Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For First Step
Reviewer: chenlina (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Astor (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2015 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

No need to be worried Brian. You're a great bottom. 

Love this piece. I know it's been said, but the ending wasn't expected.



Author's Response:

No need to be worried Brian. You're a great bottom. Haha  I love the reassurance.  I admit I just adored the scene in the series where he let Justin top him.  I really appreciate this review because I wasn't sure people got the crux of the fic. 

I'm so happy you weren't expecting the ending.   I don't mind how many times that is said as that is what I aim for.  It gives me a thrill to think I succeeded.  Thanks heaps; because of this review as I actually feel a little better about this fic now. 

Cheers :))))

Reviewer: Brandon (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2014 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

I didn't find the ending predictable. I actually was quite surprised. Brian can have sex in front of anyone. It surprised me to find out he had performance anxiety about bottoming.



Author's Response:

Brian's dream of Justin making him have sex in public was a manifestation of his anxiety.  Brian may be the ultimate top, however, if he doesn't bottom much how would he know if he was any good?  I'm sure anyone who had the pleasure of topping him would never tell him he was rubbish. LOL  Thanks for saying you were surprised as that's what I always aim for.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: November 30, 2014 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Flosee:

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- going through some of your older stuff that I missed-  loved the idea of a game-  winner - tops-  love toppy Justin

 

sandy



Author's Response:

Hey Sandy :)

I love a toppy Justin too.   Poor Brian, having his nightmarish insecurities of bottoming manifesting them self in such a way. LOL  I'm glad you like the game, but I think Emmett cheated a little on Justin's behalf.  Go Emmett.  LOL  Thank you for taking the time to review, you know how much I really appreciate it.

Cheers :)

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

hihihi so funny

thank you for sharing



Author's Response: You have no idea just how much you have cheered me up by sharing a laugh with me right now. Thank you so much Chandrika for this review. Cheers

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

...Brian also had a bottoming performance issue. 

Hilarious! The ending was certainly a surprise.



Author's Response: I’m pleased somebody enjoys satire the same as I do; the stud having a sexual problem who would have thought it and I’m pleased you didn’t see the ending coming. Hilarious is the most flattering word to me when I write a piece just for the fun of it. Thank you so much. Cheers

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

No I did not see that ending coming.

Author's Response: Thank you wellreadbunny I didn’t want to ask if anyone had seen the ending coming but I was hoping someone would make that comment. As a writer it is sometimes hard to know if you have it right. Thank you also for taking the time to leave a review. Cheers

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

As always you do a wonderful job writing stories just for me. The only thing to make it even a tiny bit better would be if Gus happened to stroll by reading a book on how to catch a wombat. I am beginning to worry that you are falling out of love with the blond boy and turning toward Ted, he seems to be trying to become the almost hero, sword at the ready, willing to smite a rogue bobtail that might attack. I am very happy that you kept your promise to keep the past stories Michael free, it was so nice knowing in advance I could read with no fear of being upset by Micheal germs. Even though my Michael therapy has been working I still attend meeting and seek out support when the feeling start to overtake me. I know in time I will get better.
Lori

Author's Response: ROFLMAO; I have no secrets anymore. What can I say? I’m so pleased you like that I write just for you but remember now all characters are fair game. Except Brian, Justin, Ted, Emmett and Bobtails. I know it’s not hard to see who I like but please tell me I didn’t make blond boy look bad as it wasn’t my intention, as after all Bobtails he is my favourite. Thank you for the review but didn’t you forget my fear of small children……okay I admit it I checked out my messages. Cheers

Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2012 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

It´s so funny and hot. Great work!



Author's Response: Funny and hot; this is why I write just for fun. What a wonderful thing to say Great work! Thank you so much Sisa for taking the time to leave such a nice review. Cheers

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response: ;)

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