Reviews For Hiding in Plain Sight
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2017 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2013 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
I thought Brian was just going to find out the last number called and follow through with call back and find out the area code. But I like your way better.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
Nice phone placement Justin. LOL Brian to the rescue in a private jet no less; come on Brian suffer to get your man back. Maybe once he gets there he could crawl through mud to save Justin; of course he would be wearing an Armani suit and he would have to weigh up which one was more important. LOL. I’m really enjoying this story Janet but please don’t make the rescue to easy.
Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
So glad to see this updated!
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
oh i'm so scared. you better keep Justin save till Brian gets there, soon
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
I refuse to give Michael any credit for finding Justin's phone, it's just not in me to believe Michael can be useful. How ever I guess it was handy he happened to be sniffing around a shrub. I think it's just wonderful that Brian happens to have an FBI agent he can call on for a little back up. Now I am hoping for some gun play once they arrive in LA. I wouldn't even shed many tears if Molly gets winged by a stray bullet. Just a flesh wound to add to the drama. Of course Glen can be turned into a sieve, he deserves to be slaughtered like a well fed pig. Great Chapter, I love the protective Brian.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
Yes.....they know where Molly and Justin are. The question is can Brian get to them before anyone gets hurt.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 11: Old Friends
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