Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For With My Body....
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 04:54 PM · On: With My Body...

Perfect!

Reviewer: NMS (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2012 07:11 AM · On: With My Body...

Sorry, forgot to mention one important thing: If I were a totally new reader, and didn't see the show, I would definitely wanted to see/read about the history of these lovers' relationship- the details of what they've been through (cancer, bashing, etc.). It sounds very intriguing. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: NMS (Anonymous) · Date: September 16, 2012 07:05 AM · On: With My Body...

Very sweet. So very happy for them! Love the last sentence. Interestingly, you're writing in the present tense- shows immediacy. Well done, Vin :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I find that writing in the present tense a bit more difficult usually. Except this story came together pretty easily to me for some reason.

Glad you liked it.

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2012 07:32 PM · On: With My Body...

Still, you were there. And you didn’t drop me like a hot potato because I was suddenly out of money. Trust me, that helped a lot more than you know. Anyway, last but not least – till death do us part.

I'm not sure if I reviewed this already, but I'll do it again anyway. You have mentioned things I have not thought about as far what the two of them have done for each other thoughout their relationship. They had been very supportive of each other. It was always talked about how much Brian has always been there for Justin , but Justin had also been just as supportive.

I also loved Four Weddings and a Funeral and I think the vows were perfect.

...last one on the bed is on top! 

That Justin is clever, LOL.

Excellent story and valid points you made!

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 11:02 AM · On: With My Body...

Cuteness!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jackie! I truly appreciate you reading this and leaving a review!

Hugs & Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: September 09, 2012 03:13 PM · On: With My Body...

Awww:) I love it! It's so cute and beautiful and very true to character! I would love a sequel;) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Mathilde! I am so very glad you liked the story and thought it in character. As for a sequel, I definitelly was NOT planning on one. I originally wanted to incorporate these particular wedding vows into one off my larger stories, but then last weekend I just "HAD" to write this one-shot. I decided to leave it as a stand-alone story of just a beautiful moment between the two characters. Their glorious future is all up to your imagination!  :)

Cheers,

Vin

 

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2012 09:48 PM · On: With My Body...

Loved it! This would be the perfect 'wedding' for the boys. Hope you have more writing sprees like this in the near future. TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Tag! I am very glad you liked it.

As for the writing "spree"...yeah, I hope I'll have another one one of these days.

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 07:48 AM · On: With My Body...

I thought this was a lovely story.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 10:03 PM · On: With My Body...

That was cute and funny. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thanks very much! Very happy you liked it.

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 08:10 PM · On: With My Body...

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 03:05 PM · On: With My Body...

Ok, this is now the most perfect ending for the series. What a wonderful stress free wedding.
Lori

Author's Response:

Thank you, Lori, for a lovely complement! That would have been a good ending, I have to agree.

Cheers,

Vin

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2012 12:05 PM · On: With My Body...

This was just so sweet!

Damn the three year stint in NY though, honestly after 5:13 I never saw Justin staying there for long. When he was in LA, he stayed because he got caught up in the high life of LA and because he hadn't recieved those three words from Brian and LA is far from the Pitts. NY-The Pitts is only a 90 min commuter flight and Justin finally heard those three little words. I think he returned to Brian maybe like after living only 3 months there. 

~Nim*huggles*



Author's Response:

Thank you, Nim! I'm very happy you liked the story.

Cheers,

Vin

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