat freak. I can just imagine the punishment that dementef father gave Gracie for spilling something. Yay for Ted and Bake for showing that spilling flour isn't a crime and taking a light hearted approach of the situation. Ted's instincts are getting stroner, and the three of them seem to be forming a bond an becoming a family. Can't wait for the next update! 



Author's Response:

Aw, Jaz!  I always love your enthusiasm!  I still can't believe this is your favourite story :)

It was about time Ted ditched that inner neat freak of his, huh?  The three of them are definitely becoming a little family.  As for the bit about the flour - I wanted to create a scenario that was much like when those little O's (Cheerios) crashed to the floor on the night Blake left home - but for this moment to end happily, rather than with the punishment of their father.  (Hopefully that made sense).

Thank you, as always, for your kind words, Jaz.  I'm glad you're still enjoying this story :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2014 02:01 AM · On: Floating

Ted tossing flour in the air.  Such a cool picture.  Those three have so much in common.



Author's Response:

Haha!  Yes.  It was fun to have Ted squash that inner neat freak of his.  There are definitely lots of similarities between the three of them.

Thanks, YumYum :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2014 12:49 AM · On: Heart and Mind

Love how Ted does his best to make Gracie feel at home.  He and Gracie seem to have a lot in common and Blake will probably be the bridge to bring them together.



Author's Response:

Aw, yes.  Gracie and Ted do have a great deal in common :)  I think there will be lots of bridge building in the future :P

Thank you for the comment! :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 11:55 PM · On: Floating

Sarah, I absolutely LOVE this chapter and Ted's inner neat freak being able to turn into such a wonderful messy man :) I love Ted's thought when he looks at them and remember Emmett making his inner neat freak weep, I love the love he has for Blake, But I absolutely adore the scene with the flour. 'Safe, happy and carefree...' * smiling *

Thank you. Can't wait for your next update :)



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you, Alois!  *smiles*  How sweet of you!  I'm so happy to hear that you liked this chapter as much as you did.

I really loved writing that flour scene as well as the bit about Ted letting go of his inner neat freak.  He had to let go some time :P  And Emmett did make quite a mess in Ted's kitchen in Season 3, didn't he?  I'm sure Ted will never forget that :P

Thank you again, Alois.  I adore reading your comments :)  *hugs*

 

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 11:33 PM · On: Heart and Mind

Thank you for another great chapter my friend. I love this 'socially incompetent' Ted, you capture his thoughts perfectly. Love it :)



Author's Response:

Haha!  Thank you, Alois :)  I must admit - I usually tell people I'm the female version of Ted Schmidt.  I definitely know what it's like to feel "socially incompetent" :P  I'm so glad you felt I captured his character well.  Thank you again for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 11:21 PM · On: Daddy's Girl

Great chapter Sarah, I especially love Blake/Gracie interaction, and Ted, for being so...Ted lol thank you :)



Author's Response:

*grins*  Thank you, Alois!  I must admit - I giggled when you I read that you loved Ted "for being so...Ted" :)  There will be more of Ted being Ted and Blake/Grace interaction in the future.

Thank you for your comments.  They still make me smile like crazy :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 10:14 PM · On: Daddy's Girl

Yes, Ted is right to see the good in Blake.  But no sex while a young girl is under their roof.  lol.



Author's Response:

HAHA!  Yes, unfortunately I think sex will be off limits for a little while.  And you're right - Ted is very wise to see the good in Blake.  Thanks for reading, YumYum :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 08:58 PM · On: A Little Bit of Grace

How can parents be so cruel.  I'm glad that Ted is more than willing to help Gracie, even though he doesn't know the extent of what the help will entail.   Will Blake tell Gracie the reason he left?



Author's Response:

It's amazing how cruel some parents can be.  Ted's definitely willing to help (isn't he always) :P 

As for Blake telling Gracie the reason he left...I'm thinking she probably already has a good idea, considering that she's lived under the same roof as their father for many years.  But we shall see :)

Thank you again for commenting :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 08:42 PM · On: Ma and Pa

Wonderful chapter.  Looking forward to her and Gracie meeting Ted. 



Author's Response:

Hi YumYum,

So great to see you back!  I'm glad you liked this chapter.  Thank you for reading and commenting once again :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 08:41 PM · On: Floating

Another update YAH!!!!  Very sweet chapter.  I love how accepting Ted is and how anxious he is to make Gracie feel at home.  Thanks!  Bill



Author's Response:

YAH! :P  I'm happy you're happy to have another update.  Ted is certainly an accepting (and anxious) fellow.  Thank you, as always, for your comments, Bill :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2014 12:06 AM · On: A Little Bit of Grace

***smiling*** I love Ted so much :) thank you Sarah :)



Author's Response:

Hehe!  I love Ted too, my friend.  Thank you! :) *hugs*

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2014 11:57 PM · On: A House is not a Home

Hi Sarah,

Do I have to say it again? Okay, I will say it: I love it, and I love your take on this particular moment in Blake's life. Ted is perfect, as always and Blake's emotion is so well written. Thank you for another great chapter :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Alois!

Aw, thank you, my friend :)  You don't have to say it again, but that's very sweet of you. *smiles*

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter full of Ted's perfection and Blake's emotions :P

Thank you for your lovely comments, once again :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 08:18 PM · On: A Lesson Learned

I don't know what to say. I think if I didn't already love their characters, I would be falling in love with them now. Thank you Sarah, you're doing a terrific job with this story :)



Author's Response:

*smiles*  Merci beaucoup, Alois!  You are far too nice to me :)

That is my master plan - to make everyone fall in love with Ted and Blake.  Just kidding :P 

I'm glad you're still satisfied with the story, and thank you so much for continuing to read it :) *hugs*

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2014 11:43 AM · On: Heart and Mind

I have been looking forward to this chapter and it has surpassed my expectations; which I didn't think you could do as my expectation of your work is very high (BTW, that is your fault for writing so well, lol).  Using the simplest of circumstances, wanting a glass of water, to bring the two players together gave rise to superb dialect and an awkwardness that was not over played.  The interaction is plausible and realistic.

I must tell you when Ted found Gracie looking in the cabinets I thought she was looking for alcohol to dispose of.  I was very happy to be wrong.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Gosh, Flossee!  You sure do know how to put a smile on my face :)  Thank you so much!  I'm delighted to hear that your expectations were surpassed - especially considering you set them so high lol  (*blushes* thank you.  It’s very flattering - I just hope I can meet them in the future)

I'm always aiming for realism, so I'm very happy you felt the interaction between Ted and Gracie was real and plausible.  I had a great time writing a scene between these two.

Oh and I hadn't even considered the idea of Gracie looking through the cabinets for alcohol to dispose of.  Luckily, she wouldn't have found any, considering neither Ted nor Blake are drinkers.  I'm happy you were happy to be wrong about that :P

Thank you again for your kind words, Flossee.  I always look forward to reading your thoughts – you’re always so sweet and insightful :)

Reviewer: Jaz (Anonymous) · Date: November 01, 2014 03:50 AM · On: Heart and Mind

WOw!! What a wonderful treat for HALLOWEEN! This has to be my favorite chapter. Just love the conversation between Ted & Gracie. I love Ted and you really have his shyness and social awkwardness down.Ted may be a man of few words, but what he says is so on powerful and the love and protectiveness he shows for those he cares for melts my heart. Ted is a good man and this story really showcases that.I can't wait for the update!!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much, Jaz!  Wow - your favourite chapter?  That's wonderful to hear! :) 

I'm so glad you liked the Ted & Gracie interaction.  If there's one thing I can relate to when it comes to Ted - it's his shyness and social awkwardness - so those bits were fairly easy to write :P 

He's definitely such a good, caring person and I'm happy that's coming across in this story.

Thank you again for reading it and leaving me such an enthusiastic review.  It's always a delight to read your kind words :)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2014 07:10 PM · On: Heart and Mind

such a great chapter.
gracie and ted, kindred spirits. it was lovely.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you very much. Ted and Gracie are kindred spirits indeed :) 

I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2014 05:52 PM · On: Heart and Mind

Happy to see another update.  Ted is such a care giver you are doing a great job telling his story.  THanks for the quick update.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill :)  Happy I could provide an update quicker than usual.

I couldn't agree more about Ted.  I always saw him as the true caregiver on the show - he takes care of Emmett when Emmett believes he might be positive, he forgives Emmett for cheating and holds him when he cries, he lets Michael sleep on his sofa when he's having problems at home with Ben, (I think) he's the first person Brian tells about his cancer, not to mention all the things he did for Blake, and the way he was willing to see the good in him when no one else did.

Oops...sorry for ramblng.  I just really love Teddy :P

Thank you again for a lovely review, Bill.  I'm glad you're still enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2014 04:58 PM · On: Leaving Home

I can see everything happening in my head. But what is even more amazing is that you make us feel your story. I am definitely in love with your writing :)



Author's Response:

*blushes*  Aw, thank you so much, Alois!  I'm in love with your writing as well, and your lovely reviews. 

I'm still smiling, thanks to you :)  *hugs*

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 02:51 PM · On: The Storm

Oh. My. God... The death of a child. The damages. The guilt... You sure know how to write it with an accuracy I have rarely seen. I could almost empathize with Blake's father for a second. Almost. Of course, that doesn't excuse his behavior over his own flesh and blood, but the lost of a child could destroy any man. And Blake is... Wow. It's brilliant. THANK YOU



Author's Response:

Aw, your comments made me so happy, Alois :)  Thank YOU! *hugs*

 I'm so glad you felt a tiny bit of empathy for Blake's father.  I hate making characters into complete monsters, even though they may do despicable things.  The death of a child is certainly a terrible loss.

Also, just to warn you - from this point on, the chapters are written from a first person perspective.  I hope you won't mind the change.  I felt like I could write about what was going on in the characters' minds better this way. Please feel free to tell me if you don't like it though!

Thank you once again for your continued loveliness.  Your reviews always brighten my day :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 02:31 PM · On: Ma and Pa

***smiling***



Author's Response:

*smiles back*  Sorry - this was a bit of a "filler" chapter, but thank you for still smiling :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 02:19 PM · On: The Calm

Absolutely LOVE the way you write them. It's so right, you know? And so beautiful in the simple moments they share. Thank you :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, Alois!  I'm so glad you felt it was "right" :) 

I always worry I'll bore people when I write about "simple moments" like these, so it's great to hear that you enjoyed it.  Truthfully, sometimes the simple, quiet moments at home are my favourite things to write about.

Thank you so much for continuing to leave me such lovely feedback.  It always pus the biggest smile on my face :)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2014 02:55 PM · On: Daddy's Girl

this a wonderful story.
blake and ted were good together when things were where they were suppose to.
i would like to believe Gracie will become a permanent. fixture in their. household. time to look for a bigger apartment or house.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! :)  I have to admit, I definitely agree with you about Ted and Blake.  They were my favourite couple on the show, (but I know that's a pretty rare sentiment) :P

As for Gracie becoming a permanant member of their household - you never know...

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2014 12:13 PM · On: A Good Day

What canI say? Except I will have to wait before being able to read what come next, and it's torture! I just love it so much. Thank you:)



Author's Response:

What can I say?  Except this review made me smile like crazy! :D  Thank you so much, Alois! :)  *does happy dance*

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2014 11:31 AM · On: Nice

I love the raw emotions of the two men here. Terrific job! Thank you



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, Alois! :)  I'm glad you're still enjoying the story so far. 

There are plenty more raw emotions to come ;)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2014 06:17 AM · On: Daddy's Girl

I love the way you wrote Blake being torn when leaving Gracie.  Even if the distance is physically negligible, emotionally it must seem immense. 

"I'm- I don't know how I am" I like this honesty.  Most authors would jump in to a spiel about feelings, but you have written a more realistic reply and one more apt to this character.  Your character writing is exceptional.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much, Flossee!  You have no idea how happy your comments made me.  I smiled when you mentioned the physical vs. emotional distance.  That was certainly what I hoped to convey.

And can I just hug you saying that my character writing is exceptional.  You are too sweet :)  Oh and believe me, I was tempted to jump into a spiel about feelings in that moment :P

I should have another chapter up for you before the end of the month if all goes well.  Thank you again for your lovely review :)

Reviewer: Jaz (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2014 03:42 AM · On: Daddy's Girl

Yes!!!! I was just thinking about this story and what do ya know...you posted. I love the conversation between Gracie and Blake. He so loves his little sister and visa versa. Oh and the sharing of feelings that Blake has with Ted just got me. Finally Blake opening up and letting him know how confused he's feeling. I just have to ask on a light note, what is up with that sofa bed? LOL!



Author's Response:

Hey Jaz!  There must be some telepathy going on between us :P 

I'm glad you enjoyed the Blake/Gracie and Ted/Blake conversations :) 

Oh and as for the sofa bed...Well, I figure Ted and Blake live in a one bedroom apartment.  They don't really have a proper guest room for Gracie.  So the only other bed in their place is a pull out sofa bed (It's a sofa that sort of converts into a full-size bed, just in case you have no idea what I'm trying to refer to lol).  Having slept on one many times, I can definitely say they usually aren't the most comfy things on the planet :P

Thanks again for your review, Jaz.  I'm so glad you're continuing to read and enjoy this story :)

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2014 03:24 AM · On: The Visitor

Wow...okay, I've wanted to read your story for a long time now. Ted being one of my favorite character in QAF, and I'm pretty sure I will love your story. Just this chapter makes me say that you have a real talent to describe the feelings, the emotions... I love your characterization here. So, thank you for writing on this wonderful couple! And more importantly, thank you for this story. I can't wait to see your take on this :)



Author's Response:

Hi Alois!

Aw, thank you so much for your lovely comments!  I’m so glad you decided to read this story.  It can be a bit of challenge to get people interested in Ted and Blake stories, so it's always a delight to have new reader.

Ted is definitely one of my favourite characters too.  I’m happy you've enjoyed the characterization so far.  I must admit, I do love describing emotions :P

I hope you’ll enjoy the rest of the chapters, should you choose to read them.  It was wonderful to receive your feedback.  Thank you again :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 10:36 PM · On: Daddy's Girl

Still really enjoying your story and the nuggets of information about Blake's life before Ted.  Great job.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you again for your feedback, Bill!  I'm glad to hear you're still enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: Brune (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2014 12:32 AM · On: A Good Day

Awww they're so cute together! You writing really makes it seem like real life. I love it. They care about each other so much, it's heart-warming. I definetely rout for them to be happy.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, Miss Brune :)  They're cute indeed! :P  I'm glad the writing seems like "real life" to you - that's always what I'm aiming for.  No fantasy for me! :P  Things do get a little fluffy sometimes though :P

I hope you'll keep rooting for them to be happy.

Thank you so much for continuing to read this story.  It makes me so happy.  I always look forward to reading your comments :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2014 09:05 AM · On: A Little Bit of Grace

It will certainly be hard to mourn a man that has been responsible for so much pain, and factors like never being able to confront the man and find closure for what he has done will only make it more difficult.

Ted offering to take Gracie really shows the character of the man.  I look forward to seeing how Gracie and Ted interact once they are living under the same roof.  I shouldn't imagine Ted knows the first thing about children. 

I'm not going on another vacation until next month, but if you could find your way to update before then I would really appreciate it. LOL

Cheers :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi Flossee,

Yes, it certainly will be difficult to mourn his father, but I think Blake will find a way - eventually ;)  Ted's definitely got a "really big heart" as Michael says in the pilot :)  And I definitely plan on having him and Gracie interact - we'll see if Ted can overcome that "only child syndrome" :P

In light of your upcoming vacation, I'll try to get an update up before the end of the month :P  I've had a giant academic essay to take care of this week, but I hope to get back to writing this story on the weekend/next week.  I hope you have a great time while you're away.

Thank you for your lovely comments, once again :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2014 08:56 AM · On: A House is not a Home

Hey, did you change your banner or am I still in holiday mode?  This site is becoming very predictable, each time MW announces a challenge I seem to need an operation, and each time I go on vacation you update.  Well, it looks like I need to take more vacations.  LOL 

This chapter is very insightful and the depth of feeling Blake and Jenny are experiencing is clear.  You have captured Blake's reactions and the interaction between Blake, Ted and Jenny perfectly.

Cheers :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Lovely to see you back, Flossee!  Not to worry, I did indeed change the banner for this story haha.  Gosh, MW better not have any more challenges then.  I really hope you don't have to go through any more operations :/

How about we reverse things though - I'll update this story more often, so you'll get to take more vacations :P  I hope the one you just returned from was nice and relaxing :)

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.  It's always wonderful to read your thoughts. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing, as always :)

Reviewer: Brune (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2014 12:08 AM · On: Nice

Damn... I'm so moved! The "I love you" and "I love that you're nice" made me all teary-eyed. You write so well. I love it. It makes me love Ted and Blake even more. Seriously darling, well done :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks, lovely!  I love any review that starts with "damn..." :P   I'm so glad you liked this second chapter, darlin'.  Sorry to have made you all teary-eyed though. 

Thank you again for your wonderful comments.  It seems you've found yet another avenue of social media through which to make me smile :)  *cuddles*

Reviewer: Brune (Anonymous) · Date: October 21, 2014 01:08 AM · On: The Visitor

Oh Sarah dear, this was perfect! You got talent, seriously. I pictured the whole thing perfectly and I can totally see this happening for real. I like how we're learning more about Blake's family. That would explain a lot. And the dynamic that is forming between the 3 characters is very interesting.

Okay I'm off to bed now but I can't wait to read the next chapter tomorrow ^^



Author's Response:

OMG!  Brune!  What a lovely surprise!  *squee*  Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it :)

To be honest, I’m not really a fan of the next few chapters, mainly because I was never planning to continue the story as long as I have.  Had I known that I was going to, I probably would have written those early chapters differently, but oh well.

Still, I’m glad you enjoyed the dynamic between the three characters, and that you felt like you could see it all happening "for real" :)  Also, just in case you're wondering - the first person writing doesn't start until chapter 8 :P (I thought you might be reading this thinking - "wait a minute - this isn't first person!")

Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this, darling :)   Receiving your comment was the perfect way to end my evening :)  

Reviewer: Jaz (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2014 06:17 PM · On: A Little Bit of Grace

Wow!!!! What an emotional and powerful chapter. I adore Blake's sisters. I'm so glad that Ted suggested that Grace stay with them. I'm hoping that Ted & Blake will soon express those thoughts they have about each other and their roles in their relationship, in other words...COMMUNICATE.I hope we get a better understanding of Blake's mother and why she stayed in this abusive relationship and allowed her children to become punching bags (no doubt she was) to this cruel man.The ending of the chapter left a lump in my throat. Just a well written and heart-felt story that I'll anxiously await for an update.



Author's Response:

Aw! Thank you, Jaz!  I'm glad you're so fond of Blake's sisters and that you found this chapter to be powerful :)

Don't worry - I hope to get Ted and Blake to communicate openly soon.  As for Blake's mother - to be honest, I'm still figuring her out in my mind.

In any case, I hope that lump in your throat didn't last too long.  Thank you again for your lovely comments.  They always put a smile on my face :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2014 01:23 AM · On: A Little Bit of Grace

Another really great.moving chapter.  The story just gets better and better.  Really interesting to have a story revolve around Blake and Ted.  You are doing a terrific job.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you very much, Bill :)  It's great to hear that you feel the story is getting "better and better".  I'm always looking to improve!

Your kind words mean a great deal.  Thank you! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2014 04:13 AM · On: A House is not a Home

Is it wrong to feel happy that Blake's Dad is dead?  I'm glad that Ted is there to help and look forward to his meeting with Gracie.  Things should be looking up for that family.



Author's Response:

Hi YumYum!

You're the second person to ask whether it is "wrong" to feel happy that Blake's father is dead :P

And not to worry - a meeting with Gracie is coming right up.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, once again :)

 

Reviewer: jaz (Anonymous) · Date: October 16, 2014 03:54 AM · On: The Visitor

YAAAAAY!!!!!! An update of the best story on this site. Is it wrong to be happy for the death of Blake's mentally and physically abusive father. Maybe, with this sociopath gone Blake and his family can become closer. I hope Blake opens up to Ted and allows him to help him heal.Blake seems to be doing the Brian Kinney version of pain management, suffering in silence and ignoring his feelings of bad memories of his father through cleaning up his old man's mess.I just love this story, and will wait patiently for an update. 



Author's Response:

JAZ!  "The best story on this site"???  *blushes*  I don't really think that's accurate, but it's so, so lovely of you to say! :)  Thank you!!

And I don't think it's wrong to feel at least a little pleased that Blake's father is out of his life. 

Don't worry - I won't let Blake descend too far into "The Brian Kinney version of pain management".  There may actually be some interaction between those two in the future ;)

Well, thank you, Jaz for your continued support.  Your wonderful comments always help me stay motivated to keep writing ;)

 

 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2014 02:42 AM · On: A House is not a Home

Happy to see an update.  Such a sad story but I have a feeling it will bring Ted & Blake closer, I hope so.   Great new chapter!  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill! :)  Ugh, my apologies for all the sadness.  I must admit, I do love a bit of drama.  The road to happiness has begun though!

Thank you again for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2014 07:35 AM · On: A Lesson Learned

Hey, it's good to see an update. :)

Wow, you really know how to put our emotions through the wringer.  I'm really happy Blake is letting Ted in emotionally.  His walls seem to be slowly crumbling with the amount of love Ted is showing for him. 

This is such a well written beautiful chapter; which BTW is very aptly names.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Hi Flossee!  Lovely to hear from you, as always :) 

Sorry for putting your emotions through the wringer.  The next chapter will be less intense, that's for sure. 

I'm glad you enjoyed this one nonetheless.  I'm glad you liked the name too - I always struggle with naming chapters :P

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.  I feel as though I'm running out of ways to say thank you for all your kind words - but I suppose it doesn't hurt to say it again :)

Cheers!

 

Reviewer: Jaz (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2014 03:54 AM · On: The Visitor

oops ...was trying to say how awful that Blake thinks he's not deserving of Ted's love.I guess I got too excited after reading this chapter!LOL!



Author's Response:

LOL.  Not to worry.  I figured that's what you meant.  It's great that your were so excited :)

Reviewer: Jaz (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2014 03:50 AM · On: A Lesson Learned

YAAAAAAY!!!!!! I'm so glad you're back because I so love this story. I think I must have allergies like Justin because there were tears as I was reading this beautifully written chapter.Poor Blake, how awful he isn't deserving of the love Ted gives him. That father of his did so much damage.Ted & Blake have become my favorite couple.Can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Yay!!!  Another review from you, Jaz.  Your enthusiasm never fails to make me smile :)  Sorry about the allergies :P  I guess I should have warned you. 

Ted and Blake - your favourite couple?  That's wonderful!   Now I don't feel so alone lol. 

I'm so glad to hear you are still enjoying the story, Jaz.  Thank you very much for your continued support :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2014 02:04 AM · On: A Lesson Learned

I love how you give us their thoughts and know that no matter what Ted wants Blake.  Hopefully Blake will realize that.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Always lovely to see you back, YumYum :) 

Ted loves Blake, that's for sure!  I'm glad you enjoyed the insight into their thoughts.  I'm really enjoying writing in first person, but I wasn't sure how other people would respond to it, so I'm grateful for the feedback.

Thank you for reading, as always! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2014 10:50 PM · On: A Lesson Learned

Really happy to have an update to your story.  I am really enjoying the Ted & Blake story that doesn't often get told.  Great chapter.  Hope Ted can help Blake get over his horrible family life.  Thanks for updating,  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi Bill!

Thank you for your review, once again :)

I'm so glad you are still happy to have updates, even though they are so infrequent.

Fortunately, I think if anyone can help Blake, Ted can ;)

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2014 02:10 PM · On: Leaving Home

Wow, the way you described Blake's father sounds like you have had firsthand knowledge of this behaviour.  I hope that's not true.  This is very well written, and maybe just a bit to realistic for me.  I did like that it was written as Blake's pov.

I'm surprised reviewers would be negative about your irregular updates, you may take a little longer than most, but some fics wait years before their authors update.  Just as long as I know you are going to finish it, I'm happy.  RL must always take precedence, whether that is family, health, work, study or just plain fun.  Congratulations on grad school.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Flossee :) (for the review and the congratulations)  I’m sorry it felt a bit too realistic for you.   Walt is based somewhat on a family member of mine - fortunately he was not my father.

I’m glad to hear you liked reading Blake’s POV though.  I really enjoyed writing in first person.  It helped me get inside Blake’s head a bit more, if that makes any sense.

I was a bit surprised by those reviewers too, mostly because I sometimes forget that people actually read the things I write.  I tend to write for myself and then I’m shocked when I realise people actually want to read more of it.

I’m glad you are still reading and reviewing :)  I always look forward to your lovely comments.   Thank you again.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: jaz (Anonymous) · Date: May 25, 2014 05:34 AM · On: The Storm

Yay! You've updated.Congratulations on grad school and I love this story so darn much and have missed it.Thanks for updating!!! YAY!!



Author's Response:

Aw, Jaz!  How wonderful to see you back :)

Thank you for the congratulations.  That's most unexpected, but very lovely of you.   And thank you for reading the chapter, of course :) 

I'm so glad you still like the story, even after all this time.

Thank you for the enthusiastic review.  It really made me smile :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2014 04:51 AM · On: Leaving Home

You can't blame him.  I'm surprised he lasted as long as he did.  Emotionally packed chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, you really can't really blame him for leaving, can you?   Sorry for all those emotions - I love me some drama :P

Thank you for reading, once again :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2014 04:38 AM · On: The Storm

Seems to me Walt is blaming the wrong person.  Who bought a gun into the house?  Who left it under the bed?  Who can't pay his bills?  Wonderfully charged chapter.  How did I miss it?



Author's Response:

Yes, Walt's definitely put the Blake on the wrong person, sadly. 

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter - not sure how you missed it, but I'm glad you've seen it now :P

Thank you for reading and reviewing, as always :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2014 04:31 AM · On: Leaving Home

Very sad chapter.  Good to know Blake's background and understand his demons.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill :)  Sorry for the sadness, but I'm glad the chapter provided a bit of insight.

~Cheers

Reviewer: PAZ (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2014 02:47 PM · On: The Visitor

I give up! I guess you're not gonna finish this story.

Reviewer: Maq (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2014 01:44 AM · On: The Visitor

I wish you would update this story.I hate when author's on this site sometimes don't let us fans know that there is a perfectly  good explanation for a story not being updated.I know that life gets in the way or maybe a writer's creative juices aren't flowing in regards to the story, but it's really not to much to ask to let us know what is going on.I keep thinking of all the stories that we fans have shown an interest in and have been abandon by the authors.Just sad and I hope this isn't one of the growing number of abandon fan-fic.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2014 06:05 AM · On: The Storm

At the beginning of chapter 6 I thought Blake was talking about his mother in the restaurant, but it was his sister.  Was that intentional to write it that way or was that just something I hadn't picked up on.  It was very clever writing if it was intentional.  Some parts of this fic are very close to home for me.  I love the way Blake has his rock; Ted.  I was surprised by the death of Blake's brother Adam, but it sounds like it was the father's fault.  A child shouldn't have the responsibility of watching over so many siblings.  I love this update as it has moved the story along nicely.  Thank you.

Cheers    



Author's Response:

Hi Flossee! :) 

Ooo, it's neat that you thought Blake was talking about his mother.  I had intended for the female character to be a bit of a mystery at first (for the reader not to know who she as Blake is describing her), but I was never thinking specifically about Blake's mother :P

I hope the parts of this fic that are close to home for you are happy rather than sad.

Thank you so much for the lovely review though, as always :)  I’m so glad you liked the two most recent chapters.  Your wonderful words always manage to lift my spirits and keep me motivated :)

Reviewer: tiff (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2014 09:39 PM · On: Ma and Pa

It's good to have some fanfic about someone else here.  The good thing about so little screentime between Ted and Blake is that you can create much of their story yoourself.



Author's Response:

Hi Tiff,

Yes, indeed - the Ted/Blake relationship does leave one with lots of room for creativity - I just wish we had gotten to see more of them on screen. 

I'm glad your happy to have some fic about them.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Jaz (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2014 03:12 AM · On: The Visitor

Of course Brian&Justin are my favorite couple, but next is Ted&Blake. I loved Ted from the start, he was so darn adorable. When Blake entered his life, wow..you could feel the heat.I just absolutely love this story. Blake&Ted are so good for each other.Please, I beg and implore you to update this story soon!Please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you Jaz!  What a wonderful review :) 

I adore Ted and Blake too, of course.  I'm glad we can agree that they're good for each other.  They're actually my favourite couple from the show - but I'm probably the only one who feels that way :P 

I'm glad you are enjoying this story so far.  I'll update it soon, especially since you "implored" me to so nicely :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  It is much appreciated :)

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2014 04:43 PM · On: The Storm

Walt killed his son, not Blake. No wonder he's an angry drunk. He's the guilty one.

Reviewer: nikki (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2014 05:20 AM · On: The Storm

So very sad. But gives good insight into why Blake may have turned to drugs in his youth.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Nikki :)  I'm glad you thought it provided some insight.  Sorry about all the sadness though.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a great deal :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2014 08:04 PM · On: The Storm

Wow quite the revelation.  You are really give Blake a story and showing the relationship between him and Ted.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bill!  Yes, quite some big revelations in this one ;) 

I'm glad you are enjoying Blake's background as well as his relationship with Ted.  Thank you, once again, for the lovely review :)

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2014 02:55 PM · On: Ma and Pa

I always like Ted and Blake, glad you're writing about them.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jean :)  It's always nice to find people who appreciate Ted and Blake, especially since they didn't have very much screen time.

It's been a pleasure to write about them and a pleasure to read little comments like yours.  Thank you :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2014 07:51 PM · On: Ma and Pa

It's nice that Blake wants to help his family.  This will give Ted a another chance to see how Blake was raised and his siblings.  Nicely done.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, YumYum :)  I always love reading your little comments. 

Ted will indeed be getting some more insight into how Blake was raised ;)

~Cheers!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2014 05:03 AM · On: Ma and Pa

Glad to get an update on this.



Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you were glad to get an update :P

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2014 02:55 AM · On: Ma and Pa

I am really enjoying your Ted & Blake story, great job.  Benn looking forward to a new chapter so thanks for posting this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it and leaving me this lovely little comment, Bill :) 

I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it so far :)

Reviewer: goddess_ophelia (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2014 06:34 AM · On: The Calm

Gah, perfect. I love the role reversal in Blake being the wise one and Ted the one who needs advice. Perfectly harmonious. Your "Ted" is brillianty in character and I could hear his voice in my mind as I read the words! I can has more pwease? xxx D

Reviewer: mag49 (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2014 01:10 AM · On: The Calm

Enfin un nouveau chapitre pour une merveilleuse histoire concernant l'un de mes couples préférés de QAF avec mon deuxième couple préféré Michael et Ben , j'aimerais voir dans vos prochains chapitres une réunion de famille entre Ted et la mère et les frères et soeurs de Blake voir plus de leur intimité , pourquoi pas un mariage et l'adoption d'un enfant car je suis sur que ces deux là seraient des parents merveilleux , je suis française et j'ai achetée les 5 saisons de QAF et j'ai adorée mais un peu triste pour eux deux car ils n'ont pas eu assez de temps ensemble et j'étais heureuse de les voir ensemble dans le dernier épisode , ils auraient mérités plus de fanfictions de la part des fans et ras le bol de ne voir que des fanfics sur Brian et Justin et surtout n'attendez pas autant de temps pour les prochains chapitres votre fanfic est dans mes favoris sur mon ordinateur portable.



Author's Response:
Bonjour mag49,

Merci beaucoup pour la lecture et le commentaire sur un autre chapitre de mon histoire.

Je suis d'accord avec vous - Ted et Blake n'ont pas assez de temps ensemble à l'écran. Je souhaite qu'il y ait plus écrit sur r03;r03;eux aussi des histoires. Je vais certainement garder vos suggestions à l'esprit quand j'écris les chapitres suivants et je vais essayer de ne pas vous avoir fait attendre si longtemps. Et ne vous inquiétez pas - la famille de Blake jouera un rôle plus important dans l'histoire très bientôt ;)

Merci encore d'avoir lu mon histoire. Je suis ravi d'entendre que vous aimez tant :)

PS. Désolé pour mon très mauvais français - anglais est ma première langue.

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